期末复习之单元满分范文36篇
1.你一定听说过贝多芬(Beethoven) 这位伟大的音乐家吧。请根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的短文介绍他。
提示:
(1)贝多芬是世界上最伟大的音乐家之一;
(2)1770 年12 月出生于波恩(Bonn);
(3)五岁开始学习弹钢琴,七岁开始当众(in public)演奏;
(4)年轻时开始失去听觉(deaf 聋的);
(5)1827 年去世。
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【答案】例文:
Beethoven is one of the greatest musicians in the world.
He was born in Bonn, Germany in December, 1770. When he was 5 years old, he began to learn to play the piano. At the age of 7, he began to play the piano in public. He was slowly becoming deaf when he was young. He died in 1827.
We still remember this famous musician today. People all over the world are still enjoying his beautiful music today.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容介绍音乐家贝多芬,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据题干中的提示信息介绍贝多芬的生平;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①one of the+最高级+名词复数 最……的……之一
②at the age of在……岁时
③all over the world全世界
[高分句型]
When he was 5 years old, he began to learn to play the piano.(when引导时间状语从句)
2.假如你叫刘成,是一名中学生,经常收听音乐节目。请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。要点如下:
①你很喜欢这个节目,特别是其中播放的英语歌曲;
②学习很忙,疲劳的你会打开收音机收听这个节目;
③你希望能从英文歌曲中接触一些新单词;
④你最喜欢My Heart Will go on这首歌,希望能得到这首歌的歌词(words of the song)。
要求:80词左右
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【答案】例文
Dear sir,
I’m a middle school student. I often listen to your music program. I like it very much, especially the English songs.
As a student, I’m busy with my studies. When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. I hope I can learn some new words from the English songs.
Of all the English songs, I like My Heart Will Go On best. Would you please give me the words of the song
Yours,
Liu Cheng
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自己喜欢的音乐节目的介绍要点,适当添加
细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。借用“请你用英语给节目主持人写一封信。”来引出重点介绍的内容;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“很喜欢这个节目、原因、最喜欢My Heart Will go on这首歌等”几个方面重点介绍自己喜欢的音乐节目的具体情况;
第三步,书写结语,表达“你能告诉我这首歌的歌词吗”的请求。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②turn on打开
③learn…from…从……中学习……
④give sb sth给某人某物
[高分句型]
When I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program. (when引导的时间状语从句)
3.假如你叫李华,是一名中学生,非常喜欢音乐,经常收听一档音乐节目。请你用英语给这档节目的主持人Philip写一封信,70词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
提示:
1. 你喜欢这档节目,因为它使你感到轻松;
2. 每当感到疲劳时,音乐带给你力量(power),使你快乐;
3. 你喜欢英文歌曲,从英文歌曲里学会了很多单词;
4. 下次能不能播放你最喜欢的My Heart Will Go On这首歌。
要求:
1. 语法正确,书写工整;
2. 词数在70词左右。
Dear Philip,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Philip,
I like your music programme so much, because it makes me feel relaxed. It can give me power when I am tired and it can make me happy when I am sad. I like the the English songs. I’m glad to tell you that I learned many English words from some English songs.
My favorite song is My heart will go on. Could you please play this song next time
I really hope the programme will become more and more popular among our students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据提示内容介绍一档音乐节目的主持人写一封信,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题,表示自己喜欢这档音乐节目;
第二步,详细介绍为什么喜欢这档音乐节目;
第三步,询问下次能不能播放你最喜欢的My Heart Will Go On这首歌;
第四步,表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to do sth.很高兴做某事
②become more and more popular变得越来越受欢迎
[高分句型]
①I like your music programme so much, because it makes me feel relaxed.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②It can give me power when I am tired and it can make me happy when I am sad. I like the the English songs.(when引导的时间状语从句)
4.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解中国的钢琴家郎朗,根据以下信息写一篇英文邮件,介绍一下郎朗。
要点:
(1) 1982年6月14日出生于沈阳;
(2) 三岁的时候开始学钢琴,五岁到十岁之间获得了许多比赛冠军;
(3) 1997年去美国学习,并在白宫成功举行音乐会;
(4) 已经成为世界上最著名的钢琴家之一。
参考词汇:比赛 competition;钢琴家 pianist;白宫 the White House
要求:
(1) 结合要点,适当发挥;
(2) 语法正确,书写工整;
(3) 词数在70左右,邮件的开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. You want to know about Lang Lang. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m happy to hear from you. You want to know about Lang Lang. Let me tell you something about him.
He was born in Shenyang on June 14, 1982. He began to learn piano when he was a three-year-old boy. He won many championships between the ages of five and ten. In 1997, he went to the United States to study and successfully held a concert in the White House. He has become one of the most famous pianists in the world.
