2025年高考英语一轮复习应用文写作之读后续写素材6(结尾方法)
【素材1】We exchanged smiles, bathed in the soft room light.After dinner, I pressed the dandelion between two sheets of paper in a dictionary and kept it as a reminder—every flower gives pleasure in its own way.For this, I am forever grateful, because smiles on mother’s face and her kind act foster a man like me now!
我们互相微笑,沐浴在柔和的室内灯光下。晚饭后,我把蒲公英夹在字典里的两张纸之间,保存起来,提醒自己——每一朵花都以自己的方式给人以快乐。为此,我永远感激,因为母亲脸上的微笑和她的善良养育了现在的我!
【素材2】Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life.You may think what you did is just a small deed,but it may mean a lot.Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to be nurtured with love and care.
在你生命中的每一天,都要爱护和关心你所爱的人。你可能认为你所做的只是一件小事,但它可能意味着很多。有些关系可以维持得更久,但它们仍然需要用爱和关怀来滋养。
【素材3】Sometimes we feel that we could progress quickly and reach the newer heights in our life if we were not tied up with our family.However,we fail to realize that our family and our loved ones help us survive the tough time in our lives and encourage us to reach higher heights in our life.They are not holding us,but are supporting us.Never let go of our loved ones.有时我们觉得,如果没有家庭的羁绊,我们可以进步得很快,达到生活中新的高度。然而,我们没有意识到我们的家人和我们所爱的人帮助我们渡过了生活中的艰难时期,鼓励我们在生活中达到更高的高度。他们不是在束缚我们,而是在支持我们。永远不要放弃我们所爱的人。
【素材4】 It dawned on them that what the lady had done was not a deal, but a favor.When they took a bite of the cookies, they exchanged a knowing smile.They had not only tasted the sweetness of the fruit, but also the kindness of a warm heart under a cold face.
他们明白了,那位女士所做的不是交易,而是帮忙。他们咬了一口饼干,会心一笑。他们不仅尝到了果实的甜蜜,还体会到了冷面下一颗温暖善良的心。
【素材5】We merrily danced to the joyful music, singing, laughing and wishing each other good luck.The old flower woman also joined us, unable to conceal her excitement and gratitude.The spirit of Christmas came back to us again.It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land.The American sailor, through his kindness and generosity, brightened up our day.
我们随着欢快的音乐欢快地跳舞,又唱又笑,互祝好运。卖花的老妇人也加入了我们,无法掩饰她的兴奋和感激之情。圣诞节的气氛又回来了。它把我们所有人聚集在这个异国他乡的小餐馆里。那位美国水手的善良和慷慨使我们这一天充满了欢乐。
【素材6】“How did the lady know we were short of money and desperately in need of help ” She couldn’t help thinking.With the baby due next month, life would be more difficult.She knew how hard her husband was trying to support the family.She felt so blessed that there was kindness in the world.As she lay sleeping next to her husband, she whispered softly, “We will get through this.Good night, Bryan.”
“那位女士怎么知道我们缺钱,急需帮助 ”她忍不住想。孩子下个月就要出生了,生活将更加困难。她知道她的丈夫是多么努力地想要养家。她感到很幸运,因为世界上有善良。当她躺在丈夫身边睡觉时,她轻声说:“我们会挺过去的。晚安,布莱恩。”
【素材7】Face lighting up with joy, they stroked the record and kept thanking me again and again, saying it was the best gift for them ever.However, I thought we both had our best presents.For them, a record to cheer their daughter up, and for me, the sweet taste of giving.
他们高兴得脸上放光,抚摸着唱片,不停地感谢我,说这是给他们最好的礼物。不过,我觉得我们都收到了最好的礼物。对他们来说,一个唱片可以让他们的女儿振作起来,对我来说,是给予的甜蜜滋味。
【素材8】At the same time, Trucker was a great inspiration to him.It was the little boy’s desire and love for firefighters that had a great influence on him.Jim was no longer drown in the sadness of losing his teammate.It also helped him strengthen his resolve as a firefighter to serve the community.What a wonderful thing!
