Unit 4 Don't eat in class
单元话题
假如你是Zhang Ping,.你的父母给你制定了一些“家规”,包括
6点半起床、不能在外面吃饭、上学日的晚上不能看电视、放学后
必须6点前回到家、晚上要做作业、周末要去学吉他等。
请你给LuCy写一封电子邮件,告诉她你的这些家规并谈谈你的
感受。要求语句通顺,不少于70词。
审题指导
1.开头总述家规,统领全文;
2.用一般现在时,用第一人称:
3.正确使用祈使句,用can,can't,have to,must等谈论具体家规。
写作方法
三步法写规章制度
第一步:开门见山,交代要写的规章制度;
第二步:介绍规章制度的具体内容(可做什么,不可做什么):
》
第三步:总结全文,谈论看法。
写作模板
开门见山,交代要There are too many rules in
写的规章制度
my home.
『三步法」
I have to get up...
写
规章制度
Don't eat outside!
规章制度
的具体内容
I can't...I have to...
I must.…
总结全文,
The rules are...but...
谈论看法
I must follow them.
经典词句
单词
rule,outside,before,terrible,follow
短语
too many,have to,go to school,eat outside,watch TV,get
home,learn the guitar,make rules
1 There are too many rules in my home.
2I have to get up at 6:30 every morning because I have
to go to school at 7:20.
句子
③Don't eat outside.
4I can't watch TV on school nights
5 The rules are terrible but my parents want to make
rules to help me.
6I must follow the rules.
范文赏析
Dear Lucy,
How are you now There are too many rules in my home.I have
to get up at 6:30 every morning because I have to go to school
at 7:20.I eat at home because my mom always says,"Don't eat
outside!"I can't watch TV on school nights.After school,I
have to get home before 6:00.I have to do my homework in
the evening.(共18张PPT)
人教版七下复习课件
单元话题
假如你是Zhang Ping, 你的父母给你制定了一些“家规”, 包括6 点半起床、不能在外面吃饭、上学日的晚上不能看电视、放学后必须6 点前回到家、晚上要做作业、周末要去学吉他等。
请你给Lucy 写一封电子邮件, 告诉她你的这些家规并谈谈你的感受。要求语句通顺, 不少于70 词。
审题指导
1. 开头总述家规,统领全文;
2. 用一般现在时,用第一人称;
3. 正确使用祈使句,用can, can’t, have to, must 等谈论具体家规。
写作方法
第一步:开门见山,交代要写的规章制度;
第二步:介绍规章制度的具体内容(可做什么,不可做什么);
第三步:总结全文,谈论看法。
三步法写规章制度
写作模板
『三步法』 写 规章制度 开门见山,交代要写的规章制度 There are too many rules in my home.
规章制度 的具体内容 I have to get up...
Don’t eat outside!
I can’t... I have to...
I must...
总结全文, 谈论看法 The rules are... but...
I must follow them.
经典词句
单词 rule, outside, before, terrible, follow
短语 too many, have to, go to school, eat outside, watch TV, get home, learn the guitar, make rules
句子 ① There are too many rules in my home.
② I have to get up at 6:30 every morning because I have to go to school at 7:20.
③ Don’t eat outside.
④ I can’t watch TV on school nights.
⑤ The rules are terrible but my parents want to make rules to help me.
⑥ I must follow the rules.
范文赏析
Dear Lucy,
How are you now There are too many rules in my home. I have to get up at 6:30 every morning because I have to go to school at 7:20. I eat at home because my mom always says, “Don’t eat outside!” I can’t watch TV on school nights. After school, I have to get home before 6:00. I have to do my homework in the evening.
范文赏析
Then on weekends, I must go to learn the guitar. The rules are terrible but my parents want to make rules to help me. I must follow them.
Yours,
Zhang Ping
名师点评
本文运用了“三步法”写规章制度,结构严谨,层次清晰,语言流畅。
1. 点明要写的规章制度:...rules in my home;
2. 介绍具体的家规:I have to... I can’t...;
3. 发表自己的看法:The rules are...but...I must...
名师点评
① 用There be 句型表明在“我”家里有很多的规则。
② 用have to 表明在规则的制约下自己“不得不”去做的事。
③ 用转折连词but 表明作者对家规的看法——虽然有些苛刻,但对自己是有帮助的。
写作任务
假设你是周林,你的笔友Sally来信询问你的班规和你对这些班规的看法。请你根据下面的提示给她回复。
提示: 1. What can / must you do?
2. What can’t you do?
3. What is your idea about these rules?
写作方法
第一步:开篇点题
第二步:介绍班规
第三步:表达看法。
You want to know my class rules.Now let me tell you about them.
help us a lot, be good for
can′t do:arrive late for class, eat in the classroom, listen to misic in class, run in the hallways
can/must haveto do:be on time, keep...clean,
listen to music after class, keep quiet
范文赏析
There are many rules in our class. We can’t arrive late for class. We must be on time for every class. We can’t eat in the classroom because we must keep the classroom clean. We have to eat in the school dining hall. We can’t listen to music in class, but we can listen to it after class. We can’t run in the hallways or the classroom. We must keep quiet when the teacher gives us the lesson.
范文赏析
I think most of the rules are good for us, because they can help us a lot.
Yours,
Zhou Lin
写作实践
假如你是唐迪,请给你的笔友Julie回复一封不少于60词的电子邮件,从学习习惯、纪律等方面介绍一下你们学校主要的规章制度。
Dear Julie,
Thanks for your last email. There are a lot of rules in my school. Now let me tell you some of the rules.
范文赏析
There are a lot of rules in my school. Now let me tell you some of the rules.
First, we can’t arrive late for school. So we must get up early on school days. Second, we must listen to the teachers carefully in class. Third, we must be quiet in class. We can’t eat or listen to music in class. What’s more,we must wear school uniforms at school. We can’t fight with classmates.
范文赏析
Some of the rules are not so good, but I think they are useful. So we must follow them.
人教版七下复习课件
日期:2024.5.11
教师:Cici