We should also learn from him and work hard to realize our dreams. If we do so, we will be successful like Lang Lang.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,是一封电子邮件;
②时态:本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当增加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,交代写作目的,给你介绍郎朗;
②第二步,从出生日期,个人经历以及现在的地位等方面来介绍郎朗;
③第三步,表明我们应向郎朗学习什么。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事
②begin to do开始做某事
③hold a concert举办一场音乐会
④one of+最高级+名词复数“最……的……之一”
[高分句型]
①He began to learn piano when he was a three-year-old boy. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If we do so, we will be successful like Lang Lang. (if引导的条件状语从句)
5.假如你是李明,你的三个好朋友分别喜欢不同的音乐。请根据下面的表格中的内容写一篇英语短文。
Name Favourite music Favourite musician Reason
Peter pop music Leehom Wang make people relaxed
Linda classical music Lang Lang play the piano well
Tim rock music Cui Jian make people excited
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【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming. I have three good friends. They like different kinds of music. Peter likes pop music best. He likes Leehom Wang because his music makes people relaxed. Linda’s favourite music is classical music. Her favourite musician is Lang Lang because he plays the piano well. Tim likes rock music. Of all the musicians, he likes Cui Jian, a famous Chinese rock singer, best. He thinks Cui Jian’s music can make people excited.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息,介绍三个好朋友最喜欢的音乐类型、音乐人及喜欢的原因。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总写自己有三个好朋友,喜欢不同种类的音乐;
第二步,分别介绍三个好朋友喜欢的音乐类型、音乐人及喜欢的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②play the piano 弹钢琴
[高分句型]
He likes Leehom Wang because his music makes people relaxed.(because引导原因状语从句)
6.请根据以下提示以“Body language around the world”为题目介绍不同国家的肢体语言。
1.不同国家的人们有不同的肢体语言。
2.中国女孩经常和朋友臂挽臂地走。南美人在和你说话的时候有时抓着你的胳膊,所以你不能移开!但是在英国,很多人一点也不喜欢别人碰触他们。
3.在一些国家,谈话时看着对方不礼貌,但是在其他的国家,谈话时看着别的地方不礼貌。在英国和美国,当人们谈话时,他们通常看着对方。
要求:
1.词数70左右。
2.文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。
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【答案】例文:
Body language around the world
People from different countries have different body languages.
Chinese girls often walk arm in arm with their friends. South Americans sometimes hold your arm when they talk to you, so you can’t move away! But in Britain, many people don’t like other people to touch them at all.
In some countries, it isn’t polite to look at people when you talk, but in other countries it isn’t polite to look somewhere else. In Britain and the US, people usually look at each other when they talk.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于说明文写作。需要以“Body language around the world”为题目介绍不同国家的肢体语言,要包含所有要点。
2.写作指导:本文主要以第三人称来介绍各国的肢体语言;时态用一般现在时;根据要点提示,第一段总写不同的国家有不同的肢体语言;第二段写中国、南美以及英国的肢体语言;第三段写在一些国家,人们说话时,与眼睛相关的肢体语言。写作时,注意要点齐全,逻辑清晰,文章连贯。
7.在日常交流中,你喜欢使用肢体语言吗?使用肢体语言有哪些好处呢?请根据下面的提示写一篇短文,70~80词,可适当发挥。
内容包括:
1. 我喜欢使用肢体语言;
2. 使用肢体语言能够很好地表达自己,让别人更容易理解我们;
3. 肢体语言很有趣,它能让谈话变得更轻松;
4. 使用正确的肢体语言能给别人留下好印象。
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【答案】范文
I like using body language because I think it is very important and useful.
First, using body language can make us express ourselves well. It can make people understand us better. Next, body language is so interesting that it can make our conversation easier. Then, using body language correctly is very important in life. It can help us make a good impression on others.
So I think we should improve our body language and use it correctly.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。要求根据所给的要点提示,谈谈生活中使用肢体语言的好处。注意要保证要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文开头叙述喜欢使用肢体语言和结尾呼吁大家提高自己的肢体语言水平和正确使用肢体语言时应使用第一人称,叙述使用肢体语言的好处时应该用第三人称;时态采用一般现在时;在写作时应三段来写,第一段总写,叙述喜欢使用肢体语言及原因;第二段具体叙述使用肢体语言的好处;第三段概括并结尾,呼吁我们应该提高我们的肢体语言并正确使用。叙述要条理,可使用表示顺序的词;叙述要完整,保证条理清晰,所给提示内容要包括在内。写完以后,注意检查,确保语法、单词拼写和标点使用正确。
8.日常生活中,我们在交流时,除了用口头语言以外,还会用一些肢体语言。肢体语言在人们的交流中十分重要。假如你是李伟,你的笔友Jack将要来中国学习汉语,请你根据下列提示用英语写一封电子
邮件,告诉他中国人常用的一些肢体语言。80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
提示:
1.见面打招呼时点头并微笑。
2.很少在公共场合拥抱或亲吻。
3.好朋友见面通常短暂地握手。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you are going to study Chinese in China.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’ll tell you more when you come. And I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Wei
【答案】例文:
Dear Jack,
I’m glad that you are going to study Chinese in China. Before you come, I’d like to tell you what body language Chinese people often use.
Just like in America, in China, people greet each other with head nodding, smiling and so on. We often smile when we meet people. Also, in China, nodding the head means agreement. But we hardly ever hug or kiss each other in public. Even good friends just shake hands for a short time when they meet. And remember that in China,
students must sit in their seats in class-it’s our tradition.
