2024年高考英语读后续写之如何表达悲伤
解析版
背诵积累区：背诵迁移 举一反三
一、必背单词
1.悲伤类形容词：
sad adj. 难过的；悲哀的
heart-broken adj. 极其伤心的，令人心碎的
brokenhearted adj. 心碎的；伤心的
sorrowful adj. 悲伤的，伤心的
heart-struck adj. 心痛的；伤心的
distressing adj. 使痛苦的；悲伤的
blue adj.忧郁的，悲观的
miserable adj. 悲惨的；痛苦的
downcast adj.垂头丧气的,萎靡不振的
gloomy adj.阴郁的;忧郁的
painful adj 痛苦的
2.悲伤类名词：
sadness n. 悲哀
sorrow n.悲伤；伤心事
gloom n.忧郁
pain n. 痛苦
grief n. 悲伤，悲痛
3.悲伤类动词：
sadden v.悲哀；悲痛
grieve v 悲伤，悲痛
4.悲伤类副词：
sadly adv. 悲哀地；悲痛地
painfully adv 痛苦地
二、高频语块
1.feel sad 很难过
2.feel blue 情绪低落
3.in pain 处于痛苦之中
4.be reduced to tears 流泪
5.be in tears含泪，泪流满面
6.break one’s heart 伤心绝望
7.fight back tears抑制住泪水
8.one’s heart sinks 心沉下去
9.with a sinking heart 心情沉重
10.be down /low in spirits 情绪低落
11.in a sorrowful tone/voice伤心地说
12.be overcome with sorrow悲伤不已
13.a gloomy feeling 一种悲伤的情绪
14.an ocean of sadness 悲伤的海洋
15.sadness comes in waves 悲伤如潮涌
16.have tears in one's eyes眼里含着泪水
17.burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来
18.be numb with sorrow/sadness 难过得麻木
19.break down(因情绪失去控制而)痛哭，大哭
20.be close to tears/be on the verge of tears快要哭了
21.a wave of loneliness/sadness 一阵孤独/悲伤
22.weep with one' s face hidden in one' s hands掩面啜泣
23.tears roll/run down one's cheeks泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
24.have a lump in one's throat(因感动、悲伤而)哽咽，喉咙哽住
25.with a heavy/ sinking/ sorrowful/ broken heart怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心
三、佳句赏析
1.I was seized with sadness.我伤心欲绝。
2.A flash of grief swept upon me.一阵悲伤袭身而来。
3.Tears rolled down her cheeks.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
4.Charles was overcome with grief.查理悲痛欲绝。
5.He felt as if a knife were cutting his heart.他觉得心如刀割。
6.Tears were beginning to gather in her eyes.她眼里涌上泪水。
7.A wave of sadness welled up inside her. 一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。
8.He looked mournful, even near to tears.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
9.He sank onto the chair ,crying his eyes out.他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
10.His last word went like a bullet to her heart. 他最后一句话太扎心了。
11.She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
12.He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
13.As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow/ sadness clouded his eyes.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
14.She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
15.She was seized by a burst of sadness and sank onto the chair.她悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
16.His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news.听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
17.Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her.珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。
18.I felt like I were floating in an ocean of sadness, and words could not express my sorrow.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
测试巩固区：分级测试 步步为赢
一、高频语块汉译英
1.很难过
2.处于痛苦之中
3.流泪
4.伤心绝望
5.抑制住泪水
6.心沉下去
7.心情沉重
8.情绪低落
9.悲伤不已
10.悲伤的海洋
11.放声大哭，突然哭起来
12. (因情绪失去控制而)痛哭，大哭
13.快要哭了
14.一阵孤独/悲伤
15.泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
【参考答案】
1.feel sad 很难过
2.in pain 处于痛苦之中
3.be reduced to tears 流泪
4.break one’s heart 伤心绝望
5.fight back tears抑制住泪水
6.one’s heart sinks 心沉下去
7.with a sinking heart 心情沉重
8.be down /low in spirits 情绪低落
9.be overcome with sorrow悲伤不已
10.an ocean of sadness 悲伤的海洋
11.burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来
12.break down(因情绪失去控制而)痛哭，大哭
13.be close to tears/be on the verge of tears快要哭了
14.a sense/wave of loneliness/sadness 一阵孤独/悲伤
15.tears roll/run down one's cheeks泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
二、佳句赏析汉译英
1.我伤心欲绝。
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2.一阵悲伤袭身而来。
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3.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
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4.查理悲痛欲绝。
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5.他觉得心如刀割。
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6.她眼里涌上泪水。
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7.一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。
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8.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
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9.他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
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10.他最后一句话太扎心了。
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11.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
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12.他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
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13.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
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14.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
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15.她悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
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16.听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
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17.珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。
