2024年高考英语二轮复习专题-读后续写 家庭亲情类 导学案（原卷版+解析版）

2024年高考英语二轮复习专题-家庭亲情类读后续写
【家庭亲情话题】
1．家人之间互相关爱(如：节日惊喜、送礼物、问候、父母教子女生活技能或做人道理、子女帮父母解决困难、家人间共同的温攀经历等)；
2．涉及亲人间的矛盾冲突（或缺乏沟通，或疏于陪伴，或相互误会等）此类文章中重点涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。有关该话题的文章旨在帮助中学生恩考如何建立和满的家庭关系,进而领悟到要珍惜亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱和相互導重以及有效沟通非常重要。
【六个写作步骤】
第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意
读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。
第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化
线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。
第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题
分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？
第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向
考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。
第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群
设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。
第六步：升格低级词句，誊写完善成文
考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。
【家庭亲情金句】
1．[内疚]Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”
2.[ 内疚]She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.
3. [困惑]Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么), he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen.
4. [困惑] When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了).
5. [破裂]During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
6. [弥补]Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).
7. [激动]Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
8. [开心] I’m buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
9. [升华] My mom’s words of praise and advice were deeply engraved in my heart. And I promised to be a better guardian of Sara.
10. [升华]It is a reminder — not of failure, but of my mother’s courage, the courage to go ahead.
【亲情类精编10篇】
1．（2023秋·全国·高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
He was 50 years old when I was born. I didn’t know why he was home instead of Mom, but I was young and the only one of my friends who had their dad around. I considered myself very lucky.
Dad did so many things for me during my grade school years. He convinced the school bus driver to pick me up at my house instead of the usual bus stop that was six blocks away. He always had my lunch ready for me when I came home.
As I got a little older, I wanted to move away from those “childish” signs of his love. But he wasn’t going to give up. In high school and no longer able to go home for lunch, I began taking my own. Dad would get up a little earlier and make it for me. The outside of the sack might be covered with a heart inscribed with “Dad-n-Angie K. K.”. Inside there would be a napkin (餐巾纸) with that same heart or an “I love you.”
I used to hide my lunch so no one would see the bag or read the napkin, but that didn’t last long. One of my friends saw the napkin one day, grabbed it, and passed it around the lunch room. My face burned with embarrassment. To my astonishment, the next day all my friends were waiting to see the napkin. From the way they acted, I thought they all wished they had someone who showed them that kind of love. I felt so proud!
When I left home for college, I thought the messages would stop. But my friends and I were glad that his gestures continued. I began getting letters almost every Friday. The front-desk staff always knew who the letters were from. Many times the envelopes were addressed in crayon, and along with the enclosed letters were usually drawings of our cat and dog, stick figures of him and Mom.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was during this time that Dad became stricken with cancer.
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Then the time came when I decided to come home because he was growing sicker.
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【答案】
It was during this time that Dad became stricken with cancer. When the letters didn’t come on Friday, I knew that he had been sick and wasn’t able to write. He used to get up at 4:00 a.m. So he could sit in the quiet house and do his letters. If he missed his Friday delivery, the letters would usually come a day or two later. But they always came. My friends used to call him “Coolest Dad in the Universe”.
Then the time came when I decided to come home because he was growing sicker. And I knew that our time together was limited. Those were the hardest days to go through. To watch this man, who always acted so young, age passed his years. In the end he didn’t recognize who I was. Even though I knew it was due to his illness, it still hurt that he couldn’t remember my name. I was alone with him in his hospital room a couple of days before he died. We held hands and watched TV. As I was getting ready to leave, he said, “Angie, I love you.”
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。作者的父亲从作者出生开始就做全职奶爸，尽心尽力地照顾着爱着作者，同学和朋友们都因此羡慕作者，在作者大学期间，父亲重病去世，在陪伴父亲期间，作者感到了深刻的痛苦和父亲深切的爱意。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“就在这段时间里，爸爸得了癌症”可知，第一段可描写爸爸在生病之后依然坚持给作者写信。
②由第二段首句内容“后来我决定回家，因为他的病情越来越重了”可知，第二段可描写在爸爸病重时作者一直陪在他身边。
2.续写线索：得知——坚持写信——陪伴——病重——难过——表达爱意
3.词汇激活
行为类
①经历：go through/undergo/experience
②认出：recognize/identify
③认识到：know/be aware of
情绪类
①难过：hurt/pain
②艰难的：hard/rough
【点睛】[高分句型1] To watch this man, who always acted so young, age passed his years. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Even though I knew it was due to his illness, it still hurt that he couldn’t remember my name. (运用了it作形式主语和that引导的主语从句)
2．（2023·山西临汾·临汾第一中学校校联考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mother’s gift
A dandelion (蒲公英) in my dictionary always reminds me of my lunchtimes with my mother.
When I was in the third grade, I was picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly (费力地) practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose leaves were turning green. We could see yellow dandelions popping through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a little bit of gold.
I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the dandelions. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, suddenly pulling a flower up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.” My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.”
Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened.
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, reminding me of how much I loved to read stories aloud to her. “The narrator’s part is as important as the part of a princess.”
Over the next few weeks, with her constant encouragement, I learned to take pride in the role. Lunchtimes were spent reading over my lines and talking about what I would wear.
注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous.
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After the play, I took home the flower I had placed in the pocket.
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【答案】范文
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous. At first I was at a loss what to do, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion in my pocket. I knew my mom passed the flower to me, which meant to be in company with me. I calmed down as soon as possible. I knew that the narrator part was of vital significance. I performed so well that the audience stood up and burst into thunderous applause.
After the play, I took home the flower I had placed in the pocket. Mom carefully gazed at the dandelion, gently pressed it into the dictionary and grinned happily as she did. “We were perhaps the only people who would press such a sorry-looking weed.” Though decades have passed, I constantly recall our precious lunchtimes being together, grateful, because smiles on Mother’s face and her kind act foster a man like me now! And all those inspiring words like “Cease to struggle and you cease to live.” have been echoing in my mind as fresh as a daisy.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者三年级时被选中在学校的戏剧中扮演公主，但总是在舞台上表现不佳。被老师替换成了叙述者的角色，在妈妈的启发和鼓励下学会了为这个角色感到骄傲并努力背诵台词，认真做准备。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“演出当晚的后台，我感到很紧张。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何克服紧张以及完美完成表演的。
②由第二段首句内容“演出结束后，我把放在口袋里的花带回家。”可知，第二段可描写作者把花收藏起来，对母亲心存感激。
2.续写线索：感到紧张——发现蒲公英——恢复平静——完成演出——保存蒲公英——感谢母亲
3.词汇激活
行为类
①不知所措：at a loss/all at sea
②时间过去：pass/go by
③盯着：gaze at/stare at
情绪类
①紧张：nervous/anxious
②高兴：happily/delightedly
【点睛】[高分句型1] At first I was at a loss what to do, but it was at that very moment that I found a dandelion in my pocket. (运用了强调句)
[高分句型2] I knew that the narrator part was of vital significance. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
3．（2023·江苏南京·金陵中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The economic downturn caught us. We sold our ranch and moved to town, Mother had decided to open a day nursery. She had had no training, but that didn’t stand in her way. She sent away for correspondence courses in child care, did the lessons and in six months formally qualified herself for the task. It wasn’t long before she had a full enrollment and a waiting list. I accepted all this as a perfectly normal instance of Mother’s ability. But neither the nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college. In two years I would be ready for college. Time was running out, and Mother was anxious for ways to save money. It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing already — farming 80 acres in addition to holding a full-time job. A few months after we’d sold the motel, Mother arrived home with a used green typewriter.
