2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达之应用文类型5(告知信) 假定你是晨光中学高三学生李华, 你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动, 你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris写一封信, 介绍相关情况, 内容包括:
1. 成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾等);
2. 对活动的感受;
3对自己未来的展望。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当加入细节, 以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇: 成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony
Step 1: 审题布局
人称 第一人称为主, 第二人称为辅
时态 一般现在时, 一般过去时
要点 1. 介绍成人礼活动内容 2. 成人礼活动感受
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们, 并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终伴随着我们的成长过程。
一般表达: We are all deeply moved by the ceremony and we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth from it.
句式升级(定语从句)
We are all deeply moved by the ceremony, from which we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth.
要点2: 我明白了成长的意义。
一般表达: I have understood the meaning of growing up.
句式升级(倒装句)
这就是我对成长的理解。
Such is my understanding about growing up.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you showed great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held in our school. The following is a brief introduction to the ceremony.
The ceremony was scheduled on June 8, during which we reviewed the past events. We are all deeply moved by the ceremony, from which we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth. We are determined to follow the examples of our excellent schoolmates and make ourselves useful to the whole society. Such is my understanding about growing up. What about yours
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的、原因等
①Delighted to learn that an important volleyball game will be launched in our school stadium, I’m writing to extend my excitement and inform you of some relevant information.
很高兴得知一场重要的排球比赛将在我们学校的体育场举行, 我写信是为了表达我的兴奋, 并告诉你一些相关的信息。
②I’m more than delighted to tell you that an international cultural festival is to be held in my city.
我非常高兴地告知你们国际文化节将在我市举行。
2. 篇中——详细介绍, 告知具体信息
①First and foremost, the competition to be held will begin at 2 p. m. and last for roughly 3 hours.
首先, 比赛将于下午两点开始, 持续大约3个小时。
②Then you will be taken to the Tea Room, where you can taste some famous Chinese tea and watch performances of tea art.
有人将你带至茶室, 品尝中国名茶、观看茶艺表演。
3. 结尾——作总结, 盼回复
①I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
我非常希望这段经历是有益的, 将学习和乐趣完美地结合在一起。
②It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the arrangements of the meeting. 你要能提供更多有关此次会议安排的信息, 那将再好不过了。
【拓展储备】
假定你是李华, 你因故不能参加下周二的音乐会, 想把票转赠给你的留学生朋友John。请你给他写一封邮件告知相关情况, 内容包括:
1. 你不能参加音乐会的理由;
2. 音乐会的基本情况;
3. 如何获取门票。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear John,
How’s everything going I’ve got the chance to enjoy a concert. However, it’s a regret that I have to go to meet an honored foreign friend then. Thus, you’re the first person I want to present the ticket.
The concert will be held in the city Cultural Plaza at 7 p. m. next Friday, lasting two hours. Some famous musicians from home and abroad will be invited to show their great works, among which piano pieces will bring you fascination.
If convenient, please come to my classroom for the ticket. I’m sure you’ll have a feast for music.
Yours,
Li Hua
【要点精练】
1．假定你是某国际越野赛（cross-country race）的负责人李华，请你给参与比赛的外国朋友发一封电子邮件，告知原定于下周五举行的越野赛有所变化，内容包括：
1.告知变化；2.解释原因；3.相关安排。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。
Dear foreign friends,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假设你是学生李津。你的英国朋友Chris热爱学习汉语，上周他在邮件中向你询问“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。请根据以下提示回复邮件：
(1 )解释“活雷锋”的意思； 注意：
(2)举一个身边活雷锋”的例子； (1)词数不少于80；
(3)鼓励他继续学习汉语。 (2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯；
参考词汇：活雷锋a living Lei Feng
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Jing
3．假定你是李华，你的留学生朋友Tom很想了解即将来临的中国传统节日“端午节”。请写一封电子邮件介绍相关情况。内容包括：
1. 节日基本情况；
2. 传统活动。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
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Yours
Li Hua
4．假定你是李华，你们学校开设了中国传统文化实践课(Chinese traditional culture practice class)。请给你的英国好友Peter写一封邮件，分享你上课的感受，内容包括：
1．课程内容，如书法、剪纸、国画等；
2．个人感受，如课程的意义，个人的收获；
3．邀请对方体验课程。
注意：1．词数80个左右；2．增加细节以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你叫李华，你的美国朋友Steven对中国传统文化（Traditional Chinese Culture）感兴趣，并且正在学习中文，你校将举办中国诗词比赛(Chinese Poetry Contest)，请给他发一封电子邮件告知此事，主要内容包括：
