2024年中考英语题型模拟预测; 书面表达(福建专用)
1.(2024·福建福州·二模)假定你是李华,学校英语报“学生园地”专栏向你约稿,希望你结合自身经历,围绕体育中考,以“Practice Makes Perfect”为题写一篇词数80左右的文章。请结合表格中的内容完成稿件。
before the exam make a plan ···
during the exam do warm-up activities follow the teachers’ instructions(指令)
after the exam …
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通畅,行文连贯,书写工整;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地址。
Practice Makes Perfect
On April 28, I took the PF exam for middle school graduates and got full marks.
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2.(2024·福建宁德·二模)一年一度的科艺节即将到来,你校准备开展用英语讲中国故事活动,假如你是一名传统文化推荐官,请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文介绍元宵节,推广中国文化。词数80左右。
要求:
★必须包含要点提示,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
★意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
★请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
The Lantern Festival
The Lantern Festival is one of my favorite traditional Chinese festivals.
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3.(2024·福建三明·二模)初中三年的校园生活即将结束,相信你有很多的感悟。假设你是李华,应学校英语社团的邀请为学弟学妹们演讲,分享自己的经历。请根据以下图文提示,用英语写一篇发言稿。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;
4.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My middle school life is coming to an end. In the past three years, I have learnt a lot and overcome many difficulties. ______________________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
4.(2024·福建泉州·二模)假如你是李华,法国学生Sophie将要来你校做交流。她发来邮件向你询问如何在中国举止得当。请你结合以下图文提示,给Sophie 回一封邮件。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Sophie,
I’m glad to hear you’ll be joining us for an exchange program! Don’t worry about the dos and don’ts in China. I’ll give you some important tips on etiquette (礼仪). _________________________________________________
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I hope these tips help you feel prepared for your visit. Can’t wait to meet you in person!
Yours,
Li Hua
5.(2024·福建南平·二模)压岁钱不仅仅是红包里的现金,更是长辈的一份关爱和祝福。我们该如何管理自己的钱,让压岁钱用得更有意义。请根据图表提示,以“How to Manage Lucky Money”为题,写一篇英语短文,词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 文中须包含上图提示的所有信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行为连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
How to Manage Lucky Money
Lucky money isn’t just money in red envelopes. It’s a gift from our elders full of love and wishes. To make it more meaningful, we can do like these: _____________________________________________________________
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6.(2024·福建福州·二模)假设你是李华,你所在的班级将举行一次跑步捡垃圾 (plogging) 的活动,你想邀请你们班外教Steve参加,请你结合下面的思维导图写一封邀请邮件。词数80左右。
Plogging
When April 27th, 2024
Meeting place the school playground
Route (路线) from our school to West Lake
What to take white gloves, a rubbish bag
Purposes healthy…
Your opinion …
注意事项:
●必须包含思维导图的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
●意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
●文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Steve,
Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
7.(2024·福建福州·二模)现我校将兴建新图书馆,学校英文报以“My Green School Library”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿,介绍你所设计(design)的绿色图书馆。词数80词左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入词数)。
注意事项:
1.必须包含所有提示信息,可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library.
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8.(2024·福建三明·二模)合理安排时间,丰富寒假生活。寒假来了,请你以“My Day”为题,根据以下图示及提示词,补全活动内容,用英语写一篇 60 词左右的短文,介绍你寒假的一天。
要求:
1.包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2.条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,语法正确;
3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Day
I’m on winter holiday. I have a colorful day.
