2024届高中英语读后续写之温暖亲情类 导学案（含解析）

读后续写之温暖亲情类10篇（含写作指导）
1．（2024·河北·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When he was around 5-6 years old, my brother Ted, who is four years younger to me, suddenly found his legs unable to move one night. What followed was one of the hardest times of my parents'life. Months passed with them meeting various doctors, visiting different hospitals, and knocking at the doorstep of every possible chance — all the time with Ted in their arms, since he wasn't able to walk on his own anymore.
There were doubts of permanent paralysis（瘫痪）— the very mention of which was enough to break us down. From finding it extremely painful to walk, to not being able to get up on his own, and to not being able to stand at all, Ted's problem was worsening day by day. Most surprisingly, all this while, he was as strong as, perhaps, only children can be in such difficult times.
During this period, it was not unusual for my mother to have sudden breakdowns. Once, she burst into tears while watching Ted playing joyfully. He wiped off her tears, and said, “Don't cry, mummy. See, I can stand and even run on my own!” Saying this, he tried to get up, stood on shaking legs for just about a few microseconds and fell down, only to be safely caught in the arms of my mom, who hugged him dearly and cried some more.
This was the most heart-breaking thing that I had ever experienced. But it was also a powerful one for the simple fact that it was my little brother who taught us what life was all about—HOPE.
Witnessing my brother's strong will and positive attitude inspired me as well. As a brother, I could not stand by doing nothing at all. Hope was burning in my heart when I had the idea to train my brother to walk again. I firmly believe Ted could stand up and walk as he used to. Whenever school was over, I would put Ted into a pushchair and tell my mom that we'd just go to the park.
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In the park, I would put Ted one meter away from me, encouraging him to walk.
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We agreed to keep this a secret from our parents until mom's birthday.
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【范文】In the park, I would put Ted one meter away from me, encouraging him to walk. His initial attempts were shaky, and he would often fall in my arms after just a couple of steps. I kept telling him that each small step was a victory. During that tough time, we had gone through countless days of helplessness, breakdowns and despair. We celebrated every attempt and every inch forward, becoming full of hope for the future. I knew that this was more than just physical training, it was a lesson in perseverance for both of us. Gradually, His legs began to gain strength, and his falls became less frequent.
We agreed to keep this a secret from our parents until mom's birthday. We wanted to give her the most memorable gift—a miracle we had been working on. As the day approached, Ted's steps became more confident and his falls became fewer. On mom's birthday, we led our parents to the living room where Ted was waiting, standing on his own. With a signal, he started walking towards mom, his every step a testament to his incredible courage. The look of shock and joy on our parents' faces was indescribable. Tears streamed down my mom's cheeks as she watched Ted walk into her arms. It was a moment of triumph, a celebration of hope, and the best birthday present we could have ever given. Our secret training had paid off, and Ted's journey was a
reminder to all of us that hope, combined with action, can lead to miracles.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的弟弟5、6岁的时候，有一天晚上突然发现他的腿不能动了。这段时期成为了一家人最艰难的时期，弟弟如此的坚强，也使得作者领悟到了生活的真谛。作者决定帮助弟弟，带领弟弟秘密训练。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由第一段首句内容“在公园里，我会把泰德放在离我一米远的地方，鼓励他走路。”可知，第一段可描写弟弟的努力、作者的鼓励以及弟弟的腿开始有力气了，摔倒的次数也少了。
②由第二段首句内容“我们说好在妈妈生日之前不让父母知道这个秘密。”可知，第二段可描写作者完成比赛，吃到了巧克力棒。
2.续写线索：跌倒——作者鼓励——摔倒次数减少——在父母面前走路——父母感动——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
庆祝：celebrate /observe
获得：gain/acquire
开始：start /begin
导致：lead to /result in
情绪类
自信的：confident/ self-assurance
难以置信的：incredible/ unbelievable
【点睛】[高分句型1] As the day approached, Ted's steps became more confident and his falls became fewer. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I knew that this was more than just physical training, it was a lesson in perseverance for both of us. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
2．（2024·河南新乡·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Hudson is 8 years old now. He has a favorite little toy, a crocheted little ghost named Casper. The toy was given to him by his grandmother on his 5th birthday, and he has treasured it ever since, Hudson loves Casper so much that he often brings it with him wherever he goes. He even talks to Casper as if it’s his best friend.
One day, while playing with Casper, Hudson turned to his mother Ruthie with a worried look on his face. “Mommy, if I should get Casper lost, I would cry so much and be sad forever,” he confessed, tears welling up in his eyes.
Ruthie couldn’t help but smile at her son’s innocence and affection for his little toy. She gently reassured him, “You haven’t lost Casper yet, sweetheart. You take good care of it, and I’m sure you won’t lose it. But even if you do, remember that I’ll always be here to comfort you.”