1.活动简介
时间：下周日晚上七点。
地点：学校礼堂。
意义：提高中文水平，更好地了解并传播中国文化，丰富校园生活等等。
2.建议并且鼓励他参加。
3.预祝他取得好成绩。
相关词汇：学校礼堂school hall，提高improve，传播spread，丰富enrich。
注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你校上周组织的诗歌朗诵比赛（poetry recitation competition）的情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1.介绍比赛的目的；
2.你参加此次活动的收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Best regards,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Terry来信询问你校“课间10分钟”活动的开展情况，请给他回复一封邮件。内容包括：
1.活动目的；
2.活动情况；
3.活动效果。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Terry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，重庆某中学高三学生。在寒假期间，你作为交换生（exchange student） 将前往美国进行为期三周的交流活动，你被安排在Peter家寄宿。请你用英语给Peter写一封email。要点如下：
1. 自我情况介绍；
2. 告之自己的生活习惯；
3. 询问注意事项。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Lihua
9．假如你是李华，南京大学的灾难专家陈教授将于本周六上午9点在你们学校阶梯教室举办一个安全报告会，你用英语给你的美籍同学Mary发一封email，通知她去听报告。
内容包括：
1.报告内容：如何预防龙卷风(tornadoes)、飓风(hurricanes)等灾害，以及遇到灾害时如何保护自己；
2.注意事项：如按时参加、认真听讲做记录、举手或递纸条询问等。
注意：1.词数80左右；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Mary,
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Yours,
Li Hua
10．假定你是李华，你的美国笔友Tom发来邮件，提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩，想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家，内容包括：
1.科学家介绍；
2.对你的影响。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you show admiration for Chinese scientific achievement.
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear foreign friends,
I am writing to inform you of a change about the upcoming cross-country race scheduled for next Friday.
The reason for this change is to ensure the safety and smooth running of the race. Recent weather forecasts have predicted unfavorable conditions for Friday, including heavy rain and thunderstorms, which could pose risks to participants.
To ensure that all participants have the best possible experience, we reschedule the race to Sunday to provide better conditions for everyone involved.
If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本书面表达是一篇应用文写作，要求用英文写一封电子邮件。告知外国朋友原定于下周五举行的越野赛有所变化。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
关于：about→regarding
即将到来的：upcoming→forthcoming
提供：provide→supply
联系：contact →get in touch with
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：To ensure that all participants have the best possible experience, we reschedule the race to Sunday to provide better conditions for everyone involved.
拓展句：In order that all participants can have the best possible experience, we reschedule the race to Sunday to provide better conditions for everyone involved.
【高分句型1】Recent weather forecasts have predicted unfavorable conditions for Friday, including heavy rain and thunderstorms, which could pose risks to participants. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】If you have any questions or concerns, please do not hesitate to contact us. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句)
2．Dear Chris，
Happy to hear from you. Knowing that you have difficulty understanding the expression “Huo Lei Feng”, I’m delighted to offer you some help. “Huo Lei Feng”, which means “living Lei Feng”, is an expression referring to one who selflessly helps others. Lei Feng was a soldier who devoted his lifetime to helping those in need. For over sixty years Lei Feng has been a household name to the Chinese people. Learning from Lei Feng has become an important element of our national spirit Take my friend Li Hua as an example. He pays regular visits to a nursing home on weekends to help the elderly clean their rooms and read newspapers for them. We would say he is a living Lei Feng.
I’m very much impressed by your hard work in learning Chinese. Keep it up! If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I’ll be your “living Lei Feng” always.
Yours,
Li J in
【写作解析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Chris写信，解释“活雷锋”这一表达是什么意思。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
高兴的：delighted→cheerful
提供某人某物：offer sb. sth.→provide sb. with sth.
重要的：important→essential/significant
帮助：help→assist
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：He pays regular visit to a nursing home on weekends to help the elderly clean their rooms and read newspapers for them.
拓展句：He pays regular visit to a nursing home on weekends so that he can help the elderly clean their rooms and read newspapers for them.
