Module 3 Life now and then Unit 2 I think life is better today. 课件（共19张PPT）

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年 级：九年级
学 科：初中英语（外研社版）
Module 3 Life now and then
Unit 2 Writing
Revision
viewpoint观点
reasons
advantages
disadvantage
viewpoint观点
reason
disadvantage
Q: How has life changed
Q: Can you find some reasons to support it
Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of the changing of life
U1
How has life changed
Viewpoint: Life is becoming better today than in the past.
Viewpoint: Life in the past was simpler and healthier than today.
Reasons:...are wealthier and they live longer than...
Advantages: know more about...
less fear of...
Disdvantages: don’t take as much exercise as ...
Reasons:More wealth sometimes means less health.
Disdvantages: The pollution is doubled/worse.
Examples
viewpoint观点
reason
disadvantages
reason
reason
advantages
Q:What does Mrs Li think of
life today
Q:Can you find some reasons
to support it
Q: What are the advantages and disadvantages of life now and then
U2
How has life changed
Viewpoint: Generally speaking, I think life is better today.
Reasons: Families have got smaller than they were in the past.
Transport and travel are easier.
We eat better and we live longer.
Disdvantages: poor families
no electric lights
only candles
work hard and long
food was simple
almost no education for girls
Life then
tiny houses
no TVs
Life now
feel lonely
so much traffic
some TV shows are too noisy
Advantages: girls can have good education
go to work after getting married
easy transport
so many good TV programmes
Life now
Examples
假设你是李华，某英语报“How has life changed in my hometown ”专栏向中学生招募志愿者，需要用英语向大家介绍自己家乡人们近10年来生活的变化。请你用英语给报社写一封介绍信。要点如下：
1.选取2-3个点，突出家乡人们如今生活的变化
2.给出理由支持你的观点
3.指出变化带来的优缺点
4.得出结论
注意：
1.词数为110词左右 2.可适当增加细节，使得行文连贯
3.文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称 4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数
Dear Sir/Madam,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing:
审题谋篇
该书面表达情境属于义务教育《英语课程标准》中的“人与社会”范畴，涉及“家乡和社会的变迁”。本题重点在查考能否围绕主题，在真实的生活情境中运用所学语言，发表家乡人们生活变化的观点，并有理有据，给出适当的论据支持观点。表达自己关注和热爱现在美好幸福生活的愿景。
体裁 议论文
时态 一般过去时和一般现在时
人称 主要使用第一人称
要点 1.选取2-3个点，突出家乡人们如今生活的变化
2.给出理由支持你的观点
3.指出变化带来的优缺点
4.得出结论
P21.4 Write a passage about the advantages and disadvantages of life today.
Choose two or three points to write about.
Give examples or reasons to support those points.
For each of the points you choose, write about an advantage
and /or a disadvantage. Use words however, but, although or
used to where appropriate.
Finish the passage with your conclusion.
提出论点
给出论据
指出优点和/或缺点
得出结论
写作提纲
Step1
审题
style体裁
tense时态
person
key points
Step2
列提纲
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
In my opinion, life today is...
Give reasons
Give examples
Generally speaking, life today is...
Task 1:连词成句
1.过去人们常常住在小房子里。
2.过去人们吃粗茶淡饭。一年才吃上一两回肉。
3.如今交通变得越来越便捷了。
4.总的来说，我认为生活变得越来越好了。
请选用方框里的关键词翻译下列句子。
convenient tiny simple once or twice generally speaking
In the past , the food was simple.People could only eat meat once or twice a year.
People used to live in tiny houses.
Traffic becomes more and more convenient today.
Generally speaking , I think life is becoming
better and bettter today.
Task 2:千锤百炼
A.单句改错：请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的一处错误。
1.In my opinion,life is good today than in the past.
2. There’s fewer fear of getting ill because we know
how to deal with the ordinary diseases.
3.But people don’t take as more exercise as they
used to.
4.But sometimes I feel alone because she can’t come to
see me often.
better
less
much
lonely
B.句式升级：请根据要求完成下列句子。
1.What’s worse, the roofs always leaked on rainy days.
(用 if 引导的条件状语从句改写句子）
What’s worse, if it was a rainy weather, the roofs always leaked.
2.The economy develops, rural people have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.(用with 表伴随结构改写句子）
With the development of economy, rural people have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.
3.I hope life in my hometown will be fantastic tomorrow.
(用比较级+and+比较级改写句子)
I hope life in my hometown will be more and more fantastic tomorrow.
Dear Sir/Madam,
For many people, life in my hometown is a lot easier today.
My father says ten years ago people lived in small houses in the countryside in the past. On rainy days, it was so bad to live in the houses. Now there are big changes.The economy develops, people have moved to big houses.
In the past ,there was always traffic jam. Now people have built wide roads, the traffic is becoming better.In the past, we wrote letters to talk with others. Now, we can just call or chat with our friends on wechat.
