2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达之应用文类型4(咨询信) 假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容如下:
1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
人称 第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态 一般现在时
要点 1. 写信目的 2. 咨询的内容: 旅游路线, 旅游费用
Step 2: 字斟句酌 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当地的风俗。
一般表达: I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, and I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
句式升级(定语从句)
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解路线的价格, 包括所有旅游费用。
一般表达: In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling expenses.
句式升级(分词短语作定语)
In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
Step 3: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表明写信目的
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I am writing to inquire about some information regarding/concerning travel.
我是李华, 一名在新西兰学习的中国学生。我写信是想询问一些关于旅行的信息。
2. 篇中——陈述要咨询的内容
①First of all, I’m tempted to know the departure time and traveling route.
首先, 我很想知道出发时间和旅行路线。
②Secondly, how much do I have to pay for the travel
其次, 我需要支付多少旅费
③Thirdly, is there anything I should pay special attention to
第三, 有什么我应该特别注意的吗
3. 结尾——表感谢, 盼回复
①I would be much appreciated if you could furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via 1234456@df. erf.
如果您能提供我上述信息, 我将不胜感激, 您可以通过1234456@df. erf与我联系。
②Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
谢谢你, 如能及时回复我将不胜感激。
【拓展储备】
假定你是李华, 高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信, 询问相关事宜。内容包括:
1. 对申请者的相关要求;
2. 课程的相关事宜;
3. 住宿和吃饭的条件;
4. 需要做的相关准备。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am very interested in the exchange program you offered. I am writing to obtain some more detailed information about it.
Firstly, I just graduated from an ordinary high school and I wonder what qualifications are required for applicants. Secondly, if admitted, what courses am I going to take, and do I need to buy any books ahead of time In addition, would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of board and accommodations By the way, if I need to make any other preparations, let me know, will you
Thanks again for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【要点精练】
1．假如你是李华，一名高三学生，准备在毕业后参加英国牛津大学的暑期夏令营（Oxford Summer Camp2018）。请用英语写一封电子邮件给相关负责人Mr. William，说明自己的情况并咨询相关事宜。
注意：1.词数100词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已经给出。
Dear Mr. William,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
2．假设你是苏华，上周创建了学校志愿者服务俱乐部，但成员不多。你决定写个email给外教，咨询如何进行一项系列广告活动来招募俱乐部成员。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 信中不要出现自己真实的姓名和学校名称；
3. 开头语和结束语已写好，不计入词数。
Dear sir，
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假如你是大学生李华，想利用假期时间打工挣钱。你对报纸上的广告很感兴趣。请你根据下面的广告内容写一封信应聘工作并询问有关情况。字数100词左右。
Temporary Job Offer Major catering Company has temporary jobs as chefs, waiters, kitchen staff and English secretary. For more information write to Ms. Kate Rees, 17Park End St.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4．假定你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将举办英语作文大赛。你有意参加，请你用英语给负责人Mr. White写一封邮件，询问相关信息。要点如下：
1. 报名时间及方式；
2. 需要提供的信息；
3. 费用及其他。
注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：报名：sign up
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5．假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友David是中国功夫的爱好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市将举办一次国际功夫比赛。请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加，要点包括:
1. 比赛的时间和地点
2. 比赛的目的
3. 参加比赛的益处
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear David,
How is everything going
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I will accompany you during the competition. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
6．假如你是学生李华。圣诞节即将到来，你们班决定本周五晚上庆祝一番，由你负责为此选定一个场所。Miracle Inn的一则广告引起了你的注意，但有一些具体信息不明确（如箭头所指内容）。请根据你所做的Notes，给Miracle Inn发一封电子邮件询问有关情况。
注意：1. 词数100左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing for more information about the service at your inn.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours，
Li Hua
参考答案
1．Dear Mr. William，
I’m Li Hua,a Chinese student．Having longed for Oxford for a long time, I really want to be part of the Oxford Summer Camp 2018. Therefore, I’m writing to introduce myself and ask several questions concerned.
