2024年译林版八年级下册历年期末考试书面表达专练(含解析)

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2024年译林版八年级下册历年期末考试书面表达专练
题号 一 总分
得分
书面表达
1. 近年来,广场舞越来越风靡,但是不少问题也随之产生。请以“Should square dancing be stopped in public ”为题写一篇作文。要点如下:
立场 原因
一些人支持 1. 对老年人来说,是一种很好的保持健康的方式; 2. 当孩子出去上大学了,父母不可能像以前一样经常和孩子保持联系; 3. 广场舞提供了很多的与他人交流的机会,父母就不那么孤独。
另一些人反对 1. 不是所有人都喜欢广场舞,有些人讨厌它的噪音; 2. 广场舞占用了公共空间,这对其他人来说不太方便。
我认为 ……
注意:
1. 词数90左右;
2. 在省略号处发挥一个观点。



2.为共创文明城市,我校将举行以“Civilized City”为主题的演讲比赛。请结合以下要点用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容必须包括以下要点∶
个人修养 1. 对人友善,礼貌待人; 2. ……
公共礼仪 1. 保持干净整洁,不乱扔垃圾; 2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗,在图书馆、阅览室保持安静; 3. ……
绿色生活 1. 节能减排,垃圾分类; 2. ……
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的 真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 内容要点齐全,可以适当发挥;
3. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
4. 词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Civilized City
Dear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.



Let's start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
3.假设你是Wendy,本周你们班将以“How to go green”为题举行一次演讲比赛,请你根据表格中的提示内容,用英语写一篇演讲稿。

要求:
1) 要点完整,可适当发挥,使句子通顺、连贯。
2) 正确使用时态,语法正确,书写整洁。
3) 90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How to go green
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it's time for us to go green.



That's all. Thanks a lot for your attention!
4.假如你是Li Hua,曾在你校交流学习的Daniel给你写了一封邮件。请你根据Daniel的邮件内容及下面所给的关于Project Hope的相关信息,用英语回一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I'm sorry for not replying to your email. I'm busy with my volunteer work for UNICEF. I remember that you are a Project Hope volunteer. Would you please tell me something about it And what have you done for Project Hope Also, I'd like to know your feelings about your volunteer work.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Daniel
Project Hope
Time set up in 1989
Purpose help children in poor areas...
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右(已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
Dear Daniel,
I'm glad to hear from you.



Yours,
Li Hua
5. “南京是我家,文明靠大家”, 每一位南京市民都应积极参与文明城市(civilized city)的建设。请根据以下问题,思考身为中学生的我们应该如何做,才能助力文明城市的创建,与“宁”同行。写一篇英语短文。
(1)How do we help people in need
(2)How do we behave at home and in public
(3)How do we go green
注意:(1)词数90左右,文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;短文语言要通顺,意思连贯;
(3)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
How to make Nanjing a civilized city
Nanjing is now trying to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do?



6. Nowadays, the Internet has improved students' life. But at the same time, it needs a better environment.
You are a member of the Students' Union and you are going to give a speech about the Internet in your school. Your speech should cover the main points in the chart below.
The Internet change your life in many ways study
communication
...
need a friendly and healthy environment being polite and honest
spending time wisely
...
注意:
1. 语言通顺,要点齐全,并适当发挥。
2. 词数80左右,文章的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
A speech on the Internet
Dear friends,
With the help of the Internet, great changes have taken place in our life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thank you for listening!
7. Years passed so fast. You all will have to say goodbye to your childhood and welcome the colourful youth. Your school is going to hold a Welcome Youth Party for the students in Grade 8 at the end of this term. Please write a speech draft(草稿) according to the poster of Students' Union.
Dear friends,
How time flies! We are now 14 years old and welcoming the colourful youth.
I think youth means _________, _________ and _________.



