-2024年九年级英语全册重难考点提升训练满分必会作文分类精练六大类（原卷版+解析版）

满分必会作文分类精练六大类-2024年九年级英语全册重难考点提升训练原卷版（人教版）
Unit 1 How can we become good learners
满分必会作文分类精练
一、材料作文
1．世界本无完美，人人都有优点更有不足。请作为中学生的你，从学习的角度出发谈一谈自己擅长的科目和可以进步的科目，并给自己一些鼓励吧。
提示：
1. What subject are you good at and why can you learn it well
2. What subject are you weak in and how can you improve it
3. Say something to encourage yourself.
提示词：listen to the teacher; take notes; do the homework fully; ask…for help; try one’s best; do well in
要求：
1. 不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
2. 字迹工整，语句通顺，条理清晰。
3. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I study many subjects at school. Of all the subjects,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．以“How to learn English”为题写一篇80-100词左右的作文。文章开头部分已给出。注意包括以下要点：
1.听说能力：通过用英语和朋友进行对话；多看英文节目，多听磁带。
2.读写能力：多读英文书；读英文书的好处；提高阅读速度的方法：快读理解大意，按意群读，不要一个词一个词得读，通过查看单词前后句子猜测词意，必要时可以查字典；坚持写日记。
How to learn English
There are four key points to study English: listening, speaking, reading and writing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
3．假设某英文网站举办征文比赛，请根据要点以“How to Make Small Talk”为题写一篇征文。
要点：
闲聊的优点 1. 促进理解； 2. 打破沉默； 3. 消磨时间 ……
如何闲聊 1. 保持微笑 …… 2. 避开私人话题…… 3. 以天气、爱好等话题切入……
要求：
1. 不少于80词；题目已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥。
How to Make Small Talk
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4．假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Lucy想学汉语，她发邮件请你给她一些学习汉语的建议。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 用汉语与朋友交流；
2. 通过观看电视节目学习汉语；
3. 通过做笔记学习语法等；
4. 大量练习是非常重要的。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4. 100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad to hear that you’d like to learn Chinese.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你们学校的英语学习小组组织大家就英语学习方法进行讨论，请你根据下面的提示内容写一篇发言稿，介绍一下你们组的学习方法或经验。
内容提示：⑴自己在课内外是如何学习英语的；
⑵在听、说、读、写四个方面有什么好的学习方法；
⑶自己总结出的好的学习方法或建议。
作文要求：⑴不能直接翻译提示内容；
⑵不能在作文中出现学校的真实名称和自己的真实姓名；
⑶语句连贯，词数80个左右，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
The best way to learn English is to use it often.
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Thank you for listening.
6．假如你是玲玲，你的好朋友梅梅在英语学习中遇到了一些麻烦，她写信向你寻求帮助。请根据下面要点提示，给梅梅写一封回信，给她介绍一些学好英语的方法。
内容提示：
1. speak English as much as possible;
2. listen to English songs;
3. read English stories;
4. write to English pen friends;
...
注意：（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
（3）词数：不得少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Meimei,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Lingling
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice. I hope my advice can help you.
7．假如你叫李平，前不久你和来自英国的一位中学生汤姆起讨论了一个话题：The Ways to Learn English Better。现在请你根据他和你的观点，给外籍老师苏姗写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
注意：
1.开头已写好，可根据讨论主题适当发挥；
2.所写内容必须包括表格中的他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点；
3.词数不少于80词。
Dear Susan,
Recently I’ve had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Tom, a student from Britain.
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8．假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题 向英语老师提出的建议
1. 生词多，记忆有难度； 2. 课文长，难弄懂； 3. …… 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法； 2. 教课文时读慢一些； 3. ……
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Na
9．假如你是某中学生英语报刊的知心栏目负责人Sam，你收到一名学生Lily的来信，请你根据信件内容及所给提示，给出建议。
Dear Sam, I am a grade 9 student. I often stay up late to complete my homework. In this way, I feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class. As a result, I can’t get good scores and I don’t have my personal time to relax myself. This makes me feel stressed and unhappy. What should I do Yours, Lily
内容提示：
（1）不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好；
（2）合理安排时间，尽可能在学校多完成作业；
（3）周末适当放松，通过运动锻炼缓解压力；
（4）……（提出一个你的建议）
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语句通顺；
（2）要点必须包括上文所有信息并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Yours,
Sam
10．假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Mike 最近对中文很感兴趣，写信向你询问如何学好中文。请你根据以下提示内容，给他写一封回信。
提示：
How to learn Chinese well
1 read Chinese newspapers and magazines
2 listen to Chinese songs
3 speak Chinese as much as possible
4 keep a Chinese diary
注意：1. 内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
11．很多同学因为词汇量少而感觉英语学习很吃力，你是怎样记单词的呢？你知道哪些记单词的好方法？
请你以“How to remember English words”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求：条理清楚，表达顺畅，无语法错误。
How to remember English words
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12．最近，你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状（结果见下面图表）。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈你的看法和建议。
注意：
1. 文章必须包括图表中四项内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 看法和建议至少两条；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；
4. 词数：80-100。
参考词汇：背诵 recite
I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________满分必会作文分类精练六大类-2024年九年级英语全册重难考点提升训练解析版（人教版）
