Unit 11 Section B Writing 课件（新目标七下Unit 11 How was your school trip?）

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Unit 11 How was your school trip
Section B Writing
Pre-writing
on a bus
Where was Bob
What did Bob do
at a zoo
at a gift shop
Can you guess how Bob feels about this trip
talked with classmates
Look at some pictures of Bob’s school trip. Figure out where he went and what he did.
took photos of animals
bought a giraffe toy
He had a good time doing ....
He enjoyed doing...
Pre-writing
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really____________. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of ____________ and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the ____________ and bought some ____________. It was a great day.
interesting
gift shop
animals
gifts
3a. Look at the pictures of Bib’s school plete his diary entry.
Pre-writing
June 23rd
My school went to the zoo yesterday. The trip was__________. At the zoo, I _________________ but I didn’t like them. I also went to _________ with my classmates, but I didn’t buy anything because _____________________. It was a boring day.
gift shop
terrible
saw many anminals
they were so expensive
3b. Linda is Bob’s plete her diary entry.
How did Linda feel about the trip
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really great.
We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.
It was a great day.
Pre-writing
Tip 1 Format:
日期位于左上角或右上角，有时会加上星期。
How to write a diary about our school trip
Tuesday, June 23rd
Pre-writing
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really great.
We went there by bus.
At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.
It was a great day.
Beginning
Body
Activity
How many parts are there in each diary
Pre-writing
June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really great.
We went there by bus.
What are talked about in the beginning
Time
Destination
Feeling
Transportarion
Compare比较 the two beginnings. Which is better
Tip 2: 描述地点和交通方式时，增加细节，如：weather/time/your activities on the way。
We went there by bus.
The bus ride was never boring, because I talked with my classmates along the way.
Pre-writing
At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts.
Compare比较 the two body parts. Which is better
Tip 3: 对活动进行扩充，如：所学、感觉或者原因。
(1) I saw a lot of animals.
They were kind of expensive but I think my parents will like them.
(3) I bought some gifts for my family.
lovely
, such as pandas and koalas.
(2) I took some photos.
I took many photos of elephants, because they are my favorite animals.
Pre-writing
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really great.
......
It was a great day.
Tip 4: 首尾呼应，并且使用不同表达。
......
In a word
In short
Pracitce:
(1) 多么令人激动的一天啊！
(2) 那对我来说是一次非常激动人心的旅行。
(3) 我感觉累并快乐着。我将永远记住本次学校旅行。
(4) 本次旅行一点儿也不无聊。我希望能再来这个地方。
What an exciting day!
That was an exciting trip for me.
I felt tired but happy. I will always remeber this school trip.
This trip was not boring at all. I hope to come to this place again.
While-writing
某国际知名旅游网站正在进行征文活动。请你根据网站提出的问题，写一篇60~70词的英语短文，描述你的一次旅行经历。
Where did you go
What did you do there
How did you feel or what did you learn from it
Part I Beginning:
When/Where/How
Part II Body:
What did you do/see/learn
How did you feel
Why did you do that
Tip: 描述地点和交通方式时，增加细节。
Tip: 对活动进行扩充，如：所学、感觉或者原因。
Part III Ending:
Show your feeling again
Tip: 首尾呼应，并且使用不同表达。