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18.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
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【参考答案】
1.I was seized with sadness.我伤心欲绝。
2.A flash of grief swept upon me.一阵悲伤袭身而来。
3.Tears rolled down her cheeks.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
4.Charles was overcome with grief. 查理悲痛欲绝。
5.He felt as if a knife were cutting his heart.他觉得心如刀割。
6.Tears were beginning to gather in her eyes.她眼里涌上泪水。
7.A wave of sadness welled up inside her. 一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。
8.He looked mournful, even near to tears.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
9.He sank onto the chair ,crying his eyes out.他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
10.His last word went like a bullet to her heart. 他最后一句话太扎心了。
11.She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
12.He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
13.As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow/ sadness clouded his eyes.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
14.She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
15.She was seized by a burst of sadness and sank onto the chair.她悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
16.His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news.听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
17.Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her.珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。
18.I felt like I were floating in an ocean of sadness, and words could not express my sorrow.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
三、情感表达片段运用
请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。
I was selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, 1 _ (眼里饱含泪水). Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I bit my bottom lip 2 (心里充满悲伤). I dragged my heavy legs 3 _ (心情沉重) and moved out of the lecture hall. 4 _(我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼). On entering the classroom, 5 _ (悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落). The next following days, I felt like she was 6 . (我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里), not wanting to do anything.
【参考答案】
I was selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, my eyes filled with tears. Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I bit my bottom lip with sadness filling her heart. I dragged my heavy legs with a sinking heart and moved out of the lecture hall. I hung my head in sadness, great sorrow clouding my eyes. On entering the classroom, disappointment and sadness came in waves and tears streamed down my cheeks. The next following days, I felt like I was floating in an ocean of sadness, not wanting to do anything.
四、情感表达语篇运用
1.（2023上·贵州·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a younger sister, Michelle. But as a big brother, I rarely cared for her.
On a Sunday in March when I was 8, Easter (复活节) came. As usual, my sister and I would search for the hidden baskets full of candy and other things prepared for us. On that Easter morning, I got up early.
“Michelle!” I whispered to my sister, who was still sleeping in her bedroom. “Wake up. It’s Easter. We have to go and find our baskets.” She rolled over in bed and finally got up. “Mom and Dad are still sleeping,” I warned her as we walked out into the kitchen. “If we’re quiet, we can find our baskets without waking them up.”
It didn’t take long for me to find my basket, which had candy, toys, etc. This basket was obviously mine because it contained the latest issue of my favorite magazine. My sister continued searching in every room while I dropped my basket off at the kitchen table and started separating candy into different categories. 20 minutes later, my sister told me, “I can’t find it. I looked all over. Can you help me ” I decided to help her not because I felt sorry for her, but because I thought it was fun to find the missing basket.
We started searching through the cabinets (贮藏柜). Later, our parents were awake. Dad headed straight for the bathroom, while Mom walked out to make coffee. “Mom, I’ve found my basket,” I told her. She smiled and asked, “Where’s yours, Michelle ”
That’s when my six-year-old sister started to cry. “Let’s keep looking,” Mom said, taking hold of my sister’s hand. After searching the living room they went to the closet (贮藏室). There Michelle finally found her basket. But when she picked up her basket, we found everything in it had all been bitten and damaged by mice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset.
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Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket.
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Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset. Without saying anything, my sister rushed to her bedroom and slammed the door. I was lost in thought. On the one hand, I wanted to enjoy my candy and toys alone. On the other hand, I could feel my sister’s sorrow when I put myself in her shoes. It was such a dilemma. Leaving my sister floating in an ocean of sadness, would I still enjoy my gifts Having struggled for a while, I decided to cheer her up by sharing what I had with her.
Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket. She lied on her bed silently, tears rolling down her cheeks. “Cheer up, my dear sister. Forget about the damaged basket. You can have mine.” I said in a cheerful tone. When she heard this, her eyes twinkled with pleasure. The moment I saw her smiling face again, joy welled up inside me. Laughter lingered around the room. That was the first time that I had learned the meaning of sharing. It made me happier when I was able to bring joy to others.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者虽然是哥哥，但是很少关心自己的妹妹Michelle。在作者八岁那年的复活节，作者早早地起床，叫醒妹妹，两人一同寻找为他们准备的隐藏的礼物。作者很快找到了属于自己的礼物，开心地整理里面的糖果，但是妹妹一直没有找到，在妹妹的请求下，作者开始帮助妹妹找她的礼物。后来，妈妈也来帮妹妹找礼物，最终找到的时候，大家却发现礼物篮子空了，里面的东西都被老鼠破坏了。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Michelle把篮子扔在地上，看上去很沮丧”可知，第一段可描写作者作为哥哥内心挣扎是否用自己的礼物篮子来安慰沮丧的妹妹，以及作者最终做出决定。
②由第二段首句内容“然后我提着我的篮子慢慢地走进妹妹的房间”可知，第二段可描写作者作为哥哥安慰妹妹，分享自己的礼物篮子，以及看到妹妹开心起来后作者的感悟。
2. 续写线索：Michelle很沮丧——作者内心挣扎——作者做出决定——作者进入妹妹的房间——作者分享礼物——作者的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①奔：rush/run/dash
②感觉到：feel/perceive/sense
③决定：decide/make a decision/make a choice
④认识到：learn/understand/realize/be aware of
情绪类
①难过：sorrow/sadness/unhappiness
②高兴的：cheerful/joyous/happy/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the other hand, I could feel my sister’s sorrow when I put myself in her shoes. (when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Having struggled for a while, I decided to cheer her up by sharing what I had with her. (现在分词短语Having struggled…作状语、what引导宾语从句)
2.（2023上·山东·高三山东省实验中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in college, I experienced a very challenging time. Not only was I dealing with the difficulties of academic life, but I was also struggling with financial hardship. I was so poor that I often found myself without food. There were days when I would wake up with just a few coins in my pocket, and those coins were usually just enough to buy four loaves of bread. After that, I would have no idea where my next meal would come from.
I was desperate to find a way to make money and decided to try my luck applying for a part-time job. I spent hours reading the newspaper, searching for job advertisements, but in vain.
Despite all these difficulties, I didn’t want to give up hope. I knew that if I kept pushing and refused to quit, I would eventually find a solution to my problems. So I stuck to looking for more opportunities to earn a living. But no matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t land a single interview. The more I tried to get a job, the more depressed and hopeless I felt.
One day, while making phone calls to apply for yet another job, I noticed someone else waiting behind me for the pay phone. He seemed kind of impatient, pacing back and forth with his hands behind his back. Ignoring him, I continued to try calling several times but I couldn’t get through somehow.
After a while, he cleared his throat and said coldly, “Other people have to use the phone, too, you know.” It was a simple statement, but it was enough to push me over the edge. I turned to this stranger and shouted, “See this bag on the floor That has all my food in it! I don’t have a phone at home to call from! I’m sorry if your cell phone is broken, but whatever call you have to make is less important than my trying to come up with tomorrow’s meal!”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I turned back and tried to hold back my tears.
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Putting a five-dollar bill in my hand, he left.
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【满分范文】
I turned back and tried to hold back my tears. But I was so sad that I broke down, failing to make it. I began sobbing uncontrollably. Then the soft sobs became replaced by loud cries. I felt hopeless about my future.“Why did everyone have a job expect me ” I can’t help thinking. Looking at me crying, the man was shocked. He was no longer impatient. He walked in and said, “I’m so sorry for my words. Everything will be OK. Don’t give up, and you’ll get a job soon.”
Putting a five-dollar bill in my hand, he left. This time, it’s my turn to be shocked. I had never thought somebody would express sympathy for me and encourage me to keep trying. Maybe things were not as bad as I imagined; maybe everything would be fine again if I just tried a little more. My sorrow disappeared. And I feel positive for my future again. After all, I still have five dollars!
