2024年牛津上海版六年级下册期末书面表达练习（含范文）

2024年牛津上海版六年级下册期末书面表达练习
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：
1. 春夏秋冬，四季更替，总能给我们的生活增添许多欣喜！大自然如此美丽，哪些季节抓住了你的心呢？不同的季节有不同的天气、不同的景色，不同的活动。请以“My Favorite Season”为题，写一篇英语短文。
提示：
(1)先描写四季特点，然后选择你那最喜欢的季节进行描写；
(2)阐述你最喜欢的那个季节的原因，如：这个季节的天气和景色特征；
(3)说说你喜欢的季节里的哪些活动，并加以适当拓展。
注意事项：
(1)必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥；70个词左右。
(2)意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
(3)请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。
My favorite season
There are four seasons in a year.
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2.端午节（Dragon Boat Festival)刚刚过去，这个端午节你和父母一起去农场看望了爷爷奶奶，和家人们一起度过了一个美好的假期。请你以"A vacation to remember."为题，根据以下问题提示用英语写一篇短文。
How was the weather？
Where did you go？
What did you do？
How did you feel？
(1)包含所给要点，可适当发挥。
(2)语句通顺，意思连贯，表达清楚，书写规范。
(3)70词左右。
A vacation to remember.
On Dragon Boat Festival I... ___________________
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3.书面表达。
突如其来的新冠疫情(COVID-19 pandemic)阻挡了我们如期回归校园,但我们的成长没有因疫情而停滞。某英语网站正在推选疫情期间的“时代好少年”。假如你是李阳,想推选一位你的同学作为“时代好少年”。
写作要求：
(1)80-100词,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数；
(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点：
(1)介绍你的同学(年龄、外貌、性格……)
(2)疫情期间他所做的事。(学习、锻炼、爱好……)
(3)……。
Today I want to talk about the "Good Youth of The Times" in our school.
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4.假如你叫李华，是学校环保小组的一员，请按表格内容写一封信，呼吁大家行动起来保护环境。
重要性 水和电很宝贵；保护环境很重要。
环保建议 1) 洗脸和刷牙时，不要让水龙头一直开着； 2) 离开时记得关灯； 3) 回收一些废旧的物品，如纸张、瓶子等； 4) 种植树木，使空气清新； 5) 补充1 2点建议。
参考词汇：电(electricity)，水龙头(tap)，回收(recycle)，废旧的(useless)
注意：1) 词数在80词左右，可以适当发挥；2)文中不能透露你自己的个人信息；3) 开头已给出，不计入词数。
Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua, a member of environmental group. ___________________________________
Let's work together. Our environment will be better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.书面表达请根据所给中文提示，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的好朋友林海救火的事迹，词数在 70个左右。
内容要点：1)一天，林海走出校门时，抬头看见一幢新大楼在冒烟，他大声喊，“着火了，着火了！”，与此同时，他拿出手机，拨打了 119;
2) 人们听到喊声，立刻跑出来泼水，阻止火苗燃烧；
3) 五分钟后，消防员赶来把火灭了；
4) 幸运的是(luckily)......
注意事项：1) 短文须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
2) 第4要点须用1-2句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
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6.书面表达
开学以来，学校开展了“守望春天，共同战‘役’”主题征文活动，请根据下面的提示用英语写一篇小短文参加比赛。
三个多月前 (1)学生和家长整天待在家里。 (2)当地的剧场、餐馆、商店停业。 (3)成千上万的医生、护士去武汉帮助病人(patient)。
现 在 (1)很高兴重返校园,校园里能闻到花香，听到鸟欢唱； (2)社区里邻居们友好、乐于助人，志愿者们经常到这儿，......(补充至少两点)
建 议 (1)出门戴口罩；回家勤洗手；晚上开窗睡觉; (2)多锻炼，拥有健康的生活方式。
要求： 1）表达清楚，要点齐全，上下文连贯；
2）词数：100词左右。
Over three months ago, 2019-nCoV(新型冠状肺炎)broke out(爆发) in our country. ________
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Now we are happy to come back to school again. _____________________________________
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We should wear masks when we go out. _____________________________________________
7.假如你叫李华，是一名初中生。你计划寒假要去塞尔维亚旅行。请你根据下列提示给塞尔维亚的笔友写一封信，告诉他你的安排，并就相关问题向他咨询。
(1)将和父母一起去。
(2)计划在那呆十天。
(3)询问冬天塞尔维亚（Serbia）的气候。
(4)请他建议去塞尔维亚（Serbia）哪些地方旅游。
词数：(1)不少于60词左右。
(2)内容可适当添加。
Dear Ben,
How is everything I want to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I'm looking forward to your reply(回复).
