2024届高考英语作文复习专项：读后续写专题之脱困类 学案（无答案）

读后续写专题之脱困类（人与自然）
遇险脱困使读后续写中非常重要的一类故事，它主要涉及在人与社会主题语境下，出现火灾、洪水、溺水、迷路等紧急情况。从最初遇险的惊慌害怕，绝望无助，到想办法救援，到最后获救的宽慰和感激，涉及到一系列的表达。
一、情节构建
第一步：描写环境的恶劣和内心的不安、绝望或恐惧的情绪；
第二步：转机出现，描线所见+所闻+所感；
第三步：脱离险境和个人情绪描写（感恩+高兴）+主旨升华。
提示：续写段落情节要充分利用提示句和上文的内容书写，尽量回扣原文；续写内容要巧妙运用副词、形容词来加强场景感，使文章生动、优美。
语料输入
关于“恐惧”“紧张”情感的精彩描写
be seized with panic ___________________ be seized by fear_______________________ in panic______________________________ in terror______________________________ a flood of fear wells up in somebody _____________________________________ at a loss_______________________________ 不知所措_______________________ 感到害怕_______________________ 害怕地_________________________ 恐惧地_________________________ 充满了恐惧_____________________ _______________________________
关于烘托恐惧的环境描写
a stormy night _________________________ be buried in snow______________________ unbearably cold _______________________ the night settled in _____________________ the storm is at its height_________________ 深埋在雪中____________________________ 暴风雨之夜____________________________ 夜幕降临______________________________ 难以忍受的冷__________________________ 深埋在雪中____________________________
关于恐惧的表象描写
heart beat violently_____________________ take a deep breath_____________________ come as something of a surprise ______________________________________ be choked by fear______________________ face turns pale ________________________ jump to one’s feet_____________________ struggle to one’s feet__________________ 深吸一口气____________________________ 有点惊讶______________________________ 因害怕而哽咽__________________________ 一跃而起______________________________ 脸色变白______________________________ 挣扎着站起来__________________________ 心跳得很厉害__________________________
关于如释重负的表达
much to one’s relief_____________________ sigh with relief_________________________ give a gasp of relief___________________ It was a great load off my mind.______________________________________________ We all heaved a sigh of relief. ________________________________________________ A great sense of relief flooded over him.________________________________________ Hearing the good news, Tom and I sighed in great relief, grinning merrily at each other. 听到这个好消息，汤姆和我如释重负地叹了口气，愉快地咧着嘴笑。
关于感激、感恩的表达
Touched deeply, we expressed sincere gratitude and waved them goodbye. ______________________________________________________________________________ Tears filling her eyes, she offered her heartfelt gratitude. ______________________________________________________________________________ I looked at her, tears of love and gratitude welling up in my eyes. ______________________________________________________________________________ In a flash, with tears welling up in my eyes, I was touched beyond words. ______________________________________________________________________________
关于结局的描写
My brother and I harvested a meaningful exploration and really a brand new weekend. 我和哥哥收获了一次有意义的探索，这真是一个全新的周末。 Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any difficult situation as long as we stay calm. 最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊。事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法脱离困境。 It was this unique experience that made me understand whatever difficulty we are faced with, we shouldn’t lose heart. 正是这种独特的经历使我理解了无论我们面临什么困难，我们都不应失去信心。 Only then did I realize that actions can cure fear and bravery can conquer difficulties. 直到那时，我才意识到行动可以治愈恐惧，勇敢可以战胜困难。 This painful adventure teaches me not to despair even in the darkest hour. 这次痛苦的冒险教会了我即使在最黑暗的时刻也不要绝望，因为黑夜之后就是黎明。 A sudden warmth and happiness hit me like a gentle breeze wiping my face. And I knew it was the grace of kindness. 一股温暖和快乐突然向我袭来，就如同清风拂面一般。我突然意识到这就是善良的魅力， Never had we fallen into such a dangerous dilemma. Delighted and relieved, we embraced each other tightly, with tears welling up in our eyes. 我们从未经历过这样危险的困境。快乐与如释重负的感觉交融着，快乐的泪水在眼眶里大专。 He would still feel a strong sense of gratitude whenever he looked back on the precious experience. 不论什么时候回忆起那段珍贵的经历，他都会感到一股强烈的感激之情。