2024年中考英语常考语法点：书面表达(安徽专用)

书面表达
(中考真题+名校最新真题)
1．（2023·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计）
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.
This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I
will contribute my own efforts to its development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的；
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程；
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②living conditions生活条件
③sorted the information把信息分类
④lead a better life过上更好的生活
[高分句型]
①Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.（that引导的定语从句）
②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved.（现在完成时的被动语态）
2．（2022·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：
1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
2.团队合作，历险克难；
3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
3．（2021·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1.事情经过；
2.个人感悟。
注意：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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【答案】One possible version
Once I Was Praised
Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.
One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.
I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
4．（2020·安徽·中考真题）假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：
1.熟悉家乡；
2.乐于交流；
3.擅长英语。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：hope to do sth.；a member of；such as；besides；used to do sth.；work as；do a very good job；be ready to do sth.；communicate with；moreover；have a good knowledge of；be skillful at；in English；look for。
句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
5．（2024·安徽安庆·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友David写邮件告诉你，他最近有点沉迷于网络，向你寻求帮助。请你结合下表中的信息，给David回封邮件指出沉迷网络的危害并提出建议。
Problems grades, health, relationship, …
Advice books, exercise, talk, …
注意：
(1)短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和所在的学校。
(3)词数80-100。
参考词汇：convenience (n. 便利) destroy (v. 破坏)
Dear David,
I am so glad to hear from you. As your best friend, I’m sorry to hear that you have lost in the Internet and you have wasted a lot of time. I’m so worried about you. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your good news. Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear David,
I am so glad to hear from you. As your best friend, I’m sorry to hear that you have lost in the Internet and
you have wasted a lot of time. I’m so worried about you.
As we all know, computers are very important in our daily life. They bring convenience to us. However, spending too much time on them will affect our life. For example, the grades will go down, and using computers too much does harm to your health. What’s worse, it may destroy your relationship with your family.
In my opinion, you should exercise more and read more meaningful books instead. You can also go for a walk in the park to enjoy nature. Have a talk with your parents. They’re always behind you. I hope my advice can work out.
I look forward to your good news. Please write to me soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主体时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明态度。对David沉迷网络感到抱歉和担心；
第二步，呈现问题。依照表格给出的沉迷游戏出现的问题——成绩下降、危害健康、破坏家庭关系等均要一一阐述；
第三步，提出建议。依照表格提出的防止沉迷游戏的建议——读有意义的书、锻炼身体、和父母交谈等均要一一阐述；
第四步，书写结语。期待收到David的好消息。
[亮点词汇]
①affect our life影响我们的生活
②go down下降
③destroy your relationship破坏我们的关系
[高分句型]
①For example, the grades will go down, and using computers too much does harm to your health.（一般将来时will do结构；动名词作主语）
6．（2024·安徽滁州·二模）某英文网站正在开展以“Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home ”为主题的征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，分享你对该话题的看法。
要求：
1.文中不得出现你所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2.词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
参考词汇：责任感sense of responsibility
Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home
Doing housework is an important part of our lives.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Should Teenagers Share Housework at Home
Doing housework is an important part of our lives. I think teenagers should share housework at home because it brings us some advantages.
Firstly, doing housework can help us develop a sense of responsibility. By doing the dishes or cleaning our own rooms, we learn to be responsible for ourselves. Secondly, doing some housework at home makes us learn some basic life skills. This enables us to live an independent life when we grow up. More importantly, by doing housework we can strengthen our relationship with our parents because they are happy to see us share housework with them.
