2024届高考英语读后续写专题：with复合结构
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技能精讲-- with复合结构 小结构 大作用
一、with复合结构（with + 宾语+补足语）思维导图
with复合结构,在句中常作定语或状语(表伴随、时间、原因、方式)，位于句首或句末。其中with是介词，宾语由名词或代词构成。宾语补足语由现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词、副词或介词短语构成。
二、with复合结构（with + 宾语+补足语）高频用法
1.with +宾语+副词
The boy stood there with his head down. 这个男孩低头站在那儿。
She fell asleep with all the lights on. 她睡着了，所有的灯都还亮着。
2. with +宾语+形容词
With the door and windows open wide, the room was very cold.门窗大开，屋内很冷。
With his eyes red and swollen, he looked like he had been crying all night.
他的眼睛红肿，看起来好像哭了一整夜。
3.with +宾语+介词短语
With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf.
一只手放在车把上，他向那匹狼喷射了喷雾。
With a book in his hand, he waited patiently for the library to open.
手里拿着一本书，他耐心地等待图书馆开门。
4.with +宾语+名词
They set up a football team, with Tom their head. 他们建立了一支足球队，汤姆当队长。
With a native our guide, we needn't be afraid to get lost.有本地人当向导，我们不必担心会迷路。
5.with+宾语+现在分词(主谓关系)
With tears welling up in his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
泪水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虚弱的声音表达了感激！
She bent down to give him a hug, with tears of happiness rolling down her cheeks.
妈妈弯下腰给了他一个拥抱，幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊滚落下来。
With the audience clapping enthusiastically, the performers took their final bow.
观众热情地鼓掌，表演者们鞠躬致谢。
6.with +宾语+过去分词(动宾关系)
With the day's tasks completed, she felt a sense of accomplishment.
一天的任务完成了，她感到一种成就感。
With the last rays of sunlight faded, he watched the evening sky, painted with the soft brush of twilight.
随着最后一缕阳光消失，他凝望着夜空，被暮光柔和的笔触所描绘。
7.with+宾语+不定式(将要发生)
With her to go with us, we're sure to have a pleasant journey.
有她和我们一起去，我们的旅途一定会很愉快。
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time.
无路可循，Jane只是走了很长时间。
真题精选—体验高考真题 感悟丰富语言魅力
1. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) 玛雅就在水箱边，嘴里叼着梳子，等着奖赏呢。
There was Maya at the edge of the tank with a comb in her mouth waiting for her treat.
2. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) “我知道她是从哪里弄来的，”希尔达说着，从水箱里爬出来，手里拿着几件还湿着的东西。
“I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank with a handful of items still wet from their watery, resting place.
3. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) 水花四溅，希尔达来不及躲避，几乎睁不开眼睛。
With water splashing, Hilda was too late to dodge, making it hard to keep eyes open.
4. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 很快伊娃开始用力呼吸，心跳加速，双腿颤抖。
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking.
5. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 凝视着高耸的教学楼，伊娃想出了一个好主意，脸上绽放着笑容。
Staring at the towering teaching building, Eva came up with a good idea, with a smile blooming across her face.
6. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 随着时间的流逝，伊娃最终在完成一英里跑步的过程中熟悉了这个巨大的迷宫。
With time ticking away, Eva eventually got familiar with the vast maze in the way she finished the one-mile run.
7. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 泪水几乎模糊了我的视线，我给了他一个大大的拥抱。
With tears almost blurring my vision, I gave him a big hug.
8. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) “祝贺你！”我的老师骄傲地说，眼里噙满了泪水。
"Congratulations!" my teacher said, with pride and tears filling his eyes.
9. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 当我进去的时候，他抬起头来微笑，他的眼睛反映出他对我的成就感到骄傲。When I entered, he looked up and smiled, with his eyes reflecting his pride in my achievement.
10. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)有人叫我去参加写作比赛的颁奖典礼，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
I was told to attend the award presentation for the writing contest, with my jaw dropping in astonishment.
11. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 我一手拿着奖杯，一手拿着奖状，眼睛投向老师，老师竖起大拇指，眼里闪烁着喜悦和骄傲。
With prize cup in one hand and award certificate in the other hand, I threw my eyes at my teacher, who gave me a thumbs up, with his eyes twinkling with pleasure and pride.
12. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)这只鸟似乎想引起我的注意，它那双圆睁的眼睛盯着我。
It seemed as if the bird was trying to capture my attention, with its beady eyes settling on mine.
13. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)我转过身来，看到同一只蜂鸟在空中盘旋，它小小的翅膀飞快地拍打着。
I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air, with its tiny wings beating rapidly.
14. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫双脚向前摆动，小小的身体左右摆动。
David swung his feet forward, with his small body rocking from side to side.
15. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫听了这话，既惊讶又感动，泪流满面。
Hearing this, David looked surprised and moved, with tears rolling down his face.
16. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)在空中响起的鼓励声中，大卫以他独特的跑步风格一次又一次地尝试。
With the encouragement ringing in the air, David attempted again and again with his unique running style.
17. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)父亲吓了一跳，倒在地上，皱着眉头望着现场。
Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with his eyebrow frowning.
18. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。
With everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
19. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)母亲热泪盈眶，紧紧地搂着他们。
With tears welling up in her eyes, the mother threw her arms around them tightly.
20. (2020新高考I卷读后续写)一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新事业。
With everything ready, Bernard started out on his new business.
技能精炼—传递真情实感 提升语言表达效果
一、完成下列各句（用with复合结构）
1.我热泪盈眶,冲出公寓,沿着街道跑。
_____________________________________, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.
2.珍妮愣住了,一种激动的表情扭曲着她的脸。
Jenny froze there, _____________________________________
3.一见到汤姆,简就立刻拥抱住了她的丈夫,眼睛里充满了喜悦
On seeing Tom, Jane immediately hugged her husband, _____________________________________.
4.珍妮手里拿着真品项链，抬起嘴唇，泪水开始模糊她的视线。
Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, ________________________________.
5.他留着眼泪接过蛋糕，然后用那块破旧的大手帕擦擦眼泪。
________________________________, he accepted it and wiped the tears with his large torn handkerchief.
1. With tears welling up in my eyes
2. with a thrilled expression twisting her face
3. with his eyes full of pleasure
4. with tears beginning to blur the vision
5. With tears rolling down his cheeks
二、翻译下列各句（用with复合结构）
1.泪水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虚弱的声音表达了感激！
1.With tears welling up in his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
2. “祝贺你！”我的老师骄傲地说，眼里噙满了泪水。
2."Congratulations!" my teacher said, with pride and tears filling his eyes.
3.有人叫我去参加写作比赛的颁奖典礼，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
3.I was told to attend the award presentation for the writing contest, with my jaw dropping in astonishment.
4.一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。
4.With everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
5.往事一幕幕涌上心头，儿子悲伤不已。
5.With the scenes of the past welling up in his mind. the son was overwhelmed by grief.
6.任务完成后，他带着满足感坐了下来。
6. With the task completed, he sat back with a sense of satisfaction.
7.在朋友们的大声加油下，她克服了恐惧，完成了比赛。
7. With her friends cheering loudly, she conquered her fear and finished the race.
8.嘴角挂着微笑，她勇敢地面对未来的挑战。
8. With a smile on her lips, she bravely faced the challenges ahead.
9.花朵在她周围绽放，她感觉自己像是在一个神奇的花园中的仙女。
9. With the flowers blooming around her, she felt like a fairy in a magical garden.
1老师站起来为他出色的表演鼓掌，他脸上露出了满意的神情。
10. With the teachers applauding for his impressive performance, his face lit up with satisfaction.
三、续写片段运用（用with复合结构）
心理描写之感动
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passerby pushed him to safety. With tears of gratitude
rolling down his cheeks _____________________________(感激的泪水顺着脸颊滚落), Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” It was very moving to see how much strangers could care for each other. He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped violently. Later, knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
心理描写之紧张
Upon entering the big hall, she found there were a huge number of audience waiting for their performance. Suddenly, nervousness came flooding over her. She stepped forward, with her face white and nervous, and her legs trembling_____________________________(脸色苍白，神经紧张，双腿颤抖). She tried to hide her nervousness, but she could feel her heart thump, thump, thump; and the painful beats choked her and made her feel faint. Finally she made it to the front. Breathing deeply, she tried to calm herself down, _____________________________(她大脑一片空白) with her mind going blank. Therefore, she reached to grab her partner's hand, only to find her freezing fingers sweating and trembling.