All these are how life becomes better today and I hope life in my hometown will be better tomorrow.
Yours,
Li Hua
A Sample Text
用词重复
【Task 3】阅读并圈划标注
思考:这篇习作是否符合“词汇丰富，语言优美”的要求？
1. 圈出文中使用的形容词、副词；2. 划出连接词
12-15分档
16-19分档
连接词不丰富
句型单一
提出论点
给出论据(指出优缺点)
得出结论
给出论据(指出优缺点)
Dear Sir/Madam,
For many people, life in my hometown is a lot easier today.My father says people lived in small houses in the countryside in the past. On rainy days, it was so bad to live in the houses. Now there are big changes.The economy develops, people have moved to big houses.
In the past ,there was always traffic jam. Now people have built wide roads, the traffic is becoming better.In the past, we wrote letters to talk with others. Now, we can just call or chat with our friends on wechat.
All these are how life becomes better today and I hope life in my hometown will be better tomorrow.
Yours,
Li Hua
Polish your Writing
词汇升级法
微技能1
Tip1: 近义词替换或者词组替换
cottages
great
amazing
enormous
fabulous
rural
spacious
flats
more and
more
convenient
communicate
wonderful
splendid
fantastic
terrific
simply
terrible
awful
Generally
speaking
谈过去的生活，用过去时态。谈现在的生活，用现在时态。
tiny
My father says people lived in tiny cottages in the countryside in the past. In the past ,there was always traffic jam. Now people have built wide roads, the traffic is becoming convenient.In the past, we wrote letters to communicate with others. Now, we can just call or chat with our friends on wechat.
【Task 4】请改写下面这段话，让词汇表达更丰富吧！
Polish your Writing
迁移运用
词汇升级
According to my father, ten years ago, people used to live in tiny cottages in
the countryside but now great things have taken place. Once there was always traffic jam, nowadays with many cement rural roads having been built, the
traffic is becoming convenient.In the past, we wrote letters to communicate with others. Now things are different, we can simply call or chat
with our friends on wechat.
...people lived in tiny cottages in the countryside. And the roofs always leaked on rainy days.
Great things have taken place. The economy develops, we have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.And micro-wave ovens and automatic dishwashers have become popular.
...people lived in tiny cottages in the countryside. What’s worse, the roofs always leaked on rainy days.
Luckily, great things have taken place.The economy develops, we have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.Besides, micro-wave ovens as well as automatic dishwashers have become popular.
and
furthermore
not only...but also
what’s more
moreover
in addition
【Task 5】请改写下面这段话，让连词架起沟通的桥梁吧！
Polish your Writing
微技能2
巧用连词搭桥法
as well (as)
besides
give examples
Tip 2: 巧用连词，逻辑更严谨
Dear Sir/Madam,
For many people in my hometown is becoming easier today. According to my father, people ten years ago used to live in tiny cottages in the countryside. What’s worse, if it was rainy weather, our roofs always leaked.
Luckily, great things have taken place. With the development of economy, we have moved from tiny cottages to spacious flats.Besides, micro-wave ovens and automatic dishwashers have become more and more popular.
In the past,there was always traffic jam. With many cement rural roads(乡间水泥路) having been built, the traffic is becoming more and more convenient.
In the past, we wrote letters to communicate with others. But now, we can simply call or chat with our friends on wechat.
All these are how life becomes better today and I hope life in my hometown will be more and more fantastic tomorrow.
Yours,
Li Hua
Polish your Writing
微技能3
句型多变法
if引导条件状语从句
with表伴随结构
比较级+and+比较级
Summary
微技能
句型多变法
巧用连词搭桥法
词汇升级法
微技能
微技能
Tip1: 近义词替换或者词组替换
Tip 4: 巧用with 表伴随结构
Tip 3:巧用if引导的条件状语从句
Tip 5: 巧用adj.比较级+and+adj. 比较级结构
Tip 2: 巧用连词，逻辑更严谨
wonderful
splendid
fantastic
terrificg
greatreat
amazing
better
and
moreover
besides
what’s more
in addition
not only ...but also
furthermore
as well (as)
If it was a rainy weather, the roofs always leaked.
With the development of economy, ...
... life in my hometown will be more and more fantastic tomorrow.
For many people, life is easy today.
Medicine and food are good, and people are getting healthy and living munication is changing fast. Today, people can talk with friends all over the world.
Not all changes are good ones. More people drive cars.Fewer people ride bikes.They are not very fit. Traffic makes the roads crowded, and it also makes bad pollution.
We must do something.
Homework
【Task 6】请运用今天学到的微技能对这篇学生习作进行美化。
Checklist:
1. Have you used a wide range of words 是否用了丰富的词汇？
2.Have you used some proper conjunctions 是否用了恰当的连词？
3. Have you used varied sentence patterns 是否用了多样化的句式？
微技能
句型多变法
巧用连词搭桥法
词汇升级法
微技能
微技能