2024年中考英语(书面表达)模拟真题速递(江苏专用)(含解析)

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2024年中考英语(书面表达)模拟真题速递(江苏专用)
1.(2024·江苏无锡·一模)成长路上,你曾经遇见过很多人,如一位师长,一个朋友等;你也曾经历过很多事,如一次比赛,一项活动等;你也有自己喜欢的东西,如一首歌,一本书;这些人、事物或多或少的对你产生影响,让你发生一些变化,这些变化往往会有助于你的成长。
请以 “_________ made me a difference”为题写一篇英语短文。
以下问题供你参考:
According to an experience of your own, talk about:
1. Which person or thing touched you
2. How did you feel and what did you gain
3. ……
注意事项:
1. 必须包括以上要点,可适当发挥。语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意,书写规范;
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名;
3. 词数在100个左右,首尾已在答题卡上给出,不计入总词数;
4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
_________ Made Me a Difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or daily life, may make us a difference.
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【答案】例文
A Friend Made Me a Difference
In our life, our family or friends, even some strangers, as well as what we’ve gone through in our study or
daily life, may make us a difference. A friend of mine really made me a difference.
I used to be a quite shy girl. I only liked playing computer games. I hated English, so my English mark was low in the exam. Luckily, a friend of mine changed my life. She asked me to play outside with others. She helped me with my English by encouraging me to read English aloud and talk to her in English. I also practiced English after school. Gradually, my English has improved. I am good at English now.
Thanks to my friend, I am a confident and outgoing girl now. I’ve changed so much that many people like to make friends with me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括所列问题要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,一个朋友真的改变了我,从而引出话题;
第二步,陈述过去的事情,自己在朋友的帮助之下改变的过程;
第三步,表达自己的感受与收获。
[亮点词汇]
① thanks to 多亏了
② be good at 擅长
[高分句型]
① I hated English, so my English mark was low in the exam. (so引导并列句)
② I’ve changed so much that many people like to make friends with me. (so…that…引导结果状语从句)
2.(2024·江苏无锡·一模)毕业在即,阳光中学某班英语老师请同学们在成长档案中加入主题为“My Dream Job”的一页,希望大家记录憧憬,分享自己对理想职业的理解和行动计划。假设你是该班的一名学生,请结合自身特点撰写一篇英语短文。下表是你从教材中找到的相关信息,仅供参考。
Name Job Personality Action Saying
Chief careful;serious and pay attention to every detail; work to high standards A miss is as good as
Liu Tao engineer organized a mile.
Dr Ma doctor kind and patient do more volunteer work to help more people …
Wu Bing teacher kind and helpful
注意事项:
1.短文内容须自拟,要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.词数在100个左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息;
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】例文:
My Dream Job
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be a doctor.
First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. They often do more volunteer work to help more people in their spare time. When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. Second, the doctors work in the front line to fight against the serious illness. They move me a lot. Third, the doctors use their knowledge to help people have better lives. I dream of becoming one of them.
I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. I also plan to read more books about medicine. Then I will know better about the job. I’m sure I will be a good doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:考生应紧扣“My Dream Job”主题,根据提示进行写作,介绍自己理想的职业、理由以及行动计划,可适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。阐述想要从事的职业;
第二步,具体阐述你想从事这个职业的理由和行动计划;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都
②take an interest in对……感兴趣
③fight against反抗
④plan to计划
[高分句型]
①First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
3.(2024·江苏宿迁·一模)在初中三年的学习生活中,你迎难而上,勇于担当,逐渐成长为“眼中有光,心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表,请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿,与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。
优秀品质 乐于助人, 积极参加志愿者服务(举一例说明)
心路历程 勤学好问,克服困难(举一例说明)
展望未来 1. 自拟一点对自我的要求;2. 做一位健康阳光、感恩的少年。
要求:
1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;
3)词数:90词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】参考范文:
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities.
Firstly, I am always ready to help others and do voluntary work actively. I usually spend my weekends helping old people clean their flats at our community center. I feel happy if they are happy. Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Last term, I had problems in understanding Physics, I asked Mr. Zhao for advice. I would not improve so much without his help.
In the future, I will keep studying to go towards a wider world. As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth. I will also learn to be more thankful to people around me and try to help more people.