Thank you for listening!
8. 青春是美好的,更是奋斗出来的。即将踏入毕业班的我们,该如何珍惜光阴,不负青春,过一个有意义的暑假呢?Teens英文报刊开辟了专栏“A meaningful summer holiday"。假如你是李华,请你结合下图提示,用英语写一篇文章向该栏目投稿,讲述你暑假计划的具体活动安排及其原因。要点如下:
A meaningful summer holiday reading
travelling
……
注意:
(1) 语句通顺,条理清晰,段落分明,书写工整。
(2) 词数80 个词左右(不包括已给的内容)。
(3) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名或地名等信息。
The summer holiday is coming, how can we spend a meaningful holiday



9.假如你是来自英国某中学的交换生Martina,你在学校的告示栏中看到了某慈善组织招聘暑期志愿者的海报,很想参加。请针对招募条件写一封英文申请信,井给出至少两点你能胜任该活动的理由。
注意∶
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称;
2. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;
3. 词数80左右,申请信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
SERVING WITH SMILES! ※ WHO CAN JOIN Aged 12 and above ※ WHEN Sundays, 8—10 a.m., in August ※ WHAT Visit and clean an elderly man's home ※ WHAT IS SWS SERVNG WITH SMLES(SWS) is an organization that allows teenagers to take part in social activities. ※FOR MORE INEORMATION: Email us at: sws@yahoo com or Call Jen Paulson on 88787676 with questions.
Dear Chairperson,
I would like to be a volunteer in Serving With Smiles.



You can call me at 83587693 or email me at martina@.
Yours sincerely,
Martina
10.学校英语校刊Teens正在开展以"How to go green at school"为题的征文竞赛活动。请根据竞赛启事,用英语写一篇征文,分享你的想法。
English writing competítion Ten good articles will be printed in Teens magazine. Title: How to go green at school Your article should include: What is your understanding of "going green" What bad behaviours do you see in our school To make our school greener, what advice can you give The closing date: June 28th, 2023 Your article should be sent to englishwritings@, . For more information, please visit http: //www./writingcompetition/
注意:
(1)内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺。
(2)词数80左右(已给出的征文开头不计入总词数)。
(3)文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
How to go green at school
Without green, life has no hope. Going green means we should
___________
11.积极健康、乐观向上的生活是我们共同追求的目标。通过正确合理的自我管理和自我提升,我们都能遇见更好的自己。请参考下图信息,以“How to become a better person”为主题,写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.语句通顺,逻辑清晰,书写规范;
2.词数90左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
12.在八年级结束之际,八(5)班将举行一次主题班会,要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Peter准备一份演讲稿,具体内容如下:
过去 现在
学习 沉迷于电脑游戏 热爱阅读……
环保 随处乱扔垃圾 意识到环保的重要性……
礼仪 大声喧哗…… 举止礼貌,主动让座
爱心 不懂得如何尊老爱幼 为贫困地区儿童募集书本
展望未来 ……
要求:(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包含以上所有要点,并适当发挥;
(3)词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。
Hello, everyone. I m Peter from Class 5, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for listening.
13.每位同学都希望成为学校中受欢迎的人,你校近期将以“Being a Popular Student”为题,举办一次演讲比赛,请以李华的名义,写一篇英文演讲稿。
兴趣爱好 旅游、阅读(给出喜欢的理由)
行为习惯 1.注重礼仪(举例说明);
2.自拟一点
绿色生活 1.节约用水(举例说明):
2.自拟一点
助人为乐 1.捐钱助学
2.自拟一点
注意:
(1)短文必须包括表格中所有的信息,并作适当的发挥;
(2)词数:90词左右,已给出的文字不计入总词数;
(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
Being a Popular Student
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I want to be a popular student with my classmates and teachers. I'm glad to make a speech here.



Thank you for listening!
14.生活中充满美好的事物,需要品味,更值得分享。相信你也有想和我们一起分享的东西,比如:趣事、美食、电影、电视、旅游......, 请你以“__________ I'd like to share with you”为题写一篇短文,来参加我们的征文比赛吧!内容须包括:
1. What would you like to share
2. Why would you like to share it
3. What have you learned from it
注意事项:
1. 短文须自拟,要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2. 词数:100左右;
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息。
_______ I'd like to share with you
________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
15.亲爱的同学们,快乐而充实的初二上学期已过去一半,相信你收获满满,也对未来充满期待。如果你是李敏,请根据下面图中的提示给你的英国笔友Eva写一封电子邮件,说说近来学习和生活情况。
已完成的事 1. 上个月回了家乡…… 2. 读完5本书…… 3. 了解了两个欧洲国家……
接下来的计划 1. 去……游玩…… 2. ……
要求:
1. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名。
2. 必须包含下图中所提供的信息,要适当发挥。
3. 词数 100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
4. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下连贯。
Dear Eva,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I’d like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.