“That’s all we can afford,” Mother said. “It’s good enough to learn on.” And from that day on, as soon as the table was cleared and the dishes were done, Mother would disappear into her sewing room to practice. The slow tap, tap, tap went on some nights until midnight. Soon I heard Mother got a job at the radio station. I was not the least bit surprised, or impressed. But she was wild with joy.
Monday, after her first day at work, I could see that the excitement was gone.
Tuesday, Dad made dinner and cleaned the kitchen. Mother stayed in her sewing room, practicing. “Is Mother all right ” I asked Dad. “She’s having a little trouble with her typing,” he said. “She needs to practice. I think she’d appreciate it if we all helped out a bit more. You might just remember that she is working primarily so you can go to college.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wednesday, I arrived home earlier and was surprised by what I saw — Mother was crying in the corner of the couch.
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Mother took another job earning half, but the evening practice sessions on the old green typewriter continued.
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【答案】One possible version:
Wednesday, I arrived home earlier and was surprised by what I saw — Mother was crying in the corner of the couch. I approached cautiously and touched her shoulder. “Mother ” I said. “What’s happened ” She took a long breath and managed a weak smile. “I’m going to lose this new job. I can’t type fast enough. I guess we all have to fail sometime,” Mother said quietly. I could sense her pain and the tension of holding back the strong emotions that were interrupted by my arrival. Suddenly, something inside me turned. I reached out and put my arms around her. She broke then. Sitting beside her on the couch, I began very slowly to understand the pressures on her.
Mother took another job earning half, but the evening practice sessions on the old green typewriter continued. I had a very different feeling now when I passed her door at night and heard her tapping away. I knew there was something more going on in there than a woman learning to type. And I knew there was something strong growing in my heart. In time we harvested the fruits of labor. I went to college. Years after, I proudly accepted a job as a newspaper reporter, and Mother had already been a journalist with our hometown paper. Now the old green typewriter sits in my office, unrepaired. It is a reminder — not of failure, but of my mother’s courage, the courage to go ahead.
【导语】本文以事件为线索展开，经济衰退影响了作者一家的生活，家里不得不卖掉农场，搬到城里，母亲从零开始学起在六个月后开了一家日托所，但是母亲的日托所和父亲的汽车旅馆的收入都无法满足作者和妹妹上大学的需求。父亲已非常忙碌无法做更多的事情，在卖掉汽车旅馆后母亲买了旧的打字机，开始勤奋地练习打字，不久后在广播电台找到一份工作，她非常兴奋。但是周一的时候，母亲上班的第一天，她的兴奋就消失了。周二，父亲向作者解释这是因为母亲在打字上遇到了问题，并提醒作者这一切都是为了作者可以上大学。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“周三，我提早到家，看到的情景让我很吃惊——妈妈在沙发的角落里哭。”和第二段首句内容中的“母亲找了另一份工作”可知，第一段可描写作者上前询问母亲发生了什么事，母亲告知作者自己丢了打字的新工作，然后作者上前安慰母亲。
②由第二段首句内容“母亲找了另一份工作，挣一半的钱，但晚上仍在那台旧的绿色打字机上练习。”可知，第二段可描写在一家人的努力下，作者成功上了大学，母亲也取得了成就，作者因母亲的这一段经历有所感悟。
2.续写线索：母亲在哭泣——作者上前询问——作者安慰母亲——母亲另找工作，继续练习打字——一家人付出有所收获——作者感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①靠近：approach/go toward/go near
②感觉到：sense/feel/discern
③理解：understand/comprehend
④收获：harvest/gather/bring in
情绪类
①痛苦：pain/agony
②勇气：courage/bravery/fearlessness
【点睛】[高分句型1] I could sense her pain and the tension of holding back the strong emotions that were interrupted by my arrival. (关系代词that引导限制性定语从句修饰先行词the strong emotions)
[高分句型2] I had a very different feeling now when I passed her door at night and heard her tapping away. (从属连词when引导时间状语从句)
4．（2022秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Perfect Gift
Colin walked through the mall with his head down. He couldn’t bear to look at another window display of great Christmas gifts he couldn’t afford. There were only a few days left until Christmas, and Colin still didn’t t have a present for his parents. He had only managed to save four dollars and seventeen cents. He counted the money in his pocket and sighed heavily.
“You look upset today, Colin. What is the matter ” Colin’s older sister Whitney asked.
Colin explained his problem to his sister.
“Why don’t you make them something ” Whitney suggested.
“Making presents is for babies,” Colin said. “Mom and Dad won’t like baby stuff.”
“Hey, that is not true. When I was your age, I wrote Mom and Dad a poem for Christmas. They loved it so much that they had it framed (给……做框),” Whitney said.
Colin knew that was true. The poem was hanging in the living room right above the fireplace. Mom and Dad often stood at the fireplace and read the poem to him. But Colin wasn’t good at writing poems, so that didn’t really help him.
“It doesn’t have to be a poem,” Whitney said, “It could be anything that makes them think of you whenever they look at it. That’s why homemade gifts are special — because they make you think of the person who made it.”
“But I don’t know how to make anything Mom and Dad would actually want!” Colin said, kicking a tiny stone across the parking lot.
Whitney opened the car door. “Yes, you do! You’re always drawing those funny little comics. Why don’ t you do a family portrait(全家福) as a comic Mom and Dad would love it.”
”Maybe," Colin said. He thought about the idea the whole way home. He even pictured how he would draw everyone.
注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: For the next two days, Colin drew one picture after another.
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Paragraph 2: After all the other presents were opened, Colin handed his gift to his parents.
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【答案】One possible version:
For the next two days, Colin drew one picture after another. He was so absorbed in his work that he even ignored his sister’s calling him from downstairs to have dinner. The waste-paper basket was filled with pictures he was not satisfied with but he wouldn’t give up. He was trying to make sure everyone was drawn perfectly. Finally, he had everyone just right, his mother wearing her usual kind smile, his father holding his favorite book, his sister looking good in her red dress, and he himself standing beside them smiling widely. He wrapped the present carefully and put it under the tree on Christmas morning.
After all the other presents were opened, Colin handed his gift to his parents. Colin held his breath as his mom carefully unwrapped it. He had expected his mum would be disappointed but the moment she saw the comic, she started to cry. “This is the best present you’ve ever given us, Colin. You must have spent a lot of time on it,” his mother said, holding the boy in her arms. “I know just where to put it,” his dad said with a smile. He took the drawing and placed it beside Whitneys poem above the fireplace. Colin stared up at the comic. It really was the perfect gift.