与此同时,卡车司机对他来说是一个很大的鼓舞。这个小男孩对消防员的渴望和热爱对他产生了很大的影响。吉姆不再沉浸在失去队友的悲伤中。这也帮助他坚定了作为一名消防员为社区服务的决心。多么美妙的事情啊!
【素材9】The people in the city, especially the teachers and the students in Amy’s school, realized the pain she had suffered, and they felt sorry for her.On Christmas Day, many people came, including the tall boy in the fifth grade, filled with holiday greetings and words of encouragement.Amy did get her wish of not being teased, not only on Christmas Day, but also every day!
城里的人,尤其是艾米学校的老师和学生,意识到她所遭受的痛苦,他们为她感到难过。圣诞节那天,很多人都来了,包括五年级的那个高个子男孩,他们带来了节日的问候和鼓励的话。艾米实现了她的愿望,不被取笑,不仅是在圣诞节,而且是每天!
【素材10】 I watched with tears all over my cheeks.Maiga then smiled at me and said eagerly, “You will miss me!” I nodded, trying to stop my sobs.“I’ll definitely miss you!” he shouted.I wanted to take a photo of his smile, but no film could have captured the happiness I saw on his face.
我泪流满面地看着。麦加接着对我笑了笑,急切地说:“你会想我的!”我点了点头,试图止住自己的抽泣。“我一定会想你的!”他喊道。我想拍下他的笑容,但没有任何镜头能捕捉到我在他脸上看到的幸福。
【素材11】 She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.With a bright light streaming through the window, they hugged together and were too thrilled to say anything.Never before had they been so close to each other, warmth filling each one’s heart.她表达了真诚的歉意和感激之情。听了她的话,她的妈妈笑了,轻轻地拍了拍她的背。明亮的灯光透过窗户照进来,她们拥抱在一起,激动得说不出话来。她们从来没有如此亲近过,温暖充满了每个人的心。
【方法运用】
25．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Some kids play sports. They run hundreds of laps, and tackle, kick, or swing. Some kids do makeover parties. They pool their fashion magazines and organize their own spa hair salons. And some kids are computer geeks. Their programming ability is a thing of wonder.
Me I had the spelling bee (拼字比赛). The bee was my World Series. And what happened during a Spelling Bee remained fresh in my memory.
I trained every day on my front steps after school, the dictionary pages rippling softly in the breeze. I formed a habit carrying around my buddies Longman, Webster, and Oxford.
As soon as I opened my eyes on Friday morning, I felt the hairs on my arm stand up. I glanced at my alarm clock—it was only 6:27. I usually woke up at 7:01, which meant I had an extra thirty-four minutes to study. Starting with the word “judgment” which I always spelt as “J-U-D-G-M-A-N-T”, I went over several words.
To calm my butterflies in my stomach, I reminded myself that I was one of the best spellers in my class. I was not ambitious enough to want to go to the Scripps National Spelling Bee or anything—I just wanted to win the bee at Meadowbrook Middle School, so that I could defeat my main enemy, Nathan Fortescue.
Nathan thought he was a better speller than I was, but he didn’t even study words. He just read tons of science and math books. Really, he wasn’t a speller at heart—he was a mathematician. Nathan and I had nothing in common except being good spellers, but since he was a good speller without even trying, it didn’t count. I bet if you gave Nathan a modern literature word like “denouement”, he’d be out on the first round.
The Spelling Bee wasn’t until after lunch, so all I did in the morning was stare at the clock and wondered how seconds could possibly pass by so slowly. I sneaked away from lunch early so I could get in a few extra minutes of study time.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As soon as I shut the classroom door behind me, I heard a voice.
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“Now it’s time for the Spelling Bee!” Ms. Hawking said brightly.
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26．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My mum died on a cold and rainy December morning. The dark clouds and constant light rain over her Cape Cod neighbourhood fit our sadness as my brothers and sisters and I arranged with the local funeral (葬礼) home for Mum’s last departure from her beloved house on the edge of the river.
All five of us were there, having been alerted (警觉) earlier that week. As soon as we had gotten “The Call”, we had immediately flown or driven from our homes in California, Florida, Georgia and New York to the house by the river.
As I joined my brothers and sisters at the house on the Cape, I felt oddly peaceful. Though I was afraid to lose my mother, I wasn’t anxious about the process. I knew that Mum had prepared well for her death. All we had to do was be present for her and each other during this final stage. She had done everything else.
