中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.
单元写作指导与演练
近三年考情分析
话题 考查热度
如何写生活环境的相关文章
如何写有关“你最喜欢的东西”的文章
（1）本单元的话题是" Living environment(生活环境)"，要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，并适当表达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。
（2）本单元的话题是谈论身边所拥有的东西物品或者自己喜欢的物品等。属于说明文的范畴，考查学生描述一个物品的特点，并对物品发表自己的简单看法及感受。重点考查学生以下能力：
学习说明文的写作特点；
使用现在完成时态表述持续；
学会发表个人看法及观点。
写作目标
“三步法”介绍的文章：
◆第一步：整体介绍你最喜欢的东西是什么；
◆第二步：学出你喜欢的原因；
◆ 第三步：总结。
真题感知
1．（2023·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
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I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）三年的初中生活，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变 2.学习上的成就 3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with 2. learn from, make progress 3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求：
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Good luck!
词汇积累：
have拥有
ever曾经
already已经
favorite最喜欢的
the first time首次
be full of 充满
sell/buy卖/买
more than多
keep old things保留旧物品
bring back sweet memories带回甜蜜的回忆
give away捐赠
not...anymore不再
since自从
maybe也许
give up放弃
important重要的
learn...from从中学会
grow up成长
give...to把.......给
recently最近
so...that如此.....那么
decide to do决定去做某事
play with....和......一起玩
part with分离
to be honest老实说
uncommon不同寻常的
a symbol of .....的象征
especially尤其
most of 大部分
a good way to...做......的好方式
thousands of成千上万
full of feelings充满........感觉
in one’s opinion以某人看来
句型积累：
My favorite thing is...
I’ve had it since I was five.我5岁的时候就拥有它。
It’s special to me because....它对于我意义非凡是因为.......
I went to there by train.我是坐火车去的。
I have had it for more than 10 years.我已经拥有它10年了。
I want to keep old things because they bring back sweet memories.我想保存这些旧东西是因为它们带给我甜蜜的回忆。
You can also give old things away to people in need.你也可以把旧的东西分发给有需要的人。
I don’t need it anymore.不再需要它了。
It may be a little bit old,but it is still interesting.也许它有点旧了，但是仍然很有趣。
As for me ,I don’t want to give up my football shirts.对于我来说，我不想放弃我的足球衫。
I really like it and I think I will keep it forever.我确实很喜欢它并且我会永远保存它。
We can gain.....from.....我从中获得......
（一）
根据表格所给内容要点,以"The changes in my hometown"为题写一篇英语短文。要点如下：
过去 1.空气清新，环境很好； 2.房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车去上班； 3.是一个宁静的地方。
现在 1.住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车； 2.这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴； 3.树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。
将来 请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句)。
要求：1.字迹工整，要点全面；2. 90 词左右。
The changes in my hometown
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 家乡的变化
时态 一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落 布局 the air was fresh, the environment 描述家乡 was good, the houses were small and 的过去 old, people went to work on foot or by bike, a quiet place the houses are big and bright, many 描述家乡 people have their own cars, bring 的现在 young people a modern life, fewer trees, the environment is not as good as before 展望家乡 →I hope my hometown will be... 的未来
参考词汇
in the past 过去；go to work 去上班；on foot 步行；by bike 骑自行车；
feel happy 感到高兴not as good as 不如……好
参考句子
1. My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
最近几年，我的家乡发生了很大变化。
2. It used to be a/an... place. 它过去是个……地方。
3. Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
4. I hope my hometown... 我希望我的家乡……
4.高分例文
The changes in my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.①In the past, the air here was very fresh and the environment was good. The houses were small and old.People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet place.
②Now things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel happy. ③But there are fewer trees, and the environment is not as good as before.
④I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful so that we can live a happier life.