I hope we can grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中作为新时代青少年的感受,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己的优秀品质和经历;
第二步,简要介绍心路历程及体会;
第三步,表达未来期望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend... doing sth.花费……做某事
②a wider world更广阔的世界
③grow together一起成长
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help.(that引导定语从句)
②As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth.(since引导原因状语从句)
4.(2024·江苏常州·一模)现在越来越多的学生有久坐的习惯。假定你是李华,请你以“Do not sit for a long time”为题给你校英文报写一篇短文,说明久坐的危害并提出解决这一问题的建议。
注意:
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称:
2. 词数100左右。
Do not sit for a long time
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【答案】例文
Do not sit for a long time
Nowadays, more and more students have the habit of sitting for a long time. Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death.
To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. First, we can go to school on foot or by bike so that we can exercise. Second, we should keep a correct sitting posture when we are in class.
What’s more, it’s necessary for us to stand up and take some exercise during break time at school.
All in all, sitting for a long time has a bad effect on us, and we should develop good living habits.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇话题作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求介绍久坐的危害并给出解决问题的建议,可适当发挥,并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍久坐的危害;
第二步,给出解决问题的建议;
第三步,进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①form good living habits养成良好的生活习惯
②all in all总而言之
③have a bad effect on对……有不良影响
[高分句型]
①Not only can this habit make our neck and back ache, but it may make us fat, increase the risk of heart disease and even death. (倒装句)
②To prevent these problems from happening, we should form good living habits. (动词不定式作目的状语)
5.(2024·江苏苏州·一模)
亲爱的十年后的自己: 你好!当你打开这封信的时候,我们已经相隔了整整十年的时光。 现在的我,正坐在考场里,提笔给未来的你写这封信,心中充满了感慨。 …… 内容要求:在这封信中,你可以谈谈自己现在的生活状态、学习情况,分享你的梦想和追求,也可以向未来的自己提出期望和建议。请充分发挥你的想象力,用英文书写这封跨越时空的信件。 注意: 1. 词数:100左右;
2. 内容完整(照抄试卷内容不得分); 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear future me,
How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed.
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Love,
Present me
【答案】例文
Dear future me,
How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed.
As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become.
Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. I dream of exploring new places, where each step takes me closer to understanding the world. I want to be someone who makes the world a better place. I know the years ahead will be filled with ups and downs, but each experience is a valuable lesson, isn’t it
Dear future me, wherever you are and whatever you’re doing, I hope you’ve learned to love yourself. Remember, I am always here with you.
Love,
Present me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇书信作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据内容要求进行写作,可适当发挥,以使行文连贯,注意无单词及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题,表达此刻正在给十年后的自己写信;
第二步,介绍自己现在的状况,并分享自己的梦想和追求;
第三步,对未来的自己提出期望及建议。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②be filled with充满
③ups and downs起伏
[高分句型]
①As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. (what引导宾语从句)
②Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. (who引导定语从句)
6.(2024·江苏宿迁·二模)又到一年毕业季,又逢青春告别时。假设你是九年级一班的李华,你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会(a farewell party)。请你撰写一份发言稿,谈谈三年来你的成长,你对未来的期待,以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。
注意:1. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文:
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement.
I still remember the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I thought I would never learn English well. But now, I realize that I was just being silly. Since then, I have tried to speak English in public many times and learned a lot. My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together. Now I am more and more confident. Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and healthier to have new experiences in senior high school. I’ve made up my mind to improve the ability of study, and develop interest in voluntary activities. At last, I would like to show my best wishes to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included.
Thank you all!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,包括三年来你的成长,你对未来的期待,以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头已给出,即将告别初中生活;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。三年来你的成长,你对未来的期待,以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿;
第三步,表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 曾经是
② the important of ……的重要性
③ make up one’s mind 下定决心 
[高分句型]
① My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together.(使用so连接两个句子,表示因果关系)
② Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and healthier to have new experiences in senior high school.(使用even though引导的让步状语从句)
7.(23-24九年级下·江苏盐城·期中)现在有些学生缺乏“感恩”意识,对待家人、朋友、老师等很冷漠,而且行为方式和价值观令人担忧。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,以“Learn to express thanks”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
内容:
1. Why should we learn to express thanks
2. Who should we express thanks to
3. How should we express thanks

要求:
1. 演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、地名及能够透露你个人身份的信息;
2. 词数:90单词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, boys and girls!
