2024中考英语书面表达高分突破必备(通用版)
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中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024中考英语书面表达高分突破必备
维度1：掌握表达类型策略
1.写人叙事
[命题特点] 1. 常采用给材料的形式, 让学生描述或记叙某个人物或事件; 2. 要求学生能够简短地发表自己的看法, 或给予正确的评价; 3. 一般有很大的自由度, 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 畅谈自己的看法。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 切勿漏掉六个要素, 即五个“W” (who, when, where, what, why)和一个“H” (how); 3. 时态、人称要分清; 事件、线索要连贯; 内容、思想要感人。 [经典句式] He is tall/short. . . and has long/short/black/brown. . . hair. 他很高/矮……并且留着长长的/短的/黑色的/棕色的头发。 She is interested in. . . 她对……感兴趣。 He’s so kind that we all like him. 他那么友好, 以至于我们都喜欢他。 He used to be/have. . . 他过去常常是(有)…… We’re proud of him/her. 我们以他(她)为骄傲。 He’s ready to help others. 他乐于助人。 I’ve learnt a lot from her/him. 我已经从她/他那儿学到了很多。
【策略解析】
每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字, 如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈×××……假如你是李华, 请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件, 介绍你心目中的一位英雄。
注意:
1. 信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹;
2. 信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名;
3. 80词左右(首段已给出, 不计入总词数)。
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 介绍心目中的英雄。
2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍心目中的英雄”为中心。以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 点明谁是“我”心目中的英雄, 运用hero, heart等词汇; 其次, 介绍“我”心目中英雄的基本信息和主要事迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you.
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. I have one in mine, too. The hero is my mother.
My mother is a common worker in a company. She’s very kind and friendly. She gets on well with everyone around her. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for a trip, but nobody looked after her pet dog. She asked if my mother would do this for her. My mother agreed.
I’m proud of her. I’ve learned a lot from her. I’ll learn from her.
Yours,
Li Hua
第四步·优
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you.
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart and so do I. The hero in my heart is my mother.
My mother is a common worker who works in a company. She’s very kind and friendly. She gets on well with everyone around her. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for a trip, but nobody looked after her pet dog. She asked if my mother would do this for her. My mother agreed without thinking twice.
I’m proud of her. I’ve also learned a lot from her. I hope I can follow in her footsteps.
Yours,
Li Hua
【策略优化】
技巧1: 小词大用
汉语中有些词义看起来很复杂很文雅, 但在英语中可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词为书面表达高频词汇: talk, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help, interesting, excited, friendly, leave, learn等。
技巧2: 巧用高级词汇
为了增加中考书面表达的亮点, 增强其表达效果, 可以使用高级词汇来代替一般词汇。
一般表达 高级表达
now/today nowadays
decide make one’s mind/make one’s decision
should be supposed to
besides what’s more/in addition
good wonderful/excellent
sb. think(s) in one’s opinion
技巧3: 句式灵活变换
采用丰富的英语句式结构可以增强文章的表达效果, 能凸显作者深厚的英语语言功底。被动语态的使用, 非谓语动词的使用, 主从复合句的使用, 特殊句型的使用, 均能收到不错的效果, 尝试使用一些英语谚语或格言也会使文章更加出彩。
技巧4: 升华思想, 突出主题
“升华思想, 突出主题”是写作中的一个常用技法, 就是将一个浅显、普遍的问题提升到一个更高的精神层面, 从而使文章主题更深刻、更突出。
2.方法建议
[命题特点] 1. 一般给出问题和材料, 要求学生写出解决方法或解决建议; 2. 话题侧重行为、学习、环保、安全及健康等方面; 3. 一般要求以书信、邮件形式写作, 学生可根据提示增加一些细节, 适当发挥。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 如果以书信、邮件形式呈现, 必须符合书信、邮件的基本格式; 3. 时态、人称要分清; 方法、建议要实用; 观念、态度要真诚。 [经典句式] I’d like to share my ideas with you. 我想与你分享我的想法。 Here are some of my suggestions. 这是我的一些建议。 The best way to. . . is by. . . ……最好的方法是通过…… To keep healthy/safe, we should. . . 为了保持健康/安全, 我们应当…… It’s one’s duty to. . . Let’s start from today. ……是某人的责任。让我们从今天开始吧。 Everyone should play a part in doing sth. 人人都应当参与…… I hope my advice/suggestions is/are helpful to you. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
【策略解析】
假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。
要求:
1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范;
2. 词数: 100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Li Lei,
My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do
Anna
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
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I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 针对烦恼, 提出建议。
2. 审人称: 本题要求“回复邮件, 提出建议”, 以第二人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 分析造成当前状况的原因, 运用maybe, feel, talk about等词汇; 其次, 提出自己的建议; 最后发表个人观点, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel about it. Why not talk with them You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are good at sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you.
I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
第四步·优
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel about it. Why not talk with them You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you and agree with your ideas.
I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
【策略优化】
技巧1: 言之有理, 言之有物
建议、观点要鲜明、正确; 要有实实在在的内容和充足的理由来支撑建议、观点。
技巧2: 首尾呼应, 合理分段
在写此类短文时, 把文章的主题句写在最前面, 使读者一目了然; 在短文结尾处, 简要概括前面所说的内容, 文章的中心更加鲜明突出。
技巧3: 连词增色, 长短得当
使用恰当的连词对短文加以润色, 使所写短文思路清晰、文字连贯、语言流畅。以短句为主, 长句搭配, 使短文中的句子富有变化, 会给人以错落有致的美感。如: You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. 被动语态、主从复合句的使用, 均能收到很好的效果。
技巧4: 段落清晰, 完美收尾
运用简洁的语言, 把主题思想明确地表达出来, 升华思想, 或者在全文即将煞尾时, 卒章显志, 使文章中心鲜明突出。
3.计划梦想
[命题特点] 1. 一般给出提示, 让学生写出自己的计划或梦想; 2. 要求学生描述将来某一阶段或某一活动的计划; 谈论自己的梦想, 给出坚持该梦想的理由以及实现该梦想将要做出的努力; 3. 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 适当发挥, 增加文章内容。 [考场避险] 1. 仔细研读提示及要求, 切勿漏掉要点; 2. 适当增加要点; 注意使用高级词汇及句子; 3. 注意人称及时态、语态的正确把握。 [经典句式] I want to be. . . when I grow up. 当我长大后, 我想当一名…… She plans to travel around the world. 她计划周游世界。 The summer holiday is coming to an end and the new term is coming. 暑假即将结束, 新的学期即将到来。 I’d like to have a good rest and relax myself. 我想好好休息, 放松一下自己。 He wants to read more books to improve himself. 他想多读书来提升自己。 I hope my dream can come true one day. 我希望我的梦想有一天会实现。 I think you’ll achieve your dream. 我认为你会实现你的梦想。
【策略解析】
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Lisa发来邮件, 询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示, 用英语给她写封回信。
要求:
1. 语言规范、语句通顺;
2. 应包括图片所有要点, 可适当发挥;
3. 字数: 100词左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇: the 1st National Congress of the CPC 中共一大; publicize 宣传; garbage classification 垃圾分类
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 由要求可知主题是暑期计划。
2. 审人称: 本题要求“回邮件来叙述暑期计划”, 以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般将来时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 明确是暑假安排或计划; 其次, 详细叙述自己的计划或假期安排; 最后发表个人祝福, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize how to do garbage classification in my community. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai. And I will also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Finally, I will join the English clubs to improve my spoken English. What about your plan
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
第四步·优
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize how to do garbage classification in my community. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will not only travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai, but also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Last but not least, I will improve my spoken English by joining English clubs. What about your plan
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【策略优化】
技巧1: 遵循事实, 合理想象
根据实际情况制订计划, 以现实为依据合情合理地描述理想, 写出富有创造性、新奇、有趣、可信的佳作。
技巧2: 巧妙过渡, 彰显文采
巧妙使用高级的过渡句或过渡词汇, 以避免文章干瘪而空泛、枯燥而乏味, 可彰显作者的文字功底和写作文采, 增强语言表现力。如: in order to, not only. . . but also. . . , both. . . and. . . , as well as等。
技巧3: 大题小做, 变隐为显
在写作时, 面对“计划”或“梦想”等题材范围十分宽泛的“大题目”, 要选取自己拥有材料丰富的题目, 从新颖深刻的立意角度去写, 并将题干中隐含的信息道破, 使其变为明示信息。
技巧4: 巧用短语, “语”众不同
短语的意思往往比单词更为饱满, 因此我们要用短语巧妙表达, 使文章“靓”起来, 给人耳目一新的感觉。
4.说明介绍
[命题特点] 1. 常采用提示或图表的形式, 让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等; 2. 要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述; 3. 主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 合理运用说明方法: 分析、分类、因果、举例、比较等; 3. 时态、语态要分清; 段落、内容要层次; 单词、标点要正确。 [经典句式] He/She/It looks like. . . 他/她/它看起来像…… It’s 300 meters long/wide/high. 它有300米长/宽/高。 It’s made of wood. 它是由木材制成的。 With the rapidly growing popularity of. . . 随着……的快速普及…… A recent survey suggests that. . . 最近的一项调查显示…… China is a great country with a long history. 中国是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家。
【策略解析】
我们国家历史悠久, 地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民; 有绿水青山, 美丽的风景; 有独特的美食, 传统的饮食文化。请以“Beautiful China”为题, 写一篇作文, 描写大美中国, 表达我们对祖国的热爱。
要求:
1. 思路清晰, 语句通顺, 书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息;
3. 词数: 80词左右的短文。
Beautiful China
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Yours,
Li Hua
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 介绍大美中国。
2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍中国”为中心, 以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 陈述事实, 以一般现在时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 说明中国是个伟大的国家, 运用great, history等词汇; 其次, 介绍中国的风土人情、名胜古迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Beautiful China
China is a great country with a long history. It lies in the east of Asia. It has the largest population of the world. It is big and has rich natural resources. There are lots of green mountains and clean water. There are many places of interest. It is famous for the Great Wall. The natural scenery is fascinating. Many foreigners come to China for a trip every year. It has its special food, such as Beijing Duck, Sichuan hotpot and so on. They’re very delicious. There are lots of traditional table manners. For example, You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks. The Chinese people are friendly and kind.
I take pride in our country. I hope China is becoming better and stronger.