Curiosity sparked in Hudson’s eyes as he listened to his mother’s words. He looked up at her with a serious expression and asked, “Mommy, have you ever lost a toy ”
Looking at her lovely kid, Ruthie shared her story with her son. When she was six years old, her world turned upside down when her father tragically passed away. Their family was in trouble, and they faced financial struggles. Ruthie’s mother had to take up odd jobs to make ends meet, and they had to move frequently to save money.
During one of her moves, she found that every one of her favorite girl toys was missing including Molly, an American Girl doll. Everywhere she went, she would bring the doll and she was obsessed with it. After hearing his mother’s story, the boy hugged his mother tightly, without saying anything.
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Days turned into weeks, and soon it was New Year’s Day.
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Ruthie carefully unwrapped the gift box.
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【范文】 Days turned into weeks, and soon it was New Year’s Day. The excitement of the holiday season filled the air, but Hudson couldn’t shake off the worry about losing Casper. He found himself constantly checking his pockets and surroundings to ensure Casper was safe by his side. Despite his mother’s comforting words, the fear lingered in his mind, reminding him of the fragility of his beloved toy.
Ruthie carefully unwrapped the gift box. Inside was a beautifully crafted keychain with a miniature Casper attached to it. She smiled warmly at Hudson and said, “Now, you can keep Casper close to you wherever you go, and you won’t have to worry about losing him.” Hudson’s eyes lit up with joy as he hugged the keychain tightly, feeling grateful for his mother’s thoughtful gesture. With Casper now securely attached to his belongings, Hudson felt a sense of relief and reassurance, knowing that his cherished companion would always be by his side.
【导语】本文以故事发展的顺序为线索展开，讲述了Hudson和他最喜欢的玩具Casper之间的亲密关系，以及他对失去它的担忧，Hudson的母亲Ruthie分享了她自己童年时期失去玩具的经历，这让Hudson感受到母亲的理解和支持的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“日子一天天过去，过了几个星期，很快就到了元旦。”可知，第一段可描写尽管是在假期的喜悦中，但Hudson害怕失去Casper，他经常翻口袋查看Casper是否还在的经过及相关细节。
②由第二段首句内容“Ruthie小心地打开礼品盒。”可知，第二段可描写Ruthie送给Hudson一个制作精美的钥匙链，连接上Casper后Hudson就不用担心会失去它了，Hudson充满喜悦并对母亲充满了感激，Hudson感到了放松并一直带着Casper在身边的过程及相关细节。
2.续写线索：Hudson担心失去Casper——Hudson检查口袋——妈妈安慰Hudson——Hudson依旧担心——Ruthie送给Hudson一个钥匙链——Hudson充满喜悦——Hudson感激妈妈
3.词汇激活
行为类
①确保：ensure/make sure
②徘徊：linger/wander
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill
②担心：worry about/be worried about/be concerned about
【点睛】[高分句型1] Despite his mother’s comforting words, the fear lingered in his mind, reminding him of the fragility of his beloved toy. (使用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2] With Casper now securely attached to his belongings, Hudson felt a sense of relief and reassurance, knowing that his cherished companion would always be by his side.(使用了with的复合结构，现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句)
3．（2024·广东江门·一模）阅读下面材料根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Postcards from the World
While the sun washed over the grass of my grandmother’s front garden, I sank into one of her armchairs familiar to me. Life, as I knew it, had changed. My beloved grandmother, my Nanny, as a ”parent“ in the absence of my father, had cancer. It was terminal (晚期的).
As she watched Getaway, a Sunday afternoon TV program, she remarked to me that she’d never left Australia and that now she never would. Seeing her restricted to ”travel" by watching TV, I swallowed the sadness that came with knowing that chapters of her life were to be left unwritten.
At work, feeling helpless, I wiped tables and took orders and thought. Hard. The Saturday afternoon lunch rush was not enough to stop me from my thoughts. Collapsed with growing sorrow, I was reminded of the power of Facebook and the collective strength of human sympathy. I raced from the end of my shift to ask strangers on the Internet for help.
My Nanny Del has cancer. It’s terminal and she will never see the world. Please send her postcards so she can see the world from her armchair. I can offer nothing but gratitude.
I resolved not to breathe a word of this; if nothing came, I couldn’t bear to carry her disappointment along with my own. . And if something should wander into our humble little letterbox, I vould consider it a blessing and embrace it gratefully.
Days turned to weeks: Nothing. And Nanny’s health declined rapidly. I was trying to balance my full-time study, babysitting and waiting tables with the tiring responsibility of caring for my grandmother. As I helped Nanny in the early hours of those mornings, she would chat to me, sometimes reflections of her lifetime, and other times, the disturbance caused by medication. She seldom talked about her regret of being unable to travel, but I was still hoping for something.
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One afternoon, about six weeks after my Facebook post, a travel-worn postcard arrived in our letterbox.
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My dreams of armchair travels became a reality.
