Module 4 Planes, ships and trains 模块话题满分范文必背-2023-2024学年八年级英语上册（外研版）（含解析）

Module 4 Planes,ships and trains
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1. 你在桂林的朋友 Jim 打算去上海旅游，请你给他提一些出行的建议。
内容包括：
1. 提出从桂林去上海的三种出行方式(乘火车、乘飞机、自驾游);
2.提出出行建议：
(1)乘坐火车最安全但最拥挤；
(2)乘坐飞机速度最快但最贵；
(3)自驾游最舒服但路上会塞车。
3. 提出自己喜欢的出行方式并祝愿旅行愉快。
参考词汇： travel 旅 行 ，crowded 拥挤的， expensive 贵的，comfortable 舒服的
要求；
1.不得在作文中出现学校真名和学生的真实姓名；
2.语句连贯，注意分段，80词在右。
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【答案】例文：
The three ways to travel
from Guilin
to
Shanghai
are b
y
train,by
plane
and
by
car.Taking
the
train
is
the
safest but it may be
crowded.Flying is
the
fastest
but
most
expensi
ve.The
road
trip
is
the
most
com
fortable,while
there
are
traffic
jams
.
In my
opinion,I will
choose to
go to
Shanghai
by
train.Now
the
high-speed
trains
are
also
very
fast.Besides,
safety
is the most
important thing.What's more,I
can
enjoy
th
e
scenery
along
the way
during
a
long journey.
Have a wonderful
journey and enjoy your
self.
【详解】[总体分析
]
①
题材：这是一篇材料作文，为说明文
；
②
时态：主要采用“一般现在时”;
)
(
③提示：写作要点已经给出，“自己喜欢的出行方式”部分需要具体描述。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出从桂林去上海的三种出行方式，并分别描述优缺点；
第二年，描述自己喜欢的出行方式；
第三步，祝愿旅行愉快。
[亮点词汇]
①
In
my
opinion
在我看来
②
What's more
此外
③enjoy the scenery
欣赏风景
④enjoy yourself
玩得开心
[高分句型]
Have a wonderful journey and enjoy yourself.(祈使句)
)
2. 科技创新是社会生产力发展的源泉。生活中你一定见过不少创新产品。你们学校的英语园地正在开展 以“My favorite technological invention”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请写一篇短文投稿，介绍中国高
铁以及你为什么喜爱它。
内容提示：
1.速度快，时速达250-350公里。从深圳到武汉只需4个多小时，节省时间；
2.舒适，平稳，沿途可以欣赏美丽的风景；
3.价格低，出行方便；
4.另外补充1-2点你对于高铁喜爱的理由。
参考词汇： technological invention 科技发明； high-speed train 高铁
要求：
1.词数80左右(文章开头已给出，不计入字数);
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥；
3.条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贺，书写规范。
With the development of society,many great technological inventions appear around us.
【答案】例文：
With the development of society,many great technological inventions appear around us.As for me,I like
high-speed train best
In the past,it took us about 20 hours from Shenzhen to Wuhan.But now the speed of high-speed train is
250-350 per hour,so it only takes us about 4 hours to get to Wuhan.This saves us a lot of time.Moreover,it's
comfortable to take the high-speed train because it moves smoothly,and we can do some reading and watch
movies without any problem.We can not only enjoy the view out of the windows but also have a relaxing time on the train.Many people choose to take the high-speed train because of the lower price than the plane,and it is very convenient.It's also a green way to travel,which can save energy and do good to our environment.What a great
creative invention!
