2024年高考英语答题技巧：读后续写学案 （原卷版+解析版）

2024年高考英语答题技巧：读后续写学案
第一步 读文章、定线索。
第二步 读续写首句，定续写思路。
第三步 拟草稿、修病句。
第四步 工整眷写、字迹清晰。
【典例】
【2024·河南·统考模拟预测】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
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【满分句型模板之状语】
Katherine asked, obviously confused.
凯瑟琳问，显然很困惑。
Catherine asked in surprise.
凯瑟琳吃惊地问道。
Catherine thought to herself, ...
凯瑟琳心里想，......
From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony.
从那时起，海洋生物公园就充满了温暖与和谐。
...Hilda said with a big smile.
......希尔达笑着说。
Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
希尔达很沮丧，但她决定监视玛雅。
【满分句型模板之从句】
The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank.
希尔达继续说，事实是，玛雅一直在秘密地从坦克中收集物品，并把它们藏在坦克后面的过滤器附近。
Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
现在凯瑟琳意识到到底发生了什么事。
When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you.
当你训练她时，她会给你一些东西，这样她就可以从你那里得到食物。
【满分作文模板】
【模板】
1. 文章线索：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。
2. 续写线索：由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。
3. 由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。
【范文】
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you. “Really How do you know that ” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It took me a long time to discover this secret, too. It’s not easy to follow Maya.”
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Catherine thought to herself, this is really a clever dolphin. And she said to Hilda, “Well, Maya loves treats, so we’ll work together, and you’ll secretly help her collect a few things and put them in the filter at the back of the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Good idea, let’s do it.” From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony. Maya’s performance in front of the audience is getting better and better.
1.（2024·广东深圳·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday. Whether it was sunny or cloudy, hot or cold, I cannot remember, but I do remember it was a Saturday because the mall was full of people.
I was with my mom. It is easy to miss her in a crowd simply because she is so ordinary. On that day we walked casually, taking quick looks at the store windows because we both knew we wouldn’t be buying much, like always.
I remember I was looking up at the people passing by — at first uninterestedly, but then more carefully. Ladies wore bright and elegant clothing. They had no wrinkles (皱纹) on their faces ——wiped away with expensive creams. An uneasy feeling started to settle in my chest. I tried to push it out, but failed. It got more unbearable with every second until I could deny it no longer: I was ashamed of my mother.
We were in a high-class neighborhood, living in a small, expensive apartment building that Mom chose to move to because she knew the schools were good. We were in a high-class neighborhood, but as I observed the passers-by and then turned my eyes on Mom, I realized for the first time that we didn’t belong there. I could see the wrinkles around Mom’s eyes and mouth, because she didn’t use any creams. She dressed in cheap, worn-out clothes. Her eyes were tired from working long hours to make a living and her hair too grey for her age.
I looked at her, feeling ashamed. My mom is nothing extraordinary, yet at that moment she stood out because she was just so plain. Telling her to wait for me around the corner, I hurried away to the bathroom and didn’t want to be seen with her. On the way to the bathroom, my eyes couldn’t help falling on beautiful dresses. Each dress seemed like a work of art with delicate patterns. However, my heart sank as I knew they were far beyond my reach, further reducing my desire to return.
注意：
1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I finally went back unwillingly, I found that Mom wasn’t there.
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Mom stood in a fancy store, holding a girl’s dress that looked much too expensive.
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【答案】
When I finally went back unwillingly, I found that Mom wasn’t there. I had no choice but to search the nearby stores for her. As I went from one shop to another, anxiety filled my stomach. The lingering shame continued to burden my thoughts, whispering negative words. Each store I entered reminded me of my mother’s absence, increasing my growing fear. The concerned looks from other shoppers seemed to match my own judgment. Why couldn’t she be like other mothers — polished, and stylish My unhappiness for our differences grew, fueling my annoyance. Suddenly, my eyes landed on a high-end store, and there I finally saw Mom.
Mom stood in a fancy store, holding a girl’s dress that looked much too expensive. As I approached her, she exclaimed, “This will look good on you. Do you want it ” I knew it was far too expensive, but I almost agreed, carelessly, and thoughtlessly. Then I took a closer look at Mom. She was so small and weary, clothes worn and old. But a big smile stretched across her face, for she was happy to give me something so nice. My words died in my throat. She looked so tired all the time because she was busy working to provide for me. At that moment, Mom was beautiful and extraordinary in my eyes. I was no longer ashamed of her, but of myself.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者对母亲态度的转变，作者最初对母亲感到羞耻，因为她看起来普通，穿着破旧的衣服。然而，当作者看到母亲在高档商店里为自己挑选裙子时，她意识到母亲虽然平凡，但她的爱和付出是无价的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“当我不情愿地回去时，我发现妈妈已经不在那儿了。”以及第二段首句内容“妈妈站在一家高档商店里，手里拿着一件女孩穿的裙子，看起来太贵了。”可知，第一段可描写作者挨个商店寻找妈妈，心情越发糟糕。
②由第二段首句内容“妈妈站在一家高档商店里，手里拿着一件女孩穿的裙子，看起来太贵了。”可知，第二段可描写作者的妈妈为作者挑了一件漂亮的裙子，作者也明白了妈妈对自己的爱是多么的无私。
2.续写线索：发现妈妈不在身边——找妈妈，心情也越发糟糕——在一家高档商店看到了妈妈——妈妈要为作者买昂贵的裙子——作者明白了妈妈无私的爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①别无选择，只能……：have no choice but to/have no alternative but to
②继续：continue/go on
③增长：grow/increase
情绪类
①担忧的：concerned/worried
②生气：annoyance/anger
【点睛】【高分句型1】As I went from one shop to another, anxiety filled my stomach.（运用了as引导的状语从句）
【高分句型2】She looked so tired all the time because she was busy working to provide for me.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）
（2024·湖南株洲·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grandma tried to straighten out her fingers. “Jessica, I think I am done knitting (编织),” she said. “My fingers just won’t do what I tell them any more.” I looked at Grandma’s hands, remembering that she had taught me how to knit gloves for my dolls since I was little and that her hands had been sure and strong whatever she had knitted. Grandma had always said that I was very good with her knitting needles and balls of yarn (纱线).
But this winter she could hardly bend her fingers. The doctor said Grandma had arthritis (关节炎), suggesting she should keep her hands warm. I made her cups of tea to hold and moved her chair closer to the fire. However, her fingers were still difficult to move.
I wasn’t used to seeing Grandma’s hands so still. In the morning, her hands were still in her lap. In the evening, her quiet hands even made her voice stay still. I tried to help her find her voice. “Grandma, tell me about when you were a little girl like before,” I begged, knowing she loved to tell interesting stories of her nine brothers and sisters and herself during their childhood. “That was so long ago, Jessica,” whispered Grandma. “I can barely remember.”
This winter there were no hats with matching gloves or soft sweaters knitted by Grandma. But I missed her voice more than those. What about her sister Olga giving their snowman a bath in hot water What about her brother Peti cutting off her doll’s beautiful hair and then hiding it Were those words still moving silently in her head
After dinner, Grandma fell asleep in her rocking chair. Mom sorted through our knitting items, among which an old pair of gloves caught my attention. The gloves were Grandma’s favorite ones with the names of Grandma and her nine brothers and sisters on the fingertips. Each time she wore them, all her happy childhood memories would become very interesting stories in her mouth.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The gloves gave me an idea.
