Unit 9 What does he look like
单元话)题
假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一
篇题目为"My Classmate“的短文。词数不少于80。
提示：
1.他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动：
2.他乐于助人（举一个例子）：
3.对他的评价。
审题指导
1.本文是介绍人物的记叙文：
2.人称以第三人称为主，时态多用一般现在时：
3.要正确使用描述人物外貌特征的形容词和句型，正确使用be动词
与have/has。
写作方法
第一步：交代要描述的人的姓名、身份
“三步法”
第二步：描述其长相、性格、喜好等。
描述人物
第三步：评论人物，表达感情。
写作模板
开篇点题My classmate Li Hua is a lovely boy.
人物信息
He is...He studies...
He does well in...
『三步法」
具体描述
描写人物
..helpful and friendly...
良好品质.offers his help to
others...
总结全文In my opinion.:I should.
经典词句
单词
lovely,tall,strong,helpful,friendly,thankful,
excellent,cute,smart,outgoing
短语
get good grades,do well in,try out,in different ways,
be good at,on one's way,be friendly to,be good with
1 He is always trying out new ideas.
2 He thinks it is good for us to exercise more.
句子③One day,on his way home from school,,he found a
little girl crying at the corner.
④What a kind boy he is!
范文赏析
My Classmate
My classmate Li Hua is a lovely boy.
He is very tall and strong.He is good-looking.He studies
very hard at school all day and he always gets good grades.He
does well in all the subjects.He is always trying out new ideas.
He solves problems in many different ways.Also he is good at
sports.He thinks it is good for us to exercise more.(共16张PPT)
教师：Cici
人教版七下复习课件
假设李华是你的同班同学，请根据以下提示及要求，用英语写一篇题目为“My Classmate”的短文。词数不少于80。
提示：
1. 他个子高，长相英俊，成绩优秀，擅长运动；
2. 他乐于助人(举一个例子)；
3. 对他的评价。
单元话题
审题指导
1. 本文是介绍人物的记叙文；
2. 人称以第三人称为主， 时态多用一般现在时；
3. 要正确使用描述人物外貌特征的形容词和句型，正确使用be 动词与have/has。
第一步：交代要描述的人的姓名、身份。
第二步：描述其长相、性格、喜好等。
第三步：评论人物, 表达感情。
“三步法”
描述人物
写作方法
写作模板
『三步法』 描写人物 开篇点题 My classmate Li Hua is a lovely boy. 具体描述 人物信息 He is…; He studies…;
He does well in...
良好品质 ...helpful and friendly…;
...offers his help to others...
总结全文 In my opinion...; I should...
经典词句
单词 lovely, tall, strong, helpful, friendly, thankful, excellent, cute, smart, outgoing
短语 get good grades, do well in, try out, in different ways, be good at, on one’s way, be friendly to, be good with
句子 ① He is always trying out new ideas.
② He thinks it is good for us to exercise more.
③ One day, on his way home from school, he found a little girl crying at the corner.
④ What a kind boy he is!
范文赏析
My Classmate
My classmate Li Hua is a lovely boy.
He is very tall and strong. He is good-looking. He studies very hard at school all day and he always gets good grades. He does well in all the subjects. He is always trying out new ideas. He solves problems in many different ways. Also he is good at sports. He thinks it is good for us to exercise more.
范文赏析
Li Hua is very helpful and friendly, too. He always offers his help to others. He is polite to everybody. One day, on his way home from school, he found a little girl crying at the corner. He went up to her and asked her why she was crying. He knew the girl got lost. He called the police and helped the girl find her house. The girl’s parents were so thankful and moved. What a kind boy he is!
In my opinion, Li Hua is so excellent. I should learn from him.
名师点评
本文运用了“三步法”描写人物。
① 开篇交代人物信息——同学李华是一个可爱的男孩儿。
② 抓住人物的外貌特征进行描写，并按提示介绍了同学的特长以及乐于助人的良好品质。
③ 结尾评论人物、表达情感。
添彩点：运用了一些高级词汇及句型：offer, in my opinion, be always doing,主语+ think + 从句，what 引导的感叹句等。
写作任务
假设陈芳是你的英语老师,你们班同学都喜欢她。请以“My English teacher”为题写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你的英语老师。
外貌
性格
喜欢她的原因
我的英语老师
写作方法
tall, short; medium height;
brown hair; glasses;
eye, big; mouth, nose, small
friendly, funny，strict,kind
interesting classes; help us
范文赏析
My English teacher
My English teacher is Mrs. Chen. She is about 30 years old. She isn’t tall or short. She’s of medium height and she’s not fat. Her hair is brown. And she wears glasses. She has big eyes. Her mouth and nose are small. She likes wearing beautiful clothes. Now she is in a green T-shirt and a black skirt. She is really funny and she is very friendly to us. Her classes are very interesting, and she often helps us with our study after class. She likes singing and sometimes she teaches us to sing English songs in class.
写作实践
请根据表格中的提示,用英文介绍你的一位笔友,词数：60左右。
姓名 Steve 性别 男
年龄 13 国家 澳大利亚
外貌 个子高,金色卷发,酷
写作实践
请根据表格中的提示,用英文介绍你的一位笔友,词数：60左右。
爱好及原因 1. 喜欢的动物：熊猫、考拉—可爱
2.喜欢的运动：打篮球—令人放松
3.喜欢的食物：中国菜—美味
梦想及原因 当一名演员—有趣、令人兴奋
范文赏析
My pen pal
I have a pen pal from Australia. His name is Steve. He’s a 13-year-old boy. He is tall. He has curly blond hair. He’s very cool. He loves pandas and koalas best, because they are very cute. He likes playing basketball, because it is relaxing. He likes Chinese food very much, because it is delicious. He wants to be an actor, because it is an interesting and exciting job.
教师：Cici
时间：24.5.17
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