Yours,
Li Hua
8.过年燃放爆竹是中国人的传统，但是近年来越来越多的人赞同过年不放爆竹。假如你是Green Club的一员，请你用英语写一封倡议书，介绍燃放爆竹可能带来的危害，并呼吁同学们过年时少放或不放爆竹。注意：
(1)所写内容必须包括上述要点，可适当发挥；
(2)文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
(3)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
(4)词数不少于80个，文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：燃放爆竹 set off firecrackers，气体（可数名词） gas
Dear all,
It’s a Chinese tradition to set off firecrackers at the Spring Festival. However, more and more people have realized that firecrackers are doing more harm than good._____________________________________________
9.假如你是电台主持人，准备播送天气预报，请根据以下要点写一篇80词左右的文稿要点：
①明天大部分城市将是晴天，万里无云。人们可在城市周围进行一次短途旅行。广州温度将达26度，有点热，最好戴上墨镜。
②气温在北方稍低，长春明天将有暴风雨。气温在15度左右。大雨可能会引发多种问题。人们开车应该缓慢小心。小孩应呆在室内而不是出去玩。
Good evening,everyone.Welcome to listen to the weather report.
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Thank you for listening.
10.假设你是李华，今天正逢端午节，你的英国笔友Jack对中国传统文化很感兴趣，写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下内容提示，给他写一封回信。
(1)中国的传统节日之一，已有2000多年的历史；
(2)为了纪念著名诗人屈原；
(3)有赛龙舟（南方）、吃粽子的习俗；
(4)……
要求：
(1)80词左右，书信格式；
(2)内容合理，要点齐全，句子及篇章结构正确、连贯，书写规范。
注意：不得出现学校、姓名等个人信息（除所给身份外）。
11.为响应我市“创建文明城市”的号召，倡导市民绿色出行，并参与“共建绿色城市”活动，请根据以下文字提示，并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇80—100词的短文，开头已给出。
主题 Let's build a green city together
具体做法 (1)骑车、徒步出行 避免交通拥堵，减少空气污染
(2)不乱扔垃圾，不随地吐痰 让城市变得干净舒适
(3)植树造林 美化城市，保护环境
你的建议 联系自己的实际生活提出几条具体的合理建议（至少2条）
参考词汇：吐痰spit；垃圾箱dustbin；交通堵塞traffic jam；环境environment。
As middle school students, it's our duty to help build a green city.
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12.假如你叫李华,是广州某中学的学生。你计划期末考试后去北京旅行。请根据下列提示给你的北京笔友Jenny写一封信,告诉她你的安排并就相关问题向她询问。
要点提示:
(1)考试结束后去北京旅行;
(2)计划在北京停留大约一周;
(3)向她询问北京的风俗习惯;
(4)请她建议去北京哪些地方旅行。
注意:
(1)参考词汇:给……提供……(provide…with…)、风俗习惯(custom);
(2)词数:80词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入词数);
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
妙笔生花
Dear Jenny,
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I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
13.学校学生会向全体同学发出号召：自然界的动物、植物都是人类的朋友。我们经常说要爱护自然，爱护环境。作为学生的我们，该如何做呢？请根据提示写一份80词左右的倡议书。
(1)保护动物，不随便丢弃动物；
(2)不乱丢垃圾，多植树种花，美化环境；
(3)绿色出行，尽可能多使用公共交通工具；
(4)节约能源，比如节约用水等。
参考词汇：environment.环境； save energy 节约能源；public transport 公共交通工具
注意：不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Animals and plants are human's good friends. They are all very important to us. As a student, we can start small to protect the environment.