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“Grandma, shall we knit a new pair of gloves ” I asked hopefully.
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【答案】
The gloves gave me an idea. I quietly put them in Grandma’s lap, waiting for her to wake up. It seemed that Grandma sensed what was happening and she opened her eyes. “Your family.” I said, softly touching her hands and handing the gloves to her. “Oh, Jessica. I almost forget them. Help me put them on.” Grandma’s eyes shone with excitement. The gloves had a magical effect on her and brought back all her childhood memories. The whole house was full of our laughter. “Grandma’s happy voice has come back, and how about our knitting ” I wanted to have a try.
“Grandma, shall we knit a new pair of gloves ” I asked hopefully. There was a longing look on Grandma’s face. She paused for a second and then smiled, “Why not My fingers can’t do what I tell them but yours can.” Happily picking up her knitting needles and a ball of yarn, I began to knit carefully, not only knitting a new pair of gloves, but also knitting a happy family. Seeing Grandma slowly moving her fingers back and forth inside the old gloves as she taught me, I had no idea whether her hands would recover, but I did believe our happy moments would be always there.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了奶奶的手因为关节炎无法弯曲手指，所以无法再进行编织了。为了不让奶奶感到遗憾，作者开始代替奶奶编织新的手套，两人度过了愉快的时光。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“手套给了我一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写奶奶带上了自己家人的手套，勾起了她所有的童年记忆。
②由第二段首句内容“‘奶奶，我们织一副新手套好吗？’我满怀希望地问”可知，第二段可描写作者代替奶奶编织手套，两人度过愉快时光。
2.续写线索：想到主意——带上手套——提议编织手套——代替奶奶编织——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充满：be full of /be filled with
②停下：pause/stop
③影响：have…effect on /influence
情绪类
①渴望的：longing/eager
②快乐的：happy/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1] My fingers can’t do what I tell them but yours can. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Seeing Grandma slowly moving her fingers back and forth inside the old gloves as she taught me, I had no idea whether her hands would recover, but I did believe our happy moments would be always there. (运用了现在分词作状语)
（2023·江西宜春·高三江西省宜丰中学校考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Braving the Waters
Joel Boyers and his wife Melody Among were heading home from the Nashville airport. Among had just earned her helicopter pilot’s licence when Boyers received a call from a stranger. The caller told him that her brother and his two daughters were trapped on their roof in Waverly, 60 miles from Nashville. They were surrounded by rising floodwaters caused by the heaviest rainfall that year.
Desperate, the caller begged, “Could you please, please rescue my loved ones ”
Boyers, 41, looked at the address the caller mentioned while glancing at the storm clouds. “Ma’am,” he said, “no one will fly in this weather ...” But even before he finished the sentence, Boyers knew they would go back up. “I’ve got a daughter myself,” Boyers says. “I’ll see what I can do.” He put the brother’s address into his phone and they drove back to the airport.
Before long they were in the air, unprepared for what they were about to see. It was nothing but raging water below them. There were two houses on fire. Cars in trees. Tons of debris (残骸). No one was going to be able to swim in that.
The flooding also took out cell phone service, meaning that Boyers couldn’t use his phone to pinpoint (精确定位) the house he was looking for. He flew on regardless.
As Boyers controlled the helicopter, Among began searching for people caught out on rooftops, bridges — anywhere they could land and get them on board. Suddenly, she saw a teenager trapped in a tree. The teen, soaking wet and exhausted, was barely out of the water. Since there was no place to land, Boyers lowered the helicopter until it approached to just above the water line. Among jumped out and swam to the tree, where she helped the teen into the helicopter. The teen was shaking and looking behind anxiously when she said, “Thank you so much, but my sister and uncle ... please help them ...”
Boyers dropped off the teen on a patch of land across the street. Then he and Among were back in the air.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Seconds later, they spotted two people on the roof of a destroyed house.
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Their mission ended 90 minutes after it began, when professional rescue teams showed up.
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【答案】
Seconds later, they spotted two people on the roof of a destroyed house. They looked desperate, shouting loudly to the helicopter, “Help, help!” Boyers flew over to them and carefully lowered the helicopter near the victims. The pitched roof offered no room for him to land, so he had to attempt a risky balancing act. Suddenly, there was a gust of wind, and the helicopter shifted. They held their breath. Fortunately, they managed to save the victims, transporting them to a safe place nearby.
Their mission ended 90 minutes after it began, when professional rescue teams showed up. It was good timing, too, since they were almost out of fuel after rescuing 17 people. As for the woman who originally contacted Boyers, she called back to say that, due to their efforts, her brother and his two daughters had also been saved. Though the experience was frightening, Boyers did make this confession to others afterward: “I don’t want to lie. It was almost a little fun, and I feel proud of what we did.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Joel Boyers和妻子在回家的途中接到求救电话，于是他冒着风雨驾驶直升机去营救受困人员的故事。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“几秒钟后，他们在一座被毁坏的房子的屋顶上发现了两个人。”可知，第一段可描写他们救出被困者的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“任务开始90分钟后，专业救援队赶到，任务结束。”可知，第二段可描写救援结束了，他们救出许多人，而且最初联系Boyers的那位女士回电说，由于他们的努力，她的兄弟和他的两个女儿也获救了。Boyers为他们所做的一切感到自豪。
2. 续写线索：发现两个人——这两个人求救——救出这两个人——任务结束——他们救出许多人——那位女士的兄弟和女儿们也得救了——感到自豪
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①提供：offer/provide
②尝试：attempt/try
③运送：transport/ship
情绪类
①绝望的：desperate/hopeless
②令人恐惧的：frightening/terrifying
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was good timing, too, since they were almost out of fuel after rescuing 17 people. (运用了since引导的状语从句)
【高分句型2】As for the woman who originally contacted Boyers, she called back to say that, due to their efforts, her brother and his two daughters had also been saved. (运用了由关系代词who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型3】It was almost a little fun, and I feel proud of what we did. (运用了and连接的并列句以及what引导的宾语从句)
（2024·辽宁·高三校联考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arnold, an eagle, was living at a reserve. As a cute and pretty bird, he was well cared for and loved by the staff.
One day last month, one of the caretakers noticed something strange. Keeper Eric saw Arnold protecting a large low-lying land in the ground. The spot was carefully decorated with leaves and branches, and featured a simple rock right in the center. Later that day, Eric even saw Arnold sitting on the rock as if it were an egg. And Eric found Arnold continued to do so day after day. “Male eagles take an equal part in raising young, so this is a very natural behavior for Arnold, a male eagle,” Eric thought.
Then Eric shared Arnold’s story on the Internet. He posted something like this: Every so often, our lovely eagle, Arnold, rearranges the sticks in his nest and cackles (咯咯叫) at any other eagles that come too close. We wish Arnold all the luck in the world, but we’re not telling him the reality of the situation. We have to see a rock hatch(孵化)!
Many viewers were impressed by Eric’s humour and meanwhile assumed that Arnold was lonely and needed some mates, but Eric insisted Arnold was choosing to do this on his own. “Arnold is not lonely! He is housed with four other bald eagles—two males and two females,” Eric responded. “He is not welcome help with his nest, nor is he seeking help! He has not been finding mates, so he very clearly wants to do this on his own. He is perfectly content! Maybe he wishes to be a father.” More and more viewers agreed with Eric and advised finding a baby eagle for Arnold before having his own baby.
