2024届高三下学期英语作文复习专项：2024年苏锡常镇二模读后续写课件(共11张PPT)
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(共11张PPT)
2024届苏锡常镇二模
读后续写-小狗救人
YOUR LOGO
20XX.XX.XX
Step 1：
划出记叙文的基本要素
Step 2:
看首句，预测名词
Step 3:
划出原文语料
Step 4:
十句定位法
衔接1：我的反应：动作+心理
衔接1：Margie腿部抽筋的表现
衔接3：他们到岸的表现
衔接3：我的反应：动作+心理
衔接2：Onyx奋力把Margie推往岸边
衔接2：我的反应：动作+心理
十句定位法
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, "I have a cramp in the leg!"（动作/心理）My heart leaped into my throat as I saw Margie's arms struggling in the water, her body beginning to sink. (语言) “Help!” I nearly cried out, realizing my daughter was in real danger. (关键情节)Onyx, our dog, got to Margie the fastest. She swam over to Margie, and then helped Margie back up with her nose.(动作) She swam really hard, kicking her legs and moving her paws through the water. （衔接）The black fur of Onyx shone in the sunlight as she effortlessly pushed Margie towards the bank.
Paragraph 2: Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief. (衔接)Once Margie was safely on the shore, she gazed at Onyx, tears welling up in her eyes. (关键)"Thank you, Onyx," she whispered, her voice filled with gratitude.We embraced Onyx, holding her close to express the depth of our appreciation. （结局）Onyx Onyx just wagged her tail with pride and joy, as if to say, "I was just being a good friend."（主题）That scrary experience had taught us a valuable lesson: even the smallest heroes can make a world of difference. Onyx's swift response had stopped a potential disaster, reminding us of the incredible bond and loyalty that our pets bring to our lives.
Then I remembered something that gave me the hope I needed.
So I made up my mind to live like those two seals.
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后我想起了一件给了我希望的事。”可知，第一段可描写作者想到了三年前见到的那两只失明的海豹，回忆起它们接受命运给与的苦难，适应黑暗并开心地生活玩耍。
②由第二段首句内容“所以我下定决心要像那两只海豹一样生活。”可知，第二段可描写作者决定积极生活，融入社会，强身健体，实现自我价值。
2.续写线索：想到失明的海豹——反思自己——决定向海豹学习——调整心态——积极生活——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①习惯于：get used to/get accustomed to/adapt to
②想起：think of/remember/recall
③返回：get back to/return to
情绪类
①.感谢：thanks to/owing to/showing my appreciation to/show my gratitude to/be grateful to
②.积极：become confident/act positively
【高分句型1】
They got used to their new life in the pool regardless of the great changes when they were unable to go back to the sea where they were supposed to be.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句及where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Though I was kept from the outside world, I did find pleasure in my small world, enjoying chatting with friends, singing with my family, listening to music, and eating delicious food. （由though引导的让步状语从句及分词作状语）
【高分句型3】
Thanks to my two inspiring friends, I learned how to enjoy life when going through a difficult time.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）
【范文模板】Then I remembered something that gave me the hope I needed. Yes, I thought of the two seals. They got used to their new life in the pool regardless of the great changes when they were unable to go back to the sea where they were supposed to be. What’s more, they managed to enjoy a happy life though they lived in darkness as a result of their blindness. Now I was faced with the same situation. Luckily, the two seals had set a good example for me.So I made up my mind to live like those two seals. Though I was kept from the outside world, I did find pleasure in my small world, enjoying chatting with friends, singing with my family, listening to music, and eating delicious food. The seals’ diving and swimming around their pool reminded me of exercise. So I climbed up and down the stairs every morning to keep fit. Eventually I became confident again about myself. Thanks to my two inspiring friends, I learned how to enjoy life when going through a difficult time.
2024届苏锡常镇二模
读后续写-小狗救人
YOUR LOGO
20XX.XX.XX
Step 1：
划出记叙文的基本要素
Step 2:
看首句，预测名词
Step 3:
划出原文语料
Step 4:
十句定位法
衔接1：我的反应：动作+心理
衔接1：Margie腿部抽筋的表现
衔接3：他们到岸的表现
衔接3：我的反应：动作+心理
衔接2：Onyx奋力把Margie推往岸边
衔接2：我的反应：动作+心理
十句定位法
Suddenly I heard Margie calling out, "I have a cramp in the leg!"（动作/心理）My heart leaped into my throat as I saw Margie's arms struggling in the water, her body beginning to sink. (语言) “Help!” I nearly cried out, realizing my daughter was in real danger. (关键情节)Onyx, our dog, got to Margie the fastest. She swam over to Margie, and then helped Margie back up with her nose.(动作) She swam really hard, kicking her legs and moving her paws through the water. （衔接）The black fur of Onyx shone in the sunlight as she effortlessly pushed Margie towards the bank.
Paragraph 2: Seeing the pair approaching the riverbank, I breathed a sigh of relief. (衔接)Once Margie was safely on the shore, she gazed at Onyx, tears welling up in her eyes. (关键)"Thank you, Onyx," she whispered, her voice filled with gratitude.We embraced Onyx, holding her close to express the depth of our appreciation. （结局）Onyx Onyx just wagged her tail with pride and joy, as if to say, "I was just being a good friend."（主题）That scrary experience had taught us a valuable lesson: even the smallest heroes can make a world of difference. Onyx's swift response had stopped a potential disaster, reminding us of the incredible bond and loyalty that our pets bring to our lives.
Then I remembered something that gave me the hope I needed.
So I made up my mind to live like those two seals.
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后我想起了一件给了我希望的事。”可知，第一段可描写作者想到了三年前见到的那两只失明的海豹，回忆起它们接受命运给与的苦难，适应黑暗并开心地生活玩耍。
②由第二段首句内容“所以我下定决心要像那两只海豹一样生活。”可知，第二段可描写作者决定积极生活，融入社会，强身健体，实现自我价值。
2.续写线索：想到失明的海豹——反思自己——决定向海豹学习——调整心态——积极生活——感悟
【高分词汇】
行为类
①习惯于：get used to/get accustomed to/adapt to
②想起：think of/remember/recall
③返回：get back to/return to
情绪类
①.感谢：thanks to/owing to/showing my appreciation to/show my gratitude to/be grateful to
②.积极：become confident/act positively
【高分句型1】
They got used to their new life in the pool regardless of the great changes when they were unable to go back to the sea where they were supposed to be.（由连接词when引导的时间状语从句及where引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】
Though I was kept from the outside world, I did find pleasure in my small world, enjoying chatting with friends, singing with my family, listening to music, and eating delicious food. （由though引导的让步状语从句及分词作状语）
【高分句型3】
Thanks to my two inspiring friends, I learned how to enjoy life when going through a difficult time.（when引导的时间状语从句的省略）
【范文模板】Then I remembered something that gave me the hope I needed. Yes, I thought of the two seals. They got used to their new life in the pool regardless of the great changes when they were unable to go back to the sea where they were supposed to be. What’s more, they managed to enjoy a happy life though they lived in darkness as a result of their blindness. Now I was faced with the same situation. Luckily, the two seals had set a good example for me.So I made up my mind to live like those two seals. Though I was kept from the outside world, I did find pleasure in my small world, enjoying chatting with friends, singing with my family, listening to music, and eating delicious food. The seals’ diving and swimming around their pool reminded me of exercise. So I climbed up and down the stairs every morning to keep fit. Eventually I became confident again about myself. Thanks to my two inspiring friends, I learned how to enjoy life when going through a difficult time.