2024届高中英语读后续写之遇险脱险类(含解析)

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读后续写之遇险脱险类10篇
1.(2024·重庆·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
We Survived Getting Swallowed by a Whale
Respect and revere (敬畏) nature. I’m Julie, 56 years old, living in San Luis Obispo, California, about four miles from the beach. Every few years, the humpback whales come into the bay for several days while migrating.
In November 2020, the whales were around, so I took out my yellow double kayak (皮划艇) to watch the wildlife. I paddled out the pier (长堤) and saw seals, dolphins, and about 20 whales feeding on silverfish. They sprayed through their blowholes. Each one is huge, about 15 metres long. Sometimes they turned side fins as if waving at me. It was incredible.
At the time, my friend Liz was with me. We had met 28 years earlier. I asked Liz if she wanted to see the whales. I really wanted to share the magnificent experience with her.
“No way,” she said. She’s terrified of whales and sharks. I promised that the craft was stable and safe enough. Moreover, humpback whales couldn’t swallow down kayaks for their throats were tight even though they had enormous mouths and white-wall-like internal mouth structures, not to mention that we got paddles and life jackets. After some persuasion, Liz finally agreed.
We set off at about 8:30 the next morning. There were already about 15 other kayakers in the bay. One hour later, I spotted two whales right past the pier, swimming toward us. We were in awe, feeling amazed to be so close to a creature that size.
When whales swam down after breaching (跃身激浪), they disappeared in ripples. I figured if we paddled there, we’d be safe since they’d just left. We followed them at a distance—or what I thought was a distance. I later learned that it’s recommended to keep 90 metres away, or about the length of a football field. We were probably 18 metres away.
All of a sudden, a swarm (群) of fish started jumping out of the water into our kayak. Their movement sounded like crackling glass. Now I knew we were too close. I was terrified. Then our kayak was lifted out of the water—about two metres—and tipped back into the ocean. I figured
the whale was going to drag us down somehow, and I had no idea how deep.
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I didn’t realize that Liz and I sitting in the kayak were in the whale’s mouth.
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Thankfully, the whale spitted us out, people paddling to help, shooting videos.
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【范文】
What I didn’t realise at the moment was that Liz and I were in the whale’s mouth. It had engulfed my entire body except for my right arm and paddle. Liz, meanwhile, was looking up directly into the whale’s jaw — it was like a big white wall. She told me later she thought she was going to die. I was still worried about being sucked down by the vacuum, so I just kept thinking that I had to get up and fight this. Whales have enormous mouths but tiny throats. Anything they can’t swallow, they spit out. We were wearing life jackets, and soon we both popped up out of the water about a meter apart. The entire ordeal lasted only ten seconds, but to me it felt like an eternity.
Thankfully, the whale spitted us out, people paddling to help, shooting videos. A few people were nearby, and someone shot a video of the entire incident. A few days later, I studied the video and saw how close I’d come to being injured or killed. I became so much more appreciative of life after that day. There’s no way I’m getting that close to whales again. I want to respect their space
and now I’m very aware of the power of nature.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者和朋友近距离观鲸,险些被鲸鱼吞进了肚子里,死里逃生后,作者更加珍惜生命了。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我没有意识到我和莉兹坐在皮划艇里,就在鲸鱼嘴里”可知,第一段可描写作者和朋友是如何从鲸鱼口中脱险的。
②由第二段首句内容“谢天谢地,鲸鱼把我们吐了出来,人们划着水来帮忙,拍视频”可知,第二段可描写作者事后的感悟。
2.续写线索:被鲸鱼吞下——惊恐担忧——想到办法——被鲸鱼吐出——事后感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①死亡:die/pass away
②思考:think/consider
③意识到:be aware of /realize
情绪类
①感激:appreciative/grateful
②担心:worried/concerned
【点睛】[高分句型1] She told me later she thought she was going to die. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I was still worried about being sucked down by the vacuum, so I just kept thinking that I had to get up and fight this. (运用了动名词作宾语和that引导的宾语从句)
2.(2024·河南濮阳·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a typical Monday morning. My form teacher, Mrs Tan, was going through our exam questions. I pot down some notes and did my corrections.
“Riiiiiiinnnngg!” A high-pitched sound pierced through the air like a knife. Covering my ears in annoyance, realization dawned on me. It was the fire alarm! While I encouraged others to remain as cool as a cucumber, it was in vain. My classmates were all screaming and running around like crazy.
“Calm down, everyone! Please queue up in an orderly manner! We have practised this in the
fire drills!” instructed Mrs Tan , sounding anxious.
The class ignored her and continued screaming at the top of their voices. One student even broke down in a fit of panic. I rushed around the class, asking all my fellow students to settle down while waiting for further instructions.
A serious voice soon announced from the speakers in every class, drawing our attention. “All students are to follow their teachers and evacuate(撤离)the building in a calm and organized manner. The fire may have been caused by a gas explosion in the canteen; do not go near there!”