The topic of my speech today is “Learn to express thanks”. Nowadays some students want to eat well and wear fashionable clothes at school. They think they must be comfortable but they don’t show any sense of “Thanks”. I don’t think it is right. We are lucky in everything. We can have a chance to receive good education because of society. And it’s our parents who support us and love us very much. Besides, it is our teachers who teach us much knowledge. Our friends share joy with us and give us courage to overcome many difficulties.
We must learn to express thanks to them. At present, we should be polite to our teachers and parents. If it is possible, we’ll try to help others when they are in trouble. As a student, we must study hard in order to make a contribution to our country in the future and only when we succeed in our jobs can we better reward our parents, teachers and so on.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,解释为什么要感恩;
第二步,介绍应该向谁感恩;
第三步,介绍应该怎么感恩。
[亮点词汇]
①have a chance to do sth.有机会做某事
②because of因为
③share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
④learn to do sth.学会做某事
[高分句型]
①And it’s our parents who support us and love us very much.(who引导的定语从句)
②If it is possible, we’ll try to help others when they are in trouble.(if引导的条件状语从句)
8.(2024·江苏宿迁·二模)为贯彻“五育并举”的方针,提高学生的个人劳动素质,劳动课已经走进我们的课堂,各个学校都开展了丰富多彩的劳动技能培训和实践活动。最近阳光中学九年级组织学生到阳光农场进行一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题的研学活动。假如你是王丽,请根据下面的图示要点,分享一下你的活动经历。
要求:1. 表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 内容必须包含表格中所有相关信息,并适当发挥;
3. 词数100字左右(作文开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Labor is the most glorious
Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Li. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m glad to share my study trip to Sunshine Farm.
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We really hope that everyone can have chances to go on a study trip like that!
【答案】例文
Labor is the most glorious
Hello, everybody! I’m Wang Li. I’m in Year 9 at Sunshine Middle School. I’m glad to share my study trip to Sunshine Farm.
On April 5th, 2024, we arrived at the farm. The first thing we did was to learn about agriculture. The farmer showed us different crops and explained how they grow. After that, we got our hands dirty by digging the soil and planting some vegetables. For lunch, we didn’t just eat—we cooked! We picked fresh vegetables from the garden and made a delicious salad. After lunch, we cleaned up our mess. We picked up any litter we found and put it in the recycling bins. Then, we got to feed the farm animals, and they were so friendly.
This trip taught me so much more than what I have learned in school. I realized that labor is not just hard work, but it also has educational value. It helps us understand the importance of teamwork and cooperation. I think every student should participate in labor practice activities like this.
We really hope that everyone can have chances to go on a study trip like that!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当补充细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍研学活动的时间和地点;
第二步,描述做过的活动;
第三步,讲述研学活动的收获和感受。
[亮点词汇]
①arrive at到达
②show sb. sth.给某人看某物
③clean up打扫干净
④participate in参加
[高分句型]
①The farmer showed us different crops and explained how they grow.(how引导宾语从句)
②I think every student should participate in labor practice activities like this.(省略that的宾语从句)
9.(2024·江苏连云港·一模)享受阅读,享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日,学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示,为校英文报写一篇活
动报道。
注意:
(1)词数90左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club organized a reading festival last week.
During the festival, we enjoyed colourful activities. Sharing a good book was one of them. We shared our favourite books with other students. We also held a writing competition called“My favourite book”. Moreover, we acted out what we read. We put on the plays in the school hall. We all welcomed these exciting activities.
The reading festival creates a good reading environment. It also provides us with chances to learn more about the world and ourselves. The festival is over, but our reading never ends.