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【范文】
One afternoon, about six weeks after my Facebook post, a travel-worn postcard arrived in our letterbox. It read, “Nanny Del, thinking of you in Michigan, USA, and thinking of you as we move around this beautiful State.” That simple postcard was to me a beacon of light in a desperate period. I held it in my hands, read and re-read the words and felt something—hope. From that day on, our letter box became the destination for postcards from all over the world: India, Portugal, Italy, the Czech Republic, China and so on. It delivered the simple but beautiful description of the
world, especially people's warmth to my sick Nanny.
My dreams of armchair travels become a reality. In the months that followed, we travelled the world together with the postcards from all corners of the globe. Nanny enjoyed every visit from the postman. “I just can't believe strangers did this for a little old lady they’ve never met”, she murmured many times. I reached out to the senders, expressing my gratitude for their selfless love. Given my Nanny's worsening condition, I didn't know how long she could hang out for the trips with me, but I did know it was love that made her world go around.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的祖母癌症晚期，某天祖母说自己从来没有离开过澳大利亚，这让作者感到悲伤。于是作者在网上发帖向陌生人寻求帮助。于是此后他们家的邮箱陆续收到了来自世界各地的明信片，传达了对世界的简单而美丽的描述，也是人们对祖母的关爱和温暖。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一天下午，大约是我在Facebook上发帖六周后，我们的信箱收到了一张旅行用过的明信片”可知，第一段可描写他们收到明信片的情况以及作者的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“我的扶手椅旅行梦想成为现实”可知，第二段可描写祖母对明信片的喜爱以及作者对这件事情的感悟。
2.续写线索：收到明信片——阅读内容——感受到希望——陆续收到来自世界各地的明信片——祖母喜爱——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①表达：express/convey
②喜欢：enjoy/like
③运送：deliver/transport
情绪类
①美丽：beautiful/pretty
②绝望的：desperate/hopeless
【点睛】[高分句型1] Nanny Del, thinking of you in Michigan, USA, and thinking of you as we move around this beautiful State. (运用了as引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Given my Nanny's worsening condition, I didn't know how long she could hang out for the trips with me, but I did know it was love that made her world go around. (运用了强调
句)
4．（2024·河北·模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When Julia Harlin’s liver (肝) began failing several years ago as a result of a serious illness, her only option for survival was to get a liver transplant (移植).
Due to a long waiting list, Julia would need to wait months or years to find a person with a matching blood type, who’d like to donate his or her liver, as well as other medical characteristics—and as a senior citizen, time wasn’t exactly on her side.
“They basically told me, it would probably be at least five years, if not longer, before I would get the transplant,” Julia, 71, of Frederick, Maryland, recalled during an interview.
Despite having five children of her own, Julia said she did not want any of them to donate their liver to her “because then I would be worrying about them on top of worrying about myself”.
Without their mom’s knowledge, however, Julia’s daughter Eileen Harlin and her two other brothers and sister applied to donate their liver, which would reduce their mom’s wait time, although it would require a major surgery.
Eileen got the call that she was a match right before Mother’s Day. Deciding that Mother’s Day was the best time to tell her parents, Eileen began the conversation, “Hey, don’t get mad. For the past few months, I’ve been getting tested to see if I’m a match. And I am, and I want to do it.” The news was met with tears all around. Happy tears. How can you be mad when the daughter just said she was going to save her mom’s life “It was emotional for sure,” Eileen shared.
The liver transplant was carried out successfully on Aug. 16, 2022, at the University of Maryland Medical Center in Baltimore, according to a press release from the hospital. Unfortunately, Julia received additional bad news not long after the surgery. She was experiencing kidney (肾) failure due to the kidney damage.
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Julia’s doctors said that the condition required her to get a new kidney.
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Eileen saved her mom’s life twice.
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【范文】
Julia’s doctors said that the condition required her to get a new kidney. Hearing this, Julia started crying. She couldn’t believe she had to go through that again. “I think we were all in shock,” Eileen recalled. However, without a second thought. Eileen went for testing to see if she was a match for a kidney transplant. She was, and the successful transplant was eventually performed in 2023. The procedure completed at the same hospital. Following the procedure, Julia’s kidney function recovered immediately. And both them were home two or three days after the transplant.