第四步·优
Beautiful China
China is a great country with a long history. It lies in the east of Asia. It has the largest population of the world. It is big and has rich natural resources. There are lots of green mountains and clean water. There are many places of interest. It is famous for the Great Wall in the world. The natural scenery is fascinating. Thousands of foreigners come to China for a trip every year. It has its special food, such as Beijing Duck, Sichuan hotpot and so on. They’re very delicious. There are lots of traditional table manners as well. For example, You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks. The Chinese people are friendly and kind. They’re having a happy life. I love China.
I take pride in our country. I hope our country will become better and stronger in the future.
【策略优化】
技巧1: 凤头豹尾, 言之有序
开门见山, 直奔主题。这种写法干脆利落, 入题快捷, 不枝不蔓, 实为表达开篇的首选方法。结尾要像豹尾, 有平衡感, 简洁明了。
技巧2: 多措并举, 优化布局
介绍事物时, 我们可以使用比较法和细节描述法等, 精心构思设计介绍次序, 使短文结构、层次清晰, 更能深刻、完整地表现中心。
技巧3: 避繁就简, 措辞精准
说明介绍类书面表达的写作目的是介绍客观事物, 这就要求说明的语言应简练精辟、通俗易懂。同时, 措辞必须严谨, 语言必须准确。绝不可言不达意, 有任何笼统、含糊、生硬牵强, 甚至错误的表达出现。
技巧4: 凸显亮点, 美化文章
尝试使用高级词汇或句型, 彰显我们的语言功底, 以凸显文章的亮点, 给文章增添文采, 给阅卷教师留下深刻印象。
维度2：熟练运用写作模板
·记叙文·
人物介绍型
I have made many good friends. __________(引出人物) is one of them. She is __________(总体给人的感觉). She is tall and__________(身材). Her hair is __________(头型). She always wears__________(衣着)and gives us the impression that __________(给人的印象).
__________ is always willing to __________(性格). She is good at __________(特长). Whenever I have problems, I __________. Once__________(引出事例). To my surprise, __________.
We will __________, but I hope__________(表达愿望).
介绍人物的外形特征
介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一个典型的事例
提出愿望
【模板范文】
Bill is my classmate. He is a tall and strong boy with glasses. He is hard-working and easy-going. We got to know each other three years ago. He didn’t know any English at all at that time. At the beginning, he always studied alone and didn’t get along well with the other students. As a result, he made little progress. However, our teachers and classmates often encouraged him and gave him support. With the help of us, he improved his English little by little. Now, he is full of confidence and has done quite well in learning English.
这篇描述人的范文使用了很多常用的高级短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。同学们在平时的学习中要学会把所学的短语灵活地运用到写作中去。
1. get to know (开始相识);
2. not. . . at all (一点都不);
3. get along well with sb. (与某人相处得很好);
4. as a result (结果);
5. make progress (取得进步);
6. with the help of. . . (在……的帮助下);
7. little by little (一点一点地);
8. be full of (充满);
9. do well in=be good at (擅长于……)。
【写作注意事项】
a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述;
b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一;
c. 在描写人的外貌时, 常用一般现在时, 人称常用第一人称或第三人称;
d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。
【写作方法】
第一部分: 人物介绍: 引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如: 年龄、外貌、身份、性格等;
第二部分: 叙述典型事例: 通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等;
第三部分: 对人物的评价: 夸赞、指责或从事例中得到的感受、启示等。
写人记事型(一)
__________(时间) __________(人物)had a basketball match with __________.
The match began at __________(比赛开始时间). At first, __________. Whenever we scored, I __________(我观看比赛时的表现). In the last quarter, our team__________. In the last minute__________(我们队的表现). Our class __________the match(比赛结果).
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
开门见山引出事件, 点明了基本信息
叙述了整个事件的过程及结果
对整个事件的评价
【模板范文】
Yesterday our class had a basketball match with Class Two. Class Two was the top team of our grade, but we didn’t want to settle for second best.
The match began at 4: 30. At first, Class Two played better and was always in the lead. We were standing around the court, cheering loudly for our team. Whenever we scored, I jumped and shouted, forgetting I’m a girl. The unfavorable situation lasted for three quarters. In the last quarter, our team changed the plan and slowly caught up. In the last minute the score became 81 to 80. Our class won the match.
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
写人记事型(二)
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构, 模板如下:
【模板范文】
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. In the morning, I shared some interesting stories with her, and then we happily sang and danced together. At noon, we felt hungry very much, so I cooked noodles with eggs and green vegetables. My sister considered it to be delicious, which made me very happy. Then, we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played all kinds of games. Besides, I taught her some classical poems, and my sister learned them very quickly. Next, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. Although I felt very tired, I experienced real joy.
【写作注意事项】
记叙文是以写人、记事为主要内容的文体。它包括“六大要素”: 时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果(即 when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白, 同时还应注意以下三点:
(1)叙述方式: 主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种, 英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。
(2)时态上: 记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情, 所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。
(3)人称上: 常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情; 用第三人称表示的是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。
【写作方法】
第一段: 开门见山, 交代事件的大体情况, 如时间、地点、人物、事件等;
第二段: 详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等;
第三段: 评价该事件, 表明自己的看法、感受等。
写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说, 文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”, 即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题, 使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
对于叙事类的文章, 可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)”的开头可以是: Last month, my family and I went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆型开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中, 采用回忆型的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇, 如 never forget (永远无法忘记)、remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、exciting (令人激动的)、surprising (令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的). . . 如“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写: I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问型开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中, 都可采用疑问型开头, 这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如 “Planting Trees (种树)”的开头可以是: Have you ever planted trees Don’t you think planting trees is. . . 再如 “Traveling Abroad (出国之旅)”的开头可以是: If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章, 特别是叙事类的文章中, 可以采用倒叙的写作手法, 先写出事件的结果, 再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写: I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me Let me tell you. It’s a. . . story.
·议论文·
【写作方法】
初中生在写议论文时要首先考虑自己的观点是什么, 明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证, 最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主, 但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式: 开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下:
第一步: 确定主题, 引出论点;
第二步: 通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起;
第三步: 得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。
观点态度型(一)
My students think that __________, because__________.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that __________, so__________(我的看法/选择). First of all, __________(原因一). Secondly, __________(原因二). Thirdly/Most important of all, __________(原因三).
All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that __________(总结观点). And I hope __________(提出愿望).
引出一种观点
阐述自己的观点/选择, 并论证自己的观点
总结自己的观点
【模板范文】
Many students think that they do not need to learn English, because they don’t plan to go abroad.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that English is very important to us, so we should learn English well. First of all, in the reform and opening time, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must use English because most of them speak and write in English. Secondly, in the world today most books are written in English. If you know much English, you can read newspapers and magazines in English. Most important of all, you can learn something more widely.
All in all, I hold the opinion that we should learn English well. And I hope that all the students can use English freely.
观点态度型(二)
The topic of __主题__ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say __A__ is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of __理由一__. What’s more, __理由二__. Moreover, __理由三__. While others think that __B__ is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, __理由一__. Second (Besides), __理由二__. Third (Finally), __理由三__.
From my point of view, I think __我的观点__. The reason is that __原因__. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (latter) is surely a wise choice.
【模板范文】
Nowadays, a large number of students in our school have formed a bad habit of cheating on homework and examinations.
The reasons why they cheat are as follows. Firstly, they think the school has given them too much homework, which makes it difficult to finish all of them on time. Secondly, some of them are afraid of being punished by teachers as well as their parents. Thirdly, they often spend a great deal of time playing computer games or surfing the Internet, which has aroused our teachers’attention. Last but not least, some students are unaware of the importance of studying by themselves, and their aim is just to make their teachers and parents happy.
As far as I am concerned, cheating on homework and examinations is harmful to our studies. On the one hand, this kind of act is bad for their studies. On the other hand, they will be looked down upon by other people. As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy”. Honesty plays a very important role in our daily lives. I strongly suggest that we should be honest, because only in this way can we not only improve our studies but also earn respect from others. Above all, I hope that our school can offer students less homework and fewer exams and provide us with more free time to study by ourselves.
这篇描述抄写家庭作业和考试作弊现象的范文使用了很多常用的连贯词, 连贯词能够使文章衔接流畅。上面使用的这些连贯词值得我们学习和模仿。
1. nowadays (当今; 现在);
2. a large number of (很多), 修饰可数名词;
3. a great deal of (很多), 修饰不可数名词;
4. firstly (首先), secondly (其次), thirdly (再次), last but not least (最后);
5. as far as I’m concerned (我认为);
6. on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . (一方面……另一方面……);
7. as an old saying goes (正如俗话所说);
8. I strongly suggest that. . . (我强烈建议);
9. not only. . . but also (不但……而且……);
10. above all (最重要的是)。
说明利弊型
Nowadays, __________like to __________(社会现象). About this, different people have different opinions.
On the one hand, some people think __________(优点一). Moreover, __________(优点二). But every coin has two sides. Firstly, __________(缺点一). Besides, __________(缺点二).
I think __________(我的观点).
介绍一种社会现象并引出观点
阐述优点并论证
阐述缺点并论证
总结自己的观点
【模板范文】
An increasing number of Chinese middle school students have gone abroad to study now.
It is known to all that studying abroad has plenty of advantages. It can not only provide students with a chance to communicate with foreigners, but also offer them a good opportunity to have a better understanding of the local culture and history, which enables them to broaden their horizons. More importantly, the students can make a lot of friends from different backgrounds as well as learn how to live on their own.
Of course, studying abroad may have its disadvantages as well. For one thing, students who go abroad will find it difficult to get used to living in another country. For another, a few students will face the safety problems because they are too young to deal with dangerous situations.
As far as I am concerned, I strongly suggest that middle school students should complete their college education in China and then make full preparations for the opportunity to go abroad.
这篇描述出国学习优缺点的范文使用了很多常用和高级的短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. an increasing number of (越来越多的), 是many的高级用法;
2. plenty of (很多), 也是many的高级用法;
3. provide sb. with sth. (为某人提供某物);
4. have a better understanding of (更好地理解);
5. more importantly (更重要的是);
6. as well (也), 用来代替 too;
7. for one thing. . . for another. . . (一方面……另一方面……);
8. deal with (对付; 处理), 常用的还有 work out, solve;
9. make full preparations for (为……做好充足的准备)。
解决方法型
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is __________(问题). For example, some __________(例一); some __________(例二); some ______(例三) and still some __________(例四).
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should __________(解决方法一). For another thing, we’d better __________(解决方法二). Besides, we should __________(解决方法三).
In my opinion, if__________, we will __________.
