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情感与情绪
2024 外研版 中考写作专题
【话题解读】
情感与情绪包括人际沟通与情感交际，既有个人或家庭方面的，也有社会层面的。此话题主要从以下两个方面进行设题：
(1) 人际沟通方面存在的问题。
家庭亲人之间的沟通；
社会上与朋友或同学之间的交流。
自我反思。
(2) 对人际沟通存在的问题给出一些建议。
对自我反思的认知。
【实例讲解】
人生中有很多第一次：第一次学游泳；第一次跟家人外出旅行；第一次做家务；第一次赢得比赛；第一次……。请根据提示，就你的第一次……写一篇短文。
内容包括： 1. 第一次……的整个过程； 2. 你的感受。
要求：1. 词数：80—100(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
【思路点拨】
体裁：记叙文 时态：以一般过去时为主
人称：以第一人称为主
词汇(名词)
feeling感情；情感 sense 感觉；意识 expression表情
smile 笑；微笑 laughter笑声 pleasure高兴；愉快
memory记忆；回忆 regret懊悔 pride自豪；骄傲
surprise惊奇；惊讶 shame羞耻；羞愧 love爱；喜爱
dream梦想；愿望 hope希望 wish愿望
luck幸运；运气 fear害怕；惧怕 trouble问题；苦恼
pity遗憾；怜悯 cry哭；叫喊
--词汇(动词)feel感受；觉得cheer欢呼；喝彩surprise使惊奇regret感到遗憾insist坚持；强调dream做梦expect预料；期待seem似乎；好像worry担心；担忧trouble使苦恼词汇(形容词)
nice令人愉快的 excited兴奋的 glad高兴；愿意
happy高兴的 proud自豪的 lucky幸运的
nervous焦虑的 angry生气的 sad (使人)悲伤的
afraid害怕的 crazy疯狂的 mad疯的
good好的 great伟大的 patient有耐心的
lonely孤独的 tired疲劳的；疲倦的 bored烦闷的；厌倦的
短语
1. be proud of 为……骄傲
2. cheer up 振奋起来
3. to one’s surprise 使……惊讶的
4. have trouble (in) doing sth. 做某事有困难
5. worry about 担心，烦恼
6. be tired of 对……感到厌倦
7. be angry with 对(某人)生气
8. drive sb. crazy 使某人发疯/狂
9. in surprise 吃惊，惊讶地
10. keep up 跟上;保持
11. keep one’s word(s) 守信
12. make a face/faces 做鬼脸
13. be strict with sb. 对某人要求严格
14. stop sb. from doing sth. 阻止某人做某事
15. allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
16. ask sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事
17. I believe that… 我确信……
18. deal with 处理
--句型1.It is known that being happy is good for people’s health. 2.When I’m in a low mood, I choose to stay alone. 3.I feel blue/sad because I can’t go to …4.My teacher got very angry because I was late for class again. 5.What you said makes me sad. 6.That news is so surprising that we all feel surprised. 7.He is very nervous because he will take an important exam tomorrow. 8.We will be very happy if we can have a long journey with our families.【开头句】
1. It’s important to learn how to get on well with others.
2. Friendship requires good communication.
3. As we know, we should learn how to get on well with
others.
4. Let me tell some rules of my family.
【中间句】
1. He seems a little unhappy.
2. Everyone gets these feelings at your age.
3. She feels very lonely because she has no friends to talk with.
4. You must be friendly to others.
5. Always say less than you think.
6. Keep your promise, no matter what it costs.
7. If we can’t communicate well, we can hardly get along with our friends.
【结尾句】
1. Only in these ways can we get along well with others.
2. I believe you can get on well with your parents if you put
your heart into it.
3. We’ll learn to get along better with each other.
my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have supper on time
I surfed the Internet for some information
They praised me for what I had done
Though my dishes were less delicious
As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I cooked, which was the most
unforgettable experience in my life. Last summer, my parents were so busy that we couldn’t have supper on time. Considering my parents’ hard work, I decided to make dinner for them.
To start with, I surfed the Internet for some information on how to make tomato soup and mapo tofu. Then, I followed the instructions to make them step by step.
An hour later, I got the supper ready. When my parents returned from work, they were surprised and happy. They praised me for what I had done. Though my dishes were less delicious, I felt excited to share housework. I will never forget the sweet memory!
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2023年中考真题
情感与情绪
(2023四川达州)
曾子曰：“吾日三省吾身：为人谋而不忠乎？与朋友交而不信乎？传不习乎？”习近平总书记在演讲中多次引用这句话，告诫青少年要勇于面对自己的缺点，在学习中求真务实。怎样成为更好的自己？请你根据以下内容提示，以“How to be a better teenager ”为题，用英语写一篇演讲稿，在毕业典礼上发言。
内容提示：1.养成健康的生活习惯。
2.学习有计划、有行动。
3.友善待人。
4.培养良好的兴趣爱好，参加志愿活动。
写作要求：1.内容必须包括所给要点，并适当发挥一至两点。
2.语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范。
3.文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名。
4.不少于 90 词。（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：培养爱好 take up hobbies 志愿活动 volunteer activity
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
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Thank you!
【文本分析】
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏自己的观点和看法，适当补充写作要点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，引出话题，我们需要通过一些方法提升自己；
第二步，具体阐述提升自我的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
【参考范文】
How to be a better teenager
Hello, everyone! Today I’d like to share my ideas about how to be a better teenager.
First of all, we should develop healthy living habits. We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. What’s more, we should make a study plan and take action to achieve it. The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. And we had better be friendly to others. When others need help, we should try our best to help them. Finally, it is good to develop good hobbies and take part in voluntary activities, such as cleaning the city park.
In a word, if we try our best, we will become better and better.
