(共36张PPT)
Describe a place with distinctive cultural identity
Unit 3 Reading for Writing
By the end of this period, you will be able to:
1.acquire basic information of Chinatown in San Francisco.
2. figure out the structure and language feature of the text.
3. write an introduction to a city/town.
Have you ever seen these movies
Bangkok, Thailand
New York, America
Tokyo, Japan
San Francisco
New York City
Chicago
Honolulu
Los Angeles
Boston
Seattle
Philadelphia
history
Now let's read a passage to know more information about the Chinatown in San Francisco.
tourist
attractions
language
architecture
food
…
What do you want to know about Chinatown
before-reading:
an introduction to a city
Mind-map of items for an introduction to a city / town
location
climate
history
population
ethnic groups
languages
famous figures
legends / stories
famous food / drink
tourist attractions
businesses and industries
other names for the city / town
1. Who are the target readers
Visitors /tourists.
2. What’s the writing purpose
To introduce Chinatown.
3.What type of passage is it
A: A student diary
B. A research paper
C. A travel brochure(旅游册子)
D. A sports magazine
Fast-reading
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
Para 5
Para 6
Brief introduction of the Chinatown in San Francisco.
The history of Chinatown
The introduction of Chinatown’s shops and products
The origin of Chinatown
The importance of Chinatown
The famous food and drinks of Chinatown
Read for main idea
Tip: focus on the first sentence of each paragraph,key words.
What information is included in the introduction Tick the items that are mentioned.
___ location ___ climate ___ history
___ population ___ ethnic groups ___ languages
___ famous figures ___ legends/ stories ___ famous food/drink
___ tourist attractions ___ businesses and industries ___ other names for the city/town
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3
4
5
6
Step2: Read for details
Read the introduction to the Chinatown and find out the famous tour sites in it.
lengendary Dragon Gate 龙门
Tin How Temple 天后古庙
Portsmouth Square 花园角广场
Bank of Canton 广东银行
stores (souvenirs,Chinese herbal medicine,Chinese tea)
Tips: mark the paragraphs,
which helps you to understand the text better and get your answer more clearly and efficiently
Read for structure
Introduction
Body
Summary
________ _______________
to Chinatown in San Francisco
_______ _____________ of Chinatown
__________ of Chinatown
General introduction
Detailed information
Importance
Part1(Para.1)
Part2(Para.2-5)
Part3(Para.6)
general
specific
general
Read for structure
The Chinatown in San Francisco is the biggest in America, and also the oldest. It is a very popular tourist draw that receives more visitors each year than even the Golden Gate Bridge. The climate is mild all year round, meaning it is always a good time to visit.
Para 1:
Location
Features
Climate
General introduction to San Francisco Chinatown
location
climate
history
ethnic groups
languages
tourist attractions
famous figures
businesses and industries
famous food/drink
Read for details
2.underline expressions to describe a place
1.tick the items included
Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period. What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned into a center for Chinese culture. The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently. This allows visitors to experience a real taste of China.
Para 2:
Detailed information of San Francisco Chinatown
History
People
Language
Introduction
Body
Summary
history, ethnic groups, language
attractions,
famous figures
stores and goods
food
location, features, climate
unique culture
short introduction to the San Francisco Chinatown
what you can find and do in the San Francisco Chinatown
importance of Chinatown
Analysing
Para 3:
Detailed information of San Francisco Chinatown
Most of Chinatown was destroyed in the 1906 earthquake, but the city and residents rebuilt it, taking care to include lots of Chinese architecture. Traditionally, visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China. Other famous sites include the Tin How Temple and Bank of Canton, to name but a few. Visitors can also spend hours just exploring the interesting sights, smells, and sounds of China. Portsmouth Square is also a key site, being the center of Chinatown. It has a long and famous history, with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing there. These days, the square is a great place to see traditional Chinese culture in real life, such as games of Chinese chess, and people practicing tai chi.
