Module 7 A famous story模块话题满分范文必背-（含解析）2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（外研版）

Module 7 A famous story
模块话题满分范文必背
一、看图作文
1. 童话故事深受孩子们的喜爱，你一定读过《皇帝的新装》这个童话故事。请你根据下图提示，以The
Emperor's New Clothes"为题，用英语写一篇80 词左右的短文，在学校广播站“英语之声”栏目播出。
要求：1.语句通顺，没有语法错误；
2.包含图片全部要点；
3.从中你得到哪些启发，可适当发挥；
4.80词左右。(温馨提示：亲，交卷前仔细检查一遍!)
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【答案】例文
The Emperor's New Clothes
Once upon
a time,there was
an
emperor who
spent
sev
eral hours
changing
clothes
every
morning.Two
cheaters
came
one
day.They made
a magical
dress
for
the king
and
asked him
for
a
lot
of
money.They told
the
emperor this
dress
could
only be
seen by wise people,not by
foolish pe
ople.When
the
emperor
put
on
the
clothes,
)
all he could see was his underwear.But he didn't want people to think he was stupid,so he said the clothes was
beautiful.And officials all said they could see this dress in order to cover up their "foolishness".Finally,the
emperor wore this invisible “clothes”and went to the street.A child said,"He's not wearing anything!"
This story tells us to be honest with everything.And then we can become a true gentleman.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：根据图片要点，介绍《皇帝的新装》,考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据图片叙述故事《皇帝的新装》;
第二步，总结自己的启发。
[亮点词汇]
① once upon a time 从前
②spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
③ask sb…for sth.向某人要某物
④cover up 掩盖
⑤ in order to 为了
[高分句型]
①Once upon a time,there was an emperor who spent several hours changing clothes every morning.(who 引导
的定语从句)
② They told the emperor this dress could only be seen by wise people,not by foolish people. (省略引导词 that
的宾语从句)
2. 你准备参加学校“英语角”开展的“用英语讲故事”活动，你选取了“曹冲称象”这个大家熟悉的故事。
请你根据下边图片内容，用英语写一篇80个词以上的小短文。
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【答案】
How Cao Chong Had the
Elephant
Weighed
Cao Chong was very glad to have received an
elephant
as
a prese
nt.He
wanted
to
know
how
heavy
the
elephant was,but there was no
scale
(秤)
big enough
to
weigh
s
uch
a
huge
creature.
One
day,Cao
Chong
said
to
his
father,"I've
found
a
way
to
weigh
the
elepha
nt."Cao
Chong
asked
a
man
to
lead the
elephant onto
a boat.When t
he boat
stopped
sinking the
man
drew
a
line
along
on
the boat
side.After
the
elephant was led away,Cao Chong had
some
men put
stones
into
the
boat
until
the
water
reached
the
line.
Cao Chong asked the men to weigh each
stone
f
rom
the boat
and put
down
the
number.“Add
up
all
the
numbers
and
we
will
know
the
weight
of
the
elephant
."
Cao
Chong
said
to
his
father
with
kind
of
pride
.
【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇看图作文，要求根据图片内容描写“曹冲称象”的
故事。
2.写作指导：“曹冲称象”这个故事大家都比较熟悉，由于这是介绍过去发生的故事，所以本文主
要时态就
是一般过去时态，人称以第三人称为主；本文应该写成记述文的形式，要按照开头，经过和结尾的三段式
结构来写。写作中可以使用大量的短语和句式，为文章增添色彩；注意语句通顺，逻辑
合理。
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二、 电子邮件
3. 假如你是李梅，你的美国笔友 Tom 在昨天的 e-mail 中告诉你，最近他对中国文化产生了浓厚的兴 趣，希望你能给他介绍一些经典故事。请你根据下面所给图画，给 Tom 回复一封 e-mail, 向他讲述这一经
典故事，并希望知道他对该故事及主人公的看法。
play hide and seek (捉迷藏),full of water fall into,be frightened (惊恐的),cry,run for help
think over,pick up,throw at break,be saved
作文要求：
1.文章需包括所有图画的内容，可以适当发挥，使全文连贯；
2. 词数70个左右；
3. 邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom.