Mum was a born teacher and a natural organizer. When she had received the diagnosis (诊断) of incurable cancer that September, she had planned her death as practically as she had planned her busy life as a wife, mother and professional.
Mum did think fondly of her neighbours and friends. Even though she had declined to share her remaining time with them, she wanted to acknowledge their friendly care and express her lasting affection for them. So Mum had asked my older sister to purchase, on her behalf, a case of wine. The small bottles were to be decorated with ribbons (缎带) and delivered by us in person, after Mum’s death, to those neighbours who had been her favourite local companions.
Accordingly, in the early afternoon, as the cold morning rain gave way to a watery blue sky, all five of us set out to walk through the neighbourhood together, braving the cold air. Taking turns carrying the heavy boxes, we visited every house. Together, we carried the news of her death, that final gift of beribboned bottles, and her instruction to her friends: “Please use this Champagne to toast to our friendship.”
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
We hugged, and cried, and laughed, with neighbour after neighbour.
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As the five of us returned to the house, we saw, against the backdrop of the grey sky, a breathtakingly beautiful rainbow.
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27．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
On a cold winter day years ago, I slipped in the snow in the wilderness and broke my legs. As I lay on the ground, unable to move my body, I believed I was fated to freeze to death. My dog, Becky, however, didn't run away. Instead, she determined to save me. She lay on top of me to keep me warm for many hours, barking continually until help arrived, long after I lost consciousness. Eventually, I was saved.
A few cold winters later, Becky was discovered to have a baseball-sized lump (肿块) on her belly. Before long, my husband Bob took Becky for surgery to remove the lump. To take care of my babies, I had to stay at home, filled with anxious thoughts. After her surgery, when Bob left to pick her up, it was snowing heavily. Becky could barely walk, so Bob carried her.
They couldn't get in the door easily because Becky was wearing a big, hard plastic cone(圆锥体) around her neck to prevent her from licking her sutures (伤口缝合线). I held the door wide open. She was sad and crying. There was snow inside her cone. It took over five minutes to get them in because Becky shook her head wildly to try to remove the cone. The sound of the con e hitting the door made her panic and cry even louder.
Once inside, she was so frightened that she kept her tail between her legs. She thought she had done something wrong. Her expression said, “I’m sorry for what I did that led to me having to wear this.” Because of her surgery, Becky wouldn't take her special treat of a cube of cheese. She wouldn’t sit or lie down. All she did was stand and cry. “How long will she have to wear it ” I asked. “Two weeks,” Bob replied.
“It’s my turn to take good care of her, just as she did for me years ago,” I thought.
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Then, I stayed with her on the floor, helping her get through her firs tough night.
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Eventually, the day arrived when Bob took her to have her sutures removed.
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28．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Mama and I spent morning s cleaning up the dirt that blew into our house. Mama said all dust was due to the drought. It was dust y everywhere. Dust covered our clothes. We had to wash the dishes before each meal. We rarely drove the automobile because Papa feared the dust from the road would ruin its front lights and horn (喇叭).
When my sister, Faye, and I walked to school, we wore handkerchiefs over our mouths so we didn’t breathe in the dirt. On days when the air was so bad that they closed the school, we stayed home and helped Mama put wet sheets over the windows. But the dirt always found a way in.
Last Sunday, there was no dirt in the air, only bright spring sunshine and a clear blue sky. After church, Papa headed out to the field to check on the cattle while Mama started dinner. Faye and I played in the yard. The temperature suddenly dropped—it felt good. The heat had been building since dawn.
Then Mama shouted from the house, “Iris, you and Faye get inside, real quick now!”
I looked to the west and saw a huge black cloud of dust. All the birds flew away. “Faye, go with Mama!” I shouted. “I’ll warn Papa.”
Faye sprinted toward the house. The storm hit so fast, I barely saw her climb the porch steps. Fine sand beat my face and in an instant the day turned into night. I stumbled over our bicycles left carelessly in the yard. I screamed for Papa, hoping my voice would lead him back.
