2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项：读后续写 How to make actions more vivid 课件(共25张PPT，内镶嵌视频)

(共25张PPT)
Continuation Writing
13号选手
---How to make actions more vivid
When you want to describe actions, do you have any problems
Too simple
Have nothing to say
Make errors...
So how can we describe actions vividly
Lead in: Watch a video and think about two questions.
Q1.What was the phoenix doing
Q2.What were people doing
追赶
捉住
拿出
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ran after
caught
took out
The people ran after, caught and took out the phoenix.
被抓住
咯咯哒
飞走
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be caught
clucked
flew away
The phoenix was caught, clucked and flew away.
A chain of actions（动作链）：
1)The phoenix was caught, clucked and flew away.
2) The people ran after, caught and took out the phoenix.
Structure 1 A, B and C
现在分词 表主动 进行 doing
过去分词 表被动 完成 done
不定式 表目的 将来 to do
Structure 2 Non-finite verbs (非谓语动词)
1. 1)The phoenix saw everyone catching it.
2) The phoenix ran away.
_______________(see) everyone catching it, the phoenix ran away.
Seeing
2. 1)Xingyun caught sight of Shenli.
2)Xingyun smiled and held up an umbrella for her.
_______(catch) sight of Shenli, Xingyun smiled and held up an umbrella for her.
Catching
Shenli was moved by Xingyun, and decided to go home with him.
1) Moved by Xingyun, Shenli decided to go home with him.
2) Shenli was moved by Xingyun, deciding to go home with him.
rewrite
We have learned using more actions and non-finite verbs, but what else can we add to make sentences better
Have a free talk (2m’)
Sing a song with me
Structure 3 Adding adverbs
Row row row your boat,
Gently down the stream,
Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily,
Life is but a dream.
happily, gladly, cheerfully, joyfully ...
sadly, heart-brokenly, sorrowfully...
surprisedly, astonishedly, curiously...
swiftly(敏捷地), quickly, hurriedly;
gently, carefully, strongly, bravely...
Emotion
(副词)
Action：
Pair Work Brainstorm(3m’)
开心：
伤心：
惊讶好奇：
The phoenix was caught______, clucked _______ and __________flew away.
凤凰被紧紧地捉住了，大声地咯咯叫，突然飞走了。
Practice1
suddenly
loudly
tightly
Seeing everyone catching it_________ (渴望地），the phoenix ran away______________（快速地）.
eagerly
添加副词：
quickly/swiftly
Practice2
with excitement /delight/ joy
in high spirits
They looked at each other
Structure3 Prepositional phrases（介词短语）
surprise/amazement
grief/sorrow/low spirits
anger/ annoyance
panic/fear/horror
in
Act and Guess
pride
anxiety
with
Seeing everyone catching it, the phoenix ran away__________（快速地）.
in a hurry
Practice1
添加介词短语：
Hearing Xingzhi’ s proposal(求婚), Shenli turned her head and smiled.
添加介词短语：
Hearing Xingzhi’ s proposal, Shenli turned her head ____________________________________ and smiled.
in high spirits/with delight/excitement
Practice2
Mindmap Drawing
Shenli smiled.
Hearing Xingzhi’ s proposal, Shenli turned her head in high spirits and smiled joyfully.
1.Discuss how to make the two sentences more vivid.
2.Pay more attention to your neat handwriting.
Group Work (4m’)
1. Miss. Wang gave us a lesson today.
2. On May Day, I visited Nanyang wildlife park / Yishengci/ NeixiangCounty Government...
Writing Check List
评价标准 自评 互评
1.handwriting
2.logic
3.accuracy
4.vividness
Show Time
Summary
Who wants to be a little teacher and make a summary
Practice makes perfect..
Homework
Using what we have learned today to polish/ rewrite your article.