Mrs Tan finally managed to calm the panicky class down. In a strict voice, she told us that we were to use the evacuation route to Gate 6. She arranged the pupils quickly in neat straight rows and led us out of the classroom.
Upon taking my first step out of the classroom, I took a deep breath instantly. The surroundings were hazy(模糊的) as thick smoke came from the canteen. Choking, I unconsciously covered my nose. To make matters worse, the ash from the smoky surroundings hurt my eyes. Coughing anxiously, I tried to see my teacher in the lead, but the air was too hazy for me to see anything clearly. Within less than a minute, I lost sight of my class and was left alone.
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A wave of anxiety washed over me.
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Just then, the figure of Mrs Tan waving a torchlight appeared from the smoke.
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【范文】A wave of anxiety washed over me. I was rooted to the spot, as if frozen. Panic
completely tore me into pieces. I didn’t know where to go or what to do. The school seemed like a maze in the thick smoke, and I couldn’t even hear my classmates’voices. All around me was the choking smoke and the deafening sound of the fire alarm. Thinking that I would be dying in a few minutes, I couldn’t help crying bitterly. Then I plucked up my courage and took a deep breath. “Mrs Tan, where are you ” I yelled loudly.
Just then, the figure of Mrs Tan waving a torchlight appeared from the smoke. She held a torch, casting a dim light in the otherwise gloomy surroundings. She was looking around carefully, obviously searching for the remaining students. When she saw me, she immediately came over and took my hand. "Stay calm," she said, her voice steady despite the panic. “Follow me, and we’ll get out of this together. ” With her torch guiding the way, we slowly made our way through the smoke. Thankfully, she had kept us safe, and together we overcame the crisis. That day, I learned the importance of staying calm and trusting my teachers in times of danger.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了星期一的早晨,作者正在上班主任谭老师的复习课,突然发生了火灾。作者和同学们保持冷静,最终在谭老师的帮助下逃生的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“一阵焦虑席卷了我。”可知,第一段可描写作者在火灾中的害怕与担心以及积极自救。
②由第二段首句内容“就在这时,谭老师挥舞着电筒的身影从烟雾中出现了。”可知,第二段可描写我们在谭老师的帮助下顺利逃生。
2.续写线索:焦虑——恐惧——呼救——老师出现——获救——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①深呼吸:take a deep breath/breathe deeply
②大喊:yell/shout
情绪类
①恐惧:fear/panic
②感激:thankfully/gratefully
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thinking that I would be dying in a few minutes, I couldn’t help crying bitterly.(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] With her torch guiding the way, we slowly made our way through the smoke.
(运用了with的复合结构)
3.(2024·广东梅州·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The snowstorm was supposed to hit the evening of Monday, Jan. 31. I was working from home but I had to leave that afternoon and go to my office to sign an emergency financial aid check for a student. The route to the office took about 30 minutes along the highway. When I got there, my colleague came to my office to co-sign the check, and left. As I was packing up, I noticed he had left his laptop bag in my office.
“I can bring it to you,” I assured him. It was just past 4:30 p. m. The snow wasn’t supposed to start until later. On the way to his place, I picked up a new cellphone charger, and filled up my SUV with gas.
It took me about 15 minutes to get to my colleague’s house, where I dropped off the laptop case and got back on the road. Then the snow started, and it was coming down fast. Within minutes, the windows were fogging up and getting covered with snow, so I rolled down my driver’s side window, thinking I could better follow the edge of the road and keep to a straight line. But really, I didn’t have a clue where I was or even which side of the road I was on.
I called 911, but the dispatcher (调度员) told me that nobody was coming to get me until morning at the earliest. The storm would continue for longer than predicted and I worried I’d freeze to death.
Breathe, I told myself. Panicking won’t help.
I stopped the car, pinning my location on Google Maps, figuring out that I was on a road called Bouvier Lane, in between two farms. I posted this new information to my Facebook community group, pleading for anyone who knew who lived on the farms to help me get rescued.
At 8 p. m., my cellphone rang. It was the son of the farmer, André Bouvier, who owned the land beside the road I was stuck in. He told me that his dad had just helped two other cars get to his house, a father and his two kids, and a couple with their daughter. He comforted me that his dad was coming to get me.
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Then, about 45 minutes later, I saw a tall figure, pacing toward me in the dark, carrying a
flashlight.
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We reached the house at last, I driving slowly behind Andre Bouvier.
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【范文】
Then, about 45 minutes later, I saw a tall figure, moving quickly toward me in the dark carrying a flashlight. I’d never been more relieved to see someone in my life. It was Andre Bouvier, who was fighting the wind and snow all the way to get me. “I want you to follow me in your car. You’ll be OK”, he said. I drove slowly behind him, feeling my heart begin to beat more slowly.