Last week, an eagle nest containing one chick (雏鸟) was blown down by very high winds. The chick’s mother died, but the chick was found and rescued by a faithful nest watcher. Eric suddenly had a good idea. He finally decided to bring the chick to Arnold’s side.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him.
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When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred.
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【答案】
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him. It was possible that Arnold, who had no experience of raising young eagles, would possibly dislike the chick, or even worse, he might hurt it. But Erie didn’t change his mind. When Arnold was away, he gently put the chick in the nest. When Arnold came back to his nest, he stood in the distance to see how Arnold treated the chick. He was a little worried, so he approached slowly and watched carefully.
When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred. Arnold gave the chick a gentle touch, then covered it under his wings to keep it warm, He obviously accepted the chick. After a while, Arnold flew away and brought back the food Eric had prepared for him and fed it to the chick. Seeing all this, Eric was completely relieved. Arnold took care of his “baby” every day. The chick grew healthily day by day, And Arnold’s wish to raise a baby as a father came true.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了伺养员Eric是如何帮助Arnold实现做鹰爸爸的梦想的。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这只雏鹰给了Arnold一个成为真正父亲的机会，但对他来说也是一个挑战。”以及第二段首句内容“当雏鹰靠近Arnold时，奇迹发生了。”可知，第一段可描写伺养员担心Arnold并不能成为真正的父亲。
②由第二段首句内容“当雏鹰靠近Arnold时，奇迹发生了。”可知，第二段可描写Arnold接纳了雏鹰，并且把雏鹰照顾得很好。
2.续写线索：Arnold是一只生活在保护区的鹰——伺养员Eric发现Arnold在孵一块石头——于是，Eric将这件事分享到了网上，引起了网民的热议——人们认为Arnold可能太孤单了，可是Eric却否认了这样的说法——后来，一只雏鹰失去了母亲，于是Eric决定把雏鹰带给Arnold抚养——一开始，Eric担心Arnold不能接受雏鹰，但是，事实证明Arnold是一个很合格的鹰爸爸
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抚养：raise/bring up
②靠近：approach/come close to
③照顾：take care of/look after
情绪类
①担忧的：worried/concerned
②放松的：relieved/eased
【点睛】【高分句型1】It was possible that Arnold, who had no experience of raising young eagles, would possibly dislike the chick, or even worse, he might hurt it.（运用了that引导的主语从句和who引导的定语从句）
【高分句型2】When Arnold was away, he gently put the chick in the nest.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
（2024·云南昆明·统考一模）
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It was a sunny day this April, and I was flying with my boy off to Carnavon in my light aircraft to see a solar eclipse (日食). Looking out of the window, I was deeply absorbed in the picturesque scenery below. My son Jacob, 15, who was enthusiastic about flying, was in high spirits.
After 25 years in the mining industry, I’d quit my job to pursue a career in flying. Getting my commercial pilot license in September 2022, I believed this was my calling.
Jacob was a passionate flyer, who always enjoyed the flights with me. “What does this button do ” “How does it work ” “What is the function ” There were so many questions he’d ask curiously. I wonder if he’ll be a pilot some day.
Watching the eclipse through our solar goggles (护目镜), we both were in amazement. After a bite of lunch, I did all my checks and refuelled the plane before flying us back.
Flying back into the air, I headed towards Jandakot Airport, which was right near our house.
More than half way, I spotted some smoke in the air. Realizing we were flying over Lancelin where there’d been some nearby bushfires, I didn’t think there was anything to panic about. Travelling south, we took in the lovely coastline. “This is beautiful!” Jacob exclaimed.
At around 5 p.m., just about five minutes to our destination, the engine suddenly decreased rapidly. Glancing over at my boy, I thought, “this is bad.” As I tried to bring the engine back to life, it worked only for a millisecond (毫秒), and then died again. “Okay mate, we’ve had an engine failure, I said calmly to Jacob. The plane was dropping and we went from 1800 feet to 1500 in just 20 seconds.
Looking forward, I could see Jandakot Airport about 15 kilometres ahead. “We aren’t going to make it,” I told myself. We only had another 60 seconds before making the decision. Looking down at Leighton Beach north of Fremantle below, I saw crowds of people on the beach.
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But thankfully there were not many in the water behind the waves.
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On the beach, I hugged my boy, thrilled.
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【答案】
But thankfully there were not many in the water behind the waves. With the wind behind me, I turned the plane 180 degrees, with the nose as high as I could, so we wouldn’t be turned over when we hit the water. “Mum, should I unlock the door ” Jacob asked, as the aircraft quickly neared the ocean. “Yes!” I said, “It would be hard to open while under water.” Then the plane violently hit the water and came to a sudden stop. I couldn’t believe that, in just two minutes from the engine failing, we’d landed into the sea! We unfastened our safety belts, jumped into the sea and swam towards the shore.
On the beach, I hugged my boy, thrilled. I couldn’t have done it without him — my cool, calm boy who helped me land the plane safely. Kind strangers wrapped us both in towels and blankets before medical workers checked us over when they arrived soon after. Returning home, I was very upset about saying goodbye to my beloved plane, which had fully sunk to the bottom of the sea. Just three days after the incident, I had a training flight again. Up in the air, I didn’t feel feared at all, but so calm in my happy place above the clouds. The plane going down was a low, but I’ll always reach for the sky.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。作者是一位飞行爱好者，并取得了商业飞行资格证，在一次带着儿子去看日食的飞行旅程中，飞机引擎突然失灵，在儿子沉稳的帮助下，作者进行了紧急迫降入海，并成功获救，作者为儿子感到骄傲，也为失去自己心爱的飞机感到难过，但是依然对飞行事业充满热情。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“但谢天谢地，海浪后面的水里没有很多人。”可知，第一段可描写在儿子的帮助下作者成功将飞机降落在海里并从飞机里出来游向岸边。
②由第二段首句内容“在海滩上，我拥抱了我的儿子，激动不已。”可知，第二段可描写作者和儿子成功得救并继续对飞机驾驶充满热情。
2.续写线索：准备降落——询问——落水——逃生——得救——继续热爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回家：return home/go back home
②解开：unfasten/unloose
③帮助：help/assist
情绪类
①失落的：upset/depressed/disappointed
②害怕的：feared/scared/frightened
【点睛】[高分句型1] I couldn’t have done it without him — my cool, calm boy who helped me land the plane safely. (运用了who引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2] Returning home, I was very upset about saying goodbye to my beloved plane, which had fully sunk to the bottom of the sea. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和现在分词作状语)
[高分句型3] Up in the air, I didn’t feel feared at all, but so calm in my happy place above the clouds. (运用了not...but..固定句式)
（2024·广东深圳·高三统考期末）
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When Mrs. Russell finished one of her lessons, she was out of breath. A sudden burning stomachache started but she hoped her students wouldn’t notice.
“You look pale, Mrs. Russell, are you alright ” a kid, Tony, asked. Mrs. Russell tried to explain everything was alright, but the words just wouldn’t come out. She became unconscious and fell down in front of her class, and there were red and blue lights, many adults, and the sounds of children crying. An oxygen mask was then put on her.