模拟精编—好题优中选优 夯实技能举一反三
1．（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl, who is chubby and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got ready, I could hear icy rain pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all.
That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl had been staying with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C． Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents’ house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident “realistic”, which mean the spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes. Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do with a little more faith!
Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited.
How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-Girl’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found.
“Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone too long. You’re not going to find her.”
“Well, I just have a feeling,” I said
Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
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Shortly after, my shocked Dad drove us back home.
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【答案】
We were led to the room where the abandoned cat lived. I tiptoed into the room with a strong feeling of anticipation. Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly. My eyes zeroed in on a little cat caged in the corner. She was skinnier than I remember, but it was my Baby-Girl all right! Overwhelmed with extreme excitement and delight, I opened the cage door. Baby-Girl practically jumped into my arms. I held her close, with my eye swelling up tears, as my Dad looked on, with his jaw dropping wide with shock.
Soon after, my shocked Dad drove us back home. The instant we dropped Baby-Girl off, freeing her from the carrier, she immediately dashed to the hearth, seeking her favourite spot. On seeing this scene, we all roared with laughter, signaling that my Dad’s doubts were removed as well. Against all odds, my cat was home again, right before Christmas. It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. As for my dear father who always support me, it turned out that Baby-Girl’s return made him a man of a believer.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者寻找失踪猫咪Baby-Gir的经历。在圣诞节前夜，作者醒来时决心要找到失踪的猫咪，相信它仍在暴风雨中的某个地方。虽然已经过去了几周，但作者仍然有信心。在之前的探访中，作者和父亲一起寻找Baby-Girl。但父亲是一个“现实主义者”，他试图让作者为最坏的情况做好
准备。作者深信，如果有任何一只猫咪能够完成不可能的任务，那就是她的Baby-Girl。尽管作者未能在动物收容所中找到她，但她仍然相信她们将有一天能与所爱的宠物重聚。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们被带到了被遗弃的猫住的房间。”可知，第一段可描写作者进入一所房子，听到了熟悉的猫叫声，找到了她的Baby-Girl
②由第二段首句内容“不久之后，我震惊的爸爸开车送我们回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者和父亲一起把猫咪带回家，猫咪非常开心，作者心中充满感激。
2.续写线索：走进房间——听到猫叫声——找到猫咪——喜悦——回家——开心——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①吸引：absorbed/captivated/engrossed/immersed
②专注于：zeroed in on/focused/concentrated/fixed
③冲向：dashed/rushed/sprinted/bolted
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill/exhilaration/elation
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness/appreciation/indebtedness
【点睛】[高分句型1]Out of nowhere, I heard a familiar meow, which absorbed my prompt attention suddenly.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] It was such a miracle that my heart was filled with gratitude, feeling blessed with Baby-Girl’s long-awaited companion. (运用了such…that引导的结果状语从句)
2．（2024·山东·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My political career in the Student Union(SU)began by throwing frisbees (飞盘) on the campus lawn. I would throw a frisbee to someone I didn’t know and they would throw it to someone they didn’t know. Before long, we had built a community of people who met every day at lunch to throw frisbees.
Besides frisbees, the group decided to climb the mountain near our campus. When we reached the peak, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes.It was totally fun. While playing like little children in the cool mountain air, we all decided to do it again the following week. Our motto (座右铭) was “Bring a Friend” . We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased.We made it a rule to climb the mountain every weekend. All of us were passionate about the fantastic experience, which we were looking forward to.
One day on campus, I decided to throw my frisbee to some strangers, run over and invite them to climb the mountain. Much to my surprise, a girl sitting in a wheelchair got hold of it. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain.She said she hadn’t. Holding the wheelchair tightly, she hung down her head in awkward silence. Then she told me that she had suffered from lung disease when she was young and depended on oxygen twenty-four hours a day. So, it was impossible for her to move without help. Fortunately, things got better.
With continuous efforts and treatment, she managed to live on her own with the assistance of the wheelchair: I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. On hearing what I said, she refused without hesitation, adding that it would be a bother to carry her. But I tried my best to persuade her to come along with us by talking about the interesting experiences.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer.
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On the downhilt path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election.