例文分析：
文章开门见山，引出话题，接着分段描述家乡的今昔变化，并对未来进行了展望，思路清晰，条理分明，行文合理、紧凑。
①句使用短语 In the past,引出对家乡过去情况的描述；
②句总领第二段，引出对家乡现在情况的描述；
③句运用比较级和 not as... as 结构,将家乡的现在与过去进行了比较；
④句中I hope 后的宾语从句引出对家乡未来的展望。
5.佳句集锦
1. East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
2. Home is where the heart is. 心之所系即为家。
3. A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village.远亲不如近邻。
4. Home is a warm place, where we can always find love, understanding, care and help.家是个温暖的地方,我们总是可以在其中找到爱、理解、关怀与帮助。
（二）
童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
My favorite ________ in childhood
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My favorite gift in childhood
Since I was born, I have received a good number of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered senior middle school. At that moment, my family are living a hard life. Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
（一）
1．童年时获得的东西中总有一件是你最爱的，并能给你带来美好的回忆，比如一个礼物，一个玩具……。请介绍你童年中最喜爱的一样东西，晒晒你“童年”的美好回忆。
提示：
(1) How long have you had it
(2) Who gave it to you
(3) Why do you like it so much Why is it special
(4) Can you say anything more about it
要求：
（1）短文内容需包含提示问题中的要点，可适当发挥。
（2）语言准确得当，条理清晰。词数为70左右。首句已给出，不计入词数。
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you.
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2．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
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That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3．回首抗击新冠疫情的这三年，每个人都在自己的岗位发光发热。每个人的心中都有一位“英雄”。请你结合自身经历，根据下表谈谈疫情防控期间你的所见所闻，所思所感。
The unforgettable three years
What you did stayed at home, wore masks, volunteered to do... , had online class...
What you saw environment around you...
Your hero and why doctors/nurses/teachers/police...
Your feeling ...
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The unforgettable three years
How time flies! The COVID-19 attacked people three years ago.
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4．时光荏苒，六月的脚步越来越近，同学们即将离开这个与你朝夕相处三年的校园。教室里有你早起晨读的身影，操场上有你努力锻炼的身影，图书室有你沉浸阅读的身影。这个你们生活、拼搏、挥洒过泪水和汗水的校园里一定有一个你最喜欢的地方，请简要描述你喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
参考要点：
1. 简要描写校园。
2. 介绍校园中你最喜欢的地方并简要描写。
3. 喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
要求：
1. 作文80-120词。
2. 文中不能出现自己或他人的真实姓名，以及所在学校的名称。
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5．自从学校开设劳动课后，同学们有了很多变化。请你根据下面的结构图和要求，以“Changes after having labor classes”为题，给你校英文校报写一篇短文投稿，谈谈同学们的变化。
Changes after having labor classes
At school At home
参考词汇：help wash dishes, water the flowers, cook meals, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Changes after having labor classes
As we know, many changes have taken place since we began to take labor classes.
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6．假定你是李华，本周学校将举办一场以“My Hometown”为主题的英语角活动，请你按要求准备发言稿。
要求：
（1）说说家乡的变化；
（2）介绍家乡的旅游景点；
（3）推荐家乡的特色小吃。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Now please allow me to say something about my hometown.
7．假如你是李华，你校的英语广播站计划做一期“毕业生感言”的专题节目，想邀请你参加。请你以“The Progress I’ve Made”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈初中这三年多时光中，你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求:
1. 100词左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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8．最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，结合图示信息，写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
Basic information: name, type, writer, ...
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题）
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，
内容包括：
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
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（2022·青海·统考中考真题）
当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in
many fields. What will China be like in ten years ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2022·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题）
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施，学校的作业少了，课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者，你的课余生活发生了哪些变化？你如何看待这一政策？现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏，展开讨论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。
提示词：the“double reduction”policy“双减”政策
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90词，至少含有两个复合句，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First,
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话题 考查热度
如何写生活环境的相关文章
如何写有关“你最喜欢的东西”的文章
（1）本单元的话题是" Living environment(生活环境)"，要求学生学会描述自己周边环境的变化，并适当表达自己的感受。在写这类文章时，要注意正确运用时态，内容合理，行文流畅、完整。
（2）本单元的话题是谈论身边所拥有的东西物品或者自己喜欢的物品等。属于说明文的范畴，考查学生描述一个物品的特点，并对物品发表自己的简单看法及感受。重点考查学生以下能力：
学习说明文的写作特点；
使用现在完成时态表述持续；
学会发表个人看法及观点。
写作目标
“三步法”介绍的文章：
◆第一步：整体介绍你最喜欢的东西是什么；
◆第二步：学出你喜欢的原因；
◆ 第三步：总结。
真题感知
1．（2023·辽宁盘锦·统考中考真题）根据要求完成作文，并写在答题卡的相应位置。
假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)建议买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出推荐理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
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I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestion about Chinese gifts.
