Unit 6 Enjoying Cycling Topic 1 Writing Making a Travel Plan课件+嵌入音频(共26张PPT)

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Unit 6 Topic1 Writing
Making a Travel Plan
Where
Who
When
How long
How
Shanghai
My friend
2021.5.1
2 days
By plane
International Labor Day
Make a report
On May 1st(when), I am going to visit Beijing(where) with my friend(who). We will go there by plane(how). We plan/ decide to stay there for two days(how long).
Where
Who
When
How
How long
Task 1
Pre-writing
Example:
taste delicious food
take photos
visit some places of interest
go shopping
What will we do during the trip
We’re going to visit the Great Wall. My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food.
Task 2
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Plan travel activities
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a travel plan
Where
Who
When
How long
How
What
Beijing
My friend and I
2023.5.1
By plane
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2 days
A Travel Plan
On May 1st, my friend and I are going to take a trip to Beijing. It’s a good choice to take a plane there.We will spend two days there.
We’re going to visit the Great Wall. My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
Beijing is very interesting.
What will my trip be like
I hope we’ll have a good time.
Does my plan have a clear structure
On May 1st, my friend and I are going to take a trip to Beijing. It’s a good choice to take a plane there.We will spend two days there.
We’re going to visit the Great Wall. My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
Beijing is very interesting and I hope we’ll have a good time.
body
beginning
ending
when
who
where
how
how long
what
wish
Stage 1 Have a clear structure
My Travel Plan
On May 1st, my friend and I are going to take a trip to Beijing. It’s a good choice to take a plane there.We will spend two days there.
We’re going to visit the Great Wall. My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
Beijing is very interesting and I hope we’ll have a good time.
the future simple tense
the first person
person
人称
tense
时态
A Travel Plan
On May 1st, my friend and I are going to take a trip to Beijing. It’s a good choice to take a plane there.We will spend two days there.
We’re going to visit the Great Wall. My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
Beijing is very interesting and I hope we’ll have a good time.
Stage 2 Better the passage
Make it more logical
（逻辑性的）
Round 1
A: We’re going to visit the Great Wall . My friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum.We plan to go shopping. We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food.
B: On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall. The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum. Then, we plan to go shopping. During the trip, we will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food.
Tip1:Add some linking words（连接词） to make the passage more logical.
on the last day, in the morning/afternoon...
first of all to begin with...
next, after that, in addition...
finally, in the end, last but not least...
Task 1
* on the first day, the next day，
* first,
then,
Make it richer
（充实的）
Round 2
PART 04
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall. The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum .Then, we plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
投资回报
In Wangfujing Shopping Center.
Q1: Where shall we go shopping
Q2: What nice food will we taste in Beijing
Beijing Roast Duck and Sugar-coated haws(糖葫芦).
Task 2
Q3: Why do we plan to visit the two places
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall because it is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum because it is known as a “Chinese treasure house”.Then, we plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
PART 04
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall. The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum. Then, we plan to go shopping .We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food .
投资回报
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall because it is one of the Seven Wonders of the World . The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum because it is known as a “Chinese treasure house”.Then, we plan to go shopping in Wangfujing Shopping Center. We will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food such as Beijing Roast Duck and Sugar-coated haws.
Tip 2: Add _______ to make the passage richer.
details
reasons
examples
...
Make it more advanced
（高级的）
Round 3
PART 04
投资回报
...The next day, first, my friend and I want to go to the Palace Museum because it is known as a “Chinese treasure house”. Then, we decide to go shopping in Wangfujing Shopping Center. During the trip, we will take some beautiful photos and taste local nice food such as Beijing Roast Duck and Sugar-coated haws.
Beijing is very interesting. I think we’ll have a good time.
...The next day, first, my friend and I _____________ going to the Palace Museum because it is known as a “Chinese treasure house”. Then, we ________________ go shopping in Wangfujing Shopping Center. During the trip, we will take some beautiful photos and _____________ local _______ food such as Beijing Roast Duck and Sugar-coated haws.
Beijing is very ________. I think we’ll have a __________ time.
Task 3
delicious
charming
wonderful
look forward to
make a decision to
have a taste of
Use some advanced words to replace the underlined words.
PART 04
投资回报
Beijing is _____ charming ______ I think we’ll have a wonderful time.
Beijing is very charming and I think we’ll have a wonderful time.
Task 4
Can we use advanced sentence structures
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall because it is one of the Seven Wonders of the World .
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall ________ is one of the Seven Wonders of the World .
which
/ that
so that
My Travel Plan
On May 1st, my friend and I are going to take a trip to Beijing. It’s a good choice to take a plane there.We will spend two days there.
On the first day, we’re going to visit the Great Wall which is one of the Seven Wonders of the World .
The next day, first, my friend and I look forward to going to the Palace Museum because it is known as a “Chinese treasure house”. Then, we make a decision to go shopping in Wangfujing Shopping Center. During the trip, we will not only take some beautiful photos and have a taste of local delicious food such as Beijing Roast Duck and Sugar-coated haws.
Beijing is so charming that I think we’ll have a wonderful time.
so that
which
Tip1:
Add some linking words
Tip2:
Add details
Tip3:
advanced structures
Drafting
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It will be a/an ... trip.
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A Travel Plan
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A clear structure
3. choose advanced structure
2. use some linking words
(On the first day, The next day...
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投资回报
Peer-editing
Peer-check list Yes No
1. A clear structure （beginning,body,ending）
2. The right person （the first person）
3. The right tense （the future simple tense）
4. Six elements （where,who,when,how,how long,what）
5. Any linking words （the next day , such as...）
6. Any details
7. Advanced words or stuctures （several clauses, different structures...）
8. Beautiful hand-writing？
Post-writing
A person who loves traveling must like his life.
Love traveling, love our life.
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.
Thanks!