Technology plays an important role in our daily life.We benefit from them a lot and they are changing our
lives greatly.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的科技发明”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“速度、舒适度以及价格”等方面具体阐述；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①comfortable 舒适的
② not only…but also 不但……而且……
③ plays an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色
[高分句型]
①It's also a green way to travel,which can save energy and do good to our environment.(非限制性定语从句)
② What a great creative invention!(感叹句)
3. 随着科技的发展，车辆越来越多，能耗越来越高，交通事故也相应呈上升趋势。假如你的叔叔是一名 工程师，他发明了一种由计算机控制的小型汽车，请根据下表的要点提示，用英语向你的外国网友介绍这
款产品。
新型汽车
优势 环保、节能、安全、易操作
特点 1.以太阳能作为动力，时速可达120 km 2.可以根据乘客数量改变大小、可以通过声音控制方向 3.遇到交通拥堵，可以伸展翅膀飞到空中
观点 政府需支持生产和鼓励人们使用
要求：1.须包含以上所给要点，并可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
3.80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：政府 (government), 节能的 (energy-saving), 太阳能 (solar power), 旅客，乘客
(passenger), 方 向(direction), 生产 (production)
With the development of modern science and technology,more and more cars go into our life but most cars
are bad for the environment.My uncle is a car engineer and he has invented a new car,which is
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【答案】例文：
With the development of
modern
science
and technology,more
and m
ore
cars
go
into
our
life
but
most
cars
are bad
for the
environment.My uncle
is
a
car
engineer
and he has
invented
a
new
car,which
is
energy-saving
and
environmentally-friendly.It
is
easy
and
safe
to
drive,too.
This
car works
on
solar power.It can run
at a
speed
of
120 kilometers
an
hour.It
can
change
its
size
according
to
the
number
of
the
passengers
.
You
can
change
the
direction
by
your
voice
,
too
.
When
there
is
a
traffic jam,it
can
spread
its
wings
and
fly up to the
sky.What
an
amazing
car
it
is!
In my opinion,the government
should
support the production
of
this
kind
of car.People
should be
gr
eatly
encouraged to use this type of
car so that we can make the world cleane
r
and better
in
the
future.
【详解】[总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
)
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明新型汽车的优势；
第二步，具体阐述新型汽车特点；
第三步，最后表达你的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①at a speed of 以……速度
②traffic jam 交通堵塞
③in my opinion在我看来
[高分句型]
①It is easy and safe to drive,too. (不定式作主语)
②When there is a traffic jam,it can spread its wings and fly up to the sky. (when 引导的时间状语从句)
4. 汽车作为人类的伟大发明之一，给人们的生活带来了很大的便利。随着经济的快速发展，越来越
多的人买得起汽车了。然而，越来越多的汽车给人们的生活带来了怎样的影响呢 请以“汽车的利与弊”为
主题，写一篇作文。要点：
优点：1.人们可以节省时间，不必花费长时间等公交车；
2.……。
缺点：1.汽车的数量变多，浪费能源；
2.……。
3.说说你自己的看法。
要求：1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.短文须包括所有内容要点，语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
3.词数100 左右，文章开头已写好，不计入总词数。
With the development of economy,more and more people can afford to buy cars.
【答案】例文
With the development of economy,more and more people can afford to buy cars.
On one hand,private cars have many advantages.As we know,people can save time.They don't need to spend much time waiting for the bus.Moreover,private cars make it easier for people to travel.They can enjoy
the beautiful view along the road.
Every coin has two sides.On the other hand,private cars also have a lot of disadvantages.First,the number of private cars is becoming larger.They waste too much energy,at the same time,they pollute the environment.
Second,more accidents have happened.Because of the drivers'carelessness,many people lost their lives.