(92 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已经给出,考生注意不要遗漏,写作过程中可以适当增加细节描述,并且要突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍活动时间和地点;
第二步,具体阐述活动内容;
第三步,说明活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with和……分享
②moreover此外
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①Sharing a good book was one of them. (动名词作主语)
②Moreover, we acted out what we read. (what引导的宾语从句)
10.(2024·江苏宿迁·二模)紧张忙碌的初三学习生活已经过了大半,有喜悦也有失意,我校开展“How to Face Grade Nine”征文比赛,请你根据提示的内容,写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下:
鼓足信心 努力,一切皆有可能;灰心,则一事无成
勤奋细心 勤奋,终将进步;细心,就会……
管理时间 合理安排;劳逸结合
适当解压 有烦心事时, ……(分享两点解决方法)
要求:
1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯:
2.必须包括表格中所有要点内容,并适当发挥;
3.词数:100 词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
4.不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
How to Face Grade Nine
We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for over eight months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we face this term
First of all,
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Face the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
【答案】
例文:
How to Face Grade Nine
We have been here in Grade Nine, one of the most important years for us students, for over eight months. Some of us feel good, while some do not. How should we face this year
First of all, be confident. We should believe nothing is impossible. Don’t lose heart, or you can achieve nothing. Second, be hard-working. If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. We should also learn to be careful because a miss is as good as a mile. Carelessness leads to low marks. Third, we should plan our time well. And it’s important to keep a balance between work and play. Finally, we should know how to deal with our stress. When having worries, remember to share them with others or turn to your teachers or your parents for help. Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse.
Face the year wisely. It is you who shape your life and future!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格提示中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图(已给出)。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——鼓足信心、勤奋细心、管理时间、适当解压等方面均要一一阐述。
第三步,书写结语(已给出)。
[亮点词汇]
①be confident自信
②make progress取得进步
③deal with处理
[高分句型]
①If we work hard enough, we are sure to make progress. (If引导的条件状语从句)
②Keeping your worries to yourself can make them worse. (动名词作主语)
③We should also learn to be careful because a miss is as good as a mile. (原因状语从句)
11.(2024·江苏常州·一模)中考临近,很多同学为了能取得好成绩,经常熬夜复习,这对身体健康产生了较大的影响。请你就“Staying up late”这一话题发表你的看法,内容需包括:
(1)除了影响健康,熬夜会对学习带来怎样的影响?
(2)你认为应如何取得好成绩?
注意:1.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名;
2.词数100左右。短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot.
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【答案】例文
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. Besides, it accounts for the fact that we cannot concentrate in class, thus decreasing efficiency. Furthermore, people who suffer from lack of sleep get angry and impatient easily.
So serious is the problem that we have to find effective solutions to it. In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.
Finally, I wish the students get good grades in the high school entrance examination.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:针对“熬夜”这一话题发表看法,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。要涵盖材料中
提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写。
[写作步骤]
第一步,简单描述情况;
第二步,介绍熬夜会对学习带来的影响以及关于如何取得好成绩;
第三步,表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①lack of sleep缺少睡眠
②as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.(it句型以及非限制性定语从句)
12.(2024·江苏无锡·一模)未来我们需要具备什么核心能力?体育能力、终身学习能力、时间管理能力、沟通能力,创新能力……你们学校正在举行以“Core Abilities (核心能力)”为主题的英文演讲比赛,如果你是李华,请根据以下提示,选择至少两个核心能力,写一篇英语演讲稿。
What core abilities do you need in the future (choose at least two) Sports, life-long learning, time management, communication, creativity…
Why do you need these core abilities 1. … 2. …
What will you do to improve these abilities 1. … 2. …
注意:1.内容须包含所给的提示要点,可适当发挥。
2.词数100个左右:短文开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Core Abilities
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today.
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【答案】例文
Core Abilities
Good morning, everyone!
My name is Li Hua. It’s my great pleasure to talk about “core abilities” today. I think sports and life-long learning are the core abilities that we should have.
First of all, health is more important than wealth. So we should pay more attention to our health. It’s necessary for us to spend more time doing sports to keep healthy. We students need to make a plan of exercising and do sports for at least twenty minutes every day.
Next, with the rapid development of science and technology, we must have the ability of life-long learning to meet the needs of our work and life. I think the best way of keeping life-long learning is to learn by ourselves. We can learn from books, Internet or even radios. Only by doing this can we take on new challenges any time. I hope that everyone can keep doing sports and keep learning to make ourselves and our life better.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为演讲稿;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括表格中所列要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,介绍你认为必备的核心能力;
第二步,分别陈述应具备的核心能力及原因;
第三步,书写总结,表达愿望与感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②pay attention to注意
③take on承担
④with the rapid development of science and technology随着科学技术的飞速发展
[高分句型]
①I think sports and life-long learning are the core abilities that we should have. (宾语从句、定语从句)
②Only by doing this can we take on new challenges any time. (倒装句)
13.(2024·江苏淮安·一模)读万卷书,行万里路。4月23日是世界读书日,你们学校为此举行了“Reading makes a better me”的征文活动,请以此为话题,写一篇英语短文,内容需包含表格中所有要点。
你的阅读习惯 读各种各样的书;每天读书半小时;经常去图书馆。
你最喜欢的一本书 书名:《秘密花园》The Secret Garden 主题:亲近自然;互帮互助;保持希望;收获成长。
阅读给你带来的改变。 至少两点。
注意:
1. 100词左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
2. 可适当发挥,使短文连贯通顺;
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
【答案】
例文
Reading makes a better me
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles. Reading is important for everyone.
