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课余生活
2024 外研版 中考写作专题
【话题解读】
课余生活的话题范围比较广泛，除家庭作业外，还有一些娱乐活动，如看电视、散步、参加旅游、探亲访友等活动的描述和讨论，以及日常活动中的一些收获、困惑及感受。
介绍课余生活的记叙文以叙述事件的发生、发展、经过和结果为重点。在写作时要注意以下几点：
1. 记叙文的六要素：when, where, who, what, why, how。
通常先要交代清楚时间、地点和人物，然后进一步叙述事
件的起因、发展和结果。
2. 以记叙为主，可适当发表议论或抒情。
3. 叙述的人称可以是第一人称，也可以是第三人称。
4. 恰当使用时态。叙述已经发生了的事情时，多用一般过去
时；介绍目前的状况时则多用一般现在时。
5. 一般按照事情的发展及时间的先后顺序进行叙述，但有时
也可采用倒叙、插叙等。
1. 词汇
时间：the end of the term, a long time ago, before he
came home
地点：at the end of the street, at the foot of the mountain,
in the middle of the park
感受：excited, tired, unbelievable, nervous, enjoyable,
surprised
因果：as, because, since, so, for, because of, as a result
view 风景，视野 tour旅行，观光
board 上/ 船、飞机等 scenery风景
hiking 远足 souvenir 纪念品
tourist attractions 旅游景点 places of interest 名胜
song 歌曲 tune 曲调
instrument 乐器 play the guitar 弹吉他
see musicals 看音乐剧 folk music 民族音乐
rock music 摇滚音乐 soap opera 肥皂剧
science fiction film 科幻片 join clubs 加入俱乐部
go sightseeing 观光 yoga 瑜伽
to offer help 提供帮助 to have a chat with 聊天
popular (pop) music 流行音乐 to kill time 消磨时间
have dances on weekends 参加周末舞会
to keep healthy/fit 保持健康 to relax oneself 放松身心
to meet the demand/ need 满足需要
to strengthen/build up the body 锻炼身体
to lack recreations 缺乏休闲活动
to follow the fashion/trend 跟随潮流
go for an outing/a picnic 去郊游/野餐
to have proper diet 合理饮食
to do some good deeds 做好事
to insist on doing sth. 坚持做某事
to take regular exercise 有规律地运动
to take measures/action 采取措施（行动）
a high/low season for tourism 旅游旺/ 淡季
to raise the standard of living 提升生活水平
to develop/get into the habit of… 养成……习惯
to appreciate the scenery of nature 欣赏大自然的风景
2. 句子
Through this activity, I learned much about honesty.
I’ll never forget the days that we spent in the summer camp.
They had an unusual experience during their visit to New York.
I was so excited that I couldn’t fall asleep on the night before I started.
Although we were very tired, we learned what we couldn’t learn in school.
As soon as I arrived home, I showed the pictures I took in Nanjing to my parents.
【实战演练 1】
假如你是王宁，你的英国笔友Linda想了解你的周末生活。请根据下面的内容提示，给Linda写一封电子邮件，告诉她你是如何度过上个周末的。
内容提示：
（1）上周六上午，你和父母一起骑自行车去了一家草莓采摘
观光园；
（2）听采摘观光园主人讲述自已的人生故事：16岁时一场车
祸夺去了她的双腿，在政府和家人的帮助下创建草莓采
摘观光园，每年收入近百万元，吸引大量的游客；
（3）和采摘观光园主人合影，在采摘观光园餐馆就餐；
（4）你的感受。
要求：
（1）语言规范，语句通顺，内容充实；
（2）字数：不少于100词；开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
可能用到的词汇：
采摘观光园 Picking and Sightseeing Garden
草莓 strawberry
吸引 attract
游客 tourist
Dear Linda,
Thanks for your last email.
Last Saturday morning, I went to a strawberry Picking and Sightseeing Garden with my parents. We went there by bike because it was not far from my home. We listened to the story of the owner of the Packing and Sightseeing Garden. At the age of 16, she lost both of her legs because of a car accident. With the help of the government and her family, she set up the Picking and Sightseeing Garden.
The annual income is close to one million yuan and it attracts lots of tourists.
We also took photos with the owner and had a big lunch at the Picking and Sightseeing Garden. It was a meaningful weekend and I had a woderful time with my family.
Yours,
Wang Ning
【实战演练 2】
假如你是Wendy，春天来了，你准备邀请Millie去西太湖（West Taihu Lake）野餐，请根据以下提示给Millie写一封邀请信。内容必须包括以下要点：
（1）春天来了，鸟语花香，都认为西太湖是野餐的好地方；
（2）和朋友们周日上午8点在校门口集合，准备乘公交车前
往，大约半个小时就到了；
（3）带一些食物、水、小吃等；
（4）在西太湖还可以划船、放风筝、环湖骑行和玩游戏。
相信会过得愉快。
要求：
（1）内容完整，可适当发挥；
（2）表达清楚，意思连贯、符合逻辑；不少于80词。
A Letter to Millie
Dear Millie,
We are going to have a picnic at West Taihu Lake this Sunday. And I want to invite you to come with us.
We are going to get together at the school gate at 8 o’clock on Sunday morning. We’ll take a bus there. And it will take us about half an hour. Please bring some food, water, and snacks with you.
We can share our food with each other at the picnic. In the morning, we can go boating, fly a kite or ride around the lake.