So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Min
答案和解析
1.【答案】Should square dancing be stopped in public Square dancing has been more and more popular these years. But it has many haters as well.
Some people support it. ①They think square dancing is a good way for the old to keep healthy. What's more, after some children go to college, it'll be impossible for their parents to keep in touch with them as often as before. In this way, square dancing can be a good chance to communicate with others. The parents can be less lonely.
However, other people hold different opinions. They don't think all the old like square dancing. Some even hate the noise made by the dancers. Besides, dancers need a large public area to dance in. So it's inconvenient for others.
②In my opinion, square dancing needn't be stopped in public because it brings old people a lot of fun. But we shouldn't dance too late or dance to too loud music.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,写一封电子邮件。首先认真审题,确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第三人称以及一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点,适当发挥,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,书写清晰,卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言:开门见山,点明主题,介绍广场舞的现状;
中心:根据提示具体介绍支持广场舞的原因以及反对广场舞的原因;
结尾:概括总结,表达自己的观点。
【亮点短语】
①what's more而且
②keep in touch保持联系
③hold different opinions持有不同意见
④in one's opinion在某人看来
【高分句型】
①They think square dancing is a good way for the old to keep healthy.(think后面是省略了that的宾语从句)
②In my opinion, square dancing needn't be stopped in public because it brings old people a lot of fun.(because引导的原因状语从句)
2.【答案】Civilized CityDear classmates,
Our city is now making its effort to be a civilized city. I think we can do something for it.
As a student, we should be kind to others and often help people. For example, we can give our seats to people in need on the bus and be polite to others. We should care about our classmates and offer help if necessary.
In public, we shouldn't litter everywhere and should keep it clean. ①It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that. Moreover, we should obey the traffic rules ad always queue for our turn.
②To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life. It is important to save energy and reduce waste. We should also separate the waste and try our best to recycle them.
③ Let's start from ourselves. Try our best to make our hometown more beautiful and civilized. Thank you!
【解析】【思路点拨】本文以“Civilized City”为题,根据题干中所给的要点进行写作,可适当增加细节。阐述做法应用一般现在时,多以第一人称为主,注意连词的使用,使文章过渡自然。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰,逻辑清楚,做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
【结构布局】
引言:开篇点明主题
中心:根据提示具体介绍文明城市的特点
结尾:表达希望
【亮点词汇】
①be kind to对……友善
②give one's seats to让座
③care about关心
④try one's best to尽某人最大努力……
【高分句型】
①It is not polite to speak loudly in public places, and we should keep quiet in libraries, reading rooms and other places like that. (It is adj. to do sth.句型)
②To make our city more beautiful, we should have a green life.(动词不定式作目的状语)
③Let's start from ourselves.(let型祈使句)
3.【答案】How to go green Our environment is changing for the worse, so it's time for us to go green.
First of all, we should save energy. We can take shorter showers and reuse water if possible. We should not forget to turn off the power when our TV or computer is not in use. Also, in order to reduce pollution. We should choose public transport to reduce harmful gas. ① We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags.② Moreover, it's very important for us to develop a green lifestyle. We should do more exercise and watch less TV.
In my opinion, we should try our best to protect the environment. Follow these small steps and you can make a big difference to the earth.
That's all. Thanks a lot for your attention.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求以“How to go green”为题,结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿。可适当增加细节。文章以一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。
【结构布局】
引言:我们的环境正在变得越来越糟,所以我们应该环保;
中心:针对问题提出具体的建议;遵循这些建议就能给地球带来很大的改变;
结尾:表达感谢
[亮点词汇]
①in order to为了……
② try one's best to do sth.尽某人的最大的努力做某事
③make a big difference对……有大影响
[高分句型]
①We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags.(省略句)
②Moreover, it's very important for us to develop a green lifestyle.(it是形式主语,动词不定式是真正的主语)
4.【答案】Dear Daniel,
I'm glad to hear from you. I do volunteer for project Hope. Now let me tell you something about it. First of all, Project Hope was established in 1989. It aims at helping children in poor areas. ①Keep them in school, feed them, clothes them. My work is mainly to select children from poor areas and record them. In addition, I sometimes distribute supplies to the children. ②I like this job very much, because I think it is very happy and meaningful to help those children.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,写一封电子邮件。首先认真审题,确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点,适当发挥,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,书写清晰,卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言:开头已给出,开门见山,点明主题;
中心:根据提示具体介绍希望工程相关情况和表达自己的观点;
结尾:结尾已给出,概括总结,署名。
【亮点短语】
①first of all首先
②aim at旨在
③select…from…从……选择……
④in addition此外
【高分句型】
①Keep them in school, feed them, clothes them.(Do型祈使句)
②I like this job very much, because I think it is very happy and meaningful to help those children.(because引导的原因状语从句)
【拓展词汇/句型】略
5.【答案】How to make Nanjing a civilized city
