2025年高考英语一轮复习书面表达之应用文类型10(征文或投稿)
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能, 请你以“Learning a new skill”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 简要描述; 2. 体验和感受。
Step 1: 精准审题 谋篇布局
类 型 投稿
人 称 第一人称(I)
时 态 一般现在时; 一般过去时
要 点 1. 描述学到的新技能 2. 过程与体验 3. 感受和收获
Step 2: 字斟句酌 巧饰亮点
要点1: 一开始, 读五线谱上的音符是相当困难的。
一般表达: In the beginning, reading the notes on the stave was quite hard.
→一开始, 读五线谱上的音符是相当困难的, 但是我没有放弃。(高级表达)
In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave, but I didn’t give up.
要点2: 虽然经过几个小时的练习, 我的手指会感到疼痛, 但如果我能完整地演奏一首曲子, 我就会感到满足。
Although my fingers were painful after a few hours’ practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
要点3: 即使我不会把弹钢琴作为我的终身职业, 我仍然会把它作为我最大的爱好。
Even though I will not make playing the piano as my life career, I will still regard it as my first hobby.
Step 3: 衔接过渡 斐然成篇
Learning a new skill
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson as a beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave, but I didn’t give up. I spent most of my leisure hours practicing the piano. Although my fingers were painful after a few hours’ practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not make playing the piano as my life career, I will still regard it as my first hobby.
【句式储备】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 引出话题
①Nowadays, more and more foreigners are becoming increasingly interested in traditional Chinese culture. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows.
如今, 越来越多的外国人逐渐对中国传统文化感兴趣。存在这种现象的原因可以列举如下。
②I’m Li Hua, an editor of English newspaper of our school. Knowing you are familiar with the culture in your country, I’m writing to invite you to contribute an essay to share something with us.
我是李华, 是我们学校英文报的编辑。我知道你对你的国家的文化很熟悉, 所以我写信邀请你写一篇文章与我们分享一些东西。
2. 篇中——详细描述, 讲清理由
①Among the many symbols that represent China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is on the top of my recommendation list. 在代表中国及其独特文化的众多象征中, 长城是我的首选推荐。
②Originally built by Emperor Qinshihuang and expanded and strengthened in the Ming Dynasty, it became the world’s largest military structure.
它最初由秦始皇建造, 并在明朝扩建和加强, 成为世界上最大的军事建筑。
3. 结尾——再次总结全文
①In my view, it’s our country’s being strong that has made the cultural aspect of our country more appealing and charming. 在我看来, 正是我们国家的强大使我们国家的文化方面更具吸引力和魅力。
②I appreciate it because it is unique in the world. Besides, it makes drinking tea more enjoyable, and also gives us an insight into people’s lifestyle in the Song Dynasty. 我欣赏它, 因为它在世界上是独一无二的。此外, 它使喝茶变得更加愉快, 也让我们了解了宋代人们的生活方式。
【拓展储备】
21st Century Teens英文报正在就“越来越多的外国人爱上中国传统文化”这一现象举办征文活动, 请你写一篇英语短文投稿, 内容要点如下:
1. 分析原因;
2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
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【参考范文】
Nowadays, more and more foreigners are becoming increasingly interested in traditional Chinese culture. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows.
For one thing, China has a long history and evolves colorful, mysterious and unique cultures in its development, which makes it more attractive. For another, our country’s economy has been developing at a good pace. During their stay, they are also exposed to and fascinated by our diverse traditional cultures.
And I think every one of us should take responsibility to spread our excellent traditional culture to the world. Only in this way can our country go further and be more stable on the way to realizing the Chinese Dream.