We reached the house at last, I driving slowly behind André Bouvier. When I got out of the car, I burst into tears, all my fears turning into relief and gratitude. There, I met the other two families. We all spent the night telling stories, the kids ate the pizza I’d bought, and we slept scattered around the house, on sofas and long chairs. The experience has been a game changer for me. I now approach challenges with a sense of calm I’d not known before. But best of all, it brought André into my life. We’re still in touch, and I know we’ll be friends forever.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述作者在暴风雪中被困,当在路上时感到恐惧和绝望时,他接到了André Bouvier提供救助的的电话。这个经历改变了作者对挑战的态度,并与Andre建立了深厚的友谊。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“然后,大约45分钟后,我看到一个高大的身影,在黑暗中拿着手电筒迅速向我走来。”可知,第一段可描写作者被引到了安全的地方,得救了。
②由第二段首句内容“我们终于到了那所房子,我跟在Andre Bouvier后面慢慢地开着车。”可知,第二段可描写作者在家中的感受和经历,并且描写这次经历改变了作者。
2.续写线索:
Andre Bouvier到来——引导作者——作者得救——在Andre Bouvier家中停留——作者表达感激——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抵抗风雪:fight the wind and snow/withstand the wind and snow
②下转变:turn into/transform into
情绪类
①感谢: appreciation/ gratitude
②大哭:burst into tears/burst out crying
【点睛】[高分句型1] I drove slowly behind him, feeling my heart begin to beat more slowly.(现在分词作状语的结构)
[高分句型2]I now approach challenges with a sense of calm I’d not known before. (省略了引导词that的定语从句)
4.(2024·甘肃兰州·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The snowstorm was supposed to hit the evening of Monday, Jan. 31, 2022. My colleague and I were co-signing an emergency financial aid check for a student at First Nations University in Regina, then he left for the day. As I was packing up, I noticed he had left his laptop bag there.
“Shoot,” he said when I called him. “I’m already home.”
“I can bring it to you.” I assured him. It was just past 4:30 p. m. The snow wasn’t supposed to start until later. It took me about 15 minutes to get to my colleague’s house, where I dropped off the laptop case and got right back on the road. Then suddenly the snow started -and it was coming down fast. Within minutes I was in a whiteout.
The road soon switched from paved to gravel (碎石), forcing me to slow down. The windows were fogging up and getting covered with snow. It was extremely cold outside. I didn’t have a
clue where I was or even which side of the road I was on. I kept the car running to stay warm and called 911, but they said nobody was coming to get me until morning at the earliest.
It was now about 6 p. m. and dark. I stopped the car and texted my colleague whose laptop bag I had just returned. But he had an idea. “Pin your location on Google Maps and send it to me,” he said. I did, and a few minutes later he texted me back a screenshot of the satellite view of where I was. We figured out that I was on a road called Bouvier Lane, in between two farms. It was now 6:30 p. m. We posted this new information to our Facebook community group, pleading (恳求) for anyone who knew who lived on the farms to help me get rescued.
Soon enough, though, people started chiming (发表评论) in on my post. They knew the farmer who lived there! I got a message from someone who was going to put me in touch with them.
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2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
At 8 p. m., my cellphone rang.
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By 5:30 the next morning, walking out of the house, I found two people on the driveway.
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【范文】
At 8 p.m., my cellphone rang. A farmer told me that he was coming to get me. Then, about
45 minutes later, I saw a tall figure walking towards me in the dark.I’d never been more relieved to see him.. “Follow me in your car.” He turned around and started to trudge through the snow, sure of the direction. I drove slowly behind him, feeling my heart begin to beat more slowly. When we reached the house, I burst into tears, all my fears turning into relief and gratitude. His wife treated me to a rich dinner. I had a sound sleep..
By 5:30 the next morning, walking out of the house, I found two people on the driveway. It was the farmer and his wife! They had cleared the snow from the driveway that we could all get out and drive home. I hugged the old couple, repeating thanks again and again. Words escaped me. It turned out that it was only five minutes away from my home. The experience has been a game changer for me. I now approach challenges with a sense of calm I’d not known before. But best of all, it brought André into my life. We’re still in touch, and I know we’ll be friends forever.
【导语】本文以时间为线索展开。作者在暴风雪的天气不得不出门为一位学生处理事务,在回家的路上被暴风雪困住,911的调度员说目前没有救援人员,作者在谷歌地图上标出了自己的位置,把这条信息发布到Facebook社区群里,得到了附近农场的人的救助,这次经历让作者之后遇事更加冷静,也和救助者成为了好朋友。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“晚上8点,我的手机响了。”可知,第一段可描写作者被引到了安全的地方,得救了。
②由第二段首句内容“第二天早上5点半,我走出房子,发现车道上有两个人。”可知,第二段可描写这两个人在干什么以及作者和这对夫妇成为了朋友。
2. 续写线索:到来——引导——得救——走出房子——感谢——到家——成为了永远的朋友
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①大喊:shout/yell
②清除积雪:clear the snow/remove the snow
③保持联系:be in touch/keep in contact with
情绪类
①感谢:gratitude/appreciation
②恐惧:fear/terror/horror
【点睛】[高分句型1]When we reached the house, I burst into tears, all my fears turning into relief and gratitude.(when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I hugged the old couple, repeating thanks again and again.(用了现在分词作状语)
5.(2024·河北沧州·一模)阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I woke up, I felt pains all over. A pool of sticky blood surrounded my head. I lay trapped in the bottom of n smooth-walled pit (坑) with an empty water bottle.
