A组 2015～2013模拟基础题
Passage 1 (2015·曲阜4月)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school in a better place to study and live in.
How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!
Thank you for listening!
答案
Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more.Every one of may plant a tree in the school or organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school a better place to study and live in.
How I wish we enjoy a better school life!
Thank you for listening!
Passage 2 (2015·潍坊3月)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jack，
Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.
The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.
Yours，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jack，
Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you by my classmates.You may attend English classes to feel a learning style.After that，you can go to your host family you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever you.
The host family will also show you some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose ∧from.So isn't a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.
Yours，
Li Hua
Passage 3 (2015·淄博模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so I'd like to tell you everything about it.
In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.
Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved.
答案
I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so I'd like to tell you about it.
In the past，some people antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things / to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws / antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's prohibited to buy or sell anything made of fur.
Nowadays，to our joy，there are more and more antelopes in China.What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved.
Passage 4 (2015·大连一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.It's a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.
答案
In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there.It's a long and journey.But the moment I arrived，I in love with the city.It's beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as as it is permitted.，I think the there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too when crossing the street.
Passage 5 (2015·山东省实验中学模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that I'll concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.
答案
As we all know，everyone a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life rapidly，many people suffer from different of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone.To make my dream come true，I have told over and over again that I'll concentrate more studies.After all，only by working can one succeed.
Passage 6 (2015·枣庄一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.
Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.
Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.
答案
We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up dreams for this or that reason.Those dreams have come true have at least one thing in common， is，they always hold fast to their dreams.
Marie Curie set us good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and it to the world.Then to get the new element her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband / saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.
Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big small they are.The path to your dreams may not be and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.
Passage 7 (2015·泰安期末)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.
First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.
答案
I'd like to give you some on how to learn Chinese well.
First，it important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students.Then，it also to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!
Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more.You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as as possible.
Passage 8 (2014·昆明一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It's pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.What's more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.
Obvious，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.
Thanks for listen.
答案
It's pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study into the night.What's more，they not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm their health.
，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my can help you.
Thanks for.
Passage 9 (2014·西铁一中诊断)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I don't take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.
In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good advices.
答案
Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling stressed due to the exam，but I don't take so seriously.I always learn in a mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.
In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest exercise.I believe we can be if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.
I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good.
Passage 10 (2013·沈阳一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mother is very good for raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the years round. Some of our plants were very small several years before, but now they are large and very beautifully. On top of our roof there is a larger glass－enclosed green－house. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother had made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taken care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is the very good way of spending her free time.
答案
My mother is very good raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the round. Some of our plants were very small several years, but now they are large and very. On top of our roof there is a glass－enclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house see the beautiful world my mother made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is very good way of spending her free time.
B组 2015～2013模拟能力题
Passage 1 (2015·青岛一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The saying that practice makes perfect mean that after you have plenty of practice in what you were doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work，remembering that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough exercise，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better.
答案
The saying that practice makes perfect that after you have plenty of practice in what you doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work， that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly.But if you practise a lot，maybe you will understand much better.In this way，you can apply you have learned better.
Passage 2 (2015·贵阳模拟)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I'm very grateful for my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support，feel so proud of my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm Grade 3. Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.
I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become an useful person and make my parents lived a happy life.
答案
I'm very grateful my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support， so proud of my every.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm Grade 3. for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.
I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become useful person and make my parents a happy life.
Passage 3 (2015·保定联考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom and I am fighting.We used to get up so well.But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not come home.She thinks I should spend more time help her with the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy whom only loves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon.So I want to spend as many time as I can with her now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.
答案
My mom and I fighting.We used to get so well.But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not home.She thinks I should spend more time her with the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy only loves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different soon.So I want to spend as time as I can with now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.
Passage 4 (2015·兰州摸底)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas，but he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone.Ran to his front yard，he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted，but the man drive off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he real forgave the thief.What's more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted the message on a poster－board and put it in the front yard：“To the person who stole my bike；You hurt my feeling.But I am a Christian and I forgive him！”When he left for home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.
答案
It was a year ago Joshua got a bike for Christmas， he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone. to his front yard，he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted，but the man off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he forgave the thief.What's more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted message on a poster－board and put it in the front yard：“To the person who stole my bike；You hurt my.But I am a Christian and I forgive！”When he left for home the next morning，at the end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.
Passage 5 (2015·洛阳质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living habit，which do great harm to their health.
As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.
First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins.Secondly，getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.
As long as you form health habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live the healthy life.
答案
A recent survey shows that many students have got into some bad living，which do great harm to their health.
As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.
First of all， a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich vitamins.Secondly， enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.
As long as you form habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live healthy life.
Passage 6 (2014·宝鸡一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Here are the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of course.I'm sure you will find one you like it.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is anything in their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you arrived.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again.
答案
Here the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of.I'm sure you will find one you like it.I know you are interested in Human Rights.So I will see there is anything their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt I look forward to seeing you again.