Nanjing is now trying to become a civilized city. As students, what should we do We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. ①We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. ②When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. We help our parents with housework at home. What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, we mustn't step on the grass and climb the trees. Litter mustn't be thrown everywhere. We should try to walk or take the bus.
Nanjing is our hometown. Let's try our best to make it a civilized city.
【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇应用文写作,根据提示进行书面表达,时态使用一般现在时,人称主要使用第一人称,围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
【结构布局】
引言:点明主题
中心:具体怎么做
结尾:总结全文
【亮点短语】
①be polite to对……有礼貌
②be friendly to对……友善
③try one's best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事
【高分句型】
①We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the people around us.我们也应该帮助那些有需要的人,对我们周围的人友好。(who引导的定语从句,修饰先行词 those)
②When we cross the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing.当我们过马路时,我们应该走斑马线。(when引导的时间状语从句,当……时候)
6.【答案】A speech on the InternetDear friends,
With the help of the Internet, great changes have taken place in our life. ①For example, we can study on the internet when we can't go to school because of the COVID-19. ②And we can keep in touch with friends and classmates although we can't meet. Besides, we can also know what is happening in the world without going abroad. ③How convenient it is to use the Internet!
But we need a friendly and healthy environment to make sure that we can use the Internet wisely and safely. When surfing the Internet, we should be polite and honest. Then, we should spend time wisely instead of losing ourselves in it. Finally, we shouldn't depend too much on it or we will be lazier and lazier. Thank you for listening!
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文,写一篇发言稿。首先认真审题,确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称复数形式we和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点,适当发挥,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,书写清晰,卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言:开门见山,点明主题;
中心:根据提示具体阐述互联网如何改变我们的生活以及如何创建一个友好、健康的网络环境;
结尾:概括总结,表达感谢。
【亮点短语】
①because of因为
②keep in touch保持联系
③make sure确保
④instead of而不是
【高分句型】
①For example, we can study on the internet when we can't go to school because of the COVID-19.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②And we can keep in touch with friends and classmates although we can't meet.(although引导的让步状语从句)
③How convenient it is to use the Internet!(how引导的感叹句)
7.【答案】 Dear friends,
How time flies! We are now 14 years old and welcoming the colourful youth.
I think youth means struggle, opportunity and failure. ①There are infinite possibilities in our future, so we should strive for a better future through our own efforts. The opportunities are in front of us, and it's up to us to seize these opportunities. Of course, we will fail many times. ②At this time, we can't give up easily, because failure is the mother of success. You can't meet a rainbow without failure. So fight, young man.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇演讲稿,时态为“一般现在时”。写作要点已给出,注意详述海报里的要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
引言:感概时光飞逝,直入主题;
中心:具体阐述年轻意味着什么;
结尾:感谢聆听
[亮点词汇]
①infinite possibilities无限的可能性
②seize these opportunities 抓住这些机会
[高分句型]
①There are infinite possibilities in our future, so we should strive for a better future through our own efforts.(so引导的目的状语从句)
②At this time, we can't give up easily, because failure is the mother of success.(because引导的原因状语从句)
8.【答案】 The summer holiday is coming, how can we spend a meaningful holiday ?
First of all, I will spend an hour a day reading different types of books. ①I think reading is one of the most important things because reading can open up a whole new world to me.
Just as the saying goes, "Traveling ten thousand miles is better than ten thousand books." I can't wait to have a trip with family. We can enjoy the natural beauty and delicious food. I believe it will be a great time.
What's more, it is meaningful for us teenagers to do some voluntary work.I can work as a volunteer at community centers or in the libraries at the weekend. ②When I am in the library, I can also do my homework and prepare for next term because I will be a Grade 9 student.
Meanwhile, we should develop a green lifestyle.We should reuse water if possible.We should save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap.
Everyone can do something to make a difference to our environment and ourselves.
【解析】【思路点拨】本篇书面表达是写一篇栏目投稿。首先认真审题,确定文章体裁、题材和中心。本文主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。写作内容包括提示中的要点,适当发挥,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词和句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。确保内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当,书写清晰,卷面整洁。
【结构布局】
引言:开门见山,点明主题;
中心:根据提示具体介绍暑假计划的具体活动安排及其原因;
结尾:概括总结,提出倡议。
【亮点短语】
①open up打开
②can't wait to (do sth)表示迫不及待地(做某事)
③prepare for…为……做准备
④turn off关闭
【高分句型】
①I think reading is one of the most important things because reading can open up a whole new world to me.(think后接省略that引导的宾语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I am in the library, I can also do my homework and prepare for next term because I will be a Grade 9 student.(when引导的时间状语从句;because引导的原因状语从句)
【拓展词汇/句型】略
9.【答案】Dear Chairperson,
I would like to be a volunteer in Serving With Smiles.
First, let me introduce myself. My name is Martina. I am a 16-year-old boy in Grade 9. ①I think I am free in July and August, so I can take part in this activity in summer.
I would like to be a member of your organization. I am kind and helpful. Moreover, I am patient enough to work with others. I often help others in my spare time without getting angry. I can also tell funny jokes. In my opinion, it's very meaningful to chat with others, especially the elderly. I think they are just like my grandparents. And I can bring them a lot of happiness.