The dirt and sand stung my skin like a thousand bees. I needed to get to shelter. Covering my face with one hand, I felt my way toward the automobile and opened the door. Dirt flew in with me as I pulled the door closed. Papa was still out there! I needed to help him find the automobile.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右：
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Staring at the automobile, I got an idea.
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Papa nodded, “Good. We’ll wait out the storm here.”
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参考答案
1．
As soon as I shut the classroom door behind me, I heard a voice. “Hi, Olivia. You were looking a little pale in math this morning. I’m glad the rose is back in your cheeks. I was afraid you might miss the spelling bee.” “Oh, wouldn’t you just love that ” “Not really. I enjoy a bit of competition. Is that the list of words you’re studying Funny, I don’t think I have one of those.” I was so irritated that I couldn’t concentrate on reviewing my list, but it didn’t matter—I knew all the words by heart, anyway. Within three minutes, the rest of the class filled in, and it was noisier than a five-year-old’s birthday party. I finished taking a mental picture of “scalawag” just as Ms. Hawking walked into the room.
“Now it’s time for the Spelling Bee!” Ms. Hawking said brightly. “Is everybody ready ” “No!” the class groaned—everyone except Nathan and me, of course. My class was full of pretty bad spellers. After six times around the circle, there were only two kids left, Nathan and me. I cocked my head toward Nathan, beaming with the knowledge of my impending triumph. Nathan’s next word was “judgment”, “J-U-D-G-M-E-N-T. Judgment.” “That is correct!” Like a zombie. “Hey,” says Nathan. “Are you OK ” He smiled and stuck out his hand to shake mine. “Judgment,” I mumbled weakly. He shrugged, “Eoin Colfer is my favorite author, and the other day the word ‘judgment’ was in one of his books I’m reading. So I guess I just absorbed it.” “Eoin Colfer is my favorite author, too! I thought you hated reading books without numbers.” I laughed. Nathan smiled. OK, so maybe Nathan and I did have a few things in common.
【写作分析】本文以拼字比赛为线索，讲述了作者非常重视拼字比赛，每天放学后都会在门前台阶上，刻苦训练，尤其在比赛前的早晨，作者提前醒来，利用额外的时间复习单词，以平复内心的紧张情绪，作者的目标是在梅多布鲁克中学的拼字比赛中胜出，以此打败主要竞争对手纳森·福尔特斯库。虽然纳森自认拼写能力强，但作者认为纳森本质上是个数学家而非拼写高手。在等待午餐后的比赛过程中，作者感觉时间过得异常缓慢，甚至提前结束午餐，只为争取更多复习时间。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我一关上身后教室的门，就听到一个声音。”可知，第一段可描写其他的学生也进入了教室，他们正在讨论将要进行的拼字比赛。
②由第二段首句内容““现在是拼写大赛的时候了！”霍金女士兴奋地说。”可知，第二段可描写在拼写大赛过程中，作者和纳森的表现。
2.续写线索：进入教室——讨论拼写大赛——平复心情——比赛开始——高手角逐——纳森胜出
3.词汇激活
行为类
①集中精力于：concentrate on/focus on
②呻吟：groan/moan
③错过：miss/pass up
情绪类
①恼怒的：irritated/annoyed
②讨厌：hate/dislike
【高分句型1】I finished taking a mental picture of “scalawag” just as Ms. Hawking walked into the room. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
【高分句型2】I cocked my head toward Nathan, beaming with the knowledge of my impending triumph.(运用了现在分词作状语)
2．
We hugged, and cried, and laughed, with neighbour after neighbour. We gave each special person Mum's last gift, a gift that reflected her unique flair for life and honoured the strength of their mutual affection. And my mother the teacher taught me one more lesson. As I walked in her shoes and hugged in her place, I felt her love flow through me to each grieving friend. With it flowed my love for her and my heartbreak at her death. And, with each hug, an answering affection poured from each person. My breaking heart opened as 1 absorbed through my sorrow, the joy of a life well lived and friends well loved.