Passage 7 (2014·黑龙江摸底)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jim，
Our friend Li Ming will leave to Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a get－together on 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He lived at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It is not very difficulty to find your way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of that is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema cross the street.Turning right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Ming's home.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
答案
Dear Jim，
Our friend Li Ming will leave Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a get－together 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It is not very to find way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema the street. right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Ming's home.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
Passage 8 (2014·金华十校联考)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I have a bicycle that came to me as birthday present from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan，that was half of my father's monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and it's color is red，my favorite.Which is important is that my bicycle plays an important part on my school life.It also represent the deep love from my parents.But I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work hardly so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and very convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.
答案
I have a bicycle that came to me as birthday present from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan， was half of my father's monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and color is red，my favorite. is important is that my bicycle plays an important part my school life.It also the deep love from my parents. I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.
Passage 9 (2013·陕西安康一模)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life.At about 9：00 a.m.，I go to the bookstore with my friends.There was a lot of new books.I didn't know what one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply moving.Some of my friends even burst into tear.That's a really wonderful film.It is very worth seeing.
What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.
答案
Today is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so my life.At about 9：00 a.m.，I to the bookstore with my friends.There a lot of new books.I didn't know one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply.Some of my friends even burst into.That's a really wonderful film.It is worth seeing.
What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.
Passage 10 (2013·成都名校质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm one of your customer.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.
Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it.The problem is what the “Play” doesn't work at all.Probable it's not your fault and so is mine.Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person.
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter.
Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm one of your.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.
Before I left，I check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，，I found a fault with it.The problem is the “Play” doesn't work at all. it's not your fault and is mine.Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person.
You see，a walkman is of great for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you my letter.
Hoping to hear you in the earliest possible time!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua.
C组 一年创新导向
Passage 1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It's great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.
Thanks for listening!
答案
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It's great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job， I learn English in some ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and efforts to understand the texts the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises for the college entrance examination. also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other.I have a lot of fun when learning English with cartoon movies.
Thanks for listening!
Passage 2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They don't know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my opinion，that isn't right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play from time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and succeed at last.
答案
It that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason parents are strict with their children.They don't know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children. my opinion，that isn't right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper environment for the children and allow to play from time to time.Only in this way can the do their best and succeed at last.
Passage 3
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didn't stop drinking until both of them were drunk.My father didn't realize the serious of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their home.And then he drove home.While driven home，my father felt uneasy.Before he realized that would happen，my father run into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done but made up his mind never to drink again before driving.
答案
The day before yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didn't stop drinking until of them were drunk.My father didn't realize the of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their.And then he drove home.While home，my father felt uneasy. he realized would happen，my father into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done made up his mind never to drink again before driving.
课件53张PPT。从近几年的高考短文改错来看，一篇120词左右的短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
短文改错的目的是测试考生发现、判断、纠正一些词法、句法以及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面错误的能力。它既能考查考生的词汇和语法方面的能力，也能考查考生的阅读理解能力。其考查要点的主要方面有：1.冠词
【方法指导】
冠词的考查主要集中在不定冠词a，an及定冠词the的混用和漏用。主要包括以下几个方面：(1)不定冠词a和an互改；(2)不定冠词a或an和定冠词the互改；(3)定冠词the的多余或缺失；(4)单数可数名词前冠词的缺失(一般情况下，单数可数名词在句中出现时，其前需要加上适当的冠词或其他限定词)；(5)不可数名词表示泛指时冠词的多余；(6)常见固定搭配的错用。词法型错误(1)After a hour or so we began to feel very frightened.
解析 因hour以元音音素开头。
答案 a→an
(2)I decided to climb the tree to see where we were.
解析 因此处并非特指，而是泛指。
答案 the→a
(3)Good health is person's most valuable possession.
解析 这里的a表泛指。
答案 person's前加a(4)Maybe you could come during a winter holidays.
解析 此处的winter holidays属特指或者是谈话双方都知道的。
答案 a→the
(5)Suddenly，I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd.
解析 catch sight of是习语，意为“看见，瞥见”
答案 去掉a2.名词
【方法指导】
名词的考查主要包括名词的数的用法(可数名词与不可数名词的混用，可数名词单复数的错用)；名词格的误用、名词前限定词的用法以及抽象名词与物质名词具体化的用法。(6)We stopped to rest for a while and to drink some waters from a stream.
解析 因“水”为物质名词，不可数。
答案 waters→water
(7)There are branch library in many villages.
解析 因其前的谓语动词are为复数形式。
答案 library→libraries(8)I hope that you two could come and visit us some times soon.
解析 some time意为“某时”。
答案 times→time
(9)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question.
解析 因其前有表示复数意义的修饰语lots of。
答案 question→questions3.代词
【方法指导】
短文改错对代词的考查主要涉及人称代词的前后一致性(包括指代的一致性和单复数的一致性)、人称代词的主格与宾格变化、各类代词的误加与漏用(尤其是一些易受汉语影响的结构)、某些不定代词的用法(尤其是在意思上用错)、代词在某些习语中的用法等。(10)David pointed to a path which it he thought would probably lead to a village.
解析 因它与其前的关系代词which语义重复。
答案 去掉it
(11)When we walked to the car，Bill smiled and shook head.