From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are put on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.
I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示信息介绍一件代表中国文化的礼物，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍推荐的礼物是什么；
第二步，介绍这个礼物；
第三步，说明推荐理由。
[亮点词汇]
①from my point of view依我看来
②be used to do被用来做某事
③be seen as被看成
[高分句型]
①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2．（2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题）三年的初中生活，你一定有许多收获，也会有一些不足。展望未来，你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言，请你根据以下表格信息，写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变 2.学习上的成就 3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with 2. learn from, make progress 3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求：
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容，可适当发挥；
2.行文连贯，条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息：
4.词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Good luck!
【答案】例文：
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What’s worse, I couldn’t really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”，“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述过去的三年有很大的变化；
第二步，回顾过去，包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足；
第三步，展望未来，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
④make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.（not only...but also,,,结构）
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.（that引导的宾语从句）
词汇积累：
have拥有
ever曾经
already已经
favorite最喜欢的
the first time首次
be full of 充满
sell/buy卖/买
more than多
keep old things保留旧物品
bring back sweet memories带回甜蜜的回忆
give away捐赠
not...anymore不再
since自从
maybe也许
give up放弃
important重要的
learn...from从中学会
grow up成长
give...to把.......给
recently最近
so...that如此.....那么
decide to do决定去做某事
play with....和......一起玩
part with分离
to be honest老实说
uncommon不同寻常的
a symbol of .....的象征
especially尤其
most of 大部分
a good way to...做......的好方式
thousands of成千上万
full of feelings充满........感觉
in one’s opinion以某人看来
句型积累：
My favorite thing is...
I’ve had it since I was five.我5岁的时候就拥有它。
It’s special to me because....它对于我意义非凡是因为.......
I went to there by train.我是坐火车去的。
I have had it for more than 10 years.我已经拥有它10年了。
I want to keep old things because they bring back sweet memories.我想保存这些旧东西是因为它们带给我甜蜜的回忆。
You can also give old things away to people in need.你也可以把旧的东西分发给有需要的人。
I don’t need it anymore.不再需要它了。
It may be a little bit old,but it is still interesting.也许它有点旧了，但是仍然很有趣。
As for me ,I don’t want to give up my football shirts.对于我来说，我不想放弃我的足球衫。
I really like it and I think I will keep it forever.我确实很喜欢它并且我会永远保存它。
We can gain.....from.....我从中获得......
（一）
根据表格所给内容要点,以"The changes in my hometown"为题写一篇英语短文。要点如下：
过去 1.空气清新，环境很好； 2.房屋又小又旧，人们走路或是骑车去上班； 3.是一个宁静的地方。
现在 1.住房宽敞明亮，很多人都有了自己的汽车； 2.这些变化给年轻人带来了现代化的生活，他们都感到很高兴； 3.树比以前少了，环境不如以前好了。
将来 请你展望家乡的未来(1—2句)。
要求：1.字迹工整，要点全面；2. 90 词左右。
The changes in my hometown
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 家乡的变化
时态 一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落 布局 the air was fresh, the environment 描述家乡 was good, the houses were small and 的过去 old, people went to work on foot or by bike, a quiet place the houses are big and bright, many 描述家乡 people have their own cars, bring 的现在 young people a modern life, fewer trees, the environment is not as good as before 展望家乡 →I hope my hometown will be... 的未来
参考词汇
in the past 过去；go to work 去上班；on foot 步行；by bike 骑自行车；
feel happy 感到高兴not as good as 不如……好
参考句子
1. My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.
最近几年，我的家乡发生了很大变化。
2. It used to be a/an... place. 它过去是个……地方。
3. Now things have changed a lot. 现在事情发生了很大变化。
4. I hope my hometown... 我希望我的家乡……
4.高分例文
The changes in my hometown
My hometown has changed a lot in recent years.①In the past, the air here was very fresh and the environment was good. The houses were small and old.People went to work on foot or by bike. It used to be a very quiet place.
②Now things are quite different. The houses are big and bright. Many people have their own cars. The changes have brought young people a modern life. They all feel happy. ③But there are fewer trees, and the environment is not as good as before.
④I hope my hometown will be more and more beautiful so that we can live a happier life.
