2023-2024届学年高中英语作文复习专项2024年4月云南民大附中高二期中考应用文 讲义
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24年4月云南民大附中高二期中考应用文
假如你是李华，在你市举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”(Chinese Stories Retold in English)活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友John发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括:
1.感谢关注
2.故事概况
3.参加活动的感受
写作难点分析
本次写作任务的第一个难点是介绍“故事概况”。具体说来，也就是如何用2-4句话高效概括一个中国故事的核心内容。考场之上，受制于写作时间（通常小作文写作合理时间是12-15分钟）以及答题卡行数（小作文通常是10-11行），考生必须做到语言精炼。
本次写作任务的第二个难点是表达“参加活动的感受”。到底“用英语讲好中国故事”能给参与者带来什么样的感受是需要仔细思考的。毕竟，宽泛地说自己很开心和激动明显缺乏与写作主题呼应这种必要的写作诚意。
最后，还想提醒大家一点，介绍中国古代故事时使用一般现在时是完全可以接受的，因为这些故事通常被认为是跨越时空的（具有常态性）。
写作示范1
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. Thank you for your attention to the “Chinese Stories Retold in English” event in our city. I’m thrilled to share the story I presented during the competition.
I shared the story of Mulan, set during the Northern Wei Dynasty. Mulan is a brave young woman who disguises herself as a man to take her father's place in the army. Through her courage and determination, Mulan proves herself to be a skilled warrior and brings honor to her family. This story, deeply rooted in Chinese culture, emphasizes themes of duty and sacrifice.
Participating in the event is incredibly enriching and rewarding. It provides a platform to showcase Chinese culture and foster cross-cultural understanding.
Thank you for your support and interest. I look forward to sharing more stories and experiences with you in the future.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作亮点
语言精炼是这篇写作的最大亮点。仅仅用了49个单词就高度概括地介绍了木兰从军的时间背景和核心内容（“the story of Mulan, set during the Northern Wei Dynasty. Mulan is a brave young woman who disguises herself as a man to take her father's place in the army. Through her courage and determination, Mulan proves herself to be a skilled warrior and brings honor to her family.”）
在表达参与感受上，Nicole老师的特别提到了“跨文化”视角（foster cross-cultural understanding）是很有意思的。毕竟，透过现象看本质，用“英文讲述中国故事”的根本目的是促进跨文化理解，增强同理心和互相尊重，同时也能分享中国丰富的文化遗产给世界。
词汇和表达积累
disguise as 乔装成…
take one’s place 代替某人
bring honor to 为......带来荣誉
be deeply rooted in 深深植根于
emphasize v. 强调
sacrifice n. 牺牲 / v. 牺牲
rewarding adj. 值得的
foster v. 促进
cross-cultural understanding 跨文化理解
写作示范2
Dear John,
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I'm writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the story -- Chinese Silk.
Dating back to the Western Zhou Period, Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3,000 years. Legend has it that Leizu, the wife of the Yellow Emperor, discovered the silk-making process. There was an ancient trade and communication route called "The Silk Road", promoting the exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations. Soft and elegant, Chinese silk has a significant economic impact and plays a crucial role in cultural exchanges.
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture, but also strengthened my courage to speak English. I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范3
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits.Exceedingly glad to receive your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I'm writing to convey my genuine appreciation for your care and introduce the story -- The Romance of The Three Kingdoms
As one of the four great classical novels of China, The Romance of The Three Kingdoms plays a significant role in the history of Chinese literature. Many heroes in the novel are vividly portrayed, such as the loyal Guan Yu, the wise Zhuge Liang, and the brave Zhao Yun, the stories of whom still have had a profound influence on later generations. Reading this novel, I can take history as a mirror and appreciate the intelligence and inspiration of life.
Not only does it contain rich wisdom of traditional Chinese culture, it also enables me to better understand and pass on these cultural values.Keenly anticipating to share more enlightening and informative stories with you.
Best wished! (126 words)
同类话题巩固练习
上周六，为了用英语传承和弘扬中华优秀文化，你校开展了“用英语讲中国故事”的比赛。请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
(1)同学们赛前准备情况；
(2)同学们赛中表现；
(3)你的体会。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考范文1
Sharing Chinese Tales in English
Last Saturday, our school hosted a unique competition titled "Sharing Chinese Tales in English." With much enthusiasm and preparation, students from all grades participated, aiming to spread the charm of Chinese culture through the language of the world.
During the event, students showcased their linguistic skills and cultural insights. They eloquently narrated ancient legends and modern stories, bringing the audience into a fascinating world of Chinese history and traditions. The confidence and pride in their voices were evident, highlighting their deep-rooted love for their culture.
As a participant, I felt a sense of pride and accomplishment. Not only did I learn to express Chinese stories in English, but I also gained a deeper understanding of my own culture. This experience has strengthened my belief that language is a powerful tool to bridge cultures and spread our rich heritage.
参考范文2
Sharing Chinese Tales in English
Last Saturday, our school hosted an exciting event — 'Sharing Chinese Tales in English.' Weeks of diligent preparation witnessed students immerse themselves in the rich cultural heritage of China.
On the day, the enthusiasm of our peers was obvious as they took the stage, confidently sharing stories of ancient heroes and historical events. Their fluent English and engaging delivery captivated the audience, highlighting the beauty of both languages.
This experience reinforced my pride in our nation's rich culture and the power of language to bridge cultures. It was a reminder that our stories are universal, deserving to be heard worldwide.
