(共25张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Write about your festival experience
MY AMAZING NAADAM EXPERIENCE
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1. Have you ever been to Inner Mongolia (内蒙古)
What's your impression of it
Step 1 Lead-in
Mongolian tents
Mongolian robes
roast mutton
Mongolian steppes
(grassland)
1
2
3
4
inner
autonomous
region
represent
wrestling
wrestle
wrestler
archery
set off
adj. 内部的;里面的;内心的
adj. 自治的;有自治权的
n. 地区;区域;地带
vt. 象征;代表;相当于
n. 摔跤运动
vi.&vt. 摔跤;奋力对付
n. 摔跤运动员
n. 射箭术;射箭运动
出发;动身;启程
fancy
robe
eagle
grace
absolutely
moment
tent
pot
adj.花哨的;精致的;昂贵的 vt.想要;倾慕
n. 袍服;礼袍
n. 雕
n. 优美;优雅;高雅
adv. 绝对地;完全地
n. 片刻;瞬间
n. 帐篷
n. 罐;壶;锅
Read the diary entry and answer the questions.
1. What festival did the author experience Where, When and How long
2. What does “Naadam” mean What events does it include
3. How does the writer feel about the festival
4. What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about
Task 1
1. What festival did the author experience
Where, When and How long
2.What does “Naadam” mean What events does it include
The Naadam Festival
It falls on the 4th day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar.
in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region
(内蒙古自治区)
It usually lasts for 3 days.
Where
When
How long
Task 1
Events
It is represented by 3 events: horse racing, wrestling, archery
Meaning
Naadam means “games” in Mogolian.
3. How does the writer feel about the festival
4. What Naadam Festival customs did you learn about
People wear fancy Mongolian robes (蒙古袍).
Mongolians travel from near and far to attend the festival.
There is an opening ceremony and some amazing performances. Then the wrestling competition, archery competition and horse race begin.
Task 1
Feelings: Amazing, exciting, tired but thought it worthwhile, enjoy.
Read the diary entry and answer the questions.
Read the beginning sentences of each paragraph.
1. In what order does the writer orgnize his diary entry
How do you know?
2. What is each paragraph about?How many parts can the passage be divided into
Task 2
see hear do feel
special/impressive/like
My Amazing Naadam Experience
In what order did the writer organize the diary entry
How do you know
Time order
On the first day, …
After the opening ceremony …
I’m finally back home now, …
Tip 1: In order to make our article more organized, we can follow the time order and use topic sentences,when writing a diary entry.
Read the diary entry and answer the questions.
Opening Paragraph
Body Paragraphs
Closing Paragraph
(State the topic: festival, when,where, who, feeling)
(Give a brief summary of his/her experience)
(Describe the festival activities: start/prearation and surroundings, wrestling and horse racing)
Task 2
1. After reading the diary entry, how do you like the Naadam Festival
2. Would you like to go to the festival if you had a chance
Explore the writing techniques(写作技巧):
1. How did the wirter describe the details of the activities and make the them vivid and attractive?
2. How did he describe his feelings?
Underline words and expressions that attract you!
Task 3
Start/preparation (special/impressive/like?)
Time order
On the first day, I set off to the games early with my friend Burin. I saw.....
After the opening ceremony …
I’m finally back home now, …
saw people wearing fancy Mogolian robes.
Some were feeding ... some were practicing … others were chatting or taking …
Tip 2: To make our article more attractive, we can describe some activities in detail: five senses/sensory detials 感官细节, parallel sentences 排比结构to describe the scene.
Task 3
The wrestling and horse races (special/impressive )
Time order
rules,entry
I’m finally back home now, …
1.The wrestling competition is different :
No rounds, not seperated by weight, lose if ...above knees
Competitors danced onto the green field,waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.
Tip 3: To make our article more attractive, we can describe some activities in detail:special/impressive features,simile& metaphor(明喻与暗喻),quote(引用)等修辞手法。
How different
Why favorite part
Task 3
2.
Riders were girls were boys and girl: lighter, faster, farther
They have been riding horses all their lives.
“Horses are at the heart of Mogolian culture.”
After the opening ...the wrestling competition began.
However, the horse races were my favorite.
time order
On the first day, …
After the opening ceremony …
I’m finally back home now, …
set off … with …
saw people wearing … some were feeding ... some were practicing … others were chatting or taking …
The wrestling competition is different ...
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favorite part.
Tip 4: To catch readers’ attention, we can add our feelings and emotions to our articles, use adj. & adv..
so exciting to watch
Part 1-3
How did the wirter describe his feelings during and after the festival
amazing
quite moved
surprised
a little worried
understandable
tired but totally worth it
can’t wait
Body
para. _____
(You decide)
Describe the festival in _______:
activities + my feelings
Give a _________ of the experience:
evaluation + feelings
Opening para. __
Closing
para. __
State the ______: what, when, where, who...