[高分句型1]Knowing that you have difficulty understanding the expression “Huo Lei Feng”, I’m delighted to offer you some help.（运用了现在分词作状语和that引导宾语从句）
[高分句型2]“Huo Lei Feng”, which means “living Lei Feng”, is an expression referring to one who selflessly helps others.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句和who引导限制性定语从句）
3．Dear Tom,
As you’re interested in Chinese traditional festivals, I’d like to tell you about the upcoming Dragon Boat Festival.
It falls on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. To remember the famous poet Qu Yuan, people eat sticky rice dumplings called zongzi, which symbolize the rice balls thrown into the river to keep the fish from eating Qu Yuan’s body. One of the most important traditions is dragon boat racing, which symbolizes the search for Qu Yuan.
I hope this gives you an overview of the Dragon Boat Festival. If you have any questions or want to join me to celebrate, please let me know.
Yours
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生朋友Tom很想了解即将来临的中国传统节日“端午节”。请你写一封电子邮件介绍相关情况。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell→inform
著名的：famous→well-known
重要的：important→essential
庆祝：celebrate→observe
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：One of the most important traditions is dragon boat racing, which symbolizes the search for Qu Yuan.
拓展句：One of the most important traditions is dragon boat racing, symbolizing the search for Qu Yuan.
【高分句型1】To remember the famous poet Qu Yuan, people eat sticky rice dumplings called zongzi, which symbolize the rice balls thrown into the river to keep the fish from eating Qu Yuan’s body.（运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句）
【高分句型2】If you have any questions or want to join me to celebrate, please let me know.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
4．Dear Peter,
I’m writing to share with you my experience of taking the Chinese traditional culture practice class in our school.
The course covers a wide range of topics, including calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony. Through these courses, I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese traditional culture and its rich heritage. Not only does it enhance my cultural awareness, but it also provides me with a platform to explore and appreciate the beauty of Chinese traditions.
If you have the opportunity, I would love to show you some of the skills I have learned.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。学校开设了中国传统文化实践课(Chinese traditional culture practice class)，要求考生给英国好友Peter写一封邮件，分享上课的感受。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
涵盖：cover → contain
获得：gain → obtain
传统的：traditional → conventional
增强：enhance → strengthen
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The course covers a wide range of topics, including calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony.
拓展句：The course, which includes calligraphy, paper cutting, Chinese painting, and tea ceremony, covers a wide range of topics.
[高分句型1] Not only does it enhance my cultural awareness, but it also provides me with a platform to explore and appreciate the beauty of Chinese traditions. (运用了倒装句型)
[高分句型2] If you have the opportunity, I would love to show you some of the skills I have learned. (运用了从属连词if引导条件状语从句和省略关系代词的限制性定语从句)
5．Dear Steven,
How is everything going I have a good news for you. A Chinese Poetry Contest will be held by our school. Knowing that you are fond of Chinese culture, I am writing to you with the purpose of inviting you to take part in it.
The event will take place in our school hall on next Sunday. The aim of the program is to inherit and spread the Chinese traditional culture. I am convinced that your Chinese will be greatly improved and you will get a better understanding of our Chinese poetry. Moreover, there is a chance that you can make some like-minded friends.
I sincerely hope you can accept my invitation. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向给美国朋友Steven写封信，告知其学习将举办中国诗词比赛，建议并鼓励他参加。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
参加：take part in → participate in
提高：improve → enhance
此外：moreover→ what’s more
真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：The event will take place in our school hall on next Sunday. The aim of the program is to inherit and spread the Chinese traditional culture.
拓展句：The event, the aim of which is to inherit and spread the Chinese traditional culture, will take place in our school hall on next Sunday.
【高分句型1】Knowing that you are fond of Chinese culture, I am writing to you with the purpose of inviting you to take part in it.（运用了现在分词作状语及that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】I am convinced that your Chinese will be greatly improved and you will get a better understanding of our Chinese poetry.（运用了省略连接词that的宾语从句）
6．Dear Peter,
Last Friday, our school organized a poetry recitation competition in the school hall. The competition was held to promote the appreciation of poetry among students. It was a great opportunity to share and explore the beauty of poetry.
I actively participated in this competition. Through this competition, I not only deepened my understanding and appreciation of poetry but also learned more about its power to express emotions and ideas.
If you have any questions or want to know more about the competition, please feel free to write back.
Best regards.
