中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2023中考真题
人物介绍
(2023湖南株洲)
学校英语角即将开展一次以“朋友”为主题的演讲活动，你写一篇演讲稿参加活动，包括以下内容：
1.你最好的朋友是什么样的？
2.你的朋友曾给与过你什么？
3.你准备为你的朋友做什么？
词数90左右；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；文中不能透露考生身份的任何信息。
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【参考范文】
My best friend
Lily is my best friend. She is a nice, kind girl and she is always ready to help others. She studies very hard and all the teachers like her a lot. She is very polite when she talks with others.
Lily has helped me a lot since we became good friends. I still remember one thing that happened two months ago. I had a traffic accident and I couldn’t go to school then. I had to teach myself at home. When Lily knew that, she came to my home to help me with my study every day. With her help, I hardly missed any subject.
In the new term, we will enter different high schools. I plan to communicate with her in my studies, encourage each other, and make progress together.
(2023天津)
假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给你的笔友Peter用英文写一封邮件，向他讲述你班同学王亮的一个感人故事。
(1)一个下雨天，王亮在路上看到一群人聚在一起。
(2)他走过去，看到一位老妇人躺在地上。
(3)了解情况后，他蹲下为老人撑伞。
(4)救护车到达后，他悄悄地离开了。
(5)你认为……
参考词汇：蹲下crouch down 救护车ambulance
要求：
(1)词数：80 - 100个。
(2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I'd like to tell you a story about my classmate, WangLiang.
On a rainy day, _______________________________________________________
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Do you have a story to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’d like to tell you a story about my classmate, Wang Liang.
On a rainy day, Wang Liang saw a group of people getting together on the road. He went over and saw an old woman lying on the ground. He found she was badly ill. Then he went up to help without hesitation. Noticing she was safe, he dialed 120 quickly and crouched down to hold an umbrella for the old woman. When the ambulance arrived, the doctors gave the old woman timely treatment, and Wang Liang left quietly. I think Wang Liang is a good student who is ready to help others. Everyone should learn from him.
Do you have a story to share Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2023黑龙江牡丹江)
榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量”评选活动中，荣获“新时代好少年”的称号。作为校报记者，请你根据以下信息，用英语写一篇短文。向同学们介绍他的事迹，并呼吁大家向他学习。
要求: 1. 内容全面，语言流畅，层次清晰，可适当发挥；
2. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 至少含有两个复合句。
Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Time’s good teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
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【参考范文】
Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Time’s good teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
Zhao Yu is 15 years old. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has some hobbies, for example playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is also good at playing the erhu .
Zhao Yu is very creative and he has invented some small things. He even won two prizes for his inventions. Zhao Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer for his community. Also, he is active. He often takes part in many meaningful activities. Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.
Zhao Yu is an excellent boy. Let's learn from him.
(2023四川凉山)
在成长的过程中，你一定遇到过让你感到温暖的人。比如对你嘘寒问暖的亲人，带你遨游知识海洋的老师，伴你嬉戏畅玩的伙伴……为了表达对他（她）的感谢，请你以“Thanks, ________”为标题，根据下面思维导图提供的信息，写一篇英语短文，向校园广播站投稿。
要求：1. 语言表达准确，文章连贯、通顺；
2. 文章应包括所给思维导图中的所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
4. 词数：80左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Thanks, ________________
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life. Your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend…
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【参考范文】
Thanks, Mom
Everyone must meet a special person who makes you feel warm in life, your parent, your teacher or maybe your friend. The person that I want to thank most is my mother.
She is 40 years old. She works in a hospital, and she works very hard. She is tall and thin. She is friendly, but strict with me. She always gives me the warmest love and takes care of me all the time. She is willing to do everything for me.
To express my love, I can study hard and help her do something useful. I will remember her love and be thankful to her. I wish that she can stay healthy and feel happy.
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人物介绍
2024 外研版 中考写作专题
【话题解读】
人物介绍是记叙文中常见的一种写作类型，内容可以是介绍自己，也可以是介绍别人。写此类文章时，通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由上到下、由外部到内在性格特点的描写，这是描写人物的基本顺序。注意在结尾处简单做一个小结或概括。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，突出重点。
1. 词汇
外貌：good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build
性格、品质：outgoing, shy, active, friendly, honest, quiet, clever, smart
兴趣爱好：favorite, prefer, enjoy, be interested in, be fond of, show / have a talent for
其他：admire, regard ... as ..., role model
2. 句子
The best thing about her is her sense of humor.
She never talks about people behind their backs.
He is the kind of person you can always believe in.
The woman is well-dressed and looks very fashionable.
He is the same age as his brother but he looks much younger.
The reason why I like her is that she has always made
everyone around her feel safe and happy.
There is no doubt that he is one of the greatest men in history.
My neighbor is a kind old man and is generous to people around.
When people first meet my father, they often think he is a very strict man. But when they get to know him better, they realize that he is very kind in fact.
【实例讲解】
你校英语俱乐部准备举办一场以介绍名人为主题的墙报展。请你根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍科学家居里夫人(Marie Curie)。词数不少于100。
出生地：波兰(Poland)
出生日期：1867年11月7日
经历：1. 从小就对物理感兴趣，读了很多这方面的书籍；
2. 当时波兰不允许女子入大学，所以来到法国巴黎求学；
3. 来巴黎两年后即获得物理方面的学位，后来又取得数学学位。
成就：分别于1903年和1911年获得了诺贝尔物理学奖和诺贝尔化学奖。
【思路点拨】
该写作任务要求写一篇人物介绍类的文章。此类文章通常以记叙和描写为主，可以采用“总—分—总”的模式：
第一部分直奔主题，简要介绍该人物的身份；
第二部分具体介绍个人情况、经历等；
第三部分则用一两句评价性的话语总结全文。介绍人物时，时态的使用比较灵活，讲述人物的事迹时常用一般过去时，而评价性话语则常用一般现在时。
常用的描写人物外貌特征的形容词有：
tall, short, old, young, thin, strong, heavy, beautiful, attractive, handsome, fair, pretty, good-looking, charming, curly, wear a pair of glasses, of medium build, medium height, slim
描写性格特点的词语有：
kind, friendly, smart, funny, cute, serious, clever, quiet, lovely, honest, shy, loving, warm, cold
可能用到的单词或短语有：
interest, hobby, favorite, be interested in, be fond of (喜爱)
1. She is one of the most famous scientists that ever lived.
2. ... is known / well-known for ...
3. ... was born in ...
4. She developed an interest in physics at an early age.
5. ... succeeded in taking a degree in ...
6. ... got the Nobel Prize for ...
7. She sets a good example to us all.
Marie Curie was a famous woman scientist. She was known for her great achievements in science.
She was born in Poland, on 7th November 1867. She developed an interest in physics at an early age and read many books on it. In her time, women were not allowed to go to university in Poland, so Marie went to Paris and studied there. She succeeded in taking a degree in physics two years after arriving in Paris. Later, she took another degree in maths.
She loved science so much that she gave most of her time to it. In 1903, she got the Nobel Prize for Physics. In 1911, again she got the Nobel Prize for Chemistry.
She sets a good example to us all.
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