I’ll tell you more when you come. And I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.
Yours,
Li Wei
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求根据提示内容介绍中国常用的肢体语言。注意要点要齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍中国常用的肢体语言;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
9.假设你的班里有一些来自外国的学生, 他们对下面这些肢体语言不太了解。请你根据对这些肢体语言的理解向他们介绍这些肢体语言的含义:(1)点头和摇头;(2)握手和拥抱;(3)把食指(forefinger)放在嘴前。50词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
提示短语:shake hands, for the first time
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【答案】例文
There is a lot of body language in China. We nod our heads to say “Yes” or “I agree”. We shake our heads to say “No” or “I disagree”. We put the forefinger in front of our mouth to say “Please be quiet.” We usually shake hands when we meet others for the first time and we hug our friends if we haven't seen them for a long time.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目是一篇材料作文,要求根据对肢体语言的理解,介绍这些肢体语言的含义,要包含所提示内容,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般现在时;内容要包括所提示的点头和摇头,握手和拥抱及把食指(forefinger)放在嘴前,要把肢体语言的含义说清楚,叙述要完整,保证条理清晰,无语法和拼写错误。
10.假设你是Jenmy,上周你和家人去南京度假3天,请根据以下提示写一篇日记,记录南京之旅。要点:
(1)上周五和父母乘飞机去南京;
(2)周六上午坐地铁参观了夫子庙(the Confucius Temple),游客很多,不得不排队;晚上乘船游览秦淮河(the Qinhuai River);
(3)周日品尝了南京盐水鸭(Nanjing salted duck);商店很多,去购物中心为奶奶买了礼物;
(4)周日晚上返回;
(6)旅行的感受。
要求:
(1)包括所有提供信息,可适当发挥;
(2)条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确,不少于80词。
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【答案】例文
Monday
Last week, I went on vacation with my parents for three days. We went to Nanjing by plane last Friday and we had a great time there. On Saturday morning, we took the underground to visit the Confucius Temple. There were lots of visitors and we had to wait in line. In the evening, we took a boat tour on the Qinhuai River. On Sunday, we tasted Nanjing salted duck. There were a lot of shops and we went to the shopping centre and bought a present for my grandma. We came back on Sunday evening. It was a really wonderful trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇日记;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要求已给出,学生不要遗漏题目中的要点,适当添加细节,写作时保持主谓一致,注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍出游的地点及同伴;
第二步,介绍南京之旅的具体活动;
第三步,介绍返回时间及旅游感受。
[亮点词汇]
①have a great time玩得开心
②lots of许多
③buy sth for sb给某人买某物
[高分句型]
There were a lot of shops and we went to the shopping centre and bought a present for my grandma.(There be句型)
11.假如你是李军,是某中学初一的一名学生。你和父母在暑假期间去了伦敦旅行。请根据下列提示,给你的笔友吉姆写一封电子邮件,告诉他你的旅行经历和感受。邮件格式已给出。
要点:
1. 乘飞机抵达,在伦敦停留5 天;
2. 行程:(1)第一天参观了大英博物馆;
(2)第二天乘船在泰晤士河旅行;
(3) 第三天去了“伦敦眼”,饱览伦敦风光;
(4)最后两天拜访父母的朋友。
3. 个人感受。
要求:
1. 词数不少于70(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
From: Li Jun Sent: Sunday
To: Jim Subject: My holiday in London
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Love,
Li Jun
【答案】例文
From: Li Jun Sent: Sunday
To: Jim Subject: My holiday in London
Hi, Jim! I went to London with my parents during the summer holiday. We stayed there for five days. After we arrived in London by plane, we began our tour of the city. On the first day, we visited the British Museum with lots of world-famous works of art. On the second day, we took a boat tour on the River Thames. It was so wonderful! On the third day, we went to the London Eye and did some sightseeing. During the last two days, we visited my parents’ friends in the town. We felt excited and enjoyed ourselves very much. London is a beautiful city with a long history.