Unit 1 How can we become good learners
满分必会作文分类精练（六大类）
一、材料作文
1．世界本无完美，人人都有优点更有不足。请作为中学生的你，从学习的角度出发谈一谈自己擅长的科目和可以进步的科目，并给自己一些鼓励吧。
提示：
1. What subject are you good at and why can you learn it well
2. What subject are you weak in and how can you improve it
3. Say something to encourage yourself.
提示词：listen to the teacher; take notes; do the homework fully; ask…for help; try one’s best; do well in
要求：
1. 不要逐字逐句翻译，可适当发挥。
2. 字迹工整，语句通顺，条理清晰。
3. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
I study many subjects at school. Of all the subjects,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
I study many subjects at school. Of all the subjects, I’m good at English. Why can I learn English well Because I think English is important and interesting. I always have fun in English classes. But I’m a little weak in maths. To learn maths well, I will listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class. I will do the homework carefully. If I have some problems in maths, I will ask my teacher for help. I believe if I try my best, I will do better in maths.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出对自己擅长科目的介绍；
第二步，介绍为什么你能学好以及自己的弱项；
第三步，介绍如何提高并鼓励自己。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②have fun玩得开心
③be weak in不擅长
[高分句型]
①To learn maths well, I will listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes in class.（不定式作目的状语）
②If I have some problems in maths, I will ask my teacher for help.（if引导的条件状语从句）
2．以“How to learn English”为题写一篇80-100词左右的作文。文章开头部分已给出。注意包括以下要点：
1.听说能力：通过用英语和朋友进行对话；多看英文节目，多听磁带。
2.读写能力：多读英文书；读英文书的好处；提高阅读速度的方法：快读理解大意，按意群读，不要一个词一个词得读，通过查看单词前后句子猜测词意，必要时可以查字典；坚持写日记。
How to learn English
There are four key points to study English: listening, speaking, reading and writing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
How to learn English
There are four key points to study English: listening, speaking, reading and writing.
Firstly, we should talk with our friends in English. We should try to listen to all kinds of English programs as much as possible and listen to more English tapes. By doing this, we can improve our talking and listening skills.
Secondly, we should often read English books. Here is a way to improve our reading speed: When we read an article, we should quickly read the general idea, and read according to the meaning group. It is best not to read a word a word, by looking at the words before and after the sentence to guess the meaning of the word. If necessary, we can look it up in the dictionary. We should practice our writing skills. Whenever we have any idea, we should get the pen and write it down at once. Keeping a diary is a good way to practice writing.
In a word, as long as we do more listening, speaking, reading and writing, we will learn English well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意提示要点就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，尽量将提示的内容利用上，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，概括介绍学习英语的四个要点；
第二步，从听说能力方面介绍如何学英语；
第三步，从读写能力方面介绍如何学英语；
第四步，总结概括如何学好英语。
[亮点词汇]
①talk with sb.与某人交谈
②all kinds of各种各样的
③It is best not to do sth.最好不要做某事
④keep a diary写日记
⑤look up查找
⑥in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①When we read an article, we should quickly read the general idea, read according to the meaning group.当我们阅读一篇文章时，我们应该快速阅读大意，根据意思群阅读。(when引导的时间状语从句)
②If necessary, we can look it up in the dictionary. 如果有必要，我们可以查字典。(if引导的条件状语从句)
3．假设某英文网站举办征文比赛，请根据要点以“How to Make Small Talk”为题写一篇征文。
要点：
闲聊的优点 1. 促进理解； 2. 打破沉默； 3. 消磨时间 ……
如何闲聊 1. 保持微笑 …… 2. 避开私人话题…… 3. 以天气、爱好等话题切入……
要求：
1. 不少于80词；题目已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 可适当发挥。
How to Make Small Talk
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【参考范文】
How to Make Small Talk
In most English-speaking countries, it is normal and necessary to make small talk. Not only can small talk help us understand each other better, but also it can break the ice and kill time. So I think it is important to learn to make small talk.