I’m always an English-lover and have taken some optional courses related to English literature and culture. So I’m wondering whether there are any courses in this camp If there are, how many courses will you offer and what subjects will they cover Besides, can you give me the schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places Finally, do you provide accommodations during the Summer Camp Are all the students living on campus or will you arrange home-stay
Thank you in advance! Looking forward to your reply!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作分析】本文是一封电子邮件。假如你是李华，一名高三学生，准备在毕业后参加英国牛津大学的暑期夏令营（Oxford Summer Camp2018）。请用英语写一封电子邮件给相关负责人Mr. William，说明自己的情况并咨询相关事宜。写作时要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据提示充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】本文是一封电子邮件。格式正确，内容符合要求，重点突出，文中使用高级词汇和句子。现在分词完成式做原因状语；I’m writing to introduce myself and ask several questions concerned.过去分词做后置定语；So I’m wondering whether there are any courses in this camp 句中whether引导宾语从句； If there are, how many courses will you offer and what subjects will they cover 条件句和问句完美结合；句中一般疑问句使用巧妙，恰到好处；另外，Therefore, Besides, Finally,等的运用为文章增色添彩。
2．Dear sir，
I’m delighted to tell you an exciting news that the Voluntary Service Club of our school was set up last week. Its main purpose is to provide an opportunity for students to serve the society better and know more about the society．It can also help to develop our cooperative ability．
In order to have more members, I plan to organize some advertising activities to attract more students. Students who are healthy, open-minded and willing to help others are welcome to join our Voluntary Service Club. They will be required to do voluntary work at weekends or during holidays. However, I have little experience in such advertising activities, could you help me and give me some advice about it
I will be appreciative it if you could give me a hand. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，咨询外教如何进行一项系列广告活动来招募学校志愿者服务俱乐部成员。
【要点分析】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时，也有部分一般过去时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 上周学校创建了志愿者服务俱乐部
2. 咨询外教如何进行一项系列广告活动来招募俱乐部成员。
第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）
be delighted to; set up; main purpose; cooperative ability; open-minded; be willing to; voluntary work; have little experience in; give sb. a hand; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. I’m pleased to tell you an exciting news that the Voluntary Service Club of our school was set up last week.
2. Its main purpose is to provide an opportunity for students to serve the society better and know more about the society．
3. Students who are healthy, open-minded and willing to help others are welcome to join our Voluntary Service Club.
4. They will be required to do voluntary work at weekends or during holidays.
5. I have little experience in such advertising activities.
6.I will be appreciative it if you could give me a hand.
7. I'm looking forward to your early reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
第五步：润色修改
范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如：Students who are healthy, open-minded and willing to help others are welcome to join our Voluntary Service Club.这句话运用了关系代词who引导的定语从句；使用了一些固定词组，如be delighted to; set up; be willing to等。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
3．Dear Ms. Kate,
I’m writing in response to your advertisement for a temporary position as a waiter.
I’m a 20-year-old college student. I would be able to work during June and July. I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am interested in a career in the catering industry when I leave university.
I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封信应聘工作并询问有关情况。
【写作分析】1.词汇积累
喜欢：like→enjoy
感激的：thankful→grateful
期待：expect→look forward to
收到某人的来信：receive a letter from sb.→hear from sb.
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：I’m a 20-year-old college student. I would be able to work during June and July.
拓展句：I’m a 20-year-old college student, who would be able to work during June and July.
[高分句型1] I do not have any experience but I enjoy working with people and am interested in a career in the catering industry when I leave university. (我没有任何经验，但我喜欢与人打交道，并且对大学毕业后在餐饮行业发展很感兴趣。)
该句中“but”作为并列连词连接前后分句；“when”引导时间状语从句。
[高分句型2] I would be very grateful if you could send me more information about the post available. (如果您能寄给我更多关于这个职位的信息，我将非常感激。)
该句中“if”引导条件状语从句。
4．Dear Mr. White，
My name is Li Hua. I've learned that a competition for the English Writing will be held by the English Club. I'm writing to apply for the information about it. Would you be kind enough to tell me when and how to sign up What kinds of personal information should be provided to enter the contest What’s more, to be frank，how much should I pay for it
I am expecting your reply. Thanks a lot !
Sincerely
Li Hua
【分析】本文是一篇应用文中的书信，同时也是一篇开放性书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，给朋友Mr. White写信，咨询英语俱乐部举办的作文大赛的具体信息。要求考生自行组织要点，总体难度较大。
【写作分析】第1步：审题。根据文字提示可知本文是一篇应用文，要求考生写信咨询英语作文大赛的具体信息。全文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。
第2步：组织要点。1. 报名时间及方式；2. 需要提供的信息；3. 费用及其他。
第3步：根据提示及关键词组进行遣词造句，关键词为sign up、apply for等。同时注意书信的惯用语和习惯表达。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化并不死板。使用了较多的高级词汇，如sign up、apply for等；同时文章还运用了一些串联成分，如what’s more，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力。
5．Dear David，
How is everything going I'm writing to tell you that the 12th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Daqing from July 20th to 24th at Daqing Gymnasium.
As we know, kung fu is an important part of Chinese culture and has become increasingly popular at home and abroad. This event aims to further expand the influence of kung fu worldwide. The organizers hope people will feel the charm of kung fu in this competition.
I know you are kung fu amateur. Are you interested in taking part in the event You will be able to appreciate high-level kung fu performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world. You can also improve your techniques.
