2024届高考英语读后续写之无灵主语运用（2）
解析版
技能精讲—无灵主语五大句式 语言更生动
第一类公式：主语(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb
变式：A wave(flush/surge/burst…) of+(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb
Sorrow seized her at the thought that her efforts might be in vain.
一想到自己的努力可能会白费，她就感到悲伤。
A sense of despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.
突然感到一阵绝望，我倒在门口，啜泣起来。《简爱》
When I heard the approach of the writing contest, a wave of nervousness overwhelmed me.
当我听到写作比赛的临近时，一阵紧张使我不知所措。
第二类公式：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+sb
Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
Tears of gratitude blurred her eyes.
感激的泪水模糊了她的视线。
Her face lit up when I gave her the little present.
当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.
我给她小礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。
When l realized that my diligent efforts had been rewarded, tears welled up in my eyes.
当我意识到我的勤奋努力得到了回报时，泪水夺眶而出。
第三类公式：主语（表示时间和地点的名词）+有灵动词+sb
Spring finds a beautiful sunny countryside.
春天，乡村阳光灿烂，风景优美。
Dusk found the boy crying on the street.
黄昏时，男孩在大街上哭着。
The past decades have witnessed the rapid development of online news media.
过去几十年间，网络新闻媒体发展迅速。
第四类公式：主语（表示自然现象的名词）+有灵动词+sb
A snowstorm hit the West today, bringing with it low temperatures.
一场暴风雪今天袭击西部地区，带来了严寒低温。
The heavy rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
大雨使游客无法欣赏满月。
The gentle breeze stroked his head, as if comforting all his tiredness.
微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。
第五类公式：主语（表示思考动作行为的名词）+有灵动词+sb
A brilliant idea suddenly popped into my mind.
我突然想到了一个绝妙的主意。
The sight of the picture reminds me of the unforgettable trip to Hangzhou.
一看到这张照片我就想到了难忘的杭州之行。
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。
专注于读书让他忘记了时间。
Being absorbed in books made him forget the time.
他重游故居，不禁回忆起许多美好的回忆。
A visit to the places where he had lived brought back many fond memories.
真题精选—体验高考真题 感悟丰富语言魅力
1. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)然而，当我一整天都没能见到这个可爱的生物时，一股悲伤的涟漪涌上了我的心头。
1.However, a ripple of sadness surged through me when failing to see the lovely creature the whole day.
2. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫成功冲过终点线时，全场爆发出阵阵欢呼和掌声。
2.A wave of cheer and applause burst out when David succeeded in crossing the finish line.
3. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)但我们都为他感到骄傲，每个人脸上的笑容照亮了整个世界！
3.But all of us were proud of him and the smile on everyone’s face lit up the whole world!
4. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)他不寻常的左右摇摆方式使他在跑步者中与众不同，但没有人嘲笑他。
4.His unusual way of rocking from side to side made him unusual among the runners, yet nobody laughed at him.
5. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)当她看到早餐时，眼睛睁大了，兴奋得闪闪发光。
5. When she saw the breakfast, her eyes widened up and twinkled with excitement.
6. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)言语无法表达我的感受。我只是用一个大大的拥抱向他表示祝贺。
6.Words failed to convey my feeling. I just congratulated him with a big hug.
7. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)枪响的那一刻，所有的赛跑运动员都以迅雷不及掩耳之势向前冲去。
7.The moment the gun fired, all the runners shot forwards with a flash of speed.
8. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)如释重负的泪水像一条断了的珍珠项链一样滚落下来。
8. Tears of relief rolled down like a broken pearl necklace.
9. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)食物的香味弥漫在卧室里，仿佛变了魔法，卧室变成了世界上最可爱的地方。
9. The scent of the food filled the bedroom, which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world.
10.(2021新高考I卷读后续写)整个上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的温暖中，度过了一段幸福的时光。
10. That whole morning witnessed a happy time with everyone bathed in the warmth of a happy family.
技能精炼—表达真情实感 提升语言表达效果
一、完成下列各句（用无灵主语）
1. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)她的努力得到了老师的肯定，老师称赞她的创新思维。
1. Her efforts were acknowledged by the teacher, who praised her for her innovative thinking.
2. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)同学们热情的欢呼和雷鸣般的掌声使她非常激动。
2. As I stepped onto the stage, the applause from the audience filled my ears.
3. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)她的眼睛闪烁着好奇的光芒，她四处飞掠，以充满活力的优雅探索着周围的环境。
3.Her eyes sparkled with curiosity as she darted around, exploring her surroundings with an energetic grace.
4. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)当我的名字被宣布时，我在热烈的欢呼和雷鸣般的掌声中登上了舞台。
4. When my name was announced, I mounted the stage against wild cheers and thunderous applause.
5. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)我的老师相信我有潜力，这激励了我的努力，而且付出了回报。
5. My teacher's belief in my potential had fueled my hard work, and the effort had paid off.
二、翻译下列各句（用无灵主语）
1. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)同学们的点头和赞许的微笑呼应了她自己的惊讶和满足。
1. Her classmates' nods and smiles of approval echoed her own surprise and satisfaction.
2. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)当我读到学校公告栏上的公告时，我的心跳加速——我的作文得了第一名！
2. My heart raced as I read the announcement on the school bulletin board – my essay had won first place!
3. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 同学们报以雷鸣般的掌声和衷心的祝福，证实了我获得一等奖的消息。
3. The thunderous applause and hearty blessings from my fellow students confirmed the news that I had won the first prize.
4. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)当我的车靠近它时，我的思绪又回到了我救出这个可怜的小家伙的那一刻。
4.As my car neared it, my thoughts drifted back to the moment when I had rescued the tiny poor creature.
5. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)当我离开农场时，与蜂鸟的邂逅在我的脑海中挥之不去。
5.As I left the farm, the encounter with the hummingbird lingered in my mind.
三、续写片段运用（用无灵主语）
心理描写之开心
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching. Golden sunlight danced in her long hair and the children's laughter floated in the air_________________________________________(金色的阳光在她的长发中飞舞，孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡). She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It
seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over/came over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure_________________________________________(当她看到一个熟悉的身影时，一股幸福和兴奋的浪潮席卷了她). Her heart leaped with joy, and a shining smile lit up her face. She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend's arms. _________________________________________(当他们紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛)Tears of joy/happiness /excitement welled up in their eyes as they hugged tightly together.
心理描写之惊恐
I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly at the sight of the polar bear. _________________________________________(一阵恐怖把我完全控制住了)A burst of horror held me entirely in its power, and I was unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs were trembling and my palms were sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was standing still, frozen with fear. Looking at the polar bear's bloody mouth, she was nearly dead with fright. Fear flooded over her, making her shaking all over. _________________________________________(她的喉咙发紧，两膝发软)Her throat tightened and her knees felt weak.
模拟精编—优中选优 夯实技能举一反三
1. (2023四省联考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait—and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother—we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would
chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels. But the family was none too happy about his visit. They scolded and swatted at him. At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them. And then he quickly learned some social skills. He would take some snacks to meet them. For several days he played all day in the trees surrounding our house but came down at bedtime.
One night, Squirt didn’t come back to our house and it rained hard. Our girls fretted. They wanted to seek Squirt. We prevented them because it was too dangerous. But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food. And that remained the pattern for weeks. The experience was entertaining and heartwarming for our family. In the wild and somewhat silly moments of raising an orphaned baby squirrel, our children learned to value and appreciate life.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家一天看到一只幼小的迷路的松鼠，他们决定收养它，看着这只小松鼠从瘦弱幼小，慢慢变的健康活泼，让作者一家感觉既有趣又温暖。
第一步：续写思路
①由第一段首句内容“一天，在树林里，Squirt遇到了一个灰色松鼠家庭。”可知，第一段可描写Squirt遇到这一家灰松鼠的情况，Squirt如何与灰松鼠一家交往。
②由第二段首句内容“一天晚上，Squirt没有回到我们家，下起了大雨。”可知，第二段可描写作者一家的担心，和最后的结果，以及作者的感悟。
第二步：续写情节
遇到灰松鼠——与灰松鼠一家交往——没有回家，担心它——感悟
第三步：续写词汇
行为类
①责骂：scold/blame/rebuke
②拍打：swat/slap/hit
③寻找：seek/find/look for/search for
④阻止：prevent/put a stop to/head off
情绪类
①高兴的：happy/delighted
②有趣的：entertaining/delightful/engrossing
第四步：高分句型
[高分句型1]At first Squirt was so unhappy that he avoided them.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
[高分句型2]But when the sun rose the next day, there was Squirt, begging for food.(when引导的时间状语从句和现在分词作状语)
（2023上·云南·高三昆明一中校联考阶段练习）
1. (2024江苏模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成- -篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a small village in the heart of a big jungle on a land far away. Surrounded by mountains and in the shade of green trees, the villagers lived a happy life. All of them were used to their robotic daily tasks and none of them had the imagination or the will to try something new, except for one girl named Hannah,
Hannah was an adventurous spirit with an imagination far beyond her time. She loved to explore and would spend hours in the woods looking for new things. She loved to create stories in her head and used to imagine herself as one of her characters. One afternoon, when Hannah was on one of her adventures, she came upon an abandoned cottage. The cottage looked very old in its condition. The door was barely hanging and the wood was chipping away. Even though Hannah’s mother had strictly warned her not to go wandering in abandoned places , her curiosity got the best of her. She tip-toed (蹑手蹑脚) slowly to the door and slowly opened it and she was left shocked.In front of Hannah was a room full of books! Books shining in the dust, basking in the warm sunlight just waiting to be
explored. Hannah’ s excitement was visible on her face as she jumped up and down with joy!