【导语】本文以人物为线索。作者在上大学的时候，经历了一段非常具有挑战性的时期。作者没钱买饭，所以想要找一份兼职。但无论作者如何努力，他仍然找不到工作。一天在电话亭打电话的时候，作者尝试了好几次都打不通电话，电话亭外的一个男人非常不耐烦地催促作者。作者情绪失控了，而那位男子看到这一幕，为自己的话感到抱歉，于是他安慰了作者，并给了作者5美元。作者看到还有人会关心自己，于是对未来又重新充满信心。
【详解】1. 续写线索：
由续写第一段首句“我转过身来，强忍着泪水。”和第二段首句“他把一张五美元的钞票放在我手里，就走了。”可知，第一段可以描写作者情绪崩溃，感慨自己的不幸，而这位男子安慰并鼓励了作者。
由续写第二段首句“他把一张五美元的钞票放在我手里，就走了。”可知，第二段可以描写作者发现竟然还有陌生人关心自己，又重新对未来充满信心。
2. 段落续写：强忍泪水——失控痛哭——男子转变态度——男子鼓励作者——男子给作者钱——作者惊讶于有人会关心自己——作者心态转变——作者重新对未来充满信心
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①崩溃：break down/collapse/fall apart
②代替：replace/take the place of/ substitute for
③对……表示同情：express sympathy for/give sb. sympathy/sympathize with
情绪类
①悲伤的：sad/ mournful/ sorrowful
②震惊的：shocked/surprised/ stunned
③乐观的：positive/optimistic
【点睛】【高分句型1】But I was so sad that I broke down, failing to make it.(使用了so…that…引导结果状语从句、现在分词作状语、不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】I had never thought somebody would express sympathy for me and encourage me to keep trying. (使用了省略that的宾语从句、不定式作宾补和动名词作宾语)2024年高考英语读后续写之如何表达悲伤
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背诵积累区：背诵迁移 举一反三
一、必背单词
1.悲伤类形容词：
sad adj. 难过的；悲哀的
heart-broken adj. 极其伤心的，令人心碎的
brokenhearted adj. 心碎的；伤心的
sorrowful adj. 悲伤的，伤心的
heart-struck adj. 心痛的；伤心的
distressing adj. 使痛苦的；悲伤的
blue adj.忧郁的，悲观的
miserable adj. 悲惨的；痛苦的
downcast adj.垂头丧气的,萎靡不振的
gloomy adj.阴郁的;忧郁的
painful adj 痛苦的
2.悲伤类名词：
sadness n. 悲哀
sorrow n.悲伤；伤心事
gloom n.忧郁
pain n. 痛苦
grief n. 悲伤，悲痛
3.悲伤类动词：
sadden v.悲哀；悲痛
grieve v 悲伤，悲痛
4.悲伤类副词：
sadly adv. 悲哀地；悲痛地
painfully adv 痛苦地
二、高频语块
1.feel sad 很难过
2.feel blue 情绪低落
3.in pain 处于痛苦之中
4.be reduced to tears 流泪
5.be in tears含泪，泪流满面
6.break one’s heart 伤心绝望
7.fight back tears抑制住泪水
8.one’s heart sinks 心沉下去
9.with a sinking heart 心情沉重
10.be down /low in spirits 情绪低落
11.in a sorrowful tone/voice伤心地说
12.be overcome with sorrow悲伤不已
13.a gloomy feeling 一种悲伤的情绪
14.an ocean of sadness 悲伤的海洋
15.sadness comes in waves 悲伤如潮涌
16.have tears in one's eyes眼里含着泪水
17.burst into tears 放声大哭，突然哭起来
18.be numb with sorrow/sadness 难过得麻木
19.break down(因情绪失去控制而)痛哭，大哭
20.be close to tears/be on the verge of tears快要哭了
21.a wave of loneliness/sadness 一阵孤独/悲伤
22.weep with one' s face hidden in one' s hands掩面啜泣
23.tears roll/run down one's cheeks泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
24.have a lump in one's throat(因感动、悲伤而)哽咽，喉咙哽住
25.with a heavy/ sinking/ sorrowful/ broken heart怀着沉重/沮丧/难过的心
三、佳句赏析
1.I was seized with sadness.我伤心欲绝。
2.A flash of grief swept upon me.一阵悲伤袭身而来。
3.Tears rolled down her cheeks.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
4.Charles was overcome with grief.查理悲痛欲绝。
5.He felt as if a knife were cutting his heart.他觉得心如刀割。
6.Tears were beginning to gather in her eyes.她眼里涌上泪水。
7.A wave of sadness welled up inside her. 一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。
8.He looked mournful, even near to tears.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
9.He sank onto the chair ,crying his eyes out.他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
10.His last word went like a bullet to her heart. 他最后一句话太扎心了。
11.She burst into tears and ran out of the room.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
12.He shook his head sadly, tears rolling down his cheeks. 他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
13.As he looked at Katherine, great sorrow/ sadness clouded his eyes.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
14.She was seized by a burst of sadness and couldn’t help sobbing bitterly.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
15.She was seized by a burst of sadness and sank onto the chair.她悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
16.His face was cast a cloud of gloom after he heard this news.听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
17.Jane turned to me with tears in her eyes, and begged me to help her.珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。
18.I felt like I were floating in an ocean of sadness, and words could not express my sorrow.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