解析 汉语为“摇头”，而英语的习惯是说shake one's head。
答案 head前加his(12)We climb everywhere，not only in America.They have been to Europe many times.
解析 前后人称不一致。
答案 They→We
(13)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home.
解析 因前面的the Smiths指的是“史密斯夫妇/一家”，是复数意义。
答案 his→their4.形容词与副词
【方法指导】
形容词与副词主要考查两个方面：
(1)形容词与副词的错用。包括近义形容词的错用、近义副词的错用、形容词与副词之间的混用以及以－ly结尾的副词和不是以－ly结尾的同根副词之间的误用、动词－ing形式和动词－ed形式的形容词辨析等；
(2)原级、比较级和最高级的误用。包括原级、比较级和最高级之间的混用；比较级的修饰语使用不当。常见的比较级修饰语有a bit，a little，much，far，many，a lot，even等；常见的最高级修饰语有almost，by far，nearly等；常见的和原级搭配的结构有as...as；how与what的混用也是常见考点。 (14)Last Sunday，police cars hurried to the taller building in New York.
解析 因从含义上看此处应是最高级。
答案 taller→tallest
(15)As a result，people in the modern world generally live much more longer than people in the past.
解析 因为longer本身已是比较级，不能再用more修饰。
答案 去掉more5.介词与介词短语
【方法指导】
短文改错中对介词的考查主要集中在介词短语及介词与动词、形容词、名词的搭配等。介词与名词的常见搭配：
与to搭配的名词：answer，reply，key，visit，apology，introduction，entrance，invitation等。
与in搭配的名词：expert，interest等。
与on搭配的名词：mercy，congratulation等。
其他介词与名词的搭配：victory over，advantage over，respect for，prize for等。 (16)Bill insisted in staying near the car.
解析 insist on为固定搭配。
答案 in→on
(17)When they came down，the police were angry to them.
解析 要表示“对某人生气”，习惯上用be angry with sb。
答案 to→with
(18)Most people can quickly get for help from a doctor or go to a hospital since they are ill.
解析 因其前的get是及物动词。
答案 去掉for6.动词
【方法指导】
除动词时态与非谓语动词之外，动词考点还包括被动语态、情态动词、动词用法辨析、动词be的误加与漏用等。 (19)Charles and Linda were seeing near the top of the building.
解析 因为从含义上看，此处谓语应用被动语态。
答案 seeing→seen
(20)Books may be keep for four weeks.
解析 因此处要用被动语态。
答案 keep→kept
(21)...and let you know when the book you want has returned.
解析 因从句意上看，此处要用被动语态。
答案 returned前加been(22)Uncle Ben will also go back for Christmas.
解析 由句意可知。
答案 go→come
(23)They eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.
解析 因此处缺谓语动词。
答案 eager前加were7.非谓语动词
【方法指导】
短文改错对非谓语动词的考查主要涉及不定式符号to的有无，介词后该使用动词的什么形式(用动名词)，并列结构中几个非谓语动词是否一致，动词用作主语时用何种形式(可用动名词或不定式，但不能用动词原形)等。(24)David and I wanted go off to find help but Bill insisted on staying near the car.
解析 因为want后要接不定式。
答案 wanted后加to
(25)...rather than go into the forest and getting lost.
解析 因为get与其前的go并列。
答案 getting→get(26)Modern people know more about health，have better food，and to live in clearer surroundings.
解析 因为live与其前的know，have并列。
答案 去掉live前的to
(27)...you pay the cost of send a postcard，the librarian will write to you.
解析 因为介词后接动名词作宾语。
答案 send→sending句法型错误【方法指导】
句法型错误包括：主谓一致；各种从句的引导词；强调句型；句子结构的连贯性、完整性、对等性及逻辑性。
1.主谓一致
对主谓一致的考查主要根据语法、意义、就近、就远等一致原则，判断人称和数是否与主语保持一致。常考点如下：
(1)由or，nor，either...or，neither...nor，not only...but also等连接并列主语时，谓语动词的单复数遵循就近原则； (2)当主语是A with/together with/as well as/including/...B时，谓语动词的单复数由A决定，遵循就远原则；
(3)动名词、不定式或名词从句作主语时，谓语动词常用单数；
(4)“half/most/part/the rest/分数/百分数＋of＋名词”作主语时，谓语动词要和of之后的名词的单复数保持一致；
(5)a quantity of/quantities of后既可接复数名词，也可接不可数名词，其谓语动词一般取决于quantity的单复数。 (1)(2014·四川)Today，I am going to talk with (about) what you should do when a fire alarm go off.
解析 该句的主语为a fire alarm，为单数名词，其谓语动词应用第三人称单数形式。
答案 go→goes2.连接词
连接词主要包括名词性从句中的连接词，定语从句中的关系词，状语从句中的连接词，以及主从复合句和并列句中的连接词等。特别是对which和that引导定语从句、抽象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等的考查。(2)People would like to take part in this contest should go to the office of the Students' Union and sign up.
