(共16张PPT)
教师：Cici
今天是周末，你们一家人相聚家中，并且正在进行着不同的活动：爸爸和弟弟在院里种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、你在上网课。
请根据以上提示，写一篇英语短文，对你们的活动进行描述。
要求：1. 词数：70 左右；
2. 语句通顺、内容详实，可适当发挥。
单元话题
1. 注意时态用现在进行时。
2. 注意使用过渡句使文章衔接自然。
3. 注意句式的灵活多样。
4. 正确使用人称——第一人称和第三人称。
审题指导
“4W1H 法”描述事件
写作话题是描述故事或正在发生的事件时，可使用4W1H 法，通过对时间（When）、地点（Where）、人物（Who）、事件或活动（What）和人物的感觉或评价（How）等要素进行叙述。
写作方法
写作模板
“4W1H”法 描述事件 开篇点题 （when） It’s... What are...doing
具体活动 （where, who, what） We are all...
My father is...
Is my brother...
What are my mother and ...
What am I doing I am...
总结全文 （how） How busy we are! We are all having a great time.
经典词句
单词 plant, clean, read, have
短语 plant a tree, clean the room, read a book, take an online class
句子 ① It’s 10 o’clock in the morning.
② What are my family doing
③ Is my brother planting a tree, too
④ Yes, he is helping my father.
⑤ How busy we are!
⑥ We are all having a great time.
It’s 10 o’clock in the morning. What are my family doing
We are all at home. My father is planting a tree. Is my brother planting a tree, too Yes, he is helping my father. What are my mother and my sister doing Oh, my mother is cleaning the room and my sister is reading a book. What am I doing I am taking an online class!
How busy we are! We are all having a great time.
范文赏析
本文运用“4W1H 法”描述事件。结构严谨、语言流畅、要点全面、叙述有条理。
第一：明确了时间“when”（10 o’clock in the morning）。
第二：点明了地点“where”（at home）。
名师点评
第三：介绍了具体人物 “who”和各自的活动“what”（包括了所有人和所有活动）。
第四：表达了感受“how”。
添彩点：①以时间开头，以设问引入话题。②运用现在进行时，按照提示内容逐个描述家人的活动，特殊疑问句和一般疑问句交叉使用，过渡自然。③结尾用感叹句抒发了情感。
名师点评
假如现在是晚上七点钟,你班的美国留学生Jenny在微信上询问你们一家人在干什么,她是否适合在此时拜访。请你根据下表提示给Jenny回复,告诉她你们全家人的活动并欢迎她的到来。
写作任务
家庭成员 我 弟弟 妈妈 爸爸 奶奶
活动 读书 写作业 清洗餐具 喝茶 看电视
要求： 1. 回复内容要包含表格提供的信息,可适当发挥；
2. 不少于60词。
Hi, Jenny. Welcome to my home.
写作任务
家庭成员 我 弟弟 妈妈 爸爸 奶奶
活动 读书 写作业 清洗餐具 喝茶 看电视
写作思路
表达欢迎
再次欢迎
Welcome to my home.
I→ read a storybook.
my brother→ do homework
my mother→wash the dishes
my father→drink tea
my grandma→watch TV
具体描述
I think you can come now...
范文赏析
Hi, Jenny. Welcome to my home. All of my family are at home now. I’m reading an interesting storybook in the study. My brother is doing his homework in the study. He has a lot of homework every day, and he works very hard. My mother is washing the dishes in the kitchen. My father is drinking tea and reading a newspaper in the living room. What about my grandma？ Oh, she is watching TV, sitting on the sofa in the living room. She likes the TV show.
I think you can come now and have a great time.
写作实践
放学后同学们的活动各不相同,请结合下表提示,写一篇短文,描述他们正在进行的活动。
要求： 1.可适当发挥,使文章完整通顺；2.60词左右
Alice 做数学作业
Frank 画画
Peter 在操场上跑步
Lucy and Linda 打扫教室
the other students 在操场上打篮球
范文赏析
Students are doing different kinds of activities after class. Alice is my best friend. She studies very hard. She is doing her math homework now. Frank likes drawing. He is drawing pictures now. Peter is running on the playground. Lucy and Linda are cleaning the classroom. The other students are playing basketball on the playground.
教师：Cici
时间：2024.5.13Unit 6 I'm watching TV.
单元话题
今天是周末，你们一家人相聚家中，并且正在进行着不同的活动：
爸爸和弟弟在院里种树、妈妈在打扫房间、姐姐在看书、你在上网课。
请根据以上提示，写一篇英语短文，对你们的活动进行描述。
要求：1.词数：70左右：
2.语句通顺、内容详实，可适当发挥。
审题指导
1.注意时态用现在进行时。
2.注意使用过渡句使文章衔接自然。
3.注意句式的灵活多样。
4.正确使用人称一一第一人称和第三人称。
写作方法
“4W1H法”描述事件
写作话题是描述故事或正在发生的事件时，可使用4W1H法，通
过对时间(When)、地，点(Where)、人物(Who)、事件或活
动(What)和人物的感觉或评价(How)等要素进行叙述。
写作模板
开篇点题
(when)
It's...What are...doing
We are all...
"4W1H法
具体活动
My father is...
描述事件
(where,
Is my brother...
who,what)
What are my mother and...
What am I doing Iam.…
总结全文
How busy we are!We are all
(how)
having a great time.
经典词句
单词
plant,clean,read,have
短语
plant a tree,clean the room,read a book,take
an online class
1It's 10 o'clock in the morning.
2 What are my family doing
句子
3 Is my brother planting a tree,too
4yes,he is helping my father.
⑤How busy we are!
6 We are all having a great time.
范文赏析
It's 10 o'clock in the morning.What are my family doing
We are all at home.My father is planting a tree.Is my
brother planting a tree,too yes,he is helping my father.What
are my mother and my sister doing Oh,my mother is cleaning
the room and my sister is reading a book.What am I doing I
am taking an online class!
How busy we are!We are all having a great time.