【导语】本文以事件发展为线索展开，讲述了Colin因没有足够的钱给父母买圣诞节礼物而感到难过，姐姐启发他帮父母做点什么作为礼物，他们想到了可以为家人画一个全家福。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“在接下来的两天里，科林画了一幅又一幅。”可知，第一段可描写Colin专注于画画，反复多次终于画出了自己满意的画，并放在圣诞树下。
②由第二段首句内容“在所有其他礼物打开后，科林把礼物递给了他的父母。”可知，第二段可描写Colin的父母收到礼物后很感动，说这是Coli送给他们的最好的礼物并决定把Colin的这幅画挂在姐姐的诗旁边。
2.续写线索：专注画画——不满意——终于画出了满意的画作——把礼物送给父母——母亲感动——最好的礼物——挂在姐姐的诗的旁边——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①呼喊：call/cry out
②放弃：give up /abandon
③看见：see/spot/catch sight of
情绪类
①对……感到满意：be satisfied with/be content with
②垂头丧气的：be disappointed/ be frustrated
【点睛】[高分句型1]He was so absorbed in his work that he even ignored his sister’s calling him from downstairs to have dinner.（结果状语从句）
[高分句型2]This is the best present you’ve ever given us（定语从句）
5．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was about ten years old, my brother and I received a wonderful gift — tennis rackets and balls. We had never had the opportunity to play tennis, so this was exciting. However, there was one problem — the small town we lived in did not have a tennis court.
One Sunday morning my brother said, “Hey, I’ve got an idea. Let’s take our tennis rackets and balls to the school and hit the balls against the school building.”
“Great idea! Let’s go,” I agreed, not realizing what a lesson we would learn before the experience was over.
When we got to the school ground, no one was around, so we began hitting our balls against the side of the two-story brick building.
“I’ll hit it the first time,” my brother suggested, “then you hit it the next time. We’ll hit it back and forth to each other.”
So we began taking turns hitting the ball, getting more confident with each stroke. Actually, we became pretty good at returning the ball and we were hitting the ball higher and faster each time.
Suddenly, the unthinkable happened — the ball got out of control and went crashing through one of the upstairs windows.
We looked around and no one was in sight — except there was an old man stting on a porch halfway down the block.
Quietly, I asked, “Now what should we do Our ball is inside the school.”
“Well,” my brother responded, “no one will know whose ball it is. And no one saw us, except that old man down there. And he probably can’t see this far.”
“He probably doesn’t know who we are anyway,” I added.
“Let’s go home,” my brother suggested.
“Okay,” I agreed. “Should we tell Mom and Dad ”
“I don’t know,” my brother answered.
Then we picked up the rest of our balls and headed for home, keeping silent all the way with our heads drooping.
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“What happened ” asked my mother, seeing us in low spirits.
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The following morning my brother and I went to the headmaster’s office.
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【答案】
“What happened ” asked my mother, seeing us in low spirits. “Well,” my brother slowly began, “we hit the tennis ball too hard and too high and it went right through the school window”. “Oh, my goodness!” my mother exclaimed. After a short pause, her voice softened when she asked us if we had reported this to the school. Lips bitten, we shook our heads. “It will cost all of our pocket money”, I muttered. “But there is always something more important than money”, she said soothingly, patting me on the shoulder. Slowly lifting my head, I encountered my mother’s encouraging eyes and a decision was made.
The following morning my brother and I went to the headmaster’s office. Nervous and frightened, we inched into the office. There sat our stern-looking headmaster. “We have something to confess...”, we spilled our story with a hint of fear in our voices. He looked very somber and we were sure that the news was bad. Then he smiled, “I am proud of you kids for having the courage to tell me what happened”. He could see our relief as he continued, “Many windows had been broken, but you were the first ones to admit that you were responsible. For that, you don’t have to pay for the broken window, because honesty comes before anything else”.
【导语】本篇书面表达以人物为线索，讲述了作者十岁时，和哥哥收到了一份网球和网球拍的礼物。两个人都很兴奋，但镇上没有网球场。后来两兄弟决定把网球带到学校，轮流对着学校建筑打球。慢慢地，两兄弟打得越来越好，也越来越有信心。就在这时，他们不小心把学校的窗户打碎了，而周围只有一个老人。两兄弟觉得老人也不一定看见了，于是装作什么也没发生的样子回家了。
【详解】1.段落续写
由第一段首句内容““发生了什么事？”看到我们情绪低落，母亲问道。”可知，第一段可描写两兄弟向母亲坦白事情的经过。
由第二段首句内容“第二天早上，我和哥哥去了校长办公室。”可知，第二段可描写两兄弟去校长办公室道歉的经过。
2.续写线索：讲述事情经过——鼓励道歉——去校长办公室——承认错误——原谅
3.词汇激活
行为类
惊呼、突然呼叫：exclaim/shout suddenly
小声嘀咕：mutter/chunter
抬头：lift one’s head / raise one’s head
情绪类
紧张的：nervous/anxious
害怕的、恐惧的：frightened/afraid
【点睛】【高分句型1】After a short pause, her voice softened when she asked us if we had reported this to the school.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句和if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】For that, you don’t have to pay for the broken window, because honesty comes before anything else.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
6．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Hurry up you guys, or you’ll be late for school!” called Mom. We dashed downstairs and had a quick breakfast. I was eating my favorite — very sweet cereal, and Sara was having eggs. When I rose to have my bowl washed, Mom whispered, “You know you need to be cautious today when you’re walking Sara to school. It’s your job to assure me she gets there all right.” Then she cast me a very serious look. I thought to myself, wondering why Mom was making such a big deal out of this. I was Sara’s first day of kindergarten, but I could manage it. It wish Mom wouldn’t treat me like such a baby.
“Goodbye, Mom!” Sara yelled. She ran out the door, and I went behind her.
“Be careful!” my mom yelled.
“I will!” I said back and ran outside. Sara was skipping down the front walkway to the sidewalk.
I grabbed Sara’s hand. “Are you eager and excited for your first day of school ” I asked, trying to sound like a grown-up. Sara smiled and nodded her head yes. Meanwhile, my mom was staring at us through the window. “When will she stop treating me like a little kid ” I thought. “I’ll show you the way.” I said, I felt proud to be the elder sister. We walked past beautiful gardens and big, leafy trees. Suddenly, I heard a growl and saw a dog walking towards us. He was big and fierce looking with long sharp teeth. “GRRR!!!” the dog growled. I didn’t see its owner or anyone who could help us. My hand became sweaty and Sara stopped walking. “I’m scared, Julie,” she said. I didn’t want her to be scared. I wanted to seem brave. “Everything will be okay,” I said.
“GRRR!!!” The dog stepped closer and we could see it was the size of a small horse — with red eyes and sharp teeth.
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2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was trying to make my voice sound calm.
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I told Mom what had happened.
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【答案】One possible version
I was trying to make my voice sound calm. Planting my feet resolutely on the ground, I said to Sara: “Don’t be afraid!” while holding her hand tight. The dog edged closer with the menacing “GRRR!”. “Run!” I exclaimed, we sprinting to the kindergarten. Just as the dog was overtaking us, we threw ourselves inside. It was really close! We exchanged a happy smile. Seeing Sara stepping into the classroom, I turned for home, wanting desperately to narrate the thrilling episode to Mom.