阐述一种现象并具体说明现状
提出解决方案
我的观点以及对未来的憧憬
【模板范文】
With the rapid development of technology, shared bicycle comes into people’s lives. At present, in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou, shared bicycle has become increasingly popular. A large number of shared bicycles can be found and rented at a low price. On one side, bicycle makes it convenient for people to go out. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time in our city. Moreover, you can park the bike almost anywhere you like.
However, bicycle-sharing system brings some problems as well. On the one hand, its management is not perfect, and even the kids can open the lock and ride the bicycle. It is obvious that such behavior is very dangerous. On the other hand, a large number of people damage the shared bicycles on purpose, like throwing them into the river or destroying the codes on them.
In my opinion, we should treat shared bicycles correctly. There is no denying that they are helpful to us as a high-tech product. Firstly, our government should set more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of bicycle-sharing system. Secondly, the public should raise their awareness of using shared bicycles in a reasonable way. Lastly, the transportation system should be upgraded and more space should be provided for parking shared bicycles. Only in this way can we make shared bicycles become effective as the public service.
这篇描述共享单车的范文使用了很多常用的单词、短语和句型, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. 使用 with the rapid development of (随着……的快速发展);
2. 使用词汇 increasingly, 相当于 more and more;
3. 使用a large number of 代替 many;
4. 使用 moreover (而且), 相当于 what’s more;
5. 使用 as well, 放在肯定句句末, 相当于too;
6. 使用 it is obvious that. . . (很明显的是……), 相当于obviously;
7. 使用 there is no denying that. . . (不能否认的是……);
8. 使用 raise their awareness of. . . (提高对……的认识)。
·说明文·
【写作方法】
事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识, 使之理解客观世界, 掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言, 事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表, 文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写事物说明文必须注意事实准确、表达清晰、条理清楚、层次分明、语言简练、用词准确。要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点:
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征。
介绍事物, 一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征, 就是这一事物区别于其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征, 才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说得明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序。
介绍一件事物, 目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等, 因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物:
(1)时间顺序。即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
(2)空间顺序。即按事物空间位置的顺序, 由上至下、由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。
(3)逻辑顺序。即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明, 如由概括到具体、由整体到部分、由现象到本质、由表及里、由原因到结果、由主要到次要, 由特点到用途等。
3. 运用恰当的语言。
介绍事物, 文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下, 我们还可以运用描写的方法, 来增添文章的可读性。
【写作注意事项】
事物说明文的主要特点: 一是知识性和科学性, 二是应用性和解说性, 三是行文的条理性。写这类文章宜少用描写, 要用具体详实的材料说明问题, 而不要抽象、空洞地讨论。语言要简洁、准确, 条理要清楚, 讨论问题时要集中, 切忌面面俱到。说明文的时态常用一般现在时, 语态常用被动语态, 有时用虚拟语气。
事物介绍型
__说明问题或现象__. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps __功能、使用方法__.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, __优点及好处__.
说明问题或现象, 引出说明对象
具体写功能, 使用方法
优点及好处
【模板范文】
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
现象介绍型
The table below shows that __说明问题或现象__.
__数据__ percent __现象一__. __数据__ percent __现象二__. __数据__percent __现象三__.
In my opinion, __自己的观点或感受__.
说明问题或现象, 引出说明对象
写出数据和对应的现象
自己的观点或感受
【模板范文】
A recent study shows that nearly 40% of the school students all over the country do not have breakfast.
The reasons why some students miss the breakfast are similar to each other. For example, some students usually stay up late to complete the homework, which makes them get up late and miss their breakfast. In addition, some students spend too much money on their snacks or games, and as a result, they don’t get enough money to afford their three meals. Worse still, some school girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast, which has a bad effect on their health. It is obvious that some of them always feel sleepy and have bad memory, let alone achieve high grades in all kinds of tests. It is a pity that those who often miss the breakfast don’t realize the importance of breakfast.
As a matter of fact, it’s extremely important to have breakfast every day because it can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy. For a creative mind and a strong body, I strongly suggest that school students should start their new day with a regular and healthy breakfast.
这篇有关对吃早餐调查的范文使用了很多常用和高级的短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. 使用百分比40% of the school students;
2. 使用同位语从句 the reasons why. . . ;
3. 使用短语 be similar to. . . (与……相似);
4. 使用短语 stay up late (熬夜);
5. 使用短语 as a result (结果);
6. 使用短语worse still (更糟糕的是);
7. 使用短语 have a bad effect on. . . (对……有不好的影响);
8. 使用句型 it is obvious that. . . (很明显……);
9. 使用短语 let alone (更不用说);
10. 使用句型 it is a pity that. . . (遗憾的是……)。
·申请信·
【写作方法】
申请信要求一事一议, 内容单纯。其内容一般包括: 申请的具体内容; 自己的情况和条件; 提出要求, 如请求回信、面试等。申请信的书写可以遵照以下步骤:
第一步: 点明写信目的, 说明信息来源, 并陈述自己能胜任;
第二步: 介绍自己, 具体说明能胜任的原因;
第三步: 表达期望, 请求尽快答复并给予机会。
Dear __________,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of __________(工作、职位等)/I write to express my interest in __________(工作、职位等)/In reply to your advertisement in__________, I write the letter.
My name is __________. One of my reasons for applying is that __________(原因一). The other reason is that __________(原因二). Besides, __________(原因三).
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Yours sincerely,
__________(落款)
点明写作目的
介绍自己, 说明能胜任的原因
表达期望
【模板范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I’m writing to apply for the admission to WIS. WIS is just my dream place.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my friends. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my school. Last but not least, I’m an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.
I expect you can give me the chance. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you can give me a kind consideration.
I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
·发言稿·
【写作方法】
发言稿的基本组成部分有三个: 称呼语、正文和结束语。正文部分提出话题、论述, 然后得出结论或者发出倡议。发言稿的写作可以遵循以下步骤:
第一步: 自我介绍并点明发言主题;
第二步: 阐述问题或列举现象, 进行总结或提出解决办法;
第三步: 礼貌性结束。
演讲稿
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning/afternoon/evening. I am __________(自我介绍). It is a great honor for me to make a speech on __________(演讲题目)/Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech here. The topic of my speech is__________(演讲题目). In my opinion, as__________, __________ is important. First, we should __________(做法一). Then, we’d better __________(做法二). What’s more, __________(做法三).
I hope I have made myself understood. Thank you for listening.
自我介绍并点明演讲主题
对演讲话题具体展开论述
结束语, 表示感谢
【模板范文】
Hello, everyone! Today I’m going to tell you something about the problems we have and how we should solve them effectively. As you know, we are in Grade 9 now. All of us are under great pressure because the senior high school entrance examination is around the corner. Every day we have mountains of homework or tests. As a result, we can’t get enough sleep at night and feel tired during the day. Besides, our teachers and parents are all very strict with us, which puts too much pressure on us. To a certain degree, it is bad for our health. Therefore, I think we must do something to work out these problems as soon as possible.
Here are some useful tips for you. Firstly, we must learn how to plan everything well. A good student should know how to make good use of time each day. A proper learning and rest schedule plays an important role in our daily life. Secondly, we should take more exercise and join in different kinds of after-class activities, such as running, reading and so on. Finally, we are supposed to ask our teachers as well as our parents for help when we have difficulty in dealing with our anxiety.
I hope my speech will be helpful to you. Thanks for listening.
这是一篇发言稿, 里面使用了一些高级短语代替一些普通的短语, 同时使用连贯词使文章变得更加流畅。
1. 使用as you know (正如你所知);
2. 使用英语习语 around the corner (即将来临), 意义相当于near;
3. 使用 mountains of (许多; 大量的), 代替many/much;
4. 使用 besides (此外; 另外), 相当于 in addition;
5. 使用 to a certain degree (在某种程度上), 相当于in a way;
6. 使用 therefore, 相当于so;
7. 使用连接词 firstly (首先), secondly (其次), finally (最后);
8. 使用 make good use of (好好地利用), 意义相当于make the best use of;
9. 使用 are supposed to (应该), 代替 should;
10. 使用 have difficulty in doing sth. (做某事有困难), 相当于 have trouble in doing sth. 。
倡议书
Dear schoolmates,
It is known to us all that __________. Let’s do something to __________(倡议内容).
As students, we should__________. First, we had better __________(做法一). Second, we should__________ (做法二). Third, we hope that__________(做法三). Fourth, we should__________ (做法四).
In sum, we should do much more things, so that__________(结果).
__________(落款)
提出倡议的原因和背景
提出具体的措施和方法
进行总结, 提出希望
【模板范文】
Dear classmates,
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. One of the most serious problems is the haze, which has a bad effect on people’s health. Besides, what worries us most is that some people in some places even have no clean water to drink because of the water pollution. It is time for us to take some actions to deal with these problems.
What can we do to solve these problems Firstly, we can often go to school on foot or by bike instead of cars. Secondly, we can use shopping baskets rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Thirdly, we can recycle something that we can use again and use both sides of the paper if necessary. Last but not least, we must always keep in mind that we have only one earth and we should do whatever we can to protect the earth.
If we can put these points into practice, we will create a bright future.
Li Hua
这篇有关环境问题的范文运用了许多常用的高级短语, 值得同学们学习和借鉴。
1. 使用句型 one of the+形容词最高级+名词的复数形式;
2. 使用高级短语 have a bad effect on. . . (对……有不好的影响);
3. 使用主语从句 what worries us most is that. . . ;
4. 使用高级短语 deal with, 意义相当于 work out, solve;
5. 使用高级短语 instead of (代替);
6. 使用高级短语 rather than (而不是);
7. 使用状语从句if necessary (如果有必要的话);
8. 使用高级短语 keep in mind (记住), 相当于 remember;
9. 使用提分句型if we can put these points into practice (如果我们能够将这些要点付诸实践)。
·电子邮件·
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:
(1)收件人地址: 在标题栏的“收件人(To)” 框中输入收信人的e-mail地址。
(2)主题: “主题(Subject)”框的内容应简明地概括信的内容, 短的可以是一个单词, 如 greeting; 长的可以是一个名词性短语, 也可以是完整句。
(3)称呼: e-mail一般使用非正式的文体, 因此正文前的称呼通常无需使用诸如 Dear Mr John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名, 如: Hi Tom, 。 但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓。如: Dear Doctor Li, 。
(4)正文: 写e-mail 和写英文书信相差不多, 但要注意以下两点:
a: 首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人, 语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写语言, 但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像中考书面表达就是正规的写作, 不能用俚语或缩写词语。
b: 写电子邮件要直接, 并多用短句使意思清楚, 对重点部分要作详细介绍。中考试题要求写电子邮件, 就必须根据提示, 将要点写全, 并注意语言的运用。
(5) 信尾客套话: 信尾客套话通常也很简明。常常只需一个词, 如: Thanks, Best, Cheers 等。不需要用一般信函中的 Sincerely yours, Best regards等。
【模板范文】
·巧用谚语, 妙笔生花·
在英语写作中, 为了让文章看起来更加饱满, 语言结构更加丰富, 我们也可以使用适当的谚语。如果英语谚语用得贴切, 会给阅卷老师留下更加深刻的印象, 同时相应的语言分也会有所增加。当你引用谚语时, 可以在之前加上: As the saying goes, As we all know, It is common knowledge that. . . 等等。
(一)关于勤奋
1. No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘, 一分收获。
2. Rome was not built in a day.
伟业非一日之功。
3. Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
4. Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration.