解析 定语从句缺少引导词。此句中的引导词who或that在从句中作主语，不能省略。
答案 People后加who或that3.句子成分赘余
句子成分赘余一般有如下几种类型：(1)受母语思维影响，出现汉语式结构，造成冗言；(2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠；(3)介词多余；(4)助动词、系动词多余；(5)多冠词；(6)定语从句中成分重复；(7)程度副词和频率副词，如much，more，often等的多余；(8)小品词to多余等。(3)(2014·四川)If you notice that when someone is missing and (or) hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
解析 该句的意思是“若发现有人失踪或受伤了，就要立刻告诉老师”。句中的if引导条件状语从句，when多余。
答案 去掉when4.缺词错误
缺词现象常见的有：(1)缺系动词；(2)缺介词；(3)缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；(4)在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；(5)缺连接词；(6)缺否定词；(7)缺不定式符号to等。(4)(2014·陕西)He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.
解析 want作“想要做某事”讲时后接带to的不定式。
答案 wanted后加to语篇型错误【方法指导】
语篇型错误测试包括：上下文中时态是否一致；上下文中代词是否一致；上下文中逻辑是否一致；上下文中词、词组、从句的替代是否正确。(1)(2014·浙江)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise (noisy) and filled with people.
解析 考查时态。此处只是对过去事实的描述，故用一般过去时。
答案 去掉had(2)(2014·浙江)Then everyone in the carriage began searching (∧ for) the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.
解析 此处的owner指的是车票的所有者，所以应该用its。此外，还可将his改为the表示特指。
答案 his→its(3)(2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)As (∧ a) result，the plants are growing somewhere.
解析 根据语境可知，到处都是圣女果，因此把somewhere改为everywhere。
答案 somewhere→everywhere易错点1 平行结构中的错误(1)We tried to fix it and there was nothing we could do.
解析 根据句意，此处为转折关系。
答案 and→but
(2)(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening (∧ to) music.
解析 此处有并列连词or，其后的动词与lie是平行结构，故该动词的形式应与lie保持一致。
答案 sat→sit【即时小练】
(1)It is a very important exam but I can't afford to fail it.
解析 此处表因果关系，并非转折关系。
答案 but→so
(2)It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest.
解析 a visitor和a guest应是选择关系，意思是“好像我的父母亲把我当作一个来访者或一个客人。”
答案 and→or(3)I'm the captain of our school team so with my fellow players we've won several games.
解析 表并列关系。
答案 so→and
(4)(2014·大纲全国)The understanding between two friends mean (means) both of them have similar ideas and trusting each other.
解析 此处的trust和前面的have并列，应用动词原形。
答案 trusting→trust以题说法
在表达相互平行的概念时，要使用相同的语法结构。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and，but，or或连词词组not only...but also...，not...but...，either...or...，neither...nor...，as well as等。
突破指南
平行结构中的错误主要是行文逻辑上的错误，解答此类题目的关键是翻译成汉语，注意上下文含义；其次是对此类连词敏感，见到它们首先考虑前后形式一致。易错点2 从句与并列句的错误I told Mother，Father，Sister，all my friends here what a great time I had.
解析 all前加and，表示并列关系。
答案 all前加and
【即时小练】
This would save the life of many animals，some of them have almost died out.
答案 them→which以题说法
句子与句子之间的逗号只起间隔作用，不能连接句子，所以要注意从句与并列句的辨别。
突破指南
遇到此类题目，观察逗号后面有无连词，没有的话，添加适当的连词，或者把其中一句变为从句。易错点3 动词时态与语态的错误(2014·新课标全国Ⅱ)We can lie on the grass for a rest，or sat by the lake listening to music.
解析 此处sit和前面的lie是并列关系。根据上下文及此处lie所用的动词时态形式可知，应把过去式的sat改为一般现在时sit。
答案 sat→sit【即时小练】
(1)We were driving along a narrow road when the car stop...
(2)Also，scientists and doctors had learned how to deal with many diseases.
(3)If the book you will want is out，you may ask for it to be called back for you.