【要点精练】
1．假定你是李华，上周你参加了学校组织的“走进社区”社会实践活动，请你向校英文报投稿，介绍本次活动。内容包括：
1.活动内容；
2.活动感受。
注意：
1.词数80左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
A Community-based Social Practice Activity
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2．某英语报的《中国传统节日》栏正在向国内外征稿。请你以“My Amazing ______ Experience”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1.你喜欢的节日(需在标题中注明);
2.你的庆祝方式。
注意：1.词数 100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Amazing ______ Experience
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3．某英文报拟开设Cities in the world栏目，你对此很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇介绍北京的短文投稿，内容包括：
1.城市概况：位于中国北部；人口超过2000万；中国的首都及政治中心；
2.城市景点：故宫(the Forbidden City)、天安门广场(Tian’ anmen Square)、长城等。
3.城市美食：北京烤鸭等
注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文丰富连贯。
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4．假定你是李华，请你给某英文报刊“人与自然”专栏写一篇与自然灾害有关的短文。内容包括：
1. 描述自然灾害的现象和后果；
2. 分析自然灾害频发的原因；
3. 发出号召。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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5．近年来中学生的身体健康越来越受到重视，体育运动更是中学生的必修课。你校英语社团将举办以“热爱运动”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“Enjoy sports, enjoy life”为题写一篇英语短文投稿。
写作要点：
1.你最喜欢的运动项目和原因；
2.运动给你带来的好处；
3.如何坚持运动；
4.呼吁大家一起运动。
写作要求：
1.词数为80词左右；
2.内容必须包括所给要点， 可适当发挥， 增加细节， 使行文连贯；
3.短文开头已给出， 不计入总词数。
参考词汇： helpful (adj.有帮助的) , relax (v.放松) , keep healthy (保持健康)
Enjoy sports, enjoy life
Today doing sports is becoming more and more important to us.
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6．假定你是高三学生李华，校英语角栏目就“教室里安装高考倒计时牌(Countdown to the Gaokao Reminder) ”这种做法征集意见，你认为不合理，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1．说明问题；
2．提出建议。
注意：1．写作词数应为80左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 3.
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7．假定你是李华，你校英文报准备以“Beauty on the Campus”为主题举办征文比赛，请你写一篇征文启事。内容：1.征文目的；2.征文要求；3.截止日期。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Beauty on the Campus
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8．近年来，国内因各种原因导致的火灾频发，造成不少人员伤亡。为了增加学生的安全自救常识，提高防火安全意识，请你根据以下提示，以“How to Survive a Fire”为题为学校英语时报投一篇英文稿件。内容包括：
1. 目前火灾事故现状；
2.火灾逃生的自救建议措施；
3. 呼吁号召。
注意：1.写作词数应为120词左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节以使内容信息丰富；
参考词汇: 爬行 crawl; 电梯 elevator/lift; 消防演习 the fire drill
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9．上周五，你校组织了一次走访社区传统文化传承人的活动。请你写一篇新闻稿，向校英语报投稿，内容包括：
1. 走访过程；2.谈谈收获。
注意：
1.写作词数应为 80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
参考词汇：文化遗产cultural heritage；传承人inheritor
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10．假定你是李华，请向21st Century Teens的“Sunshine Sports”专栏投稿，介绍一下你校的阳光体育活动。要点包括：
1. 活动目的；
2. 组织形式；
3. 个人收获。
注意：1. 词数80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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参考答案
1．
A Community-based Social Practice Activity
Last week, I had the privilege of participating in our school’s community-based social practice activity. It deepened my understanding of community service.
We visited a nearby community and engaged in various activities. We helped clean up the environment, interacted with residents, and organized cultural performances. The highlight was assisting at a local charity event, where we raised funds for needy families.
This activity left me with a profound sense of fulfillment. It was a rewarding experience that not only enriched my school life but also taught me the value of community engagement. I am grateful for this opportunity and look forward to more such activities in the future.
【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生在上周参加了学校组织的“走进社区”社会实践活动后，向校英文报投稿，介绍本次活动。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
参加：participate in→take part in
活动：activity→event
各种各样的：various→kinds of
感激：grateful→thankful/appreciative
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last week, I had the privilege of participating in our school’s community-based social practice activity. It deepened my understanding of community service.