I thought of what had happened. I was climbing down the mountain as I was admiring the beautiful scenery. Accidentally. I stepped on a loose rock. Then I slipped, fell with the rock and got stuck somewhere below the top. It was getting dark in the pit. Only my mother knew where I’d gone. I promised to have lunch with her. Thinking of this. I took my phone out and dialed her number with shaking fingers. No service. The silence, which earlier I’d valued, was now horrible.
With a sharp pain in my head, I was terrified. I knew I’d fallen far, but I wasn’t sure where I was. I called 911 because I knew by the pain that my back was severely injured, if not broken. My ear was torn badly. There was still no service. I dug through my bag to assess my supplies and found a whistle and some wipes.
I put the whistle around my neck and blew, though I knew no one would hear me. It was 1:15 pm and I was miles from the town where I lived. I used the wipes to clean off as much blood as I could. I rested. Then I screamed, blew my whistle, and let myself think the unthinkable. What if they can’t find me What if this is it
I decided to get moving. I climbed through a small opening, but when I peered over the next edge, my heart sank: there was a 30-foot drop. There was no way down. I was trapped.
I knew with that extreme Arizona heat in the day and bitter desert cold at night, I wouldn’t last long. But I thought my mother was sure to call the police for help if she couldn’t get in touch with me. With a little hope, I prayed the police would send a helicopter (直升机) to my resecu.
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Around five hours later, a growing buzz (嗡嗡声) in the air broke the silence.
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Though the pilot saw me, it was difficult for the team to get to me.
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【范文】Around five hours later, a growing buzz(嗡嗡声)in the air broke the silence. Rescue was coming. I couldn’t look too far up because moving my back was impossible, so I got on my knees and whistled. The helicopter flew close to me, and the motor drowned out my calls for help. They flew over me once, twice, four times and they still could not see me, although I was waving my arms wildly. At that momet, I felt so disappointed. Then, just as it was starting to get dark, the helicopter passed and I locked eyes with one of the men inside. He pointed right at me.
Though the pilot saw me, it was difficult for the team to get to me. They tried different rescue techniques. Eventually, one crewmember came down and tied a rope around my waist and I was finally dragged into the helicopter. I was saved. The rescuers told me how my mother had contacted the police and how community members joined the search. Three hours from the start of the search, everyone was celebrating my return. But from then on, my mother never let me act alone.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了主人公在山上迷路后不幸坠落到一个光滑壁的深坑里,并且在那里受伤。他试图拨打电话求救,但没有信号,接着他用口哨吹响,但无人听到。主人公担心自己可能会被永远困在这里,但在绝望中决定试图找到出路。然而,他发现出口陡峭且无法通过。在漫长的等待后,最终救援队伍找到了他并成功救出。最后,作者提到他的妈妈从此不再让他独自行动。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“大约5个小时后,空气中越来越大的嗡嗡声打破了寂静。”可知,第一段可描写作者看到了直升飞机后想方设法引起飞行员的注意,寻求救助。
②由第二段首句内容“虽然飞行员看到了我,但队员们很难接近我。”可知,第二段可描写飞行员发现作者,并且成功营救作者,同时告知母亲和社区人员对其搜救做出的努力。
2.续写线索:
作者通过吹口哨引起直升飞机的 注意——飞行员发现作者——飞行员通过各种方法接近作者并成功营救——告知其母亲和社区做出的搜寻努力——所有人庆祝作者的归来
3.词汇激活
行为类
①飞向我:fly over me/fly towards me
②.下来:come down/get off
③.被拯救:be saved/be rescued
情绪类
①.失望:disappointed/depressed
②.庆祝我的回来:celebrate my return/cheer for my return
【点睛】[高分句型1]. They flew over me once, twice, four times and they still could not see me, although I was waving my arms wildly.(由although引导让步状语从句)
[高分句型2]. The rescuers told me how my mother had contacted the police and how community members joined the search.(how引导宾语从句以及过去完成时时态)
6.(2024·辽宁锦州·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
In a summer holiday, some of my friends planned to take a hike in a jungle, including Jake and Liam. They asked me if I would like to go with them. I loved outdoor activities, so I immediately said yes.
It was sunny the following morning. I was in a very good mood. I was so excited about hiking since it was the first time that I had hiked with them. I ate a light breakfast. After that, I hurriedly ran out of my house to meet them. At that time, I didn’t expect there was a horrible experience ahead.
The jungle where we were going was far from our area. Its name is Salymbia Jungle. It took about three hours to get there by bus, but it wasn’t a boring journey as we were all eager to hike.
After we got off the bus, we found a local guide to ensure our safety. The guide, whose name is Thomas, said that he had hiked in the Salymbia Jungle lots of times and that he was familiar with the route. When we arrived, Thomas told us never to leave the group. He warned us that we would easily get lost in the jungle if we walked alone. Then we began to hike.