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9.(2024·福建厦门·一模)假如你是李华,你校正在举办英语读书节活动。作为组织者,你遇到了一些困难。请你根据下列提示,给学校的外教Mr. White写一份电子邮件,请求他给予帮助。词数80左右。
The English Reading Festival Time: June 2, 2024
Activities: read English books, have an English speech contest (竞赛)
Difficulties: have no experience in organizing, activities,…
注意事项:
(1)必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Mr. White,
How is everything going I am writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Look forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
10.(2024·福建漳州·一模)我国人口老龄化加深的同时,子女忙于工作,老人的一日三餐成为了问题。一些社区建起了长者食堂(senior canteen)。假设你是学校英语广播站小记者,你走访了你们社区的长者食堂并了解到一些相关情况。请根据以下信息写一则80词左右的新闻稿,让更多同学了解长者食堂,号召大家关爱老年人。
注意事项:
1. 须使用提示内容,并适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
With the arrival of an aging society, elderly care has become a hot topic in China. In order to take good care of old people, more and more senior canteens have appeared. Here is a report about the senior canteen in my community. ___________________________________________________________________________________
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11.(2024·福建福州·一模)福州烟台山(Yantai Hill)旅游项目吸引了许多外来游客,暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游,假设你是康康,你想要向该项目的负责人推荐自己好友李华。请你写一封介绍信,推荐李华。
注意:1)必须包括要点内容,可适当拓展;
2)词数80左右,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3)文章不得透露真实个人姓名和学校名称。
What kind of person Grade Nine, outgoing, ...
What he is good at English, communicate, local stories
What he can do Introduce... , show. around
Dear sir,
I am Kangkang from Fuzhou, I am happy to know that you are in need of some tour guides for Yantai Hill tourism this year, so I’d like to recommend my good friend Li Hua for this job.
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Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Kangkang
12.(2024·福建莆田·一模)假定你是李华,你参加了你校开展的主题为“创新体验,快乐成长”的科技节活动。请结合如图所示,分享此次活动的过程和感受。词数80左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
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Yours,
Li Hua
13.(2024·福建福州·一模)假如你是李华,你的笔友 Rick 想了解“double reduction” policy (双减政策) 执行两年后你的校园生活。请你根据提示内容给 Rick 回信,介绍你的日常课后活动及感受。词数90词左右。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含思维导图中的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通畅,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
Dear Rick,
How is everything going
I’m glad to hear from you. As you know, since “double reduction” policy, I have had less homework and more leisure activities. ______________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.(2024·福建龙岩·一模)假定你是李华,你们学校拟举行以“My Dream Job”为题的征文比赛。请你结合以下表格提示,准备一篇英语演讲稿参赛。词数80左右。
What you want to be …
Why you want to be at my early age, dream of….
How you will do study hard, make good plans and keep carrying them out…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含提示内容,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
15.(2024·福建泉州·一模)假如你是光明国际学校的李华,你校将举行一场象棋比赛。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一则广播稿,鼓励大家积极参与。词数80左右。
Time 2:00 p. m.—4:00 p. m., March 15
Place the school gym
Benefits (益处) of thecompetition ◆ learn skills ◆…
Website www.
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
Notice on a Chinese Chess Competition
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please
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参考答案:
1.例文:
Practice Makes Perfect
On April 28, I took the PE exam for middle school graduates and got full marks.
Before the exam, our PE teacher helped us make a plan about when and how to do exercise. I put in much effort to follow the plan. No matter how tired I was, I kept practicing.
During the exam, I did warm-up activities first and followed the teachers’ instructions. Everything went well.
Practice makes perfect. I’m very happy that my efforts paid off. After the exam, I’ll continue to work hard to achieve good results in the coming senior high entrance examination.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”。
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏要点,包括:注意行文连贯、逻辑清晰、无拼写和语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步:阐述考试前的准备;
第二步:阐述考试的过程;
第三步:阐述考试后的感想,呼应标题。
[亮点词汇]
①put in much effort to do sth努力做某事
②pay off偿还
③continue to do sth继续做某事
[高分句型]
① No matter how tired I was, I kept practicing. (让步状语从句)
② After the exam, I’ll continue to work hard to achieve good results in the coming senior high entrance examination. (动词不定式作目的状语)
2.例文
The Lantern Festival
The Lantern Festival is one of my favorite traditional Chinese festivals. It falls on lunar January 15th, marking the end of the Spring Festival.