拓展句：Last week, I had the privilege of participating in our school’s community-based social practice activity, which deepened my understanding of community service.
[高分句型1]The highlight was assisting at a local charity event, where we raised funds for needy families.(运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]It was a rewarding experience that not only enriched my school life but also taught me the value of community engagement.(运用了that引导的定语从句和not only...but also...连接并列的谓语)
2．范文
My Amazing Chinese Lunar New Year Experience
The Chinese Lunar New Year is one of the most important festivals in China and the customs and traditions of celebrating the event vary from place to place. For me, the most enjoyable activity is to decorate my home with the traditional paintings, which can add my personal touches to the celebrations.
Last year, I experimented with paper-cutting I had just learned and succeeded in creating various beautiful “loongs” or Chinese dragons. Before I started the project, I surfed the Internet and tried to learn about the dragon as much as possible. It was a really cultural adventure!
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“My Amazing ______ Experience”为题写一篇短文投稿。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→vital
传统的：traditional→conventional
令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasing
各种各样的：various→a variety of
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Last year, I experimented with paper-cutting I had just learned and succeeded in creating various beautiful “loongs” or Chinese dragons.
拓展句：Last year, not only did I experiment with paper-cutting I had just learned, but also I succeeded in creating various beautiful “loongs” or Chinese dragons.
[高分句型1] The Chinese Lunar New Year is one of the most important festivals in China and the customs and traditions of celebrating the event vary from place to place. (运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型2] For me, the most enjoyable activity is to decorate my home with the traditional paintings, which can add my personal touches to the celebrations. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
3． There are many famous cities in the world. However, Beijing is one of my favorite cities. Beijing is located in the northeast of China. Home to over 20 million people, the capital of China is also the political centre of the country. There are many famous historical places of interest in the city of Beijing, which attracts a large number of tourists from all over the world every year. The Forbidden City, the Great Wall and Tian-anmen Square all show Beijing’s rich cultural heritage to the world. When you stay in Beijing, one of the most unforgettable experiences is to taste the famous Beijing Roast Duck. It is very delicious and I enjoy it very much.
Therefore, it is well worth visiting for people from all around the world.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英文报拟开设的Cities in the world栏目投稿，介绍中国的首都北京。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→well-known
然而：however→nevertheless
坐落于：be located in→be situated in
大量的：a large number of→numerous/plenty of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：There are many famous cities in the world.
拓展句：There are many cities which are renowned for their fame in the world.
【高分句型1】There are many famous historical places of interest in the city of Beijing, which attracts a large number of tourists from all over the world every year. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】When you stay in Beijing, one of the most unforgettable experiences is to taste the famous Beijing Roast Duck. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
4．One possible version:
As we all know, natural disasters, such as the earthquakes, sandstorms, floods and so on, do much damage to human. Thus, countless houses are in ruins, numerous fields are destroyed, and millions of people suffer great economical loss.
There are several reasons for these disasters. The quick population growth has a bad effect on nature, since it means higher demands for supplies. What’s more, people lack the consciousness of environmental protection, making them lose the ability to deal with emergencies.
In my opinion, we are supposed to make every effort to keep the balance between human and nature. Only in this way can we humans survive.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照要求给某英文报刊“人与自然”专栏写一篇与自然灾害有关的短文。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
因此：thus→ therefore
无数的：countless→ innumerable
很多的：numerous→ a lot of
几个：several→ a few
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As we all know, natural disasters, such as the earthquakes, sandstorms, floods and so on, do much damage to human.
拓展句：It is known to all that natural disasters, such as the earthquakes, sandstorms, floods and so on, do much damage to human.
【高分句型1】As we all know, natural disasters, such as the earthquakes, sandstorms, floods and so on, do much damage to human. （运用了As引导的非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】What’s more, people lack the consciousness of environmental protection, making them lose the ability to deal with emergencies.（运用了现在分词making作状语）
5．Enjoy sports, enjoy life
Today doing sports is becoming more and more important to us. As students, we can do different kinds of sports after class. As for me, I like playing football best, so I often play it with my friends after school for an hour. It’s very interesting.