All in all, doing housework is so good to us that we should form the habit of sharing housework at home.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给话题完成写作，可适当发挥，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明自己的观点：青少年应该在家分担家务。
第二步，具体描述青少年做家务的好处；
第三步，最后表达总结。
[亮点词汇]
① help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
② grow up长大
③ all in all总之
[高分句型]
①I think teenagers should share housework at home because it brings us some advantages.（宾语从句）
②This enables us to live an independent life when we grow up.（时间状语从句）
③More importantly, by doing housework we can strengthen our relationship with our parents because they are happy to see us share housework with them.（原因状语从句）
7．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李辉，你所在学校上周进行了一次关于和谐校园的问卷调查，请结合所给图示写一篇调查报告向校英文报School Life栏目投稿。
要点如下：
1. 描述结果；2. 分析原因；3. 提供对策。
注意：
1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 不可出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80-100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：harmonious school (和谐校园)
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
A Survey on Harmonious School
Last week, our school did a survey on harmonious school. The survey suggests that three quarters of the students think our school is harmonious, and the rest don’t think so. The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.
In our school, a small number of students have some bad habits, such as smoking. I think the school should protect them from these bad habits with the help of their parents.
Poor communication can lead to an inharmonious school as well. The students who are not good at expressing themselves seldom get along well with others. They had better improve their speaking skills and think twice before saying something.
It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. Let’s do our best!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：文章需包括所有要点，可适当补充，注意行文连贯，无语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述问卷调查结果；
第二步，从“不良习惯”的角度分析并提出对策；
第三步，从“不善交流”的角度分析并提出对策；
第四步，呼吁大家一起行动。
[亮点词汇]
①the rest剩余的部分
②protect sb. from sth.保护某人免受……伤害
③as well也
[高分句型]
①The students who disagree have two reasons: bad habits and poor communication.（定语从句）
②It’s our duty to build our school a more harmonious one. （it作形式主语）
8．（2024·安徽合肥·二模）假定你是李辉，你的英国笔友Tom对你校开设的“AI教你学书法”课程很感兴趣。请结合下面图式信息，给他写一封邮件，分享你和同学们学习的经历、收获和感受。
注意：
1.邮件需包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100 (邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。)
参考词汇：
Chinese calligraphy 中国书法；
stroke n.笔画；
Chinese character 汉字
Dear Tom,
I’m excited to share with you my experience in our school’s unique “AI Teaches You Calligraphy” course.
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m excited to share with you my experience in our school’s unique “AI Teaches You Calligraphy” course. The course was taught by AI teacher, which was the reason why my friends and I took the course.
Last week, we gathered in the computer lab to learn the basics of Chinese calligraphy. The AI program guided us through the strokes and techniques, showing us how to hold the brush and form the characters. It was amazing to see how the AI could change its teaching style based on our progress. We really enjoyed the course. Not only did we learn a new skill, but we also had a deeper understanding of Chinese culture. The AI program made learning calligraphy easy and fun.
I highly recommend this course to you because you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy. I’m sure you would find it as rewarding as I do.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍自己选这门课的原因；
第二步，分享自己在该课程的经历；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①share with sb与某人分享
②base on基于
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I highly recommend this course to you because you are interested in learning Chinese calligraphy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I’m sure you would find it as rewarding as I do.(省略that的宾语从句)
9．（2024·安徽安庆·一模）2022年，教育部出台了《义务教育劳动课程标准》，各地中小学非常重视劳动教育课程。假如你是李华，现在你校的英语校报就劳动教育这一主题发起征文。请结合下面图示信息，以“My Labor Experience”为题用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你某一次劳动 (如: 植树、种菜、烹饪等) 的过程与感受，向校报投稿。
注意：(1) 短文须包含下图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名和所在的学校；
(3) 词数 80—100。
My Labor Experience
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【答案】例文
My Labor Experience
Last week, I went to the park to plant trees with my classmates. After we walked there, we started to work. I dug a hole. A boy put a little tree into the hole, while another boy put the earth back into the hole. About half an hour later, we finished planting. We felt tired but happy.