天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。
5. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.
世上无难事, 只要肯登攀。
6. Success only means working hard all one’s life.
成功只意味着终身不懈的努力。
7. I have nothing to offer but blood, hard work and tears.
我所能奉献的没有其它, 只有热血、辛劳和眼泪。
(二)关于学习方法
8. Learning without thinking is a dangerous thing.
学而不思则罔。
9. He who learns but does not think is lost; he who thinks but does not learn is in danger.
学而不思则罔, 思而不学则殆。
10. It’s never too old to learn.
活到老, 学到老。
11. Well begun is half done.
好的开始等于成功的一半。
12. Easier said than done.
说起来容易做起来难。
13. Experience is the mother of wisdom.
实践出真知。
14. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜过语言。
15. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
千里之行, 始于足下。
Little by little one goes far.
千里之行, 始于足下。
16. Look before you leap.
三思而后行。
17. He who laughs last laughs best.
笑到最后的人笑得最好。
18. Two heads are better than one.
三个臭皮匠, 顶个诸葛亮。
19. One tree can’t make a forest.
独木不成林。
20. Habit is a second nature.
习惯成自然。
21. Seeing is believing.
眼见为实。
22. All roads lead to Rome.
条条大路通罗马。
23. No man can do two things at once.
一心不可二用。
(三)关于自强自信
24. Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者, 事竟成。
25. God helps those who help themselves.
天助者自助。
26. Nothing is too difficult in the world if you set your mind into it.
世上无难事, 只怕有心人。
Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.
世上无难事, 只怕有心人。
27. Failure is the mother of success.
失败是成功之母。
28. Confidence doesn’t need any reason. If you’re alive, you should feel 100 percent confident.
自信不需要理由, 只要还活着就要信心十足。
29. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
自信是走向成功的第一步。
30. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
人必须相信自己, 这是成功的秘诀。
(四)关于惜时
31. Don’t leave today’s work for tomorrow. =Never put off until tomorrow what may be done today.
今日事今日毕。
Don’t put off today’s work till tomorrow.
今日事今日毕。
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.
今日事今日毕。
32. Time and tide waits for no man. 岁月不等人。
33. Time flies. 光阴似箭。
34. Time lost cannot be won again.
时光流逝, 不可复得。
35. Do you love life Then do not waste time for life is made up of time.
你热爱生命吗 那么别浪费时间, 因为生命就是由时间组成的。
(五)关于知识
36. Reading makes a full man. 读书长见识。
37. Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.
手里有钱财, 不如胸中有文才。
(六)关于朋友
38. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
39. Like and like make good friends.
趣味相投。
40. A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
人生在世无朋友, 犹如生活无阳光。
41. A friend is easier lost than found.
得朋友难, 失朋友易。
(七)关于母爱
42. A mother’s love never changes.
母爱永恒。
43. A mother’s love is like a circle. It has no beginning and no ending.
母爱就像一个圆。没有起点, 也没有终点。
44. Blood is thicker than water.
血浓于水。
(八)关于健康
45. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果, 医生远离我。
46. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只工作不玩耍, 聪明孩子也变傻。
47. Laughter is the best medicine.
笑是最好的药。
48. Health is happiness. 健康即幸福。
49. Health is more important than wealth.
健康胜过财富。
50. The first wealth is health.
健康是人生第一财富。
51. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.
早睡早起, 使人健康、富裕、聪明。
52. An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.
一日之计在于晨。
(九)其他
53. Every coin has two sides.
凡事皆有两面性。
54. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
入乡随俗。
55. Every dog has his day.
人人皆有得意时。
56. Love me, love my dog.
爱屋及乌。
57. Never offer to teach fish to swim.
不要班门弄斧。
58. Out of sight, out of mind.
眼不见, 心不念。
59. It’s never too late to mend.
亡羊补牢, 为时未晚。
60. There is no smoke without fire.
无风不起浪。
·巧用连接词, 赋予语言灵气·
1. 表文章结构顺序: First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, Next, And then, Finally/In the end/At last
2. 表并列补充关系(递进关系): What’s more (甚至)/What’s worse (更糟糕的是), Even (甚至), Especially (特别是), Besides (除此之外), Moreover (甚至), Furthermore, In addition (除此之外还有), Not only. . . but also(不但……而且), At the same time (同时)
3. 表转折对比关系: However, On the contrary, But, Although+从句(不与but连用), Despite/In spite of+n. /doing (尽管…… 但是……)
4. 用来陈述正反方的不同观点(一般用于议论文章中): On the one hand. . . On the other hand. . . (一方面……又一方面……), Some. . . while others. . . (一些人认为……而另一些人认为……), Everything has two sides. . . (事物都具有两面性), Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . (一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点)
5. 表因果关系: Because (不与so 连用), As (由于; 因为), So/Therefore (因此), As a result(结果), Thanks to(多亏), Because of/As a result of (由于), Without, With the help of. . . (在……的帮助下)
6. 表进行举例说明: For example+句子(可以用于句中、句首、句尾), Such as. . . and so on
7. 表陈述事实: In fact (事实上)
8. 表达自己的观点: As far as I know/As far as I am concerned, In my opinion/For my part, To tell the truth (说实话), To be honest (诚实地说), Generally speaking (通常来说), 这些短语一般都用于最后一段的开头, 用来陈述自己的观点。
9. 表总结: In short (总之), In a word (总之), 一般也用于最后一段表示总结。
10. As is known to (us) all, As we know (据我们所知), It is said/reported+that 从句(据说/报道……), Recently(最近, 用于作文开头, 其后一般用现在完成时态), With the development of the. . . (随着……的发展)等连接词或者短语一般用于句首, 用于陈述事实。
11. 连接各类从句的连接词:
时间状语从句: when, not. . . until, as soon as
目的状语从句: so that+从句(为了)
结果状语从句: so. . . that+从句(如此……以至于……)
条件状语从句: if, unless (除非), as long as (只要)
让步状语从句: though (尽管, 不与 but 连用), although, even though (即使), even if (即使), no matter what/when/where/who/which/how (无论……)
比较状语从句: as. . . as, not so. . . as, than
附: 用来提建议的句型:
I suggest that you should do (我建议你做……)
If I were you, I would do. . . (我要是你的话, 我会做……)
It’s best to do (最好做……)
You had better (not) do (最好(不)做)
How about/What about doing. . . (……怎么样)
I think you should do. . . (我认为你应该做……)
Why not do/why don’t you do. . . (为什么不……)
Only in this way can we do it well. (这句话一般用于所提出的建议之后, 意思为: 只有通过这种办法, 我们才能把它做好。注意: 该句型用倒装语序, 用得好的话会成为该篇作文的亮点。)
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2024中考英语书面表达高分突破必备
维度1：掌握表达类型策略
1.写人叙事
[命题特点] 1. 常采用给材料的形式, 让学生描述或记叙某个人物或事件; 2. 要求学生能够简短地发表自己的看法, 或给予正确的评价; 3. 一般有很大的自由度, 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 畅谈自己的看法。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 切勿漏掉六个要素, 即五个“W” (who, when, where, what, why)和一个“H” (how); 3. 时态、人称要分清; 事件、线索要连贯; 内容、思想要感人。 [经典句式] He is tall/short. . . and has long/short/black/brown. . . hair. 他很高/矮……并且留着长长的/短的/黑色的/棕色的头发。 She is interested in. . . 她对……感兴趣。 He’s so kind that we all like him. 他那么友好, 以至于我们都喜欢他。 He used to be/have. . . 他过去常常是(有)…… We’re proud of him/her. 我们以他(她)为骄傲。 He’s ready to help others. 他乐于助人。 I’ve learnt a lot from her/him. 我已经从她/他那儿学到了很多。
【策略解析】
每个人心中都有一个闪亮的名字, 如张桂梅、钟南山、你的妈妈×××……假如你是李华, 请给你的英国笔友Linda写一封电子邮件, 介绍你心目中的一位英雄。
注意:
1. 信中必须包含英雄的基本信息和主要事迹;
2. 信中不得出现自己的校名和姓名;
3. 80词左右(首段已给出, 不计入总词数)。
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 介绍心目中的英雄。
2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍心目中的英雄”为中心。以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般过去时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 点明谁是“我”心目中的英雄, 运用hero, heart等词汇; 其次, 介绍“我”心目中英雄的基本信息和主要事迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you.
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart. I have one in mine, too. The hero is my mother.
My mother is a common worker in a company. She’s very kind and friendly. She gets on well with everyone around her. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for a trip, but nobody looked after her pet dog. She asked if my mother would do this for her. My mother agreed.
I’m proud of her. I’ve learned a lot from her. I’ll learn from her.
Yours,
Li Hua
第四步·优
Dear Linda,
How are you getting on I’m writing this email to share a story with you.
Everybody has a hero in his or her heart and so do I. The hero in my heart is my mother.
My mother is a common worker who works in a company. She’s very kind and friendly. She gets on well with everyone around her. She is always ready to help others. Once, our neighbor had to leave for a trip, but nobody looked after her pet dog. She asked if my mother would do this for her. My mother agreed without thinking twice.
I’m proud of her. I’ve also learned a lot from her. I hope I can follow in her footsteps.
