中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2023中考真题
名胜旅行及建议
(2023四川宜宾)
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Moore来信希望了解你的家乡宜宾的情况。请你用英语写一封回信。回信必须包括下面的内容。
注意：
1. 词数：100词左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
2. 参考词汇：places of interest 名胜古迹；hot pot 火锅；economy 经济
Dear Moore,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You wanted to know something about my hometown Yibin. Now let me tell you. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中所包含的要点，写回信介绍自己的家乡宜宾。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出信件的主题；
第二步，具体介绍家乡宜宾并表达自己的感受；
第三步，收尾，邀请对方来宜宾玩。
【参考范文】
Dear Moore,
I’m glad to receive your letter. You wanted to know something about my hometown Yibin. Now let me tell you.
Yibin, located in the south of Sichuan Province, is the first city of the Yangtze River. There are many places of interest in Yibin, such as Lizhuang Ancient Town, Bamboo Sea and so on. There are plenty of foods such as hot noodles and hot pot. Yibin’s economy is developing rapidly. People’s lives are getting better and better. I love Yibin very much.
Would you like to visit Yibin this summer I’ll be your guide. Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【亮点词汇】
①located in位于
②such as例如
③look forward to期待，盼望
【高分句型】
There are many places of interest in Yibin, such as Lizhuang Ancient Town, Bamboo Sea and so on.（There be句型）
(2023浙江台州)
假设你叫李辉，你所在的班级拟组织一次“和合古街探访与环境改善”的项目化学习活动，请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封电子邮件，邀请他参加此次活动，内容包括如下：
内容要点 参考词汇
Where will we go ·Hehe Ancient Street
How will we go there ·take the bus
What will we do ·interview… ·discuss ways of improving…
Why will we go there ·learn more about……
When and where will we meet ·9: 00 a. m. Friday, the school gate
注意：（1）邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
（3）词数 80～100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
To: Mr. Smith
From: Li Hui
Dear Mr. Smith, How's it going Looking forward to your reply. Li Hui
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
【写作步骤】
第一步，开门见山，引出话题；
第二步，具体阐述活动的时间、地点、内容以及活动意义；
第三步，期盼对方的回复。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith,
How’s it going Knowing that you are interested in Chinese culture, I’m writing to invite you to take part in our trip to Hehe Ancient Street.
We are going there by bus. When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past. Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists. These activities will surely help us learn more about the history of the ancient street and sense the beauty of Hehe Culture. Besides, it offers us a good chance to do community service.
Would you like to come If yes, please meet us at 9:00 on Friday morning at the school gate.
Looking forward to your reply.
Li Hui
【亮点词汇】
①take part in参加
②plan to do计划做某事
③the beauty of……的美丽
④offer sb sth提供某人某物
【高分句型】
①When we arrive, we will interview the old people, hoping they will tell us stories about the past.（非谓语作状语）
②Then we plan to discuss ways of improving the travel environment to interest more tourists.（动词不定式表目的）
（2023 湖南长沙）
学校英文报正在以“Amazing Hunan”为题开展征文活动。请你结合以下图示，写一篇短文投稿。
要求: (1)短文必须包括图示中的所有要点，可适当发挥:
(2)80词左右(标题和开头都已给出，不计入总词数)
(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Word bank: transport交通、convenient方便的
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lovable and livable place.
【参考范文】
Amazing Hunan
Hunan is a lovable and livable place. If you have some visiting plans, there’s no doubt that Hunan is certainly a must-go. Here are the reasons in the following.
Firstly, there are many places of interest here. For example, Zhangjiajie is one of the most famous picturesque sceneries. You can see breathtakingly beautiful places everywhere. Secondly, transportation here is convenient. Here, high-speed trains can take you anywhere you want to go. The signs beside the roads are user-friendly. What’s more, all kinds of delicious food can satisfy our tastebuds. Rice noodles is tasty and mouth-watering and you can’t miss it. Finally, people here are helpful and warm-hearted. They will make you feel at home.
Welcome to Hunan if you have the chance. Even if you come only once, everything here will impress you the most.
（2023江苏连云港）
走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化游大圣故里。
注意:
(1)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数:
(2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you. _______________________________________________________________
_____________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的要点提示，结合思维导图，阐述自己的家乡连云港的名胜、文化、风土人情、地理位置及气候特点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，使文章连贯。
【写作步骤】
分三步作文：
第一步，介绍家乡的地理位置及气候特点和著名景点；
第二步，阐述当地的风土人情和美食；
第三步，短文结尾处呼吁大家来家乡参观。
【参考范文】
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea. It’s cool in summer. Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you. Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking forward to meeting you soon.
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名胜旅行与建议
2024 外研版 中考写作专题
【话题解读】
中国地大物博，山河壮丽，不仅有着悠久的历史和灿烂的文化，还有许多著名的自然景观、名胜古迹和恢宏的现代化建筑。如九寨沟、北京故宫、万里长城等。每年都有成千上万的中外游客慕名而来，旅行观光。
围绕“名胜旅行”的书面表达主要有以下几个类型：
1. 描述某一景观（地理位置，主要特色等）。
2. 对旅客提出一些建议（如安全、卫生、交通、注意事项等）。
3. 旅行中的一些经历。
4. 旅行计划。
5. 旅行推荐。
从中考的角度来看，旅行的建议和经历更为常见。
【实例讲解】
假如你是Kevin，来中国旅游，刚刚结束了北京之旅。请你给朋友Jack写封信，与他分享你的旅游经历。
【思路点拨】
1. 定基调
体裁：应用文——书信 时态：一般现在时和一般过去时 人称：第一人称和第三人称
2. 谋布局，写句子
Beijing is one of the most beautiful cities
The people here are very friendly
to visitors
like to exercise / like exercising
You can see many people dance
and exercise
The famous food in Beijing
I invited him to go with us
Making a new friend made me so happy
开头表达
1. Last summer, I visited …
2. … is in the … part of China.
3. Beijing is the capital of China with a long history.
4. Welcome to …!
5. It’s a good / wonderful place to visit.
正文表达
1. Traveling makes us get close to nature.
2. Traffic in cities is getting heavier and heavier.
3. Our schedule for today is to visit the ….
4. I can’t wait to share the interesting experience with my friends.
5. Traveling is a great way to learn about yourself and the world.
6. You will enjoy bright sunshine, fresh air and beautiful scenery.
7. You could either go to visit the flower markets or enjoy the delicious food.
8. It only takes half an hour to get there.
9. You’d better put on warm clothes in the evening.
10. Trainers (运动鞋) may be a good choice for shoes.
11. Don’t speak loudly in public places.
12. Don’t throw litter / rubbish on the ground.
结尾表达
1. It was fun / interesting / relaxing … to do sth.
2. We stayed there for …
3. We had so much fun / great time doing …
4. It was so beautiful that we forgot …
Dear Jack,
I am writing this letter to you from Beijing. Beijing is one of the most beautiful cities that I have visited. The people here are very friendly to visitors and always ready to help others. They like to exercise so you can see many people dance and exercise in the park. The famous food in Beijing is Beijing duck. It's very delicious. And I like it very much.
Yesterday we went to the Great Wall. On the way, I met an American boy who came here by himself. So I invited him to go with us. We talked about the Great Wall and we were so happy to stay together. Making a new friend made me so happy.
Love,
Kevin
成文时，为了构成语篇，可将一些意义相关的句子通过一定的过渡词连接起来，如so表示因果关系；and表示并列、递进关系，可连接It's very delicious和I like it very much。
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