答案 (1)stop→stopped (2)had→have (3)去掉will以题说法
根据句中can一词，可以看出左面题目中的时态是一般现在时，所以出现的时态错误。
突破指南
动词时态考点主要涉及一般现在时与一般过去时的区别，其命题方式通常是在一个一般现在时的背景下误用某个一般过去时；或者反过来，在一个一般过去时的背景下误用某个一般现在时。从所涉及的动词来看，主要涉及be和have两个常用动词。有时也涉及其他时态，如一般将来时、现在完成时等，但很少见。附录：短文改错做题技巧
要想在高考英语中做好短文改错，按照“四步走”，实施“四查法”可有效减少不必要的失误。具体做法如下：
一、“四步走”
1.通读全文，了解大意
注意语篇结构和行文逻辑，不能在未了解大意的情况下就按部就班地一行一行地改。 2.先易后难，缩小范围
通读短文的过程中，可以把其中明显的错误找出来，这样就缩小了范围，为下一步的分析判断提供更充分的依据，也能把注意力集中在较难判断的句子上。 如：Susan think Paul is just the man she can depend on.此句中谓语没用单数第三人称形式就是一个明显的错误。3.把握句意，逐句判断
逐句扫描，各个击破。为了使每行长度相差不大，往往一个句子分成两行或三行，而一个句子是否有错只有看完整个句子，甚至还要瞻前顾后才能判断出错误之处。所以在通读全文时，要以句子为最小单位，千万别以行为单位。请记住下面的口诀：
动词形，名词数，注意形和副；
非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住；
句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注。4.反复通读，复查验证
在大部分错误都改正之后，如果还有拿不准的，应当再次通读短文，利用语感做最后判断；也可以根据此类题的特点，运用错误类型的比例来定夺。错词一般有7～8个，多词和缺词约有2～3处。二、“四查法”
1.左顾右盼查名词
要注意搜寻名词之前及其本身出现的错误。看该名词前是否缺限定词，该用何种限定词。尤其要查冠词的使用情况。碰到代词要弄清它代替什么。当名词前有形容词时更要加倍注意。如：Catherine，to whom you can turn for help, has good knowledge of Greek.(knowledge为不可数名词，在has之后加上不定冠词a)2.“语”“时”俱进查动词
认真分析动词所用的时态、语态。尤其要根据上下文所提供的时间信息，“语”“时”俱进地反复推敲。如：Martin gained so much confidence that he goes back to school...(goes改为went)3.启承转合查连词
为使短文结构严谨，短文中往往会出现好多连词。这些连词的使用，在结构和意义上都要通顺流畅，恰如其分。如：It started to rise higher again.So it was still too close to the water. (So改为But)4.文通理顺查逻辑
文通即行文合乎英语词法、句法；理顺指行文逻辑符合人们的认知规律，即符合常理。如：The air keeping the balloon up was escaping quickly and the balloon was coming up.(第二个up改为down)absorbedboysthoughpatienceto完成短文后，你能否对此加以扩展，写一篇80词左右的小短文？
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2015～2011年各省市高考题
Passage 1 (2015·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately，on the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.
答案
When I was a child，I hoped to live in the city.I I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city，but I miss my home in countryside.There the air is clean the mountains are green.Unfortunately， the development of industrialization，the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have shown that global warming has already become a very problem.The we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. rare animals are dying out.We must ways to protect environment.If we fail to do so，we'll live to regret it.
1.解析 考查动词的时态。根据前面一句可知，这是发生在小时候的事情，故用一般过去时态。
答案 第2句：think→thought
2.解析 考查冠词的用法。in the countryside (在乡村)为固定短语。
答案 第3句：countryside前加the
3.解析 考查并列词的用法。那儿的空气洁净，群山葱绿。由句意可知两个分句之间显然为并列关系，而非选择关系。
答案 第4句：or→and
4.解析 考查介词的用法。with the development of...为一固定短语，意思是“随着……的发展”。
答案 第5句：on→with
5.解析 考查被动语态的用法。众多研究表明，全球变暖已经成为一个十分严重的问题。由句意可知，studies和谓语show之间为主动关系，故要用主动语态。
答案 第6句：去掉been
6.解析 考查形容词的用法。修饰名词problem应当用形容词。
答案 第6句：seriously→serious
7.解析 考查不可数名词的用法。air作“空气”讲时为不可数名词。
答案 第7句：airs→air
8.解析 考查代词的用法。Animals为可数名词复数，故用many。
答案 第8句：Much→Many
9.解析 考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后面要接动词原形。
答案 第9句：found→find
10.解析 考查语境中代词的用法。依据前后句的语境及逻辑关系可知your与上下文相悖，结合句意应当改为our/the才能使句意通顺。
答案 第9句：your→our
Passage 2 (2015·新课标全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time，he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
答案
One day，little Tony went to a shopping center with his .It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy a shop window.He liked it so much that he quickly walked into the shop.After at the toy for some time，he turned around and found his parents were missing.Tony was scared and to cry.A woman saw him crying and him to wait outside shop.Five minutes later，Tony saw parents.Mom said，“How nice to see you again！Dad and I were worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.
1.解析 考查名词复数。由第五句中的“his parents were missing.”可知此处应当用复数形式。
答案 第1句：parent→parents
2.解析 考查介词的用法。玩具是摆放在商店的橱窗里面的，故用介词in。
答案 第3句： on→in
3.解析 考查固定句型的用法。由语境可知，托尼非常喜欢这个玩具，于是快速走进商店。so...that...为固定句型，意思是“如此……以致于……”，故去掉very。
答案 第4句： 去掉very
4.解析 考查省略的用法。After之后省去了主语he，he与look at之间为逻辑上的主谓关系，故应当用现在分词。
答案 第5句： looks→looking
5.解析 考查宾语从句连接词的用法。动词found之后为宾语从句，从句为系表结构，意思完整，故将where去掉或改为没有词义且不作成分的that。
答案 第5句： 去掉where或where→that
6.解析 考查并列谓语的用法。由句子结构可知，begin与was scared并列，因此，要用一般过去时。
答案 第6句：begun→began
7.解析 考查并列谓语的用法。有一位妇女看到他哭泣就告诉他去商店外面等。由句意可知，tell这一动作是这个妇女发出的，应当与saw构成并列谓语。故改用told。
答案 第7句：telling→told
8.解析 考查冠词的用法。表示谈话双方共知的名词前要用定冠词。
答案 第7句：a→the
9.解析 考查物主代词的用法。根据句意及英语表达习惯，应当在parents前加上与主语相一致的物主代词。
答案 第8句：saw后加his
10.解析 考查副词的用法。形容词worried之前要用副词来修饰。
答案 第10句：terrible→terribly
Passage 3 (2015·四川)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一次；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many.And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.How do you think I should do? If you are me，would you talk to him?