Yours,
Li Hua
【策略优化】
技巧1: 小词大用
汉语中有些词义看起来很复杂很文雅, 但在英语中可用一些常用词来表达。下面这些词为书面表达高频词汇: talk, have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help, interesting, excited, friendly, leave, learn等。
技巧2: 巧用高级词汇
为了增加中考书面表达的亮点, 增强其表达效果, 可以使用高级词汇来代替一般词汇。
一般表达 高级表达
now/today nowadays
decide make one’s mind/make one’s decision
should be supposed to
besides what’s more/in addition
good wonderful/excellent
sb. think(s) in one’s opinion
技巧3: 句式灵活变换
采用丰富的英语句式结构可以增强文章的表达效果, 能凸显作者深厚的英语语言功底。被动语态的使用, 非谓语动词的使用, 主从复合句的使用, 特殊句型的使用, 均能收到不错的效果, 尝试使用一些英语谚语或格言也会使文章更加出彩。
技巧4: 升华思想, 突出主题
“升华思想, 突出主题”是写作中的一个常用技法, 就是将一个浅显、普遍的问题提升到一个更高的精神层面, 从而使文章主题更深刻、更突出。
2.方法建议
[命题特点] 1. 一般给出问题和材料, 要求学生写出解决方法或解决建议; 2. 话题侧重行为、学习、环保、安全及健康等方面; 3. 一般要求以书信、邮件形式写作, 学生可根据提示增加一些细节, 适当发挥。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 如果以书信、邮件形式呈现, 必须符合书信、邮件的基本格式; 3. 时态、人称要分清; 方法、建议要实用; 观念、态度要真诚。 [经典句式] I’d like to share my ideas with you. 我想与你分享我的想法。 Here are some of my suggestions. 这是我的一些建议。 The best way to. . . is by. . . ……最好的方法是通过…… To keep healthy/safe, we should. . . 为了保持健康/安全, 我们应当…… It’s one’s duty to. . . Let’s start from today. ……是某人的责任。让我们从今天开始吧。 Everyone should play a part in doing sth. 人人都应当参与…… I hope my advice/suggestions is/are helpful to you. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
【策略解析】
假如你是李磊, 你的笔友Anna给你发了电子邮件诉说她的烦恼, 请根据邮件内容进行回复。
要求:
1. 逻辑清晰, 内容完整, 书写规范;
2. 词数: 100左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Li Lei,
My sister practices playing the violin in an after-school class, so my parents asked me to go and learn it too. But I’m just not a music girl. You know, I’m interested in sports and I want to choose what I like. Now, I’m so upset. What should I do
Anna
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
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I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 针对烦恼, 提出建议。
2. 审人称: 本题要求“回复邮件, 提出建议”, 以第二人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 分析造成当前状况的原因, 运用maybe, feel, talk about等词汇; 其次, 提出自己的建议; 最后发表个人观点, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel about it. Why not talk with them You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are good at sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you.
I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
第四步·优
Dear Anna,
I understand your feeling. Here is what I think.
Maybe your parents won’t know how you feel about it. Why not talk with them You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. Meanwhile, you’d better tell them you are old enough to make your own decisions. Further-more, try to get a proper chance to prove that you are talented in sports. Only then will they know you better and let you choose what you love to do. I’m sure your parents will understand you and agree with your ideas.
I hope what I said is helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Lei
【策略优化】
技巧1: 言之有理, 言之有物
建议、观点要鲜明、正确; 要有实实在在的内容和充足的理由来支撑建议、观点。
技巧2: 首尾呼应, 合理分段
在写此类短文时, 把文章的主题句写在最前面, 使读者一目了然; 在短文结尾处, 简要概括前面所说的内容, 文章的中心更加鲜明突出。
技巧3: 连词增色, 长短得当
使用恰当的连词对短文加以润色, 使所写短文思路清晰、文字连贯、语言流畅。以短句为主, 长句搭配, 使短文中的句子富有变化, 会给人以错落有致的美感。如: You should tell your parents that you don’t want to practice playing the violin because you aren’t interested in music. 被动语态、主从复合句的使用, 均能收到很好的效果。
技巧4: 段落清晰, 完美收尾
运用简洁的语言, 把主题思想明确地表达出来, 升华思想, 或者在全文即将煞尾时, 卒章显志, 使文章中心鲜明突出。
3.计划梦想
[命题特点] 1. 一般给出提示, 让学生写出自己的计划或梦想; 2. 要求学生描述将来某一阶段或某一活动的计划; 谈论自己的梦想, 给出坚持该梦想的理由以及实现该梦想将要做出的努力; 3. 学生可以充分发挥自己的想象, 适当发挥, 增加文章内容。 [考场避险] 1. 仔细研读提示及要求, 切勿漏掉要点; 2. 适当增加要点; 注意使用高级词汇及句子; 3. 注意人称及时态、语态的正确把握。 [经典句式] I want to be. . . when I grow up. 当我长大后, 我想当一名…… She plans to travel around the world. 她计划周游世界。 The summer holiday is coming to an end and the new term is coming. 暑假即将结束, 新的学期即将到来。 I’d like to have a good rest and relax myself. 我想好好休息, 放松一下自己。 He wants to read more books to improve himself. 他想多读书来提升自己。 I hope my dream can come true one day. 我希望我的梦想有一天会实现。 I think you’ll achieve your dream. 我认为你会实现你的梦想。
【策略解析】
假如你是李华, 你的英国笔友Lisa发来邮件, 询问你的暑假安排。请你根据图片提示, 用英语给她写封回信。
要求:
1. 语言规范、语句通顺;
2. 应包括图片所有要点, 可适当发挥;
3. 字数: 100词左右, 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇: the 1st National Congress of the CPC 中共一大; publicize 宣传; garbage classification 垃圾分类
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 由要求可知主题是暑期计划。
2. 审人称: 本题要求“回邮件来叙述暑期计划”, 以第一人称为主。
3. 审时态: 一般将来时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 明确是暑假安排或计划; 其次, 详细叙述自己的计划或假期安排; 最后发表个人祝福, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize how to do garbage classification in my community. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai. And I will also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Finally, I will join the English clubs to improve my spoken English. What about your plan
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
第四步·优
Dear Lisa,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my holiday plan.
First, I will help my mother do chores at home, such as sweeping the floor and cleaning the windows. Next, I will do some volunteer jobs. I will publicize how to do garbage classification in my community. Then, I want to travel to learn more about Chinese culture. I will not only travel to Shanghai to visit the site of the 1st National Congress of CPC in Shanghai, but also visit the South Lake Red Boat in Jiaxing, Zhejiang. Last but not least, I will improve my spoken English by joining English clubs. What about your plan
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【策略优化】
技巧1: 遵循事实, 合理想象
根据实际情况制订计划, 以现实为依据合情合理地描述理想, 写出富有创造性、新奇、有趣、可信的佳作。
技巧2: 巧妙过渡, 彰显文采
巧妙使用高级的过渡句或过渡词汇, 以避免文章干瘪而空泛、枯燥而乏味, 可彰显作者的文字功底和写作文采, 增强语言表现力。如: in order to, not only. . . but also. . . , both. . . and. . . , as well as等。
技巧3: 大题小做, 变隐为显
在写作时, 面对“计划”或“梦想”等题材范围十分宽泛的“大题目”, 要选取自己拥有材料丰富的题目, 从新颖深刻的立意角度去写, 并将题干中隐含的信息道破, 使其变为明示信息。
技巧4: 巧用短语, “语”众不同
短语的意思往往比单词更为饱满, 因此我们要用短语巧妙表达, 使文章“靓”起来, 给人耳目一新的感觉。
4.说明介绍
[命题特点] 1. 常采用提示或图表的形式, 让学生介绍某种活动、某种动物或名胜等; 2. 要求学生能够将活动、任务、地点等进行清楚而准确地描述; 3. 主要考查任务说明文、事物说明文和方式方法说明文等。 [考场避险] 1. 主体要明确, 结构要完整, 句型要简练; 2. 合理运用说明方法: 分析、分类、因果、举例、比较等; 3. 时态、语态要分清; 段落、内容要层次; 单词、标点要正确。 [经典句式] He/She/It looks like. . . 他/她/它看起来像…… It’s 300 meters long/wide/high. 它有300米长/宽/高。 It’s made of wood. 它是由木材制成的。 With the rapidly growing popularity of. . . 随着……的快速普及…… A recent survey suggests that. . . 最近的一项调查显示…… China is a great country with a long history. 中国是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家。
【策略解析】
我们国家历史悠久, 地大物博。有勤劳善良的人民; 有绿水青山, 美丽的风景; 有独特的美食, 传统的饮食文化。请以“Beautiful China”为题, 写一篇作文, 描写大美中国, 表达我们对祖国的热爱。
要求:
1. 思路清晰, 语句通顺, 书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现与考生本人相关的校名和姓名等真实信息;
3. 词数: 80词左右的短文。
Beautiful China
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Yours,
Li Hua
第一步·审
1. 审主题: 介绍大美中国。
2. 审人称: 本题要求以“介绍中国”为中心, 以第三人称为主。
3. 审时态: 陈述事实, 以一般现在时为主。
4. 审思路: 首先, 说明中国是个伟大的国家, 运用great, history等词汇; 其次, 介绍中国的风土人情、名胜古迹; 最后发表个人感悟, 升华情感。
第二步·列
第三步·连
Beautiful China
China is a great country with a long history. It lies in the east of Asia. It has the largest population of the world. It is big and has rich natural resources. There are lots of green mountains and clean water. There are many places of interest. It is famous for the Great Wall. The natural scenery is fascinating. Many foreigners come to China for a trip every year. It has its special food, such as Beijing Duck, Sichuan hotpot and so on. They’re very delicious. There are lots of traditional table manners. For example, You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks. The Chinese people are friendly and kind.
I take pride in our country. I hope China is becoming better and stronger.
第四步·优
Beautiful China
China is a great country with a long history. It lies in the east of Asia. It has the largest population of the world. It is big and has rich natural resources. There are lots of green mountains and clean water. There are many places of interest. It is famous for the Great Wall in the world. The natural scenery is fascinating. Thousands of foreigners come to China for a trip every year. It has its special food, such as Beijing Duck, Sichuan hotpot and so on. They’re very delicious. There are lots of traditional table manners as well. For example, You’re not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. It’s impolite to point at anyone with your chopsticks. The Chinese people are friendly and kind. They’re having a happy life. I love China.
I take pride in our country. I hope our country will become better and stronger in the future.
【策略优化】
技巧1: 凤头豹尾, 言之有序
开门见山, 直奔主题。这种写法干脆利落, 入题快捷, 不枝不蔓, 实为表达开篇的首选方法。结尾要像豹尾, 有平衡感, 简洁明了。
技巧2: 多措并举, 优化布局
介绍事物时, 我们可以使用比较法和细节描述法等, 精心构思设计介绍次序, 使短文结构、层次清晰, 更能深刻、完整地表现中心。
技巧3: 避繁就简, 措辞精准
说明介绍类书面表达的写作目的是介绍客观事物, 这就要求说明的语言应简练精辟、通俗易懂。同时, 措辞必须严谨, 语言必须准确。绝不可言不达意, 有任何笼统、含糊、生硬牵强, 甚至错误的表达出现。
技巧4: 凸显亮点, 美化文章
尝试使用高级词汇或句型, 彰显我们的语言功底, 以凸显文章的亮点, 给文章增添文采, 给阅卷教师留下深刻印象。
维度2：熟练运用写作模板
·记叙文·
人物介绍型
I have made many good friends. __________(引出人物) is one of them. She is __________(总体给人的感觉). She is tall and__________(身材). Her hair is __________(头型). She always wears__________(衣着)and gives us the impression that __________(给人的印象).