“We’ll see what we can do for Mrs. Russell. Now all of you have to go back to class and listen to whatever Ms. Hanson tells you,” Mr. Roberts, the headmaster, tried to ask Mrs. Russell’ students to leave the office, but they wouldn’t move. Tony and Hannah were at the front of the pack. They were told Mrs. Russell needed surgery, and hospitals cost money.
“We want to have Mrs. Russell come back! She’s the best teacher ever. Please help us, Ms. Hanson, ” Hannah said, and all the kids nodded. “Kids, let’s go back to the classroom and brainstorm together about helping Mrs. Russell,” Ms. Hanson guided them back to the classroom and she instructed them to write a greeting card to Mrs. Russell.
“A card is not enough to save Mrs. Russell. She needs money to afford the surgery. We need a grown-up to help. ”Tony told his classmates at break. All the kids were thinking hard, and suddenly, Asher spoke up. “My big sister is a senior in high school. Well, I think she can make a link on a website or something. Then we can raise the money needed and help Mrs Russell!”
All the classmates agreed and went home to tell their elder brothers or sisters about this idea. Asher’s big sister, Dianne, started an online group, and she made an internet link immediately with her parents’ approval.
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The link and the group were shared throughout the community quickly.
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Mrs. Russell was back at school two months later.
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【答案】
The link and the group were shared throughout the community quickly. And they received community further dissemination. Many people actively came up with money and soon enough funds were raised. Children also saved their pocket money and donated it to Mrs. Russell. At the same time, the children followed Ms. Hanson’s instructions and wrote many wish cards, which were even more valuable spiritual support for Mrs. Russell. The hospital learned of this news and also reduced some medical expenses. The surgery went smoothly, and in less than two months, Mrs. Russell recovered.
Mrs. Russell was back at school two months later. As soon as Mrs. Russell walked into the classroom, the children warmly applauded for her recovery. Then almost all the students ran forward to warmly embrace her, moving her to tears. Mrs. Russell expressed her heartfelt gratitude to the students. She said it was the love of the children that gave her a second life. Again with the help of Mrs. Russell, her students would have fun in learning and growing! How happy they were！
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了深受学生爱戴的老师Russell夫人因病昏倒在讲台上，被送往医院，学生们得知，Russell夫人需要做手术，花很多钱，学生们想尽办法为老师筹钱，最终Russell夫人康复回到学校的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“这个链接和群组很快就在社区里被分享了。”可知，第一段可描写大家积极捐款，很快筹集了足够的资金，帮助Russell夫人。
②由第二段首句内容“两个月后，Russell夫人回到了学校。”可知，第二段可描写Russell夫人非常感谢学生们，并且以积极热情的态度更好地完成教书育人的工作。
2.续写线索：筹集——捐赠——康复——重新进教室——欢迎——感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①.筹集：raise/collect
②.康复：recover/get well
情绪类
①.积极地：actively/positively
②.表达感谢：express gratitude to/say thanks to
【点睛】[高分句型1]. At the same time, the children followed Ms. Hanson’s instructions and wrote many wish cards, which were even more valuable spiritual support for Mrs. Russell. (由关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. She said it was the love of the children that gave her a second life. (运用了强调句型)
（2024·重庆·统考一模）
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I shared confidently that I wanted to be a wife and mother. Everyone urged me to aim high. I couldn’t think of a higher calling, but they didn’t seem to understand including my parents. No one did except one college teacher, my English teacher. She encouraged me by telling me that she trusted my judgment and knew that in the end all would work out for me even if I followed my heart and chose to simply be a wife and mother. I was so grateful for her understanding and encouraging words.
Well, life was good as I pursued my goals. I did attend college while waiting for my love, who was serving in the Navy to get back home. I knew that I was really just buying time until our marriage, but I had scholarships that took care of the expense, so it seemed like a good thing to do. Finally, we were married, and I was extremely happy with my choice to be a wife. Two years later, we started our family; and again, I knew that I’d made the right choice. Being a mother was so wonderful. We went on to have two more children, and I was blessed by being able to be a stay-at-home mom. It was all I’d ever dreamed of. My parents gradually accepted my happiness.
When the day came that all our little darlings were in school, I began to pray about what to do with the time I found I had on my hands. Through a series of events that could be an entire story of their own, God let me know without a doubt that my next goal should be to become a teacher. I was so excited! I mean, how many people get the chance to grow up and be exactly what they want and then do it again with a new dream I decided to take education courses and was all set to begin classes in June of 1991.
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Unfortunately, on May 16, I received my husband’s boss’s call from a nearby hospital.
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Help came just when I was struggling for my dream.
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【答案】
Unfortunately, on May 16, I received my husband’s boss’s call from a nearby hospital. Sadly, my husband was in an accident that resulted in his having to have his arm cut. He was left unable to work. While it was evident then that we would actually need for me to go to work, we weren’t sure exactly how we’d be able to put me through the courses with neither of us working. I had postponed starting school in June, but by August I went ahead with my plan to finish the courses for my degree in education. There were many times that we weren’t sure we could “make it”.
Help came just when I was struggling for my dream. One Christmas we weren’t sure about the next semester, so we asked my father if he and mom would buy my books for that term instead of other Christmas gifts. He immediately wrote me a check that covered not just my books but the next semester’s tuition as well. Happily, not long after that I was awarded a nontraditional student scholarship and another smaller scholarship that I’d applied for. You see, the big scholarship that I was awarded had been funded by the very same teacher who 20 years earlier had encouraged me to do what I knew was right in my heart.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。虽然不被人理解，但是“我”还是想成为一名妻子和母亲。并且“我”很庆幸，“我”实现了自己的梦想，当“我”所有的小宝贝都上学的那一天到来时，“我”的下一个目标是成为一名教师，并于1991年6月开始上课。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“不幸的是，5月16日，我接到了丈夫老板从附近医院打来的电话。”可知，丈夫受伤后“我”面临的困难和“我”做出的努力。
②由第二段句首内容“就在我为梦想而奋斗的时候，救援来了。”可知，第二段可以描写帮助我的人和如何帮助，以及“我”最后的成就。
2.续写线索：接到电话—得知丈夫住院—推迟课程—得到帮助—继续学业—成功
3.词汇激活
行为类
①使某人通过：put sb. through/ make sb. pass through
②推迟：postpone/ put off/ delay
③成功：make it/ succeed
情绪类
①令人伤心的是：sadly/ bitterly
②令人高兴的是：happily/ gladly
【点睛】【高分句型1】 One Christmas we weren’t sure about the next semester, so we asked my father if he and mom would buy my books for that term instead of other Christmas gifts.( 运用了if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】He immediately wrote me a check that covered not just my books but the next semester’s tuition as well. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
【高分句型3】Happily, not long after that I was awarded a nontraditional student scholarship and another smaller scholarship that I’d applied for. ( 运用了that引导的定语从句)
（2024·辽宁·高三朝阳市第一高级中学校联考期末）
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I taught English as a Second Language (ESL) at a school. One particular sixth grader, Pablo, was struggling with fluency in reading, so after class I suggested that he get extra practice by reading aloud to his mom while she prepared dinner each evening. This was something I routinely encouraged my struggling students to do. Imagine my surprise when Pablo responded by starting to cry. He said, “My mom can’t cook dinner!” Then he cried harder. Eventually, he calmed down enough to tell me that his mom was only able to “cry in her bed” when he got home every afternoon. He said that he was caring for his six-month-old baby brother by himself from the time he got home each day. His mother, it seemed, had a bad tooth and was in extreme pain. He said that his father didn’t have enough money to get it fixed, and that there was no way for her to go to a dentist. This child’s heart was broken for his mom.