In my opinion,we should use private cars properly.When we drive,we must be more careful.If we go
somewhere not far,we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.They can enjoy the beautiful view
along the road.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍汽车的普遍以及受欢迎；
第二步，介绍它的优点和缺点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①spend time doing sth 花费时间做某事
②the number of……的数量
③at the same time 同时
④ because of 因为
[高分句型]
① Moreover,private cars make it easier for people to travel.(动词不定式作宾语)
②If we go somewhere not far,we had better take the bus or the subway instead of driving.(if引导条件状语从
句 )
5. 随着人口的增长和家庭轿车的普及，交通安全问题已成为千家万户关注的焦点。请根据要点和要
求展开思考，写一篇80词左有的英语短文。
1.要点： 1)你一般乘什么交通工具去上学；
2)你为什么要选择这种交通工具；
3)乘这种交通工具时应注意哪些交通规则
2.要求：1)思路清晰，逻辑连贯；
2)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名。
【答案】例文
I'm astudent in a middle school.I usually go to school by bike,because it is good for my body and makes
me healthy.It saves energy and it can't cause any air pollution.It's good for the environment.If people drive a car to work,it's often difficult for them to park the car.But it is easy to park a bike.Bicycles share the road with cars
and trucks.When we ride our bikes on the road,we must obey the traffic rules.We should ride our bikes slowly
and ride them on the right-hand side of the road.If the traffic lights are red,we must stop.Now let's leave cars
and buses,and just cycle.
【详解】[总体分析
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：题干已经给出写作要点，所以写作时要围绕要点展开，尤其在描述交通规则时要多注意，罗列出
的交通规则要符合逻辑。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，直接表明自己上学的交通工具是什么。
第二步，详细讲述选择这种交通工具的原因。
(
第三步，描述在使用这一交通工具时应注意的交通规则。
[亮点词汇]
①
healthy
健康的
②
pollution
污染
③
be good for
有益于
[高分句型]
①
I
usually go to school by bike,because it is good
for my body
and makes
me
healthy.(because
引导原因状
语
从句)
②
If
people drive a car to work,it's often difficult for them to park the
car.
(固定
句型
it
is
difficult
for
sb.to
do
sth.)
③
When we ride our bikes on the road,we must obey the tra
ffic rules.(when
引导的时间状语从句)
)
6.如今，很多城市都已经出现了一种绿色出行方式——共享电动自行车 (E-bike Sharing)。它因环保、
便捷而备受青睐，但大家在方便使用的同时也引发了一系列问题。请你根据提示以“E-Bike Sharing”为题写
一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。
要点提示：
Advantages be convenient,less pollution,reduce the traffic pressure …
Problems throw away,damage,be dangerous for the young.
Advice civilized(文明的),follow the rules,take good care of…
注意：1.短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；
3.词数：100词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Today,as a greener means of transportation,E-Bike Sharing is becoming more and more popular in many
cities.
【答案】例文
Today,as a greener means of transportation,E-bike sharing is becoming more and more popular in many
cities.It's known that it has many advantages.So it's enjoyed by lots of people.
First of all,it's very convenient for people to go to some places.It also helps to reduce the traffic pressure.
There will be less pollution,so it is good for our environment.Besides,it is very easy to find a place to park.
However,it also brings some problems.For example,some people throw them away after using bikes.Even some
taxi drivers damage them.
In my opinion,everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes.As long as we take
good care of the E-bike,it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的
逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题：共享单车现在变得很受欢迎；
第二步，具体介绍共享单车的一些优缺点；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① be good for 对 ……有好处
② for example 例如
③ as long as 只要
[高分句型]
① As long as we take good care of the E-bike,it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be
more beautiful.(as long as 引导的条件状语从句)
② There will be less pollution,so it is good for our environment.(so引导结果状语从句)
7. 生活中，学生们上学的方式各有不同，你的上学方式是那种 在上学路上，学生的交通事故频发，
那我们在上下学路上应该怎样避免事故 根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的看法。
1.要点：
1)你自己的上学方式以及原因；
2)避免交通事故的具体建议；
3)希望与祝福。
2.要求：
1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生名字；
2)词数90左右。
【答案】例文
Everyone has his own way of going to school.Such as riding a bike,taking a car,taking a bus or walking.I go to school by bike.Because I think cycling is good for health.However,we should pay attention to traffic safety on the way to school.First of all,we should keep to the right when we walk or ride a bike.Secondly,we can't run the
red light.When crossing the traffic lights,we should look left and right.
I hope everyone goes to school safely.