Eileen saved her mom’s life twice. Obviously, the hero of the story is Eileen. Julia was full of praise for her daughter when speaking with reporters. “She’s very generous. She’s full of love,” she said. In fact, Eileen is a helpful person, She said that even if it wasn’t her mom, she wouldn’t hesitate to help, She encourages people to think about donating their organs without delay, saying “You don’t even have to know the person.” She always says that you don’t do it for anything, except the fact you can save someone’s life.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了71岁的Julia Harlin因患严重的肝脏疾病而需要接受肝脏移植，由于等待名单很长，她可能需要等上数年才能找到合适的捐赠者。尽管她不希望孩子们捐献肝脏，但在她不知情的情况下，女儿Eileen和其他两位兄弟姐妹已经申请捐献肝脏，以缩短她的等待时间。最终，Eileen成功匹配，于母亲节前告知母亲，让大家都流下了幸福的眼泪。肝脏移植手术于2022年8月16日成功进行，但不幸的是，手术后Julia
又遭遇肾衰竭的挑战。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“Julia的医生说她的病情需要换一个新的肾脏”可知，第一段可描写Julia听到这个消息后悲痛的反应，以及Eileen再次挺身而出，向妈妈捐出了自己的肾脏。
②由第二段首句内容“Eileen救了她妈妈两次”可知，第二段可描写Julia非常感动，很感激自己的女儿，以及Eileen对自己的行为的理解与感悟。
2.续写线索：Julia需要再换一个新的肾脏——Julia的反应——Eileen再次捐献——Eileen救了妈妈两次——Julia很感动——Eileen的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①开始：start/begin
②经历：go through/experience
③激励：encourage/inspire
情绪类
①震惊：shock/astonishment
②有爱心的：full of love/caring
【点睛】【高分句型1】She couldn’t believe she had to go through that again.（运用了省略引导词的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Eileen went for testing to see if she was a match for a kidney transplant.（运用了if引导的宾语从句）
5．（2024·黑龙江哈尔滨·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I stood there listening to the angry words of my father. He gathered us all together and had the look on his face that told us that one of us had done something wrong. “Which one of you did this ” he asked in a sharp voice.
We all stared down at the floor covered with the art of a child’s handwriting in chalk. I stood there, trembling on the inside and had hoped that no one else could see it. Scared, the only words that came from my mouth were, “Not me, Dad.”
The others denied it as well. Of course, we knew that one of us must have done it. But I, being the youngest and smallest of the three, just couldn’t find the courage to tell the truth. It
wasn’t that I was a bad kid. Lying was not normal for me. But the look on my dad’s face that evening sent a chill (寒冷) up and down my spine (脊柱) and somehow I couldn’t bring myself to tell him.
He had a way about himself when I was a child that made me afraid of him. But I loved him for it too, because it gave me my boundaries of what I could and could not do. I wanted to please him, of course. Maybe that’s why I held back the truth that day. I was afraid of displeasing the one man I looked up to.
Without saying a word, he disappeared for a few minutes and came back with a piece of paper and a pencil. “I want each of you to write exactly what you see on the step,” Dad said.
I was not a stupid kid and when my turn came, I purposely wrote the words differently. So when my dad compared the handwriting, he still couldn’t tell which one of us did it. Angrier, he stood a step above us and looked down at his three small kids. “I’m going to give you one more chance,” said Dad. “If none of you admit, you all will get a spanking (打屁股).”
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“I did it.” someone said and I was pretty sure it wasn’t me.
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We didn’t talk about that day for many years until we were all older.
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【范文】
“I did it,” someone said and I was pretty sure it wasn’t me. I looked around to see my sister come forward. Huh She did it No, she didn’t because I did. Why was she taking the blame for something I did Feeling guilty, yet still scared to admit, I stood there knowing my sister was going to get a spanking for what I did. And I let it happen. I didn’t speak up. I was so afraid of displeasing my dad that 1 held back the truth that day.
We didn’t talk about that day for many years until we were all older. I finally told the truth. My dad remained silent, saying nothing. Maybe he had already known the secret. By that time, I had already figured out why my sister took the blame. She had become my protector. She would have rather taken the pain herself than seen me suffer. And as I always felt guilty about it, that was the last time I let someone take the blame for me. When I think back to that day, I’ve learned the value of a family and a sister who would do anything for me. And I’ m glad to say that I know now I would do the same for her.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了爸爸发现三个孩子做了错事，非常生气，要求孩子们承认。作者是三个孩子中最小的，事实上，是作者做的，但是作者不敢在愤怒的爸爸面前承认错误。爸爸更加生气，威胁说，再不承认就要打屁股。这时，哥哥（或姐姐）承认是他（她）干的，替作者背了黑锅，挨了打，作者非常愧疚，但也得到教训的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“‘我做的’。有人说，我很确定承认错误的人不是我。”可知，第一段可描写作者的哥哥（或姐姐）受到责打，作者非常愧疚。
②由第二段首句内容“我们很多年都没有谈论那一天，直到我们都长大了。”可知，第二段可描写作者后来对此事的认识和理解，以及得到的教训。
2.续写线索：承担责任——受到责打——愧疚——回想——理解哥哥（或姐姐）——高兴得到教训——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①. 承担责任：take the blame/take responsibility and punishment
②. 回想：think back/recall
情绪类
①. 愧疚：feel guilty/be ashamed
②. 高兴：glad/pleased
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Feeling guilty, yet still scared to admit, I stood there knowing my sister was going to get a spanking for what I did. (由连接词what引导的宾语从句作介词for的宾语及现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. When I think back to that day, I’ve learned the value of a family and a sister who would do anything for me. (由关系代词who引导限制性定语从句)
6．（2024·云南红河·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
After a few months of borrowing his old white Ford and my constant begging, dad finally agreed it was time for me to own my very first car. So we headed straight to the used car section. A little cute car caught my attention. My dad wanted to get it thoroughly checked out before purchasing it, but not me. I was in a hurry. “Daaaad. Let’s just pick one already. I want this one...” Finally, he had to give in.