I often read various books. I read for half an hour every day and often go to the library.
My favorite book is The Secret Garden. The theme of this book is getting close to nature and helping each
other. It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them.
Since I developed the habit of reading daily, I have changed quite a lot. Firstly, I am no longer addicted to playing mobile games, but more focused on learning. Secondly, I have become increasingly good at thinking and have learned to solve problems independently.
I hope all of us can develop a good reading habit and enjoy reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章要点已经给出,按照话题展开阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,写你的阅读习惯;
第二步,介绍自己最喜欢的一本书;
第三步,描述阅读给你带来的改变。
[亮点词汇]
①be addicted to对……上瘾
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
① It told us to keep hopeful and never give up when facing difficulties, and we can grow up through them.(when引导时间状语从句)
14.(2024·江苏连云港·一模)2月25日,娃哈哈创始人宗庆后先生去世的消息牵动了不少人的思绪。作为三度荣登中国首富榜的他,生活简单朴素,经常穿着布鞋,却—直坚持帮助需要的人。他说幸福不是来自财富,而是帮助他人后内心的平静和满足。假如你是学校英语报的记者Shirley,请以“Happiness in my eyes” 为题,并结合宗老的事迹,写—篇英语短文。
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 内容必须包括表格中的要点,可适当发挥,使短文完整、流畅。
Happiness in My Eyes
The creator of Wahaha company named Zong Qinghou passed away on February 25. However, he left us a lot of thoughts about happiness.
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【答案】例文:
Happiness in My Eyes
The creator of Wahaha company named Zong Qinghou passed away on February 25. However, he left us a lot of thoughts about happiness.
Happiness is a very precious and satisfying feeling. It is not something that can be bought or sold. There are many things that can bring us happiness, such as spending time with loved ones, doing things that we enjoy,
helping others, being grateful for what we have, and living in the present moment.
There are also many ways to get happiness, such as practicing gratitude, spending time in nature, helping others, learning new things, and spending time with loved ones.
Happiness is not something that is easy to achieve, but it is worth it. Happiness is one of the most important things in life. It is what makes life worth living.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍什么是幸福及什么可以给我们带来幸福;
第二步,介绍我们如何获得幸福,要有自己的想法;
第三步,书写结语,幸福很重要,它使生命值得活下去。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②grateful感激的
③worth值得
[高分句型]
①There are many things that can bring us happiness, such as spending time with loved ones, doing things that we enjoy, helping others, being grateful for what we have, and living in the present moment. (定语从句;动名词短语)
②It is what makes life worth living. (名词性从句)
15.(2024·江苏苏州·一模)中考将至,不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现,因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪,迎战中考”为主题的班会课,来探讨如何调节自己的情绪,请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿,内容包括:
1. 简述面对中考,同学们不同的情绪及表现;
2. 提出调节情绪的方法(至少三点);
3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
注意事项:
1. 词数:100左右(首尾不计入总字数)。
2. 围绕主题,表达内容积极向上(照抄阅读语篇不得分)。
3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
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Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exam
First, it is important for us to be in a good mood. Second, we should have proper aims. Third, we should have enough sleep instead of staying up late. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. Last but not least, we should face the High School Entrance Exam positively and optimistically.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:考生注意根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述面对中考,同学们不同的情绪及表现,比如有些同学感到自信和兴奋,而有些同学感到紧张、压力过大,这导致他们吃不好也睡不好;
第二步,具体提出调节情绪的方法,例如保持心情愉悦、制定合适的目标、保证充足的睡眠、多和父母、老师、同学们沟通交流等;
第三步,书写结束语,鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
[亮点词汇]
①try their best to 尽他们最大的努力
②stressed out 极度焦虑的
③in order to 为了
④be in a good mood 心情愉悦
⑤instead of 代替,而不是
⑥stay up late 熬夜
⑦Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
⑧positively and optimistically 积极乐观地
[高分句型]
①Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. (and连接的并列句)
②While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well.(so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
16.(2024·江苏南京·一模)英文校刊Sunshine for Teens面向九年级学生征文。请你根据下面征文要求,以“The teacher I will never forget”为题,写一篇征文。
注意:
1. 内容涵盖所有要点,适当发挥,全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右 (征文开头不计入总词数)。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生和教师个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。
The teacher I will never forget
During the past three years in our school, _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文
版1
During the past three years in our school, I am writing to you to express my thanks for your help in learning English and speaking these days in your class, I have learned much from you and it is very helpful to me.