【详解】[总体分析
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你自己的上学方式以及原因；
第二步，介绍避免交通事故的具体建议；
第三步，最后表达希望与祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 比如
② be good for 对……有好处
(
③
pay attention to
注意
[高分句型]
①
we should keep to the right when we walk o
r ride a bike.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②
I hope
everyone
goes to
school
safely.
(省略
that
引导的宾语从句)
)
二、 电子邮件
8. 假如你是吴青，你的朋友 Anna 国庆节要和父母从成都去北京玩，但还没有决定怎么去。她知道
你去年刚去过，于是发 e-mail 寻求你的建议。请根据图示给她回一封 e-mail。
Chengdu Beijing
Way 1:
贵；
节约时间；
机场远离市区。
Way 2:
便宜；
用时长(10小时);
高铁站离市中心近
要求：
1.内容需包括上图所有信息；
2.语言通顺，逻辑清晰，行文流畅；
3. 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名；
4.词数：80—100 字，开头已给出不计入字数。
Dear
I hear you and your family are going to Beijing from Chengdu on National Day,but
YourS:
Wu Qing
【答案】例文
Dear Anna,
I hear you and your family are going to Beijing from Chengdu on National Day,but you haven't decided
how to go there.I went there last year.Now let me tell you my ideas.There are two ways to leave for Beijing
from Chengdu.The first way is to go by plane.It is expensive but can save a lot of time.However,the airport is far away from the downtown city.The second way is to go by train.It is cheap.But it takes a long time,about 10
hours.The train station is near the city center,though.
Yours,
Wu Qing
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，补全信件开头，给Anna 提供意见以供参考；
第二步，介绍两种交通方式，乘飞机和乘火车。
[亮点词汇]
① However 然而
②leave for 前往
[高分句型]
① but you haven't decided howto go there.(疑问词+不定式结构)
②There are two ways to leave for Beijing from Chengdu.(there be 句型)
9. 泰勒先生初到深圳，想买一辆性价比高的车，他给 John's Car Club车行的网上经销商肖先生写了 一封电子邮件，想咨询相关信息。假如你是肖先生，请根据下面表格中的信息提示，给泰勒先生回一封电
子邮件，介绍店内两款汽车比亚迪(汉)BYD-Han 和凯美瑞2.0(Camry2.0).
属性 颜色 优缺点 价格 月 销 量
BYD-Han 电 动 车 (electric vehicle) 白，灰 和黑 静音；充电便宜但不 太方便。容易上车牌，环 保节能。 209,800 16000
Camry2.0 燃油车(gas vehicle) 白，金 和黑 加油方便但费用稍贵。 199,800 11000
参考词汇； charge the electric car 充电； get a license plate 上车牌；refuel the car 给车加油
要求：
1. 须包含提示中的所有内容，条理清楚，语意连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80(邮件的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Mr Taylor,
You want to know about the cars in our store.We have two brands of cars suitable for you BYD-Han and
Camry 2.0
Which would you like to order,BYD-Han or Camry 2.0 I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Shawn
【答案】例文
Dear Mr Taylor,
You want to know about the cars in our store.We have two brands of cars suitable for you BYD-Han and
Camry 2.0.
BYD-Han is an electric car.As for the colour of it,we have white,grey and black for you to choose from.
BYD-Han is very quiet when you drive the car.It's cheap to charge the electric car but it's not very convenient as
there are not many charging stations.It's easy to get a license plate if you buy a BYD-Han.As an electric car,it
does not give out harmful gases,so it's environmentally friendly and it saves energy.
Camry 2.0 is a gas vehicle.We have white,golden and black cars in our store.It's more expensive to refuel
the car,but it's really convenient because there are many gas stations around the city.
Compared with Camry 2.0,BYD-Han is a little more expensive.It costs 209,800 yuan.However,it is more
popular in our shop.We have sold 16,000 this month.