There were a wide variety of plants which we had never seen before. All of us were amazed at the beauty of the scenery and the sounds of the creatures. After a while, we were walking and then I looked at my wrist to check the time, but then I realized that my watch fell off. Then I walked back without informing anyone. I did not worry about getting lost since there were other people behind and I thought I would have been able to keep up with the crowd. I went back to search through the pathway so attentively that I lost track of the time and sight of my friends. I immediately realized that I was alone.
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The sky started to become darker and I was very terrified.
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【范文】One possible version:
The sky started to become darker and I was very terrified. I didn’t know what to do. I called
out to my friends, but there was no reply. I tried to look for a way but none of the scenes seemed familiar. I walked for a few more minutes and I got tired and hungry. I was horrified and longed for this nightmare to finish. Finally, I gave up and leaned on a tree to rest. I fell asleep quickly and suddenly I heard a human voice. I doubted my ears but then I was convinced. I screamed, “Help!”
Actually, they were rescuers searching for me. My friends Jake and Liam told Thomas that they found I was lost, and some rescuers were called to help at once. They led me back to the bus. Seeing me, my friends told me they were really worried. I apologized to them for leaving the group without telling them. Instead of scolding me, they comforted me and helped me calm down. And I truly learned a good lesson from it — safety comes first.
【导语】本文以故事情节为线索展开,讲述了作者和几个朋友在暑假徒步旅行,他们去的地方叫做Salymbia Jungle,离居住的地区很远,到了当地后,找了一位叫做Thomas导游来确保安全,到达丛林后,Thomas告诉作者他们不要单独行走,很容易迷路,而在作者他们欣赏着沿途的美景的时候,作者意识到手表掉了,没有告诉任何人就单独离开,一路上寻找着丢失的手表,忘记了时间,也见不到朋友们,作者意识到掉队而最终被救的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“天空开始变暗,我非常害怕。”可知,第一段可描写作者一人在丛林中做出怎样的努力要走出丛林,以及作者当时的心理状态。
②由第二段首句内容“实际上,他们是来找我的救援人员。”可知,第二段可描写作者的朋友们以及救援人员是如何找到作者的,作者见到朋友后做了些什么以及这件事情的感悟。
2.续写线索:作者迷路——害怕——放弃——救援队达到——道歉——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①答应:reply/answer/response
②放弃:gave up/quit
③大声喊叫:screamed/cry out/shout
情绪类
①恐惧:horrified/terrified/alarmed/scared
②担心:worried/concerned
【点睛】[高分句型1]I didn’t know what to do.(运用了“疑问词+to do”结构作know的宾语)
[高分句型2]Seeing me, my friends told me they were really worried.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型3]I apologized to them for leaving the group without telling them.(运用了动名词短语作宾语)
7.(2024·浙江绍兴·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Kevin woke to the blaring beep of his alarm clock. “Can’t wait for that camping trip,” Kevin thought, filled with excitement. As he was leaving home, his dad grabbed him by the hand and said, “Before you go, just tell me the directions on where you and your friends are going to stay.”
“But dad!” Kevin complained.
“No buts!” Kevin’s dad added.
“Fine.” Kevin told him the directions and left.
The three friends, Kevin, Jay and Nathan, had been planning this adventure for weeks, packing their stuff-tents, snacks, and a map-preparing for a 3-day outdoor exploration. Excitement ran through Kevin as they departed for their campsite. “This trip is going to be awesome, ” Nathan excitedly yelled as they set off. But little did they know that nature had a surprise in store for them.
The first day at the campsite was going great, setting up tents, collecting firewood, and sharing stories. “Man, we nailed these tents, ” Kevin said. “I know it was easy really,” Nathan replied. The friends were happy.
Yet towards night, as the dark clouds gathered overhead, the atmosphere shifted, and a sudden storm erupted with unforgiving anger. Rain poured down from the heavens like a relentless waterfall, transforming the peaceful campsite into a muddy battleground. Worse still, a huge tree was uprooted and crashed down with a deafening crack on their only means of escape - their car. Kevin’s eyes widened in horror as he spotted the damaged wreckage beneath the fallen giant. “Our car!” he screamed over the howling wind, his voice a mix of disbelief and despair. “We’re stuck here,” he declared, his words barely audible against the backdrop of thunder and raindrops. They realized that their plans had been violently spoiled by forces beyond their control. The once quiet campsite now stood as a deserted battlefield, the fallen tree serving as a painful reminder of the unpredictable nature of the world around them.
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Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water.
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【范文】
Paragraph 1: The next day, they found themselves facing the immediate problem of finding water. The search for water soon drained their energy. They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort. They ran as fast as they could and found a small stream-a lifeline in all the challenges. However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged -limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild. Their nerves were near the edge of breaking down after long hours of uncertainty in the wilderness.