Love,
Li Jun
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示的要点,在每个要点下要适当增加细节,使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,邮件开头格式已给出,邮件开头语应该是问候对方;
第二步,根据提示材料,首先总体叙述在伦敦停留的时间,接着介绍每一天的行程,介绍的过程中可以适当加入个人的感受,增强文章的可读性;
第三步,总结上文,抒发自己伦敦之行的感受及对伦敦的印象。
[亮点词汇]
① during the summer holiday暑假期间
② lots of world-famous works of art许多世界著名的艺术品
③ did some sightseeing游览一些地方
④ enjoyed ourselves我们玩得开心
[高分句型]
① After we arrived in London by plane, we began our tour of the city. (after引导的时间状语从句)
② London is a beautiful city with a long history. (介词短语作后置定语)
12.旅行是一种享受,江河湖海,名胜古迹,让人领略到祖国山河的美好。暑假就要到了,假如你计划去北京旅游,请根据表格提示,制定你的旅游计划。
My Trip Plan to Beijing
Whom will you go with Go with my…
How will you go By car/high-speed train…
What will you do Visit places of interest; watch animals…
How do you feel …
要求:
(1)短文须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;
(3)词数70词左右。
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【答案】例文
My Trip Plan to Beijing
The summer holiday is coming. I want to go on a trip to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It’s the capital of China. We will go there by high-speed train. We will stay there for 3 days. We are going to visit some places of interests, such as Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall. We will go to Tian’anmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag and we will take a lot of photos on the Great Wall. We will see the animals in the zoo. I am longing to see the lovely pandas there. I hope we’ll have a great time and
I think our trip will be very meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,属于材料作文写作;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章标题及写作要点已经给出,按照提示的要点逐点阐述,可以适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引出话题,说明要去北京旅游;
第二步,根据要点介绍旅游计划,包括同行的人、交通方式、打算做的事情等,可列举具体的事例;
第三步,抒发感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with a long history有着悠长的历史
②such as比如
③long to do sth渴望做某事
[高分句型]
I hope we’ll have a great time and I think our trip will be very meaningful.(and连接两个并列分句,两个并列分句中都含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句)
13.你一定去过一些有趣的地方,遇到过不同的人。请以“My amazing trip”为题,记录你的一次神奇之旅。内容包括:
1.旅行时间、地点和主要活动;
2.最令你印象深刻的事情;
3.对这次旅行的感受和收获。
注意: 1.词数 90左右;
2.内容涵盖要点,全文连贯通顺,可适当发挥;
3.请勿提及真实校名、姓名等信息。
My amazing trip
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【答案】例文
My amazing trip
I had an unforgettable trip to the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain. I have experienced many firsts, but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.
Last July, my family and I took a tour to Changbai Mountain. We climbed up from the west slope, where the scenery basically remains the most primitive state. After climbing 1440 steps, we finally reached the top of the mountain. Although we were very tired, the temperature on the top of the mountain was very suitable, making us feel extremely comfortable. What’s more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks. It’s said that 70% of the people who came to Changbai Mountain for the first time can’t see the Tianchi because the weather on the top of the mountain is unpredictable. And the first time I came to Changbai Mountain, I saw Tianchi of Changbai Mountain, which is really amazing.
Although we were tired, we were happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏题干提示信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。开篇点出自己难以忘记的一次旅行;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体阐述旅行时间、地点、主要活动及印象深刻的事情;
第三步,书写结语。表达对这次旅行的感受和收获。
[亮点词汇]
①reached the top of the mountain到达山顶
②on the top of在……顶部
③like a huge mirror像一面巨大的镜子
[高分句型]
①but the most unforgettable one is that I saw the Tianchi of Changbai Mountain for the first time.(that引导的表语从句)
②What’s more, we were lucky enough to see the Tianchi, which is like a huge mirror inlaid among the peaks.
(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
14.暑假就要到来了,你一定想去哪儿游玩一下吧。请以I plan to go to __________ for a trip为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
1.要点:
1)你计划去哪儿旅行,和谁一起去,怎么去;
2)你选择去那儿的原因;
3)旅行前需要做什么。
2.要求:
1)把题目补充完整;
2)文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3)要包含所有要点,适当发挥想象;
4)书写规范、整洁;
5)80词左右。
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【答案】例文:
I plan to go to Hainan for a trip
The summer holiday is coming. I plan to go to Hainan for a trip during the summer holiday. I plan to go there with my parents by plane.
Hainan is in the south of China. It has blue sky, beautiful sea and colorful beach. It’s also famous for its Tianyahaijiao. The weather is pleasant. We can enjoy beautiful sunshine and fresh air. We can walk on the beach and swim in the sea. If we are hungry, we can enjoy all kinds of seafood and delicious fruits. I think we will have a good time there.
Now I am still at school. I should study hard first. Later on, I will prepare well for the trip. I will search for the information about the weather and the plane ticket. A hat, a pair of glasses and a camera will be ready.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求以I plan to go to __________ for a trip为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你计划去哪儿旅行,和谁一起去,怎么去;
第二步,介绍你选择去那儿的原因;
第三步,介绍旅行前需要做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do计划做某事
②all kinds of各种各样的
③study hard努力学习
④have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①If we are hungry, we can enjoy all kinds of seafood and delicious fruits.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②I think we will have a good time there.(省略that的宾语从句)
15.假设上周末你参加了一次郊游,请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“A wonderful trip”的英语短文。
A wonderful trip
Time last weekend
Who you and …
Place the Forest Park
Activities ride bikes, pick fruit, enjoy flowers, play games…
Feeling (感受) …
要求:(1) 内容完整,语意连贯,语法规范;
(2) 文章内容必须包含表格内所有信息,可适当发挥;
(3) 文中不得出现真实的地名、人名和校名;
(4) 不少于70词。
A wonderful trip
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【答案】范文:
A wonderful trip
Last weekend, I had a wonderful trip with my classmates.
At 7:30 in the morning, we met at our school gate. We went to the Forest Park by bike. On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. When we arrived there, we started to pick fruit and enjoy the flowers at once. We had a picnic under the big green trees. After that, some girls danced and told stories under the trees and some boys played games happily. We didn’t go back until 4:00 pm.