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14.请以“How to Protect the Water”为题写一篇短文，词数80左右。应包括以下信息点：
(1)水对人类很重要，我们的生活离不开水；
(2)目前水污染严重，可饮用水正在减少；
(3)我们应如何保护水资源？
(1)不要浪费水；(2)循环利用水。
整理成文
How to Protect the Water
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15.每个人都应该有对未来的计划,请根据以下信息,写一篇关于“My future plan”的文章。
要点提示:
(1)我决定大学毕业后成为一名……
(2)何时有此想法；
(3)如何实现未来的计划；
(4)谈谈你对这个计划的看法。
注意:
(1)参考词汇：大学(college)、实现(achieve)、经验(experience)、有意义的(meaningful)、为了(in order to)；
(2)词数：80词左右(文章的标题已给出,不计入总词数)；
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
妙笔生花
My future plan
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答案和解析
1.【答案】My favorite season
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, fall and winter. Spring is warm. Summer is hot. Fall is cool. Winter is cold. Different people like different seasons. For me, I like spring best. The weather is always fine in spring. It is not too cold or too hot. The trees turn green and the flowers come out. It is great to go the countryside to enjoy the fresh air. Spring is also a good time for picnics and school trips. In spring, I usually have picnics with my family or friends in the park. Spring makes me happy. I like spring a lot!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文为一篇说明文，话题为描述自己最喜欢的季节。要点已给出，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
①in spring在春天；；
②flowers come out花开。
【高分句型】
①The trees turn green and the flowers come out.（and连接的并列句）
②It is great to go the countryside to enjoy the fresh air.（it作形式主语，动词不定式作真正主语；动词不定式作目的状语）
【结构布局】
略
2.【答案】A vacation to remember On Dragon Boat Festival I visited my grandparents with my parents. They live on a farm. We went there by car. The weather was fine. When we got there, we saw some birds. They were flying and singing happily. In the morning, we went fishing with my grandfather. It was very interesting. And I also fed chickens with my grandmother. They were very lovely. We had a big lunch at noon. In the afternoon, we picked up many fresh strawberries and then took them back home. I am glad to spend the festival with my family.
What a happy and relaxing vacation!
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示命题作文，要求以"A vacation to remember."为题，讲述和父母一起去农场看望爷爷奶奶，一起过端午节的经历。写作时，首先要明确题目要求和内容要点。确定写作基本时态及人称。本文需用一般过去时态和第一人称来叙述。然后，在保证要点齐全的基础上，需要适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。最后，注意句子间的正确联系，词语的丰富和句型的多样。表达准确，标点正确，词数符合要求。
【亮点短语】
1.on Dragon Boat Festival在端午节；
2.go fishing去钓鱼；
3.pick up采，摘；
4.be glad to do高兴做某事；
【高分句型】
1.When we got there, we saw some birds.（when引导时间状语从句）
2.What a happy and relaxing vacation!（感叹句）
3.【答案】 Today I want to talk about the "Good Youth of The Times" in our school. He is my classsmate, Wang Wei. He is fifteen years old .He looks handsome .He has big eyes. He is clever and helpful .
During the epidemic, he had online classes every day . In order to learn better at home, he made a timetable to help him make full use of time .He always listened to his lessons carefully and took notes. He took exercise every day to keep healthy and strong. He had good habits to keep clean. His hobby is drawing .
In his spare time, he designed the poster as a picture of prevent COVID-19. It tells the students how to keep healthy.
He is a good young man against the epidemic.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇人物介绍为主的写作。文中除了要介绍人物的年龄，外貌，性格等，还要介绍疫情期间所做的事。应该以一般现在时态和一般过去时态为主，使用第三人称来完成。注意把提示内容描写清楚，要点要全，可适当发挥。要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。
【亮点短语】
1.In order to为了；
2.make full use of time充分利用时间；
3.keep healthy 保持健康；
【高分句型】
1.In order to learn better at home, he made a timetable to help him make full use of time .(in order to做目的状语)
2.It tells the students how to keep healthy. (how引导的简单宾语从句)
4.【答案】Dear classmates,
I am Li Hua, a member of environmental group. I believe that we are supposed to protect our environment by saving water and electricity.
First, when we are brushing teeth and washing face, we should always turn off the tap so as to save water. Second, remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classroom. Third, we had better learn to make full use of paper and recycle used plastic water bottles. Besides, we can plant some trees to make our air much clearer. Finally, I think we should often reuse water. And we can also use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when shopping.
