人教版英语八年级下册第十单元Unit 10 I've had this bike for three years.书面表达训练（无答案）

人教版英语八年级下册第十单元Unit 10 I’ve had this bike for three years.书面表达训练
本单元是人教版英语八年级下册第10单元，话题主要是“谈论自己的拥有物”，接下来，我们来讲一讲如何突破写作训练。
今天让我们一起写一篇关于对自己曾经的珍藏品怀旧的文章
经典题型重现：
我们每个人都有自己留存了很久的东西，尽管早已不用，但始终无法舍弃，因
为它们承载着我们大大小小的过往。你留存了很久的东西有什么呢？请根据以下提
示，用英语写一篇短文，向大家介绍一下它。
提示：
它是什么？
你是怎样得到它的？
它对于你的特殊意义是什么？
要求：
100词左右；
包含提示内容，可适当发挥；
不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
解题思路：审题指导
审主题：留存很久的物品
审时态：一般过去时、一般现在时
审题要点：描述物品及对自己的意义
审体裁：记叙文
审人称：以第一、第三人称为主
一些短语突破：
说实在的：to be honest
放弃：part with
美好的回忆：good memories
为某人买某物：buy sth. for sb.
决定做某事：decide to do sth.
谋篇布局——搭建框架
文章开头：
I have a toy bear . I have owned it since I was a little child . My father bought it for me.
文章的中间部分——描述物品及意义
固定句子：
It is cute and special to me , so I like it very much , because____________________（引导变句——在什么情境下父亲送的，突出其意义）
固定句子：
My sister and I almost ____________ (play with it) every day.
固定句子：
It brought us ____________________ (good memories \ some good time) and let me know__________________（来自父亲的爱）.
固定句子：
I slept with it every night ___________________________（增加年龄细节）
固定句子：The toy bear like a friend to me and we __________________ （相处得好）.
最后一段：表达感情
The toy bear________________ （ give somebody something\ good memories)
To Be honest , I have not played with it now , but I don't want to part with it.
落笔成文——连词成句、连句成篇
基础篇范文：
I have a toy bear. I have owned it since I was three years old. My father bought it for me.
It is cute and special to me, so I like it so much. My sister and I used to play with it almost every day. It brought us a lot of joy and let me know how to show love. I slept next to the teddy bear every night. The toy bear was like a friend to me.
The toy bear has given me and my sister many good memories. To be honest, I have not played with it now, but I don't want to part with it.
提升篇范文：
I have a toy bear. I have owned it since I was three years old. My father bought it for me.
It is cute and special to me, so I like it so much. My sister and I used to play with it almost every day. It brought us a lot of good memories and let me know how much my father loves me. I slept next to the toy bear every night since I was only three years old. The toy bear was like a friend to me.
The toy bear has given me and my sister many good memories. To be honest, I have not played with it now, but I don't want to part with it because when I see it , I feel like my father stays with me.
练习巩固——写作训练
假如你是Mike,这周六你将在你家院子里举办一场庭院拍卖会。你整理出了三件要拍卖的东西。现在请你根据下面表格，用英语向大家介绍一下这三件东西。
要求：词数100左右。可适当发挥。
Things to sell Time
bike sixth grade
storybook two years ago
model plane one year ago
解题思路：
判断人称——第一人称
判断时态——一般现在时、一般过去时、现在完成时
写作注意：仿写
参考范文：
There are some things in my home that I have no longer used. I decide to sell three of them in the yard sale this Saturday.
The first one is my bike. I have owned it since I was in the sixth grade. But it still works well now.
And the second one is a storybook. My mother bought it for me two years ago. Because I have had a new one, I want to sell it to others.
As for the last one, it's a model plane. I liked it most when I got it one year ago. But now I don't play with it anymore. I hope it can bring joy to younger kids.
写作中的注意事项：
用总分的顺序描写。
注意一些衔接词的正确运用，例如：the first one第一个；the second one第二个；the last one最后一个。
注意there be句型的正确运用