Hannah became excited as she realized that she had found a hidden treasure. She knew in her heart that she had to read all of them so she quickly got to work. She dusted the books, the shelves,and what was left of the furniture. Hannah swept and dusted all day long until she realized that it was dark and she had to go back to her home. But she couldn’t get herself to leave without at least reading one. So Hannah picked two books and decided to read them at her home.
She met her friends on the way home who were curious about what Hannah was carrying. In her excitement, Hannah shared everything with her friends. She was thinking that her friends will share her excitement but instead, she heard roars of laughter!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hannah was confused by this reaction and a little hurt too, but she did not give up her books.
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She wanted to fire the curiosity and imagination in her friends.
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【答案】
Hannah was confused by this reaction and a little hurt too, but she did not give up her books. She went home and all night long, she read the adventurous tales hidden in the book cover. The next day, she quickly finished her breakfast and made her way to the cottage again. There she read different stories. Hannah’s imagination took her to a different world. She was so inspired by the books that the characters and the stories within them became her mentor. She learned a lot from them.
She wanted to fire the curiosity and imagination in her friends. Making this her mission, Hannah started telling tales every day at her cottage. She added her own touch of curiosity every now and then to different stories, making
them more interesting. In the beginning, only her very good friends came to the readings. But to her excitement, the word of her famous tales spread rapidly, causing more and more people to come to the readings. Seeing the interest of people, Hannah started writing stories of her own too! Soon, the word of Hannah’s storytelling spread to far-off towns.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。Hannah是一个富有冒险精神的女孩儿，一天她在探险的时候发现了一个小屋，里面有许多书籍，她对这些书籍非常感兴趣。读书丰富了她的想象力，让她学到了许多东西。她还在小屋讲故事，想要激发其他人的好奇心和想象力。而且她还自己写故事。她的名声很快便传播开来。
【详解】1. 续写线索：
由续写第一段首句“Hannah被这种反应弄糊涂了，也有点受伤，但她并没有放弃她的书。”可知，第一段可以描写Hannah读书后带来的变化，读书让她丰富了想象力，学到了许多知识。
由续写第二段首句“她想激发朋友们的好奇心和想象力。”可知，第二段可以描写Hannah读书后用自己的努力来激发人们的好奇心和想象力。
2. 段落续写：
Hannah没有放弃自己的书——读书丰富了想象力、增加了知识——决定激发朋友们的好奇心和想象力——在小屋讲故事——自己写故事——名声远扬
3. 词汇激活：
行为类
①抛弃：give up/throw away/abandon
②去：make one’s way to/go to/leave for
③吃完早餐：finish breakfast/eat up breakfast
④导致：cause/lead to/result in
情绪类
①受鼓舞的：inspired/encouraged
②令人兴奋的是：to one’s excitement/what is exciting is that…
【点睛】【高分句型1】She was so inspired by the books that the characters and the stories within them became her mentor.(使用了so…that…引导结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】She added her own touch of curiosity every now and then to different stories, making them more interesting. (使用了现在分词短语作状语)
3.（2024·湖北·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre for the audition (试
演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks.
It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do.
I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1:
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face.
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The next day I went to the eleventh audition.
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【答案】范文
She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face. I was taken aback by her unexpected gesture of appreciation. Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” The unexpected support from a stranger was like a beacon of light in the midst of my doubts and disappointments. I felt a surge of confidence and determination washing over me. With renewed spirit, I made up my mind to go all out for the audition the next day.
The next day I went to the eleventh audition. As I walked into the theatre, I felt a newfound sense of purpose and self-assurance. The director greeted me with a warm smile, and this time, as I sang my heart out, I could feel the magic in the air. When I finished, there was a moment of silence before the room erupted into applause. The director’s eyes were shining with excitement as he said, “You’ve got the part! Welcome to the show!” It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself.