There is no doubt that doing sports is helpful to us. It can not only build up our bodies but also keep us healthy and strong. What’s more, doing sports can help to relax ourselves. The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports.
To keep doing sports, we should love sports first, because love is the greatest power. Second, making a plan is very important. It makes doing sports more effective. Last but not least, we can do sports with a partner who has the same interest with you.
Enjoy sports, and it will make us better!
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“Enjoy sports, enjoy life”为题写一篇英语短文，向学校英语社团将举办的以“热爱运动”为主题的征文活动投稿。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
重要的：important→significant
种类：kind→sort
有益的：helpful→beneficial
另外：what’s more→in addition
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：As for me, I like playing football best, so I often play it with my friends after school for an hour.
拓展句：As for me, I like playing football best and that’s why I often play it with my friends after school for an hour.
[高分句型1] The most important is that we can make friends when we do sports. (运用了that引导的表语从句和when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] To keep doing sports, we should love sports first, because love is the greatest power. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
6．
I’m Li Hua, a student in Grade 3. I believe installing a countdown to the Gaokao reminder in the classroom is not a wise choice. Firstly, it can create unnecessary pressure and anxiety among students, affecting their mental health. Secondly, it may distract students from focusing on their studies and preparing for the exam effectively.
Instead, I propose that we create a positive and supportive learning environment. Teachers and students can work together to set realistic goals and formulate effective study plans. Regular study sessions and mock exams can also help students assess their progress and prepare better for the Gaokao. By fostering a healthy and encouraging atmosphere, we can empower students to face the Gaokao with confidence and ease.
【写作解析】本篇是应用文写作。要求考生就“教室里安装高考倒计时牌(Countdown to the Gaokao Reminder)”这种做法发表意见，认为不合理，并写一篇短文投稿。
【要点分析】1. 词汇积累
认为：believe (that)→hold the belief that
首先：firstly→to begin with
影响：affect→influence
专注于：focus on→concentrate on
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, it can create unnecessary pressure and anxiety among students, affecting their mental health.
拓展句：Firstly, installing a countdown to the Gaokao reminder can create unnecessary pressure and anxiety among students, which in turn affects their mental health negatively.
[高分句型1] I believe installing a countdown to the Gaokao reminder in the classroom is not a wise choice. (省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Instead, I propose that we create a positive and supportive learning environment. (that引导的宾语从句)
7．Beauty on the Campus
To inspire students to appreciate the beautiful campus as well as those touching events in the school life, we have planned to launch a writing competition, whose theme is “Beauty on the Campus”.
As the name suggests, you’re supposed to write about the people or things that have touched you. You can also focus on the beautiful campus in every season of the year. It’s our sincere hope that all of you can get involved in the competition and share your experience with us. You can submit your article, which is restricted to 1,000 words, by May 30.
Your participation is welcome!
【写作解析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生，写一篇征文启事，邀请同学们参加以“Beauty on the Campus”为主题的征文比赛。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
激励某人做某事：inspire sb. to do sth.→encourage sb. to do sth.
令人感动的：touching→moving
参加：get involved in→participate in
集中精力于：focus on→concentrate on
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：You can also focus on the beautiful campus in every season of the year.
拓展句：You can also focus on the beautiful campus in every season of the year, which is undoubtedly a good topic.
[高分句型1]
It’s our sincere hope that all of you can get involved in the competition and share your experience with us.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导主语从句）
[高分句型2]
You can submit your article, which is restricted to 1,000 words, by May 30.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）
8．How to Survive a Fire
In recent years, fire accidents have become a great concern in our country. Many fires have broken out in residential areas, factories, and public spaces leading to significant loss of life and property. It is crucial to enhance our awareness of fire safety and equip ourselves with essential self-rescue measures to effectively cope with such emergencies.