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【答案】
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer. Looking at her depressed and embarrassed expression, I didn’t want to quit persuading her. I showed her some pictures that were taken during our trip. She smiled, with her eyes sparkling with excitement. Ultimately, I made it. On that appointed day, I, together with several friends, offered continuous assistance to her. With our joint efforts, we made it to the top of the mountain and admired the fantastic scenery. A sense of excitement took hold of her, with tears rolling down her cheeks like broken pearls. She was so grateful to us and we became close friends.
On the downhill path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election. However, I didn’t have enough courage to run for it. Knowing I was in a dilemma, Grace had a sincere communication with me. “So kind and friendly are you that you helped me to enjoy the beautiful scenery and plan the weekend activity carefully. I am firmly convinced that you are capable of the work in the SU,” she said in a gentle voice. Inspired by her encouragement, I made a resolution to have a try. Having made full preparations, I was chosen chairman of the SU, which was beyond my expectations. Indeed, it is the mutual trust and help between friends that do make a great difference to us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，本文讲述了主人公和格蕾丝之间的友谊故事。格蕾丝因年轻时患肺病而需要使用轮椅，但在主人公和朋友的帮助下，克服了困难并一起登上了山顶，享受了美丽的风景。在下山的路上，格蕾丝鼓励主人公参加学生会选举，并最终成功当选主席。文章表达了友谊和互相帮助的重要性。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“想了一会儿，格蕾丝还是拒绝了我的提议。”可知，第一段可描写作者从一开始的失望到格蕾丝最终答应接受我们提供帮助的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在下坡路上，格蕾丝问我为什么不参加学生会的选举。”可知，第二段可描写作者在格蕾丝的鼓励下，最终成功被选为学生会主席。
2.续写线索：拒绝了我的提议——不想放弃说服——最终答应接受帮助——成为好朋友——建议作者参加选举——成功当选
3.词汇激活
行为类
①放弃：quit /give up
②提供：offered /provided
③欣赏：admire/ appreciate
情绪类
①尴尬的：embarrassed / awkward
②感激的：grateful / thankful/ appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking at her depressed and embarrassed expression, I didn’t want to quit persuading her.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
[高分句型2] Having made full preparations, I was chosen chairman of the SU, which was beyond my expectations.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
3．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. “Can’t wait for that camping trip,” Kevin thought, filled with excitement. As he was leaving home, his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, “Before you go, just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay.”
“But dad!” Kevin complained.
“No buts!” Kevin’s dad added.
“Fine.” Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends, Kevin, Jay and Nathan, had been planning this adventure for weeks, packing their stuff-tents, snacks, and a map-preparing for a 3-day outdoor exploration. Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. “This trip is going to be awesome, ” Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off. But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great, setting up tents, collecting firewood, and sharing stories. “Man, we nailed these tents, ” Kevin said. “I know it was easy really,” Nathan replied. The friends were happy.
Yet towards night, as the dark clouds gathered overhead, the atmosphere shifted, and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger. Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall, transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground. Worse still, a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape - their car. Kevin’s eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. “Our car!” he screamed over the howling wind, his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. “We’re stuck here,” he declared, his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops. They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control. The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield, the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.
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Paragraph 2: On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.
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【答案】
The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. The search for water soon drained their energy. They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort. They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream-a lifeline in all the challenges. However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged -limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild. Their nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.
