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主讲教师：Cici
昨天(6 月3 日) 天气晴朗, 你和你的同班同学们参观了天安门广场(Tian’anmen Square)、故宫博物院(the Palace Museum) 和长城(the Great Wall), 你们拍照留念, 玩得很开心。请根据提示写一篇日记。要求: 格式正确, 语句通顺。词数: 80 左右。
单元话题
1. 首先明确要写一篇日记。写英文日记首先注意日期格式，日期常在正文左上方，天气在正文右上方。
2. 写日记时常用一般过去时。人称以第一人称为主。
3. 要注意交代清楚事情发生的时间、地点、经过及感受。
审题指导
“三步七要素法”用日记描述自己的经历
三步包括:
第一步: 总体概括什么时候(when) 和谁(who) 去了哪儿(where)。
第二步: 细节和具体活动, 包括如何去的(how) 以及天气(weather) 如何, 做了一些什么(what)。
第三步: 总结感受(feelings)。
七要素包括: when; who; where; how; weather; what; feelings
写作方法
写作模板
“三步七 要素法” 写日记 描述自己 的经历 总体概括 Yesterday I went to . . . with. . . 具体描述 天气交通 The weather was. . . and we took. . there.
浏览情况 We visited many places. . .
First, we. . . ; Then we went to. . ; At last, we ate. . .
总结感受 We had great fun in ...
经典词句
单词 vacation, visit, weather, happy, excited, hope, wonderful, take, ride, walk, catch, subway, train, bus, bike, fine, sunny, windy, hot
短语 last Saturday/Sunday afternoon, last spring/summer/. . . , arrive at/get to, with my father/classmates/. . . , take photos, have fun / have a great time, talk about, on time, have breakfast, have lunch, do some shopping, help sb. with
经典词句
句子 ① The weather was great and we took the train there.
② I took many photos.
③ We had fun in Beijing.
June 3rd Sunny
Yesterday I went to Beijing with my classmates. The weather was great and we took the train there. We visited many places in Beijing. First, ① we visited Tian’anmen Square and the Palace Museum. I took many photos.
范文赏析
Then ① we went to the Great Wall. There were many people. At last, ① we ate in a restaurant. The food was delicious, and the people were friendly. We had great fun② in Beijing.
范文赏析
本文运用“三步七要素法”写作，内容全面、结构严谨、叙述有条理。
第一段，总体概括了什么时候和谁去了哪儿。
第二段，介绍了具体的细节和活动。
第三段，总结了自己的感受。
添彩点： ① 用表示顺序的词汇first，then，at last 把一天的活动连接起来， 叙述有条不紊。② have great fun 的使用把作者的感情表达得淋漓尽致。
名师点评
请你根据下面的提示,以“A great school trip”为题写一篇不少于60词的英语短文,介绍上周六七年级一班去泰山(Mount Tai)郊游的情况及感受。
提示： ①活动内容及要求：游览泰山、画画、拍照；自带食物和水；②出发时间：周六早上七点；③集合地点：公共汽车站；④交通方式：公共汽车(3小时)。
写作任务
写作思路
开篇点题
描述活动
一次很棒
的学校旅行
Last Saturday, all teachers and students... visited...
集合时间:7 o'clock in the morning
集合地点:bus station
交通方式:bus
旅途时长:3 hours
活动: climb, paint, take photos
tired，happy
A great school trip
Last Saturday, all the teachers and students of Class One, Grade Seven visited Mount Tai. They met at the bus station at seven o’clock in the morning and then they went to Mount Tai by bus. It took them three hours to get there. They took some water and food with them. They climbed Mount Tai and painted some pictures. They also took many photos. They were tired but happy. They thought it was a great school trip.
范文赏析
假如你是李华,上周三你参加了学校的旅行,请你根据活动海报,用英语写一篇70词左右的日记,
记录你的见闻和感受。
写作实践
Wednesday, March 25th
Today I went on a school trip. We took the bus to
Sunshine Farm. There I saw a lot of farm animals and did many interesting things. In the morning, I rode a horse. It was difficult but really interesting. After that, we helped the farmers feed the chickens. I also took many great photos of farm animals.
范文赏析
In the afternoon, we had fun picking the beautiful flowers near the lake. Later we grew strawberries on the farm and learned about farming. It was sunny. Everyone enjoyed themselves.
What an exciting trip!
范文赏析Unit 11 How was your school trip
单元话题
昨天(6月3日)天气晴朗，你和你的同班同学们参观了天安门广场
(Tian'anmen Square)、故宫博物院(the Palace Museum)和长城(the
Great Wall),你们拍照留念，玩得很开心。请根据提示写一篇日记。要求：
格式正确，语句通顺。词数：80左右。
审题指导
1.首先明确要写一篇日记。写英文日记首先注意日期格式，日期常在正
文左上方，天气在正文右上方。
2.写日记时常用一般过去时。人称以第一人称为主。
3.要注意交代清楚事情发生的时间、地，点、经过及感受。
写作方法
“三步七要素法”用日记描述自己的经历
●三步包括：
①
第一步：总体概括什么时候(when)和谁(who)去了哪儿(where)。
②
第二步：细节和具体活动，包括如何去的(how)以及天气(weather)
如何，做了一些什么(what)。
③
第三步：总结感受(feelings):
●七要素包括：when;who;where;how;weather;what;feelings
写作模板
总体概括
Yesterday I went to...with...
天气交通
The weather was...and
“三步七
we took.there.
要素法”
写日记
具体描述
We visited many places..
猫述自己
浏览情况
First,we...;Then we
的经历
went to.At last,we
ate...
总结感受
We had great fun in...
经典词句
vacation,visit,weather,happy,excited,hope,wonderful,
单词
take,ride,walk,catch,subway,train,bus,bike,fine,
sunny,windy,hot
last Saturday/Sunday afternoon,last
spring/summer/...,arrive at/get to,with my
短语
father/classmates/...,take photos,have fun have a
great time,talk about,on time,have breakfast,have
lunch,do some shopping,help sb.with
1 The weather was great and we took the train there.
句子
②I took many photos.
③We had fun in Beijing.