In my opinion, planting trees is a very meaningful labor experience. It is not only good for our environment, but makes us experience the value of hard work. Besides, we can exercise our bodies and develop our good habits through labor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不用遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体介绍自己的劳动经历；
第三步，书写结尾，介绍自己在这次劳动中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion在我看来
②not only...but...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Last week, I went to the park to plant trees with my classmates.（不定式表目的）
②In my opinion, planting trees is a very meaningful labor experience.（动名词作主语）
10．（2023·安徽淮南·一模）如今的孩子们心理承受能力太弱，没有健康的心理，就没有健康的人生。
保持心理健康是人的一种重要能力。请你用英语写一篇短文，向英语报社投稿，告诉中学生应该如何保持心理健康。
要点：
1、关注自己，照顾好自己；
2、遇到困难及时找人倾诉；
3、积极锻炼，保持好心情；
4、学会放松，享受生活。
注意：1、词数80—100；
2、要点要写全，可适当增加细节，不必逐句翻译；
3、文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
4、文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to improve our Mental Health
Life is not always easy nowadays, so we should learn to improve our mental health.
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In a word, we needn’t do everything alone. Remember that our mental health can improve by taking action. I hope everyone will have a wonderful future.
【答案】例文：
Life is not always easy nowadays, so we should learn to improve our mental health.
First of all, we should care for our own conditions. When we find there is something wrong with us, we should look after ourselves so we won’t get worse. What’s more, no one can be alone in the world. When we meet difficulties, we should talk about them with someone we trust. Such as our parents, our teachers or our best friends. On the other hand, we should also do more sports so that we can keep a good mood through it. Last but not least, we can do something else if something makes us tired and worried. We have the right to enjoy our own life.
In a word, we needn’t do everything alone. Remember that our mental health can improve by taking action. I hope everyone will have a wonderful future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已部分给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的4条建议，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，衔接开头，提出第一条建议，遇到问题先要照顾好自己；
第二步，建议多和信任的人沟通；
第三步，建议多运动和享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①look after oneself照顾自己
②on the other hand在另一个方面
③last but not least最后但同样重要的是
[高分句型]
①When we meet difficulties, we should talk about them with someone we trust.（when引导时间状语从句）
②Last but not least, we can do something else if something makes us tired and worried.（if引导条件状语从句）
11．（2024·安徽滁州·一模）你们学校英文报纸正在开展以“时间管理”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示及要求，并以“Manage Our Time Wisely”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
1.谈谈时间的重要性；
2.你是如何合理安排和规划好你的时间的。
要求：
1.习作包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺、语意连贯；
3.100词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Manage Our Time Wisely
Each of us has 24 hours a day and how we spend the time completely depends on ourselves.
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【答案】例文
Manage our Time wisely
Each of us has 24 hours a day and how we spend the time completely depends on ourselves.
Middle school is an important period in our lives. By improving our time management, we can make it more enjoyable. Using our time wisely also helps us develop the habit of getting things done on time.
As a student, I’m trying to manage my time better through the following two ways. Firstly, I create a daily timetable with all the tasks to be done. This helps me organize my time well during the day. Secondly, I do every task with my full attention. For example, I keep away from my storybooks and my smartphone while I’m studying.
I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，介绍时间的重要性；
第二步，介绍自己是如何合理安排及规划好时间的；
第三步，书写结语，号召每个人都利用好时间。
[亮点词汇]
①develop the habit of养成……的习惯
②on time按时
③keep away from远离
④make good use of充分利用
[高分句型]
①Using our time wisely also helps us develop the habit of getting things done on time. (动名词作主语)
②I keep away from my storybooks and my smartphone while I’m studying. (while引导时间状语从句)
③I hope everyone can make good use of time and enjoy a colorful life. (宾语从句)
12．（2024·安徽黄山·一模）为落实立德树人根本任务，各学校围绕德育教育举办了一系列的活动，根据下面思维导图内容提示，以“Moral(德育)Education”为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍如何践行德育教育。
要求：1.书写认真规范，词数不少于80词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.短文必须包括所有要点提示，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Moral Education
As teenagers, we are the hope of our country. To be excellent teenagers, let me tell you how to improve our moral education.
