2024中考英语书面表达常考建议信、推荐信类（含参考范文+解析）

2024中考英语书面表达常考建议信、推荐信类
1．（2024·内蒙古赤峰·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom准备来华做交流生。他在学习汉语的过程中觉得汉语特别难懂难学，因此向你写信求助。请你根据以下提示和要求，给他写一封邮件给出你的建议。
提示：Look up the new words; Listen to Chinese radio; Talk with classmates in Chinese…
注意：1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；2. 邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；3. 书写规范，词数60—100；（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tom,
Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey!
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Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
Welcome to China and start your Chinese-learning journey!
I’m sorry to hear that you difficulty in studying Chinese. In fact, Chinese is quite different from English. Chinese writing is more interesting than English writing. Don’t worry about your
problem and I will give you some advice to help you.
Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning. Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening. If you talk with your classmates in Chinese, you will made great progress gradually. Practice makes perfect.
Take it easy, and I do believe everything will get better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示”中给出的要点，写电子邮件给Tom一些学习汉语的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题；
第二步，描述汉语与英语的差别以及学习汉语的建议；
第三步，鼓励对方。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty in doing sth. 做某事有困难
②in fact 事实上
③be different from 不同于
④worry about 担心
⑤make great progress 取得巨大进步
⑥take it easy 放轻松
[高分句型]
①I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in studying Chinese.（that引导宾语从句）
②Don’t worry about your problem, and I’ll give you some advice to help you.（祈使句的否定形式）
③Firstly, you need to prepare a Chinese-English dictionary so that you can look up the new words while learning.（so that引导目的状语从句）
④Secondly, listening to Chinese radio is a great way to improve your listening.（动名词作主语）
2．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模）假如你是光明中学的学生李平，下个月是你们学校的“生命教育”主题月。学校英语杂志社就该主题发起征文，并希望同学们给学校的“生命教育”活动提出合理化建议。请你设计一个“生命教育”活动方案参加征文比赛。
写作要点：
1. “生命教育”活动的意义；
2. “生命教育”活动设计；
(1)开展主题班会；
(2)组织演讲比赛；
3. 请你针对学校如何开展“生命教育”活动提出合理化建议。
写作要求：
1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3. 字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4. 至少80词。
Dear editor (编辑),
In order to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Dear editor,
In order to let all the students understand the meaning of life and learn how to respect life, there will be an activity about life education.
The school can have a class meeting to teach us to understand the meaning of life. It enables students to gain happiness in life and learn positive attitudes. We can also hold a speech competition to deepen students’ understanding of it. We can do a social survey or visit hospitals as well. I suggest raising small animals by ourselves to experience the course of life.
I hope everyone can value life.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“生命教育”活动，并阐述该活动的意义；
第二步，介绍“生命教育”活动的内容，开展主题班会、组织演讲比赛等；
第三步，对学校开展“生命教育”活动提出合理化建议；
第四步，总结提升。
[亮点词汇]
①enable sb. to do sth. 使某人能够做某事
②deepen students’ understanding 加深学生的理解
③suggest doing sth. 建议做某事
[高分句型]
①…there will be an activity about life education. （There be句型）
② I hope everyone can value life.（省略that的宾语从句）
3．（2024·湖南长沙·二模）作为中国人，我们理应学好汉语。随着中国国际地位的提高，有部分人认为现在学好汉语就可以了，没有必要再学习英语了。你认为还需要学英语吗？近日，你校校园网英语论坛上正在开展以“Is it necessary to learn English ”为主题的讨论。请你写一篇英语短文，结合现在的社会现状和自身的经历，谈谈你的看法并给出相关建议。
提示：
（1）Is it necessary to learn English
（2）Why do you think so
（3）What advice can you give to the people who want to learn English well
要求：
（1）词数80左右；
（2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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【答案】例文
Is it necessary to learn English With the rise of China’s international status, I think it is important to learn English well.
Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends. Take myself for example. Last Saturday I met a foreigner who asked for directions on the road, but I couldn’t say exactly what I meant, so I couldn’t help him. Through this, I understand the importance of learning English well. If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.
Finally, I wish your English is getting better and better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，点明学习英语很重要。
第二步，具体介绍为什么自己觉得学好英语很重要以及对学好英语的一些建议。
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① it is important to do sth.做某事很重要
②help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事
③do word cards做单词卡片
[高分句型]
①Learning English well can not only help you get good grades, but also help you communicate with foreign friends.(not only...but also 不仅……而且……)
②If you want to learn English well, you can do many things, such as making word cards, reading English textbooks, studying with friends and so on.(If 引导的条件状语从句)
4．（2024·四川成都·二模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike 将来你校做交换生。他正在学习汉语并参加了汉语模拟测试。请根据他邮件中的成绩单信息给他回一封邮件。恭喜并简评他的优势科目、并对弱势科目给出恰当的学习建议(分别两则)；分享你语文学习的诸多经验及感受；并预祝他进步。
注意：
1. 须全面反映图文信息；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 词数80—100。
参考词汇： Chinese character 汉字
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. In general, you’ve done a great job this term. You’re active enough to join in the speaking activities. I’m always lost in your writing too. It’s full of good ideas. And reading is not a problem getting in your way.