I told mom what had happened. There followed no response. Then I saw Mom’s tears. “I am so proud of you! You did what you had promised!” Mom said, holding me in a tight embrace, after which Mom looked into my eyes. She gave me some advice on tackling fierce dogs: “Next time you are cornered by such a dog, pretend to pick up a stone. It will be frightened away.” My mom’s words of praise and advice were deeply engraved in my heart. And I promised to be a better guardian of Sara.
【导语】本文以故事的发展为线索展开，讲述了作者和妹妹Sara吃完早饭以后，作者送妹妹去上幼儿园，这是她第一天去上学，很兴奋地走在前面，这时候出来一只大狗，没有主人在身边，Sara很害怕，作者看似勇敢地告诉妹妹，一切都会没事的，那只大狗呲着牙离作者和Sara更近了。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我试图让自己的声音听起来平静。”可知，第一段可描写作者是如何帮助Sara的，结合第二段的提示语可知，该段应描述到作者成功的保护了Sara，把妹妹送进了幼儿园。
②由第二段首句内容“我把发生的事情告诉妈妈”可知，第二段可描写作者将事情告诉妈妈后，妈妈的反应如何？对作者处理这种危险情况做出什么样的评价。
2.续写线索：保持冷静——一起冲进幼儿园——告诉妈妈发生的事情——妈妈表扬作者——提供相应的建议——作者的感受
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓住：hold/seize/grab
②讲述：narrate/tell about
③处理：tackle/address/deal with/cope with
情绪类
①害怕的：afraid/terrified/scared/frightened
②自豪：be proud of/take pride in
【点睛】[高分句型1]. Planting my feet resolutely on the ground, I said to Sara: “Don’t be afraid!” while holding her hand tight. (运用了现在分词短语作状语以及状语从句的省略)
[高分句型2]. You did what you had promised! (运用了what引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型3]. Next time you are cornered by such a dog, pretend to pick up a stone. (运用了Next time引导的时间状语从句)
7．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
When I was about ten years old, my brother and I received a wonderful gift—tennis rackets(网球拍)and balls, which was exciting, for we had never played tennis. However, there was no tennis court in the small town where we lived. One Saturday morning my brother excitedly suggested playing tennis against the school building. I agreed immediately, not realizing what a lesson we would learn.
When we reached the school ground, no one was around. We began hitting our balls against the school building. We took turns hitting the ball back and forth, soon becoming pretty good at it and hitting higher and faster. Suddenly, something unthinkable happened—the ball got out of control and went crashing through one of the upstairs windows. We looked around and no one was in sight except an old man sitting on a porch halfway down the block.
Quietly, I asked my brother what to do. He looked around again. After confirming no one saw us, except that old man but he probably didn’t know who we were anyway, he suggested leaving secretly. “But should we tell Dad and Mum ” I asked again. A flash of worry came across his face. He was confused too. Carefully considering whether we should tell what had happened, we finally decided to pick up the rest of our balls and headed for home quietly.
Our mother was always in tune with her children. “What happened ” She asked as soon as she saw us. Looking into her eagle eyes, we had to admit what we had done. Hearing that, my mother screamed, “Oh, my goodness!” but soon calmly asked us to tell it to Dad. The moment Dad walked in the house, we both hurried to him and poured out our story. His response was typical. “Well, next Monday, I will call the school doorkeeper and see what we need to do. You will probably have to pay for the window.” We had two terribly worrying days to wait until our Dad got home from work on Monday.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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Dad stepped into the house, looking quite tired and serious.
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He could see our relief as he continued.
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【答案】
Dad stepped into the house, looking quite tired and serious. We waited carefully for Dad’s decision. Dad pulled us to his side and said,“I have already called the school doorkeeper. He said you should go to the schoolmaster and admit your mistake.” Then, Dad took us to see the schoolmaster. We deeply apologized for our actions and promised to pay for the window. Smiling, he said he had known it from the doorkeeper. He said, “You didn’t do it intentionally, so there’s no need to worry too much.”
He could see our relief as he continued. He said that the school budget allowed for repairing windows, so we didn’t have to pay. He said with appreciation, “Everyone can do something wrong. As long as you can admit your mistakes and bravely take responsibility, you are honest and good children. I am proud of you.” We are also proud, realizing that honesty and responsibility are good things. We were fortunate to have told our mother and made the right choice.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。作者和哥哥两人在操场练习网球时，不小心打碎了楼上的玻璃，仓皇逃回家后，作者与哥哥讨论是否要告诉爸爸妈妈所发生的事情。当他们告知真相后，父母帮助他们向学校承认错误，并得到原谅的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“爸爸走进屋子，看上去很累，很严肃。”可知，第一段可描写爸爸带他们两个去见校长。
②由第二段首句内容“他继续说，看得出我们如释重负。”可知，第二段可描写校长原谅了他们两个，并为他们的诚实点赞。
2.续写线索：带去见校长——道歉——原谅——赞扬——自豪——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①带领：take/lead
②道歉：apologize/say sorry
③意识到：realize/be aware
情绪类
①诚实的：honest/truthful
②赞赏地：with appreciation/appreciatively
【点睛】[高分句型1] Smiling, he said he had known it from the doorkeeper. (由非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] As long as you can admit your mistakes and bravely take responsibility, you are honest and good children. I am proud of you. (由as long as引导条件状语从句)
8．（2022秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Standing outside the cave entrance, Grandfather admired the green-carpeted hills, but Lin hated the cave. He had come here today only because of Grandfather.
Grandfather preferred to use guano, the waste matter of bats, to fertilize (施肥) his crops. But he was too weak to do the whole job. He could gather the guano and bring it out of the cave in the basket, but he needed Lin to carry it home in the wooden cart.
Grandfather took a shovel (铲子) and flashlight from the cart. “Change your mind and come inside with me ” he asked Lin. “It won’t happen again, Lin,” Grandfather promised. “Last time it was my mistake. We shouldn’t have waited until nearly dusk (黄昏) to go inside. I know that the bats fly out of the cave at dusk.” That was exactly what had happened on the Terrible Day of the Bats. As Lin had stood at the cave entrance, a crowd of black bats had erupted from it. Lin had been terrified.
“Bats hurt no one,” Grandfather had said. “Besides, you scared them as much as they did you.”
But nothing could make Lin forget the horror he had felt in that black cloud of bats. “I can’t go in there,” he told Grandfather now.
“OK,” Grandfather said. As he started into the cave, he called over his shoulder, “I’ll be out in no time.” Lin parked the cart and glanced at the shovel and flashlight inside it. His shovel and flashlight. He had used them before. Now they only reminded him of his fear.
Lin turned his back on the cart and walked down to the river. Grandfather would call when he was finished. Until then, Lin would put as much distance as possible between himself and the cave.
Lin watched two little birds splashing about at the edge of the river. He enjoyed the peaceful view over the vast river surface. Then Lin realized that Grandfather’s “no time” had turned into a long time.