【导语】本文人物为线索展开，讲述了主人公一直梦想能够参演像《音乐之声》或《妈妈咪呀》这样的著名音乐剧，为此接受了歌唱和舞蹈课程。然而，她在过去几周的十次试演中都遭遇失败。回到公寓后，她开始怀疑是否值得参加第十一次试演。在孤独的公寓里，她放声唱歌，想让自己振作起来，意外听到了来自陌生人的掌声的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“她向我伸出双臂，脸上挂着灿烂的笑容。”可知，第一段可描写老人对主人公的歌声的赞美，主人公感到很意外，但陌生人的支持给了主人公力量，主人公下定决心全力以赴参加第二天的试镜。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天我去参加了第十一次试演。”可知，第二段可描写主人公带着自信去试镜，得到了导演的欢迎，观众爆发出了阵阵掌声，导演让主人公出演主人公梦寐以求的角色，主人公意识到要实现梦想需要勇敢和信心。
2.续写线索：陌生人的赞美——主人公充满信心——决定参加第十一次试演——取得成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①闪烁：sparkle/glitter
②大声叫：shout/cry
③停止：stop/cease
情绪类
①赞赏：appreciation/admiration
②兴奋地：with excitement/excitedly
【点睛】[高分句型1] Her eyes sparkled with admiration as she shouted from below, “You have a voice of an angel, my dear! Keep singing, don’t ever stop!” (使用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] It was at that moment that I realized dreams really did come true, and all it took was a little courage and belief in oneself. (使用了强调句型、省略that引导的宾语从句和省略that引导的定语从句)
4．（2024·山东·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My political career in the Student Union(SU)began by throwing frisbees (飞盘) on the campus lawn. I would throw a frisbee to someone I didn’t know and they would throw it to someone they didn’t know. Before long, we had built a community of people who met every day at lunch to throw frisbees.
Besides frisbees, the group decided to climb the mountain near our campus. When we reached the peak, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes.It was totally fun. While playing like little children in the cool mountain air, we all decided to do it again the following week. Our motto (座右铭) was “Bring a Friend” . We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased.We made it a rule to climb the mountain every weekend. All of us were passionate about the fantastic experience, which we were looking forward to.
One day on campus, I decided to throw my frisbee to some strangers, run over and invite them to climb the mountain. Much to my surprise, a girl sitting in a wheelchair got hold of it. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain.She said she hadn’t. Holding the wheelchair tightly, she hung down her head in awkward silence. Then she told me that she had suffered from lung disease when she was young and depended on oxygen twenty-four hours a day. So, it was impossible for her to move without help. Fortunately, things got better.
With continuous efforts and treatment, she managed to live on her own with the assistance of the wheelchair: I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. On hearing what I said, she refused without hesitation, adding that it would be a bother to carry her. But I tried my best to persuade her to come along with us by talking about the interesting experiences.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 150 个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer.
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On the downhilt path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election.
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【答案】
Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer. Looking at her depressed and embarrassed expression, I didn’t want to quit persuading her. I showed her some pictures that were taken during our trip. She smiled, her eyes sparkling with excitement. Ultimately, I made it. On that appointed day, I, together with several friends, offered continuous assistance to her. With our joint efforts, we made it to the top of the mountain and admired the fantastic scenery. A sense of excitement took hold of her, tears rolling down her cheeks like broken pearls. She was so grateful to us and we became close friends.
On the downhill path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election. However, I didn’t have enough courage to run for it. Knowing I was in a dilemma, Grace had a sincere communication with me. “So kind and friendly are you that you helped me to enjoy the beautiful scenery and plan the weekend activity carefully. I am firmly convinced that you are capable of the work in the SU,” she said in a gentle voice. Inspired by her encouragement, I made a resolution to have a try. Having made full preparations, I was chosen chairman of the SU, which was beyond my expectations. Indeed, it is the mutual trust and help between friends that do make a great difference to us.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，本文讲述了主人公和格蕾丝之间的友谊故事。格蕾丝因年轻时患肺病而需要使用轮椅，但在主人公和朋友的帮助下，克服了困难并一起登上了山顶，享受了美丽的风景。在下山的路上，格蕾丝鼓励主人公参加学生会选举，并最终成功当选主席。文章表达了友谊和互相帮助的重要性。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“想了一会儿，格蕾丝还是拒绝了我的提议。”可知，第一段可描写作者从一开始的失望到格蕾丝最终答应接受我们提供帮助的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“在下坡路上，格蕾丝问我为什么不参加学生会的选举。”可知，第二段可描写作者在格蕾丝的鼓励下，最终成功被选为学生会主席。
2.续写线索：拒绝了我的提议——不想放弃说服——最终答应接受帮助——成为好朋友——建议作者参加选举——成功当选
3.词汇激活
行为类
①放弃：quit /give up
②提供：offered /provided
③欣赏：admire/ appreciate
情绪类
①尴尬的：embarrassed / awkward
②感激的：grateful / thankful/ appreciative
【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking at her depressed and embarrassed expression, I didn’t want to quit persuading her.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。）
[高分句型2] Having made full preparations, I was chosen chairman of the SU, which was beyond my expectations.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。）
5.（2024·浙江台州·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over,
creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
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【答案】
I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way. “What’s up” he asked sharply, his eyes fixed on me. Feeling the weight of my mistake, I stammered nervously, “I need dry rags...to...clean...” Upon hearing this, Aaron let out a heavy sigh. “You should have checked every detail,” he remarked, a hint of disappointment in his voice. “This job isn’t just about reacting, it’s also about being careful. Now, go clean that up!” Avoiding his gaze, I dashed towards table twenty-two. With an ample supply of rags, I threw myself into the task, tirelessly mopping, scrubbing, and wiping.