Let's work together. Our environment will be better and better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本文要点已给出，要求考生写一封倡议信呼吁大家保护环境。写作时，应注意不要对要点做生硬的翻译，可以做适当的内容拓展，同时选择准确的词汇和地道的句式，保证文章的连贯性。本文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
【亮点短语】
1. be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
2. make full use of充分利用
3. recycle used plastic water bottles回收废旧塑料水瓶
4. instead of而非，而不是
【高分句式】
1. I believe that we are supposed to protect our environment by saving water and electricity.（that引导的宾语从句）
2. First, when we are brushing teeth and washing face, we should always turn off the tap so as to save water.（when引导的时间状语从句；so as to引导的目的状语）
5.【答案】 One day, Lin Hai went out of the school gate. He looked up and saw lots of smoke coming from a new building. Lin shouted, "Fire, Fire!" At the same time he took out his mobile phone and called 119. People heard his shouts and got out quickly. They poured water over the fire to stop the fire from burning. Five minutes later, Firemen came and put it out. Luckily, Nobody was hurt.
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一篇提纲作文，介绍你的好朋友林海救火的事迹，在写作过程中要注意人称和时态的正确运用，根据内容要求可知，文章以一般过去时和第三人称描述单数为主，写作中注意谓语动词的过去式形式，注意所给参考词汇的运用，同时注意上下文的衔接，要做到语句通顺，语法正确，单词拼写无误，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。
【亮点词汇】
1.see sb. doing sth.看见某人正在做某事
2.at the same time同时
3.stop sb. from doing阻止某人做某事
【高分句型】
1.At the same time he took out his mobile phone and called 119.（and引导的并列句）
2.They poured water over the fire to stop the fire from burning.（动词不定式表示目的）
6.【答案】 Over three months ago, 2019-nCoV(新型冠状肺炎) broke out(爆发) in our country. The students and parents stayed at home all day. Local theatres, restaurants and shops were closed. Thousands of doctors and nurses went to Wuhan to help the patients.
Now we are happy to come back to school again. In school, we can smell fresh flowers and hear the birds sing. In the community, neighbours are kind and helpful. Volunteers often come here. They share their different skills and help people with all kinds of problems. Some college students help us with our homework. Some help people fix things like broken bikes. Some help check the computers.
We should wear masks when we go out. We should wash our hands frequently. We should sleep with the windows open. We should exercise more and have a healthy lifestyle.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要求根据表格的提示写一篇短文。内容主要是新冠肺炎期间，三个多月前发生的事情以及现在发生的事情，所以时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主。要求内容表达清楚，要点齐全，上下文连贯。
【亮点词汇】
1.stay at home待在家；
2.help sb. with sth.帮助某人做某事；
3.all kinds of各种各样的。
【高分句型】
1.Thousands of doctors and nurses went to Wuhan to help the patients.（不定式作目的状语）
2.We should exercise more and have a healthy lifestyle.（含有比较级more的句型）
7.【答案】Dear Ben,
How is everything I want to travel to Serbia with my parents during the winter holiday. We'd like to be away for about ten days, but I don't know about Serbia. I hope that you can tell me something about the weather there at that time. I would also like to travel to some exciting places in Serbia, so please introduce some interesting places to me and tell me what I should take there.
I'm looking forward to your reply(回复).
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要点已给出，要求考生咨询塞尔维亚当地的一些情况。写作时，应注意不要对要点做生硬的翻译，可以做适当的内容拓展，同时选择准确的词汇和地道的句式，保证文章的连贯性。本文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
8.【答案】 Dear all,
It's a Chinese tradition to set off firecrackers at the Spring Festival. However, more and more people have realized that firecrackers are doing more harm than good.
Setting off firecrackers harms the environment. First of all, it gives off many harmful gases which will pollute the air. On the Eve of the Spring Festival, the noise of firecrackers goes on all night and makes it impossible for people to fall asleep. The next morning the ground is covered with rubbish from firecrackers. Besides, firecrackers can cause fire if people are not careful enough. Sometimes people may get injured or even killed.
Let's set off fewer or even no firecrackers. In this way, we will not only enjoy the festival more, but also make a difference to our environment.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇关于我们就春节时是否燃烧爆竹写一封倡议书的写作。写作时用一般现在时，使用合适的连词使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，写全要点，可适当增加细节，注意字数要求。文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。
【亮点短语】
1.set off燃放；
2.first of all首先；
3.fall asleep睡着；
4.in this way以这种方式；
5.not only...but also...不仅......而且......。
【高分句型】
1.However, more and more people have realized that firecrackers are doing more harm than good.（that引导宾语从句）
2.Besides, firecrackers can cause fire if people are not careful enough.（if引导条件状语从句）
9.【答案】 Good evening, everyone! Welcome to listen to the weather report!