I was speechless! He was still crying when he left me that day, and I promised him I would try to help. I kept asking myself how I could help this student. How could I help his mother when we didn’t even speak the same language
The next day, I sent a note, which a friend helped me translate, to Pablo’s mother asking if she would like me to find someone to help her. The following day, Pablo brought me a note from his mom accepting my offer to help.
Meanwhile, I had been doing some networking among my friends asking if anyone knew a dentist who might do some free work for this lady. At the time, I was not able to pay for the work to be done myself. Several friends suggested a dental office that had recently opened up in the area, thinking that they might be willing to provide the services. I didn’t want to waste a lot of time going to several dentists, so I prayed that this would be the one.
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Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk.
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【答案】
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk. After explaining the situation and showing them Pablo’s mother’s note, I anxiously awaited their response. To my relief, they agreed to help without charging any fees. Overjoyed, I quickly contacted Pablo's mother to inform her of the good news. She was so grateful that she couldn’t stop thanking me through her tears.
Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time. The dentist examined her tooth and successfully treated it, alleviating her pain. As a token of appreciation, she prepared some delicious homemade cookies for me. When I shared the good news with Pablo, he was over the moon and hugged me tightly, expressing his gratitude in his broken English. Seeing their happiness, I felt a sense of fulfillment and pride in being able to make a difference in their lives.
【导语】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了一个英语老师在课后建议一个学生通过朗读给他的妈妈听来练习英语口语，但学生却开始哭泣并透露出他的母亲无法做饭，因为他要照顾弟弟和母亲。老师感到震惊并决定找牙医帮助这个家庭。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在牙科诊所停下来，我去了接待处。”可知，第一段可描写作者找到了牙医，说明了情况以后，牙医同意免费进行治疗，作者很高兴地将消息告知帕布罗的母亲，她很感激。
②由第二段首句内容“帕布罗的母亲在约定的时间去见牙医。”可知，第二段可描写牙医治好了帕布罗的母亲的牙，减轻了疼痛。当作者将消息告知帕布罗的时候，他很感激并用英语表达了他的感激。看到他们的幸福，作者感到了一种成就感。
2.续写线索：找到牙医——说明情况——同意免费治疗——告知消息——按时到牙医处——治疗成功——母子表达感谢——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①去：go to/be present at
②帮助：help/assist
③看见：see/spot/catch sight of
情绪类
①感到紧张：feel anxious/feel stressed
②感激的：be grateful/be appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1]She was so grateful that she couldn’t stop thanking me through her tears.（使用了so that引导的结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]When I shared the good news with Pablo, he was over the moon and hugged me tightly, expressing his gratitude in his broken English.（使用了when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词短语作状语）
（2024·广东潮州·高三统考期末）
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注意：1. 续写词数应为 150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Mike took the last bite of the chocolate ice cream and jumped into the car with his parents. They headed off to the Olympic sized pool for the big swim competition.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift and won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
One day, his mother sat down at the table with him and said, “Mike, we know you love ice cream, but maybe it’s not health y for your body to eat so much of it. Your father and I think it is making you gain weight. Is it OK for us to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go for the final competition In order to strengthen your muscles, your father will go running with you three days a week. We think it will help you feel better.”
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Mike unwillingly agreed.
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Finally the big competition of the season came.
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【答案】
Mike unwillingly agreed. Every other day,he would go running with his dad. He still went to the swim competitions each week but he didn’t do well. Seeing that it was really hard for Mike, his father sometimes couldn’t help inviting Mike to get some of his luck ice cream. But he refused the sweet treat and continued running with his father. He had made up his mind to overcame his difficulty so that he could regain his faith in himself. By and by,he could devote himself to training for the final competition,forgetting his luck ice cream thoroughly.
Finally the big competition of the season came. As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could.This race seemed much longer. When he finished the race,he felt really tired and was not sure what to expect. Suddenly he heard thundering cheers from the audience and saw his parents were smiling from ear to ear. His jaws dropped as he looked at the scores.He had beaten his own record, and everyone else’s too. Only then did he realize that it was his parents’ encouragement and his strong determination that helped him pursue his dream.
【导语】本文以人物为线索，讲述了Mike参加完游泳比赛后都会吃冰淇淋。可是由于吃多冰激凌，他体重增加，他的父母建议他停止吃冰激凌并且在父亲的陪同下开始锻炼。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Mike不情愿地答应了。”可知，第一段可描写Mike停止吃冰激凌并且开始锻炼的详细情况。
②由第二段首句内容“最后，本赛季最重要的比赛来了。”可知，第二段可描写在坚持锻炼之后，Mike在本赛季最重要的比赛中的表现和结果。
2.续写线索：开始锻炼——坚持——参加比赛——赢得比赛——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①克服：overcome/get over
②致力于做某事：devote oneself to/commit oneself to
③完成：finish/complete
情绪类
①幸运：luck/fortune
②期待：expect/look forward to
【点睛】【高分句型1】Seeing that it was really hard for Mike, his father sometimes couldn’t help inviting Mike to get some of his luck ice cream.（由that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】As he dived into the swimming pool, he kicked his legs and stretched his arms as hard as he could.（由as引导了时间状语从句）
（2024·广东·高三统考期末）
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Josie and I wanted a dog more than anything else on the earth. We wished for one every time we threw coins in a fountain or watched the evening star drop behind the trees. However, our mother believed that we were still too thoughtless to take on the task of raising a pet. She had witnessed our forgetfulness on household chores and getting into small conflicts. In her eyes, these were signs that we lacked the necessary responsibility.
One summer night, as we sat together on the roof, Josie saw something. She pointed down toward a dark shadow, “What’s that ”
For one astonishing second, Josie and I stared at each other. Then we rushed down onto the doorway. There in our yard stood a black dog. Josie made a little kissing noise and held out her hand. The dog came to us slowly, taking a few steps forward, then a step back, not sure whether to trust us. She was so skinny that I could just feel every bone, and her coat was messy.
“We’re going to have a dog!” My inside was full of excitement, just like before Christmas or our birthday.
“What’s a good name ” said Josie.
The perfect name wrote itself in my mind, “Shadow!”
The next day, we piled together all the pocket money we had to buy all kinds of dog foods and hid it in various places because we were afraid Mom wouldn’t approve that if she knew we were feeding a homeless dog.
That night, after our parents were asleep, we silently slipped downstairs to feed Shadow. We carefully poured the dog food into the bowl, trying to make as little noise as possible. Shadow, who had been waiting eagerly by our side, wagged (摇晃) her tail. As we placed the bowl on the floor, a creaking (吱吱的) sound filled the house. Suddenly, the kitchen light was switched on, illuminating the room and revealing our shocked faces.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按所给格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was our mother, standing there surprisingly.
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Mom decided to give us a chance to prove we could be responsible owners.