Please help with me and give me some advice.
Grace
答案
Hi, Janice，
It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want ∧to share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.
As I you last time, I made three new here.We hang out together during lunch and after school.We've been spending a lot of time in karaoke bars.It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me .And I started to see this as a time－wasting activity! In fact，I don't like to go anymore, I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. do you think I should do? If you me，would you talk to ？
Please help me and give me some advice.
Grace
1.解析 考查动词want的用法，want后用不定式作状语，故加上to。
答案 want后加to
2.解析 考查时态。根据时间状语last time可知，此句需用一般过去时，故把tell改成told。句意：正如我上次告诉你的那样。
答案 tell→told
3.解析 考查名词的复数。名词friend为可数名词，其前有three修饰，需要用复数形式，故把friend改成friends。句意：我在这儿交了三个新朋友。
答案 friend→friends
4.解析 考查动名词作宾语。本句考查句型spend...(in)doing sth结构，故把sing改成singing。
答案 sing→singing
5.解析 考查代词。根据句意，指的是花费很多钱，故用much而非many。句意：那真的花费很多。
答案 many→much
6.解析 考查连词。上一分句句意：我不想再去；下一分句句意：我怕失去他们的友谊，两个分句之间有转折关系，故把so改成but。
答案 so→but
7.解析 考查疑问词的选择。本句中do之后缺少宾语，故用what。
答案 How→What
8.解析 考查虚拟语气。根据句意可知，此处为虚拟语气，与现在事实不符，故把are改成were。句意：如果你是我，……。
答案 are→were
9.解析 考查代词。根据上文可知，作者交了三个朋友，故用them。句意：你会和他们说吗？
答案 him→them
10.解析 考查动词。动词help为及物动词，其后接宾语时无需加介词，故去掉with。句意：请帮帮我，给我一些建议。
答案 去掉with
Passage 4 (2015·陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My soccer coach retired in last week.I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the better biscuits in the world，so I decide to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic step of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really well.My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.
At a party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!
答案
My soccer coach retired last week.I wanted to do special for him at his retirement party.My mum makes the biscuits in the world，so I to ask her for help.Mum taught me some basic of baking.I insisted on doing most of the baking myself.I thought the biscuits were really .My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor I was packing them up.
At party，my coach，with a biscuit in his mouth，asked surprisingly who made them and joked，“I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”
My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me the biscuits with happy laughter!
1.解析 last week上个星期，前面无需加冠词。
答案 去掉in
2.解析 something用在肯定句中，表示“一些事”，anything“任何事”。
答案 anything→something
3.解析 我的妈妈做了世界上最好吃的饼干，此处不是比较含义，应是最高级(best)。
答案 better→best
4.解析 全文的时态都是一般过去时，故把decide改为decided。
答案 decide→decided
5.解析 根据前面的some，step应该是复数形式。
答案 step→steps
6.解析 作表语的是形容词good，well是副词，作状语。
答案 well→good
7.解析 我唯一所犯的错误就是当我包装饼干的时候，掉在地上一些。when/while当……的时候，after 在……之后。
答案 after→when/while
8.解析 此处表特指，at the party 在晚会上。
答案 a→the
9.解析 动词不定式表示目的，我也许得再退休一次，能吃到更多的饼干。
答案 just后加to
10.解析 and连接两个并列的(动)名词，enjoy是动词，所以改成enjoying。
答案 enjoy→enjoying
Passage 5 (2015·浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass.I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view.On the left－hand side of the class，I could easy see the football field.In the mornings，it was full of students exercising.The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid.Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them.Farther in the distance，I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains.On the right side of the class was the road.I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning.The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming.If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom，I will never forget it.
1.解析 考查名词的复数形式。前面有three修饰，故要用复数形式。
答案 第一句：side→sides
2.解析 考查固定表达。be made of是指不经过加工，能直接看出原材料；be made from是指经过加工，不能直接看出原料。
答案 第一句：from→of
3.解析 考查非谓语动词。动词enjoy后要接动名词作宾语。
答案 第二句：sit→sitting
4.解析 考查形容词和副词的错用。修饰动词see要有副词形式。
答案 第三句：easy→easily
5.解析 考查动词的时态。本文描述的是作者原来的旧教室，故要时态保持一致，用一般过去时。
答案 第五句：is→was
6.解析 考查代词的错用。代替前面的单数a beautiful park要用it。
答案 第六句：them→it
7.解析 考查逻辑关系。在更远处，我可以欣赏雪山的美景。
答案 第七句：not去掉
8.解析 考查固定表达。in a hurry匆匆忙忙。
答案 第九句：in后加a
9.解析 考查非谓语动词。make sb do...使某人做某事。
答案 第十句：felt→feel
10.解析 考查状语从句引导词。尽管在那座教室学习时我是唯一的一个孩子，但我将永远忘不了它。
答案 最后一句：If→Although/Though
Passage 6 (2014·新课标全国Ⅰ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nearly five years before，and with the help by our father，my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.Since then—for all these year—we had been allowing tomatoes to self－seed where they please.As result，the plants are growing somewhere.The fruits are small in size，but juicy and taste.There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors.Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year，but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!