We had a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:要求以“A wonderful trip”为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对旅行的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、人物、地点、活动”几个方面重点介绍;
第三步,表明自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①by bike骑自行车
②On the way在路上
③had a picnic去野餐
④go back返回
[高分句型]
①When we arrived there, we started to pick fruit and enjoy the flowers at once. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②On the way, we were so excited that we sang loudly. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
16.假设你叫王丹,请根据下面中文提示给你的笔友 Andy写一封60词左右的英文信,介绍下你的假期。
1.去年夏天,我和我的爸妈乘火车去北京度假,在那待了一周;
2.天气晴朗,但是有点热;
3.参观了许多名胜古迹( places of interest),如长城、故宫、颐和园等;
4.吃了各种不同的北京食物,很好吃;
5.乘飞机回家,玩得很愉快,明年还想去。
Dear Andy,
I’d like to tell you something about my last summer vacation.
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【答案】例文
Dear Andy,
I’d like to tell you something about my last summer vacation. I spend the vacation in Beijing with my father. We went there by train and we stayed there for one week.
It was sunny but a little hot there. We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on.
We also tasted different foods in Beijing. They were delicious. We came back by plane. We had fun. And we plan to go there next year.
Yours,
Wang Dan
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信;
② 时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表明写作意图,要向他介绍自己去年的假期;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,可从参观的地方,吃的各种美食等方面来阐述;
第三步,书写结束语,表达自己的假期感受。
[亮点词汇]
① places of interest 名胜古迹
② such as 例如
③ and so on 等等
④ plan to do sth. 计划做……
[高分句型]
We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on.(such as举例)
17.假如你是七年级学生李雷,想邀请英国交换生Max来北京旅行,根据下面所提供的信息,用英语写一封邀请信。
1. 北京是一个历史悠久的城市;
2. 作为中国的首都,它拥有很多名胜;
3. 故宫是最受游客欢迎的景点之一;
4. 长城也是非常美丽值得一看的地方;
5. 天安门广场是个好去处,可以散步。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 不要逐词翻译,适当添加细节,使行文连贯,符合逻辑。
Dear Max,
I would like to invite you to come to Beijing.
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Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】
范文:
Dear Max,
I would like to invite you to come to Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, is a city with a long history. There are many places of interest in it. Now let me tell you some of them.
The Palace Museum is one of the most popular places for visitors. It is very big and you can learn a lot about the history of China from it. The Great Wall is also a wonderful place to go. And Tian’ anmen Square is a good place for people to take a walk.
I hopeyou will enjoy your stay in Beijing.
Yours,
Li Lei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为邀请信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求包含所有内容提示,不要逐词翻译,不要遗漏题目所给的要点,可适当添加细节,注意突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,介绍北京有很多风景名胜;
第二步,具体介绍故宫、长城和天安门这些景点;
第三步,书写结语,表达祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of China中国首都
②places of interest风景名胜
③one of the most popular places最受欢迎的地方之一
[高分句型]
①I hopeyou will enjoy your stay in Beijing.(宾语从句)
②Beijing, the capital of China, is a city with a long history.(with结构)
18.假设今年暑假你和家人打算去伦敦游玩,请以“A Trip to London”为题写一篇英语短文,讲述你的
旅行安排,想象游览时的心情。
提示:(1)你和家人乘飞机到达伦敦;
(2)在伦敦停留 3天;
(3)第一天上午参观英国国家美术馆,下午去看大本钟和伦敦眼;
(4)第二天乘船沿泰晤士河旅行;
(5)第三天返回中国。
要求:(1)词数 70 词左右;
(2)字迹工整、语言流畅、表达正确、逻辑清晰。
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【答案】例文:
A Trip to London
This summer, my family and I are planning a trip to London. We will take a flight to London and stay there for three days. I am really excited about this trip!
On the first day, we will visit the National Gallery in the morning, where we can appreciate the famous paintings and sculptures. In the afternoon, we will go to see the Big Ben and the London Eye, and enjoy the beautiful view of the city.
On the second day, we will take a boat tour along the Thames River, which will be a great way to explore the history and beauty of London.
On the third day, we will return to China.