Lin hurried up the hill toward the cave. The cart was still there. Grandfather was still inside. Something had gone wrong.
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Lin looked around but found no one he could turn to for help.
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In the dark cave, Lin gathered his courage and yelled again, “Grandfather!”
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【答案】
Lin looked around but found no one he could turn to for help. Panic set in as he realized that something terrible might have happened to Grandfather. He called out his name, but there was no response. Lin’s mind raced with fear and worry. He knew he had to go into the cave, but the thought of facing his fear was almost paralyzing. After taking a few deep breaths, he summoned all his courage and stepped towards the entrance.
In the dark cave, Lin gathered his courage and yelled again, “Grandfather!” This time, the response was louder. Lin followed the sound until he reached a narrow passage. His flashlight beam revealed that Grandfather was trapped between two large rocks. Lin’s heart sank as he realized the situation was more serious than he had thought. Grandfather’s leg was pinned, and he was in obvious pain. Lin knew that he had to act fast to free him. Finally, Lin heard the sound of approaching footsteps. The rescue team had arrived. They quickly assessed the situation and worked to free Grandfather.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了林和爷爷的故事，林陪爷爷去运鸟粪，但是林不敢进蝙蝠洞，所以爷爷只能自己进蝙蝠洞。但是，爷爷进去很久都没有出来，林只有鼓起勇气进入洞中救出了爷爷。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“林环顾四周，却找不到可以求助的人。”以及第二段首句内容“在黑暗的山洞里，林鼓足勇气，又喊了一声：“爷爷!””可知，第一段可描写林找不到人帮忙，只有自己鼓起勇气进入蝙蝠洞。
②由第二段首句内容“在黑暗的山洞里，林鼓足勇气，又喊了一声：“爷爷!””可知，第二段可描写林进入蝙蝠洞，发现了爷爷，并救出了爷爷。
2.续写线索：林陪爷爷来到蝙蝠洞装一些鸟粪——林害怕进入蝙蝠洞，爷爷只有自己进入蝙蝠洞——很长时间后，林突然发现爷爷还没有出来——林意识到出了问题，但是他找不到人帮忙，只有鼓起勇气进入蝙蝠洞——林在洞里发现了受伤的爷爷，想办法救出爷爷
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抓到：summon courage/ muster up courage
②到达：reach/get to/arrive at
③陷入：be trapped /be stuck /be caught
情绪类
①害怕：fear/fright
②担忧：worry/anxiety
【点睛】【高分句型1】He knew he had to go into the cave, but the thought of facing his fear was almost paralyzing.（运用了省略that的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Lin’s heart sank as he realized the situation was more serious than he had thought.（运用了as引导的状语从句和省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2021秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jim slumped (倚,靠) on the sofa. Mother’s Day was coming up, and he didn’t have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money ” he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the sofa. He noticed a large advertisement (广告) on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring (赞助) a contest. “Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (疯狂购物) for her,” said the ad.
“This is perfect!” thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
“My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters (怪兽). And she gives me the best hug.”
Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品), “Mom will love having a shopping spree,” he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother’s day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything about the contest. “What am I going to do now ” he wondered. He didn’t have a present, and he didn’t have a shopping spree, and he still didn’t have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and thought so hard.
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Suddenly he had an idea.
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.
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【答案】
Suddenly he had an idea. He fumbled in his drawers and fortunately found a piece of delicate and fragrant paper. He sat down straight on his chair, and began to write a letter in his best handwriting as a Mother’s Day present. “Dear mom, I’m writing this to tell you that you are the best mother in the world…” With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile.
The next morning Eric handed his letter to his mom. Finishing reading the letter, his mom swept him into her arms with her eyes wet as if she wanted to squeeze the breath out of him. “Thank you, my dear!” She sniffed, hugging Eric more tightly. Leaning against his mother’s shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift. After hearing the reason, his mom gently touched his head, saying, “To me, your letter is better than a thousand shopping sprees.” Hugging each other, they felt blissful as if they were in possession of everything. Indeed, love should be made known to loved ones.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了小男孩Eric不知道怎么才能不花钱给妈妈送母亲节礼物，这时，他在报纸上看到一则广告——告诉我们你妈妈的特别之处，为她赢得一个购物狂欢。Eric立刻行动，写下妈妈的特别之处，然后邮寄出去，Eric焦急地等着结果。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“突然他有了一个主意。”和第二段提示句可知，第一段可描写Eric给他母亲写了一封信作为母亲节的礼物，要详细描写信件的内容。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上Eric把信给了他的妈妈。”可知，第二段可描写妈妈读完信件后的反应以及Eric解释了写信的原因。
2.续写线索：有了主意——写信——送信——感动——拥抱
3.词汇激活
行为类：
①开始做某事：begin to do sth./start to do sth./set about doing sth.
②完成：finish/complete/accomplish
③解释：explain/account for/make clear
情绪类：
①微笑：curve into a smile/beam on
②幸福的：blissful/happy
【点睛】[高分句型1] With a sincere heart, Eric finished the letter and sealed it in an envelope, his lips curving into a smile.(运用独立主格结构)
[高分句型2] Leaning against his mother's shoulder, Eric slowly explained why he chose to write a letter as a gift.(现在分词短语作状语及why引导的宾语从句)
10．（2023·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The early April wind was colder than I expected as I walked anxiously toward the Holiday Inn at Union Square in San Francisco. With every step I took, I heard my mother’s words, “Johnny, I am all packed and looking forward to seeing you!”
After five years of trying to get a visa to the United States to visit me, she finally succeeded on the third attempt. The long and boring process, while at times heartbreaking, could not prevent my mom from her desire to make the trip. Despite being only five feet, three inches tall, Mom had always been the pillar (支柱) of our family. Her solution to the visa challenge proved once again that no barrier was a match for Mom’s strong determination and love for her family — in this case, me!
Although excited, I was extremely nervous. Mom and I had not seen each other in more than eight years, since I left Malaysia at eighteen to attend college in the U.S. Due to a fault, my application for permanent residency was put on hold. In spite of being gainfully employed and a homeowner, I could not leave the country until my paperwork was resolved.
In the beginning, our only source of communication was through letters. Later, it became lengthy phone conversations. Much had happened during the eight years while I was absent.
During the months before her U.S. trip, I tried to help my mom prepare what she needed to pack. I planned for her to stay with me for four months, during which time we would be traveling throughout the United States. Her reply was always, “Don’t worry about me. I know what I need. How about you What would you like me to bring you from Malaysia ” My answer never changed. All I wanted was a couple of bags of authentic curry and chili (辣椒) powder from our hometown of Melaka, as I was running low on these treasured spices.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
When the day finally came, I waited patiently for her in front of the hotel.
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It was late afternoon by the time we reached my house in Baton Rouge.
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【答案】
When the day finally came, I waited patiently for her in front of the hotel. I was so excited that I could hardly contain myself. When I saw her walking towards me, I ran to her and hugged her tightly. She was wearing a bright yellow dress and a big smile on her face. We both had tears in our eyes as we embraced each other.