No sooner had I driven off the lot than the problems started. First, the overheating. Next, the knocking coming from the engine. But oh no! I was not to be stopped. I just wouldn’t look at it. Annoying little sound coming from the engine I could just turn up the radio. Problem solved!
Ignoring all the warnings, I was heading out the door to a Friday night party in my college town. I had been looking forward to it for weeks. But as the night arrived, an unexpected winter snowstorm came along.
My dad tried to persuade me to stay at home. But I was not listening. I was an adult, thank you very much. I was not about to miss that party. I swung by and picked up my friend Carrie and the two of us started on our thirty-minute drive in the snow.
Just as we hit a long stretch of somewhat deserted highway, something happened. My precious little car spit and sputtered (发出) its final breath... and died! Luckily, I had just enough time to move to the side of the highway, just barely over the line onto the shoulder, before it came to a complete stop.
And there we were. Two eighteen-year-old girls stranded (使滞留) on the side of the road on a snowy dark night. We called 911 for help, but unfortunately the signal was so weak that we could hardly hear each other. After several vain attempts, we began to wave down passing cars, but with no luck.
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We were anxious and at a loss what to do when I heard my phone ring.
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Forty minutes later, my dad came out of the familiar white Ford.
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【范文】
We were anxious and at a loss what to do when I heard my phone ring. Seeing it was my dad, I felt excited. Fortunately, after telephone connected, although the signal was weak and the sound was intermittent, eventually he understood what was going on. He told us not to worry and that he would come to pick us up at once. That seemed like the best news I had ever heard. So we waited anxiously.
Forty minutes later, my dad came out of the familiar white Ford. Seeing my dad’s figure, I finally relaxed, and the tears could not stop flowing down. Without any complaints or scolding, he comforted us with hugs, which was beyond my expectation. Then he motioned for the two of us to get into the car and towed my car home in his white Ford. Although he never verbally expressed his care for me, but I realized the same fatherly love as the mountain from the action.
【导语】本篇书面表达是读后续写。本文以人物为线索展开。作者买的二手车有问题，但是作者却一直忽略。作者出门去参加大学城的周五晚会。但随着夜幕降临，一场意想不到
的冬季暴风雪来了。爸爸试图说服作者呆在家里。但作者和朋友还是出发了。就在驶上一段很长的无人驾驶的高速公路时，车完全停了下来。两个18岁的女孩被困在一个下雪的黑夜的路边。两人打了911求救，但不幸的是信号太弱了，几乎听不见彼此的声音。经过几次徒劳的尝试后，两人开始挥手示意过往的汽车停下来，但没人停下来。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“当我们都很焦虑，不知道该怎么办的时候，我听到我的电话响了。”可知，第一段可以描写作者看见是父亲的电话后的心情、二人的对话过程。
②由第二段句首内容“四十分钟后，爸爸从那辆熟悉的白色福特车里出来了。”可知，第二段可以描写父亲到来后，作者的感受和父亲的动作。
2.续写线索：电话响—父亲得知情况—告知马上来—到达—安慰—回家—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①接通：connect/ put through
②理解：understand/ make sense of
③责备：scold/ blame
情绪类
①激动的：excited/ fevered
②焦急地：anxiously/impatiently
【点睛】【高分句型1】Seeing it was my dad, I felt excited. ( 运用了现在分词Seeing作状语)
【高分句型2】Fortunately, after telephone connected, although the signal was weak and the sound was intermittent, eventually he understood what was going on.( 运用了although引导的让步状语从句、what引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型3】 He told us not to worry and that he would come to pick us up at once. (运用了that引导的宾语从句)
7．（2024·广东湛江·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ever since I came to work in my present company five years ago, I have heard about a small restaurant nearby called Love Dad. Everybody believes that it is owned by somebody’s loving dad. The restaurant does give the diners a sense of home. The furnishings are homely, with dining
areas looking like family dining rooms. Best of all, they have hand-drawn cards, which diners can take away with them when checking out. The restaurant doesn’t have a menu. You never know what will be served until you come to its door with a “served today” notice hanging to it.
Whenever I pass by, I just can’t help entering to enjoy the homely atmosphere. It’s a reminder of my own home and my dad, who will prepare a great dinner for the family every day. Dad is a manager in a construction company and a great cook at home and not only a great cook. He is the kind of hero-like father at home, who can fix everything in the home and deal with all problems. As my parents live in another city, this small homely restaurant is where I choose to go to comfort my homesickness.
