福建专用2024年中考英语必考题型模拟试题：书面表达（含解析）

2024年中考英语必考题型模拟试题：书面表达（福建专用）
1．（2024·福建三明·统考一模）汉语在国际交往中发挥着越来越重要的作用，学习和研究汉语的人也越来越多。你的英国朋友 Anna 的学校即将开设特色选修课程，她在考虑是否选修汉语，来信询问你的建议。假设你是李华，请你根据以下提示给她写封回信。
注意事项：
1.必须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3.信中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名；
4.词数80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
2．（2024·福建南平·统考一模）新课标对学生的英语课外阅读提出了更高的要求，培养阅读习惯变得更为重要。目前，许多中学生课外阅读量很少。请你结合以下表格提示，写一篇英语短文，对这一现状进行分析并提出合理的建议。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons.
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3．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级统考期末）学校近期举办了研学活动（social practice)。你的外国笔友Henry想了解此次研学情况，假如你是李华，请根据以下提示用英文给他写封信，分享你的活动经历及收获，词数80左右。
参考词汇：labor(劳动)；campfire(篝火)
注意事项：
1.必须包含提示内容，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。
Dear Henry,
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
4．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级统考期末）假定你是李华，在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中，你打算参加以“Science Technology Has Improved My English”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示，分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
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Thank you for your listening.
5．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级统考期末）为响应“双减”政策，丰富校园生活，展现学生活力，你校开展形式多样、内容丰富的“School Club Day”社团活动。学生们积极参与，乐在其中。请根据以下图表，写一篇英文报道向校英语报投稿，介绍本次社团活动展示日的情况及同学们的感受。词数80左右。
Time December 29th, 2023
Place School playground
Activities * Singing Competition * Cooking Show NEWS Activities * Sports Games * ……
Feeling * Learning by doing * Having fun Feeling * Relaxing * ……
注意事项：
（1）必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入词数；
（2）表达通顺，意思清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
The School Club Day
With the double reduction policy, our school
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6．（2024上·福建龙岩·九年级统考期末）假定你是某外国语学校的一名学生，你们学校准备举办“校园科技创意大赛”，你设计了一款“语言学习助手机器人”的作品参赛。请你根据下表内容，用英语写一篇短文来介绍你的作品。词数80左右。
Name ...
Look ...
Functions read English news communicate in English correct spelling, pronunciation, grammar and so on ...
要求：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息、可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my new invention.
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7．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级统考期末）作家列夫·托尔斯泰曾说过：“梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想，就没有坚定的方向；没有方向，就没有生活。”作为新时代的青少年，你的梦想是什么呢？某英文报社正在举办题为“My Dream”的征文活动，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文。词数80左右。
What are you going to be in the future What makes you have the dream (Give two reasons) What are you going to do to realize your dream (More than two plans)
参考词汇： interest, curious (好奇的), patient, active, study hard, practice, stick to…
注意事项：
1. 必须包含提示信息，可参考以上词汇并适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors.
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8．（2024上·福建厦门·九年级统考期末）相信在初中阶段的学习与生活中，成功或失败的经历都促进了你的成长。你校英文报刊正在举办主题为“成长路上的我”的征文活动，请你从以下1、2两个征稿要求中任选一个，写一篇文章投稿。词数80左右。
注意事项：
请勿在文章中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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9．（2024上·福建泉州·九年级校联考期末）学校举办”My Homework, My Idea”的英语演讲比赛，号召同学们畅想自己喜欢的英语课后作业。假定你是李华，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇演讲稿参赛。词数80左右。
Content Purpose Advantage
Leam an English song To sing it in class Learn more words
Draw a mind map To review one’s English notes …
… … …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. __________________________________________________________________________
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10．（2023上·福建宁德·九年级校联考期中）为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以“How to be a good learner ”为题的征文比赛活动，请写一短文谈谈你的看法。
内容提示：
培养好习惯，学好方法：
1. 课前预习，课堂做笔记，课后复习。
2. 积极参与小组学习，互相帮助。
3. 利用课余时间多读书。
4. 遇到问题，及时向他人寻求帮助。
5. 学生要努力学习，但也要注重身体健康。
注意：
1. 短文应包括所有要点，要点顺序可以自己安排，词数80-100词左右；
2. 语句通顺、连贯，能表达自己的真实思想。
How to Be a Good Learner
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11．（2023上·福建福州·九年级福州三牧中学校考期中）现在，越来越多的人们开始加入提倡低碳生活的行列，并为营造低碳生活作着贡献。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示，以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life ”为题，写一篇“低碳生活”的英语演讲稿。
注意：词数：90词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：一次性的disposable
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
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In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening.