I'm very happy that you are interested in traditional Chinese stories.Well,let me tell you a famous one with
the name Sima Guang Hit the Tank.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Mei
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【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
I'm very happy that you
are
interested
in
tradition
al
Chinese
stories.Well,let
me
tell
you
a
famous
one
with
the name Sima
Guang
Hit the
Tank.
Once
Sima Guang was playing hide and
seek
with
several children
in
the
backyard.There
was
a
large
water
tank
in
the
yard.It was
full
of water.When
the
kids
were playing
,one
child
suddenly
fell
into
the
tank.Other
children were
so
frightened that they
cried
and ran
for
help.Ho
wever,Sima
Guang
thought
it
over.Then
he
picked up
a big
stone
and threw
it
at the tank.The
tank bro
ke
and
the
water
ran
out.He
saved
the
kid.What
do
you think of Sima Gua
ng
I'm looking forward to hearing fro
m you.
Yours.
Li Mei
【详解】
[总体分析]
①
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②
时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
)
③ 提示图片内容已给出，考生应注意根据图片及所给提示词描述故事，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用导语部分来引出本邮件话题：给好朋友推荐中国经典故事；
第二步，具体描述图片内容。依次根据四幅图片内容进行故事的描述，图片中的提示词要写全；
第三步，书写结语。表达期待得到对方的回信。
[亮点词汇]
① be full of 充满
② fall into 掉入
③ run for help 跑去寻求帮助
④ think over 仔细考虑
⑤ pick up 捡起
[高分句型]
① When the kids were playing,one child suddenly fell into the tank. (when 引导的时间状语从句)
② Other children were so frightened that they cried and ran for help.(so…that…引导的结果状语从句)
4. 假设你是阳光中学八年级的学生李平，你的英国笔友 Henry 向你请教成语“守株待兔”。请你给他写一封
邮件，内容包括：
1.描述故事；2.概括寓意。
注意：1.词数90 左右；2.邮件中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇：野兔hare; 树桩 tree sturmp
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【答案】
One
possible version:
Dear Henry:
I'm
glad to tell you the
story
of Wait
for
Wind
Falls.In
ancient
China,there
w
as
a poor
farmer.He
was
too
lazy to work hard e
very day.
One day,while the
farmer was working
on
the
farm,a
hare
ran
so
fast
that
it bumped
into
the
tree
sturmp
and
died.The
farmer was
very happy
to
take
the hare home
and
cooked
a
de
licious
meal.From
then
on,he
didn't
work
anymore.He waited near the tree
sturmp
for hares
day
af
ter
day
until
he
was
dying.Also,the
crops
in
the
)
field all died because of lack of care.
This story tells us we should not always depend on good luck.The past experience doesn't always work.
Happy life comes from hard work.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文
之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。内容是给你的英国笔友Henry 介绍成语“守株待兔”的故事内容和寓意。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。首先描述故事；其次概括寓意。
第三步：书写结语。过去的经验并不总是有效的。幸福的生活来自努力工作。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to…太……而不能……
② from then on 从那时起
③day after day 日复一日
④ because of 因为，由于
⑤depend on 依靠
[高分句型]
① One day,while the farmer was working on the farm,a hare ran so fast that it bumped into the tree sturmp and
died.(while引导的时间状语从句)
② He waited near the tree sturmp for hares day after day until he was dying.(until 引导的时间状语从句)
5. 假如你是李梅，你在美国的笔友Jim 正在参加一个汉语文化项目，发 Email向你请教“塞翁失马”的
故事。请用英文给他回一封 Email。
内容包括：
1)简述塞翁失马的故事经过；
2)说说你对故事的看法。
要求；
1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2)词数100左右。
注： blessing n.好事 disguise n.掩饰，伪装
Dear Jim,
I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture.The story "Sai Weng Lost His Horse"is also
called“A Blessing in disguise”.
