2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达之应用文类型7(推荐信) 假定你是李华, 你的美国网友David看完电影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜欢, 写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:
1. 表示高兴;
2. 推荐一部电影;
3. 推荐的理由(至少两条)。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题布局
人称 第一人称 (I)为主
时态 一般现在时, 一般将来时
要点 1. 说明写信目的 2. 推荐的电影和推荐的理由 3. 表达希望
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我很高兴知道你对中国电影《哪吒之魔童降世》感兴趣。
一般表达: I am glad to know you’re interested in the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
句式升级(高级词汇, 被动语态):
I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
要点2: 这部动画电影也是以中国经典神话故事为基础, 和《哪吒之魔童降世》有许多相似之处。
一般表达: This animated film is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, and has much in common with Ne Zha.
句式升级(定语从句):
This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha.
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear David,
I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. And I’m perfectly willing to recommend another impressive Chinese movie at your request.
Since I know animated films are your favorites, you can’t miss Monkey King: Hero Is Back. This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha, so I think it’ll appeal to you. Additionally, Monkey King and Ne Zha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people. Through these two movies, you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I hope you’ll find the movie well worth seeing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的
①Our school’s approaching 100th birthday will be celebrated this July. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English
我们学校将在今年七月庆祝即将到来的百年校庆。你能推荐一位学生在开幕式上用英语发言吗
②Hearing/Learning that you are coming to visit China, I would like to recommend several places of interest to you.
听说你要来中国, 我想向你推荐几个名胜古迹。
2. 篇中——紧扣要点, 推荐理由
①He is an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects. As a boy with great potential, he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
他是一个全面的学生, 各科成绩优异。作为一个很有潜力的男孩, 他善于解决难题。
②In addition, what makes him a model student is his positive attitude towards life.
此外, 使他成为模范学生的是他积极的生活态度。
3. 结尾——表达希望, 盼回复
①Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly expected. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
希望您能考虑我的建议。热切期待您的及时答复。
②I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
【拓展储备】
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游, 让你推荐一个城市, 你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封信, 内容包括:
1. 推荐城市;
2. 推荐理由;
3. 你的祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, the Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
【要点精练】
1．假定你是李华，你的交换生朋友William对学校开展的研学旅游活动很感兴趣。他来信希望你能给他推荐一个研学城市。请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 推荐研学的城市；
2. 推荐理由；
3. 表示祝愿。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear William,
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Yours,
Li Hua
2．假定你是某国际学校学生李华，你校将组织开展“走进文化遗产”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。请你给组织者写信，内容包括：
1. 推荐活动;
2. 说明理由。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Organizers,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假定你是李华，英国交换生Frank写信给你，希望你推荐一个中国成语，作为鼓励他学习中文的座右铭。请你回封信，推荐成语“愚公移山”，内容包括；
1. 简介成语故事和寓意；
2. 推荐理由。
注意：1. 写作词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
生词：成语 idiom; 座右铭 motto; 愚公移山Yu Gong Yi Shan
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4．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津，你校最近在举行“校园之星”优秀学生评选活动，请你用英语推荐你的同学王华，内容包括：
1.人物和事迹简介；
2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。
注意：1.词数不少于100；
2. 短文题目已为你写好，不计入总词数。
A role model around me
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5．假定你是李华，你校的英国交换生Jim在邮件中提到他想报名参加主题为“了不起的中国人” (Amazing Chinese People)的网络短视频大赛，向你征求创意。请你给Jim回信，内容包括:
1．推荐拍摄人物；
2．说明推荐理由。
注意：
1．词数100左右;
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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6．假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Peter对中文歌曲很感兴趣，要求你推荐一款学习中文歌曲的app，请你回复邮件。内容包括：
1. 介绍一款 app；
2. 分享使用体验。
参考词汇: 歌词: lyrics 网易云音乐: NetEase Music QQ 音乐: QQ Music
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
7．假定你是李华，你所在的社区正在进行年度美丽楼道服务之星(Service Star of the Year)评选活动。请给社区负责人Owen写信推荐员工张杰，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.推荐理由。
注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Owen,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．假定你是李华，你的英国网友David计划在他毕业旅行时到中国来亲身体验和感受中国文化，请你用英文写信向他推荐你眼中最具代表性的城市。
1.城市概况；
2.推荐原因。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
9．假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Sam最近在准备有关中国饮食文化的课堂展示，写邮件请你推荐一种中国特色美食，请给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1. 美食简介;
2. 推荐理由。
注意：1. 词数100左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Sam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
10．假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。在世界地球日即将到来之际，你校与英国友好校将在线举办“绿动校园，青春飞扬”的主题摄影展，以此来记录校园环保活动中的精彩瞬间。现组委会向同学们征集照片，你打算参加此项活动。请按照以下提示用英语给组委会写一封信来推荐你的照片：
（1）描述照片的内容；
（2）说明选择该照片的理由；
（3）表达对该照片入选的愿望。
参考词汇：绿动校园，青春飞扬Green Campus, Flying Youth
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours,
Li Jin
参考答案
1．Dear William,
Learning that you are interested in the study tour but at a loss about which city to visit, I’d like to recommend Guangzhou to you.
Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong, is a perfect combination of old and new. For one thing, it is an ancient city with rich historical sites, such as Chen Clan Academy, Xiguan and Shameen, where you can immerse yourself in its profound history and splendid Lingnan culture. For another, Guangzhou enjoys a high reputation for modern complexes, among which the iconic Canton Tower is what you can’t miss. Equally impressive is the Cantonese cuisine, which will give you a feast for your appetite.
I’m sure that you will find Guangzhou a worthwhile city to explore. Wish you a meaningful and unforgettable study tour!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生朋友William对学校开展的研学旅游活动很感兴趣，要求考生写信给他推荐一个研学城市。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
完美的：perfect → ideal
丰富的：rich → abundant
确信的：sure → certain
难以忘怀的：unforgettable → memorable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Guangzhou, the capital city of Guangdong, is a perfect combination of old and new.
拓展句：Guangzhou, which is the capital city of Guangdong, is a perfect combination of old and new.
[高分句型1] Learning that you are interested in the study tour but at a loss about which city to visit, I’d like to recommend Guangzhou to you. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Equally impressive is the Cantonese cuisine, which will give you a feast for your appetite. (运用了关系代词which引导限制性定语从句)
2．Dear Organizers,
I’m writing to share some ideas for the upcoming “Exploring Cultural Heritage” event.
Firstly, I propose organizing visits to local cultural heritage sites for students to explore and learn. This would deepen our understanding of our country’s rich history and culture, fostering a sense of national pride and cultural identity. Secondly, hosting themed lectures or workshops by experts would offer insights into the value and significance of cultural heritage, enhancing our academic knowledge and overall development. Lastly, hands-on activities such as traditional craft making or folk performances would allow us to experience the charm of our traditional culture firsthand and acquire practical skills and knowledge.
In summary, by incorporating diverse activities, we can effectively showcase the allure and importance of cultural heritage while promoting a deeper appreciation and inheritance of our traditions. Thank you for considering these suggestions. Looking forward to a successful event!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。考生所在学校将组织开展“走进文化遗产”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。请你给组织者写信。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
培养：foster→develop
获得：acquire→obtain
提供：offer→provide
举行：host→hold
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：In summary, by incorporating diverse activities, we can effectively showcase the allure and importance of cultural heritage while promoting a deeper appreciation and inheritance of our traditions.
拓展句：In summary, It is by incorporating diverse activities that we can effectively showcase the allure and importance of cultural heritage while promoting a deeper appreciation and inheritance of our traditions.
【高分句型1】In summary, by incorporating diverse activities, we can effectively showcase the allure and importance of cultural heritage while promoting a deeper appreciation and inheritance of our traditions.（运用了while引导的时间状语从句的省略）
【高分句型2】This would deepen our understanding of our country’s rich history and culture, fostering a sense of national pride and cultural identity.（运用了现在分词作状语）
3．Dear Frank,
In response to your letter inquiring about a Chinese motto, I strongly recommend to you the idiom Yu Gong Yi Shan, which can definitely keep your willing heart to learning Chinese!
This idiom actually originates from a touching legend, which literally tells us how Old Man Yu led his family to remove the two mountains blocking the doorway of their house, accomplishing this mission impossible with the help of God. I believe the idiom is an ideal motto for you because it highlights the moral that if we keep trying and never give up, we will eventually achieve our aim, however hard it is, which is a universal value applicable to language learning. Moreover, by embracing this legend, learners can immerse themselves in Chinese culture and gain insights into the beliefs and historical narratives that shape Chinese society.
I’m fully aware how challenging it is for a foreigner to learn Chinese and I’m deeply convinced that the understanding of this idiom will fuel your enthusiasm for Chinese. Attached to the letter is my humble calligraphy of the four characters “Yu Gong Yi Shan”, which, I guess, can figure as a reminder.
Hope you enjoy it!