I will accompany you during the competition. I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文写作。
【写作分析】第1步：根据提示可知，要求写一封邮件；假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友David是中国功夫的爱好者，你得知今年七月你所在的城市将举办一次国际功夫比赛。请你用英语给他写封邮件，询问他是否有兴趣参加，要点包括:1. 比赛的时间和地点；2. 比赛的目的；3. 参加比赛的益处
第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：International Kung Fu Competition（国际功夫比赛），Gymnasium（体育馆），at home and abroad（国内外），further expand（进一步扩大）；amateur（业余爱好者）等。
第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如I'm writing to tell you that the 12th International Kung Fu Competition will be held in Daqing from July 20th to 24th at Daqing Gymnasium.运用了宾语从句；You will be able to appreciate high-level kung fu performances and communicate with people sharing the same interest from all over the world.运用了现在分词作后置定语。全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
6．Dear Sir/Madam，
I am writing for more information about the service at your inn.
We are high school students and we have decided to hold a celebration party for Christmas. I would like to book a hall at your inn from 7 pm to 10 pm on Friday. Do you have a hall large enough for 50 people？Also，could you please tell me when the evening meal starts and ends？As for the price，do you offer discounts for students？What does the evening meal include？Do you have special meals for vegetarians？As for the drinks，we need more varieties，such as Coke，mineral water，orange juice and apple juice. How much will it cost to rent the disco for four hours？Is it allowed that we choose our own music？
Your kind reply would be much appreciated.
Yours，
Li Hua
【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。
【写作分析】本题要求写一封电子邮件，并在信中咨询预订的时间、房间大小、晚餐及价格折扣等情况。书信类写作可以按照三段式来写作，第一段要开篇明义，说明写信的目的是请求帮助、提供建议、表达感谢还是歉意。第二段是书信的主体段，一定要根据写作的具体要求，切题发挥，展开写作。最后一段通常是表达感谢或歉意，以及期待回复。文中主要使用一般现在时，可适当加入一般将来时。文章要注意条理清晰，包含题中所要求的要点，合理安排结构。
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:when引导的宾语从句Also，could you please tell me when the evening meal starts and ends. that 引导的主语从句Is it allowed that we choose our own music？
高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。(共13张PPT)
咨询信
【试题探究】
假定你是李华, 打算今年暑假去美国旅游。请你给Travel America国际旅行社写一封电子邮件进行咨询, 内容如下:
1. 请其推荐合适的旅游路线;
2. 请其告知相关的旅游费用。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题布局
人称 第一人称 (I), 第二人称(you)
时态 一般现在时
要点 1. 写信目的
2. 咨询的内容: 旅游路线, 旅游费用
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我打算在美国住10天左右, 希望能看一看那些独特的自然风景, 品味一下当
地的风俗。
一般表达: I ______________________________________, and I hope to have a look at
some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
句式升级(定语从句)
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, _____________I hope to have a look at
some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs.
intend to stay in America for about 10 days
during which
要点2: 除此之外, 我想了解路线的价格, 包括所有旅游费用。
一般表达: In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, and all the traveling
expenses.
句式升级(分词短语作定语)
In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, _______________________
_________.
covering all the traveling
expenses
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m planning to travel to the USA in the coming July. Therefore, I’m writing to inquire about travel routes of your agency.
I intend to stay in America for about 10 days, during which I hope to have a look at some unique natural scenery and have a taste of local customs. So, could you please recommend some suitable travel routes In addition, I’d like to know the prices of the routes, covering all the traveling expenses.
A reply at your earliest convenience is highly appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表明写信目的
I am Li Hua, a Chinese student, studying in New Zealand. I am writing to inquire about some information regarding/concerning travel.
我是李华, 一名在新西兰学习的中国学生。我写信是想询问一些关于旅行的信息。
2. 篇中——陈述要咨询的内容
①First of all, I’m tempted to know the departure time and traveling route.
首先, 我很想知道出发时间和旅行路线。
②Secondly, how much do I have to pay for the travel
其次, 我需要支付多少旅费
③Thirdly, is there anything I should pay special attention to
第三, 有什么我应该特别注意的吗
3. 结尾——表感谢, 盼回复
①I would be much appreciated if you could furnish me with the above information and you can contact me via 1234456@df. erf.
如果您能提供我上述信息, 我将不胜感激, 您可以通过1234456@df. erf与我联系。
②Thank you and your prompt reply will be highly appreciated.
谢谢你, 如能及时回复我将不胜感激。
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华, 高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信, 询问相关事宜。内容包括:
1. 对申请者的相关要求;
2. 课程的相关事宜;
3. 住宿和吃饭的条件;
4. 需要做的相关准备。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Dear Sir or Madam,
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am very interested in the exchange program you offered. I am writing to obtain some more detailed information about it.
Firstly, I just graduated from an ordinary high school and I wonder what qualifications are required for applicants. Secondly, if admitted, what courses am I going to take, and do I need to buy any books ahead of time In addition, would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of board and accommodations By the way, if I need to make any other preparations, let me know, will you
Thanks again for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