After cleaning up the mess, I reflected on Aaron’s words. They were sharp but absolutely right. My inexperience and initial anxiety in this new job had led me to overlook crucial details, and I should have been more mindful of my work. Taking a deep breath, I returned to my duties, bearing Aaron’s words in mind. With very dish washed and every table cleared, I made sure to double-check my work. Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者刚入职一家餐馆，经理Aaron要求作者检查每一个细节，但是一天作者因为粗心没有收拾好桌子，当他准备再次准备收拾时，发现自己拿的抹布不够，又再次回去拿抹布，被Aaron再次提醒要注意细节，此次事件让作者明白工作中细心的重要性。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我刚冲出去，就发现亚伦挡了我的路。”可知，第一段可描写作者不细心的情况再次被Aaron看到，以及Aaron对作者的再次告诫。
②由第二段首句内容“收拾完残局后，我回想起亚伦的话。”可知，第二段可描写作者通过这次事件，获得的感悟。
2. 续写线索：犯错——Aaron指出错误——发现抹布不够——回去拿——被Aaron再次看见——告诫——感悟。
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①全身心地投入到任务中：threw myself into the task/devoted myself to the task/immersed myself in the task
②认识到：realize/comprehend/became aware
情绪类
①焦虑：anxiety/tension/nervousness
②失望：disappointment/frustration
【点睛】[高分句型1]With very dish washed and every table cleared, I made sure to double-check my work.(with的复合结构)
[高分句型2]Everything went well and soon I realized this carefulness would not just apply to cleaning; it would influence every aspect of my job, preparing me to embrace any challenge with responsibility and confidence.(省略that的宾语从句)2024届高考英语读后续写之无灵主语运用（2）
原卷版
技能精讲—无灵主语五大句式 语言更生动
第一类公式：主语(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb
变式：A wave(flush/surge/burst…) of+(情感状态的名词)+有灵动词+sb
Sorrow seized her at the thought that her efforts might be in vain.
一想到自己的努力可能会白费，她就感到悲伤。
A sense of despair defeated me, and I fell sobbing on the doorstep.
突然感到一阵绝望，我倒在门口，啜泣起来。《简爱》
When I heard the approach of the writing contest, a wave of nervousness overwhelmed me.
当我听到写作比赛的临近时，一阵紧张使我不知所措。
第二类公式：主语（身体部位/音容笑）+有灵动词+sb
Laughter lingered around the room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
Tears of gratitude blurred her eyes.
感激的泪水模糊了她的视线。
Her face lit up when I gave her the little present.
当她打开盒子时，她的手激动得发抖。
Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.
我给她小礼物时，她的脸上露出了喜色。
When l realized that my diligent efforts had been rewarded, tears welled up in my eyes.
当我意识到我的勤奋努力得到了回报时，泪水夺眶而出。
第三类公式：主语（表示时间和地点的名词）+有灵动词+sb
Spring finds a beautiful sunny countryside.
春天，乡村阳光灿烂，风景优美。
Dusk found the boy crying on the street.
黄昏时，男孩在大街上哭着。
The past decades have witnessed the rapid development of online news media.
过去几十年间，网络新闻媒体发展迅速。
第四类公式：主语（表示自然现象的名词）+有灵动词+sb
A snowstorm hit the West today, bringing with it low temperatures.
一场暴风雪今天袭击西部地区，带来了严寒低温。
The heavy rain prevented tourists from enjoying the full moon.
大雨使游客无法欣赏满月。
The gentle breeze stroked his head, as if comforting all his tiredness.