12．（2023上·福建厦门·九年级厦门一中校考期中）在我们的生活中，总会有某一个人、某一件事或是某一个物件，带给我们幸福和快乐，是我们成长道路上的小太阳，照耀着我们、温暖着我们。而我们也正因为遇到的那个人、经历的那件事或是拥有的那个物件，而成为更好、更快乐的自己。请你以“__________ Brought me Happiness”为题，用英文写一篇短文，谈谈是什么带给你幸福、快乐，为什么他/它带给了你幸福和快乐以及你自己的感受。
要求：
1. 不能出现真实的校名、人名等相关信息；
2. 注意紧扣主题，内容完整，意思连贯，符合逻辑，书写整齐；
3. 词数不少于80词。
__________ Brought me Happiness
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参考答案：
1．Possible versions：
Dear Anna,
I’m so glad to hear from you. Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course. Chinese is spoken by the most people in the world. With the development of China, Chinese is becoming more and more popular. Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.
In my opinion, there are many ways to learn Chinese. It’s useful to read Chinese books and listen to Chinese songs. What’s more, you are supposed to join a Chinese club to practice your spoken Chinese. Learning is a lifelong journey. Keep practicing every day, then it will bring something new.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，给出相应的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
hear from收到……的信
suggest建议
not only…but also…不仅……而且……
communicate交流
admire欣赏
be supposed to应该
[高分句型]
Knowing you have an interest in Chinese, I suggest you choose the Chinese course.(省略that的宾语从句)
Learning Chinese is not only a way to communicate, but also a chance to admire Chinese culture.（动名词作主语）
2．例文
At present many students do little reading after class. Here are several reasons. First of all, most students have too much homework to do. Some students haven’t developed reading habit. They prefer to spend their free time watching TV or the Internet.
However, reading actually has many advantages. It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our thinking, but also make our lives more colorful.
Here are my suggestions to share with everyone. We can form reading groups, read whole English books together, and then share our reading experiences with each other. Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因并提出合理的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍许多中学生课外阅读量很少的原因；
第二步，介绍阅读的好处；
第三步，介绍自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②prefer to do更喜欢做某事
③share sth. with sb.和某人分享某物
[高分句型]
①It can not only increase our knowledge, improve our thinking, but also make our lives more colorful. (not only...but also结构)
②Let’s start reading today and enjoy the fun of reading! (祈使句)
3．例文
Dear Henry,
I’m glad to tell you something about my social practice. We went to Guangming Farm and stayed there from March 16th to 18th. During that time, I had great fun. I picked some tea leaves and made some tea with the help of the farmers. I cooked some food with my classmates. It tasted pretty good. The most exciting thing was to play games in teams. At night, we sat around a campfire, singing and dancing. I’ve learnt a lot from the social practice. It not only develops my love for labor but also improves my labor skills. Besides, I think teamwork is very important.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍研学活动的相关信息”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明要介绍研学活动。
第二步，详细介绍研学的过程等信息。
第三步，收尾，并期待对方的来信。
[亮点词汇]
①from…to从……到
②have fun玩得开心
[高分句型]
①It not only develops my love for labor but also improves my labor skills.（使用了not only…but also句型）
②Besides, I think teamwork is very important.（宾语从句）
4．例文
Dear friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I didn’t remember English words. I couldn’t understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science technology, my English has improved. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己曾经遇到的困难及解决方法；
第三步，书写结语，感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of...在……的帮助下
②look up查阅
③thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient. (宾语从句)
5．例文
The School Club Day
With the Double reduction policy, our school had a School Club Day on December 29th, 2023 on the school playground. There were various forms of activities like the Singing Competition, the Cooking Show, Sports Games and so on. Most of us took part in the activities and we had a happy day.