On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness. Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle. Kevin’s dad stepped out to meet the group. The emotions that played across their faces-disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy- mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. Back home, Kevin’s dad said, “Good thing you told me those directions,” teaching them the importance of informing someone about plans. The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience, embedded in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。凯文和朋友杰伊和内森要去露营，在爸爸的追问下告诉爸爸方向，然后离开了。然而，夜幕降临时，一场突如其来的风暴带着无情的愤怒爆发了。一棵大树，轰然倒下，击中了他们唯一的逃生工具——他们的汽车。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量粗暴地破坏了。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“第二天，他们发现自己面临着寻找水的紧迫问题。”可知，第一段可以描写他们寻找水的艰难过程和面临的其它挑战。
②由第二段句首内容“当他们看到一辆粗犷的车辆驶近时，疲惫的脸上顿时松了一口气。”可知，第二段可以描写他们获救的过程和感悟。
2.续写线索：面临缺水—寻找水源—找到—看到汽车—获救—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①使耗尽：drain/exhaust
②放弃：give up/waive
③出现：emerge/appear
情绪类
①可怕的：frightful/terrifying
②疲倦的：weary/tired
【点睛】【高分句型1】They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort.( 运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged -limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.( 运用了with time passing by的with复合结构)
【高分句型3】The emotions that played across their faces - disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy- mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. (运用了that引导的定语从句)2024届高考英语读后续写专题：with复合结构
解析版
微技能目录
技能精讲 P1
真题精选 P3
技能精炼 P4
模拟精编 P6
技能精讲-- with复合结构 小结构 大作用
一、with复合结构（with + 宾语+补足语）思维导图
with复合结构,在句中常作定语或状语(表伴随、时间、原因、方式)，位于句首或句末。其中with是介词，宾语由名词或代词构成。宾语补足语由现在分词、过去分词、不定式、形容词、副词或介词短语构成。
二、with复合结构（with + 宾语+补足语）高频用法
1.with +宾语+副词
The boy stood there with his head down. 这个男孩低头站在那儿。
She fell asleep with all the lights on. 她睡着了，所有的灯都还亮着。
2. with +宾语+形容词
With the door and windows open wide, the room was very cold.门窗大开，屋内很冷。
With his eyes red and swollen, he looked like he had been crying all night.
他的眼睛红肿，看起来好像哭了一整夜。
3.with +宾语+介词短语
With one hand on the bars, he fired the spray at the wolf.
一只手放在车把上，他向那匹狼喷射了喷雾。
With a book in his hand, he waited patiently for the library to open.
手里拿着一本书，他耐心地等待图书馆开门。
4.with +宾语+名词
They set up a football team, with Tom their head. 他们建立了一支足球队，汤姆当队长。
With a native our guide, we needn't be afraid to get lost.有本地人当向导，我们不必担心会迷路。
5.with+宾语+现在分词(主谓关系)
With tears welling up in his eyes, Richard expressed his gratitude in a weak voice.
泪水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虚弱的声音表达了感激！
She bent down to give him a hug, with tears of happiness rolling down her cheeks.
妈妈弯下腰给了他一个拥抱，幸福的泪水顺着她的脸颊滚落下来。
With the audience clapping enthusiastically, the performers took their final bow.
观众热情地鼓掌，表演者们鞠躬致谢。
6.with +宾语+过去分词(动宾关系)
With the day's tasks completed, she felt a sense of accomplishment.
一天的任务完成了，她感到一种成就感。
With the last rays of sunlight faded, he watched the evening sky, painted with the soft brush of twilight.
随着最后一缕阳光消失，他凝望着夜空，被暮光柔和的笔触所描绘。
7.with+宾语+不定式(将要发生)
With her to go with us, we're sure to have a pleasant journey.
有她和我们一起去，我们的旅途一定会很愉快。
With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time.
无路可循，Jane只是走了很长时间。
真题精选—体验高考真题 感悟丰富语言魅力
1. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) 玛雅就在水箱边，嘴里叼着梳子，等着奖赏呢。
There was Maya at the edge of the tank _________________________waiting for her treat.
2. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) “我知道她是从哪里弄来的，”希尔达说着，从水箱里爬出来，手里拿着几件还湿着的东西。
“I know where she got it,” declared Hilda climbing out of the tank _________________________from their watery, resting place.
3. (2024九省联考卷读后续写) 水花四溅，希尔达来不及躲避，几乎睁不开眼睛。
_________________________ Hilda was too late to dodge, making it hard to keep eyes open.
4. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 很快伊娃开始用力呼吸，心跳加速，双腿颤抖。
Soon Eva began to breathe hard, _________________________.
5. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 凝视着高耸的教学楼，伊娃想出了一个好主意，脸上绽放着笑容。
Staring at the towering teaching building, Eva came up with a good idea, _________________________.
6. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写) 随着时间的流逝，伊娃最终在完成一英里跑步的过程中熟悉了这个巨大的迷宫。
_________________________, Eva eventually got familiar with the vast maze in the way she finished the one-mile run.
7. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 泪水几乎模糊了我的视线，我给了他一个大大的拥抱。
_________________________, I gave him a big hug.
8. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) “祝贺你！”我的老师骄傲地说，眼里噙满了泪水。
"Congratulations!" my teacher said, _________________________.
9. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 当我进去的时候，他抬起头来微笑，他的眼睛反映出他对我的成就感到骄傲。When I entered, he looked up and smiled, _________________________ in my achievement.
10. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)有人叫我去参加写作比赛的颁奖典礼，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
I was told to attend the award presentation for the writing contest, _________________________.
11. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 我一手拿着奖杯，一手拿着奖状，眼睛投向老师，老师竖起大拇指，眼里闪烁着喜悦和骄傲。
__________________________________________________, I threw my eyes at my teacher, who gave me a thumbs up, with his eyes twinkling with pleasure and pride.
12. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)这只鸟似乎想引起我的注意，它那双圆睁的眼睛盯着我。
It seemed as if the bird was trying to capture my attention, _________________________.
13. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)我转过身来，看到同一只蜂鸟在空中盘旋，它小小的翅膀飞快地拍打着。
I turned around to see the same hummingbird hovering in the air, _________________________.
14. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫双脚向前摆动，小小的身体左右摆动。
David swung his feet forward, _________________________.
15. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫听了这话，既惊讶又感动，泪流满面。
Hearing this, David looked surprised and moved, _________________________.
16. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)在空中响起的鼓励声中，大卫以他独特的跑步风格一次又一次地尝试。
_________________________, David attempted again and again with his unique running style.
17. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)父亲吓了一跳，倒在地上，皱着眉头望着现场。
Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene _________________________.
18. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。
_________________________, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
19. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)母亲热泪盈眶，紧紧地搂着他们。
_________________________, the mother threw her arms around them tightly.
20. (2020新高考I卷读后续写)一切准备就绪后，伯纳德开始了他的新事业。
_________________________, Bernard started out on his new business.
技能精炼—传递真情实感 提升语言表达效果
一、完成下列各句（用with复合结构）
1.我热泪盈眶,冲出公寓,沿着街道跑。
_____________________________________, I rushed out of the flat and ran along the street.
2.珍妮愣住了,一种激动的表情扭曲着她的脸。
Jenny froze there, _____________________________________
3.一见到汤姆,简就立刻拥抱住了她的丈夫,眼睛里充满了喜悦
On seeing Tom, Jane immediately hugged her husband, _____________________________________.
4.珍妮手里拿着真品项链，抬起嘴唇，泪水开始模糊她的视线。
Holding the genuine necklace in her hand, Jenny lifted her lip, ________________________________.
5.他留着眼泪接过蛋糕，然后用那块破旧的大手帕擦擦眼泪。
________________________________, he accepted it and wiped the tears with his large torn handkerchief.
二、翻译下列各句（用with复合结构）
1.泪水涌上理查德的眼睛，他用虚弱的声音表达了感激！
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2. “祝贺你！”我的老师骄傲地说，眼里噙满了泪水。
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3.有人叫我去参加写作比赛的颁奖典礼，我惊讶得目瞪口呆。
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4.一切都解决了，父亲离开了厨房，答应保守他们的秘密。
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5.往事一幕幕涌上心头，儿子悲伤不已。
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6.任务完成后，他带着满足感坐了下来。
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7.在朋友们的大声加油下，她克服了恐惧，完成了比赛。
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8.嘴角挂着微笑，她勇敢地面对未来的挑战。
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9.花朵在她周围绽放，她感觉自己像是在一个神奇的花园中的仙女。
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10.老师站起来为他出色的表演鼓掌，他脸上露出了满意的神情。
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三、续写片段运用（用with复合结构）
心理描写之感动
Peter was nearly knocking into a passing car when a passerby pushed him to safety. _____________________________(感激的泪水顺着脸颊滚落), Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.” It was very moving to see how much strangers could care for each other. He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy. Touched deeply, the crowd clapped violently. Later, knowing what had happened, his mother shed tears of joy and gratitude.
心理描写之紧张
Upon entering the big hall, she found there were a huge number of audience waiting for their performance. Suddenly, nervousness came flooding over her. She stepped forward, ____________________________(脸色苍白，神经紧张，双腿颤抖). She tried to hide her nervousness, but she could feel her heart thump, thump, thump; and the painful beats choked her and made her feel faint. Finally she made it to the front. Breathing deeply, she tried to calm herself down, _____________________________(她大脑一片空白). Therefore, she reached to grab her partner's hand, only to find her freezing fingers sweating and trembling.