The area you need to work on the most is actually listening. I recommend more practice at home. As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” Watch Chinese TV shows and listen to the Chinese radio as much as possible please. You can read some traditional Chinese classics to improve your understanding of traditional culture.
Chinese study is difficult but interesting. As long as you try hard, you will make great progress.
Hope you good luck for next term!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容恭喜并简评他的优势科目、并对弱势科目给出恰当的学习建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，恭喜并简评他的优势科目；
第二步，对弱势科目给出恰当的学习建议；
第三步，分享你语文学习的诸多经验及感受，并预祝他进步。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……的来信
②be full of充满
③as much as possible尽可能多
④make progress取得进步
[高分句型]
①The area you need to work on the most is actually listening. (定语从句)
②As long as you try hard, you will make great progress. (as long as引导的条件状语从句)
5．（2024·内蒙古呼伦贝尔·一模）校园暴力是当前社会关注的焦点问题，它不仅影响学生的身心健康，还可能对受害者造成长期的心理创伤，所以作为学生我们要时刻警惕和防止校园暴力的发生，并学会自我保护免受伤害。以下是一些关于如何应对校园暴力的建议，请你写一篇文章进行阐述，要点齐全，字迹工整，有自己的观点和见解（至少阐述一条建议）。
1. 保持冷静，在遇见校园暴力时（school violence），首先要尽量保持冷静，避免恐慌或过度反应。（avoid panic or overreaction）
2. 及时求助。尽快向老师或家长或者同班同学报告并求助，有必要的时候寻求警察的帮助。
3. 学会自我保护，了解一些自我保护的知识和技能（knowledge and skills for self-protection）。
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【答案】例文
Recently, more and more violence happened in campus. It has a great influence on the teenagers’ daily life. In order to avoid violence, we should learn how to protect ourselves from being harmed. Here is some advice.
First, stay calm. When meeting with school violence, you should try to stay calm and avoid panic or overreaction. Second, seek for help promptly. Try your best to report to your teachers, parents or classmates as soon as possible and ask for help if you are in face of violence. If necessary, seek help from the police. Third, learn to protect yourself. It’s necessary to learn and
master some self-protection knowledge and skills.
All in all, we hope we can have a peaceful and beautiful campus, and these suggestions are helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇陈述校园暴力的问题，引出话题；
第二步，根据要点提示表达自己的观点和见解，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发希望拥有平安校园的愿望并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great influence on sb/sth对某人或某物有很深远的影响
②protect sb from being harmed保护某人免受伤害
③in face of sth面对某物/某事
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
①Try your best to report to your teachers, parents or classmates as soon as possible and ask for help if you are in face of violence.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②It’s necessary to learn and master some self-protection knowledge and skills（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正的主语）
6．（2024·北京·一模）假如你是李华，你的笔友Chris要来你校学习。他给你发来邮件，询问学校开展了哪些课后活动并请你帮忙推荐。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍活动内容并说明推荐理由。
提示词语：recommend (推荐), take part in, practice, skill, benefit, progress
提示问题：
What activities do you often do after school
Which activity do you recommend
Why do you recommend it
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【答案】例文
Dear Chris,
Welcome to our school! I often run and play basketball with my friends after school. I am glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join in the basketball club. This club provides a platform for us to improve our basketball skills and build up our bodies. As long as you practice it hard, you will make great progress. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校课后活动；
第二步，具体介绍一项课后活动；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②build up增强
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I am glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs.（that引导的宾语从句）
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.（which引导的定语从句）
7．（2024·河南平顶山·二模）你校开展“新时代学习之星”推荐宣传活动。假如你想推荐李华，请以“The star of learning”为题，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文，向校刊英语专栏投稿。
写作要求：
1)介绍李华的基本情况；
2)说明推荐理由；
3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
4)词数100左右。
参考词汇： recommend 推荐
The star of learning
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【答案】例文
The star of learning
Li Hua is fifteen, an excellent student of Class One, Grade Nine. He is the star of learning in my heart.