②I will be very happy if I can become a member of SWS. You can call me at 83587693 or email me at martina@.
Yours sincerely,
Martina
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇书信作文。写一封想要参加志愿者的申请信。本文采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。分为四段式:第一段和最后一段已给出;第二段介绍自己的个人信息;第三段介绍自己成为一名志愿者的条件。写作时保持主谓一致,避免语法错误和标点错误。
【结构布局】
引言:点明主题,表明意愿
中心:能胜任的理由
结尾:表达希望,期待回信
【亮点短语】
①take part in参加
②be patient enough to对……有足够的耐心
【高分句型】
①I think I am free in July and August, so I can take part in this activity in summer.(省略that的宾语从句;so连接的并列句)
②I will be very happy if I can become a member of SWS.(if引导的条件状语从句)
10.【答案】How to go green at school
The earth is home to both humans and wild animals. But today wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans. On the one hand, people often cut down trees and forests for money. On the other hand, people kill animals for their fur or bones. So many animals are in danger. lt's time for us to save the earth and the wild animals. lf we take some actions to protect our earth and animals in time, ouiearth will become comfortable for us to live in and the animals can live peaceful asthey wish. ①But if we don't, everything will beyond our imagination.
First, as a student, we can try to be a volunteers and start from little things. what's more, we shouldn't buy fur coats any more. Last but not least, we are supposed to educate people to realize the importance of protecting earth and loving the animals.
②Let's act together to make a more beautiful home for us human and animals as
well.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇命题作文,要求能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
【结构布局】
引言:点名环境保护迫在眉睫
中心:我能给出的建议
结尾:呼吁人们共同保护环境
【亮点词汇】
①in danger 处于危险中
②in time 及时
【高分句型】
①But if we don t , everything will beyond our imagination.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②Let s act together to make a more beautiful home for us human and animals as well.(祈使句)
11.【答案】 Everyone wants to become a better person, so do I. I think the following suggestions can help me.
Just as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed. Making more friends will help me. When something worries me, I can turn to them for help. Besides, it will also give me more chances to help others. Secondly, it is important for me to read more books. Because reading can help me open my eyes to the world and enrich my knowledge. Besides, I should believe in myself. Confidence is very important.
Action speaks louder than words. I will try my best to become a better person.
【解析】略
12.【答案】 Hello, everyone. I m Peter from Class 5, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, I used to spend most of my time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. Second, I always dropped litter casually in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins. Third, I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. Now I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus. Fourth, I didn t know how to care about the elderly or the young in the past. But now I offer to help the elderly in need. I have collected a lot of books for the children in poor areas.
I hope to do some charity work to help more people in need. I m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening.
【解析】略
13.【答案】Being a Popular Student
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. I want to be a popular student with my classmates and teachers. I'm glad to make a speech here.
In my free time, I like travelling and reading. ①I think they can lead me into a whole new world. I have good manners. I always obey traffic rules and never litter everywhere. I never speak loudly in public places. I always live a green life. I can save water by taking a shorter shower and go to school by bike.
What's more, I am willing to help others. ②I can donate my pocket money to help the students in poor areas. I work as a volunteer in my community as well.
Thank you for listening!
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇材料作文,时态为“一般现在时”,写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的每一项内容,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
【结构布局】
引言:表明写作意图,文章主题是如何成为一个受欢迎的学生;
中心:具体阐述自己成为受欢迎学生的具体行为;
结尾:书写结语,表达感谢。
【亮点词汇】
①be willing to do sth愿意做某事
② donate...捐赠
【高分句型】
①I think they can lead me into a whole new world.(省略that的宾语从句)
②I can donate my pocket money to help the students in poor areas.(不定式作目的状语)
14.【答案】A book I'd like to share with you Books are the ladder of human progress. I would like to share my favourite book The Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you.
The story is full of adventures and love. It is written by Mark Twain. Tom is the hero of the story. He is lively and clever. He and his best friend runaway to an island. After they adventure on the island, they comeback home safely. ① What has impressed me most is that Tom can overcome fear bravely.
I have learned bravery and kindness from Tom. ②The book is so interesting that it is well worth reading.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是一篇提示作文,要求介绍想要分享的东西。要求能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
【亮点词汇】
①would like to do sth.想要做某事
②be written by由……撰写
【高分句型】
①What has impressed me most is that Tom can overcome fear bravely.(what引导的主语从句;that引导的表语从句)
②The book is so interesting that it is well worth reading.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
【结构布局】
引言:开篇点明主题,即分享书籍
中心:具体解释为什么想要分书籍
结尾:表明从书籍中学到了什么
【拓展词汇】