To start with, it is a good idea to smile before you start small talk because it can make others think you are a friendly person. Secondly, in order not to make others uncomfortable, avoid personal topics, such as age, marriage, money. What’s more, you can start small talk with such topics as the weather and hobbies.
Small talk can be a big challenge, but a good preparation is what we need.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍闲聊的优点以及如何闲聊，可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍闲聊的优点；
第二步，根据提示要点介绍应该如何闲聊；
第三步，总结全文。
[写作要点]
①to start with首先
②in order not to do sth.为了不做某事
[高分句型]
①Not only can small talk help us understand each other better, but also it can break the ice and kill time.(倒装句)
②it is a good idea to smile before you start small talk because it can make others think you are a friendly person.(before引导的时间状语从句，because引导的原因状语从句)
二、电子邮件
4．假设你叫李华，你的美国笔友Lucy想学汉语，她发邮件请你给她一些学习汉语的建议。请你用英语写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 用汉语与朋友交流；
2. 通过观看电视节目学习汉语；
3. 通过做笔记学习语法等；
4. 大量练习是非常重要的。
要求：
1. 所写内容必须包括以上要点；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 内容连贯，并进行合理拓展；
4. 100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总分。
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad to hear that you’d like to learn Chinese.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Lucy,
Thanks for your e-mail. I’m glad to hear that you’d like to learn Chinese.
Learning a new language may be challenging, but I’m here to offer some tips to make it easier. One effective way to improve your language skills is to have conversations with others. I suggest you chat with friends in Chinese as much as possible to improve your speaking and listening abilities and build your confidence. Additionally, watching Chinese TV shows or movies can also help with your listening skills. When you are in class, I suggest you listen to the teacher carefully and take notes to learn Chinese grammar. Last, doing a lot of practice is very necessary because you need to go through what you have learned to further improve your Chinese.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”中“我给出的学习汉语的建议，即用汉语和朋友交流，看汉语节目，做笔记学习汉语，做大量练习”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“谢谢你的电子邮件。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“用汉语交谈，观看汉语节目，认真听讲以及做好笔记，多做练习”重点介绍学习汉语的方法；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望我的建议能帮助你。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① as much as possible尽可能多的
② a lot of许多
[高分句型]
① I suggest you chat with friends in Chinese as much as possible to improve your speaking and listening abilities and build your confidence.（省略that的宾语从句）
② When you are in class, I suggest you listen to the teacher carefully and take notes to learn Chinese grammar.（when引导的时间状语从句）
三、讲稿
5．假如你们学校的英语学习小组组织大家就英语学习方法进行讨论，请你根据下面的提示内容写一篇发言稿，介绍一下你们组的学习方法或经验。
内容提示：⑴自己在课内外是如何学习英语的；
⑵在听、说、读、写四个方面有什么好的学习方法；
⑶自己总结出的好的学习方法或建议。
作文要求：⑴不能直接翻译提示内容；
⑵不能在作文中出现学校的真实名称和自己的真实姓名；
⑶语句连贯，词数80个左右，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
The best way to learn English is to use it often.
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Thank you for listening.
【参考范文】
Dear friends,
The best way to learn English is to use it often. We try our best to use it in daily life, such as listening to English songs and watching English movies. Joining the English club is also a good way to practice spoken English. And we often talk with friends in English in our daily life. We also read English newspapers and magazines and keep an English diary every day. As for myself, I often write English letters or e-mails to my pen pals who live in foreign countries.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先承接短文开头；
第二步，然后具体介绍一下你们组的学习方法或经验；
第三步，最后介绍自己总结的学习方法。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
②talk with与……谈话
③English newspapers英文报纸
④live in住在
[高分句型]
①Joining the English club is also a good way to practice spoken English.（Joining the English club动名词作主语）
②As for myself, I often write English letters or e-mails to my pen pals who live in foreign countries.（who引导的定语从句）
四、书信作文
6．假如你是玲玲，你的好朋友梅梅在英语学习中遇到了一些麻烦，她写信向你寻求帮助。请根据下面要点提示，给梅梅写一封回信，给她介绍一些学好英语的方法。
内容提示：
1. speak English as much as possible;
2. listen to English songs;
3. read English stories;
4. write to English pen friends;
...
注意：（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
（3）词数：不得少于80（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Meimei,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice.
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I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Lingling
【参考范文】
Dear Meimei,
I’m glad to hear from you. In your letter, you ask me for advice about learning English. Now, let me give you some advice.