It was late afternoon by the time we reached my house in Baton Rouge. After settling in, we went to the kitchen to prepare dinner. I was excited to see that mom had brought the curry and chili powder from Malaysia. We cooked a delicious Malaysian meal together, and it was the best meal I had ever tasted. We talked and laughed until late into the night, catching up on all the years we had been apart. It was a moment I will never forget.
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。约翰尼18岁时离开马来西亚去美国上大学后就一直呆在美国，他的母亲近五年来一直试图获得美国签证，好去看他，但直到现在才终于成功。约翰尼即将和分离八年的母亲见面，他焦急地赶往旧金山联合广场的假日酒店，他将在那里等待他的母亲。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“那天终于来了，我在旅馆门口耐心地等着她。”可知，第一段可描写母子见面后的感人场面。
②由第二段首句内容“当我们到达我在巴吞鲁日的家时，已经是傍晚了。”可知，第二段可描写回到家后一起准备晚饭，聊天到深夜。
2.续写线索：母子相拥——热泪盈眶——准备晚饭——深夜长谈
3.词汇激活
行为类
①来到：come/arrive/approach
②抑制，克制：contain/restrain/hold back
③拥抱：hug/embrace
情绪类
①耐心地：patiently/with patience
②微笑：smile/beam
【点睛】[高分句型1] When the day finally came, I waited patiently for her in front of the hotel.(运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] I was so excited that I could hardly contain myself.(运用了that引导结果状语从句)
[高分句型3] It was a moment I will never forget.(运用了省略关系代词that的定语从句)2024年高考英语二轮复习专题-家庭亲情类读后续写
【家庭亲情话题】
1.家人之间互相关爱类(如：节日惊喜、送礼物、问候、父母教子女生活技能或做人道理、子女帮父母解决困难、家人间共同的温攀经历等)；
2.家人之间冲突化解类（或缺乏沟通，或疏于陪伴，或相互误会等）此类文章中重点涉及个人的喜、怒、哀、乐、害怕、紧张、孤单、骄傲、喜悦等细节描写。有关该话题的文章旨在帮助中学生恩考如何建立和满的家庭关系,进而领悟到要珍惜亲情，意识到家庭和睦、家人间的关爱和相互導重以及有效沟通非常重要。
【六个写作步骤】
第一步：提炼六个要素，获取主旨大意
读后续写的阅读文本基本上都是记叙文，所以要提炼出六个基本要素：who, where, when, what, why和how。考生在阅读文本过程中只有把握好这六个要素，才能总结出文章大意和故事情节，进而推断出作者的写作意图，轻松获取故事的主旨大意。
第二步：理清故事脉络，把握情感变化
线索是叙事性作品中贯穿整个故事的脉络，所有的情节均围绕文本主要线索展开。记叙文一般有两条故事发展线索：情节(plots)线索和情感(emotions)线索。考生可以利用图表法或思维导图法理清故事的发展脉络，把握作者的情感变化。这样，考生在续写时才可以更好地遵循原文的思路、风格和语言。
第三步：分析段落首句，精心设计问题
分析续写后所给的两个段首句对提高所写内容和原文的融洽度至关重要。考生可以先分析一下所给的两个段首句之间的逻辑关系是顺承关系、转折关系还是因果关系等。然后，根据自己的判断设计小问题：根据段首句得知什么？续写开始写什么？接下来写什么？续写第一段的段尾如何衔接第二段的开头？续写第二段的段尾如何才能照应故事的主旨大意？
第四步：设计结尾情节，拔高价值取向
考生必须紧紧围绕故事的发展脉络，展开合理的想象，巧妙地设计所续写的两段的故事结尾情节。设计结尾情节时，考生可以借助前文的故事脉络设计一些具体的问题。还要注意设计好续写的第二段的结尾，让结尾处的情感得到升华或拔高，把故事所折射出的人生观、价值观充分体现出来。
第五步：列出关键词汇，续写连贯句群
设计好要续写的两段的情节后，考生可以先在草稿纸上把原文出现的主要人物、发生的主要事件和描写人物或事件的情感词罗列出来，并按事件的发生顺序逐一理清。最后，考生用这些关键词汇重构句子，写出连贯一致的句群。
第六步：升格低级词句，誊写完善成文
考生在写好两段的内容后，可以根据语法知识把一些低级的词汇或句式进行润色升格。升格低级词句的目的是让续写的内容更加符合原文的语言风格，与原文在衔接上更加融洽。完成这一步后，考生要迅速把写好的两段英文以清晰、规范、美观、流畅的书写誊写在答题纸上。
【家庭亲情金句】
1．[内疚]Overwhelmed by guilt（充满内疚）, Asad quickly picked up the wallet and strode to Fahad, “I found it over there, and I think it is yours. ”
2.[ 内疚]She now could do nothing but feel the regret burning in her heart（感觉内疚在她心里燃烧）.
3. [困惑]Not knowing what to do（不知道该做什么), he walked out of the classroom and sat on a bench in front of the canteen.
4. [困惑] When Ariana gave the lunch to Ashley, she saw tears well up in Ashley’s eyes（眼泪都流出来了).
5. [破裂]During the trip, we intentionally avoided each other（有意避开彼此). However, I couldn’t help glancing at her when she turned back and I sensed the same.
6. [弥补]Therefore, we both learned to be tolerant and brave enough to always forgive（足够忍耐和勇敢去原谅).
7. [激动]Excitement crept over his heart and made him grin from ear to ear.
8. [开心] I’m buzzing for the dinner. Imagine, we’re going to drink freely at the airport.
9. [升华] My mom’s words of praise and advice were deeply engraved in my heart. And I promised to be a better guardian of Sara.
10. [升华]It is a reminder — not of failure, but of my mother’s courage, the courage to go ahead.
【亲情类精编10篇】
1．（2023秋·全国·高三校联考开学考试）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
He was 50 years old when I was born. I didn’t know why he was home instead of Mom, but I was young and the only one of my friends who had their dad around. I considered myself very lucky.
Dad did so many things for me during my grade school years. He convinced the school bus driver to pick me up at my house instead of the usual bus stop that was six blocks away. He always had my lunch ready for me when I came home.
As I got a little older, I wanted to move away from those “childish” signs of his love. But he wasn’t going to give up. In high school and no longer able to go home for lunch, I began taking my own. Dad would get up a little earlier and make it for me. The outside of the sack might be covered with a heart inscribed with “Dad-n-Angie K. K.”. Inside there would be a napkin (餐巾纸) with that same heart or an “I love you.”
I used to hide my lunch so no one would see the bag or read the napkin, but that didn’t last long. One of my friends saw the napkin one day, grabbed it, and passed it around the lunch room. My face burned with embarrassment. To my astonishment, the next day all my friends were waiting to see the napkin. From the way they acted, I thought they all wished they had someone who showed them that kind of love. I felt so proud!
When I left home for college, I thought the messages would stop. But my friends and I were glad that his gestures continued. I began getting letters almost every Friday. The front-desk staff always knew who the letters were from. Many times the envelopes were addressed in crayon, and along with the enclosed letters were usually drawings of our cat and dog, stick figures of him and Mom.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
It was during this time that Dad became stricken with cancer.
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Then the time came when I decided to come home because he was growing sicker.