Paragraph 2: On the third night, a distant engine sound broke the terrible stillness. Relief washed over the weary faces as they witnessed the approach of a rugged vehicle. Kevin’s dad stepped out to meet the group. The emotions that played across their faces - disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy- mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. Back home, Kevin’s dad said, “Good thing you told me those directions,” teaching them the
importance of informing someone about plans. The experience turned into tales of courage and resilience, embedded in their memories as lessons for a lifetime.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开。凯文和朋友杰伊和内森要去露营,在爸爸的追问下告诉爸爸方向,然后离开了。然而,夜幕降临时,一场突如其来的风暴带着无情的愤怒爆发了。一棵大树,轰然倒下,击中了他们唯一的逃生工具——他们的汽车。他们意识到他们的计划被他们无法控制的力量粗暴地破坏了。
【详解】1.段落续写
①由第一段句首内容“第二天,他们发现自己面临着寻找水的紧迫问题。”可知,第一段可以描写他们寻找水的艰难过程和面临的其它挑战。
②由第二段句首内容“当他们看到一辆粗犷的车辆驶近时,疲惫的脸上顿时松了一口气。”可知,第二段可以描写他们获救的过程和感悟。
2.续写线索:面临缺水—寻找水源—找到—看到汽车—获救—感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①使耗尽:drain/exhaust
②放弃:give up/waive
③出现:emerge/appear
情绪类
①可怕的:frightful/terrifying
②疲倦的:weary/tired
【点睛】【高分句型1】They were about to give up when they heard a small sound, a splash of some sort.( 运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】However, with time passing by, more challenges emerged -limited food, frightful night filled with wilderness sounds, and the uncertainty of survival in the wild.( 运用了with time passing by的with复合结构)
【高分句型3】The emotions that played across their faces - disbelief, gratitude, and overwhelming joy- mirrored the shared trouble that had forged a deep bond among them. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
8.(2024·湖南益阳·三模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Rudi Gonsalves could barely contain his excitement as he sped downhill. It was the first day of his holiday in the Romanian ski resort of Poiana Brasov and he was 6,000 feet up one of its highest mountains, breathing in the cleanest air.
Weather and snow conditions were perfect. An experienced skier, he tackled the difficult “black” run with ease, knees gently bent to meet the uneven surface of the snow.
Rudi, a part-time youth worker from Epsom Downs, Surrey, regularly booked a winter holiday with his wife Sue. But Sue was scared of heights and could not overcome her sense of foreboding as the skiing season approached.
So this time Rudi, a keen sportsman and fit for his 57 years, had come alone.
As he snaked his way down the mountain on that March afternoon last year, snowflakes began to fall—lightly at first, then more heavily until the clouds blotted out the sun entirely, transforming everything into a ghostly whiteness.
He could just make out other skiers descending the slopes as fast as they could. I’d better stay close to them for safety, he decided. This could be tricky.
Straining to see ahead, Rudi was only vaguely aware of a looming outline lumbering up the mountain.
“Did anyone see me fall Where am I ”
He looked around him, trying to get his bearings, but in every direction there was only the same vast whiteness.
Then he took out his gold watch, a treasured present from his wife. It not only told him the time, 1.54pm, it also seemed to give him strength.
It was getting dark when Rudi finally gave up his attempt to scale the mountain and decided to head downhill instead. He knew it would mean moving away from the best route back to his hotel, but there seemed to be no alternative.
Despair began to dog Rudi as he faced up to the reality of spending a night in the open. It was 5.30 pm and the temperature was dropping fast. He began to shiver, his teeth chattering uncontrollably. He felt very alone.
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After three hours he was very tired, colder than he had ever felt.
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【范文】参考范文:
After three hours he was very tired, colder than he had ever felt. Hunger and thirst wore away his stomach. Using a ski as a spade, he spent half an hour scraping away the snow beneath the branch until he reached the drier soil below. To protect himself further, he used the dislodged snow to build walls for his new home. Then he stabbed around with his ski pole, collecting fallen branches for a fire and burning his two spare hats and all his Romanian paper money to kindle the flames. He didn’t dare fall asleep for fear that he might never wake up. For six hours he sat listening, hoping to hear someone calling him or to see some lights, until, dizzy and exhausted, he collapsed on to a well-used country lane.