First, try to speak English as much as possible. Don’t be shy. You should always speak English in class. And then, listening to English songs and watching English movies are good ways to improve your English. Also, it’s a good idea to read some English stories. Try to guess the meanings of the new words. If you still don’t know the meanings, you can look them up in a dictionary. Then write downs these new words in your notebook. As for writing, I think you can find some English pen friends and write to them. Do you forget new words quickly If so, I suggest that you should read the new words every day and try to use them.
I hope my advice can help you.
Yours,
Lingling
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：结合要点提示来给梅梅介绍英语学习方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步：开头已给出，引出主题，准备给梅梅一些英语学习方法；
第二步：根据提示内容具体介绍英语学习方法；
第三步：表达心愿，希望这些方法能帮到梅梅。
[亮点词汇]
①look up 查阅
②write down 写下
③as for 置于
[高分句型]
①And then, listening to English songs and watching English movies are good ways to improve your English. (动名词作主语)
②If you still don’t know the meanings, you can look them up in a dictionary. (if引导条件状语从句)
7．假如你叫李平，前不久你和来自英国的一位中学生汤姆起讨论了一个话题：The Ways to Learn English Better。现在请你根据他和你的观点，给外籍老师苏姗写一篇关于这次讨论的汇报材料。
注意：
1.开头已写好，可根据讨论主题适当发挥；
2.所写内容必须包括表格中的他的观点和你自己的至少三个观点；
3.词数不少于80词。
Dear Susan,
Recently I’ve had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Tom, a student from Britain.
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【答案】Dear Susan,
Recently I’ve had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Tom, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with others in English as often as possible. Also, he believes watching English films can be helpful.
I quite agree with him. I think we can also study English on the Internet. Besides, looking for a penfriend from an English-speaking country is a good way for us to know more about his or her language and culture. Finally, keeping an English diary with the help of the dictionary is useful to improve written English. These are our ideas. Could you please give me more advice on how to learn English
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：注意要给出汤姆的观点，并自己写出至少3个观点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍汤姆学习英语的方法
第二步，具体阐述自己的想法；
第三步，最后希望苏珊给自己一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s opinion在某人看来
②as often as possible尽可能经常地
③agree with sb同意某人
④with the help of借助于
[高分句型]
①I think we can also study English on the Internet.（省略that的宾语从句）
②looking for a penfriend from an English-speaking country is a good way for us to know more about his or her language and culture.（动名词作主语）
8．假如你叫张娜，在光明中学读书，在学习英语的过程中你遇到了一些问题，想得到王老师的帮助并想给英语老师提一些建议，以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示，请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信，内容如下：
学习英语时遇到的问题 向英语老师提出的建议
1. 生词多，记忆有难度； 2. 课文长，难弄懂； 3. …… 1. 介绍一些学习英语的好方法； 2. 教课文时读慢一些； 3. ……
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数：不少于80词，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Na
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang,
My name is Zhang Na. I’m writing a letter to you to ask for some help. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to understand. What’s more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. Because of so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily And I hope you teach the text more slowly so that I can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.
Yours,
Zhang Na
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为求助信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏“要点”的“学习英语时遇到的问题”和“向英语老师提出的建议”，注意要点要齐全。
[写作步骤]
第一步，由于短文开头已给出，故接下来具体介绍自己学习英语时遇到的问题，围绕“单词、课文和语法”等方面展开；
第二步，向英语老师寻求帮助并提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“在老师帮助下能在英语学习上取得进步”的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①(be) full of充满
②too...to太……而不能
③What’s more除此之外还
④ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
⑤so that以便
[高分句型]
①First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember.（that引导的定语从句）
②Would like to give us some good advice to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily （so that引导状语从句）
③I’m sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help.（that引导宾语从句）
9．假如你是某中学生英语报刊的知心栏目负责人Sam，你收到一名学生Lily的来信，请你根据信件内容及所给提示，给出建议。
Dear Sam, I am a grade 9 student. I often stay up late to complete my homework. In this way, I feel tired during the daytime and fall asleep in class. As a result, I can’t get good scores and I don’t have my personal time to relax myself. This makes me feel stressed and unhappy. What should I do Yours, Lily
内容提示：
（1）不要熬夜，熬夜对身体健康不好；
（2）合理安排时间，尽可能在学校多完成作业；
（3）周末适当放松，通过运动锻炼缓解压力；
（4）……（提出一个你的建议）
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语句通顺；
（2）要点必须包括上文所有信息并适当发挥；
（3）词数：80 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you can get out of your problems soon.
Yours,
Sam
【参考范文】
Dear Lily,
What you said is common among some middle school students. Here are my suggestions for you.