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2．（2023·山西临汾·临汾第一中学校校联考三模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mother’s gift
A dandelion (蒲公英) in my dictionary always reminds me of my lunchtimes with my mother.
When I was in the third grade, I was picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly (费力地) practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained that she had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard.
It was a lovely spring day and the rose leaves were turning green. We could see yellow dandelions popping through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with a little bit of gold.
I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the dandelions. “I think I’m going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, suddenly pulling a flower up by its roots. “From now on, we’ll have only roses in this garden.”
“But I like dandelions,” I protested. “All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.” My mother looked at me seriously. “Yes, every flower gives pleasure in its own way, doesn’t it ” she asked thoughtfully. I nodded, pleased that I had won her over. “And that is true of people too,” she added. “Not everyone can be a princess, but there is no shame in that.”
Relieved that she had guessed my pain, I started to cry as I told her what had happened.
“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” she said, reminding me of how much I loved to read stories aloud to her. “The narrator’s part is as important as the part of a princess.”
Over the next few weeks, with her constant encouragement, I learned to take pride in the role. Lunchtimes were spent reading over my lines and talking about what I would wear.
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1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Backstage on the night of the performance, I felt nervous.
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After the play, I took home the flower I had placed in the pocket.
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3．（2023·江苏南京·金陵中学校考模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The economic downturn caught us. We sold our ranch and moved to town, Mother had decided to open a day nursery. She had had no training, but that didn’t stand in her way. She sent away for correspondence courses in child care, did the lessons and in six months formally qualified herself for the task. It wasn’t long before she had a full enrollment and a waiting list. I accepted all this as a perfectly normal instance of Mother’s ability. But neither the nursery nor the motel my parents bought later had provided enough income to send my sister and me to college. In two years I would be ready for college. Time was running out, and Mother was anxious for ways to save money. It was clear that Dad could do no more than he was doing already — farming 80 acres in addition to holding a full-time job. A few months after we’d sold the motel, Mother arrived home with a used green typewriter.
“That’s all we can afford,” Mother said. “It’s good enough to learn on.” And from that day on, as soon as the table was cleared and the dishes were done, Mother would disappear into her sewing room to practice. The slow tap, tap, tap went on some nights until midnight. Soon I heard Mother got a job at the radio station. I was not the least bit surprised, or impressed. But she was wild with joy.
Monday, after her first day at work, I could see that the excitement was gone.
Tuesday, Dad made dinner and cleaned the kitchen. Mother stayed in her sewing room, practicing. “Is Mother all right ” I asked Dad. “She’s having a little trouble with her typing,” he said. “She needs to practice. I think she’d appreciate it if we all helped out a bit more. You might just remember that she is working primarily so you can go to college.”
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Wednesday, I arrived home earlier and was surprised by what I saw — Mother was crying in the corner of the couch.
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Mother took another job earning half, but the evening practice sessions on the old green typewriter continued.
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4．（2022秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Perfect Gift
Colin walked through the mall with his head down. He couldn’t bear to look at another window display of great Christmas gifts he couldn’t afford. There were only a few days left until Christmas, and Colin still didn’t t have a present for his parents. He had only managed to save four dollars and seventeen cents. He counted the money in his pocket and sighed heavily.
“You look upset today, Colin. What is the matter ” Colin’s older sister Whitney asked.
Colin explained his problem to his sister.
“Why don’t you make them something ” Whitney suggested.
“Making presents is for babies,” Colin said. “Mom and Dad won’t like baby stuff.”
“Hey, that is not true. When I was your age, I wrote Mom and Dad a poem for Christmas. They loved it so much that they had it framed (给……做框),” Whitney said.
Colin knew that was true. The poem was hanging in the living room right above the fireplace. Mom and Dad often stood at the fireplace and read the poem to him. But Colin wasn’t good at writing poems, so that didn’t really help him.
“It doesn’t have to be a poem,” Whitney said, “It could be anything that makes them think of you whenever they look at it. That’s why homemade gifts are special — because they make you think of the person who made it.”
“But I don’t know how to make anything Mom and Dad would actually want!” Colin said, kicking a tiny stone across the parking lot.
Whitney opened the car door. “Yes, you do! You’re always drawing those funny little comics. Why don’ t you do a family portrait(全家福) as a comic Mom and Dad would love it.”
”Maybe," Colin said. He thought about the idea the whole way home. He even pictured how he would draw everyone.
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2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Paragraph 1: For the next two days, Colin drew one picture after another.
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Paragraph 2: After all the other presents were opened, Colin handed his gift to his parents.
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5．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was about ten years old, my brother and I received a wonderful gift — tennis rackets and balls. We had never had the opportunity to play tennis, so this was exciting. However, there was one problem — the small town we lived in did not have a tennis court.
One Sunday morning my brother said, “Hey, I’ve got an idea. Let’s take our tennis rackets and balls to the school and hit the balls against the school building.”
“Great idea! Let’s go,” I agreed, not realizing what a lesson we would learn before the experience was over.
When we got to the school ground, no one was around, so we began hitting our balls against the side of the two-story brick building.
“I’ll hit it the first time,” my brother suggested, “then you hit it the next time. We’ll hit it back and forth to each other.”
So we began taking turns hitting the ball, getting more confident with each stroke. Actually, we became pretty good at returning the ball and we were hitting the ball higher and faster each time.
Suddenly, the unthinkable happened — the ball got out of control and went crashing through one of the upstairs windows.
We looked around and no one was in sight — except there was an old man sitting on a porch halfway down the block.
Quietly, I asked, “Now what should we do Our ball is inside the school.”
“Well,” my brother responded, “no one will know whose ball it is. And no one saw us, except that old man down there. And he probably can’t see this far.”
“He probably doesn’t know who we are anyway,” I added.
“Let’s go home,” my brother suggested.
“Okay,” I agreed. “Should we tell Mom and Dad ”
“I don’t know,” my brother answered.
Then we picked up the rest of our balls and headed for home, keeping silent all the way with our heads drooping.
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“What happened ” asked my mother, seeing us in low spirits.
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The following morning my brother and I went to the headmaster’s office.
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6．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料。根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
“Hurry up you guys, or you’ll be late for school!” called Mom. We dashed downstairs and had a quick breakfast. I was eating my favorite — very sweet cereal, and Sara was having eggs. When I rose to have my bowl washed, Mom whispered, “You know you need to be cautious today when you’re walking Sara to school. It’s your job to assure me she gets there all right.” Then she cast me a very serious look. I thought to myself, wondering why Mom was making such a big deal out of this. I was Sara’s first day of kindergarten, but I could manage it. It wish Mom wouldn’t treat me like such a baby.
“Goodbye, Mom!” Sara yelled. She ran out the door, and I went behind her.
“Be careful!” my mom yelled.
“I will!” I said back and ran outside. Sara was skipping down the front walkway to the sidewalk.