Firstly, you let me know what is the confidence. As you know, this can help me with my interaction with foreigners. Secondly, I have got enough confidence in speaking in English from your class and it took me a long time to gain this confidence. Now, I always express my ideas in English as possible as I can. It’s great to do that. The last not the least, I find that learning English is not a boring thing as before and I’m interested in studying !版2
During the past three years in our school, I would like to thank you for all the help you gave me. The follow is what I want to say to you—Miss Zhang.
You were always so patient when asking you questions. You listened to them carefully and explained everything so thoroughly. You showed me different ways to practice and remember new words and usage. I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English. You made the exercise so interesting that I was always very eager to participate and practice.
My English has improved so much. How could I thank you enough! I will keep working on my English.版3
During the past three years in our school, I’d like to use this chance to express my thanks to my English teacher, Ms Wang.
In the past, I was not good at English, especially in the field of spoken English. Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. Ms. Wang found my disadvantage and she encouraged me that: I believe you can do this and there are no difficulties you can’t overcome! At that time, I thought why couldn’t I trust myself as Ms. Wang did So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. After the hard working of both Ms. Wang and myself, I can speak English in front of people now.
To sum up, I’d like to express my gratitude to Ms. Wang once again. Without her help, I could not make such a big progress.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。直接说明你永远不会忘记的老师是谁;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍为什么让你难以忘记及你从他身上学到的东西;
第三步,书写结语。表达感激。
[亮点词汇]
①especially特别
②oral English口语
③overcome克服
④express my gratitude表达我的感激
[高分句型]
①Since I was too shy to speak anything in front of people, my oral English was getting worse. (原因状语从句)
②So, I got up early to practice my spoken ability and ask Ms. Wang any questions which I can’t understand. (定语从句)
17.(2024·江苏苏州·一模)2024年,苏州工业园区(Suzhou Industrial Park)迎来开发建设30周年。三十而立,繁花似锦。值此建区30周年之际,学校微信公众号拟举行征文比赛。请以“SIP in my eyes”为
题,写一篇英语短文。
内容包括:
1.Choose a word to describe SIP and explain why.
2.Introduce a place you like best in SIP and tell what people can do there.
3.Offer 1 or 2 suggestions for a better SIP.
注意:
1.词数100词左右;
2.内容需涵盖所有要点,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
SIP in my eyes
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【答案】例文
SIP in my eyes
Great changes have taken place in Suzhou Industrial Park since it was built 30 years ago. I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings.
I like the Jinji Lake best in SIP. I think it is very beautiful. There are some places of interest so people can enjoy beautiful views there. People can buy different kinds of art works in the Chengpin Bookstore. People can also take a walk or run in the morning because there is a 14-kilometer-long trail along the lake.
I think the government should build more libraries so that people there can read more books. I hope everyone can make efforts to build a better SIP.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为一般现在时;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍自己眼中的苏州工业园区,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,用一个词描述苏州工业园区;
第二步,接受苏州工业园区的一个地方以及在那里人们可以做什么;
第三步,为更好的苏州工业园区提供1到2条建议。
[亮点词汇]
①take place发生
②be equipped with装备有
③places of interest名胜古迹
④make efforts to do sth.努力做某事
[高分句型]
①I think it is modern because it is equipped with different kinds of high technology and it also has many tall buildings. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②I think the government should build more libraries so that people there can read more books. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
18.(2024·江苏连云港·一模)友谊是阳光,照亮你的世界;友谊是春风,拂去你的疲惫。校英文网站正在开展关于友谊的讨论,请你根据自己的实际情况完成问卷调查,并整理成文,发表在网站上,参与讨论。
注意:
(1)词数90左右;
(2)短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
In my eyes, a good friend is someone who can
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【答案】例文
In my eyes, a good friend is someone who can support you when you are in need.