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【答案】
It was our mother, standing there surprisingly. Her eyes widened as she saw the scene before her. For a moment, there was silence, only with the creaking sound still lingering in the air. Stammering, we tried to explain to her. We told her about how we found Shadow and our longing for a dog, hoping that somehow our mother would understand it. After a long pause, she finally spoke, “I can see how much you both care for Shadow, and maybe it’s time for us to give her a home.”
Mom decided to give us a chance to prove we could be responsible owners. From that day on, we poured our hearts into taking care of Shadow. We woke up early every morning to take her for walks and diligently cleaned up after her. Gradually, Shadow transformed before our eyes. Her coat became shiny and healthy, and she gained weight. She followed us everywhere like a second shadow. Not only had we achieved our dream of having a dog, we had also earned our mother’s trust and respect.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。作者和Josie一直想要一只小狗，但妈妈认为他们仍然太轻率，不能承担抚养宠物的任务。一天晚上他们在街上捡到一只流浪狗，他们把狗偷偷带回家养起来。一天晚上他们给狗喂食的时候被妈妈发现了，妈妈决定给他们一个机会来证明他们可以成为负责任的主人。他们勤勤恳恳地照顾小狗，赢得了妈妈的信任和尊重。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“是我们的妈妈，惊讶地站在那里。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈发现我们养狗后的反应。
②由第二段首句内容“妈妈决定给我们一个机会来证明我们可以成为负责任的主人。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Josie把狗照顾的很好，赢得妈妈的信任和尊重。
2.续写线索：想要狗——妈妈不同意——捡到小狗——偷偷养狗——被发现——妈妈同意——把狗照顾的很好——赢得妈妈信任和尊重
3.词汇激活
行为类
①照顾：care for / look after
②改变：transform / change
③实现：achieve / realize
情绪类
①渴望：long for / yearn for
【点睛】[高分句型1] We told her about how we found Shadow and our longing for a dog, hoping that somehow our mother would understand it.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导的宾语从句）
[高分句型2] Not only had we achieved our dream of having a dog, we had also earned our mother’s trust and respect.（运用了部分倒装）2024年高考英语答题技巧：读后续写学案
第一步 读文章、定线索。
第二步 读续写首句，定续写思路。
第三步 拟草稿、修病句。
第四步 工整眷写、字迹清晰。
【典例】
【2024·河南·统考模拟预测】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Last summer, Hilda worked as a volunteer with dolphin trainers at a sea life park. Her job was to make sure the tanks were free of any items so that the trainers could train the dolphins to fetch specific items. However, one day after cleaning, one of the dolphins, Maya, presented Hilda with a candy wrapper from the tank. When Katherine, the trainer, saw this, she blamed Hilda for her carelessness. Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
The next morning, Hilda arrived at the park early. She put on her scuba gear (水下呼吸器) and jumped into the tank for her usual, underwater sweep. Finding nothing in the tank, she climbed out of the water just in time to see Katherine jumping in on the other side. After what happened yesterday, Hilda knew what she was doing. She watched as Katherine performed her underwater search, but Hilda wasn’t surprised when she surfaced empty-handed.
During the tank sweeps, Maya had been swimming playfully, but now the dolphin stopped suddenly and swam to the back part of the tank where the filter (过滤) box was located. She stuck her nose down behind the box and then swam away. What was Maya doing back there Hilda wondered. She jumped back into the water and swam over to take a look behind the box, and her question was answered. Hilda then swam across the tank following Maya’s path and emerged from the water to find Katherine removing her scuba gear. As Katherine turned around, her mouth dropped open. There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb (梳子) in her mouth waiting for her treat.
“Maya! Where did you get that ” demanded Katherine, taking the comb and throwing her a fish. “I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place. “What’s all this ” Katherine asked, obviously confused.
注意：
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.
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Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
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【满分句型模板之状语】
Katherine asked, obviously confused.
凯瑟琳问，显然很困惑。
Catherine asked in surprise.
凯瑟琳吃惊地问道。
Catherine thought to herself, ...
凯瑟琳心里想，......
From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony.
从那时起，海洋生物公园就充满了温暖与和谐。
...Hilda said with a big smile.
......希尔达笑着说。
Upset but not discouraged by this event, Hilda decided to do some spying on Maya.
希尔达很沮丧，但她决定监视玛雅。
【满分句型模板之从句】
The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank.
希尔达继续说，事实是，玛雅一直在秘密地从坦克中收集物品，并把它们藏在坦克后面的过滤器附近。
Now Katherine realized what had been going on.
现在凯瑟琳意识到到底发生了什么事。
When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you.
当你训练她时，她会给你一些东西，这样她就可以从你那里得到食物。
【满分作文模板】
【模板】
1. 文章线索：本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了希尔达在一家海洋生物公园与海豚训练员凯瑟琳一起做志愿者，以及她们和海豚玛雅之间的故事。
2. 续写线索：由第一段首句内容“‘这是玛雅的秘密，’希尔达笑着说。”可知，第一段可描写玛雅的秘密是什么。
3. 由第二段首句内容“现在凯瑟琳意识到发生了什么事。”可知，第二段可描写凯瑟琳的对这件事的反应以及事情的结果。
【范文】
“This is Maya’s secret,” Hilda said with a big smile.The truth of the matter, Hilda continued, is that Maya has been secretly collecting items from the tank, hiding them near the filter in the back of the tank. When you train her, she will give you some items so that she can get treats from you. “Really How do you know that ” Catherine asked in surprise. Hilda laughed and replied, “It took me a long time to discover this secret, too. It’s not easy to follow Maya.”
Now Katherine realized what had been going on. Catherine thought to herself, this is really a clever dolphin. And she said to Hilda, “Well, Maya loves treats, so we’ll work together, and you’ll secretly help her collect a few things and put them in the filter at the back of the tank. I’ll give her treats, the number of which I can increase.” Hilda replied, “Good idea, let’s do it.” From then on, the Sea Life Park is full of warmth and harmony. Maya’s performance in front of the audience is getting better and better.
1.（2024·广东深圳·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a Saturday. Whether it was sunny or cloudy, hot or cold, I cannot remember, but I do remember it was a Saturday because the mall was full of people.
I was with my mom. It is easy to miss her in a crowd simply because she is so ordinary. On that day we walked casually, taking quick looks at the store windows because we both knew we wouldn’t be buying much, like always.
I remember I was looking up at the people passing by — at first uninterestedly, but then more carefully. Ladies wore bright and elegant clothing. They had no wrinkles (皱纹) on their faces ——wiped away with expensive creams. An uneasy feeling started to settle in my chest. I tried to push it out, but failed. It got more unbearable with every second until I could deny it no longer: I was ashamed of my mother.
We were in a high-class neighborhood, living in a small, expensive apartment building that Mom chose to move to because she knew the schools were good. We were in a high-class neighborhood, but as I observed the passers-by and then turned my eyes on Mom, I realized for the first time that we didn’t belong there. I could see the wrinkles around Mom’s eyes and mouth, because she didn’t use any creams. She dressed in cheap, worn-out clothes. Her eyes were tired from working long hours to make a living and her hair too grey for her age.
I looked at her, feeling ashamed. My mom is nothing extraordinary, yet at that moment she stood out because she was just so plain. Telling her to wait for me around the corner, I hurried away to the bathroom and didn’t want to be seen with her. On the way to the bathroom, my eyes couldn’t help falling on beautiful dresses. Each dress seemed like a work of art with delicate patterns. However, my heart sank as I knew they were far beyond my reach, further reducing my desire to return.