测试巩固区：分级测试 步步为赢
一、高频语块汉译英
1.很难过
2.处于痛苦之中
3.流泪
4.伤心绝望
5.抑制住泪水
6.心沉下去
7.心情沉重
8.情绪低落
9.悲伤不已
10.悲伤的海洋
11.放声大哭，突然哭起来
12. (因情绪失去控制而)痛哭，大哭
13.快要哭了
14.一阵孤独/悲伤
15.泪水顺着脸颊淌下来
二、佳句赏析汉译英
1.我伤心欲绝。
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2.一阵悲伤袭身而来。
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3.泪水从他的脸颊滑落。
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4.查理悲痛欲绝。
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5.他觉得心如刀割。
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6.她眼里涌上泪水。
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7.一阵悲伤涌上她的心头。
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8.他看起来很悲伤，几乎要流泪了。
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9.他倒在椅子上,悲痛欲绝。
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10.他最后一句话太扎心了。
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11.她突然哭了起来,跑出了房间。
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12.他难过地摇摇头,潸然泪下。
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13.他看着凯瑟琳,满眼忧伤。
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14.她悲伤得忍不住哭泣。
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15.她悲恸欲绝，倒在椅上，哭得死去活来。
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16.听到这个消息后,他脸上蒙上了一层阴云。
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17.珍妮眼里含着泪水，恳求我帮他。
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18.我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。言语无法表达我的哀伤。
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三、情感表达片段运用
请运用以上必备单词或高频语块，把下面的语篇补充完整。
I was selected to represent my school in the approaching contest this year. But I was so proud that I neglected the importance of practicing for the contest. On the day of the contest, I began to lose confidence in myself and suffered from stage fright. In the end I walked off the stage, 1 _ (眼里饱含泪水). Finally, results were announced after the contest. I did not win any prizes. I bit my bottom lip 2 (心里充满悲伤). I dragged my heavy legs 3 _ (心情沉重) and moved out of the lecture hall. 4 _(我伤心地垂着头，巨大的悲伤笼罩着我的双眼). On entering the classroom, 5 _ (悲伤如潮涌，泪水从脸颊滑落). The next following days, I felt like she was 6 . (我感觉正漂浮在悲伤的海洋里), not wanting to do anything.
四、情感表达语篇运用
1.（2023上·贵州·高三校联考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I had a younger sister, Michelle. But as a big brother, I rarely cared for her.
On a Sunday in March when I was 8, Easter (复活节) came. As usual, my sister and I would search for the hidden baskets full of candy and other things prepared for us. On that Easter morning, I got up early.
“Michelle!” I whispered to my sister, who was still sleeping in her bedroom. “Wake up. It’s Easter. We have to go and find our baskets.” She rolled over in bed and finally got up. “Mom and Dad are still sleeping,” I warned her as we walked out into the kitchen. “If we’re quiet, we can find our baskets without waking them up.”
It didn’t take long for me to find my basket, which had candy, toys, etc. This basket was obviously mine because it contained the latest issue of my favorite magazine. My sister continued searching in every room while I dropped my basket off at the kitchen table and started separating candy into different categories. 20 minutes later, my sister told me, “I can’t find it. I looked all over. Can you help me ” I decided to help her not because I felt sorry for her, but because I thought it was fun to find the missing basket.
We started searching through the cabinets (贮藏柜). Later, our parents were awake. Dad headed straight for the bathroom, while Mom walked out to make coffee. “Mom, I’ve found my basket,” I told her. She smiled and asked, “Where’s yours, Michelle ”
That’s when my six-year-old sister started to cry. “Let’s keep looking,” Mom said, taking hold of my sister’s hand. After searching the living room they went to the closet (贮藏室). There Michelle finally found her basket. But when she picked up her basket, we found everything in it had all been bitten and damaged by mice.
注意：
1．续写词数应为150左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Michelle dropped her basket on the floor, looking upset.