假如你是李华，在你市举办的“用英语讲好中国故事”(Chinese Stories Retold in English)活动中，你获得一等奖。你的英国笔友John发来邮件向你表示祝贺并想了解你讲的故事，请你给他写一封回信，内容包括:
1.感谢关注
2.故事概况
3.参加活动的感受
写作难点分析
本次写作任务的第一个难点是介绍“故事概况”。具体说来，也就是如何用2-4句话高效概括一个中国故事的核心内容。考场之上，受制于写作时间（通常小作文写作合理时间是12-15分钟）以及答题卡行数（小作文通常是10-11行），考生必须做到语言精炼。
本次写作任务的第二个难点是表达“参加活动的感受”。到底“用英语讲好中国故事”能给参与者带来什么样的感受是需要仔细思考的。毕竟，宽泛地说自己很开心和激动明显缺乏与写作主题呼应这种必要的写作诚意。
最后，还想提醒大家一点，介绍中国古代故事时使用一般现在时是完全可以接受的，因为这些故事通常被认为是跨越时空的（具有常态性）。
写作示范1
Dear John,
I hope this email finds you well. Thank you for your attention to the “Chinese Stories Retold in English” event in our city. I’m thrilled to share the story I presented during the competition.
I shared the story of Mulan, set during the Northern Wei Dynasty. Mulan is a brave young woman who disguises herself as a man to take her father's place in the army. Through her courage and determination, Mulan proves herself to be a skilled warrior and brings honor to her family. This story, deeply rooted in Chinese culture, emphasizes themes of duty and sacrifice.
Participating in the event is incredibly enriching and rewarding. It provides a platform to showcase Chinese culture and foster cross-cultural understanding.
Thank you for your support and interest. I look forward to sharing more stories and experiences with you in the future.
Best regards,
Li Hua
写作亮点
语言精炼是这篇写作的最大亮点。仅仅用了49个单词就高度概括地介绍了木兰从军的时间背景和核心内容（“the story of Mulan, set during the Northern Wei Dynasty. Mulan is a brave young woman who disguises herself as a man to take her father's place in the army. Through her courage and determination, Mulan proves herself to be a skilled warrior and brings honor to her family.”）
在表达参与感受上，Nicole老师的特别提到了“跨文化”视角（foster cross-cultural understanding）是很有意思的。毕竟，透过现象看本质，用“英文讲述中国故事”的根本目的是促进跨文化理解，增强同理心和互相尊重，同时也能分享中国丰富的文化遗产给世界。
词汇和表达积累
disguise as 乔装成…
take one’s place 代替某人
bring honor to 为......带来荣誉
be deeply rooted in 深深植根于
emphasize v. 强调
sacrifice n. 牺牲 / v. 牺牲
rewarding adj. 值得的
foster v. 促进
cross-cultural understanding 跨文化理解
写作示范2
Dear John,
Having received your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I'm writing to express my heartfelt thanks for your concern and introduce the story -- Chinese Silk.
Dating back to the Western Zhou Period, Chinese silk boasts a long history of over 3,000 years. Legend has it that Leizu, the wife of the Yellow Emperor, discovered the silk-making process. There was an ancient trade and communication route called "The Silk Road", promoting the exchange of ideas and goods between China and other civilizations. Soft and elegant, Chinese silk has a significant economic impact and plays a crucial role in cultural exchanges.
The activity has not only deepened my understanding of Chinese culture, but also strengthened my courage to speak English. I hope you can come to China to experience our culture.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作示范3
Dear John,
I hope this letter finds you in good spirits.Exceedingly glad to receive your congratulations on my winning first prize in the activity, Chinese Stories Retold in English, I'm writing to convey my genuine appreciation for your care and introduce the story -- The Romance of The Three Kingdoms
As one of the four great classical novels of China, The Romance of The Three Kingdoms plays a significant role in the history of Chinese literature. Many heroes in the novel are vividly portrayed, such as the loyal Guan Yu, the wise Zhuge Liang, and the brave Zhao Yun, the stories of whom still have had a profound influence on later generations. Reading this novel, I can take history as a mirror and appreciate the intelligence and inspiration of life.
Not only does it contain rich wisdom of traditional Chinese culture, it also enables me to better understand and pass on these cultural values.Keenly anticipating to share more enlightening and informative stories with you.
Best wished! (126 words)
同类话题巩固练习
上周六，为了用英语传承和弘扬中华优秀文化，你校开展了“用英语讲中国故事”的比赛。请你给校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
(1)同学们赛前准备情况；
(2)同学们赛中表现；
(3)你的体会。
注意：
(1)写作词数应为80左右；
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考范文1
Sharing Chinese Tales in English
Last Saturday, our school hosted a unique competition titled "Sharing Chinese Tales in English." With much enthusiasm and preparation, students from all grades participated, aiming to spread the charm of Chinese culture through the language of the world.
During the event, students showcased their linguistic skills and cultural insights. They eloquently narrated ancient legends and modern stories, bringing the audience into a fascinating world of Chinese history and traditions. The confidence and pride in their voices were evident, highlighting their deep-rooted love for their culture.
As a participant, I felt a sense of pride and accomplishment. Not only did I learn to express Chinese stories in English, but I also gained a deeper understanding of my own culture. This experience has strengthened my belief that language is a powerful tool to bridge cultures and spread our rich heritage.
参考范文2
Sharing Chinese Tales in English
Last Saturday, our school hosted an exciting event — 'Sharing Chinese Tales in English.' Weeks of diligent preparation witnessed students immerse themselves in the rich cultural heritage of China.
On the day, the enthusiasm of our peers was obvious as they took the stage, confidently sharing stories of ancient heroes and historical events. Their fluent English and engaging delivery captivated the audience, highlighting the beauty of both languages.
This experience reinforced my pride in our nation's rich culture and the power of language to bridge cultures. It was a reminder that our stories are universal, deserving to be heard worldwide.