微风轻抚着他的头，仿佛抚慰了他所有的疲惫。
第五类公式：主语（表示思考动作行为的名词）+有灵动词+sb
A brilliant idea suddenly popped into my mind.
我突然想到了一个绝妙的主意。
The sight of the picture reminds me of the unforgettable trip to Hangzhou.
一看到这张照片我就想到了难忘的杭州之行。
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
想到不久就要见到她的儿子，她心中感到十分快乐。
专注于读书让他忘记了时间。
Being absorbed in books made him forget the time.
他重游故居，不禁回忆起许多美好的回忆。
A visit to the places where he had lived brought back many fond memories.
真题精选—体验高考真题 感悟丰富语言魅力
1. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)然而，当我一整天都没能见到这个可爱的生物时，一股悲伤的涟漪涌上了我的心头。
1.However, ________________________________________when failing to see the lovely creature the whole day.
2. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)大卫成功冲过终点线时，全场爆发出阵阵欢呼和掌声。
2. ________________________________________ when David succeeded in crossing the finish line.
3. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)但我们都为他感到骄傲，每个人脸上的笑容照亮了整个世界！
3.But all of us were proud of him and ________________________________________!
4. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)他不寻常的左右摇摆方式使他在跑步者中与众不同，但没有人嘲笑他。
4. ________________________________________made him unusual among the runners, yet nobody laughed at him.
5. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)当她看到早餐时，眼睛睁大了，兴奋得闪闪发光。
5. When she saw the breakfast, ________________________________________.
6. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)言语无法表达我的感受。我只是用一个大大的拥抱向他表示祝贺。
6. ________________________________________ I just congratulated him with a big hug.
7. (2022新高考I卷读后续写)枪响的那一刻，所有的赛跑运动员都以迅雷不及掩耳之势向前冲去。
7. ________________________________________, all the runners shot forwards with a flash of speed.
8. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)如释重负的泪水像一条断了的珍珠项链一样滚落下来。
8. ________________________________________.
9. (2021新高考I卷读后续写)食物的香味弥漫在卧室里，仿佛变了魔法，卧室变成了世界上最可爱的地方。
9. ________________________________________, which, as if by magic, had turned into the most lovely place in the world.
10.(2021新高考I卷读后续写)整个上午，大家沐浴在幸福家庭的温暖中，度过了一段幸福的时光。
10. ________________________________________ with everyone bathed in the warmth of a happy family.
技能精炼—表达真情实感 提升语言表达效果
一、完成下列各句（用无灵主语）
1. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)她的努力得到了老师的肯定，老师称赞她的创新思维。
1. ________________________________________ by the teacher, who praised her for her innovative thinking.
2. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)同学们热情的欢呼和雷鸣般的掌声使她非常激动。
2. As I stepped onto the stage, ________________________________________.
3. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)她的眼睛闪烁着好奇的光芒，她四处飞掠，以充满活力的优雅探索着周围的环境。
3. ________________________________________ as she darted around, exploring her surroundings with an energetic grace.
4. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)当我的名字被宣布时，我在热烈的欢呼和雷鸣般的掌声中登上了舞台。
4. ________________________________________, I mounted the stage against wild cheers and thunderous applause.
5. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)我的老师相信我有潜力，这激励了我的努力，而且付出了回报。
5. ________________________________________, and ________________________________________.
二、翻译下列各句（用无灵主语）
1. (2024浙江1月卷读后续写)同学们的点头和赞许的微笑呼应了她自己的惊讶和满足。
1. ________________________________________ echoed her own surprise and satisfaction.
2. (2023新高考I卷读后续写)当我读到学校公告栏上的公告时，我的心跳加速——我的作文得了第一名！
2. ________________________________________ as I read the announcement on the school bulletin board – my essay had won first place!
3. (2023新高考I卷读后续写) 同学们报以雷鸣般的掌声和衷心的祝福，证实了我获得一等奖的消息。
3. ________________________________________ that I had won the first prize.
4. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)当我的车靠近它时，我的思绪又回到了我救出这个可怜的小家伙的那一刻。
4.As my car neared it, ________________________________________ when I had rescued the tiny poor creature.
5. (2023浙江1月卷读后续写)当我离开农场时，与蜂鸟的邂逅在我的脑海中挥之不去。
5.As I left the farm, ________________________________________.
三、续写片段运用（用无灵主语）
心理描写之开心
She stood by the window, joyfully and patiently watching.