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国交换生Frank写信，向他推荐一个中国成语，作为鼓励他学习中文的座右铭。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
推荐：recommend→put forward
完成：accomplish→achieve
并且：morever→furthermore
激发：fuel→simulate
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句： Hope you enjoy it!
拓展句：I hope you can be fond of it and look forward to sharing with you the feelings after learning it.
【高分句型1】In response to your letter inquiring about a Chinese motto, I strongly recommend to you the idiom Yu Gong Yi Shan, which can definitely keep your willing heart to learning Chinese! （运用了which引导定语从句）
【高分句型2】This idiom actually originates from a touching legend, which literally tells us how Old Man Yu led his family to remove the two mountains blocking the doorway of their house, accomplishing this mission impossible with the help of God.（运用了which引导定语从句，how引导宾语从句，现在分词作定语和状语）
4．范文
A role model around me
When it comes to the role model around me, it’s nobody but Wang Hua. Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. He comes from a poor family. What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. Because of the illness, he even asked a three-months leave from school. During that time, he not only fought against the disease but kept on studying.
Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up. Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life. He is always an example for everyone to follow.
As a student of Chenguang Middle School, I want nominate my classmate Wang Hua as the “Campus Star”. Wang Hua is a remarkable individual who consistently exhibits exceptional qualities in both academic and personal aspects.
Wang Hua excels in all subjects, especially in mathematics and science. He is always ready to help others with their studies, patiently explaining difficult concepts and encouraging his peers to strive for excellence. However, his achievements are not limited to academics. He is also actively involved in various volunteer activities, such as assisting the elderly and participating in environmental protection projects.
What I have learned from Wang Hua is his dedication to learning and his commitment to serving others. He is a role model who inspires me to work harder and be more compassionate. His positive attitude and unwavering spirit are qualities that I admire and aspire to emulate.
Therefore, I strongly recommend Wang Hua as the “Campus Star”. His dedication, kindness, and leadership qualities make him a deserving candidate for this honor. I believe that his example will inspire others to follow in his footsteps and strive for excellence in all aspects of their lives.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语推荐你的同学王华，参加“校园之星”优秀学生评选活动。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
热爱：love→have a passion for
面对：face→in the face of
非凡的：remarkable→outstanding
相信：believe→hold the view that
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Life is not easy for Liu Wei, but he still loves life.
拓展句：Although life is not easy for Liu Wei, he still loves life.
[高分句型1] What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. (运用了what引导主要从句)
[高分句型2] I believe that his example will inspire others to follow in his footsteps and strive for excellence in all aspects of their lives. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
5．Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear your intention to participate in the “Amazing Chinese People” online short video competition. For your inspiration, I’d like to recommend a figure who truly deserves to be featured.
My suggestion is to focus on Dr. Zhong Nanshan, a renowned respiratory expert and a hero in the fight against COVID-19. His dedication to science, courage in speaking the truth, and relentless efforts to protect public health have earned him widespread respect and admiration.
By showcasing Dr. Zhong’s achievements and struggles, you will not only present an amazing Chinese person but also convey the spirit of perseverance and responsibility that defines many great Chinese individuals.
Looking forward to seeing your creation!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Jim回信，推荐短视频采访的人。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestion→advice
奉献：dedication→devotion
参加：participate in→take part in
关注：focus on→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：My suggestion is to focus on Dr. Zhong Nanshan, a renowned respiratory expert and a hero in the fight against COVID-19.
拓展句：My suggestion is to focus on Dr. Zhong Nanshan, who is a renowned respiratory expert and a hero in the fight against COVID-19.
[高分句型1] For your inspiration, I’d like to recommend a figure who truly deserves to be featured. (运用了who引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] By showcasing Dr. Zhong’s achievements and struggles, you will not only present an amazing Chinese person but also convey the spirit of perseverance and responsibility that defines many great Chinese individuals. (运用了动名词作宾语和that引导的定语从句)
6．Dear Peter,
I’m thrilled to know about your interest in Chinese songs. I’d like to recommend an app called NetEase Music. This app has a vast library of Chinese songs, and each song is accompanied by lyrics, which can be very helpful for learning Chinese.
I frequently use NetEase Music myself. I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightforward operation. Moreover, its lyrics feature is outstanding, with lyrics scrolling in sync with the music, helping me understand the meaning of the songs better. I believe you’ll enjoy this app as well.