And in the afternoon, we can play games. I believe we can have fun there.
Would you like to come with us
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2023年中考真题
课余生活
（2023浙江嘉兴、舟山）
60. 在学校“探寻中华传统文化”英语综合实践活动中, 你班对“元宵节”和“端午节”两个中国传统节日开展了小课题研究, 经过探究与实践, 你们收集了一些信息与资料（见下表）, 假设你是李华, 请选择其中一个节日, 用英语写一篇短文, 在英语拓展课上代表小组就你们的研究成果以及下阶段计划进行交流
Project: Exploring the Chinese Culture and Customs
Research Subject the Lantern Festival the Dragon Boat Festival
Methods（How we did it） watch a lantern show … visit a local museum …
Information（What we've learned） History about 2,000 years about 2,000 years
Time the 15th day of the first lunar month the 5th day of the fifth lunar month
Celebrations riddle（谜语）games … boat races …
Food riddle（谜语）games zongzi
… … …
A New Plan（What we'll do） … …
注意:（1）短文必须包含表中你所选节日的所有信息, 并适当发挥。
（2）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息。
（3）词数: 80~100, 短文开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear classmates, I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we've chosen is________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
That's all. Thank you!
【例文1】
Dear classmates, I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we've chosen is the Lantern Festival. We've collected much information about the festival by doing some reading in the library and watching a lantern show.
The Lantern Festival has a history of about 2,000 years. It's celebrated on the 15th day of the first lunar month. People get together to enjoy colourful lanterns and play riddle games. Small gifts are usually offered when they get right answers. It's a tradition to eat tang yuan on this special day.
As for the next step, we will focus on designing lanterns and making English riddles. This will help us understand the meaning of the festival better.
That's all. Thank you!
【例文2】
Dear classmates, I'm very happy to share our research with you. The subject we've chosen is the Dragon Boat Festival. To do the research, we searched for information online and visited a local museum about culture and customs.
We've learned a lot about the festival. With a history of about 2,000 years, the Dragon Boat Festival falls on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month. People usually celebrate it by watching boat races. Zongzi is the most traditional food that is eaten to honour the great poet Qu Yuan.
Next, we plan to learn how to make zongzi, and produce an English video to make the festival known by more people around the world.
That's all. Thank you!
(2023广西)
艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以My favourite art course为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1.学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等)；
2.你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等)；
3.喜欢的理由。
注意：
1.词数为80左右；
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：art course (艺术课), painting(n.绘画), calligraphy(n.书法), drama(n.戏剧)
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school!____________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【例文】
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school! We have a variety of art courses, including painting, calligraphy, drama, dancing, music. Among these courses, dancing attracts me most as the following three benefits it brings to me. First, dancing helps me burn off the extra calories and prevent me getting fat. Second, it helps me to keep a good figure and feel energetic. Third, it helps me grow taller and more confident. I have dancing class on Tuesday and Friday afternoon. And you can choose to have it on Monday and Wednesday afternoon too. It’s up to you.
(2023湖南岳阳)
76. 为了培养学生的劳动意识，增强他们的动手能力，学校打破年级限制，成立了多个劳动社团。请根据以下表格提示，以“Our Labor Clubs”(我们的劳动社团)为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍以下的三个劳动社团，并在其中选一个你最喜欢的社团，详细说明喜欢的理由。
1. Paper cutting 2. Cooking 3. Flower growing
Materials and tools *scissors *red paper … *a pot *bowls *a knife *ingredients (调料) … *flower seeds (花种子) *earth (泥土) *flowerpots (花盆) …
Activities *cut... with… *put... on… … *cook delicious dishes for… *make a healthy menu about... … *grow flowers… *do a research about… …
Goals of joining *understand the beauty of… *decorate (装饰)… … *learn cooking skills *become confident … *get close to…. *relax from… …
★★★★★ Your favorite club ________ Reasons ________
要求：1.词数80~100；
2.介绍表格中的三个社团，结合实际情况，可适当发挥；
3.文稿中不得出现真实的人名，校名；
4.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。
Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【例文】
Our Labor Clubs
Are you ready for an interesting and colorful labor club Now I’d like to introduce some of our labor clubs.
We have a Paper Cutting Club. We need scissors, red paper and knives. We can cut red paper with scissors and knives into different shapes. We can put our works on the display board. We can understand the beauty of Chinese culture and decorate classrooms with them. We have a Cooking Club. We need a pot, bowls, a knife and some ingredients. We can cook delicious dishes for parents and friends. We can make a healthy menu about a healthy diet. In the Cooking Club, we can learn cooking skills and become confident about ourselves. We also have a Flower Growing Club. We need flower seeds, earth and flowerpots. We can grow flowers and do a research about flowers and plants. We can get close to nature and relax from enjoying the beauty of flowers.
Among them, Cooking Club is my favorite because I like cooking and I want to cook for my parents to make them happy.
(2023江苏宿迁)
“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务 参加各种各样的课程,比如音乐、篮球等; ……(你的情况)）
志愿服务 帮助他人解决问题; ......(举例说明)
你的收获 提升能力,更加自信; ……(补充1—2点）
注意事项:
1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor ,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【例文】
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
Our school provides various after-school services such as music, basketball, and more. I enjoy taking part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In addition to these services, we also have opportunities for voluntary work. By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.
Through these activities, I have gained confidence and improved my abilities. I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
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