2024年高考英语考前冲刺必背作文(模板、素材、分类押题范文)(新高考专用) 专题1 读后续写之亲情感悟类学案（含答案）

专题21 读后续写之亲情感悟类
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写作要点
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第一类是相亲相爱的锦上添花，比如纪念重要日子（如举办惊喜生日派对，送生日礼物，母亲节，父亲节等）和父亲教孩子学习新技能，孩子为长辈解决困难。
这一类整体基调是快乐的，积极的，充满爱的。最后加上收获，开心，感恩等。
第二类是解决小误会小矛盾的握手言和，如：亲子之间缺乏沟通，父母把自己的意志强加给子女，子女觉得父母做法不对，孩子想要帮父母却帮倒忙等。
续写往往要求考生能够用续写原文的伏笔，让冲突得到化解，化解可以是弥补，解释，道歉，回忆等。
如果是亲人间的矛盾、误会，结尾往往会亲人间冰释前嫌，握手言和。
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写作结构
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矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）
1.So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考）
2.I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3.她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.
3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
4. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考）
5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考）
6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
情感升华（感悟+感动）
1. It was Henry's kindness that made me feel the warmth of our family. I will treasure it with all my heart.
正是亨利的善良让我感受到了我们家庭的温暖。我会用心珍惜它的。
2. I keep the little plane as a reminder of my daughter's love and also the power of words.
我留着这架小飞机，以提醒女儿对我的爱和语言的力量。
3. Every time I faced challenges, a thought of giving up flashed in my mind, but the support of my family gave me the strength to keep going.
每次面对挑战，我都想放弃，但是家人的支持给了我继续前进的力量。
4. The warm golden sunlight, flooding in through the window, together with love between my family, warmed us.
透过窗户的温暖的金色阳光，和我们家人之间的爱，温暖了我们。
5. From then on, the three chocolates rang the alarm in his heart every time he intended to lie, reminding him to be honest.
从那以后，每当他打算撒谎的时候，那三颗巧克力就会在他心里敲响警钟，提醒他要诚实。
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写作真题
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2021年全国新高考Ⅰ卷
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 am. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式作答。
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As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【答案】
本文是一篇记叙文。讲述的是Jenna和Jeff这对双胞胎兄妹为了在母亲节早上给母亲惊喜而精心策划并制作早餐的故事；他们克服困难，永不放弃，折射的是他们对母亲的拳拳之爱。
Paragraph 1:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.Knowing what they were preparing for, he was greatly surprised. So immediately, he offered to get involved in the kids’ job. Firstly, he put the pot of porridge on a gentle heat, asking Jeff to watch out for it going for fifteen minutes. And then, he asked Jenna to break another two eggs and mix them with milk. With all preparations done, they started to fry bread together. In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen. To their delight, the breakfast was a success in the end.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Eyes opened, the woman heard a harmonious “Happy Mother’s Day” from her twin kids with hot, sweet breakfast before her. Behind the children stood their father. To shed light on the game of the gift, he told the mother the whole story. After learning about what happened, she rose quickly to gaze at the boy’s hand with moved tears rolling down her cheeks. “Thank you, my honey!” said the mother.
【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开，讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐，自己动手，做起饭餐来，但是不幸的是，他们连连失败的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。”可知，第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知，第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐，非常感动。
2.续写线索：指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助：help/assist
②完成：finish/complete
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①高兴：happy/delighted
②感动：moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型)