As the five of us returned to the house, we saw, against the backdrop of the grey sky，a breathtakingly beautiful rainbow. It made us all laugh. Obviously. Mum had orchestrated the whole thing from her new seat in the heavens, "Stop the rain so my children can deliver those bottles without getting wet." she probably instructed. The storm clouds had obediently dispersed, just long enough for us to fulfill Mum's last request and, in the process, learn one more lesson about whole-hearted love. Clearly, a rainbow that arched over the whole sky was the perfect way for Mum to express her approval.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的母亲去世后，作者和兄弟姐妹们走访了每户人家。他们带着母亲去世的消息和最后的礼物——系着丝带的酒瓶。这是对朋友们的指示:“请用这瓶香槟为我们的友谊干杯。”
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我们拥抱，哭，笑，一个接一个的拜访邻居”可知，第一段可描写作者代替母亲看望了每一个朋友以及作者的感受
②由第二段首句内容“当我们五个人回到房子里时，我们看到，在灰色天空的背景下。”可知，第二段可描写天空的变化反映出了作者和兄弟姐妹们的心理变化以及感悟。
2.续写线索：替母亲拜访朋友——感受——对天空的描写——心情的变化——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
传达：convey/extend
拥抱：hug/embrace
阻止：stop/prevent
完成：fulfill/complete
情绪类
悲痛的：grieving / distressing
全心全意的：whole-hearted/ devoted
[高分句型1] As I walked in her shoes and hugged in her place, I felt her love flow through me to each grieving friend. (运用了as引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Clearly, a rainbow that arched over the whole sky was the perfect way for Mum to express her approval. (运用了that引导的定语从句)
3．
Then, I stayed with her on the floor, helping her get through her first tough night. Holding her tenderly, my soothing whispers and small treats, given one by one, gradually calmed her anxious spirit, distracting her from the cone’s oppressive discomfort. As she nestled with her head on my lap, her gratitude was palpable, mirroring the unwavering support she had once bestowed during my own time of need. As the night unfolded, we both found solace in our shared companionship, eagerly awaiting the day when the confining cone would be lifted.
Eventually, the day arrived when Bob took her to have her sutures removed. The moment she emerged from the clinic, her tail danced with pure delight, the cone’s encirclement now a forgotten memory. I wept with pride, witnessing her renewed vigor as she explored the backyard, her resilience echoing the resilience she had shown on that frigid winter when she saved my life. Determined to repay her kindness, I cherished every passing moment, showering her with the identical love and support she had once given me. Our bond, forged through trials and gratitude, was a testament to the profound connection that transcended language, exemplifying the unyielding bond between a heart filled with gratitude and an ever-loyal friend.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了一个寒冷的冬天，主人意外摔断了双腿，无法行动的情况下，狗狗Becky决定挺身而出，用自己的身体保暖并不停地吠叫，直到救援到达。多年后，Becky肚子上患上了一个巴士球大小的肿块，接受手术治疗，但手术后因佩戴塑料圆锥体以防止舔伤口而感到不安和不适。主人意识到现在轮到自己照顾Becky了，像Becky当初保护自己一样，主人决心好好照顾Becky。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“然后，我和她一起躺在地板上，帮助她度过了第一个艰难的夜晚。”可知，第一段可描写作者抱着Becky，让她逐渐平静，想起了曾经，等待着紧闭锥体被解除的那天的到来。
②由第二段首句内容“最终，鲍勃带她去拆线的那一天到了。”可知，第二段可描写她从诊所出来，重新焕发了活力，作者从那时起也更加关爱Becky，更加珍惜每一刻，体现出作者与自己忠实的朋友Becky之间的不屈不挠的纽带。
2.续写线索：艰难的夜晚——平息焦虑——感激——等待——拆线——焕发活力——激动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①抱着：Holding/Grasping/Clutching/Gripping
②安慰：soothing/comforting/calming/reassuring
③舔伤口：licking the sutures/sucking the wounds/nursing the cuts
情绪类
①焦虑：anxious/worried/nervous/agitated
②感激：gratitude/appreciation/thankfulness
[高分句型1]. Holding her tenderly, my soothing whispers and small treats, given one by one, gradually calmed her anxious spirit, distracting her from the cone’s oppressive discomfort. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. As she nestled with her head on my lap, her gratitude was palpable, mirroring the unwavering support she had once bestowed during my own time of need. (运用了As引导的时间状语从句)
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Staring at the automobile, I got an idea. I remembered Papa had always kept a flashlight in the glove compartment for emergencies. My hands fumbled through the glove compartment, pushing aside papers and old maps until my fingers closed around the cold metal of the flashlight. I quickly turned it on and off, praying the beam would cut through the darkness and catch Papa’s attention. With each flash, I shouted his name, hoping against hope that he could see or hear me. Then, through the chaos, I saw a faint figure moving towards the car. It was Papa! I kept the flashlight flashing in his direction until he reached the automobile. He opened the door and fell into the seat, panting heavily and covered in dirt.