【答案】例文：
Dear Jim,
I am happy to know you are learning about Chinese culture.The story "Sai Weng Lost His Horse"is also
called“A Blessing in disguise”.
Once upon a time,there lived an old man.Later,he was called "Sai Weng".One day,his horse ran away.
People came to comfort him.The old man said:"It may be a good thing!"After a few months,the horse led
several horses back.When the old man's son rode a horse,he fell off and broke his leg.Many people felt bad for the old man.But he said it might be a good thing.After a year,a war happened.All the young men took up arms
to fight.Most of them died.But his son didn't go because of his broken leg.
The story tells us every coin has two sides.No matter what you meet is“blessing"or"disaster”,you should
keep a happy mind.
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目以记叙为主，要求在电子邮件中给笔友介绍一下中国“塞翁失马”的故事，并
发表自己对故事的看法。题目已给出开头，我们写正文就好。
2.写作指导：介绍故事时，主要用第三人称，时态采用一般过去时，简单介绍“塞翁失马”的故事就可以。
最后用第一人称，发表自己对这个故事的看法，时态采用一般现在时。
三、话题作文
6.“龟兔赛跑”是我们从小就耳熟能详的故事，根据故事内容，写一篇80词左右的小故事。
要求：字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
提示词： rabbit 兔子； tortoise 乌龟； have arace 赛跑； go on running 继续跑；wake up醒来； the finishing
line 终点线；
【答案】例文
Once upon a time,there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest.One day,they had a race.At first,the rabbit hurried in front of the tortoise.Then he was tired,and wanted to have a break.So he lay on the road and soon fell
asleep.But the tortoise didn't stop,he went on running.Finally,the rabbit woke up,but it was too late.The
tortoise got to the finishing line.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：本文主要是根据故事内容，讲述龟兔赛跑的故事。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，表示森林里有一只乌龟和一只兔子；
第二步，详细介绍龟兔赛跑的故事。
[亮点词汇]
① in the forest 在森林里
② in front of在……前面
[高分句型]
① there lived a rabbit and a tortoise in the forest.(倒装句)
② Finally,the rabbit woke up,but it was too late.(but 连接的并列句)
7. 同学们对“愚公移山”的故事一定有着很深的印象吧 请根据本单元所学内容及下面的提示词语，以The
Story of YuGong”为题，把“愚公移山”的故事用英语简要叙述一下，并谈一谈你从故事中学到了什么。要
求：80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词语：90,move the mountains,Zhi Sou,die,son,grandson,continue,god,be moved,help
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time,there was an old man called Yu Gong.
【答案】One possible version:
The Story of Yu Gong
Once upon a time,there was an old man called Yu Gong.Although he was almost 90,he decided to move the mountains.A“clever”man called Zhi Sou said,“You are too old to move the mountains.”Yu Gong said,“IfI die, my sons will still do this.And if my sons die,my grandsons will continue doing this."Then a god was moved by
Yu Gong.So he sent two gods to help him.From the story,I learned that anything is possible if we work hard!
【详解】[总体分析
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于话题作文写作；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示：文章开头以及提示的词语已经给出，结合话题讲述《愚公移山》的故事，不要遗漏提示中的“你
从故事中学到了什么”这一要点，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出《愚公移山》的故事；
第二步，根据提示的单词简要叙述一下《愚公移山》的故事内容；
第三步，抒发你对故事的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①too…to do…太……以至于不能做……
②anything is possible 凡事皆有可能
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[高分句型
]
①
Although he was almost 90,he de
cided to move the mountains.(although 引导让步状语从句)
②
A“clever”man called Zhi Sou said,“You are too old to move the mountains.”