__________ is always willing to __________(性格). She is good at __________(特长). Whenever I have problems, I __________. Once__________(引出事例). To my surprise, __________.
We will __________, but I hope__________(表达愿望).
介绍人物的外形特征
介绍人物的性格特征并记叙一个典型的事例
提出愿望
【模板范文】
Bill is my classmate. He is a tall and strong boy with glasses. He is hard-working and easy-going. We got to know each other three years ago. He didn’t know any English at all at that time. At the beginning, he always studied alone and didn’t get along well with the other students. As a result, he made little progress. However, our teachers and classmates often encouraged him and gave him support. With the help of us, he improved his English little by little. Now, he is full of confidence and has done quite well in learning English.
这篇描述人的范文使用了很多常用的高级短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。同学们在平时的学习中要学会把所学的短语灵活地运用到写作中去。
1. get to know (开始相识);
2. not. . . at all (一点都不);
3. get along well with sb. (与某人相处得很好);
4. as a result (结果);
5. make progress (取得进步);
6. with the help of. . . (在……的帮助下);
7. little by little (一点一点地);
8. be full of (充满);
9. do well in=be good at (擅长于……)。
【写作注意事项】
a. 写人主要从人物外貌、年龄、身份、籍贯、性格、兴趣爱好、特长等方面描述;
b. 要注意最好使用不同句式以免句式单一;
c. 在描写人的外貌时, 常用一般现在时, 人称常用第一人称或第三人称;
d. 要抓住所描写人物的典型特征。
【写作方法】
第一部分: 人物介绍: 引出要写的人物并做基本介绍。例如: 年龄、外貌、身份、性格等;
第二部分: 叙述典型事例: 通过事例说明这个人的性格、品质等;
第三部分: 对人物的评价: 夸赞、指责或从事例中得到的感受、启示等。
写人记事型(一)
__________(时间) __________(人物)had a basketball match with __________.
The match began at __________(比赛开始时间). At first, __________. Whenever we scored, I __________(我观看比赛时的表现). In the last quarter, our team__________. In the last minute__________(我们队的表现). Our class __________the match(比赛结果).
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
开门见山引出事件, 点明了基本信息
叙述了整个事件的过程及结果
对整个事件的评价
【模板范文】
Yesterday our class had a basketball match with Class Two. Class Two was the top team of our grade, but we didn’t want to settle for second best.
The match began at 4: 30. At first, Class Two played better and was always in the lead. We were standing around the court, cheering loudly for our team. Whenever we scored, I jumped and shouted, forgetting I’m a girl. The unfavorable situation lasted for three quarters. In the last quarter, our team changed the plan and slowly caught up. In the last minute the score became 81 to 80. Our class won the match.
The exciting match gave us a lot of fun.
写人记事型(二)
叙事和经历类书面表达通过叙述事件的起因、经过和结果表现主题。写景状物类书面表达通过对事物和景点的描述表现主题。文章宜采用总—分—总的结构或总—分的结构, 模板如下:
【模板范文】
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home. In the morning, I shared some interesting stories with her, and then we happily sang and danced together. At noon, we felt hungry very much, so I cooked noodles with eggs and green vegetables. My sister considered it to be delicious, which made me very happy. Then, we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played all kinds of games. Besides, I taught her some classical poems, and my sister learned them very quickly. Next, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. Although I felt very tired, I experienced real joy.
【写作注意事项】
记叙文是以写人、记事为主要内容的文体。它包括“六大要素”: 时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、经过和结果(即 when, where, who, why, how, what)。写记叙类文章时应该把这六大要素交代明白, 同时还应注意以下三点:
(1)叙述方式: 主要有顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种, 英语记叙文主要以顺叙为主。
(2)时态上: 记叙文主要记述过去发生的事情, 所以常用一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时等时态。
(3)人称上: 常用第一人称和第三人称。用第一人称表示的是由叙述者亲身经历的事情; 用第三人称表示的是通过作者和读者之外的第三者把故事的具体情节呈现在读者面前。
【写作方法】
第一段: 开门见山, 交代事件的大体情况, 如时间、地点、人物、事件等;
第二段: 详细叙述事件发展的过程、原因或结果等;
第三段: 评价该事件, 表明自己的看法、感受等。
写好叙事类文章的开头的四种方式
1. “开门见山”式开头
一般来说, 文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”, 即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题, 使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。
对于叙事类的文章, 可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)”的开头可以是: Last month, my family and I went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
2. 回忆型开头
在描述事件或游记类的文章中, 采用回忆型的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇, 如 never forget (永远无法忘记)、remember (记得)、unforgettable (难以忘怀的)、exciting (令人激动的)、surprising (令人惊讶的)、sad (难过的). . . 如“A Trip to Huangshan (黄山之旅)”的开头还可以这样写: I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑问型开头
在叙事类或论述性的文章中, 都可采用疑问型开头, 这样既可以吸引阅卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如 “Planting Trees (种树)”的开头可以是: Have you ever planted trees Don’t you think planting trees is. . . 再如 “Traveling Abroad (出国之旅)”的开头可以是: If you have an opportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore
4. 倒叙式开头
在有的文章, 特别是叙事类的文章中, 可以采用倒叙的写作手法, 先写出事件的结果, 再陈述过程。如“Catching Thieves (捉贼)”的开头可以这样写: I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me Let me tell you. It’s a. . . story.
·议论文·
【写作方法】
初中生在写议论文时要首先考虑自己的观点是什么, 明确观点后要围绕观点进行论证, 最后再进行总结。议论文在写作手法上以议论为主, 但有时也要运用说明、叙述、描写等手法。初中议论文的写作格式一般为三段式: 开头、主体和结尾。一般写作步骤如下:
第一步: 确定主题, 引出论点;
第二步: 通过摆事实、讲道理来支持自己的观点。所用的事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系在一起;
第三步: 得出结论。要简明扼要、回扣全文。
观点态度型(一)
My students think that __________, because__________.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that __________, so__________(我的看法/选择). First of all, __________(原因一). Secondly, __________(原因二). Thirdly/Most important of all, __________(原因三).
All in all/In a word, I hold the opinion that __________(总结观点). And I hope __________(提出愿望).
引出一种观点
阐述自己的观点/选择, 并论证自己的观点
总结自己的观点
【模板范文】
Many students think that they do not need to learn English, because they don’t plan to go abroad.
But as to me, I am not in favour of this point of view. I think that English is very important to us, so we should learn English well. First of all, in the reform and opening time, if you want to do business with foreigners, you must use English because most of them speak and write in English. Secondly, in the world today most books are written in English. If you know much English, you can read newspapers and magazines in English. Most important of all, you can learn something more widely.
All in all, I hold the opinion that we should learn English well. And I hope that all the students can use English freely.
观点态度型(二)
The topic of __主题__ is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say __A__ is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of __理由一__. What’s more, __理由二__. Moreover, __理由三__. While others think that __B__ is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, __理由一__. Second (Besides), __理由二__. Third (Finally), __理由三__.
From my point of view, I think __我的观点__. The reason is that __原因__. As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former (latter) is surely a wise choice.
【模板范文】
Nowadays, a large number of students in our school have formed a bad habit of cheating on homework and examinations.
The reasons why they cheat are as follows. Firstly, they think the school has given them too much homework, which makes it difficult to finish all of them on time. Secondly, some of them are afraid of being punished by teachers as well as their parents. Thirdly, they often spend a great deal of time playing computer games or surfing the Internet, which has aroused our teachers’attention. Last but not least, some students are unaware of the importance of studying by themselves, and their aim is just to make their teachers and parents happy.
As far as I am concerned, cheating on homework and examinations is harmful to our studies. On the one hand, this kind of act is bad for their studies. On the other hand, they will be looked down upon by other people. As an old saying goes, “Honesty is the best policy”. Honesty plays a very important role in our daily lives. I strongly suggest that we should be honest, because only in this way can we not only improve our studies but also earn respect from others. Above all, I hope that our school can offer students less homework and fewer exams and provide us with more free time to study by ourselves.
这篇描述抄写家庭作业和考试作弊现象的范文使用了很多常用的连贯词, 连贯词能够使文章衔接流畅。上面使用的这些连贯词值得我们学习和模仿。
1. nowadays (当今; 现在);
2. a large number of (很多), 修饰可数名词;
3. a great deal of (很多), 修饰不可数名词;
4. firstly (首先), secondly (其次), thirdly (再次), last but not least (最后);
5. as far as I’m concerned (我认为);
6. on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . (一方面……另一方面……);
7. as an old saying goes (正如俗话所说);
8. I strongly suggest that. . . (我强烈建议);
9. not only. . . but also (不但……而且……);
10. above all (最重要的是)。
说明利弊型
Nowadays, __________like to __________(社会现象). About this, different people have different opinions.
On the one hand, some people think __________(优点一). Moreover, __________(优点二). But every coin has two sides. Firstly, __________(缺点一). Besides, __________(缺点二).
I think __________(我的观点).
介绍一种社会现象并引出观点
阐述优点并论证
阐述缺点并论证
总结自己的观点
【模板范文】
An increasing number of Chinese middle school students have gone abroad to study now.
It is known to all that studying abroad has plenty of advantages. It can not only provide students with a chance to communicate with foreigners, but also offer them a good opportunity to have a better understanding of the local culture and history, which enables them to broaden their horizons. More importantly, the students can make a lot of friends from different backgrounds as well as learn how to live on their own.
Of course, studying abroad may have its disadvantages as well. For one thing, students who go abroad will find it difficult to get used to living in another country. For another, a few students will face the safety problems because they are too young to deal with dangerous situations.
As far as I am concerned, I strongly suggest that middle school students should complete their college education in China and then make full preparations for the opportunity to go abroad.