例文分析：
文章开门见山，引出话题，接着分段描述家乡的今昔变化，并对未来进行了展望，思路清晰，条理分明，行文合理、紧凑。
①句使用短语 In the past,引出对家乡过去情况的描述；
②句总领第二段，引出对家乡现在情况的描述；
③句运用比较级和 not as... as 结构,将家乡的现在与过去进行了比较；
④句中I hope 后的宾语从句引出对家乡未来的展望。
5.佳句集锦
1. East or west, home is best. 金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
2. Home is where the heart is. 心之所系即为家。
3. A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village.远亲不如近邻。
4. Home is a warm place, where we can always find love, understanding, care and help.家是个温暖的地方,我们总是可以在其中找到爱、理解、关怀与帮助。
（二）
童年是人生中最美好的一段时光。尽管我们已告别童年，但童年中总有那么一件你最爱的并能给你带来甜美回忆的物品值得我们珍藏。假设你叫李华，是一名八年级学生，你的学校校刊正在举行“美好童年”的征文比赛。请以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，你拥有它有多长时间了，是怎样得到它的，以及你喜欢它的原因。
要求：1. 内容包括以上所有信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文章结构完整，语句通顺，条理清楚；
3. 80词左右。
My favorite ________ in childhood
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My favorite gift in childhood
Since I was born, I have received a good number of gifts. But the best one is a watch, which my dad gave me when I entered senior middle school. At that moment, my family are living a hard life. Although it was not expensive, in order to buy me the gift, my dad made every effort to earn money. Each time I see the watch, I think about my great dad. He always tries his best to support our family and he is the greatest man in my heart.
【解析】
【详解】
1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文，以“My favorite _____in childhood”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈童年你最喜欢的东西，拥有的时间，怎样得到的以及喜欢的原因。
2.写作指导：本文应该以第一人称和第三人称来叙述内容；时态综合采用一般现在时和一般过去时为主，介绍童年最喜欢的礼物时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
（一）
1．童年时获得的东西中总有一件是你最爱的，并能给你带来美好的回忆，比如一个礼物，一个玩具……。请介绍你童年中最喜爱的一样东西，晒晒你“童年”的美好回忆。
提示：
(1) How long have you had it
(2) Who gave it to you
(3) Why do you like it so much Why is it special
(4) Can you say anything more about it
要求：
（1）短文内容需包含提示问题中的要点，可适当发挥。
（2）语言准确得当，条理清晰。词数为70左右。首句已给出，不计入词数。
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you.
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【答案】例文
I’m glad to introduce my favorite thing in my childhood to you. It is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday.
I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. I think I will keep it forever to remind me of my grandmother.
The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据提示内容，介绍自己童年中最喜欢的一样东西，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时，一般过去时和现在完成时。作文要分别介绍这样物品有多久了，谁给你的，为什么这么喜欢它，它为什么特别等内容。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
2．假如你是李华，你的英国好友Linda想了解你过去与现在性格方面的改变。请根据要点内容的提示，给她写封邮件。
要点如下：
1. 过去害羞、喜欢乡村音乐，很少交友；
2. 现在开朗，喜欢古典音乐，有很多朋友：
3. 过去喜欢集邮，现在喜欢看书。
写作要求：1. 短文内容必须包括以上所有要求的内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名：
3. 词数：80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Linda.
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
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That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Linda,
I’m very glad to tell you something about me.
I used to be too shy to speak to others in public. As a result, I always made few friends. I fear to face others by myself. At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful. I also used to like collecting stamps. And this always helped me get rich knowledge. However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends. What’s more, I like classic music that causes me to fall in love with books. So I love reading very much now. In the books, I can learn a lot and know better about our world.
That’s all about my characters and hobbies. With my best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己过去和现在性格的变化；
第二步，介绍自己爱好上的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②as a result因此
③what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①At that time, I usually like country music which made me feel quiet and peaceful.（定语从句）
②However, I am outgoing so that I make many friends.（目的状语从句）
3．回首抗击新冠疫情的这三年，每个人都在自己的岗位发光发热。每个人的心中都有一位“英雄”。请你结合自身经历，根据下表谈谈疫情防控期间你的所见所闻，所思所感。
The unforgettable three years
What you did stayed at home, wore masks, volunteered to do... , had online class...
What you saw environment around you...
Your hero and why doctors/nurses/teachers/police...
Your feeling ...
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
The unforgettable three years
How time flies! The COVID-19 attacked people three years ago.