1.解析 ago常与一般过去时连用；before常与完成时连用，这里谓语是planted，用的是过去式，故用ago。
答案 第一句中before→ago
2.解析 with the help of...在……的帮助下。
答案 第一句中by→of
3.解析 由前面all these可知应用year的复数形式。
答案 第二句中year→years
4.解析 根据时间状语“since then”可知，主句应为现在完成时，所以把had变为have。
答案 第二句中had→have
5.解析 as a result为固定搭配，译为“结果”。
答案 第三句中as后加a
6.解析 因为种子落在哪里就在哪里生根发芽，所以这种植物长得到处都是。everywhere到处；somewhere某处。
答案 第三句中somewhere→everywhere
7.解析 are后面应用形容词，and连接形容词juicy和tasty。
答案 第四句中taste→tasty
8.解析 根据谓语are可知后面应用修饰可数名词的many，而much修饰不可数名词。
答案 第五句中much→many
9.解析 although引导让步状语从句，不可与but连用，但可以与yet连用。
答案 第六句中but去掉或改为yet
10.解析 因tomatoes为名词应用形容词修饰，所以把副词改为形容词。
答案 第七句中wonderfully→wonderful
Passage 7 (2014·浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.
Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.
No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket－owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.
1.解析 考查时态一致。文章主体时态为一般过去时。
答案 去掉had
2.解析 考查词性。be动词后应用形容词，noise为名词。
答案 noise→noisy
3.解析 考查时态，before long后用一般过去时。
答案 comes→came
4.解析 考查句子关系。一位乘客意识到他的票不见了，他开始不安起来。应为承接关系，而非转折关系。
答案 but→and
5.解析 考查固定搭配。search for＝look for寻找。
答案 searching后加for
6.解析 考查代词指代。此处是票的主人用its或主人the owner。
答案 his→its/the
7.解析 考查冠词。上文提到过用the表特指。
答案 a→the
8.解析 考查形容词、副词用法。修饰动词的应为副词，previous是形容词。
答案 previous→previously
9.解析 考查前后一致。从上文看，丢票的是一个人，故应用单数。
答案 strangers→stranger
10.解析 考查固定结构。in need需要。
答案 on→in
Passage 8 (2014·四川)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Hello，boys and girls！Today，I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off.If you hear the alarm，stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.Stay close to your teacher and classmate.Don't panic or get out of line，and trying to remain quiet and calmly.Soon the firefighters will come and put out a fire.If it's a false alarm and there is no fire，your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt，tell your teacher immediately.
【语篇导读】 这是一篇实用文体，向读者介绍遇到火警时的正确做法。
1.解析 talk with后面常跟指人的词，意思是“同某人交谈”。talk about意为“谈论”。
答案 with→about
2.解析 表达客观事实通常使用一般现在时态。a fire alarm为单数名词，故谓语动词应当用单数第三人称形式。
答案 go→goes
3.解析 wait为不及物动词，后跟宾语时要加上介词for。
答案 在wait之后加上for
4.解析 classmate为可数名词，此处应当用复数形式。
答案 classmate→classmates
5.解析 根据and一词可知本句与前面的祈使句并列，所以应当用动词原形。
答案 trying→try
6.解析 由并列连词and可知本词与quiet都作系动词remain的表语。故词性应与quiet一致。
答案 calmly→calm
7.解析 前文已提到火灾，这里特指那场火。
答案 a→the
8.解析 根据短文意思可知这是老师告诉同学们的一些注意事项。用的均是第二人称。
答案 us→you
9.解析 宾语从句中使用了两个连接词，根据句意“如果你们注意到有人失踪或受伤……”可知when是多余的。
答案 去掉when
10.解析 如果某人失踪了，就无法判断他受伤与否。这两个词之间是选择关系，故用or。
答案 and→or
Passage 9 (2014·陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( )划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven.He wanted teach me about animals，insects and trees.My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.
One evening at sunset，we sat by the fire，have our barbecue.Just then a bird was flying over us.My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky－they were looked like rain！We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.
That day I didn't learn much about animals，insects or trees，but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!