I grabbed Sara’s hand. “Are you eager and excited for your first day of school ” I asked, trying to sound like a grown-up. Sara smiled and nodded her head yes. Meanwhile, my mom was staring at us through the window. “When will she stop treating me like a little kid ” I thought. “I’ll show you the way.” I said, I felt proud to be the elder sister. We walked past beautiful gardens and big, leafy trees. Suddenly, I heard a growl and saw a dog walking towards us. He was big and fierce looking with long sharp teeth. “GRRR!!!” the dog growled. I didn’t see its owner or anyone who could help us. My hand became sweaty and Sara stopped walking. “I’m scared, Julie,” she said. I didn’t want her to be scared. I wanted to seem brave. “Everything will be okay,” I said.
“GRRR!!!” The dog stepped closer and we could see it was the size of a small horse — with red eyes and sharp teeth.
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1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I was trying to make my voice sound calm.
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I told Mom what had happened.
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7．（2023·全国·高三假期作业）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之成为一篇完整的短文。
When I was about ten years old, my brother and I received a wonderful gift—tennis rackets(网球拍)and balls, which was exciting, for we had never played tennis. However, there was no tennis court in the small town where we lived. One Saturday morning my brother excitedly suggested playing tennis against the school building. I agreed immediately, not realizing what a lesson we would learn.
When we reached the school ground, no one was around. We began hitting our balls against the school building. We took turns hitting the ball back and forth, soon becoming pretty good at it and hitting higher and faster. Suddenly, something unthinkable happened—the ball got out of control and went crashing through one of the upstairs windows. We looked around and no one was in sight except an old man sitting on a porch halfway down the block.
Quietly, I asked my brother what to do. He looked around again. After confirming no one saw us, except that old man but he probably didn’t know who we were anyway, he suggested leaving secretly. “But should we tell Dad and Mum ” I asked again. A flash of worry came across his face. He was confused too. Carefully considering whether we should tell what had happened, we finally decided to pick up the rest of our balls and headed for home quietly.
Our mother was always in tune with her children. “What happened ” She asked as soon as she saw us. Looking into her eagle eyes, we had to admit what we had done. Hearing that, my mother screamed, “Oh, my goodness!” but soon calmly asked us to tell it to Dad. The moment Dad walked in the house, we both hurried to him and poured out our story. His response was typical. “Well, next Monday, I will call the school doorkeeper and see what we need to do. You will probably have to pay for the window.” We had two terribly worrying days to wait until our Dad got home from work on Monday.
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1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
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Dad stepped into the house, looking quite tired and serious.
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Paragraph 2:
He could see our relief as he continued.
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8．（2022秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Standing outside the cave entrance, Grandfather admired the green-carpeted hills, but Lin hated the cave. He had come here today only because of Grandfather.
Grandfather preferred to use guano, the waste matter of bats, to fertilize (施肥) his crops. But he was too weak to do the whole job. He could gather the guano and bring it out of the cave in the basket, but he needed Lin to carry it home in the wooden cart.
Grandfather took a shovel (铲子) and flashlight from the cart. “Change your mind and come inside with me ” he asked Lin. “It won’t happen again, Lin,” Grandfather promised. “Last time it was my mistake. We shouldn’t have waited until nearly dusk (黄昏) to go inside. I know that the bats fly out of the cave at dusk.” That was exactly what had happened on the Terrible Day of the Bats. As Lin had stood at the cave entrance, a crowd of black bats had erupted from it. Lin had been terrified.
“Bats hurt no one,” Grandfather had said. “Besides, you scared them as much as they did you.”
But nothing could make Lin forget the horror he had felt in that black cloud of bats. “I can’t go in there,” he told Grandfather now.
“OK,” Grandfather said. As he started into the cave, he called over his shoulder, “I’ll be out in no time.” Lin parked the cart and glanced at the shovel and flashlight inside it. His shovel and flashlight. He had used them before. Now they only reminded him of his fear.
Lin turned his back on the cart and walked down to the river. Grandfather would call when he was finished. Until then, Lin would put as much distance as possible between himself and the cave.
Lin watched two little birds splashing about at the edge of the river. He enjoyed the peaceful view over the vast river surface. Then Lin realized that Grandfather’s “no time” had turned into a long time.
Lin hurried up the hill toward the cave. The cart was still there. Grandfather was still inside. Something had gone wrong.
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Lin looked around but found no one he could turn to for help.
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In the dark cave, Lin gathered his courage and yelled again, “Grandfather!”
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9．（2021秋·全国·高三专题练习）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jim slumped (倚,靠) on the sofa. Mother’s Day was coming up, and he didn’t have a present. “How can I buy a present without any money ” he thought.
Jim picked up the newspaper that was lying on the sofa. He noticed a large advertisement (广告) on the front page. The local department store was sponsoring (赞助) a contest. “Tell us why your mom is special and win a shopping spree (疯狂购物) for her,” said the ad.
“This is perfect!” thought Jim. He ran to his room with the newspaper. Taking a pencil and a blank piece of paper from his desk, he started to write.
“My mom is the best mother in the world. She always makes a lunch for me to take to school, and she never forgets my dessert. She reads as many books to me before bed as I want. She always remembers to check under the bed for monsters (怪兽). And she gives me the best hug.”
Jim liked what he had written. He copied it neatly and got an envelope and a stamp from his dad. He ran to the mailbox with his entry (参赛作品), “Mom will love having a shopping spree,” he thought.
Jim checked the mailbox every day for his prize. Days passed by, and then weeks. Soon it was the day before Mother’s day. Jim still hadn’t heard anything about the contest. “What am I going to do now ” he wondered. He didn’t have a present, and he didn’t have a shopping spree, and he still didn’t have any money. He had to think of something. Jim closed his eyes and thought so hard.
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Suddenly he had an idea.
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The next morning Jim handed his present to his mom.
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10．（2023·全国·模拟预测）阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The early April wind was colder than I expected as I walked anxiously toward the Holiday Inn at Union Square in San Francisco. With every step I took, I heard my mother’s words, “Johnny, I am all packed and looking forward to seeing you!”
After five years of trying to get a visa to the United States to visit me, she finally succeeded on the third attempt. The long and boring process, while at times heartbreaking, could not prevent my mom from her desire to make the trip. Despite being only five feet, three inches tall, Mom had always been the pillar (支柱) of our family. Her solution to the visa challenge proved once again that no barrier was a match for Mom’s strong determination and love for her family — in this case, me!
Although excited, I was extremely nervous. Mom and I had not seen each other in more than eight years, since I left Malaysia at eighteen to attend college in the U.S. Due to a fault, my application for permanent residency was put on hold. In spite of being gainfully employed and a homeowner, I could not leave the country until my paperwork was resolved.
In the beginning, our only source of communication was through letters. Later, it became lengthy phone conversations. Much had happened during the eight years while I was absent.
During the months before her U.S. trip, I tried to help my mom prepare what she needed to pack. I planned for her to stay with me for four months, during which time we would be traveling throughout the United States. Her reply was always, “Don’t worry about me. I know what I need. How about you What would you like me to bring you from Malaysia ” My answer never changed. All I wanted was a couple of bags of authentic curry and chili (辣椒) powder from our hometown of Melaka, as I was running low on these treasured spices.
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When the day finally came, I waited patiently for her in front of the hotel.
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It was late afternoon by the time we reached my house in Baton Rouge.
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