Although the trip is short, I am sure it will be unforgettable. I can’t wait to experience the culture, history, and lifestyle of London with my family.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容,适当增加细节,并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍下你们一家计划去伦敦,行程和你的心情;
第二步,分段去写每一天做了什么,加上游玩时的心情;
第三步,总结这段旅行,表达自己的期待之情。
[亮点词汇]
①take a flight乘飞机
②appreciate the famous paintings and sculptures欣赏著名的画作和雕塑
③enjoy the beautiful view of the city欣赏城市的美景
④explore the history and beauty of London探索伦敦的历史和美景
[高分句型]
①On the first day, we will visit the National Gallery in the morning, where we can appreciate the famous paintings and sculptures.(where引导的定语从句)
②Although the trip is short, I am sure it will be unforgettable.(让步状语从句)
③On the second day, we will take a boat tour along the Thames River, which will be a great way to explore the history and beauty of London.(定语从句)
19.你了解父(母) 过去的生活起居及娱乐情况吗?请他们谈一谈,然后写一篇短文来告诉我们。60词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
要求:1.根据题目要求,了解父(母) 过去的生活起居及娱乐情况,用一般过去时态。
2.单词拼写要正确,语句要通顺,上下文要连贯。
When my father was young,
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【答案】例文
When my father was young, he was not rich.There were not many buses. So he had to go to school by bike or on foot. In the evening, he watched TV. The TV was not in colour. He liked playing games with his friends. They played football, but they didn't play computer games, because there were no computers then. My father said life was hard at that time but they felt happy.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于材料作文写作,要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文,介绍我父(母)过去的生活起居及娱乐情况。注意写作时要点要齐全,同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
2.写作指导:本文应该用第三人称来叙述;时态采用一般过去时;文章开头已给出,写作时,注意承接上文,根据要点提示具体介绍我父亲过去的交通方式、娱乐方式以及他的感受;文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点;可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩;注意单词书写的准确度,语法运用的准确度,上下文注意连接的流畅度,以及逻辑合理。
20.请根据下表提供的信息,写一篇80词左右的短文介绍当代英国女作家J.K.Rowling。
名字 J.K.Rowling
出生 1965年7月,英国
作品 因小说Harry Potter而著名,全世界70多种语言版本
家庭情况 两个女儿,一个儿子
经历 5岁上学,非常爱学习
爱好 小时候就喜欢写作,讲故事
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【答案】例文:
J.K. Rowling is my favorite writer. I enjoy reading her books a lot. She was born in England in July, 1965. She is famous for Harry Potter which is translated into over 70 languages. It is one of her most famous works. If
you read Harry Potter, you must love the story. It’s such a wonderful book that I can’t put it down. She has three children, two daughters and a son. At the age of 5, she went to school. She loved learning a lot. When she was young, she was good at writing and telling stories.
In my opinion, J.K. Rowling is one of the most successful writers in the world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为 “一般现在时”,“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据表格所给出的提示要点来介绍J.K.Rowling,可以适当增加细节,注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍 J.K. Rowling 的职业,出生日期和出生地点;
第二步:分绍J.K. Rowling的作品Harry Potter,家庭情况,她小时候的兴趣爱好;
第三步:书写总结语,J.K. Rowling是世界上最成功的作家之一。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而著名;以……而闻名
②one of……之一
[高分句型]
①She is famous for Harry Potter which is translated into over 70 languages. (which引导定语从句)
②It’s such a wonderful book that I can’t put it down. (such...that...引导结果状语从句 )
21.你听过《狐狸和葡萄》的故事吗?请根据下面的图片和提示词,用五句话简明扼要地跟大家分享这个故事。
要求:
所写句子必须和图片内容相关。
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【答案】例文
One hot summer’s day, a fox was hungry and thirsty when he saw some grapes. The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. So he jumped and jumped. But the grapes were high, he couldn’t reach some. Finally, he had to give up and said “I am sure the grapes are sour.”
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”;
③提示:考生根据图片上的内容描写,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述图片上的内容;
第二步,具体介绍图片上狐狸的行为;
第三步,介绍结果。
[亮点词汇]
①have to give up不得不放弃
②be sure确定
[高分句型]
①The grapes looked so delicious that he wanted to eat them very much. (so...that引导的结果状语从句)
22.请根据表格内容,写一则小故事。要求:60词左右;语言表达准确,语义连贯,可适当发挥。
提示:
主人公 汤姆和他的狗
故事梗概 一天,汤姆去公园发现了一只小狗,它受伤 (get hurt)了,汤姆把它带回家悉心照料,小狗变强壮了。它帮助汤姆看家,拿报纸,并且可以照顾他的小孩。
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【答案】例文:
One day, Tom went to the park, and he found a little dog. It got hurt. Then Tom took it home and took good care of it. With Tom’s care, the little dog became strong. It likes playing with Tom. The dog can help Tom watch their door and bring newspapers to him. It can also take care of Tom’s little baby. All the people in Tom’s family love the dog very much. They think it is an important member in their family.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据表格提示,写一则小故事,讲一讲汤姆和他的狗狗之间的故事。可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要结合一般过去时和一般现在时,使用第三人称进行写作。可采用一段式写作,将故事梗概完美展现出来。要做到无单词和语法错误。
23.书面表达
《守株待兔》的故事家喻户晓, 请根据下面的提示词, 用英语写出这个故事。
提示词: hare野兔;hole洞;knock against撞上;no longer不再
要求: 1. 表达正确, 逻辑清晰;
2. 不少于60个词。
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【答案】Once upon a time, there was a farmer working in his field. Soon he was very tired. So he sat near a big tree. The sun was very hot and it was very cool under the tree. A hare ran out of a hole. When it saw the farmer, it was very afraid. It ran quickly. It ran so fast that its head knocked against another tree. It died soon. The farmer was very excited to see it.