He was barely aware of two horses drawing a wagon along the lane towards him. A weather-beaten driver loaded him into the cart and took him to his farmhouse. There Rudi, drifting in and out of consciousness, felt himself being lifted out by farm workers. But even when someone cut away his ski boots and socks, he could not feel his hands or feet. The Romanians could see that his toes and fingers were black from frost-bite. His rescuers revived him with three bowls of milk. “You saved my life,” he managed to say, his speech slow and painful. The farmer, who understood more English than he could speak, nodded and grinned, before driving him to his hotel, which was about 45 miles away. Rudi knew it was more than luck and a stranger’s kindness
that kept him alive through the dilemma.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Rudi Gonsalves在滑雪的时候迷了路,不得不在户外过夜。下午5点半,气温下降得很快。他开始发抖,牙齿控制不住地打颤。他感到非常孤独。正当他感到绝望的时候,一个饱经风霜的车夫发现了他,救了他。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“三个小时后,他感到非常疲倦,感到前所未有的寒冷”可知,第一段可描写Rudi在户外求生的过程以及Rudi的感受。
②由第二段首句内容“他几乎没有意识到两匹马拉着一辆马车沿着小路向他走来”可知,第二段可描写Rudi被农夫搭救,最终回到了酒店。
2.续写线索:感到寒冷——采取措施保护自己——生火保暖——车夫发现Rudi——Rudi被救——Rudi感谢——Rudi感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①建造:build/construct
②保护:protect/guard
③醒来:wake up /awake
情绪类
①疲惫:exhausted/tired
②失去意识:out of consciousness / unconscious
【点睛】[高分句型1] But even when someone cut away his ski boots and socks, he could not feel his hands or feet. (运用了when引导时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Rudi knew it was more than luck and a stranger’s kindness that kept him alive through the dilemma. (运用了省略that的宾语从句和强调句)
9.(2024·湖南常德·一模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Brandon, a father of two and an ordinary worker in a company, was making his way home on a typical Thursday evening. The sun had just dipped below the horizon, casting a warm glow over the sky. Brandon’s heart was filled with joy and excitement as he was eager to share the news of his recent promotion with his beloved wife and children. Little did he know that this particular Thursday would be anything but ordinary. All of a sudden, there was a faint ominous (不祥的)
feeling around him, but he pushed aside any thoughts of potential danger, focusing instead on getting home. However, just as he arrived there, a thunderous noise shattered the peaceful silence of the evening. He looked up just in time to see a train running into a truck, sending debris flying in all directions.
It was an accident that he had never witnessed before. Brandon was frozen in shock. It was a messy scene as people ran from the dangerous site, hidden behind flames and thick smoke. In an instant, everything around him seemed to be in chaos. People were screaming and cracks filled the air with the explosive force. “Get away from that train! Don’t go near it!” warned the train conductor, as he called 911 for help. Brandon was about to run away when he heard a cry for help. Brandon’s instincts kicked in. Without a second thought, he raced towards the voice, pushing through the panicked crowd. His heart pounded in the chest as he approached the crash site. As he came closer, the cries for help became clearer. They were coming from the burning truck stuck on the train tracks. He ran up to the window and saw the young driver trapped in his seatbelt and held down by the steering wheel as the fire closed in around him.
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Brandon’s mind was racing when he saw the situation.
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【范文】One possible version:
Brandon’s mind was racing when he saw the situation. Thoughts of his family flashed through his mind as he realized if he did the rescue, he would put his life at risk. Brandon took a deep breath and stepped back. Suddenly a sense of guilt washed over him at the sight of the trapped man. Brandon knew he had to act. He reached through the window, ignoring the pain from the burn on the hands. He tried to untie the seatbelt and helped the panicked young man break away from the steering wheel. Thankfully, the train conductor and some crew members were now rushing over to assist. Together, they managed to pull the young man out through the broken window and to safety. What a great relief to everyone at the crash site!
The train conductor came to Brandon and hugged him tightly. The conductor put his arms around Brandon, leading him away from the chaos. “You just saved more than one life. Your action is a great example of the value of bravery. You’re a true hero. What you did brought warmth to our hearts and tears to our eyes.” All of a sudden, thunderous applause burst out from the crowds. Brandon looked at the conductor, a mixture of emotions sweeping across his face. In his eyes, he just did what a responsible citizen should do. He was not a hero, and all he could think about was getting home to his family. He had news to share, and now he had a story to tell about how an ordinary man had done something extraordinary.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了Brandon作为一名普通公司员工和两个孩子的父亲,在回家的路上目睹了一场车祸,火车撞上了一辆卡车并发生爆炸。混乱中,他听到了呼救声,没有犹豫地冲向危险现场,发现一名年轻司机被困在燃烧的卡车内,大火正在向他逼近。
【详解】1. 段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当Brandon看到这种情况时,他的头脑飞快地转动着”可知,第一段可描写Brandon内心在权衡到底是救人还是赶紧离开,以及他决定采取行动,开始营救这名司机,并把司机送到安全的地方。
②由第二段首句内容“列车员走到Brandon跟前,紧紧地拥抱了他”可知,第二段可描写列车员赞扬Brandon的英勇行为,以及Brandon内心觉得自己只是尽到了一个负责的公民应该做的事。
2. 续写线索:Brandon的头脑转动——Brandon内心权衡——Brandon开始营救——列车员拥抱Brandon——列车员赞扬Brandon——Brandon的感受
3. 词汇激活
行为类
①意识到:realize/recognize/be aware of
②行动:act/take action
③忽略:ignore/neglect/disregard
④冲,奔:rush/run/dash
⑤帮忙:assist/help
情绪类
①愧疚:guilt/guiltiness
②惊慌的:panicked/frightened
③宽慰:relief/comfort
【点睛】[高分句型1] Thoughts of his family flashed through his mind as he realized if he did the rescue, he would put his life at risk. (运用了as引导时间状语从句、省略了引导词that的宾语从句和if引导条件状语从句)
[高分句型2] What you did brought warmth to our hearts and tears to our eyes. (运用了What引导的主语从句)
[高分句型3] Brandon looked at the conductor, a mixture of emotions sweeping across his face. (运用了独立主格结构作状语)
10.(2024·黑龙江·二模)阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I am an outdoor lover and I’ve made it a routine to explore different regions annually with a friend during our vacation. This year, in addition to beauty of nature, I’ve experienced something more.