Papa nodded, “Good. We’ll wait out the storm here.” His voice was reassuring, even though his face was etched with worry. We sat in the automobile, listening to the wind rage outside, knowing the thick metal of the car would keep us safe. “I’m proud of you, Iris,” Papa said, his hand resting on my shoulder. “You kept your head and got us through this.” Finally, when the storm passed, we emerged from the car, our home and fields dusted but standing firm, ready to start anew.
【写作分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者一家生活在干旱的环境中每天都在灰尘中，在一个没有灰尘的一天，突然间的风暴使得作者一家措手不及，作者担心父亲，于是用自己的方式为父亲指路的故事。
【要点解析】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“盯着汽车，我有了一个主意。”可知，第一段可描写作者想到了父亲的手电筒，用手电筒的闪烁给父亲作信号，最后父亲找到了汽车。
②由第二段首句内容“爸爸点点头，“好。我们会在这里等待风暴的到来。””可知，第二段可描写作者一家在汽车里等待风暴的结束，作者被父亲表扬，最终风暴结束。
2.续写线索：主意——手电筒——闪烁——模糊的身影——等待风暴——表扬——重新开始
3.词汇激活
行为类
①摸索：fumbled/groped/searched/rummaged
②推开：pushed aside/set aside/moved aside/cleared away
③喊叫：shouted/yelled/screamed/called out
情绪类
①令人放心的：reassuring/comforting/soothing/consoling
②充满担忧：etched with worry/marked with anxiety/burdened with concern/lined with fear
[高分句型1]. We sat in the automobile, listening to the wind rage outside, knowing the thick metal of the car would keep us safe. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]. Finally, when the storm passed, we emerged from the car, our home and fields dusted but standing firm, ready to start anew. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)(共12张PPT)
读后续写素材(结尾方法)
【素材1】We exchanged smiles, bathed in the soft room light.After dinner, I pressed the dandelion between two sheets of paper in a dictionary and kept it as a reminder—every flower gives pleasure in its own way.For this, I am forever grateful, because smiles on mother’s face and her kind act foster a man like me now!
我们互相微笑,沐浴在柔和的室内灯光下。晚饭后,我把蒲公英夹在字典里的两张纸之间,保存起来,提醒自己——每一朵花都以自己的方式给人以快乐。为此,我永远感激,因为母亲脸上的微笑和她的善良养育了现在的我!
【素材2】Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life.You may think what you did is just a small deed,but it may mean a lot.Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to be nurtured with love and care.
在你生命中的每一天,都要爱护和关心你所爱的人。你可能认为你所做的只是一件小事,但它可能意味着很多。有些关系可以维持得更久,但它们仍然需要用爱和关怀来滋养。
【素材3】Sometimes we feel that we could progress quickly and reach the newer heights in our life if we were not tied up with our family.However,we fail to realize that our family and our loved ones help us survive the tough time in our lives and encourage us to reach higher heights in our life.They are not holding us,but are supporting us.Never let go of our loved ones.有时我们觉得,如果没有家庭的羁绊,我们可以进步得很快,达到生活中新的高度。然而,我们没有意识到我们的家人和我们所爱的人帮助我们渡过了生活中的艰难时期,鼓励我们在生活中达到更高的高度。他们不是在束缚我们,而是在支持我们。永远不要放弃我们所爱的人。
【素材4】 It dawned on them that what the lady had done was not a deal, but a favor.When they took a bite of the cookies, they exchanged a knowing smile.They had not only tasted the sweetness of the fruit, but also the kindness of a warm heart under a cold face.