这篇描述出国学习优缺点的范文使用了很多常用和高级的短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. an increasing number of (越来越多的), 是many的高级用法;
2. plenty of (很多), 也是many的高级用法;
3. provide sb. with sth. (为某人提供某物);
4. have a better understanding of (更好地理解);
5. more importantly (更重要的是);
6. as well (也), 用来代替 too;
7. for one thing. . . for another. . . (一方面……另一方面……);
8. deal with (对付; 处理), 常用的还有 work out, solve;
9. make full preparations for (为……做好充足的准备)。
解决方法型
In recent days, we have to face a problem: that is __________(问题). For example, some __________(例一); some __________(例二); some ______(例三) and still some __________(例四).
Faced with this, we should take a series of effective measures to deal with it. For one thing, we should __________(解决方法一). For another thing, we’d better __________(解决方法二). Besides, we should __________(解决方法三).
In my opinion, if__________, we will __________.
阐述一种现象并具体说明现状
提出解决方案
我的观点以及对未来的憧憬
【模板范文】
With the rapid development of technology, shared bicycle comes into people’s lives. At present, in big cities like Shanghai and Guangzhou, shared bicycle has become increasingly popular. A large number of shared bicycles can be found and rented at a low price. On one side, bicycle makes it convenient for people to go out. You can find a bicycle anywhere at any time in our city. Moreover, you can park the bike almost anywhere you like.
However, bicycle-sharing system brings some problems as well. On the one hand, its management is not perfect, and even the kids can open the lock and ride the bicycle. It is obvious that such behavior is very dangerous. On the other hand, a large number of people damage the shared bicycles on purpose, like throwing them into the river or destroying the codes on them.
In my opinion, we should treat shared bicycles correctly. There is no denying that they are helpful to us as a high-tech product. Firstly, our government should set more strict laws and rules to regulate the operation and management of bicycle-sharing system. Secondly, the public should raise their awareness of using shared bicycles in a reasonable way. Lastly, the transportation system should be upgraded and more space should be provided for parking shared bicycles. Only in this way can we make shared bicycles become effective as the public service.
这篇描述共享单车的范文使用了很多常用的单词、短语和句型, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. 使用 with the rapid development of (随着……的快速发展);
2. 使用词汇 increasingly, 相当于 more and more;
3. 使用a large number of 代替 many;
4. 使用 moreover (而且), 相当于 what’s more;
5. 使用 as well, 放在肯定句句末, 相当于too;
6. 使用 it is obvious that. . . (很明显的是……), 相当于obviously;
7. 使用 there is no denying that. . . (不能否认的是……);
8. 使用 raise their awareness of. . . (提高对……的认识)。
·说明文·
【写作方法】
事物说明文是以介绍事物的形状、构造、性质、变化、类别、状态、功能、成因、结果等方面的特征。说明的目的是给读者提供知识, 使之理解客观世界, 掌握解决问题的方法。对中学生而言, 事物说明文的出题形式为文字、图标、图表, 文体则可见于短文、书信、便条、日记等。写事物说明文必须注意事实准确、表达清晰、条理清楚、层次分明、语言简练、用词准确。要写好事物说明文应注意以下几点:
1. 要善于抓住事物的特征。
介绍事物, 一定要抓住事物的特征。所谓特征, 就是这一事物区别于其他事物的标志。只有抓住了事物的特征, 才能将其状貌、性质、成因、功能和意义等说得明白、清楚。这种写作方法尤其适用于描写大家所熟悉的而又具有新的、与众不同的特征的事物。
2. 要遵循一定的顺序。
介绍一件事物, 目的是让读者清楚地了解事物本身的特点、性质以及用途等, 因此更需要条理清楚。我们可以按以下三类顺序说明事物:
(1)时间顺序。即按事物的发生、发展的先后顺序进行说明。
(2)空间顺序。即按事物空间位置的顺序, 由上至下、由近及远或由里至外地进行说明。
(3)逻辑顺序。即按人们认识事物的规律进行说明, 如由概括到具体、由整体到部分、由现象到本质、由表及里、由原因到结果、由主要到次要, 由特点到用途等。
3. 运用恰当的语言。
介绍事物, 文字要力求简洁、明白、准确。除讲究语言平实准确的前提下, 我们还可以运用描写的方法, 来增添文章的可读性。
【写作注意事项】
事物说明文的主要特点: 一是知识性和科学性, 二是应用性和解说性, 三是行文的条理性。写这类文章宜少用描写, 要用具体详实的材料说明问题, 而不要抽象、空洞地讨论。语言要简洁、准确, 条理要清楚, 讨论问题时要集中, 切忌面面俱到。说明文的时态常用一般现在时, 语态常用被动语态, 有时用虚拟语气。
事物介绍型
__说明问题或现象__. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help. These apps __功能、使用方法__.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, __优点及好处__.
说明问题或现象, 引出说明对象
具体写功能, 使用方法
优点及好处
【模板范文】
A New Use of the Mobile Phone
Preparing for meals is tiring. You may have to spend hours getting everything ready for cooking. Now in China, new mobile apps are here to help.
These apps provide you with meat, fish, and vegetables, almost everything you need for a meal. You can order whenever you like and decide on the time for them to arrive. If you like, they can be washed, cut and packed for a certain dish. Some apps even guide you to cook step by step, making cooking easier.
Compared with the traditional way of going to the market, mobile apps save your time and energy. With such a new use of the mobile phone, you can enjoy a more relaxing life.
现象介绍型
The table below shows that __说明问题或现象__.
__数据__ percent __现象一__. __数据__ percent __现象二__. __数据__percent __现象三__.
In my opinion, __自己的观点或感受__.
说明问题或现象, 引出说明对象
写出数据和对应的现象
自己的观点或感受
【模板范文】
A recent study shows that nearly 40% of the school students all over the country do not have breakfast.
The reasons why some students miss the breakfast are similar to each other. For example, some students usually stay up late to complete the homework, which makes them get up late and miss their breakfast. In addition, some students spend too much money on their snacks or games, and as a result, they don’t get enough money to afford their three meals. Worse still, some school girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast, which has a bad effect on their health. It is obvious that some of them always feel sleepy and have bad memory, let alone achieve high grades in all kinds of tests. It is a pity that those who often miss the breakfast don’t realize the importance of breakfast.
As a matter of fact, it’s extremely important to have breakfast every day because it can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy. For a creative mind and a strong body, I strongly suggest that school students should start their new day with a regular and healthy breakfast.
这篇有关对吃早餐调查的范文使用了很多常用和高级的短语, 值得我们学习和模仿。
1. 使用百分比40% of the school students;
2. 使用同位语从句 the reasons why. . . ;
3. 使用短语 be similar to. . . (与……相似);
4. 使用短语 stay up late (熬夜);
5. 使用短语 as a result (结果);
6. 使用短语worse still (更糟糕的是);
7. 使用短语 have a bad effect on. . . (对……有不好的影响);
8. 使用句型 it is obvious that. . . (很明显……);
9. 使用短语 let alone (更不用说);
10. 使用句型 it is a pity that. . . (遗憾的是……)。
·申请信·
【写作方法】
申请信要求一事一议, 内容单纯。其内容一般包括: 申请的具体内容; 自己的情况和条件; 提出要求, 如请求回信、面试等。申请信的书写可以遵照以下步骤:
第一步: 点明写信目的, 说明信息来源, 并陈述自己能胜任;
第二步: 介绍自己, 具体说明能胜任的原因;
第三步: 表达期望, 请求尽快答复并给予机会。
Dear __________,
I am writing the letter to ask the possibility of __________(工作、职位等)/I write to express my interest in __________(工作、职位等)/In reply to your advertisement in__________, I write the letter.
My name is __________. One of my reasons for applying is that __________(原因一). The other reason is that __________(原因二). Besides, __________(原因三).
I hope you will be kind enough to consider my application.
Best regards for your health and success.
Yours sincerely,
__________(落款)
点明写作目的
介绍自己, 说明能胜任的原因
表达期望
【模板范文】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua from Wenzhou Tanghe Middle School. I’m writing to apply for the admission to WIS. WIS is just my dream place.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my friends. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as an assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my school. Last but not least, I’m an active and enthusiastic person who enjoys working with different people and can adapt well to new situations.
I expect you can give me the chance. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you can give me a kind consideration.
I am looking forward to your kind reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
·发言稿·
【写作方法】
发言稿的基本组成部分有三个: 称呼语、正文和结束语。正文部分提出话题、论述, 然后得出结论或者发出倡议。发言稿的写作可以遵循以下步骤:
第一步: 自我介绍并点明发言主题;
第二步: 阐述问题或列举现象, 进行总结或提出解决办法;
第三步: 礼貌性结束。
演讲稿
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
Good morning/afternoon/evening. I am __________(自我介绍). It is a great honor for me to make a speech on __________(演讲题目)/Thank you for giving me the opportunity to make a speech here. The topic of my speech is__________(演讲题目). In my opinion, as__________, __________ is important. First, we should __________(做法一). Then, we’d better __________(做法二). What’s more, __________(做法三).
I hope I have made myself understood. Thank you for listening.
自我介绍并点明演讲主题
对演讲话题具体展开论述
结束语, 表示感谢
【模板范文】
Hello, everyone! Today I’m going to tell you something about the problems we have and how we should solve them effectively. As you know, we are in Grade 9 now. All of us are under great pressure because the senior high school entrance examination is around the corner. Every day we have mountains of homework or tests. As a result, we can’t get enough sleep at night and feel tired during the day. Besides, our teachers and parents are all very strict with us, which puts too much pressure on us. To a certain degree, it is bad for our health. Therefore, I think we must do something to work out these problems as soon as possible.
Here are some useful tips for you. Firstly, we must learn how to plan everything well. A good student should know how to make good use of time each day. A proper learning and rest schedule plays an important role in our daily life. Secondly, we should take more exercise and join in different kinds of after-class activities, such as running, reading and so on. Finally, we are supposed to ask our teachers as well as our parents for help when we have difficulty in dealing with our anxiety.
I hope my speech will be helpful to you. Thanks for listening.
这是一篇发言稿, 里面使用了一些高级短语代替一些普通的短语, 同时使用连贯词使文章变得更加流畅。
1. 使用as you know (正如你所知);
2. 使用英语习语 around the corner (即将来临), 意义相当于near;
3. 使用 mountains of (许多; 大量的), 代替many/much;
4. 使用 besides (此外; 另外), 相当于 in addition;
5. 使用 to a certain degree (在某种程度上), 相当于in a way;
6. 使用 therefore, 相当于so;
7. 使用连接词 firstly (首先), secondly (其次), finally (最后);
8. 使用 make good use of (好好地利用), 意义相当于make the best use of;
9. 使用 are supposed to (应该), 代替 should;
10. 使用 have difficulty in doing sth. (做某事有困难), 相当于 have trouble in doing sth. 。
倡议书
Dear schoolmates,
It is known to us all that __________. Let’s do something to __________(倡议内容).