The School Club Day was a great success. Through those activities, everyone could learn a lot and have fun. Also, it’s a good way for us to relax. What’s more, it offered a good chance to show our interests and talents. We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：材料所给内容需完整表达，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍学校社团展示日的时间、地点、活动项目等；
第二步，描述学生参加活动后的感受；
第三步，表达希望有更多活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①various forms各种形式
②take part in参加
③have fun玩得高兴
[高分句型]
①Most of us took part in the activities and we had a happy day.（并列复合句）
②We hope there will be more colorful activities in our school.（宾语从句）
6．例文
Hello, everyone! I’m glad to introduce my new invention. I give it the name Yingwu because I hope it can speak as well as a parrot. It looks like a lovely baby. It’s not tall but a little fat.
Yingwu can do many things. For example, it can not only read English news for people but also communicate with users in English. Besides, it can correct learners’ spelling, pronunciation and grammar mistakes. It can also search English songs or movies for you.
In a word, my invention will be able to improve your listening, speaking, reading and writing. Is it wonderful
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意文章要包含所有的提示功能，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题。介绍“语言学习助手机器人”的名字和外观；
第二步，具体阐述“语言学习助手机器人”的功能；
第三步，书写结语。说明你的发明能够提高人们的听、说、读、写能力。
[亮点词汇]
①look like看起来像
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
③besides此外
④in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①I give it the name Yingwu because I hope it can speak as well as a parrot.（原因状语从句，宾语从句）
7．例文
My Dream
Dreams are different from person to person. Some people want to be writers, while others want to be doctors. As for me, I have a dream that one day I will be a scientist. Here are some reasons.
For one reason, I prefer science to other subjects. It is my favorite subject at school. For another, I am curious and I love exploring the unknown. I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future.
To realize my dream, I am going to study hard to enter a university to learn more about science. What’s more, I’ll make full use of my spare time to read different kinds of books and obtain more knowledge. As the saying goes, “Roman was not built in a day.” I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is.
I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍你的梦想，从而引出话题；
第二步，陈述你的理由，至少两点；
第三步，介绍为实现梦想将会如何做；
第四步，书写总结：I am sure that my dream will come true one day.
［亮点词汇］
① make full use of 充分利用
② what’s more 另外
③ realize one’s dream 实现梦想
［高分句型］
① I am excited about the things that will be discovered in the future. (that引导定语从句)
② I will stick to my dream no matter how difficult it is. (no matter how引导让步状语从句)
8．例文：
Through Success, I Grow
The road to success is difficult, but we can grow step by step through success. This is what I learned from my own experience.
I used to be really shy and silent in my class. I like music. Then I took up singing and joined a singing club. I always practiced singing with my club members. Gradually I dared to sing in front of them. At the end of that term, I took part in a singing competition and won a prize. I got a strong feeling of satisfaction and I found myself more outgoing and confident than before.
This experience helped me to realize that nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it. Success really helps me grow up.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描述经历用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明自己的体会；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍自己的经历；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的体会与感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①the road to success成功之路
②step by step一步接着一步，循序渐进
③gradually逐渐地
④satisfaction满足
[高分句型]
①This experience helped me to realize that nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it. (条件状语从句)
9．例文
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. I have many good ideas about creative English homework because English is my favorite subject.