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给英国朋友Peter写一封回信，告诉他自己学校上周组织的诗歌朗诵比赛（poetry recitation competition）的情况。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
参加：participate in→join in
促进：promote→boost
机会： opportunity→chance
积极地：actively→energetically
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The competition was held to promote the appreciation of poetry among students.
拓展句：The competition was held in order that we could promote the appreciation of poetry among students.
【高分句型1】It was a great opportunity to share and explore the beauty of poetry.(运用了it作形式主语不定式作真正主语的结构)
【高分句型2】If you have any questions or want to know more about the competition, please feel free to write back.(运用了if引导的条件状语从句和祈使句)
7．Dear Terry,
How are you doing I’m writing to tell you about the “ten-minute break” activities in our school.
The purpose of these activities is to ensure that students really have a break and enjoy themselves. During the break, there are various activities such as rope skip-ping, playing basketball, and so on.
These activities turn out to be a great success. Not only do they enrich our school life but they also build up our body. Students are full of energy and enthusiasm in the next class.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国朋友Terry来信询问你校“课间10分钟”活动的开展情况，请给他回复一封邮件。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
告诉：tell…about→inform…of
确信：ensure→make sure
充满：be full of→be filled with
增强体质：build up our body→strengthen our body
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：During the break, there are various activities such as rope skip-ping, playing basketball, and so on.
拓展句：During the break, there are various activities that include rope skip-ping, playing basketball, and so on.
【高分句型1】The purpose of these activities is to ensure that students really have a break and enjoy themselves.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only do they enrich our school life but they also build up our body.（运用了部分倒装句）
8．Dear Peter,
My name is Li Hua, a senior 3 student from Chongqing, China. I’m so lucky to be chosen as an exchange student to pay a three-week visit to the US and will be hosted in your home. Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for your reception during my stay in the US.
I will be a nice guest. I don’t smoke but I don’t mind if anybody smokes. Besides, I enjoy various foods, including pork, beef and mutton and I’m not particular about food. What’s more, I like pets, so it’s OK for me if your family keeps some pets.
If you have any requests or suggestions for me, don’t hesitate to tell me so that I can get well prepared before I go and pay attention to my behaviors when in your home. I believe I will have a good time and learn a lot in your home!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在寒假期间，你作为交换生（exchange student） 将前往美国进行为期三周的交流活动，将被安排在Peter家寄宿。要求考生给寄宿家庭写一封信，介绍自己的一些情况，告知对方自己的生活习惯，并询问注意事项。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
各种各样的：various→all kinds of
此外：besides→in addition
建议：suggestion→advice
对……挑剔：be particular about→be picky about
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for your reception during my stay in the US.
拓展句：Firstly, I’d like to say thank you for the reception you will provide during my stay in the US.
【高分句型1】What’s more, I like pets, so it’s OK for me if your family keeps some pets. (运用了so连接的并列句和if引导的条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】I believe I will have a good time and learn a lot in your home! (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
9．Dear Mary,
I have something important to tell you. There will be a safety lecture in the lecture room of our school this Saturday. It is about how to prevent tornadoes, hurricanes and other natural disasters and how we should protect ourselves when we are caught in them. The lecture will be given by Professor Chen, a famous disaster expert from Nanjing University. It begins at 9:00 in the morning. All of us are required to attend it on time, listen and take notes carefully. If we have any question, we can raise our hands or write them down on a piece of paper and pass it to the expert. Please do remember the time and the place and be sure not to be late. See you then.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语给美籍同学Mary发一封email，通知她去听一个安全报告会。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant/vital/crucial
保护：protect→safeguard/conserve/preserve
举起：raise→put up/lift
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The lecture will be given by Professor Chen, a famous disaster expert from Nanjing University. It begins at 9:00 in the morning.
拓展句：The lecture, which begins at 9:00 in the morning, will be given by Professor Chen, a famous disaster expert from Nanjing University.
【高分句型1】It is about how to prevent tornadoes, hurricanes and other natural disasters and how we should protect ourselves when we are caught in them.（运用了how to do作宾语、how引导的宾语从句和when引导的时间状语从句。）
【高分句型2】If we have any question, we can raise our hands or write them down on a piece of paper and pass it to the expert.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）
10．Dear Tom,
I’m glad that you show admiration for Chinese scientific achievement.
One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou. She is renowned for her discovery of artemisinin, a breakthrough in the treatment of malaria. Tu Youyou’s work has had a profound impact on global health, saving countless lives in malaria-endemic regions.