Looking forward to hearing your feedback.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给外国朋友Peter回复一封邮件，推荐一款学习中文歌曲的app，包含app简介和使用体验两个要点。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
巨大的：vast→huge
带有：be accompanied by→possess
简单的：straightforward→uncomplicated
2. 句式拓展
原句子句：I frequently use NetEase Music myself. I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightforward operation.
拓展句：I frequently use NetEase Music myself because I appreciate its user-friendly interface and straightforward operation.
【高分句型1】This app has a vast library of Chinese songs, and each song is accompanied by lyrics, which can be very helpful for learning Chinese.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Moreover, its lyrics feature is outstanding, with lyrics scrolling in sync with the music, helping me understand the meaning of the songs better.（运用了with复合结构以及现在分词作状语）
7．
I am writing to recommend Zhang Jie as the Service Star of the Year of the beautiful corridor. I choose him for the following reasons.
First of all, Zhang Jie, whose work ranges from cleaning the hallways to helping his neighbors, is hard-working and he works from morning till night. The work of cleaning is dirty and tiring. However, he never complains about it. Besides, he is full of responsibility. Not only does him do the work that belongs to him, but also he devotes to some extra work, like taking care of neighbors’ children. Third, he is willing to build a harmonious community. He tries his best to guard the security of the community.
I hope that he can get the award.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给社区负责人Owen写信推荐员工张杰为楼道服务之星。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
选择：choose→ select
此外：besides→ in addition
照顾：take care of→ tend
充满：be full of → be filled with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：The work of cleaning is dirty and tiring. However, he never complains about it.
拓展句：Though the work of cleaning is dirty and tiring, he never complains about it.
【高分句型1】First of all, Zhang Jie, whose work ranges from cleaning the hallways to helping his neighbors, is hard-working and he works from morning till night.（运用了whose引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】Not only does him do the work that belongs to him, but also he devotes to some extra work, like taking care of neighbors’ children.（运用了部分倒装和that引导的限制性定语从句，not only…but also…连接的并列句）
8．Dear David,
I’m thrilled to hear about your plans to visit China for your graduation trip! Among the countless cities, I highly recommend Beijing, the capital of China.
Beijing, a city with a rich historical and cultural heritage, offers a unique blend of ancient and modern. Here, you can witness the majesty of the Forbidden City and the tranquility of the Summer Palace. Moreover, the lively Hutong areas provide a glimpse into traditional Beijing life.
I’m sure Beijing will leave a lasting impression on your China journey. Look forward to hearing about your adventures!
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写信向David推荐自己眼中最具代表性的中国城市。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
激动的：thrilled→excited
无数的：countless→numerous
强烈：highly→strongly
此外：moreover→besides
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Beijing, a city with a rich historical and cultural heritage, offers a unique blend of ancient and modern.
拓展句：Beijing, which is a city with a rich historical and cultural heritage, offers a unique blend of ancient and modern.
[高分句型1] I’m sure Beijing will leave a lasting impression on your China journey. (运用了省略that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Look forward to hearing about your adventures! (运用了动名词短语作宾语)
9．Dear Sam,
Thank you for your trust. As for me, I will definitely recommend Sichuan hot pot to you.
Hot pot enjoys the greatest popularity in China. Families and friends often gather around a big hot pot, eating and chatting cheerfully. The steaming pot is usually filled with chili peppers with bright red oil on the top.
Because everyone is free to choose their favorite food, hot pot has become a representative of Chinese values of openness, equality and sharing. That is why I strongly recommend it to you.
Have a try, and I’m sure you will love it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友Sam最近在准备有关中国饮食文化的课堂展示，写邮件请你推荐一种中国特色美食，要求给他写一封回信。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
肯定地：definitely→ surely
愉快地：cheerfully→ delightedly
装满：be filled with→ be full of
喜欢：love→ enjoy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： As for me, I will definitely recommend Sichuan Hot Pot to you.
拓展句： As for me, I will definitely recommend Sichuan Hot Pot to you, which is undoubtedly both delicious and savory.
[高分句型1]Families and friends often gather around a big hot pot, eating and chatting cheerfully.(运用了现在分词作状语的结构)
[高分句型2]Because everyone is free to choose their favorite food, hot pot has become a representative of Chinese values of openness, equality and sharing. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
10．Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin, a student from Chenguang High School. With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our British sister school.
I would like to submit a photo that features a group of students planting trees with enthusiasm on a sunny afternoon. I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
I sincerely hope that my photo will be selected for the exhibition. It would be an honor to have my work displayed with the other outstanding entries and to contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental awareness. Thank you for considering my submission.