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【答案】例文：
The unforgettable three years
How time flies! The COVID-19 attacked people three years ago. During the COVID-19, we couldn’t go to school, we had to stay at home and take online classes. We couldn’t go out to play either. If we must go out, we have to wear masks. The busy streets became empty. Because people couldn’t go out, I became a community volunteer to help them deliver food and vegetables. Although I worked hard every day, I felt fulfilled and happy.
At the same time, many heroes also appeared. The heroes in my heart are the doctors and the nurses. They disregarded the hot weather every day and they wore thick protective clothing to help us with testing. We all liked them. Thanks to their efforts, we were able to spend three years healthy and safe.
Three years is a long time. These three years have shown me how powerful my country is. How great medical staff are! I will also work hard like them in the future to help those in need.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍疫情期间自己做了什么以及周围环境的变化；
第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄以及原因；
第三步，最后介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① stay at home待在家
② help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
③ in the future在未来
[高分句型]
① Although I worked hard every day, I felt fulfilled and happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
② How great medical staff are!（how引导的感叹句）
4．时光荏苒，六月的脚步越来越近，同学们即将离开这个与你朝夕相处三年的校园。教室里有你早起晨读的身影，操场上有你努力锻炼的身影，图书室有你沉浸阅读的身影。这个你们生活、拼搏、挥洒过泪水和汗水的校园里一定有一个你最喜欢的地方，请简要描述你喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
参考要点：
1. 简要描写校园。
2. 介绍校园中你最喜欢的地方并简要描写。
3. 喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让你喜欢上这个地方的故事。
要求：
1. 作文80-120词。
2. 文中不能出现自己或他人的真实姓名，以及所在学校的名称。
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【答案】例文
Three years has passed, I will leave my junior school for a new senior high school. The life in my school is rich and interesting. Let me tell you something about my school.
I study in a beautiful school. There are many trees and flowers in campus. It’s green all the year round. There are three buildings in my school. Besides, there are two playgrounds in my school, a basketball court and a football field. I like our classroom best. Our classroom is large and bright. The teachers are very helpful and kind, and the students are lovely and friendly. They help me with my life and study. They often encourage me when I have trouble in my study. Last year my teachers and classmates had a birthday party for me. We had fun together, and I was moved by them. I love them and I like studying in my school.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中对校园的描述、校园中自己最喜欢的地方以及喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让自己喜欢上这个地方的故事的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍即将离开这个朝夕相处三年的校园；
第二步，介绍校园中你最喜欢的地方；
第三步，介绍喜欢它的原因或者在这里发生过的让自己喜欢上这个地方的故事。
[亮点词汇]
① rich and interesting丰富有趣
② all the year round一年到头，终年
③ lovely and friendly可爱友好
④ had fun玩得很开心
[高分句型]
① There are many trees and flowers in campus.（There be句型）
② They often encourage me when I have trouble in my study.（when引导时间状语从句）
③ We had fun together, and I was moved by them.（被动语态）
5．自从学校开设劳动课后，同学们有了很多变化。请你根据下面的结构图和要求，以“Changes after having labor classes”为题，给你校英文校报写一篇短文投稿，谈谈同学们的变化。
Changes after having labor classes
At school At home
参考词汇：help wash dishes, water the flowers, cook meals, ...
要求：
1.可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Changes after having labor classes
As we know, many changes have taken place since we began to take labor classes.
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【答案】例文
Changes after having labor classes
As we know, many changes have taken place since we began to take labor classes.
First, we do many meaningful things around our school every day. For example, students take turns to help wash dishes in the school dining hall, which makes us understand our duty. Then, some students often plant trees and water the flowers to make our school more beautiful. And it’s easy for us now because we have learned how to plant trees in labor classes.
At home, we always do some difficult housework by ourselves. The boys begin to do his own laundry, and the girls like to cook for the family. Thanks to the labor class, we have learned a lot of life skills.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：主要记录劳动课后同学们的变化，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍同学们在校的变化；
第二步，介绍同学们在家的变化。
[亮点词汇]
①take turns to do sth.轮流做某事
②by onself靠自己
③thanks to由于
[高分句型]
①For example, students take turns to help wash dishes in the school dining hall, which makes us understand our duty.（which引导的定语从句）
②And it’s easy for us now because we have learned how to plant trees in labor classes.（because引导的的原因状语从句）
6．假定你是李华，本周学校将举办一场以“My Hometown”为主题的英语角活动，请你按要求准备发言稿。
要求：
（1）说说家乡的变化；
（2）介绍家乡的旅游景点；
（3）推荐家乡的特色小吃。
注意：
（1）词数90左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现可能透露考生真实身份的任何信息。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Now please allow me to say something about my hometown.