I think you should change your ways of study. Don’t stay up late. Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss. You should arrange your time reasonably and finish your homework at school as much as possible. To keep healthy, you should go to bed early. Too much pressure is not good for your health and schoolwork. You should do something to lower your pressure. For example, you can take more exercise. You can listen to music.
Hope you can get out of your problems.
Yours,
Sam
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示内容已给出，要求我们作为某中学生英语报刊的知心栏目负责人Sam，给学生Lily写封回信。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明Lily的问题是很普遍的，然后给出建议；
第二步，具体描述各个建议；
第三步，总结，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up熬夜
②be bad for对……有害
③as much as possible尽可能
④listen to music听音乐
⑤get out of摆脱
[高分句型]
①I think you should change his ways of study.（“I think”后是宾语从句）
②Staying up late is bad for your health and will lead to memory loss.（动名词短语作主语）
10．假设你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Mike 最近对中文很感兴趣，写信向你询问如何学好中文。请你根据以下提示内容，给他写一封回信。
提示：
How to learn Chinese well
1 read Chinese newspapers and magazines
2 listen to Chinese songs
3 speak Chinese as much as possible
4 keep a Chinese diary
注意：1. 内容必须包含表格中所提供的所有信息，可适当发挥。
2. 词数：80词左右。开头和结尾部分已给出，不计入总词数。
3. 文中不能出现学生真实姓名和所在学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Mike,
I’m very glad to receive your letter. In your letter, you asked about how to learn Chinese well. Here are some suggestions for you.
First, you can read Chinese newspaper and magazine as much as possible. It will help you enrich your Chinese vocabulary. What’s more, listening to Chinese songs and try to sing them is also a good way of learning Chinese, which will let you get more familiar with the language. Besides, try your best to speak Chinese as much as possible. Only in this way can you improve your oral Chinese. Last but not least, it would be a good idea if you could keep a Chinese diary so that you can improve your writing skills.
All in all, I hope these suggestions will be helpful to you and wish you to make good progress in learning the language.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，以“How to learn Chinese well”为主题给Mike写一封建议信，书信内容要包括表格里所列要点。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第二人称来提建议，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时承接书信开头，接着点明写信目的是要给Mike提几个关于如何学好中文的建议；接下来按照提示要点依次列出建议；最后表示祝愿他能学好中文并结尾。在提建议时，使用多种提建议句式，避免单一句式的重复使用。
五、话题作文
11．很多同学因为词汇量少而感觉英语学习很吃力，你是怎样记单词的呢？你知道哪些记单词的好方法？
请你以“How to remember English words”为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
要求：条理清楚，表达顺畅，无语法错误。
How to remember English words
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【答案】参考范文
How to remember English words
Many students have trouble remembering English words. How can we remember them better and faster
I think a good way to remember words is to read them correctly. If you remember a word’s pronunciation, you’ll remember its spelling easily.
Another good method for remembering words is to use cards. You can write a word and give an example sentence on each card. Try to read the cards every day.
Practice makes perfect. You can’t remember words well unless you keep reading and using them.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文写作；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作主题已给出，注意围绕主题说明方法及原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明问题，点明主题；
第二步，具体阐述记单词的方法。
[亮点词汇]
① have trouble doing做某事有困难
② better and faster又好又快
③ try to do尽力做
[高分句型]
① If you remember a word’s pronunciation, you’ll remember its spelling easily.（条件状语从句）
② Practice makes perfect.（谚语）
③ You can’t remember words well unless you keep reading and using them.（条件状语从句）
六、看图作文
12．最近，你随机调查了你校50名同学的课外英语学习现状（结果见下面图表）。请你就此用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈你的看法和建议。
注意：
1. 文章必须包括图表中四项内容，可适当增加细节；
2. 看法和建议至少两条；
3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数，你只需接着写；
4. 词数：80-100。
参考词汇：背诵 recite
I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class.
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【参考范文】
I have recently done a survey about how students learn English out of class. Almost all students read and recite English words. They think vocabulary is the most important for English learning. More than 40 students do a lot of written exercises. Some students go over their notes they have taken in class. However, only a few students spend time practicing listening and speaking.
In my opinion, listening and speaking are the secrets of becoming a good language learner. We need to do lots of listening and speaking practice, such as watching English movies and listening to English songs. Also, chatting with foreigners can be helpful.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于看图作文。要求我们根据学校50名同学的课外英语学习现状，用英语写一篇短文，在英语课上进行汇报，并谈谈我们的看法和建议。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；本文是对当下学生学英语现状的阐述，已经给出了调查柱状图，注意图表中的各项内容；然后表达自己的观点，如进行听说训练等，并表明你持有此观点的理由。