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1.续写词数应为 150 左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When I finally went back unwillingly, I found that Mom wasn’t there.
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Mom stood in a fancy store, holding a girl’s dress that looked much too expensive.
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（2024·湖南株洲·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Grandma tried to straighten out her fingers. “Jessica, I think I am done knitting (编织),” she said. “My fingers just won’t do what I tell them any more.” I looked at Grandma’s hands, remembering that she had taught me how to knit gloves for my dolls since I was little and that her hands had been sure and strong whatever she had knitted. Grandma had always said that I was very good with her knitting needles and balls of yarn (纱线).
But this winter she could hardly bend her fingers. The doctor said Grandma had arthritis (关节炎), suggesting she should keep her hands warm. I made her cups of tea to hold and moved her chair closer to the fire. However, her fingers were still difficult to move.
I wasn’t used to seeing Grandma’s hands so still. In the morning, her hands were still in her lap. In the evening, her quiet hands even made her voice stay still. I tried to help her find her voice. “Grandma, tell me about when you were a little girl like before,” I begged, knowing she loved to tell interesting stories of her nine brothers and sisters and herself during their childhood. “That was so long ago, Jessica,” whispered Grandma. “I can barely remember.”
This winter there were no hats with matching gloves or soft sweaters knitted by Grandma. But I missed her voice more than those. What about her sister Olga giving their snowman a bath in hot water What about her brother Peti cutting off her doll’s beautiful hair and then hiding it Were those words still moving silently in her head
After dinner, Grandma fell asleep in her rocking chair. Mom sorted through our knitting items, among which an old pair of gloves caught my attention. The gloves were Grandma’s favorite ones with the names of Grandma and her nine brothers and sisters on the fingertips. Each time she wore them, all her happy childhood memories would become very interesting stories in her mouth.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The gloves gave me an idea.
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“Grandma, shall we knit a new pair of gloves ” I asked hopefully.
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（2023·江西宜春·高三江西省宜丰中学校考阶段练习）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Braving the Waters
Joel Boyers and his wife Melody Among were heading home from the Nashville airport. Among had just earned her helicopter pilot’s licence when Boyers received a call from a stranger. The caller told him that her brother and his two daughters were trapped on their roof in Waverly, 60 miles from Nashville. They were surrounded by rising floodwaters caused by the heaviest rainfall that year.
Desperate, the caller begged, “Could you please, please rescue my loved ones ”
Boyers, 41, looked at the address the caller mentioned while glancing at the storm clouds. “Ma’am,” he said, “no one will fly in this weather ...” But even before he finished the sentence, Boyers knew they would go back up. “I’ve got a daughter myself,” Boyers says. “I’ll see what I can do.” He put the brother’s address into his phone and they drove back to the airport.
Before long they were in the air, unprepared for what they were about to see. It was nothing but raging water below them. There were two houses on fire. Cars in trees. Tons of debris (残骸). No one was going to be able to swim in that.
The flooding also took out cell phone service, meaning that Boyers couldn’t use his phone to pinpoint (精确定位) the house he was looking for. He flew on regardless.
As Boyers controlled the helicopter, Among began searching for people caught out on rooftops, bridges — anywhere they could land and get them on board. Suddenly, she saw a teenager trapped in a tree. The teen, soaking wet and exhausted, was barely out of the water. Since there was no place to land, Boyers lowered the helicopter until it approached to just above the water line. Among jumped out and swam to the tree, where she helped the teen into the helicopter. The teen was shaking and looking behind anxiously when she said, “Thank you so much, but my sister and uncle ... please help them ...”
Boyers dropped off the teen on a patch of land across the street. Then he and Among were back in the air.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150词左右；
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Seconds later, they spotted two people on the roof of a destroyed house.
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Their mission ended 90 minutes after it began, when professional rescue teams showed up.
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（2024·辽宁·高三校联考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Arnold, an eagle, was living at a reserve. As a cute and pretty bird, he was well cared for and loved by the staff.
One day last month, one of the caretakers noticed something strange. Keeper Eric saw Arnold protecting a large low-lying land in the ground. The spot was carefully decorated with leaves and branches, and featured a simple rock right in the center. Later that day, Eric even saw Arnold sitting on the rock as if it were an egg. And Eric found Arnold continued to do so day after day. “Male eagles take an equal part in raising young, so this is a very natural behavior for Arnold, a male eagle,” Eric thought.
Then Eric shared Arnold’s story on the Internet. He posted something like this: Every so often, our lovely eagle, Arnold, rearranges the sticks in his nest and cackles (咯咯叫) at any other eagles that come too close. We wish Arnold all the luck in the world, but we’re not telling him the reality of the situation. We have to see a rock hatch(孵化)!
Many viewers were impressed by Eric’s humour and meanwhile assumed that Arnold was lonely and needed some mates, but Eric insisted Arnold was choosing to do this on his own. “Arnold is not lonely! He is housed with four other bald eagles—two males and two females,” Eric responded. “He is not welcome help with his nest, nor is he seeking help! He has not been finding mates, so he very clearly wants to do this on his own. He is perfectly content! Maybe he wishes to be a father.” More and more viewers agreed with Eric and advised finding a baby eagle for Arnold before having his own baby.
Last week, an eagle nest containing one chick (雏鸟) was blown down by very high winds. The chick’s mother died, but the chick was found and rescued by a faithful nest watcher. Eric suddenly had a good idea. He finally decided to bring the chick to Arnold’s side.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The chick would give Arnold a chance to be a real father, but it would also be a challenge for him.
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When the chick got close to Arnold, a wonder occurred.
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（2024·云南昆明·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny day this April, and I was flying with my boy off to Carnavon in my light aircraft to see a solar eclipse (日食). Looking out of the window, I was deeply absorbed in the picturesque scenery below. My son Jacob, 15, who was enthusiastic about flying, was in high spirits.
After 25 years in the mining industry, I’d quit my job to pursue a career in flying. Getting my commercial pilot license in September 2022, I believed this was my calling.
Jacob was a passionate flyer, who always enjoyed the flights with me. “What does this button do ” “How does it work ” “What is the function ” There were so many questions he’d ask curiously. I wonder if he’ll be a pilot some day.
Watching the eclipse through our solar goggles (护目镜), we both were in amazement. After a bite of lunch, I did all my checks and refuelled the plane before flying us back.
Flying back into the air, I headed towards Jandakot Airport, which was right near our house.
More than half way, I spotted some smoke in the air. Realizing we were flying over Lancelin where there’d been some nearby bushfires, I didn’t think there was anything to panic about. Travelling south, we took in the lovely coastline. “This is beautiful!” Jacob exclaimed.
At around 5 p.m., just about five minutes to our destination, the engine suddenly decreased rapidly. Glancing over at my boy, I thought, “this is bad.” As I tried to bring the engine back to life, it worked only for a millisecond (毫秒), and then died again. “Okay mate, we’ve had an engine failure, I said calmly to Jacob. The plane was dropping and we went from 1800 feet to 1500 in just 20 seconds.
Looking forward, I could see Jandakot Airport about 15 kilometres ahead. “We aren’t going to make it,” I told myself. We only had another 60 seconds before making the decision. Looking down at Leighton Beach north of Fremantle below, I saw crowds of people on the beach.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
But thankfully there were not many in the water behind the waves.