Thank you!
【亮点词汇】
①had better do sth.最好做某事
②be friendly to sb.对某人友好
③take part in参加
【高分句型】
①We can run for half an hour every day to keep healthy. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②The more knowledge we learn, the brighter future we will have. (the+比较级，the+比较级)
③When others need help, we should try our best to help them. (when引导的时间状语从句)
(2023 山东济宁)
某英文网站正在开展以The special gift for mother/father为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请根据下面的提示信息，用英语写一篇矩文,介绍你曾为父亲精心准备的一份礼物。
注意:
1.须包括以上所有提示信息,可适当发挥；
2.文中不得出现任何透露考生真实身份的信息；
3. 100词左右(开头已给出,不计人总词数)。
A special gift for my father
People usually give gifts to someone they love or care about. Here is a special gift I gave to my father — a notebook. _________________________________________
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【参考范文】
A special gift for my father
People usually give gifts to someone they love or care about. Here is a special gift I gave to my father — a notebook. I gave the notebook to my father on his birthday last year.
My father is an English teacher. He is very humorous and all his students love his classes. He is not only my father but also my friend. He is strict with me but kind to me. He cares about me and teaches me how to be a better person. I’m so thankful to him that I decided to give him a special gift for his birthday last year—a notebook. There were many photos about our life and words about things we did in the notebook. The photos and words record the happy time that we spent together and keep our sweet memories. When I passed the notebook to my father, I hugged him and said, “Happy birthday to you, my dearest daddy. Thank you for making me better and better!” When my father received the gift, he was quite moved and happy. He lifted me high and kept saying “Thank you, my good son.”
How lucky I am to have an excellent father!
(2023吉林)
青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以"self-flection Makes Me Become Better”为题。结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括:
(1)结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性:
(2)列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法;
(3)列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法;
(4)发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求:
(1)语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥;
(2)词数90-100，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数;
(3)书写规范，卷面整洁;
(4)文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇: self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth反思(往事)
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better._________________________________________________________
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【参考范文】
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
Self-reflection is an important way for teenagers to understand themselves and improve themselves. In my growth process, I have realized the importance of self-reflection in various aspects such as learning, sports, and labor.
One of my strengths is that I am a hardworking learner. I always make up clear goals and a reasonable study plan. Besides, I actively take part in class discussions and ask for help from teachers when necessary.
However, I also have some shortcomings, such as being too shy to express myself freely. To overcome this weakness, I try to practice speaking more often and try to speak up in public.
(2023山西)
青春期对于每个人来说都是最能彰显生命本色的特殊时期。为了引导同学们正确地认识自我, 某校“阳光心理驿站”的老师们以“我发现自己真的很好”为主题, 对1,127名学生进行了问卷调查, 下图是部分项目的统计结果。
假如你是该校的学生, 请结合以上图表信息, 以"I Find Myself Really Good"为主题, 用两段话写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 简要说明图表内容；
2. 从图表中任选一项, 结合自己的经历, 谈谈它对你的生活产生了什么积极的影响。
1. 词数不少于80词, 首句已给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名。
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【参考范文】
I Find Myself Really Good
Our school did a survey among 1, 127 students on the topic of "I Find Myself Really Good". Here are the results. 86 percent of the students believe they can see the world with kind eyes, while 53 percent consider themselves positive. 47 percent think they don't like to complain.
As for me, I find myself really positive. Last month, I was chosen to play a role in an English show. It was difficult for me to memorize the lines in a short time. However, I regarded it as a challenge, which was also a good chance to improve my English. So I made an effort to practice. Finally, I made it and received high praise. In fact, it is my positive attitude that brings out the best in me all the time.
(2023新疆)
每个人的成长，都经历过很多次尝试，有成功、有失败、有欣喜、有泪水……请以“My First Try”为题，用英语写一篇短文，记录你成长中的第一次尝试。
要求:
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，内容详实，语法正确，书写规范;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名，校名等信息；
3. 词数80-120。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of “My First Try”, _________________________________
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【参考范文】
My First Try
When it comes to the topic of "My First Try", I'll never forget the meaningful experience I had in Grade 7.
It was my first time to be a volunteer. As a member of Animal Helpers, I volunteered to be responsible for washing, feeding and playing with homeless dogs. At the same time, I took some photos of them and made posters online to call on more people to give a hand. Through my efforts, over eight dogs were lucky to find their new homes. When I saw them taken good care of and they brought people so much fun, I got such a strong feeling of pride.
I realize that each life is important and the tiny things I do can make a difference.
(2023湖北孝感)
亲爱的同学，在你成长的过程中，也许会遇到一些“小烦恼”，自身的调节与朋友的建议可以帮助你成为更好的自己。近期，学校将举行一次相关主题的经验交流会，请你根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇发言稿。
要点提示：
1. 简要介绍你自己(如年龄、爱好……)；
2. 讲述你或你的朋友曾经遇到的问题及感受（如学习中的、同学间的、家庭里的……)；
3. 分享解决问题的方法(如多沟通、听音乐、参与活动……)。
写作要求：
1. 词数90左右（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 根据要点提示，可以适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
参考词汇：pressure n. 压力 communicate v. 沟通
Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9.
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【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! I’m a student in Class 2, Grade 9. I am 15 years old. I like doing sports. But I used to hate doing sports. It was my mother who changed me.
Once I spent too much watching TV and playing computer games. So my grades were worse and worse. My mother noticed my changes. She had a long conversation with me. She said that spending too much on them was bad for my eyes. She advised me to relax by listening to music and doing sports. She asked me to run for half an hour in the morning every day. A few days later, I found running could make me healthy and happy. I could do everything better.
In my opinion, when you meet some difficulties, you can share them with your parents or teachers. They will give you some useful advice.
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