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Now please allow me to say something about my hometown.
It is in the south of China with an area of about 210,000 square kilometers. Great changes have taken place here in recent years. Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my hometown is developing rapidly. It has a long history and there are many places of interest, such as Yuelu Academic Yard, Dongting Lake and the memorial hall of Chairman Mao. My hometown is also famous for its special food—the spicy crayfish, which is really delicious. What’s more, the weather here is rather comfortable. It’s not too hot or too cold.
I really hope you can visit my hometown and have a good time here.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，想向大家介绍自己的家乡；
第二步，具体阐述内容，从家乡变化、旅游景点、美食和气候等方面介绍自己的家乡；
第三步，书写结语，希望大家可以到自己的家乡游玩。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②such as例如
③what’s more另外
[高分句型]
①Many new factories, houses, roads and bridges have been built, which shows that my hometown is developing rapidly.（现在完成时的被动语态）
②My hometown is also famous for its special food—the spicy crayfish, which is really delicious.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
7．假如你是李华，你校的英语广播站计划做一期“毕业生感言”的专题节目，想邀请你参加。请你以“The Progress I’ve Made”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿，谈谈初中这三年多时光中，你在生活和学习方面取得的进步，以及对未来的展望。
要求:
1. 100词左右；
2. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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【答案】参考范文：
The Progress I’ve Made
Looking back at the past three years, I have made great progress.
First of all, I have made many friends. We share our feelings with each other and help each other in life as well as study. I am not shy any longer and become active and confident. With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on. I can take care of myself well now. Thanks to my kind and patient teachers, I have developed good learning habits, and done better in study as well.
I will make greater efforts to achieve greater success in the future!
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“现在完成时”和“一般将来时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我所取得的进步的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍我所取得的进步”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容：在生活中取得的进步和在学习上取得的进步；
第三步，书写结语，表达：我会付出更大的努力，在未来取得更大的成功！
[亮点词汇]
①look back 回首
②make friends交朋友
③as well as也
[高分句型]
①I am not shy any longer and become active and confident.（“not...any longer”句型）
②With the help of my parents, I have learned to do some housework, such as cleaning my room, cooking and so on.（with作伴随状语）
8．最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，结合图示信息，写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。
Basic information: name, type, writer, ...
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A DIY bookmark for my favourite book
Last week I took part in our school’s Reading & Bookmark-making activity. Its purpose was to help us enjoy reading our favourite book. My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West, one of the Four Great Classical Novels. I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.
In order to make a bookmark, I prepared a card, scissors, glue and so on. First, I cut the card into long strips. And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying “Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.” on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties. At last, I glued it to a thin piece of wood.
Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，结合图示信息进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍上周参加了学校的阅读和书签制作活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍如何做书签；
第三步，介绍自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①give up放弃
②in order to为了
③be proud of为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②Although I met some difficulties in this process, I never gave up and I am proud of myself.（Although引导的让步状语从句）
（2023·山东枣庄·统考中考真题）
为了响应国家全民阅读的号召，你校将举办读书节。假如你是李华，请你以“My favourite book”为主题，写一篇英语发言稿，在读书分享会中介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，
内容包括：
1.书名、书的类型和主要内容；
2.你喜欢这本书的理由。
注意：1.词数80—100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【答案】例文
Ladies and gentlemen,
I’m Li Hua. I’m very glad to share my favourite book with you.
My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the Four Great Classical Novels in China. It was written by Wu Cheng’en, a great writer in ancient China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King , Piggie and Monk Sha. They get over many difficulties on the way to the West. Finally, they make it. The Monkey King is my favorite character. He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well. He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.
The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve everything.