He picked up the dead hare and took it home for dinner. From that day, he no longer worked. He stayed by that tree, waiting for hares to come again.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍一个农民在田里劳动;接下来讲述他看见一只撞在树上而死的兔子;最后他站在树边,不劳动,只等着兔子再次来。
2.例文点评:例文采用两段式;用第三人称来叙述故事内容;时态采用一般过去时为主,介绍这个兔子如何撞在树上死的,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:
短语:in the field;run out of;knock against;pick up;no longer。
句型:there be句型there be there was a farmer working in his field;时间状语从句When it saw the farmer;结果状语so fast that its head knocked against another tree。
24.假如你是七年级学生Bill,请根据提示,以“My Living Environment”为标题,根据要点,写一篇70词左右的英语短文,介绍一下你的居住环境,内容可适当发挥。
要点:
1. 住在市中心的一个公寓套房里,家里有四个房间,最喜欢的房间是书房;
2. 公寓楼对面有银行、饭馆和商店;
3. 学校离你家大约三公里,乘坐公交车去学校。
My Living Environment
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【答案】例文:
My Living Environment
Hello, I am Bill. I live in an apartment. It is in the center of the city, but it’s not noisy. I like living there. My home is on the third floor of the building. There are four rooms in my home. I like the study best. My sister and I usually enjoy reading books and watch movies there. Life is easy here. There is a bank, a restaurant and some shops across from my apartment building. How far is it from my home to school It’s about three kilometers. There is a bus stop near my home, so I usually take a bus to school.
I have an easy life here!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文。
②时态:一般现在时态。
③提示:作文要点已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,将要点中的汉语翻译成英文,注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同,不能逐词翻译。
第二步,适当的添加一些词汇、短语和句型,使句子连贯。比如解释一下为什么最喜欢的是书房,这样会使文章内容更加丰富、完整。
第三步,添加适当的开头和结尾,比如表达出对于居住环境的满意。
[亮点词汇]
① in the center of 在……中心
② on the third floor 在三楼
③ across from 在……对面
[高分句型]
①There are four rooms in my home. (“There be句型”表示“某地有某物”)
②How far is it from my home to school (“How far”对距离提问)
③There is a bus stop near my home, so I usually take a bus to school.(“take a bus to...”表示“坐公交车去……”)
25.假如你是中学生李华。今年国家实施了“双减”政策(the Double Reduction Policy),你的学习生活发生了很多变化。请根据下面的要点,以“Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文,讲述一下“双减”前后你的学习生活的具体变化。
过去:
1. 放学后有很多作业要做,周末也得在家里学习。
2. 没有时间运动,也不能做自己喜欢的事情。
现在:
3. 在学校就能完成作业,还可以参加我喜欢的俱乐部。
4. 在业余时间,经常和朋友们一起进行锻炼,比如踢足球、打网球等等。
5. 你认为……
参考词汇:进行锻炼 do exercise
要求:
(1)词数:80~100个。
(2)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Changes in My Life
After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family (the Double Reduction Policy), my life changed a lot.
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【答案】A possible version
Changes in My Life
After our school had a policy of reducing the burden of the students and their family (the Double Reduction Policy), my life changed a lot.
In the past, I still had too much homework to do after school. Even worse, I had to stay at home to study at weekends. And I didn’t have time to get some exercise and I couldn’t do my favourite things.
But now, I live a different life. I can finish my homework at school and I can join my favourite club. In my free time, I often do exercise with my friends. We usually play football or tennis together.
I think the changes in our life are very good. I’m sure we will have a happy life in the future.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文。介绍“双减”政策实施以来,你的学习生活的具体变化。
2.写作指导:本文在叙述过去的生活学习时,使用一般过去时;描述现在的生活学习时用一般现在时。人称以第一人称为主。写作时涵盖要点,可适当发挥使行文连贯。确保语句通顺,无单词语法错误。
26.提示:有人喜欢在城里生活,有人喜欢在乡下生活。请以“I Love Living in the ________”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你喜欢在哪里生活以及喜欢在那里生活的理由。
要求:1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;词数不少于50个;
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名,否则以零分计。
I Love Living in the ________
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【答案】例文
I Love Living in the Countryside
To live in the big cities or to live in the countryside, that is a question. Different people have different choices. As for me, I love living in the countryside.
Firstly, the countryside is a good place to get close to nature. The air there is fresh and water is clean. Apart from that, there are many different kinds of wild animals that I can’t see in the cities. Without too much noise and heavy traffic, life is quiet. Secondly, the cost of living is low, so I won’t have too much pressure from life. Thirdly, people in the countryside are friendly and warm-hearted. I can set up close relationship with them.
In a word, I love living in the countryside.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求以“I Love Living in the ________”为题,介绍自己喜欢居住的地方及理由,可以适当的发挥,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要先补全题目,紧扣主题,本文应该用第一人称、第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般现在时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
27.假如你的英语老师叫陈华,请根据所提供的信息,以My Teacher’s Past Life为题,写一篇60词左右的英语小短文,介绍她过去的生活情况。
Name Chen Hua
Born in A small village in Zhucheng
Born on June 18th, 1990
Primary School Taolin Primary School
First English Teacher Mr. Zhang
Character(性格) Friendly
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【答案】参考范文:
My Teacher’s Past Life
Chen Hua is my English teacher. She was born in a small village in Zhucheng on June 18th, 1990. The name
of her primary school is Taolin Primary School. Mr. Zhang was her first English teacher. At that time, she was friendly to everyone. I think all of her teachers and classmates liked her very much. All of us love her. She is a nice teacher.