Personally, Tu Youyou’s dedication to scientific research and her perseverance in the face of challenges have inspired me. Her groundbreaking discovery highlights the importance of scientific innovation in addressing global health challenges.
Sincerely, if you want to know more about this, you can write to me again.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。美国笔友Tom发来邮件，提到他对中国所取得的科技成就感到无比钦佩，想了解一些中国科学家的事迹。要求考生用英语给他写一封邮件，为他介绍一位你最喜欢的中国科学家。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
知名的： renowned →famous
影响：impact→ influence
奉献：dedication→devotion
真挚地：sincerely→ genuinely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou.
拓展句：One of my favorite Chinese scientists is Tu Youyou, who is a great female scientist.
【高分句型1】Tu Youyou’s work has had a profound impact on global health, saving countless lives in malaria-endemic regions.（运用了现在分词作状语）
【高分句型2】 Her groundbreaking discovery highlights the importance of scientific innovation in addressing global health challenges.（运用了动名词作宾语的结构）(共14张PPT)
告知信
【试题探究】
假定你是晨光中学高三学生李华, 你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动, 你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris写一封信, 介绍相关情况, 内容包括:
1. 成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾等);
2. 对活动的感受;
3对自己未来的展望。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当加入细节, 以使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇: 成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony
Step 1: 审题布局
人称 第一人称为主, 第二人称为辅
时态 一般现在时, 一般过去时
要点 1. 介绍成人礼活动内容
2. 成人礼活动感受
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 这次的成人礼仪式深深地打动了我们, 并且我们从中意识到了责任感始终
伴随着我们的成长过程。
一般表达: We are all deeply moved by the ceremony and we realize that the sense of
responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth from it.
句式升级(定语从句)
We are all deeply moved by the ceremony, ___________________________________
_____________________________________________________.
from which we realize that the sense of
responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth
要点2: 我明白了成长的意义。
一般表达: ________________________________________.
句式升级(倒装句)
这就是我对成长的理解。
________________________________________
I have understood the meaning of growing up
Such is my understanding about growing up.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you. In your last letter, you showed great interest in the coming-of-age ceremony held in our school. The following is a brief introduction to the ceremony.
The ceremony was scheduled on June 8, during which we reviewed the past events. We are all deeply moved by the ceremony, from which we realize that the sense of responsibility always accompanies the process of our growth. We are determined to follow the examples of our excellent schoolmates and make ourselves useful to the whole society. Such is my understanding about growing up. What about yours
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的、原因等
①Delighted to learn that an important volleyball game will be launched in our school stadium, I’m writing to extend my excitement and inform you of some relevant information.
很高兴得知一场重要的排球比赛将在我们学校的体育场举行, 我写信是为了表达我的兴奋, 并告诉你一些相关的信息。
②I’m more than delighted to tell you that an international cultural festival is to be held in my city.
我非常高兴地告知你们国际文化节将在我市举行。
2. 篇中——详细介绍, 告知具体信息
①First and foremost, the competition to be held will begin at 2 p. m. and last for roughly 3 hours.
首先, 比赛将于下午两点开始, 持续大约3个小时。
②Then you will be taken to the Tea Room, where you can taste some famous Chinese tea and watch performances of tea art.
有人将你带至茶室, 品尝中国名茶、观看茶艺表演。
3. 结尾——作总结, 盼回复
①I highly expect the experience to be rewarding, perfectly mixing learning and fun.
我非常希望这段经历是有益的, 将学习和乐趣完美地结合在一起。
②It would be nice if you could provide a bit more information on the arrangements of the meeting. 你要能提供更多有关此次会议安排的信息, 那将再好不过了。
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华, 你因故不能参加下周二的音乐会, 想把票转赠给你的留学生朋友John。请你给他写一封邮件告知相关情况, 内容包括:
1. 你不能参加音乐会的理由;
2. 音乐会的基本情况;
3. 如何获取门票。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear John,
How’s everything going I’ve got the chance to enjoy a concert. However, it’s a regret that I have to go to meet an honored foreign friend then. Thus, you’re the first person I want to present the ticket.
The concert will be held in the city Cultural Plaza at 7 p. m. next Friday, lasting two hours. Some famous musicians from home and abroad will be invited to show their great works, among which piano pieces will bring you fascination.
If convenient, please come to my classroom for the ticket. I’m sure you’ll have a feast for music.
Li Hua