________________________________________(金色的阳光在她的长发中飞舞，孩子们的笑声在空中飘荡). She stared at the end of the road, hoping her close friend would come earlier. It seemed as if she had been standing there for a century. Suddenly _________________________________________(当她看到一个熟悉的身影时，一股幸福和兴奋的浪潮席卷了她). Her heart leaped with joy, and a shining smile lit up her face. She ran to her friend and threw herself into her friend's arms. _________________________________________(当他们紧紧地拥抱在一起时，喜悦/幸福/激动的泪水涌上了他们的眼睛).
心理描写之惊恐
I felt that the blood in my body froze rapidly at the sight of the polar bear. _________________________________________(一阵恐怖把我完全控制住了), and I was unable to move an inch. Extremely frightened, I felt my legs were trembling and my palms were sweating. Beside me was my wife, who was standing still, frozen with fear. Looking at the polar bear's bloody mouth, she was nearly dead with fright. Fear flooded over her, making her shaking all over. _________________________________________(她的喉咙发紧，两膝发软)
模拟精编—优中选优 夯实技能举一反三
1. (2023四省联考)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My husband and I enjoy seeing life through the eyes of our children. It’s amazing to watch as they discover their world.
While we were outdoors last summer enjoying the sunshine, our oldest daughter, Kaytlin, called me to the doorway. Beneath the steps was a baby red squirrel.
We watched it from a distance, not wanting to disturb it or scare off its mother. But after a long wait—and looking all around our house for signs of a nest or a mother—we realized the tiny squirrel was lost.
Shaking terribly, he was weak, thin, and hungry. We tried to find an expert to help, but the Inland Fisheries and Wildlife website showed that there were no wildlife experts in our area. After some quick research, we concluded that the best way to give the squirrel a fighting chance was to care for him ourselves. So a trip to the local store for milk and supplies was in order. More research taught us how much to feed him, how to estimate his age, how and when to wean (断奶) him, and that we should let him go as soon as he could survive on his own.
Our daughters and I took turns in feeding “Squirt.” Kaytlin took on the most responsibility. She taught him to eat from a bottle, and she woke in the night for his feeds.
To our relief, Squirt soon became healthy and strong. Within a few weeks he became more active. He would chatter (吱吱叫) for his next meal, playfully go around the girls, and lie down on them for sleep. It wasn’t long before
he was weaned onto solid food and reintroduced to the wild.
His first few visits to the great outdoors were funny. Just like a child, he would play in the grass some and then run back to Kaytlin for safety. Soon she had him climbing trees and finding nest material.
注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day in the trees, Squirt met up with a family of gray squirrels.
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1. (2024江苏模拟预测)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成- -篇完整的短文。
Once upon a time, there was a small village in the heart of a big jungle on a land far away. Surrounded by mountains and in the shade of green trees, the villagers lived a happy life. All of them were used to their robotic daily tasks and none of them had the imagination or the will to try something new, except for one girl named Hannah,
Hannah was an adventurous spirit with an imagination far beyond her time. She loved to explore and would spend hours in the woods looking for new things. She loved to create stories in her head and used to imagine herself as one of her characters. One afternoon, when Hannah was on one of her adventures, she came upon an abandoned cottage. The cottage looked very old in its condition. The door was barely hanging and the wood was chipping away. Even though Hannah’s mother had strictly warned her not to go wandering in abandoned places , her curiosity got the best of her. She tip-toed (蹑手蹑脚) slowly to the door and slowly opened it and she was left shocked.In front of Hannah was a room full of books! Books shining in the dust, basking in the warm sunlight just waiting to be explored. Hannah’ s excitement was visible on her face as she jumped up and down with joy!
Hannah became excited as she realized that she had found a hidden treasure. She knew in her heart that she had to read all of them so she quickly got to work. She dusted the books, the shelves,and what was left of the furniture. Hannah swept and dusted all day long until she realized that it was dark and she had to go back to her home. But she couldn’t get herself to leave without at least reading one. So Hannah picked two books and decided to read them at
her home.
She met her friends on the way home who were curious about what Hannah was carrying. In her excitement, Hannah shared everything with her friends. She was thinking that her friends will share her excitement but instead, she heard roars of laughter!
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式作答。
Hannah was confused by this reaction and a little hurt too, but she did not give up her books.
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She wanted to fire the curiosity and imagination in her friends.
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3.（2024·湖北·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I remember that I was worn out when I got home that afternoon. I'd had to be at the theatre for the audition (试演) at nine that morning, and then I'd been waiting around for about three hours before the director finally saw me. I performed my song and almost at once he told me I could go home. “I am very sorry,”he said,“but your voice isn't quite right for the part.”It had been a similar story at all the auditions that I'd done over the past few weeks.