People often celebrate the festival in many ways. On the night of that day, various lanterns are hung in the streets and parks. People walk around and enjoy the shapes and sizes of lanterns. People also play the lantern riddle games. If someone gets the right answer, he or she will get a gift. Besides, the dragon lantern dance is a traditional folk program. Many people are into performing dragon dances to celebrate it. At the same time, eating tangyuan is a traditional custom. People usually eat it for good luck.
Maybe you have something more interesting about the festival, share that and let’s enjoy and spread our Chinese culture.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,不要遗漏图片提示信息,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍元宵节的日期;
第二步,详细地介绍元宵节的具体活动;
第三步,书写结语,提议分享其它有关元宵节的有趣活动。
[亮点词汇]
①mark the end of标志着……的结束
②At the same time同时
[高分句型]
If someone gets the right answer, he or she will get a gift. (if引导条件状语从句)
3.例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My middle school life is coming to an end. In the past three years, I have learnt a lot and overcome many difficulties.
One of the most influential things is that I masterd some learning skills, such as what to preview and review and how to use mind maps. During that time, I found my increasing interest in math, too. Also, I joined our school basketball team and became more active and independent. Though I’m not good at English at the beginning, I didn’t give up and with the help of my teachers, I kept on going. Finally I made much progress.
At this moment, I wish our school will be more beautiful and I hope all of us have a wonderful future.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,根据所给提示具体介绍自己的经历;
第二步,表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②give up擅长
③with the help of在……帮助下
[高分句型]
①One of the most influential things is that I masterd some learning skills, such as what to preview and review and how to use mind maps.(表语从句)
②Though I’m not good at English at the beginning, I didn’t give up and with the help of my teachers, I kept on going.(让步状语从句)
4.例文:
Dear Sophie,
I’m glad to hear you’ll be joining us for an exchange program! Don’t worry about the dos and don’ts in China. I’ll give you some important tips on etiquette.
China is a country with a long history, so there are many customs here.
Firstly, you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. Secondly, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. Thirdly, when you eat meals with others, it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. And don’t make noise when you have your soup.
I hope these tips help you feel prepared for your visit. Can’t wait to meet you in person!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总体介绍要给出一些重要的礼仪提示;
第二步,具体介绍不同方面的一些礼仪情况,包括问候,拜访人们以及餐桌礼仪等;
第三步,最后总结并结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
① be supposed to应该做某事
② on time准时
③ make noise制造噪音
[高分句型]
① you are supposed to shake hands when you meet someone for the first time. (when引导的时间状语从句)
② it’s rude to point at others with your chopsticks. (it固定句型)
5.例文
How to Manage Lucky Money
Lucky money isn’t just money in red envelopes. It’s a gift from our elders full of love and wishes. To make it more meaningful. we can do like these:
First, save some money for the future. We should keep some money for a rainy day. Second, use some to buy school things. This can help us learn more and do better in school. Third, we can also give some to help others in need. Helping others brings us joy. Lastly, spend a bit on what we like. It’s OK to have fun with our lucky money!
By managing lucky money wisely, we can make it more meaningful and valuable.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示信息介绍如何管理压岁钱,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,无单词及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题“如何管理压岁钱”;
第二步,根据图示信息具体介绍如何管理压岁钱;
第三步,书写结语,表达通过明智地管理压岁钱,能够使得它更有意义和价值。
[亮点词汇]
①save some money存些钱
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③more meaningful and valuable更有意义和价值
[高分句型]
Helping others brings us joy. (动名词作主语)
6.例文
Dear Steve,
Our class will hold an activity called “plogging”. First of all, I think it necessary to introduce what is plogging. Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service. This activity will take place on April 27th, 2024. And we will do it from our school to West Lake. We will meet at the school playground. What exactly should we do We should take trash bags and white gloves with us and then pick up the trash while running. What’s more, we can also stay healthy. In my opinion, this is a meaningful activity. I hope you can all join us.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lihua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:本文应使用“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍邀请对方参加此次活动”并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点题,介绍自己的意图;