My friend Lily is just like that. One day, I felt sad because I didn’t do well in a test. Lily noticed it and came to talk to me. She encouraged me and reminded me that everyone makes mistakes sometimes. Her words made me feel much better. Friendship plays an important role in my life. It not only makes me feel warm but also brings joy into my life. To keep our friendship strong, I will always trust Lily and be honest to her.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”;
③提示:作文要求根据所给材料,写一篇与友谊相关的作文。写作时注意表述清晰,做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头点题,表达对友谊的看法,并提出自己的朋友。
第二步,详述和朋友之间发生的事情。
第三步,总结友谊的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①in need 处于困难中
②make mistakes 犯错
③play an important role in 在……中起重要作用
④not only...but also... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
① In my eyes, a good friend is someone who can support you when you are in need.(who引导定语从句)
② One day, I felt sad because I didn’t do well in a test.(because引导原因状语从句)
③ She encouraged me and reminded me that everyone makes mistakes sometimes.(that引导宾语从句)
19.(23-24九年级下·江苏连云港·阶段练习)假设你是李华。最近,你看到TEENS上正在开展以“Colourful School Activities”为题的征文活动。请结合图片提示,介绍学较开展的活动,并陈述你参加此活动的理由或收获。
注意:
1.语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意;
2.所给图片为非限定性内容,仅供参考;
3.词数100左右,已给出部分不计入总词数;
4.文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。
Colourful School Activities
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Colourful School Activities
My school life is colourful, especially the school activities.
In the past three years, I have taken part in all kinds of school activities. Every Friday afternoon, I play soccer with my classmates because it’s relaxing and good for my health. I like singing and I’m a member of the Music Club. Singing can cheer me up when I am in a bad mood. Besides, our school held the sports meeting last week. I ran the third but I felt satisfied. I’m looking forward to the Reading Week because we can share thoughts with each other. At the same time, I also helped plant trees on Tree-planting Day so that we could make our campus more beautiful.
I like my school. Colourful school activities always make me happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章开头以及要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接短文开头,引出话题;
第二步,按照图片所示内容,分别介绍学校开展的活动,并陈述你参加此活动的理由或收获;
第三步,抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②cheer sb up使某人振作起来
③look forward to sth期待某物
④make sb happy使某人高兴
[高分句型]
①Every Friday afternoon, I play soccer with my classmates because it’s relaxing and good for my health.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②Singing can cheer me up when I am in a bad mood.(when引导的时间状语从句)
20.(2024·江苏·一模)
“灿烂星空,谁是真的英雄“做出惊天动地的人是英雄,为追求真理献出生命的人是英雄,在平凡岗位上默默奉献的人是英雄,生活中勤勤恳恳的人也是英雄……学校英文报将围绕A Hero in My heart 主题进行征文,请根据下列提示谈谈你心目中的英雄并分享你的体会。
注意:1. 表达中必须包括所给要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
A Hero in My Heart
Everyone has a hero in his heart, so do I. ______________________________________
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【答案】例文:
A Hero in My Heart
Everyone has their own heroes. Some heroes can be great people, while other heroes may be common people. As for me, my father is my hero.
My father is an English teacher. He is tall with short hair. Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. I still remember one time when I failed my final exam badly. I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. My father was very angry, but not for my failure. Instead, he told me
that I should face my problems bravely. To help me, he helped me find out my weaknesses, and think about ways to overcome them. From then on, I knew the true meaning of courage. It doesn’t mean that I am not afraid of anything but I can face my problems bravely instead of running away.
Thanks to my father, my hero, I can face all the problems bravely and become a person like him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图;
第二步,介绍自己心目中的英雄;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①as for至于
②so...that如此……以至于……
③find out查出
[高分句型]
①Although he is just an ordinary person, he has taught me a lot during my growth. (although引导让步状语从句)
②I was so afraid that I wanted to find excuses for my failure. (so...that引导结果状语从句)