During a fire, quick thinking and immediate action make a difference between life and death. Firstly, it’s important to stay calm and call the fire department immediately to report the fire. If possible, escape through fire escape exits and use stair s instead of elevators. If trapped, seal off doors with wet towels to keep smoke out. Remember to cover your nose and mouth with wet cloth while crawling low beneath smoke to avoid breathing in poisonous gases.
It is our collective responsibility to prioritize the fire safety. Regular inspections, practicing fire drills, and ensuring the availability of functional fire extinguishers can make a significant difference. Only with joint efforts can we build a safer and safer community.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生以“How to Survive a Fire”为题为学校英语时报投一篇英文稿件。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
至关重要的：crucial→vital
提高：enhance→boost
首先：firstly→first and foremost
处理：cope with→deal with
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Firstly, it’s important to stay calm and call the fire department immediately to report the fire.
拓展句：Firstly, it’s important that we stay calm and call the fire department immediately to report the fire.
[高分句型1] If possible, escape through fire escape exits and use stair s instead of elevators. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句和省略句)
[高分句型2] Only with joint efforts can we build a safer and safer community. (运用了部分倒装句)
9．Last Friday, our school organized a meaningful visit to local inheritors of traditional culture, providing an invaluable opportunity for students to explore and appreciate our rich cultural heritage.
During the visit, students were warmly welcomed by the inheritors and had the chance to observe firsthand how traditional crafts and arts are passed down from generation to generation. The inheritors shared their stories and expertise, demonstrating the intricate skills required to maintain these age-old practices.
This enriching experience left students with a deeper understanding of the importance of preserving cultural heritage. The visit not only broadened students’ horizons but also fostered a sense of respect and appreciation for our cultural roots.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的新闻稿。要求考生就上周五学校组织的一次走访社区传统文化传承人的活动写一篇新闻稿，向校英语报投稿。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
无价的：invaluable→ precious/valuable
机会：opportunity → chance
重要性：importance → significance
培养：foster→ develop
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Last Friday, our school organized a meaningful visit to local inheritors of traditional culture, providing an invaluable opportunity for students to explore and appreciate our rich cultural heritage.
拓展句：Last Friday, our school organized a meaningful visit to local inheritors of traditional culture, which provided an invaluable opportunity for students to explore and appreciate our rich cultural heritage.
【高分句型1】During the visit, students were warmly welcomed by the inheritors and had the chance to observe firsthand how traditional crafts and arts are passed down from generation to generation.（运用了how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】The visit not only broadened students’ horizons but also fostered a sense of respect and appreciation for our cultural roots.（运用了not only…but also…引导的并列句）
10．Aiming to relieve study pressure, enhance students’ physical and mental health, our school has launched the “Sunshine Sports” campaign over the past term.
Among a series of options, which include badminton, volleyball, tennis, table tennis and gymnastics, students select one autonomously based on interest. After confirming choices and grouped, they are guided to play certain sports respectively by PE teachers at 4 o’clock every Tuesday afternoon on the playground or in the school gym.
I picked badminton as my event. After months’ training, my skills have been sharpened and my health improved obviously, and I am seldom seen sleepy in class now! It’s indeed a project worth promoting.
【写作解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向21st Century Teens的“Sunshine Sports”专栏投稿，介绍一下学校的阳光体育活动。
【要点分析】1.词汇积累
增强：enhance→strengthen
挑选：select→pick out
明显地：obviously→evidently
压力：pressure→stress
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：It’s indeed a project worth promoting.
拓展句：It’s indeed a project that is worth promoting.