模拟精编—好题优中选优 夯实技能举一反三
1．（2024·江西鹰潭·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Making of a Believer
It was Christmas Eve morning, and I awoke with a mission: to find my lost cat, Baby-Girl, who is chubby and cute, fond of sitting in her one-and-only spot near the nearth (壁炉). AS I got ready, I could hear icy rain pouring down. I said a quick prayer for Baby-Girl. She was out there somewhere in the storm, I could just feel it. Sure, it had been six months since she’d gone missing, but I still had faith. It was the season for miracles, after all.
That summer, my sweet cat had disappeared from my parents’ house in Indiana. Baby-Girl had been staying with them. At the time, I lived and worked in Washington, D．C． Baby-Girl had gotten out of my parents’ house three days before I was set to fly back home to pick her up.
My dad and I spent that entire visit searching for her. Dad was the family’s resident “realistic”, which mean the spent a whole lot of time trying to prepare me for the worst. She’s either been hit by a car or been taken in by someone who found her” he said. I rolled my eyes. Dad always supported me, but he was so skepticat. He could do with a little more faith!
Besides, though I couldn’t explain it, I knew I’d see her Baby-Girl again. If any cat could do the impossible, it was my Baby-Girl. Even after T returned to D．C． without her and the weeks stretched into months, deep down I had this feeling that we’d be reunited.
How, home again for the holidays, I was de tem mined to pick up my search. I grabbed Baby-Girl’s cat carrier and loaded it into the car, then persuaded Dad to drive me to the shelter, hoping she’d been found.
“Sharon, you have to be realistic,” my dad said as we headed to the garage. “She’s been gone too long. You’re not going to find her.”
“Well, I just have a feeling,” I said
Dad raised an eyebrow a she climbed into the driver’s seat to take me to the shelter.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We were led to the room where the abandoned cats lived.
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Shortly after, my shocked Dad drove us back home.
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2．（2024·山东·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My political career in the Student Union(SU)began by throwing frisbees (飞盘) on the campus lawn. I would throw a frisbee to someone I didn’t know and they would throw it to someone they didn’t know. Before long, we had built a community of people who met every day at lunch to throw frisbees.
Besides frisbees, the group decided to climb the mountain near our campus. When we reached the peak, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes.It was totally fun. While playing like little children in the cool mountain air, we all decided to do it again the following week. Our motto (座右铭) was “Bring a Friend” . We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased.We made it a rule to climb the mountain every weekend. All of us were passionate about the fantastic experience, which we were looking forward to.
One day on campus, I decided to throw my frisbee to some strangers, run over and invite them to climb the mountain. Much to my surprise, a girl sitting in a wheelchair got hold of it. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain.She said she hadn’t. Holding the wheelchair tightly, she hung down her head in awkward silence. Then she told me that she had suffered from lung disease when she was young and depended on oxygen twenty-four hours a day. So, it was impossible for her to move without help. Fortunately, things got better.
With continuous efforts and treatment, she managed to live on her own with the assistance of the wheelchair: I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. On hearing what I said, she refused without hesitation, adding that it would be a bother to carry her. But I tried my best to persuade her to come along with us by talking about the interesting experiences.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer.
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On the downhilt path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election.
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3．（2024·浙江绍兴·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. “Can’t wait for that camping trip,” Kevin thought, filled with excitement. As he was leaving home, his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, “Before you go, just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay.”
“But dad!” Kevin complained.
“No buts!” Kevin’s dad added.
“Fine.” Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends, Kevin, Jay and Nathan, had been planning this adventure for weeks, packing their stuff-tents, snacks, and a map-preparing for a 3-day outdoor exploration. Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. “This trip is going to be awesome, ” Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off. But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great, setting up tents, collecting firewood, and sharing stories. “Man, we nailed these tents, ” Kevin said. “I know it was easy really,” Nathan replied. The friends were happy.
Yet towards night, as the dark clouds gathered overhead, the atmosphere shifted, and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger. Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall, transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground. Worse still, a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape - their car. Kevin’s eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage
beneath the fallen giant. “Our car!” he screamed over the howling wind, his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. “We’re stuck here,” he declared, his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops. They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control. The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield, the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.
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Paragraph 2: On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness.
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