That’s all. Thank you for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态是“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要是介绍自己最喜欢的一本书，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题。
第二步，介绍自己最喜欢的书的书名、书的类型以及主要内容；
第三步，介绍自己为什么喜欢这本书。
[亮点词汇]
①get over difficulties克服困难
②on the way to在去往某地的路上
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①He is so smart and brave that he can protect his master and brothers well.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
②He never gives up when he faces difficulties and challenges.(when引导的时间状语从句)
（2023·云南·统考中考真题）
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
提示：享受运动，享受生活。你喜欢运动吗？你享受过运动带来的乐趣吗？请以“Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一次你通过运动享受生活的经历，或谈谈运动给我们带来的好处。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个；
2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁；
3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计：
4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Sports, Enjoy Life
Cycling is one of my favorite sports.
It always makes me relaxed and full of energy. It was sunny last Saturday morning. After finishing my schoolwork, I felt a little bit tired. So I went cycling along the road in a forest not far from my home. What great beauty of nature it was when I got close to it! Colorful flowers were smiling at me. Birds were flying here and there in the trees and they never stopped singing. Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster. I got relaxed and refreshed at once.
What an enjoyment of cycling it is! I enjoy my life by doing sports.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最喜欢的运动；
第二步，具体阐述自己运动的经历；
第三步，最后总结全文，通过运动可以享受生活。
[亮点词汇]
①make sb adj使某人处于……状态
②get close to接近
③far from远离
[高分句型]
①Soft wind touched my face when I rode a little faster.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②What an enjoyment of cycling it is! （感叹句）
（2022·青海·统考中考真题）
当今，中国正迅速发展，在各方面都取得了令人瞩目的成就。请你以“China in Ten Years”为题，畅想并描述十年后的祖国。
要求：（1）内容积极向上，完整连贯；
（2）逻辑清晰，表达准确，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in
many fields. What will China be like in ten years ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
China in Ten Years
Nowadays, our country is developing fast. It has made great achievements in many fields. What will China be like in ten years Can you imagine the future of China
I think China will be the largest, the richest and the most developed country in the world. In the future, we can live on any planet in the solar system. And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life. What’s more, people even don’t need to build a house by themselves, and robots can do it instead of human beings. Even so, education will be more convenient, no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.
That’s the future China. What’s your opinion
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题，畅想中国未来十年是什么样子；
第二步，从生活，工作，交通等方面畅想未来。
[亮点词汇]
①made great achievements 取得众多成就
②worry about 担心
③instead of 代替
[高分句型]
①And we don’t have to worry about garbage pollution, because we can dissolve it as soon as possible, which will benefit our life.（because原因状语从句；which引导非限制性定语从句）
②no matter where you are, you can learn what you need from the Internet.（no matter引导让步状语从句）
（2022·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题）
随着义务教育“双减”政策的实施，学校的作业少了，课外辅导班叫停了。作为政策的亲历者，你的课余生活发生了哪些变化？你如何看待这一政策？现你校英文报刊就“双减”这一话题开设专栏，展开讨论。请根据思维导图以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文，向该栏目投稿。
提示词：the“double reduction”policy“双减”政策
要求：
1.内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2.词数不少于90词，至少含有两个复合句，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Changes after the “Double Reduction” Policy
Since the “double reduction” policy was carried out, my life has changed greatly. I used to have much homework. But now I have less homework than before. I had to do homework that was boring in the past. Now I have some creative homework.
As for weekend activities, I had to take after-school classes. I used to be busy and tired. I had too much pressure. But now I have more time to take up my hobbies. On weekends I often play basketball with my friends to improve my skills. I also plan to learn to play the guitar. I read more books to develop my reading abilities. I have more time to do what I like.
All in all, I think the “double reduction” policy is good for my body and mind. It makes my life colorful.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“Changes after the ‘Double Reduction’ Policy”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文以第一人称行文；在介绍“双减政策”前的课余生活时用一般过去时，介绍现在的课余生活时用一般现在时；文章可分为三段式：第一段承接开头点题；第二段具体讲述课余生活的变化；最后一段讲述作者对“双减政策”的看法。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，除了要含有两个复合句之外，还要正确运用好两个时态。
（2022·黑龙江·统考中考真题）
转眼间，你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗？这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化？请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文，请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化，用上used to结构；
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯；
3. 词数90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First,
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【答案】例文
My changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English, I used to be weak in it. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I used to be afraid of speaking in front of people. But now I can give a speech in public. I’ve also made many friends.
These are my changes. What about yours
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“我的改变”写一篇短文，要求从三个方面描写自己的变化。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。本文分为两段式：第一段从身形，英语学习以及性格方面介绍自己的变化；最后一段总结概括。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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