Tourist attractions:
What features the tourist attraction
What can visitors do there
…, which was built using…
Visitors can also spend hours exploring…
…is also a key site, with … doing …
…is a great place to see, such as…
…is a place…, where visitors can…
location; climate
An introduction to the Chinatown in San Francisco
Body
Summary
history; ethnic groups;
language;famous figures;
tourist attractions;
famous food
importance
Structure
Items / Information
Brief Introduction
Outline of an introduction to the Chinatown in San Francisco
location; size/area; population
An introduction
P2:Body
P3:Conclusion
history;
climate;
famous food / drink;
tourist attractions;
importance / influence
Structure
items / information
P1:Introduction
Summary: the structure items /information
1.Why do many tourists and San Franciscans like the food most in the Chinatown
For example,because there is Chinese food in the Chinatown which can suit everyone’s taste.
2.Why can visitors experience a real taste of China in the Chinatown
For example,because visitors can enjoy many things with Chinese characteristics,such as famous buildings,games of Chinese chess and tai chi.Besides,visitors can find and buy Chinese goods,clothing,tea and traditional Chinese herbal medicine,let alone traditional Chinese food.
3.Read the passage carefully and find the sentence(s) to describe the best time to visit the Chinatown.
The climate is mild all year round,meaning it is always a good time to visit.
4.Read the passage carefully and find the sentence(s) to describe the importance of the Chinatowns in the American culture.
They allow visitors who have never been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand.
1. Historically, Chinese immigrants settled in the area during the railroad construction and gold rush period.
历史上, 在修筑铁路和淘金热时期, 中国移民就在这里定居。
settle v. to make a place your permanent home 定居
e.g. She settled in Vienna after her father's death.
v. to decide or arrange sth. finally 决定, 确定, 安排好
e.g. He had to settle his affairs in Paris before he could return home.
2. The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently.
“代词+of+关系代词” 引导非限制性定语从句
对ethnic Chinese进行补充说明
many of whom 是“代词+of+关系代词” 结构,引导非限制性定语从句,此类结构常见的有: some/several/ a few/ a little/many/most + of +which/whom等形式。
e.g. China has a lot of islands, one of which is Hainan Island.
如今唐人街的绝大多数居民依旧是华人,他们中很多人英语说得并不流利。
It has a long and famous history, with the author Robert Louis Stevenson having spent much time writing there.
广场历史悠久,声名远扬,作家罗伯特·路易斯·史蒂文森曾长居于此进行创作。
难句分析
句式点拨:划线部分是 “with +名词+现在分词完成式” 构成的with复合 结构,作状语。分词的完成式表示分词的动作发生在主句动作之前。
with复合结构是由“with +名词/代词+分词/形容词/不定式/介词短语/副词” 构成,常作伴随、方式、原因、条件状语。
It’s bad manners to speak with one’s mouth full.
With more and more tree cut down, some animals are facing the danger of dying out.
They sit in small circles in the square, with their babies on theri backs.
With the Spring Festival coming near, people will hold all varieties of activities.
本单元的写作任务是介绍地点。写此类文章需要注意以下几点:
1.地点介绍类或旅游景点类的作文属于说明文, 写作内容通常包括地理位置、面积、人口、气候特征、历史、特产等。也可适当融入人文风貌, 简单介绍该地区的民间风俗及人们的生活方式等, 但要详略得当, 不可笼统。
2.一般包括三段:
part 1: 总体介绍,引出主题;
part 2:具体介绍此地的特色,如著名的建筑、风景名胜、特色小吃等;
part 3:结尾。
3.表达方式: 选用不同的句式,表达方式多样化:从句、非谓语、with 结构等。
Writing guidance
Xinyi is on the way to a civilized city.You are the ambassodor(大使) of Xinyi,making a speech to introduce it.
位置 广东省西南部
面积 3000多 平方千米
历史 历史悠久,2 000多年
人口 100多万
别称 玉都(Jade City)
气候 终年温和,宜居
人文 著名景点如石根山(Sekgen Mount)、莲花湖庄园(Lotus Lake Manor)、窦州古城(Douzhou ancient city)等吸引外来游客;特色美食如三华李(Samhua plum)、捞粉(Steamed Rice Noodles)等。
1.位于……
2.……的历史
3.……的面积
4.旅游景点
5. 全年
6.气候温和
7.平方千米
be located in...
Located in..., ...
have/with a history of
cover/with an area of...
all year round
mild climate
Writing
13ms
tourist attractions/sites
square kilometers
Welcome to my hometown
Hometown
Location
Area
People
Food
Tourist Attractions
...
be located in/ lie in…
at the foot of.../ be surrounded by...
cover an area of…
in the east/west/ south/ north of...…
is...in size
the most largest...