【拓展句型】

15.【答案】Dear Eva,
How time flies! Half of the term has passed since we wrote to each other last time. I'd like to share something that has happened and my future plans with you.
I went back to my hometown last month.① It's amazing that great changes have taken place there. People used to live in small old houses but now most of them moved into new flats. Besides, I have read five books. Among them, I like Harry Potter best. The story is very long but really exciting. What's more, I have learnt a lot about two European countries.To my surprise, the UK has a long history like China. France is located in Western Europe and is known for its rich history, art, culture, and cuisine.
I have made some future plans for the other half of the term. ② First, I want to visit one of the most famous trade centers, called Lujiazui. Second, I would like to go to the library as often as possible and borrow many more books to read.
So much for my sharing. Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Li Min
【解析】【思路点拨】
本篇是一篇应用文写作,为电子邮件。要求作文必须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。人称为第一人称,时态为一般现在时和现在完成时态。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误并注意高级词汇和高级句式的应用。
【结构布局】
引言:引出写作主题:分享“已经完成的事情”和“接下来的计划”。
中心:具体阐述写作内容。从“已经完成的事情”和“接下来的计划”两个方面重点介绍自己这学期的具体情况;
结尾: 希望尽快收到对方回信。
【亮点词汇】
①take place发生
②used to do sth过去常常做某事
③to one's surprise令某人惊讶的是
④be located in位于
⑤be known for以……而闻名
⑥as often as possible尽可能经常
【高分句型】
①It's amazing that great changes have taken place there. (that引导的主语从句)
②First, I want to visit one of the most famous trade centers, called Lujiazui. (过去分词作非限制性后置定语)
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