[高分句型1]Aiming to relieve study pressure, enhance students’ physical and mental health, our school has launched the “Sunshine Sports” campaign over the past term.（运用了现在分词作状语）
[高分句型2]Among a series of options, which include badminton, volleyball, tennis, table tennis and gymnastics, students select one autonomously based on interest.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句）(共14张PPT)
征文(投稿)
【真题再现】
(2023· 全国乙卷改编)
学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能, 请你以“Learning a new skill”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1. 简要描述; 2. 体验和感受。
Step 1: 审题布局
类 型 投稿
人 称 第一人称(I)
时 态 一般现在时; 一般过去时
要 点 1. 描述学到的新技能
2. 过程与体验
3. 感受和收获
Step 2: 巧饰亮点
要点1: 一开始, 读五线谱上的音符是相当困难的。
一般表达: In the beginning, reading the notes on the stave was quite hard.
→一开始, 读五线谱上的音符是相当困难的, 但是我没有放弃。(高级表达)
In the beginning, __________________________________on the stave, but I didn’t
give up.
it was quite difficult to read the notes
要点2: 虽然经过几个小时的练习, 我的手指会感到疼痛, 但如果我能完整地演奏一
首曲子, 我就会感到满足。
_____________________________________________________, I felt satisfied if I
could play a music piece completely.
要点3: 即使我不会把弹钢琴作为我的终身职业, 我仍然会把它作为我最大的爱好。
_______________________________________________________, I will still regard it
as my first hobby.
Although my fingers were painful after a few hours’ practice
Even though I will not make playing the piano as my life career
Step 3: 衔接成篇
Learning a new skill
When I was in my primary school, I had an opportunity to attend a musical contest held in my school. That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance. The fantastic players touched me deeply.
I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson as a beginner. In the beginning, it was quite difficult to read the notes on the stave, but I didn’t give up. I spent most of my leisure hours practicing the piano. Although my fingers were painful after a few hours’ practice, I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.
Even though I will not make playing the piano as my life career, I will still regard it as my first hobby.
【句式构储】
1. 篇头——开篇表意, 引出话题
①Nowadays, more and more foreigners are becoming increasingly interested in traditional Chinese culture. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows.
如今, 越来越多的外国人逐渐对中国传统文化感兴趣。存在这种现象的原因可以列举如下。
②I’m Li Hua, an editor of English newspaper of our school. Knowing you are familiar with the culture in your country, I’m writing to invite you to contribute an essay to share something with us.
我是李华, 是我们学校英文报的编辑。我知道你对你的国家的文化很熟悉, 所以我写信邀请你写一篇文章与我们分享一些东西。
2. 篇中——详细描述, 讲清理由
①Among the many symbols that represent China and its unique culture, the Great Wall is on the top of my recommendation list. 在代表中国及其独特文化的众多象征中, 长城是我的首选推荐。
②Originally built by Emperor Qinshihuang and expanded and strengthened in the Ming Dynasty, it became the world’s largest military structure.
它最初由秦始皇建造, 并在明朝扩建和加强, 成为世界上最大的军事建筑。
3. 结尾——再次总结全文
①In my view, it’s our country’s being strong that has made the cultural aspect of our country more appealing and charming. 在我看来, 正是我们国家的强大使我们国家的文化方面更具吸引力和魅力。
②I appreciate it because it is unique in the world. Besides, it makes drinking tea more enjoyable, and also gives us an insight into people’s lifestyle in the Song Dynasty. 我欣赏它, 因为它在世界上是独一无二的。此外, 它使喝茶变得更加愉快, 也让我们了解了宋代人们的生活方式。
【拓展训练】
21st Century Teens英文报正在就“越来越多的外国人爱上中国传统文化”这一现象举办征文活动, 请你写一篇英语短文投稿, 内容要点如下:
1. 分析原因;
2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
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【参考范文】
Nowadays, more and more foreigners are becoming increasingly interested in traditional Chinese culture. The reasons why there exists this phenomenon can be listed as follows.
For one thing, China has a long history and evolves colorful, mysterious and unique cultures in its development, which makes it more attractive. For another, our country’s economy has been developing at a good pace. During their stay, they are also exposed to and fascinated by our diverse traditional cultures.
And I think every one of us should take responsibility to spread our excellent traditional culture to the world. Only in this way can our country go further and be more stable on the way to realizing the Chinese Dream.