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On the beach, I hugged my boy, thrilled.
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（2024·广东深圳·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Mrs. Russell finished one of her lessons, she was out of breath. A sudden burning stomachache started but she hoped her students wouldn’t notice.
“You look pale, Mrs. Russell, are you alright ” a kid, Tony, asked. Mrs. Russell tried to explain everything was alright, but the words just wouldn’t come out. She became unconscious and fell down in front of her class, and there were red and blue lights, many adults, and the sounds of children crying. An oxygen mask was then put on her.
“We’ll see what we can do for Mrs. Russell. Now all of you have to go back to class and listen to whatever Ms. Hanson tells you,” Mr. Roberts, the headmaster, tried to ask Mrs. Russell’ students to leave the office, but they wouldn’t move. Tony and Hannah were at the front of the pack. They were told Mrs. Russell needed surgery, and hospitals cost money.
“We want to have Mrs. Russell come back! She’s the best teacher ever. Please help us, Ms. Hanson, ” Hannah said, and all the kids nodded. “Kids, let’s go back to the classroom and brainstorm together about helping Mrs. Russell,” Ms. Hanson guided them back to the classroom and she instructed them to write a greeting card to Mrs. Russell.
“A card is not enough to save Mrs. Russell. She needs money to afford the surgery. We need a grown-up to help. ”Tony told his classmates at break. All the kids were thinking hard, and suddenly, Asher spoke up. “My big sister is a senior in high school. Well, I think she can make a link on a website or something. Then we can raise the money needed and help Mrs Russell!”
All the classmates agreed and went home to tell their elder brothers or sisters about this idea. Asher’s big sister, Dianne, started an online group, and she made an internet link immediately with her parents’ approval.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
The link and the group were shared throughout the community quickly.
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Mrs. Russell was back at school two months later.
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（2024·重庆·统考一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I shared confidently that I wanted to be a wife and mother. Everyone urged me to aim high. I couldn’t think of a higher calling, but they didn’t seem to understand including my parents. No one did except one college teacher, my English teacher. She encouraged me by telling me that she trusted my judgment and knew that in the end all would work out for me even if I followed my heart and chose to simply be a wife and mother. I was so grateful for her understanding and encouraging words.
Well, life was good as I pursued my goals. I did attend college while waiting for my love, who was serving in the Navy to get back home. I knew that I was really just buying time until our marriage, but I had scholarships that took care of the expense, so it seemed like a good thing to do. Finally, we were married, and I was extremely happy with my choice to be a wife. Two years later, we started our family; and again, I knew that I’d made the right choice. Being a mother was so wonderful. We went on to have two more children, and I was blessed by being able to be a stay-at-home mom. It was all I’d ever dreamed of. My parents gradually accepted my happiness.
When the day came that all our little darlings were in school, I began to pray about what to do with the time I found I had on my hands. Through a series of events that could be an entire story of their own, God let me know without a doubt that my next goal should be to become a teacher. I was so excited! I mean, how many people get the chance to grow up and be exactly what they want and then do it again with a new dream I decided to take education courses and was all set to begin classes in June of 1991.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Unfortunately, on May 16, I received my husband’s boss’s call from a nearby hospital.
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Help came just when I was struggling for my dream.
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（2024·辽宁·高三朝阳市第一高级中学校联考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I taught English as a Second Language (ESL) at a school. One particular sixth grader, Pablo, was struggling with fluency in reading, so after class I suggested that he get extra practice by reading aloud to his mom while she prepared dinner each evening. This was something I routinely encouraged my struggling students to do. Imagine my surprise when Pablo responded by starting to cry. He said, “My mom can’t cook dinner!” Then he cried harder. Eventually, he calmed down enough to tell me that his mom was only able to “cry in her bed” when he got home every afternoon. He said that he was caring for his six-month-old baby brother by himself from the time he got home each day. His mother, it seemed, had a bad tooth and was in extreme pain. He said that his father didn’t have enough money to get it fixed, and that there was no way for her to go to a dentist. This child’s heart was broken for his mom.
I was speechless! He was still crying when he left me that day, and I promised him I would try to help. I kept asking myself how I could help this student. How could I help his mother when we didn’t even speak the same language
The next day, I sent a note, which a friend helped me translate, to Pablo’s mother asking if she would like me to find someone to help her. The following day, Pablo brought me a note from his mom accepting my offer to help.
Meanwhile, I had been doing some networking among my friends asking if anyone knew a dentist who might do some free work for this lady. At the time, I was not able to pay for the work to be done myself. Several friends suggested a dental office that had recently opened up in the area, thinking that they might be willing to provide the services. I didn’t want to waste a lot of time going to several dentists, so I prayed that this would be the one.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Stopping by the dental office, I went to the reception desk.
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Pablo’s mother came to meet the dentist at the appointed time.
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（2024·广东潮州·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意：1. 续写词数应为 150左右;
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
Mike took the last bite of the chocolate ice cream and jumped into the car with his parents. They headed off to the Olympic sized pool for the big swim competition.
When his race came up, Mike was confident. He was strong and swift and won first place, making him the fastest boy in his age group.
One day, his mother sat down at the table with him and said, “Mike, we know you love ice cream, but maybe it’s not health y for your body to eat so much of it. Your father and I think it is making you gain weight. Is it OK for us to quit the sweet treats for a while, especially before you go for the final competition In order to strengthen your muscles, your father will go running with you three days a week. We think it will help you feel better.”
注意: 1. 续写词数应为 150 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Mike unwillingly agreed.
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Finally the big competition of the season came.
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（2024·广东·高三统考期末）
阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Josie and I wanted a dog more than anything else on the earth. We wished for one every time we threw coins in a fountain or watched the evening star drop behind the trees. However, our mother believed that we were still too thoughtless to take on the task of raising a pet. She had witnessed our forgetfulness on household chores and getting into small conflicts. In her eyes, these were signs that we lacked the necessary responsibility.
One summer night, as we sat together on the roof, Josie saw something. She pointed down toward a dark shadow, “What’s that ”
For one astonishing second, Josie and I stared at each other. Then we rushed down onto the doorway. There in our yard stood a black dog. Josie made a little kissing noise and held out her hand. The dog came to us slowly, taking a few steps forward, then a step back, not sure whether to trust us. She was so skinny that I could just feel every bone, and her coat was messy.
“We’re going to have a dog!” My inside was full of excitement, just like before Christmas or our birthday.
“What’s a good name ” said Josie.
The perfect name wrote itself in my mind, “Shadow!”
The next day, we piled together all the pocket money we had to buy all kinds of dog foods and hid it in various places because we were afraid Mom wouldn’t approve that if she knew we were feeding a homeless dog.
That night, after our parents were asleep, we silently slipped downstairs to feed Shadow. We carefully poured the dog food into the bowl, trying to make as little noise as possible. Shadow, who had been waiting eagerly by our side, wagged (摇晃) her tail. As we placed the bowl on the floor, a creaking (吱吱的) sound filled the house. Suddenly, the kitchen light was switched on, illuminating the room and revealing our shocked faces.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按所给格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was our mother, standing there surprisingly.
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Mom decided to give us a chance to prove we could be responsible owners.
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