他们明白了,那位女士所做的不是交易,而是帮忙。他们咬了一口饼干,会心一笑。他们不仅尝到了果实的甜蜜,还体会到了冷面下一颗温暖善良的心。
【素材5】We merrily danced to the joyful music, singing, laughing and wishing each other good luck.The old flower woman also joined us, unable to conceal her excitement and gratitude.The spirit of Christmas came back to us again.It brought all of us together in this small restaurant on a foreign land.The American sailor, through his kindness and generosity, brightened up our day.
我们随着欢快的音乐欢快地跳舞,又唱又笑,互祝好运。卖花的老妇人也加入了我们,无法掩饰她的兴奋和感激之情。圣诞节的气氛又回来了。它把我们所有人聚集在这个异国他乡的小餐馆里。那位美国水手的善良和慷慨使我们这一天充满了欢乐。
【素材6】“How did the lady know we were short of money and desperately in need of help ” She couldn’t help thinking.With the baby due next month, life would be more difficult.She knew how hard her husband was trying to support the family.She felt so blessed that there was kindness in the world.As she lay sleeping next to her husband, she whispered softly, “We will get through this.Good night, Bryan.”
“那位女士怎么知道我们缺钱,急需帮助 ”她忍不住想。孩子下个月就要出生了,生活将更加困难。她知道她的丈夫是多么努力地想要养家。她感到很幸运,因为世界上有善良。当她躺在丈夫身边睡觉时,她轻声说:“我们会挺过去的。晚安,布莱恩。”
【素材7】Face lighting up with joy, they stroked the record and kept thanking me again and again, saying it was the best gift for them ever.However, I thought we both had our best presents.For them, a record to cheer their daughter up, and for me, the sweet taste of giving.
他们高兴得脸上放光,抚摸着唱片,不停地感谢我,说这是给他们最好的礼物。不过,我觉得我们都收到了最好的礼物。对他们来说,一个唱片可以让他们的女儿振作起来,对我来说,是给予的甜蜜滋味。
【素材8】At the same time, Trucker was a great inspiration to him.It was the little boy’s desire and love for firefighters that had a great influence on him.Jim was no longer drown in the sadness of losing his teammate.It also helped him strengthen his resolve as a firefighter to serve the community.What a wonderful thing!
与此同时,卡车司机对他来说是一个很大的鼓舞。这个小男孩对消防员的渴望和热爱对他产生了很大的影响。吉姆不再沉浸在失去队友的悲伤中。这也帮助他坚定了作为一名消防员为社区服务的决心。多么美妙的事情啊!
【素材9】The people in the city, especially the teachers and the students in Amy’s school, realized the pain she had suffered, and they felt sorry for her.On Christmas Day, many people came, including the tall boy in the fifth grade, filled with holiday greetings and words of encouragement.Amy did get her wish of not being teased, not only on Christmas Day, but also every day!
城里的人,尤其是艾米学校的老师和学生,意识到她所遭受的痛苦,他们为她感到难过。圣诞节那天,很多人都来了,包括五年级的那个高个子男孩,他们带来了节日的问候和鼓励的话。艾米实现了她的愿望,不被取笑,不仅是在圣诞节,而且是每天!
【素材10】 I watched with tears all over my cheeks.Maiga then smiled at me and said eagerly, “You will miss me!” I nodded, trying to stop my sobs.“I’ll definitely miss you!” he shouted.I wanted to take a photo of his smile, but no film could have captured the happiness I saw on his face.
我泪流满面地看着。麦加接着对我笑了笑,急切地说:“你会想我的!”我点了点头,试图止住自己的抽泣。“我一定会想你的!”他喊道。我想拍下他的笑容,但没有任何镜头能捕捉到我在他脸上看到的幸福。
【素材11】 She expressed her sincere apology and great gratitude.Hearing this, her mother smiled, patting her back gently.With a bright light streaming through the window, they hugged together and were too thrilled to say anything.Never before had they been so close to each other, warmth filling each one’s heart.她表达了真诚的歉意和感激之情。听了她的话,她的妈妈笑了,轻轻地拍了拍她的背。明亮的灯光透过窗户照进来,她们拥抱在一起,激动得说不出话来。她们从来没有如此亲近过,温暖充满了每个人的心。