1.解析 考查非谓语动词。want to do sth想要做某事，为固定搭配。
答案 He wanted后加to
2.解析 考查动词时态。本文的主体时态为一般过去时。
答案 come→came
3.解析 考查非谓语动词。一个句子只能有一个谓语动词，因此此处应为非谓语动词作伴随状语。
答案 have→having
4.解析 考查形容词副词修饰关系。副词修饰后面的动词jumped up。
答案 immediate→immediately
5.解析 考查介词的使用。shoot at...朝……射击。下文的Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky.也给本句提供了答案。
答案 on→at
6.解析 考查不定代词。根据前文的arrows一词可以看出，此处不是只有两只箭，因此把Neither改为None，表示三支以上。
答案 Neither→None
7.解析 考查主谓一致。主语为复数形式arrows，谓语动词应用复数。
答案 was→were
8.解析 考查语态。look作为系动词，无需用被动语态。
答案 去掉were
9.解析 考查连词。根据句意：我们跑开了，幸运的是，没有人受伤。可以看出，此处为承接关系，并非转折关系。
答案 but→and
10.解析 考查冠词的使用。后面的impressive一词第一个读音为元音，因此用an。
答案 a→an
Passage 10 (2014·辽宁)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Jeremy and Alice，
Although we've been delighted to have you as neighbors，we're hoping to settle something that bothers to us.In a word，your dog—Cleo.
We've called several time about Cleo's early morning barking.It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute she's outside.The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.Beside，Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.This morning she starts barking even before 5 o'clock.That is too much for us，considering how closely the houses are.
We appreciate our apologies and goodwill，but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter.
Sincerely，
Jack and Rose
1.解析 bother为及物动词，无需加to。
答案 去掉to
2.解析 当“次数”讲时，time为可数名词。
答案 time→times
3.解析 动词不定式符号to后跟动词原形。
答案 understanding→understand
4.解析 主谓一致问题。主语为单数，谓语动词用单数形式。
答案 have→has
5.解析 besides除此之外，连词。beside在……一边，介词。
答案 Beside→Besides
6.a→an
7.解析 考查时态。今天早晨的事情自然用一般过去时。
答案 starts→started
8.解析 考查形容词close和closely的区别，房子距离近用close，具体意义；closely表抽象意义。
答案 closely→close
9.解析 考查人称代词。我们感激你的歉意，后句的you给本题提供了答案。
答案 our→your
10.解析 考查固定搭配。figure out找出。
答案 figure后加out
Passage 11 (2013·新课标全国Ⅱ)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800's.Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner，that might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.This custom soon becomes another meal of day.Interesting，it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits.This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.
答案
The book I'm reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain.It is said to have started in the early 1800's. tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner， might not be served until 8 o'clock at night.This custom soon another meal of ∧,the) day.，it had a connection the British porcelain(瓷器) industry.Tea in China was traditionally from cups without handles.When tea got popular in Britain，there was a crying need for good with handles to suit British habits.This made for the in the porcelain industry.
Passage 12 (2013·四川)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每句不超过两个错误；
2.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
3.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test difficulty，but I tried hardly to do it.Suddenly Mary, my best friend，asking me to let her to copy my answers.After think for some time，I let her copy my answers.But after the test，all of us were called to the teacher's office.The teacher was angry because we had same answers in the tests.We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn't cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why does she punish me?
答案
Today we had a chemistry test.I found the test ，but I tried hardly,hard) to do it.Suddenly Mary, my best friend， me to let her copy my answers.After for some time，I let her copy my answers.But after the test， of us were called to the teacher's office .The teacher was angry because we had the same answers in the .We were warned not to cheat again she would need to see our parents.I was very upset.I didn't cheat.I was just helping a friend.Why she punish me?
Passage 13 (2012·陕西)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a comfortably double－room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high－speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.
It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.
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My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.
We lived in a double－room with a big bath. What I liked best the free high－speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared my friends many photos in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local .
It is such ∧a great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of who is going to Beijing.
Passage 14 (2011·浙江)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine，he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular I'd always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.I guessed，even at that age，I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again；I would always know I'd done something wrong.Late on，my aunt drove my home.When she dropped me off，I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.She knows what had happened，but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
答案
I was playing at my house.Since his family was than mine，he had more toys than I did.There was one particular I'd always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasn't looking.I guessed，even at that age，I would never be able to enjoy playing with the toy or my cousin again；I would always know I'd done something wrong. on，my aunt drove my home.When she dropped me off，I pulled out the toy and gave it back.She what had happened，but she thanked me and mentioned it again.
1.考查的词类覆盖面广，分布合理。错误包括词法、句法、语篇结构、行文逻辑等，涉及名词、冠词、代词、介词、形容词、副词、连词、动词时态、动词语态、非谓语动词、主谓一致等语法知识。在改错题中，占相当大比例的主要是动词的形式变化、一般现在时第三人称单数、一般过去时、－ed分词、－ing分词及被动语态等。其他如名词复数的变化、主谓一致、词与词之间的搭配、词法、句法及语篇中的行文逻辑等方面也会交替出现。
2.短文改错试题的难度保持平稳，体裁以记叙文为主，记叙文较说明文和议论文更易理解；句子结构以简单句为主，过渡到以复合句和并列句为主。句子的长度是控制难度的一个重要因素，句子越长难度越高。从近几年考试题来看，短文改错的句子平均长度趋于平稳，但几乎每篇都有一个长达20多个词的句子。这就需要考生在这个句子中判断出二到三个地方有错或无错，增加了试题的难度。