第二步,根据题干的思维导图介绍活动的时间,要求等信息;
第三步,表达对这次活动的肯定,并期待对方来参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②pick up捡起
[高分句型]
①Actually, it is a kind of popular sports way, which combines sports with social service.(定语从句)
②I hope you can all join us.(宾语从句)
7.例文
My Green School Library
I want to design a green school library. It will be greatly different from the present ones. The library is green, blue and white. And it’s in the shape of spaceships with all kinds of electrical appliances. It will use solar power and be controlled by computers. What’s more, it’s made up of recyclable materials and solar panels. All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. Thanks to the modern computer system, we can lend the books we are interested in and return them conveniently by scanning our face. The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired. It is large enough so that you can also rest inside and feel comfortable. What a wonderful library it is!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”与“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示写一篇作文,介绍你所设计的图书馆。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍图书馆的样子;
第二步,具体阐述它是如何体现绿色环保的;
第三步,最后介绍我们可以在那里做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be made up of由……组成
②Thanks to幸亏
③are interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①All its energy comes from the sun, which are environment-friendly to our earth. (定语从句)
②The most exciting thing is that you can listen to music in your seat to relax yourself when you feel tired.(when引导的时间状语从句)
8.例文:
My Day
I’m on winter holiday. I have a colorful day. I get up at seven o’clock in the morning. At half past seven/, I have breakfast. At ten past eight, I begin to do my homework. At ten thirty, I usually help my mother cook food. At a quarter to five in the afternoon, I like to go shopping and do some sports with my friends. At about ten o’clock in the evening, it’s time to go to bed. I’m happy every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,注意不要遗漏所给提示,适当添加细节,注意写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,说明在度假中;
第二步,根据图示及提示词,具体介绍寒假的一天如何度过,注意补全活动内容;
第三步,抒发这一天的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①on winter holiday过寒假
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
①At about ten o’clock in the evening, it’s time to go to bed.(it固定句型)
9.例文
Dear Mr. White,
How is everything going I am writing to ask for your help. The English Reading Festival is going to be held in our school on June 2, 2024. There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. However, I meet some difficulties.
First, I have no experience in organizing activities, so would you please share some advice on how to organize a good reading festival What’s more, I have no idea what kind of English books are suitable for junior high school students. Could you recommend some books to me
Look forward to your earliest reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,写一封电子邮件;
② 时态:一般将来时和一般现在时;
③ 提示:根据要点提示介绍英语读书活动和遇到的困难。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍英语读书节活动;
第二步,寻求帮助,解释具体需要什么帮助。
[亮点词汇]
① have no experience没有经验
② What’s more 而且
③ be suitable for 适合于
[高分句型]
① There will be some interesting activities, such as reading English books and having an English speech contest. (There be 句型)
10.例文
With the arrival of an aging society, elderly care has become a hot topic in China. In order to take good care of old people, more and more senior canteens have appeared. Here is a report about the senior canteen in my community. In the canteen, old people can enjoy safe and fresh food at a low price. They can have their meals in the clean and bright dining hall. What’s more, the volunteers in the canteen are all kind and helpful.
The senior canteen has changed old people’s life for the better in many ways. First, it provides a balanced diet so that old people can eat healthily. Besides, it offers a good place for them to communicate. It also makes their life easier. They don’t need to spend too much time shopping and cooking.
Old people are in need of our care. Let’s take action to show love to them.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇新闻稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对长者食堂的介绍;
第二步,具体介绍长者食堂的优点;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at a low price 以低价
②What’s more 而且
③in many ways 在许多方面
④in need of 需要
[高分句型]
①First, it provides a balanced diet so that old people can eat healthily.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
②They don’t need to spend too much time shopping and cooking.(并列结构)
11.Dear sir,
I am Kangkang from Fuzhou, I am happy to know that you are in need of some tour guides for Yantai Hill tourism this year, so I’d like to recommend my good friend Li Hua for this job.