It was late afternoon. A few hours before sunset, Darcy and I decided to hike to Acomat Falls, hidden in the rainforest.
Expecting to spend no more than an hour at the falls, we wore T-shirts and swimsuits and hadn’t told anyone where we were going. After crossing the wide river at a shallow spot and walking upstream about 100 yards, we reached the falls at around 4 pm. We dived into the green pool and floated on our backs, amazed at the canyon(峡谷) walls.
By 4:30, Darcy reminded me that we needed to head back to the car before dark, but I was waist-deep in the river trying to photograph the falls, the hanging vines(葡萄藤), and the
dreaminess of the place. Darcy had to wait on a stone. I finally took a good photo—and then she screamed.
With a crack like thunder, a violent wall of water rushed over the falls, turning the dreamy swimming pool into a churning(旋涡的) monster. Flash flood! I jumped out of the river seconds before the flood crashed over the spot where I’d just been standing. Darcy climbed barefoot off toward higher ground. Darcy and I climbed up the canyon on all fours, grabbing vines to pull ourselves up. I looked over my shoulder and saw that the water had risen 20 feet in less than a minute.
Darcy led us through the dense bush, prickly trees, and ankle-deep mud. After we’d climbed 200 feet, we stopped to catch our breath. Now we had a different problem: The road was on the other side of the swollen river. We were stuck in the forested mountain.
We had no rain jackets and were exhausted from the climb. Darcy asked if I had my phone. It was soaking wet, but still blinked on. No service. We decided to move toward higher ground to get a better signal. It was almost dark. For a moment, I got through, and I heard the faint voice of Grace, our rental host. She said she’d call for help. Then the phone went silent—no signal again.
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It seemed that we were in a desperate situation.
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Trapped there, we wondered whether and how rescuers could find us.
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【范文】One possible version:
It seemed that we were in a desperate situation. Guilt came crowding in, and I felt I was to blame for this. With my head lowered, I murmured, “Sorry, it was my fault.” Darcy was busy finding a shelter for us. Hearing this, she turned around and threw her arms around me, “Don’t be silly. I’m counting on your ‘smart’ phone to save me.” With a smile, I collected myself and assisted Darcy in finding a hiding place. Never before had I been so thankful for having Darcy as my travelling companion. To stay alert during the night, Darcy suggested looking through photos I had taken and sure enough, I dialed Grace’s phone number again and again.
Trapped there, we wondered whether and how rescuers could find us. Eventually, we saw faint lights across the canyon. My heart nearly burst out of my body, and we felt like the angel coming. It must be the rescuers’ light! I rose to my feet and made all my efforts to wave and scream. But it seemed useless. Suddenly, it occurred to me that I could turn on the flashlight of the cellphone as a signal. It worked! The rescuers responded to us by flashing the lights. At that moment, Darcy and I gave each other a heartfelt smile. I knew the real angel was standing by my side!
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者与好友Darcy在一次户外探险中意外遭遇洪水,并在绝望中通过智慧和勇气最终获得救援的经历。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“我们似乎处于绝望的境地。”以及第二段首句内容“我们被困在那里,不知道救援人员能否以及如何找到我们。”可知,第一段可描写作者的内心非常愧疚,觉得是自己造成了这一切。
②由第二段首句内容“我们被困在那里,不知道救援人员能否以及如何找到我们。”可知,第二段可描写作者和Darcy成功获救。
2.续写线索:作者是一个户外运动爱好者,每年都会探索不同的地区——一天,作者和好友Darcy一起徒步前往一个瀑布——她们并未告知任何人就出发了——作者和Darcy欣赏了宏伟的瀑布,作者也拍到了想拍的照片——然而,突然洪水爆发了,作者和Darcy被困在了山上——作者和Darcy前往较高的地方,手机也有了微弱的信号——作者向房东拨出了求救电话,手机又再次失去了信号——作者很愧疚,Darcy则安慰作者——救援人员终于找到了两人,两人也成功获救
3.词汇激活
行为类
①忙于做某事:be busy doing/be engaged in
②指望:count on/depend on
③建议:suggest/advise
情绪类
①感激的:thankful/grateful
②衷心的:heartfelt/sincere
【点睛】【高分句型1】Suddenly, it occurred to me that I could turn on the flashlight of the cellphone as a signal.(运用了that引导的主语从句)
【高分句型2】I knew the real angel was standing by my side!(运用了省略引导词的宾语从句)