Firstly, we can learn to sing an English song and sing it in class. In this way, we can learn more words. Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. Thirdly, it’s also proud of us to make a video to introduce our traditional Chinese culture in English. We can post it online so that more foreigners can know about our great country. I hope we can have more creative English homework.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出“我的作业，我的想法”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课后作业内容、目的、好处”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达”感谢聆听“。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of骄傲
②make a video制作视频
③introduce介绍
[高分句型]
①Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope we can have more creative English homework.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．例文
How to Be a Good Learner
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to preview the day’s lessons before class, take notes carefully in class and review what we have learnt after class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材： 本文是一封征文；
②时态： 时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示： 写作要点已给出，考生应注意避免“信息遗漏”，根据要点介绍如何成为一名优秀的学习者。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍好的学习习惯的重要性，引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据要点介绍如何成为一名优秀的学习者；
第三步，书写结语。表达期待这些方法能帮助同学们。
[亮点词汇]
① preview 预习
② take notes 记笔记
③ ask sb for help 向某人寻求帮助
④ keep healthy 保持健康
[高分句型]
① We need to preview the day’s lessons before class, take notes carefully in class and review what we have learnt after class. (what引导的宾语从句）
② If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. (if引导的条件状语从句）
11．例文：
What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. It’s nice to speak about what we can do to live a low-carbon life and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
First, we should plant more trees instead of cutting down trees, because trees can not only stop the wind from blowing the earth away but also prevent the water from washing the earth away. Second, when we go out or travel a short distance, we had better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car. Third, we ought to save water and electricity. For example, when we leave the room, we should turn off the light. We should also turn off the tap in time after washing hands. Last, we ought to take a cloth bag when we go shopping. We shouldn’t use disposable chopsticks. We had better recycle waste paper and drink bottles.
In fact, even the simplest everyday activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求以“What Can We Do to Live a Low-carbon Life ”为题，按照所给提示，完善有关如何过低碳生活的演讲稿，考生应注意不要遗漏所有要点，可适当添加细节，使作文意思连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出；
第二步，详细讲述过低碳生活的具体表现——植树造林、绿色出行、节能环保等；
第三步，结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
① instead of 代替
② not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
③ blow sth. away 把某物吹走
④ stop...from doing sth. 阻止……做某事
⑤ had better do sth. 最好做某事
⑥ ought to do sth. 应该做某事
⑦ turn off 关闭
[高分句型]
① First, we should plant more trees instead of cutting down trees, because trees can not only stop the wind from blowing the earth away but also prevent the water from washing the earth away.（because引导原因状语从句）
② Second, when we go out or travel a short distance, we had better walk or ride a bike instead of taking a car.（when引导时间状语从句）
12．例文
A Kite Brought me Happiness
A kite my mom gave to me is the most precious gift which brought me happiness. You probably wonder why a kite was able to bring me happiness. Let me share the story with you.
When I was a little girl, my mom was so busy with her work and could hardly spend time playing with me. Because of this, I always felt lonely and sad. One day, my mom rushed home with a kite. It was just a simple kite made of bamboo and plastic, but it was painted with a drawing of my favorite cartoon character. And surprisingly, my mom took me to the nearest park and spent the whole afternoon flying the kite with me. I never thought that something as simple as kite flying could be so exciting. And I jumped up and down happily when the kite flew higher and higher. That was an afternoon I won’t forget.
On the way home, my mom told me that she felt sorry about having little time to be with me, and she hoped that the kite would remind me of the time we enjoyed together. Although my mom was still busy after that, I felt much happier and every time my friends expressed their love for my kite, I would proudly tell them my mom bought it to me.
The kite is still hanging on the wall of my room. It really brought me the happiness in the past, and it still gives me the same feeling.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”、“一般过去时”和“现在进行时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中是什么带给自己幸福、快乐，他/它带给了自己幸福和快乐的原因以及自己的感受的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍是什么带给自己幸福、快乐；
第二步，具体介绍他/它带给了自己幸福和快乐的原因；
第三步，谈一谈自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① because of因为，由于
② on the way home在回家的路上
③ jumped up and down happily高兴地跳上跳下
④ felt much happier感觉更快乐了
[高分句型]
① A kite my mom gave to me is the most precious gift which brought me happiness.（which引导定语从句）
② You probably wonder why a kite was able to bring me happiness.（wonder+宾语从句）
③ And I jumped up and down happily when the kite flew higher and higher.（when引导时间状语从句）