My amazing Naadam Expe-rience
(1)
(2-4)
(5)
topic
detail
summary
How to write a diary entry
Study the organisation and language features.
Diary Entry
Follow certain text ___________.
Use ______sentences to start you article or paragraph.
Write in ______ tense.
Use the first person pronouns like___________________ to show that the events happened to you.
Tell events in ______order.
Talk about how you were ________ or what you were ________when each event happened.
past
I, my, me, we, our, us
time
feeling
thinking
structure
topic
Read the sentence patterns below.
This was my first time spending ... and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience for me.
I'll never forget ... because ...
I'll always ... because ...
Can you use them to rewrite the
opening sentence of the article
Opening sentence is the most important.
Grab readers' attention, keep them reading.
Powerful sentences to begin an article
句式转换:
This was my first time spending…and it was an enjoyable an exciting....
I’ll never forget…. because… I’ll always remember…because…
This year was the first time that I had experienced…
I experienced the Naadam Festival in China’sInner Mongolia Automonous Region for the first time.
This was my first time spending the Naadam Festival in China’s Mongolia Autonomous Region, and it was an enjoyable and exciting experience.
I’ll never forget my experience in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because I experienced the Naadam Festival for the first time.
I’ll always remember my experience in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region because I experienced the Naadam Festival for the first time.
This year was the first time that I had experienced the Naadam Festival in China’s Inner Mongolia Autonomous Region.
Learning language features
How to express the time
“The festival falls on the fourth day of the sixth month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for three days.”
【仿写】
1.春节在每年的农历正月初一,通常持续15天。
Spring festival falls on the first day of the first month of the lunar calendar, usually lasting for 15 days.
2.中秋在每年的农历八月十五,是中国的传统节日。
The Mid-Autumn Day falls on the 15th of the 8th month of our Chinese lunar calendar, which is a traditional festival in China.
活用短语
Learning language features
【仿写】
人们从远方赶回家中为了与家人相聚团圆,正如同老祖宗们几千年来所奉行的一样。
People travel back home every year from distance to reunite with their families, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
Burin told me that Mongolians travel every year from near and far to attend the festival, just as their ancestors had done for centuries.
套用句式
Learning language features
【仿写】
我十分喜欢收到红包,但我最喜欢的活动还是在除夕之夜放烟花炮竹。
I absolutely love receiving red envelopes, but my favorite part is lighting fireworks and firecrackers on the eve of the Chinese Lunar New Year.
我最喜欢庆祝新年的方式是不伤害环境的(方式)。
I absolutely enjoyed the archery, too, but the horse races were my favourite part.
I absolutely enjoyed our way of celebrating the new year without harming the environment.
适当增加修饰词
Learning language features
【仿写】
就在那一刻,我开始理解了不管我们做什么,家庭团聚才是最重要的(事情)。(用上强调句)
套用句式
That was the moment I started to understand why people say “Horses are at the heart of Mongolian culture”.
That was the moment I started to understand no matter what we do, it is the family’s get-together / reunion that really matters.
Learning language features
【仿写】
我走进房间,觉得十分激动。一个下午的辛苦工作都十分值得,我已经迫不及待地期待下一个任务了。
套用句式
I’m finally back home now, feeling really tired, but celebrating Naadam with my friend was totally worth it. He invited me back for the winter to stay in a traditional Mongolian tent and eat hot pot. I can’t wait!
I jumped into the room, feeling excited. Working all afternoon was totally worth it. I can’t wait for the next task.
语法结构(-ing形式)润色
Now, Use what you have learn to write about a festival or a celebration you have experienced!
你校英语报 Festival 栏目正面向全校学生征稿,请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的一次节日经历,并投稿。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Step 3 Writing task
写作指导
一、审题定调
本写作任务要求介绍自己的一次节日经历,属于_______。在介绍节日经历时,可以按照_________ 展开叙述。
二、谋篇布局
本写作可以分为三部分:
第一部分:说明节日名称并简单介绍;
第二部分:具体叙述节日的准备活动和庆祝活动;
第三部分:总结节日经历并表明自己的感受。
记叙文
时间顺序
The Dragon Boat Festival
The Lantern Festival
The Mid-autumn Festival
The Spring Festival...
Outline
The name of the festival / celebration:___________
Main idea of each paragraph Details Feelings
1 The topic and my feeling
2 How I prepared for the festival / celebration
3 The festival / celebration acitivities
4 A summary of my festival / celebration experience