Which would you like to order,BYD-Han or Camry 2.0 I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Shawn
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍比亚迪(汉)的信息；
第二步，介绍凯美瑞2.0的信息；
第三步，最后简单比较下两者。
[亮点词汇]
①give out释放
②environmentally friendly 环保的
③a litle more expensive 稍微贵一点
[高分句型]
① BYD-Han is very quiet when you drive the car.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②It's easy to get a license plate if you buy a BYD-Han.(if引导的条件状语从句)
10. 假设你是Grace,Peter 是你的美国笔友。他最近发给你一封电子邮件，询问你的个人情况。请根
据以下提示，给他回一封电子邮件。
内容：(1)你的爱好和特长；
(2)你的主要上学方式；
(3)你对动物的看法；
(4)这些天 (these days) 你正在做的事(一件即可)。
要求：(1)80词左右(首句不计入总词数):
(2)书写工整、规范。
Dear Peter,
Thanks for your e-mail. I am happy to tell you something about myself.
Yours,
Grace
(
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter:
Thanks
for your
e-mail.I
am happy to tell you
something
about
myself.
I
like
sports,such
as playing basketball
and
running.What's
more,I
like
drawing
and
I
am
good
at
it.
I usually go to
school by bus,bec
ause I think it
is
safe
for
me
and
takes
only
about
fifteen
minutes.
I
like
different
kinds
of ani
mals,especially pandas.They
are
quite
cute
and
smart.
These days,I am reading a book named Wild
Animal
World.It
is
mainly
about
the
types
of
the
wild
animals
as well as the habits and
characters
of
the
animals.It
is
such
a wonder
ful
book
that
I
want
to
recommend
it
to
you
I hope you like
it
Look forward to your
reply.
Yours
Grace
【详解】[总体分析
①
题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
)
② 时态：主要采用“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作内容包括“爱好和特长”、“上学方式”、“对动物的看法”和“这些天正在做的一件事”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍爱好和特长；
第二步，介绍上学方式；
第三步，介绍对动物的看法；
第四步，描述这些天正在做的一件事。
[亮点词汇]
① such as 例如
② different kinds of 不同种类
③ a book named… 一本名叫……的书
④ as well as 也
⑤ look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
It is such a wonderful book that I want to recommend it to you. (结果状语从句)
三、书信作文
11. 假如你是李华，你的笔友Ben 计划来你的家乡——一个福建东部的海滨小城旅行。你建议他骑自
行车游城。请结合以下内容，写一封信向他介绍自行车旅行的好处，以及骑车时该如何保证安全。
要求：80 词左右。作文要包含以下要点，并适当拓展。
1.自行车方便好停，不拥挤；
2.自行车环保，不导致空气污染；
3.骑车时要戴头盔，靠右行驶；
4.遵守交规，注意安全。
Dear Ben,
I'm really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday.My hometown lies in the
east of Fujian.It's famous for its beach.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours.
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Ben
I'm really excited to know that you will come to my hometown for your holiday.My hometown lies in the
east of Fujian.It's famous for its beach.My hometown is not very big,and the houses are often crowded with
passengers.So it's better to travel by bike.You don't need to worry about the parking lot because a bicycle is easy to park.What's more,it's good for the environment and doesn't cause pollution.But when you ride a bike on the
road you should pay attention to the traffic around you.It's necessary to wear a helmet.It can protect your head.
Remember to ride on the right side of the road.In a word,the most important way to keep safe is that you must
obey the traffic rules and be careful.
I'm looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息，写信建议 Ben 骑自行车去游玩，
介绍自行车旅行的好处及骑车时如何保证安全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议 Ben 骑自行车旅行；
第二步，介绍骑自行车旅行的优势；
第三步，介绍骑自行车旅行需要如何注意安全；
[亮点词汇]
① worry about 担心
② what's more 更重要的是，而且
③ pay attention to 注意
④ obey the traffic rules 遵守交通规则
[高分句型]
(
①
My
hometown
is
not
very
big,and
the
houses
are
often
crowded
with
p
assengers.(and
连接并列句)
②
You don't need to worry about the parking lot be
cause a bicycle is easy to park.(because引导原因状语从句)
③
Remember to ride on the right side of the road.(祈使句的肯定形式)
)