Curiosity about whose dad the owner of the restaurant is has always been there among my workmates who are its regular customers but it seems that nobody has a clue. It doesn’t matter much as all of them can get a taste of home there.
Last month, when I was home for the Christmas break, my parents talked to me about their plan for retirement and I mentioned the restaurant Love Dad to them. We all thought it would be great if Mom and Dad could join the restaurant in some way. They asked me about the exact location of it and decided to deal with the matter themselves.
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One week later, I got an email from Dad.
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One day, I was sitting in Love Dad again.
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【范文】One possible version:
One week later, I got an email from Dad. He had good news for me that his talk with the owner of Love Dad went very smoothly. As the restaurant owner, who they called Mr. Penn, is getting old and finding it too much for him to handle all the chores, he gladly accepted my parents as partners to run the restaurant on one condition: they had to keep it secret whose parents they are, which they readily accepted and planned to start work two months later.
One day, I was sitting in Love Dad again. While waiting to be served, I glanced over the customers, thinking maybe one of them was Mr. Penn’s son or daughter. Then I took out my phone to scroll through the daily news. When my dishes were served, I looked up from my phone and saw Mom standing beside me, smiling. I managed not to show my excitement and smiled back. The meal that day tasted especially nice. When checking out, I took a card on which a family scene was drawn. The sentence beside the picture read, “Even when we grow up, we are still our parents’ kids.”
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述作者经常听说附近有一家叫“爱爸爸”的小餐馆，店内氛围温馨，让人有家的感觉。主人公每次路过都会进去享受氛围，缓解思乡之情。上个月，主人公回家度假时向父母提到这家餐馆，建议他们退休后加入经营餐馆。父母对此很感兴趣，决定亲自处理此事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“一个星期后，我收到爸爸的一封电子邮件。”可知，第一段可描写作者收到爸爸的邮件，得知加入餐馆经营的进展。
②由第二段首句内容“有一天，我又坐在Love Dad里。”可知，第二段可描写作者再次来到餐馆用餐，遇到已经开始上班的妈妈。作者万分激动，觉得那天的饭菜尝起来特别好吃。
2.续写线索：收到邮件——得知父母成为餐馆合伙人——再次到餐馆用餐——见到开始上班的妈妈——觉得饭菜特别好吃——带走卡片
3.词汇激活
行为类
①处理：handle/deal with/manage
②开始：start/begin
③表现：show/express
情绪类
①高兴地：gladly/happily/joyfully
②欣然地：readily/willingly
【点睛】[高分句型1] He had good news for me that his talk with the owner of Love Dad went very smoothly.(运用了that引导同位语从句)
[高分句型2] When my dishes were served, I looked up from my phone and saw Mom standing beside me, smiling.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型3] When checking out, I took a card on which a family scene was drawn.(运用了“介词+关系代词”引导限制性定语从句)
8．（2024·湖南岳阳·一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
By the age of sixteen years old, Ben had always been an outstanding student. He went to great lengths to achieve high grades and managed to keep his parents delighted and proud. Neither of his parents had the opportunity to attend university and it was their biggest ambition that Ben could land a well-paid and decent job as a lawyer. He knew that achieving this goal would make his parents walk on air, but he wasn’t certain whether he would feel the same.
Since he was only a child, Ben had been passionate about computer programming. He taught himself how to use a computer, and by the age of 12, he had been proficient in three difterent programming languages. He did all of this in his spare time. He was quite an introvert (内向的人), so he preferred staying in with his computer, rather than going out socializing with his fellow classmates or playing sports in the brilliant sunshine. It was acceptable with his parents, as long as he continued to focus on his studies.
One day, while reading an article online about a young technology billionaire called Tom, Ben was fascinated by the magical power of technology and the wisdom and imnovation of the young CEO. The inner voice told him that he longed to become a computer programmer. Everything changed for Ben. In the article, the CEO said that his company was trying to create a new and improved way of paying for goods online but that they were struggling with the security system. He said if they could overcome this, they could launch the biggest and best online
payment system in the world. It occurred to Ben that he had an innovative idea on how to handle this problem. Thinking that it wouldn’t come to anything, he emailed the CEO, introducing himself and explaining his idea.
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He forgot all about it, but then a month later; the most amazing thing happened.
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With all these concerns in mind, Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly.