(过去分词作定语)
③
From the story,I learned that anything is possible if we work har
d!(that
引导宾语从句，
if引导条件状语从
句
)
)
四、材料作文
8. 根据下列提示简单描述刻舟求剑的故事，可以适当发挥，不少于80 字。
1.楚国一个人过河时，宝剑掉到了水里；
2.他立刻在船上做了一个记号；
3. 船停下时，他从船上做记号的地方跳到水里去寻找他的宝剑；
4. 船动宝剑没动；
5. 你对这个故事的看法(至少一点)
楚国 the State of Chu;宝剑 sword; 立刻 at once;做记号 make a mark
【答案】例文
Making His Mark (Ke Zhou QiuJian)
A man from the State of Chu was crossing the river in the boat.His sword fell into the water because he was not careful.He made a mark on the boat at once.When the boat stopped,he jumped into the water to look for his sword from the mark he made on the boat.The boat moved but the sword did not.I think it is very stupid of him
to look for a sword in this way.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示中的“个人看法”,适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按照提示叙述“刻舟求剑”故事情节；
第二步，表达自己的观点看法。
[亮点词汇]
①cross the river 过河
② look for 寻找
③ move 移动
④ in this way 用这种方法
[高分句型]
①His sword fell into the water because he was not careful.(because 引导的原因状语从句)
② When the boat stopped,he jumped into the water to look for his sword from the mark he made on the boat.
(When 引导的时间状语从句)
③ I think it is very stupid of him to look for a sword in this way. (省略 that 的宾语从句；it 作形式主语的句型)
9. 在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，有美好的西方童话，从 愚公移山到白雪公主，从美猴王到灰姑娘，从后羿射日到皇帝的新装……。人们每每诵读讲述都会倍感鼓 舞，深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，你想和大家分享谁的故事呢 现在就动动小手写下来
吧 !
要求：1.可以从以上提示中选取故事，也可以选自己喜欢的其他故事。
2.内容包括：故事及故事给我们的启迪。
3.不能出现真实的学校名称、人名及其他真实信息。
4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of… with
you .
That's the story of.…Hope you enjoy it!
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【答案】参考例文：
Hello,everyone!I
feel honored to
share the
story
of
Yu
Gong with
you.
Once
upon
atime,there
lived
an
old
man
called
Yu
Gong.There
were
two
mountains
near
his
house.They
were
so big that it took a
long
time
t
o walk
to
the
other
side.To
solve
this
problem,Yu
Gong
told
his
family
that
he wanted to move the mountains and he needed
their help.All
his
family
m
embers
agreed
so
they
started
digging
the next
day.They worked
day
after
day,night
a
fter night.One
day,when
a man
saw
Yu
Gong
and
his
family
working,he
said it was impossible
for Yu Gong
to
move
the
mountains bec
ause
he
was
old
and
weak.But
Yu
Gong
said his family could continue doing
it
after
he
died.Yu
Gong's
spirit
moved
the
God
so
he
sent
two
gods
to
take
the
mountains
away.Seeing
this,all
the
family
members jump
ed
with joy.
This
story tells us we never know what is
possible
unless
we
try
to
make
it
happen.Besides,if
we
have
a
big
dream,we
should
try
our best to make
it
come
true.That's
th
e
story
of Yu
Gong.Hope you
enjoy
it!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求和大家分享故事；要求包含所有提示内容。
2.
写作指导：此作文时态主要以一般过去时为主；可采用三段落格式，第一段：引出主题；第二段：详细
阐述故事内容；第三段：阐述故事给我们的启迪。
可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型
等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。
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10. 某英文杂志社举办首届“故事大王”征文比赛。请根据下面的参考词汇，写一则英语小故事参加比
赛。80词左右，可适当发挥。
参考词汇： girl,lost,forest,house,rabbit,friend.
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【答案】例文
Once upon
a time,there was
a
g
irl
called
Jenny.She
lived near
a
big
forest.One
day
she
went
into
the
forest
and
got
lost.She
looked
around
her.“Where
am
I ”she
asked.Then
she
noticed
a
small
house.She
knocked
on
the
door,but
nobody
answere
d.So
she
walked
into
the
house.There
was
a
rabbit
there.The
rabbit
was
friendly.
He
said,“Are
you
hungry Come
and
have
dinner
with
me!”Jenny
said,“OK.”Then
they
became
good
friends.
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括人物、故事发生的背景、起因、过程和结果。
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