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Then I walked slowly into my sister’s room with my basket.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者虽然是哥哥，但是很少关心自己的妹妹Michelle。在作者八岁那年的复活节，作者早早地起床，叫醒妹妹，两人一同寻找为他们准备的隐藏的礼物。作者很快找到了属于自己的礼物，开心地整理里面的糖果，但是妹妹一直没有找到，在妹妹的请求下，作者开始帮助妹妹找她的礼物。后来，妈妈也来帮妹妹找礼物，最终找到的时候，大家却发现礼物篮子空了，里面的东西都被老鼠破坏了。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Michelle把篮子扔在地上，看上去很沮丧”可知，第一段可描写作者作为哥哥内心挣扎是否用自己的礼物篮子来安慰沮丧的妹妹，以及作者最终做出决定。
②由第二段首句内容“然后我提着我的篮子慢慢地走进妹妹的房间”可知，第二段可描写作者作为哥哥安慰妹妹，分享自己的礼物篮子，以及看到妹妹开心起来后作者的感悟。
2. 续写线索：Michelle很沮丧——作者内心挣扎——作者做出决定——作者进入妹妹的房间——作者分享礼物——作者的感悟
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①奔：rush/run/dash
②感觉到：feel/perceive/sense
③决定：decide/make a decision/make a choice
④认识到：learn/understand/realize/be aware of
情绪类
①难过：sorrow/sadness/unhappiness
②高兴的：cheerful/joyous/happy/joyful
【点睛】[高分句型1] On the other hand, I could feel my sister’s sorrow when I put myself in her shoes. (when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Having struggled for a while, I decided to cheer her up by sharing what I had with her. (现在分词短语Having struggled…作状语、what引导宾语从句)
2.（2023上·山东·高三山东省实验中学校考阶段练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was in college, I experienced a very challenging time. Not only was I dealing with the difficulties of academic life, but I was also struggling with financial hardship. I was so poor that I often found myself without food. There were days when I would wake up with just a few coins in my pocket, and those coins were usually just enough to buy four loaves of bread. After that, I would have no idea where my next meal would come from.
I was desperate to find a way to make money and decided to try my luck applying for a part-time job. I spent hours reading the newspaper, searching for job advertisements, but in vain.
Despite all these difficulties, I didn’t want to give up hope. I knew that if I kept pushing and refused to quit, I would eventually find a solution to my problems. So I stuck to looking for more opportunities to earn a living. But no matter how hard I tried, I couldn’t land a single interview. The more I tried to get a job, the more depressed and hopeless I felt.
One day, while making phone calls to apply for yet another job, I noticed someone else waiting behind me for the pay phone. He seemed kind of impatient, pacing back and forth with his hands behind his back. Ignoring him, I continued to try calling several times but I couldn’t get through somehow.
After a while, he cleared his throat and said coldly, “Other people have to use the phone, too, you know.” It was a simple statement, but it was enough to push me over the edge. I turned to this stranger and shouted, “See this bag on the floor That has all my food in it! I don’t have a phone at home to call from! I’m sorry if your cell phone is broken, but whatever call you have to make is less important than my trying to come up with tomorrow’s meal!”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I turned back and tried to hold back my tears.
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Putting a five-dollar bill in my hand, he left.
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【导语】本文以人物为线索。作者在上大学的时候，经历了一段非常具有挑战性的时期。作者没钱买饭，所以想要找一份兼职。但无论作者如何努力，他仍然找不到工作。一天在电话亭打电话的时候，作者尝试了好几次都打不通电话，电话亭外的一个男人非常不耐烦地催促作者。作者情绪失控了，而那位男子看到这一幕，为自己的话感到抱歉，于是他安慰了作者，并给了作者5美元。作者看到还有人会关心自己，于是对未来又重新充满信心。
【详解】1. 续写线索：
由续写第一段首句“我转过身来，强忍着泪水。”和第二段首句“他把一张五美元的钞票放在我手里，就走了。”可知，第一段可以描写作者情绪崩溃，感慨自己的不幸，而这位男子安慰并鼓励了作者。
由续写第二段首句“他把一张五美元的钞票放在我手里，就走了。”可知，第二段可以描写作者发现竟然还有陌生人关心自己，又重新对未来充满信心。
2. 段落续写：强忍泪水——失控痛哭——男子转变态度——男子鼓励作者——男子给作者钱——作者惊讶于有人会关心自己——作者心态转变——作者重新对未来充满信心
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①崩溃：break down/collapse/fall apart
②代替：replace/take the place of/ substitute for
③对……表示同情：express sympathy for/give sb. sympathy/sympathize with
情绪类
①悲伤的：sad/ mournful/ sorrowful
②震惊的：shocked/surprised/ stunned
③乐观的：positive/optimistic
【点睛】【高分句型1】But I was so sad that I broke down, failing to make it.(使用了so…that…引导结果状语从句、现在分词作状语、不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】I had never thought somebody would express sympathy for me and encourage me to keep trying. (使用了省略that的宾语从句、不定式作宾补和动名词作宾语)