First of all, he is a Grade Nine student, who is outgoing, friendly and patient. He is active in many activities. Besides, he can speak English well and communicate with foreigners easily. Meanwhile, he is also good at telling local stories. So he can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, he has visited the beautiful Yantai Hill many times so that he can help to show foreigners around the hill.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Kangkang
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第三人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍李华的基本信息;
第二步,具体阐述李华擅长的东西;
第三步,描述李华能做的事情。
[亮点词汇]
①communicate with sb和某人交流
②be good at doing擅长做某事
③show sb around带某人参观
[高分句型]
①First of all, he is a Grade Nine student, who is outgoing, friendly and patient. He is active in many activities. (who引导非限制性定语从句)
②Most importantly, he has visited the beautiful Yantai Hill many times so that he can help to show foreigners around the hill.(so that引导目的状语从句)
12.例文
Dear John,
How is everything going Our school’s science and technology festival was a great success. Let me tell you something about it.
The festival took place on January 20th in the school hall. There were many kinds of activities on that day. First, the science teacher gave an interesting speech. He encouraged us to be more active and creative. Then, we had a design competition. And we shared inventions with others after the competition. Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. Also I truly believe that such activities are crucial for our growth and development. These activities not only made our school life more colorful but helped us realize the importance of science and technology.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封书信;
②时态:时态为一般过去时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍科技节活动的过程和感受,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍科技节活动的时间、地点和具体的活动;
第三步,介绍自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
Students showed talents for science and technology and enjoyed the happiness that they brought them. (that引导的定语从句)
13.例文:
Dear Rick,
How is everything going
I’m glad to hear from you. As you know since “double reduction” policy, I have had less homework and more leisure activities. I take part in the English Corner, where I practice my oral English and exchange learning methods with other students. What’s more, as a member of Environmental Volunteer Group, I help pick up and sort rubbish to keep our school clean. In addition, I take up my hobby and join the music club. I practice the guitar and make great music with friends there.
Through these activities, I not only broaden my horizon but also help others. What matters most is that I can spend more time developing my interests.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信写作;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作主题已给出,写作时注意围绕思维导图所给结构和内容进行写作,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达问候。
第二步,说明“双减政策”带来的影响,介绍自己的校园活动都有哪些。
第三步,阐述丰富多彩的校园活动带来的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①what’s more更重要的是
②pick up捡起来
③in addition另外
[高分句型]
①I take part in the English Corner, where I practice my oral English and exchange learning methods with other students.(非限制性定语从句)
②Through these activities, I not only broaden my horizon but also help others.(not only...but also...连接句子)
14.例文:
My Dream Job
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. I’m happy to talk about my dream job with you.
At my early age, I dreamt of being a doctor. That dream is still true today. And I want to be a doctor like Zhong Nanshan. The reason is that I’m interested in Chinese medicine and I want to help people in need to make our world better. In order to realize my dream, I’m going to study hard at school, especially biology, chemistry and so on. I plan to read some books about medicine so that I can learn from them. What’s more, I will make good plans and keep carrying them out. As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains”. I believe that my dream will be realized someday as long as I try my best.
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般将来时”为主;
③提示:根据所给要点完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出要演讲的话题;
第二步,从“梦想中的职业,原因以及如何实现梦想”几方面展开阐述;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk about谈论
②want to be想要成为
③in need在困境中
④try my best尽我全力
[高分句型]
①The reason is that I’m interested in Chinese medicine and I want to help people in need to make our world better.(表语从句)
②I plan to read some books about medicine so that I can learn from them.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
③I believe that my dream will be realized someday as long as I try my best.(that引导的宾语从句;as long as引导的条件状语从句)
15.例文
Notice on a Chinese Chess Competition
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please A Chinese chess competition will be held from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon in our school gym on March 15th. Everyone is welcome to join in it!
In the competition you can learn chess skills while playing with different players. Besides, it’s a great chance for you to know more about Chinese traditional culture and make more friends. If you’re really interested in it, please visit www. for more information.
The meaningful and exciting activity is waiting for you! Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,根据提示介绍象棋比赛的相关信息;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①competition比赛
②join in参加
③player参赛选手
④besides此外
⑤be interested in…对……感兴趣
⑥meaningful意味深长的
[高分句型]
①In the competition you can learn chess skills while playing with different players. (省略句)
②If you’re really interested in it, please visit www. for more information. (if引导条件状语从句)