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【范文】
He forgot all about it, but then a month later, the most amazing thing happened He received a response directly from the CEO, which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system. Ben was overjoyed, staring at the email with his lips curving into a smile. But a wave of worry took hold of him. What about his parents’ ambition for him Should he turn down the offer against his own passion Would he let his parents down if he followed his own heart to realize his potential
With all these concerns in mind, Ben determined to communicate with his parents frankly. When Ben got home from school, he took a deep breath and plucked up his courage to confess everything to his parents. Ben told them he didn’t think he would become a qualified lawyer. Instead, he guaranteed that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer. Hearing this, his parents felt very surprised, but they didn’t blame him. They stroked his head
gently, whispering that they would accompany him to visit the CEO in person. Bathed in the harmonious atmosphere, Ben was inspired to seize the opportunity to pursue his own dreams.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，主讲述了Sam的父母一直希望他成为律师，而Sam也不想辜负父母的期望。可是，Sam内心真正喜欢的是计算机。后来，Sam机缘巧合之下获得了一份科技公司的工作。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句“他忘记了这一切，但一个月后，最令人惊讶的事情发生了。”可知，第一段可描写CEO认可了Ben的想法，并邀请他一块讨论关于系统安全性的问题。但是Ben犹豫了，不知道父母会不会同意他去。
②由第二段首句“考虑到所有这些担忧，本决定坦率地与父母沟通。”可知，第二段可描写Ben和父母坦白了一切，父母并没有责怪他，反而鼓励他去追求自己的梦想。
2.续写线索：写邮件——认可——受到邀请——担心——和父母坦白——没有责怪——鼓励追求梦想
3.词汇激活
行为类
①拒绝：turn down/refuse
②陪伴某人：accompany sb./keep pany
③抓住机会：seize the opportunity/grasp the chance
情绪类
①非常高兴：overjoyed/extremely happy
②吃惊的：surprised/shocked
【点睛】【高分句型1】He received a response directly from the CEO, which informed him that his brilliant idea struck a chord and that he was welcome to fly to America to share his forward thinking on the security system. （由which引导非限定性定语从句,that引导宾语从句）
【高分句型2】 Instead, he guaranteed that he could do something brilliant in a career as a computer programmer. （由that引导了宾语从句）
9．（2024·江西·二模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Throughout our lives, we have encountered a lot of people that have influenced us in some sense. Their effect may be for one day or a lifetime. Often, you don’t realize how much influence
someone has made on you until a particular moment. The man who made a big influence on me was my father.
Three months after turning fourteen, my life was great. I was getting settled into a high school; my grades were already getting better and I was making friends.
One day, when I got back from school, I went to the sitting room and saw my parents having a conversation. They came up to me and asked me to take a seat, because they wanted to say something very important. I soon found out that my dad’s liver(肝脏) was failing and he needed an immediate transplant(器官移植). I was surprised and bewildered(不知所措的) because my father looked all right. He worked, and he didn’t seem ill. My parents said I shouldn’t be afraid, because it was going to be all right. Four months had gone by, and my father had yet to get a new liver. It looked as if his body was steadily worsening, but he kept saying, “Dear, everything will be just fine.”
It was becoming difficult for me and my family. My father had to give up work, and my mother was the sole breadwinner(养家糊口的人). I had to bear the responsibilities of cleaning up the house making food, and looking after my father when my mother was at work. I had to limit my time with my friends, because my father started coming in and out of the hospital. My concentration on the subject was beginning to slip away. So were my grades. Two days before my school spring break, my mother got a phone call from the hospital, saying my father had an accident and was in hospital. What surprised me was that my father wasn’t injured at all. Then the next day, my mother got a phone call from the doctor saying that there was a liver that matched my dad’s body and that he needed to get to the hospital immediately.
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My parents and I hurried to the hospital.
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I had to take on so many responsibilities at home.
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【范文】My parents and I hurried to the hospital. My dad was taken to the operating room after all kinds of tests, leaving Mom and I waiting anxiously outside. Three hours’ waiting seemed like a life time during which my mother kept comforting me by saying, “Your dad said everything will be just fine!” When the door was pushed open and the doctor told us the good news, my mom burst into tears. Three weeks after that, my dad could leave the hospital, but he still needed extra attention at home, which I was responsible for, since my mom had to work outside every day.
I had to take on so many responsibilities at home. Household chores and the care for my dad took up most of my day, leaving little time for my studies. Though I was tired out every day after attending to my dad, I still tried to squeeze out some precious time to make up for some missing lessons till late night. Every day my dad told me the same thing, “Dear, everything will be just fine!” After six months, my dad made a full recovery and I graduated with the best grades in four years. Time has stolen so much of our family’s happiness, but it’s still the most important.“Dear, everything will be just fine!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者认为一个人的人生中会遇到很多影响他们的人，其中对作者影响最大的人是作者的父亲。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我和父母急忙赶到医院。”以及第二段首句内容“我不得不在家里承担很多责任。”可知，第一段可描写经过检查，父亲手术成功且出院回家。
②由第二段首句内容“我不得不在家里承担很多责任。”可知，第二段可描写作者承担了更多的责任，同时也成长了。
2.续写线索：作者即将进入高中，一切都很顺利——然而，一天，作者得知自己的父亲肝脏衰竭需要接受移植手术——然而，一直都没有配型成功的肝脏——作者也开始焦虑，成
绩也开始下降——突然，传来了好消息，作者的父亲可以接受手术了——手术成功了，但是后续的恢复需要作者一家更多的付出——作者的妈妈需要外出工作，照顾父亲的责任落在了作者身上——作者一边照顾父亲一边也开始真正长大
3.词汇激活
行为类
①突然哭了起来：burst into tears/burst out crying
②占据：take up/occupy
③负责：be responsible for/take the responsibility for
情绪类
①焦虑地：anxiously/with anxiety
②开心：happiness/joy
【点睛】【高分句型1】When the door was pushed open and the doctor told us the good news, my mom burst into tears.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Though I was tired out every day after attending to my dad, I still tried to squeeze out some precious time to make up for some missing lessons till late night.（运用了though引导的让步状语从句）
10．（2024·福建泉州·二模）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Saving the Daisies
Taylor aged 14 opened her sleepy eyes and looked out the window below. “NO!” she cried, now fully awake. Buttermilk the cow was in Mama’s daisy (雏菊) garden.