It had been my dream for years to be in a famous musical like The Sound of Music or Mamma Mia, so I'd taken lessons in singing and dancing, and had come to the city to try and get a part in a show. I'd been really pleased when I'd managed to set up no fewer than ten auditions, but so far all of them had gone the same way. As I arrived back that afternoon at the little apartment where I rented a room, I really wondered whether I should bother going to the eleventh the next morning. It was a show I'd have loved to be in — but really, what was the point Someone I knew had told me about a job at a local coffee shop, and had said that if I called in for a quick chat at ten the next day, I'd almost certainly get the job. It meant missing the audition, but right now, it seemed like a much more sensible thing to do.
I always sing when I need to cheer myself up, and because there was no one else in the apartment, I slipped off my shoes, went and stood in front of the mirror and started singing.Quite quickly I found myself belting out (大声唱) one of my favourite songs, Bridge over Troubled Water. As I finished the song, I suddenly heard applause. I looked around the room thinking that my roommate had perhaps slipped in without me noticing — but there was nobody. Then I went over to the open window of the apartment, and saw an elderly woman standing on the far side of the pavement below, looking up at me.
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She reached her arms up towards me with a great smile on her face.
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The next day I went to the eleventh audition.
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4．（2024·山东·三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My political career in the Student Union(SU)began by throwing frisbees (飞盘) on the campus lawn. I would throw a frisbee to someone I didn’t know and they would throw it to someone they didn’t know. Before long, we had built a community of people who met every day at lunch to throw frisbees.
Besides frisbees, the group decided to climb the mountain near our campus. When we reached the peak, it felt like we were at summer camp. We laughed, danced and told jokes.It was totally fun. While playing like little children in the cool mountain air, we all decided to do it again the following week. Our motto (座右铭) was “Bring a Friend” . We started out with a small group of hikers. But as the word spread, the number of participants increased.We made it a rule to climb the mountain every weekend. All of us were passionate about the fantastic
experience, which we were looking forward to.
One day on campus, I decided to throw my frisbee to some strangers, run over and invite them to climb the mountain. Much to my surprise, a girl sitting in a wheelchair got hold of it. Her name was Grace. I asked her if she had ever been to the top of the mountain.She said she hadn’t. Holding the wheelchair tightly, she hung down her head in awkward silence. Then she told me that she had suffered from lung disease when she was young and depended on oxygen twenty-four hours a day. So, it was impossible for her to move without help. Fortunately, things got better.
With continuous efforts and treatment, she managed to live on her own with the assistance of the wheelchair: I told her that my friends and I would carry her if she were up for it. On hearing what I said, she refused without hesitation, adding that it would be a bother to carry her. But I tried my best to persuade her to come along with us by talking about the interesting experiences.
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Having thought for a while, Grace still refused my offer.
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On the downhilt path, Grace asked me why not run for the SU election.
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5.（2024·浙江台州·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood in the restaurant kitchen, my eyes wide, arms hanging awkwardly, ready to work but unsure of what to do. “You will be trained first,” my manager Aaron said, “and do remember to check every detail!” With these words, he walked away.
A workmate threw me a dish brush and said, “Let’s get started.” He introduced me to the basics of washing dishes and demonstrated the process. This was the beginning of my part-time job, a new stage where I was both
eager to learn and anxious about the challenges ahead.
On a Friday night, Aaron swiftly entered the kitchen. “Who has just bused (收拾) the back right table ” he shouted, his voice sharp with urgency. My hands, slippery with bubbles from the bowl I was washing, nearly let it slip through my fingers. I wanted to say I was guilty, but Aaron’s cold stare didn’t promise a happy reward for the guy who admitted. Finally, a mix of fear and my own conscience pushed the response out of my mouth.
“I did, Aaron.”
“What were you thinking Get back out here and look at what you missed!” His words forced me forward. I grabbed a rag (抹布) and followed him out to table twenty-two. As we made our way through the restaurant, he said something about rags, but I didn’t hear clearly with other conversations going on around us.
I quickly realized the true issue was the mess beneath the table. A nearly full cup of beer had tipped over, creating a small lake on the floor. It was a significant mistake on my part. “Take care of it!” Aaron tuned and stormed off to the front of the restaurant.
I dropped down to clean up the beer. That was when another problem occurred. I had brought only one rag. One already wet rag. It did nothing but increase the size of the lake. “More rags,” I thought. Immediately, I rushed into the kitchen and hurriedly grabbed five dry rags, hoping Aaron wouldn’t notice my brief absence.
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I had just rushed out when I found Aaron standing in my way.
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