Most cities in the south will be sunny tomorrow. There will not be a cloud in the sky. People can have a short trip around the city. The temperature will be 26 degrees in Guangzhou. It's a bit hot and you'd better wear sunglasses. The temperature will be lower in the north. There will be storms in Changchun tomorrow with the temperature around 15 degrees. The heavy rain may cause many problems. People should drive slowly and carefully. It's better for children to stay inside instead of going out.
Thank you for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文假如你是电台主持人，准备播送天气预报，请根据要点写一篇80词左右的文稿。因为是天气预报，所以在写作时，时态以一般将来时为主，描述天气时可用it来指代。注意保持前后句的衔接的连贯性，并要避免语法错误和单词拼写错误。
【亮点词汇】
1.a bit有点；
2.heavy rain大雨；
3.instead of代替，而不是
【高分句型】
1.There will be storms in Changchun tomorrow with the temperature around 15 degrees.（there be句型的一般将来时形式）
2.It's better for children to stay inside instead of going out.（含有it作形式主语的句型）
10.【答案】Dear Jack,
How’s it going I am very glad to tell you about the Dragon Boat Festival. It is one of the Chinese traditional festivals with more than two thousand years of history. People celebrate the festival to honor the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat Zongzi and other delicious food. In southern parts of China, people often have Dragon Boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. What’s more, we also have a 3-day holiday during the festival. So we can have short journey to relax ourselves as soon as it begins. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】本文是一封书信，在书写时注意书信的格式和语言表达方式。
写作要求：1.首先说明你要介绍的是什么节日；2.节日的由来；3.在这个节日里人们的风俗习惯。因为是你向朋友介绍节日的一些情况，时态应以一般现在时为主；人称应以第一人称和第三人称为主。注意把提示内容描写清楚，要点要全，可适当发挥。要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。同时，为了提高文章档次，在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。
【亮点短语】
1.be glad to do sth. 高兴做某事；
2.one of...... 之一；
3.get together 团聚。
【高分句型】
1.So we can have short journey to relax ourselves as soon as it begins. （as soon as引导的时间状语从句）
2.How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is and I like it very much.（and引导的并列句）
11.【答案】 As middle school students, it's our duty to help build a green city. We can avoid the traffic jams and reduce the air pollution by riding bikes or walking. We mustn't throw rubbish or spit anywhere. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life. And we'd better plant more trees to protect the environment and make our city beautiful.
In my daily life, I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go. I can also save energy by turning off lights when leaving my room.
In a word, everyone can play a part in building our city.
【解析】【思路点拨】
文章的内容是有关日常生活的，故时态用一般现在时，人称是第一人称。写作时要求覆盖所有提示的内容要点，所给的词组在文章中也要用到。要求书写时要准确使用丰富的词汇和语言结构，注意使用一些表示顺序的过渡词，使文章结构紧凑，过渡自然。行文中可以使用不同的句式使文章读起来更丰富，也可使用一些高级句式，如复合句来增加文章亮点。写完后要注意检查单词拼写和标点。
【高分句型】
1. In this way, we can keep our city clean and tidy so that we can live a comfortable life.（so that引导目的状语从句）
2. I can pick up rubbish and put it into the dustbin wherever I go.（wherever引导让步状语从句）
3. I can also save energy by turning off lights when leaving my room.（when引导时间状语从句）
12.【答案】Dear Jenny,
How is everything going I am going to travel to Beijing with my parents after finishing the final exams. We’d like to stay there for about a week. But I don’t know much about Beijing. I hope you can provide me with some information about the custom of Beijing. I would like to travel to some places of interest in Beijing. We would like to do lots of outdoor activities, I especially enjoy going hiking and going camping. Please tell me some exciting places.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，也是一篇应用文作文。根据所给的提示内容和要求可知，本文以一般现在时和第一人称单数描述为主。写作中注意所给词汇的应用和上下文的连接，做到语句连顺，符合逻辑习惯。
【亮点词汇】
1.provide sb. with sth. 提供给某人某物
2.places of interest 名胜
3.look forward to 期待着
【高分句型】
1.I am going to travel to Beijing with my parents after finishing the final exams.（after引导的时间状语从句）
2. I hope you can provide me with some information about the custom of Beijing.（宾语从句）
13.【答案】 Animals and plants are human's good friends. They are all very important to us. As a student, we can start small to protect the environment.