At home, we should do some housework. We should also save electricity and water when using them. As for the relationship with our parents, we should have a good communication with them. At school, we should obey the school rules. The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. And we should have more creativity. What’s more, we can take part in some volunteer activities in our free time. We can plant more trees to protect the environment. And we should try our best to save animals. Last but not least, we should love our country. We should try our best to spread our culture and make our dreams come true.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，说明本文要介绍如何践行德育教育。
第二步，详细介绍如何践行德育教育。
[亮点词汇]
①As for至于
②have a good communication with与……有好的沟通
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①The harder we study, the better we will be in the future. (the+比较级，the+比较级)
②We can plant more trees to protect the environment. (动词不定式作目的状语)
13．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）假如你是李辉。你收到英国朋友Jane的来信。信中就上学带不带手机一事，她和朋友意见不一而争执。请你根据下列提示回复一封电子邮件， 陈述你的意见。
内容：1. 你的观点；2. 陈述理由；3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 词数80-100；
2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好， 不计入总词数；
4. 作文中不得出现真实学校， 地址等个人信息。
Dear Jane,
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Jane,
How nice to hear from you! As a student, I think it’s good to have a mobile phone, because mobile phones can offer a lot of convenience. And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us. For example, we can use mobile phones to look up new words. But it can also bring some trouble. For example, many students use their mobiles to listen to music in class. They don’t listen to the teachers carefully. And many students send messages in class.
In my opinion, it’s not right to use mobile phones in school. We should try our best to use mobile phones in right ways.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“很高兴收到你的来信”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——观点、理由、提出建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“期望收到你的回复”的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①look up查阅
②For example比如
③hear from收到某人的来信
[高分句型]
①And students can send short messages to their parents when they are in trouble or not at home. (When引导的时间状语从句)
②In fact, if students use mobile phones in right ways, mobile phones will help us. (If引导的条件状语从句)
14．（2024·安徽合肥·一模）随着中国的国际地位日益提高，越来越多的外国友人想要了解中国，为此，China Daily报社正在以“My country”为题向中学生征稿。假如你是李辉，请根据以下要点写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1.地域广阔；
2. 历史悠久；
3. 景点众多；
4………
要求：1. 语句通顺，符合逻辑，可适当发挥；
2. 不可出现真实姓名与学校名称；
3. 词数 80-100。
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文：
My country
China is a beautiful and great country. It’s a big country with a very long and colourful history. It has a vast territory with many high mountains and long rivers. There are many places of interest in China, for example, the Great Wall which draws the attention of people from all over the world. We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture. There are different races. Each race has its own culture and customs. My country is becoming stronger and stronger. When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food. I am so proud that I am part of this country.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”，以“My country”为题介绍中国。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，介绍中国幅员辽阔、历史悠久、景点众多等；
第三步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜
② for example 例如
③ fall in love with爱上……
[高分句型]
① We can visit some ancient capital cities to know about its history and culture.（动词不定式表目的）
② When foreigners come to my country, they fall in love with the food.（when引导时间状语从句）
15．（2024·安徽六安·一模）假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“学雷锋”志愿者活动。你的英国笔友Tony向你打听活动的相关情况。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，告诉他活动的目的、时间、地点以及活动的内容，并询问他们学校志愿者活动的情况。
注意：1.邮件须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tony,
How is it going
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tony,
How is it going I’m writing this email to tell you about the volunteer activity held in our school last month.
Last Saturday, all of the students in Class 2 went to the park near our school to pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. Last Sunday, we paid a visit to the elderly in the old people’s home. We swept the floor, tidied the room and talked with them as we planned. What a fantastic time we had! These activities can not only help us develop a sense of responsibility but also improve our communication skills. What’s more, it helps the people who are in need.
What about your school’s volunteer activity Please write to me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己写这封电子邮件的目的；
第二步，从活动的目的、时间、地点以及活动的内容等方面具体介绍志愿者活动；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth.告诉某人关于某事
②develop a sense of responsibility培养责任感
③improve our communication skills提高我们的沟通能力
④what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①What a fantastic time we had!(感叹句)
②What’s more, it helps the people who are in need.(定语从句)