【详解】1. 题干解读:题目要求根据表格提示要点,介绍英语老师的过去,写作时要运用正确的英语表达,要选用恰当的词汇和短语。
2. 写作指导:写作时要紧扣主题,本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容;时态采用一般过去时;在介绍内容时,力求语言准确,内容完整,保证行文连贯,条理清晰。
28.假如你叫王强,你的英国笔友汤姆(Tom)想了解一下你所在的城市的情况。请根据以下内容给他写一封信介绍你所在城市的情况。
内容包括:
(1)城市的位置;(2)城市的四季及人们常做的事情;(3)邀请汤姆来你所在的城市。
Dear Tom,
How’s it going I’m writing to you to introduce my hometown.
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Yours,
Wang Qiang
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going I’m writing to you to introduce my hometown. I live in Guangzhou. It’s in the south of China. There are many interesting activities for people to do in different seasons. In spring, the weather is warm
and wet. People like to enjoy the beautiful flowers in the parks. In summer, the weather is hot. They enjoy going to the beach and swimming in the sea. In autumn, it’s cool. People often climb mountains or go hiking. Now it’s winter, and the weather is warm. I like reading books in the warm sun.
Wish you to visit Guangzhou.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为书信作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏信息,可适当添加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你所在的城市的位置;
第二步,介绍城市的四季及人们常做的事情;
第三步,邀请汤姆来你所在的城市。
[亮点词汇]
①in the south of 在……的南部
②enjoy doing sth.喜欢做某事
③go hiking去远足
[高分句型]
①There are many interesting activities for people to do in different seasons.(there be 结构)
②They enjoy going to the beach and swimming in the sea.(and连接两个并列短语)
29.假如你是陈平,是深圳某中学的学生,你的笔友Jack想到深圳来旅游,希望你给他写一封60字以上的邮件,简单介绍一下深圳。
提示:
1、位于香港的附近,是一个现代化的城市。
2、有很多知名的旅游景点,如世界之窗the Window of the World,欢乐谷the Happy Valley等等。
3、有很多漂亮的海滩,适合夏天旅游。
4、有很多美食,也是购物的好地方。
5、每年有很多游客到深圳来参观。
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【答案】例文:
Dear Jcak,
Shenzhen, located near Hong Kong, is a modern city. A lot of visitors come to there for working, shopping and sightseeing every year. There are many theme parks in Shenzhen, such as the Happy Valley, the window of world and so on. There are a lot of the beautiful sea around Shenzhen, and the visitors like to swim in the sea. There are many shopping places in Shenzhen, and the visitors like to go there for shopping. Another reason that the visitors like to Shenzhen is many delicious foods. Many tourists visit Shenzhen every year.
Welcome to Shenzhen!
Yours,
Chen Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中深圳的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明主题——深圳;
第二步,介绍深圳的景点及人们喜欢来这个地方的原因;
第三步,以“欢迎来深圳”结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多
②for example比如
③and so on等等
④like to do喜欢做某事
[高分句型]
①There are a lot of the beautiful sea around Shenzhen, and the visitors like to swim in the sea. (there be句型)
②Another reason that the visitors like to Shenzhen is many delicious foods. (that引导的定语从句)
30.假如你有一家蔬菜店,你的蔬菜店将进行一次大促销,所有蔬菜价格都以最优惠的价格出售。请你写一个促销广告,请街区的人们前来购买蔬菜。
提示:
1. 所有的蔬菜都很新鲜,而且价格优惠;
2. 西红柿每千克(kilo)四美元,胡萝卜每千克两美元,花椰菜(broccoli)每千克五美元:
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50词。
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【答案】例文:
Come and buy vegetables at our vegetable shop! We sell all vegetables at very good prices. All the vegetables are fresh. Do you like tomatoes They are only four dollars per kilo. Carrots are only two dollars per kilo and broccoli is five dollars per e to our vegetable shop now!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为促销广告;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要注意不要遗漏提示中的内容,并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步,表明写作意图。借用“蔬菜店促销”来引出下文中对价格的介绍;
②第二步,具体阐述写作内容。具体介绍各种蔬菜的价格;
③第三步,书写结语。希望大家来买蔬菜。
[亮点词汇]
at very good prices 价格非常便宜
[高分句型]
Come and buy vegetables at our vegetable shop!(祈使句)
31.随着网络的发展,“网购”已经非常流行。越来越多的学生也加入到网购的群体中,根据你对网购的看法写一篇英语短文。
要求:
1. 适当增加内容或说明理由。
2. 字迹工整,书写规范。70词左右。
Advantages 足不出户 不受时间限制,节约时间
Disadvantages 在网上看不到实物 网上支付不安全
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【答案】例文:
Online shopping is a new way of shopping. It’s very popular with the young people.
Online shopping has many advantages. First, you can buy some things at home. It can save lots of time. Second, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. But online shopping has some disadvantages, too. You can only see pictures, but can’t see the real products. And paying over the Internet isn’t always safe. I love online shopping, but I also go to the supermarket to buy something in my free time.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:写作要点表格中已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的信息,可适当添加细节,但要突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直入主题,简单介绍网购。
第二步,具体