First, he is hardworking and does well in all subjects. He has been honored as a “three-good” student for many times. Second, Li Hua gets along with teachers and students. He respects teachers and is warm-hearted when we ask him for help. Last, Li Hua is a student with responsibility. He always bears in mind to fight for our motherland.
Li Hua sets a good example for me, so I want to recommend him as the star of learning.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，指明心中的合适人选是李华；
第二步，介绍李华的基本情况，以及从学习、生活等方面说明推荐李华的理由；
第三步，总结全文并再次强调推荐人选为李华。
[亮点词汇]
①be honored as被授予，被誉为
②get along with与……和睦相处
③bear in mind记住
④fight for为……斗争
⑤set a good example for为……树立好榜样
[高分句型]
①He respects teachers and is warm-hearted when we ask him for help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Li Hua sets a good example for me, so I want to recommend him as the star of learning.（含so的并列句）
8．（2024·广东广州·一模）为了引导学生多读书读好书，提升英语阅读能力，学校准备在假期开展“读好一本英语书”活动。假如你是学生李华，你想在活动前写一封邮件，向外教George求教。内容包括：
1.说明活动背景，包括活动名称、时间及目的；
2.介绍自己的阅读现状；
3.请教阅读技巧并推荐英文书。
注意：
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear George,
I’m writing to ask for your help. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】参考例文
Dear George,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will organize an activity ——“Read a Good English Book” during the holidays. This activity aims to encourage students to read more and better books to enhance their English reading skills.
Currently, my reading habits are somewhat limited, and I believe I could benefit from some guidance on improving my reading skills. I am eager to enhance my English proficiency and broaden my literary horizons through this activity.
Could you please share some effective reading techniques and recommend some English books that would be suitable for me
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，包括：注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步：阐述学校活动名称、时间及目的；
第二步：介绍自己的阅读现状；
第三步：请教阅读技巧并推荐英文书，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①aim to旨在
②benefit from受益于
③be eager to渴望
[高分句型]
①This activity aims to encourage students to read more and better books to enhance their English reading skills. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②Currently, my reading habits are somewhat limited, and I believe I could benefit from some guidance on improving my reading skills.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2024·山东枣庄·二模）假如你是李华，你的朋友Peter来中国旅游，回国前他想给家人买一件代表中国文化的礼物。他通过邮件询问你的意见，请你用英文回复。
提示：
(1)你建议他买什么；
(2)介绍这个礼物；
(3)给出你推荐的理由。
要求：
(1)内容包含以上信息，80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
(2)语言准确，行文连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture.
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I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Glad to hear from you. It’s easy to choose a gift which stands for Chinese culture. I’d love to give you my suggestions about Chinese gifts.
From my point of view, paper-cut is a good choice to be special Chinese gifts for your family. Paper-cuts are usually used to decorate the house. They are pasted on windows, doors and walls to celebrate the Spring Festival. Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China. People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.
I hope my advice is helpful. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用作文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引入话题；
第二步，介绍礼物及推荐理由；
第三步，表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①stand for代表
②good luck好运
[高分句型]
①Paper-cuts are a traditional Chinese culture, from which you can have a better understanding of China.（which引导的定语从句）
②People like them very much because they are seen as symbols for good luck and a happy new year.（because引导的原因状语从句）
10．（2024·广西钦州·一模）假设你是李华，你校正在为以下活动课招募教学小助手(teaching assistant)：球类(Ball Games)，演讲(Speech)，器乐(Instrumental Music)，故事(Story)，音乐(Music)，摄影(Photography)。请你结合自己的兴趣和特长，给教务处马老师写一封信，推荐自己担任其中一门活动课的小助手，并说明理由。
注意：
1.内容必须包含所给要点的信息；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不得透露个人信息；
4.词数80左右(短文句首已给出，不计入总词数)。
提示词：应聘 apply for；愿意帮助别人be willing to help others
Dear Mr. Ma,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class Two. I want to apply for the teaching assistant of
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Ma,
My name is Li Hua, a student from Class Two. I want to apply for the teaching assistant of the ball games.
I have a strong interest in sports and am proficient in various ballgames, such as basketball and volleyball. As a teaching assistant, I believe that I would be able to assist the teacher in organizing the activities and ensuring the smooth running of the class. I am also willing to help others improve their skills and enjoy the game. I am confident that my experience and enthusiasm for ball games will make me a valuable addition to the teaching team.
Thank you for considering my application.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的能力和信心；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have a strong interest in 有浓厚的兴趣
②such as 例如
③be willing to 乐意做某事
[高分句型]
①As a teaching assistant, I believe that I would be able to assist the teacher in organizing the activities and ensuring the smooth running of the class.（宾语从句）
②I am confident that my experience and enthusiasm for ball games will make me a valuable addition to the teaching team.（宾语从句）