Yours,
Li Jin
【写作解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给组委会写一封信来推荐照片，描述照片的内容，说明选择该照片的理由，表达对该照片入选的愿望。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
兴奋的：thrilled→excited
参加：participate in→take part in
提交：submit→hand in
对……做贡献：contribute to→make contributions to
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I choose this photo because it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
拓展句：The reason why I choose this photo is that it captures the essence of our campus’ environmental protection efforts and caters to the theme of “Green Campus, Flying Youth”.
【高分句型1】With the World Earth Day approaching, I am thrilled to participate in the “Green Campus, Flying Youth” photography exhibition to be held online by our school and our British sister school.(使用了With复合结构、不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】It would be an honor to have my work displayed with the other outstanding entries and to contribute to the global effort of promoting environmental awareness. (使用了It作形式主语且不定式作真正主语的句型、have sth. done结构)(共12张PPT)
推荐信
【试题探究】
假定你是李华, 你的美国网友David看完电影《哪吒之魔童降世》海外版后非常喜欢, 写信想请你再推荐一部中国电影。请你根据以下要点给他回信:
1. 表示高兴;
2. 推荐一部电影;
3. 推荐的理由(至少两条)。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
Step 1: 审题布局
人称 第一人称 (I)为主
时态 一般现在时, 一般将来时
要点 1. 说明写信目的
2. 推荐的电影和推荐的理由
3. 表达希望
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 我很高兴知道你对中国电影《哪吒之魔童降世》感兴趣。
一般表达: I am glad to know you’re interested in the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
句式升级(高级词汇, 被动语态):
I’m delighted to know you’re __________ by the Chinese film, Ne Zha.
fascinated
要点2: 这部动画电影也是以中国经典神话故事为基础, 和《哪吒之魔童降世》
有许多相似之处。
一般表达: This animated film _______________classic Chinese fairy tales, and ____
_____________________Ne Zha.
句式升级(定语从句):
This animated film, __________________________________________, has much in
common with Ne Zha.
is also based on
has
much in common with
which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Dear David,
I’m delighted to know you’re fascinated by the Chinese film, Ne Zha. And I’m perfectly willing to recommend another impressive Chinese movie at your request.
Since I know animated films are your favorites, you can’t miss Monkey King: Hero Is Back. This animated film, which is also based on classic Chinese fairy tales, has much in common with Ne Zha, so I think it’ll appeal to you. Additionally, Monkey King and Ne Zha are both regarded as heroes by Chinese people. Through these two movies, you will get a better understanding of Chinese culture.
I hope you’ll find the movie well worth seeing.
Yours,
Li Hua
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 说明目的
①Our school’s approaching 100th birthday will be celebrated this July. Could you please recommend a student to address at the opening ceremony in English
我们学校将在今年七月庆祝即将到来的百年校庆。你能推荐一位学生在开幕式上用英语发言吗
②Hearing/Learning that you are coming to visit China, I would like to recommend several places of interest to you.
听说你要来中国, 我想向你推荐几个名胜古迹。
2. 篇中——紧扣要点, 推荐理由
①He is an all-round student with excellent grades in all subjects. As a boy with great potential, he is good/skillful at solving difficult problems.
他是一个全面的学生, 各科成绩优异。作为一个很有潜力的男孩, 他善于解决难题。
②In addition, what makes him a model student is his positive attitude towards life.
此外, 使他成为模范学生的是他积极的生活态度。
3. 结尾——表达希望, 盼回复
①Your taking my recommendation into consideration will be highly expected. Keenly anticipate your prompt reply.
希望您能考虑我的建议。热切期待您的及时答复。
②I do hope that you can find my recommendation beneficial. Looking forward to your early/prompt reply.
我希望我的推荐对你有帮助。期待你的早日/及时回复。
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter打算这个寒假来中国旅游, 让你推荐一个城市, 你想推荐杭州作为他旅游行程的首选。请用英语给他写封信, 内容包括:
1. 推荐城市;
2. 推荐理由;
3. 你的祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
_________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
I’m delighted to know you’re coming to China for your winter holiday. Personally, I’d like to recommend the city of Hangzhou to you.
When it comes to Hangzhou, the first thing that comes to mind is West Lake, which has been a scenic spot for hundreds of years. Besides, there are many tourist attractions in and around the city, such as Tiger-running Spring, the Lingyin Monastery and Spring Dawn at Su Causeway. Most importantly, Hangzhou is home to delicious food, such as Dongpo Pork and Longjing Shrimp.
I hope the nice weather and convenient transportation here can make your trip more enjoyable.
Yours,
Li Hua