As students, we should__________. First, we had better __________(做法一). Second, we should__________ (做法二). Third, we hope that__________(做法三). Fourth, we should__________ (做法四).
In sum, we should do much more things, so that__________(结果).
__________(落款)
提出倡议的原因和背景
提出具体的措施和方法
进行总结, 提出希望
【模板范文】
Dear classmates,
As we all know, the environment around us is getting worse and worse. One of the most serious problems is the haze, which has a bad effect on people’s health. Besides, what worries us most is that some people in some places even have no clean water to drink because of the water pollution. It is time for us to take some actions to deal with these problems.
What can we do to solve these problems Firstly, we can often go to school on foot or by bike instead of cars. Secondly, we can use shopping baskets rather than plastic bags when we go shopping. Thirdly, we can recycle something that we can use again and use both sides of the paper if necessary. Last but not least, we must always keep in mind that we have only one earth and we should do whatever we can to protect the earth.
If we can put these points into practice, we will create a bright future.
Li Hua
这篇有关环境问题的范文运用了许多常用的高级短语, 值得同学们学习和借鉴。
1. 使用句型 one of the+形容词最高级+名词的复数形式;
2. 使用高级短语 have a bad effect on. . . (对……有不好的影响);
3. 使用主语从句 what worries us most is that. . . ;
4. 使用高级短语 deal with, 意义相当于 work out, solve;
5. 使用高级短语 instead of (代替);
6. 使用高级短语 rather than (而不是);
7. 使用状语从句if necessary (如果有必要的话);
8. 使用高级短语 keep in mind (记住), 相当于 remember;
9. 使用提分句型if we can put these points into practice (如果我们能够将这些要点付诸实践)。
·电子邮件·
电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:
(1)收件人地址: 在标题栏的“收件人(To)” 框中输入收信人的e-mail地址。
(2)主题: “主题(Subject)”框的内容应简明地概括信的内容, 短的可以是一个单词, 如 greeting; 长的可以是一个名词性短语, 也可以是完整句。
(3)称呼: e-mail一般使用非正式的文体, 因此正文前的称呼通常无需使用诸如 Dear Mr John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名, 如: Hi Tom, 。 但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓。如: Dear Doctor Li, 。
(4)正文: 写e-mail 和写英文书信相差不多, 但要注意以下两点:
a: 首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人, 语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写语言, 但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像中考书面表达就是正规的写作, 不能用俚语或缩写词语。
b: 写电子邮件要直接, 并多用短句使意思清楚, 对重点部分要作详细介绍。中考试题要求写电子邮件, 就必须根据提示, 将要点写全, 并注意语言的运用。
(5) 信尾客套话: 信尾客套话通常也很简明。常常只需一个词, 如: Thanks, Best, Cheers 等。不需要用一般信函中的 Sincerely yours, Best regards等。
【模板范文】
·巧用谚语, 妙笔生花·
在英语写作中, 为了让文章看起来更加饱满, 语言结构更加丰富, 我们也可以使用适当的谚语。如果英语谚语用得贴切, 会给阅卷老师留下更加深刻的印象, 同时相应的语言分也会有所增加。当你引用谚语时, 可以在之前加上: As the saying goes, As we all know, It is common knowledge that. . . 等等。
(一)关于勤奋
1. No pains, no gains. 一分耕耘, 一分收获。
2. Rome was not built in a day.
伟业非一日之功。
3. Practice makes perfect.
熟能生巧。
4. Genius is one percent inspiration and 99 percent perspiration.
天才是百分之一的灵感加上百分之九十九的汗水。
5. Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.
世上无难事, 只要肯登攀。
6. Success only means working hard all one’s life.
成功只意味着终身不懈的努力。
7. I have nothing to offer but blood, hard work and tears.
我所能奉献的没有其它, 只有热血、辛劳和眼泪。
(二)关于学习方法
8. Learning without thinking is a dangerous thing.
学而不思则罔。
9. He who learns but does not think is lost; he who thinks but does not learn is in danger.
学而不思则罔, 思而不学则殆。
10. It’s never too old to learn.
活到老, 学到老。
11. Well begun is half done.
好的开始等于成功的一半。
12. Easier said than done.
说起来容易做起来难。
13. Experience is the mother of wisdom.
实践出真知。
14. Actions speak louder than words.
行动胜过语言。
15. A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
千里之行, 始于足下。
Little by little one goes far.
千里之行, 始于足下。
16. Look before you leap.
三思而后行。
17. He who laughs last laughs best.
笑到最后的人笑得最好。
18. Two heads are better than one.
三个臭皮匠, 顶个诸葛亮。
19. One tree can’t make a forest.
独木不成林。
20. Habit is a second nature.
习惯成自然。
21. Seeing is believing.
眼见为实。
22. All roads lead to Rome.
条条大路通罗马。
23. No man can do two things at once.
一心不可二用。
(三)关于自强自信
24. Where there is a will, there is a way.
有志者, 事竟成。
25. God helps those who help themselves.
天助者自助。
26. Nothing is too difficult in the world if you set your mind into it.
世上无难事, 只怕有心人。
Nothing is impossible to a willing mind.
世上无难事, 只怕有心人。
27. Failure is the mother of success.
失败是成功之母。
28. Confidence doesn’t need any reason. If you’re alive, you should feel 100 percent confident.
自信不需要理由, 只要还活着就要信心十足。
29. Confidence in yourself is the first step on the road to success.
自信是走向成功的第一步。
30. You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.
人必须相信自己, 这是成功的秘诀。
(四)关于惜时
31. Don’t leave today’s work for tomorrow. =Never put off until tomorrow what may be done today.
今日事今日毕。
Don’t put off today’s work till tomorrow.
今日事今日毕。
Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today.
今日事今日毕。
32. Time and tide waits for no man. 岁月不等人。
33. Time flies. 光阴似箭。
34. Time lost cannot be won again.
时光流逝, 不可复得。
35. Do you love life Then do not waste time for life is made up of time.
你热爱生命吗 那么别浪费时间, 因为生命就是由时间组成的。
(五)关于知识
36. Reading makes a full man. 读书长见识。
37. Wisdom in the mind is better than money in the hand.
手里有钱财, 不如胸中有文才。
(六)关于朋友
38. A friend in need is a friend indeed.
患难见真情。
39. Like and like make good friends.
趣味相投。
40. A life without a friend is a life without a sun.
人生在世无朋友, 犹如生活无阳光。
41. A friend is easier lost than found.
得朋友难, 失朋友易。
(七)关于母爱
42. A mother’s love never changes.
母爱永恒。
43. A mother’s love is like a circle. It has no beginning and no ending.
母爱就像一个圆。没有起点, 也没有终点。
44. Blood is thicker than water.
血浓于水。
(八)关于健康
45. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一天一苹果, 医生远离我。
46. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
只工作不玩耍, 聪明孩子也变傻。
47. Laughter is the best medicine.
笑是最好的药。
48. Health is happiness. 健康即幸福。
49. Health is more important than wealth.
健康胜过财富。
50. The first wealth is health.
健康是人生第一财富。
51. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy, and wise.
早睡早起, 使人健康、富裕、聪明。
52. An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.
一日之计在于晨。
(九)其他
53. Every coin has two sides.
凡事皆有两面性。
54. When in Rome, do as the Romans do.
入乡随俗。
55. Every dog has his day.
人人皆有得意时。
56. Love me, love my dog.
爱屋及乌。
57. Never offer to teach fish to swim.
不要班门弄斧。
58. Out of sight, out of mind.
眼不见, 心不念。
59. It’s never too late to mend.
亡羊补牢, 为时未晚。
60. There is no smoke without fire.
无风不起浪。
·巧用连接词, 赋予语言灵气·
1. 表文章结构顺序: First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second, Next, And then, Finally/In the end/At last
2. 表并列补充关系(递进关系): What’s more (甚至)/What’s worse (更糟糕的是), Even (甚至), Especially (特别是), Besides (除此之外), Moreover (甚至), Furthermore, In addition (除此之外还有), Not only. . . but also(不但……而且), At the same time (同时)
3. 表转折对比关系: However, On the contrary, But, Although+从句(不与but连用), Despite/In spite of+n. /doing (尽管…… 但是……)
4. 用来陈述正反方的不同观点(一般用于议论文章中): On the one hand. . . On the other hand. . . (一方面……又一方面……), Some. . . while others. . . (一些人认为……而另一些人认为……), Everything has two sides. . . (事物都具有两面性), Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . (一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点)
5. 表因果关系: Because (不与so 连用), As (由于; 因为), So/Therefore (因此), As a result(结果), Thanks to(多亏), Because of/As a result of (由于), Without, With the help of. . . (在……的帮助下)
6. 表进行举例说明: For example+句子(可以用于句中、句首、句尾), Such as. . . and so on
7. 表陈述事实: In fact (事实上)
8. 表达自己的观点: As far as I know/As far as I am concerned, In my opinion/For my part, To tell the truth (说实话), To be honest (诚实地说), Generally speaking (通常来说), 这些短语一般都用于最后一段的开头, 用来陈述自己的观点。
9. 表总结: In short (总之), In a word (总之), 一般也用于最后一段表示总结。
10. As is known to (us) all, As we know (据我们所知), It is said/reported+that 从句(据说/报道……), Recently(最近, 用于作文开头, 其后一般用现在完成时态), With the development of the. . . (随着……的发展)等连接词或者短语一般用于句首, 用于陈述事实。
11. 连接各类从句的连接词:
时间状语从句: when, not. . . until, as soon as
目的状语从句: so that+从句(为了)
结果状语从句: so. . . that+从句(如此……以至于……)
条件状语从句: if, unless (除非), as long as (只要)
让步状语从句: though (尽管, 不与 but 连用), although, even though (即使), even if (即使), no matter what/when/where/who/which/how (无论……)
比较状语从句: as. . . as, not so. . . as, than
附: 用来提建议的句型:
I suggest that you should do (我建议你做……)
If I were you, I would do. . . (我要是你的话, 我会做……)
It’s best to do (最好做……)
You had better (not) do (最好(不)做)
How about/What about doing. . . (……怎么样)
I think you should do. . . (我认为你应该做……)
Why not do/why don’t you do. . . (为什么不……)
Only in this way can we do it well. (这句话一般用于所提出的建议之后, 意思为: 只有通过这种办法, 我们才能把它做好。注意: 该句型用倒装语序, 用得好的话会成为该篇作文的亮点。)
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