First, we should take care of and protect animals and we shouldn't throw away our pet animals. Second, to make our environment more beautiful, we can plant more trees and flowers. What's more, it is important for us to travel in green ways. We'd better not travel by car if it is not necessary. We can choose the public transport or even go on foot or ride a bike if we don't go far away. Riding more can not only help reduce air pollution but also make us healthy. Last but not least, we should try to save as much energy as possible, like saving water as well as electricity.
If all of us try our best to protect our environment, we can live in a better world. Let's work together.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇倡议书，倡议爱护环境，爱护自然，写作时主要使用第一人称和一般现在时。注意把提示内容描写清楚，要点要全，可适当发挥。要做到层次清晰，表达准确、流畅。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥
【亮点短语】
1.take care of照顾，照料；
2.throw away扔掉；
3.not only...but also...不仅......而且......；
4.try one's best尽力而为;
5.as well as还有，也
【高分句型】
1.Second, to make our environment more beautiful, we can plant more trees and flowers.（动词不定式做目的状语）
2.What's more, it is important for us to travel in green ways. （固定句型it+be+形容词+to do sth.，it做形式主语，不定式是真正的主语）
3.We'd better not travel by car if it is not necessary.（if引导条件状语从句）
4.We can choose the public transport or even go on foot or ride a bike if we don't go far away.（if引导条件状语从句）
5. If all of us try our best to protect our environment, we can live in a better world. （If引导条件状语从句）
14.【答案】 How to Protect the Water
As we all know, water is very important in our daily life. We drink water every day, we not only use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. People can’t live without water.
But some people don’t seem to care about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution is getting more and more serious. There is less and less drinkable water on Earth.
So we should do something to protect water. First, don’t leave the tap running when we don’t need to use water. If we see the dripping tap, we ought to fix the tap as soon as possible. Second, Try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. Third, we can have a shower instead of a bath because having a bath can waste a lot of water.
【解析】【思路点拨】写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1、认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想。2、依据关键词。草拟提纲，梳理文章脉络。3、准确定位人称和时态，第一人称和一般现在时为主。注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。4、最后还要检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点短语】
1.As we all know众所周知
2.less and less越来越少
【高分句型】
1.we not only use water to wash things and cook food, we also use water to make machines. 我们不仅用水洗碗做饭，还用水做机器。（not only...also不但......而且，属于关联连词，连接两个相同的句子成分。）
2.If we see the dripping tap, we ought to fix the tap as soon as possible. 如果我们看到滴水的水龙头，我们应该尽快把水龙头修好。（if引导的条件状语从句）
15.【答案】My future plan
I decide to be a middle school teacher after college. When I was a little boy, I wanted to be a teacher. In order to achieve my dream, I will study hard at college and I will learn teaching experience from some excellent teachers.
As we know, our country needs many teachers. However, most young people don't hope to be teachers. If our country doesn't have enough teachers, our country can't be strong and rich. I am ready to be a teacher and try my best to do this meaningful job.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇命题作文，也是一篇提示作文，以“My future plan”为题，写一篇关于未来的计划，根据提示，可知写作内容包括：(1)我决定大学毕业后成为一名……；(2)何时有此想法；(3)如何实现未来的计划；(4)谈谈你对这个计划的看法。在写作过程中，所有提示要点不可遗漏，可适当发挥，本文需用第一人称，一般将来时写作，要求句子通顺，符合逻辑，卷面整洁，无拼写错误，词数80词左右（文章的标题已给出,不计入总词数）；(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
【亮点词汇】
1.in order to achieve my dream为了实现我的梦想；
2.As we know正如我们知道的；
3.try my best尽我最大的努力
【高分句型】
1.When I was a little boy, I wanted to be a teacher.当我是小孩子时，我想成为一名老师。（when引导的时间状语从句）
2.If our country doesn't have enough teachers, our country can't be strong and rich.如果我们的国家没有足够的老师，我们的国家不可能富强。（if引导的条件状语从句）
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