The majority of residents are…, who …
The famous sites ...
Visitors can also …
…is also a key site…
...is a great place to see,
... where visitors can…
...be home to...
...the city’s tourist draw
… to suit everyone’s taste.
...have a population of ...
1. How to introduce location
be in/on/at ...
lie in ...
locate in ...
2. How to introduce climate
The climate is mild/gentle/severe/extreme...
It often rains/snows ...
Because of a ... climate,
3. How to introduce population
has a small population of ...
... with a population of ...
The population of our city is ...
Eighty percentage of the population are ...
4. How to introduce history
has a history of ...
Built in xx century
WELCOME TO XINYI
Dear honorable guests/Ladies and gentlemen,
It is a great honor for me to introduce a wonderful city --- Xinyi to you.
Xinyi, also known as the Jade City, is located in the the southwest of Guangdong Province. It is a city with a history of over 2000 years and a population of 1.03 million, covering an area of more than 3000 square kilometers.
Xinyi is a good place to live in with mild climate all the year round. It has many tourist sites like Sekgen Mount, Lotus Lake Manor and Douzhou ancient city, to name but a few, attracting visitors from other places. If you come to Xinyi, you definitely can’t miss the delicious local food, such as Samhua plum and Steamed Rice Noodles. I believe you will be amazed by Xinyi’s beauty and fall in love with it.
Thank you for your attention.
Possible version
Welcome to my hometown
The climate in my hometown is mild all year round, especially in spring, meaning it is a good time to visit.
Dongporou is a traditional Hangbang cuisine, which attract a great many foodies to have a taste.
Welcome to my hometown
West Lake is one of the top ten scenic areas in China, which is famous for the romantic legends and intoxicating scenery, getting listed as a World Cultural Heritage Site by UNESCO in 2011.
With rich ecological resources, simple natural landscape and profound culture, it is known the first and only wetland park in China combining urban life, farming and culture.
adj.醉人的,有毒的
生态资源
adj. 深厚的;意义深远的;严重的;知识渊博的
_________________________________________ , Hangzhou _________________________, whose climate is __________________, meaning it is always a good time to visit.
_______________________________________, the majority of whom are from Zhejiang. There are ________________________________, including the West Lake and Xixi National Wetland Park, to name but a few. Tourists can spend hours exploring the unique beauty of nature and enjoying the fragrant flowers and singing birds.
_________________________________________________. There is traditional Hangbang cuisine to suit most people’s taste.
With so many attractions, no wonder Hangzhou is a city which becomes a popular tourist draw ______________________________________.
Welcome to my hometown----Hangzhou
Located in the north of Zhejiang Province
is regarded as a paradise city
mild all year around
The population of Hangzhou is about 10 million
many attractive scenic spots for visitors
What attracts many tourists most about Hangzhou is its food
But perhaps what many tourists treasure most about Hangzhou is its food.
that receives a great many visitors every year
1. The climate is mild all year round, meaning it is always a good time to visit.
2. What started as a residential area for Chinese immigrants then turned into a centre for Chinese culture.
3. The majority of residents in Chinatown are still ethnic Chinese, many of whom do not speak English fluently.
4. Traditionally, visitors enter Chinatown through the legendary Dragon Gate, which was built using materials donated from China.
5. There is Chinese food to suit everyone’s taste, with traditional dishes from all over China.
重点句子
Chinatowns are an important part of the diverse culture of the USA. They allow visitors who have never been to China to experience traditional Chinese culture first hand.
唐人街是美国多元文化的一个重要组成部分,未曾踏足中国的游客可以在唐人街近距离感受中国传统文化。
who引导的定语从句修饰visitors, who在定语从句中作主语。
(at)first hand 第一手地(的);亲自地(的)
I heard about it at first hand from my neighbour.
first-hand experience /knowledge/ account 亲身体验/直接得来的知识/第一手报道等。
1.Exchange drafts with a partner.
2.Use the checklist to give feedback on your partner’s draft.
Post-writing
The checklist
Is the city / town introduction clear
Is the information specific and are the facts correct
Does the city / town introduction contain all the important information
Is the information arranged in a good order
Does the passage have a proper beginning and conclusion
Are there any grammar, spelling, or punctuation errors
Thank you