“I must have forgotten to close the gate last night,” Taylor thought as she pulled a sweatshirt over her head. Mama was planning to sell the daisies at the fair next week. But Buttermilk was eating the flowers. Taylor hurried outside and grabbed a rope.
“Why can’t you stay in the field ” she called to Buttermilk as she headed across the yard to the daisy garden. Buttermilk stood biting the tender flowers.
“When I grow up, I’ll be an artist and paint pictures all day,” Taylor thought. “I’ll not own a cow. Too much trouble.” Taylor was fond of painting since the day she had memory. She would like to help with family but she loved seeing birds and flowers alive under her brush more.
Just as Taylor was about to throw the rope onto Buttermilk’s collar, the family dog barked.
Buttermilk couldn’t stand it and took off, tearing through the daisies. It finally ran through the open gate and into the field outside. “Thank goodness!” Taylor said as she closed the gate and secured the lock. But as she turned to look at the flower garden, most of the daisies were either eaten or left in pieces.
Mama and Dad came out of the house. “What’s going on ” Mama asked. She looked sadly at her garden. “I forgot to close the gate,” Taylor said. “I’m so sorry. ” “I know you are.” Mama sighed and gave Taylor a hug.
Taylor’s heart was heavy as she went back into the house. Mama had prepared much for the fair but now half of her efforts were in vain. Taylor decided to think of a way to make it up to her mother. The problem tasked Taylor’s mind. Could she plant other flowers in a week Not enough time. Could she make use of the daisies in pieces Not enough magic. Taylor found no way out.
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Suddenly, Taylor noticed a daisy painting in the house and an idea jumped in.
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A week later, when her parents were loading the car, Taylor brought her paintings downstairs.
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【范文】
Suddenly, Taylor noticed a flower painting in the house and an idea jumped in. She raced up
stairs, grabbed her art supplies and sat down at her desk. Looking at the remaining daisies below the window, she moved her brush. As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive. Taylor made one painting after another. The next few days witnessed Taylor’s continuing efforts and burst of creativity. She even drew the greedy Buttermilk and hot-tempered dog. Her paintings mounted but Taylor’s heart was beating more quickly as the fair day was approaching.
A week later, when her parents were loading the car, Taylor brought her paintings downstairs. With butterflies in stomach, she presented the paintings to Mama and Dad. Right in front of them were Taylor’s paintings of beautiful daisies! Mama’s eyes went wet, not just for the vivid colors, but for the sweats Taylor put in bringing the flowers back to life. She gathered Taylor into her arms. “Do you think anyone will buy them ” Taylor asked. Mama smiled, “Oh, sweetie, yes. I’m sure they will.” The sunlight then shone upon the family. Not only were the daisies saved but their family bond was also strengthened.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。讲述了名叫泰勒的小女孩因为忘记锁牛棚，导致牛破坏了妈妈花园的鲜花，而这些花是妈妈准备拿到集市上售卖的。为了弥补自己的过错，泰勒决定把这些花都画下来，她暖心的举动最终感动了妈妈。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然，泰勒注意到房子里有一幅花画，于是她有了一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写泰勒突发奇想，决定通过画画来弥补她的失误。
②由第二段首句内容“一周后，当她的父母把东西搬上车时，泰勒把她的画搬到了楼下。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈看到泰勒的画的反应。
2. 续写线索：想办法弥补过错——选择绘画——向母亲展示作品——装车赶往集市——母亲感动
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①冲到楼上：race upstairs/rush upstairs
②展现：present/display
③拥抱：gather sb. into one’s arms/hold sb. in one’s arms
情绪类
①忐忑不安：with butterflies in stomach/apprehensive
②激动：Mama’s eyes went wet/Mama was very excited
【点睛】[高分句型1]As her brush moved smoothly across the paper, daisies came alive.(as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]Not only were the daisies saved but their family bond was also strengthened.(not only开头的倒装句)