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Writing Workshop
A Learning Reflection
Unit 9 Learning
Review: a reflective journal
How to be an effective learner
Scientific causes of effective learning
Apply effective learning method
topic talk: learning
lesson 1: active learning
lesson 2: language learning tips
lesson 3: the secrets of our memory
Review: a reflective journal
How to be an effective learner
Scientific causes of effective learning
learning
the secrets of our memory
active learning
language learning tips
subjects
things to do
goals
5 proposals
aspects
tips
4 proposals
how to improve our memory
learning
What impress you most in this unit, why
Read for topic: What has the writer reflect on
My Reflection
On
“The Secrets of Your Memory”
Read for structure: Choose the main idea of each para.
What I can do to improve my memory
Reflections on what I’ve learnt from the lesson
Reflections on my past knowledge about memory
past knowledge
present understanding
future
plans
Read for content: list present understanding & future plans
present understanding
future
plans
the four questions
proposals
Read for language: underline expressions describing present understanding and future plans.
Read for language: underline expressions describing present understanding and future plans.
Read for language: functions
addition
linkers
Read for language: functions
to explain
to stress
to give an example
Summary: structure
para 1: past knowledge
para 2: present understanding (content)
para 3: future plans (proposals)
Summary: language
to describe present understanding:
Now I undersdand...
I also learnt...
For me, it’s good to know...
It’s amazing to know...
to describe future plans:
I think I will...
I’ll try/ attempt/ struggle/ manage/ try my best to...
I must...
It is important/ significant for me to do...
Summary: language
addition linkers:
also
in addition
moreover
what’s more
besides
not only...but also...
to explain:
that is to say
this means
to stress:
especially
to give examples:
for example
for instance
such as
like
to... I’d like to take...as an example
Writing: practice-write down your present understanding and future plans of lesson 3 (3 sentences)
to describe present understanding:
Now I undersdand...
I also learnt...
For me, it’s good to know...
It’s amazing to know...
to describe future plans:
I think I will...
I’ll try/ attempt/ struggle/ manage/ try my best to...
I must...
It is important/ significant for me to do...
Writing
4 points+ 1 explanation
4 points+ 1 explanation
Editing
Does the writer tell the reader which topic he/she is reflecting on
Does the writer explain the changes he/she has made after acquiring the knowledge
Does the writer tell his/her plans on how to use the knowledge or skills
Does the writer organize the piece of writing well by using addition linkers
◆ Mark any spelling, punctuation or grammar errors.
◆ Mark any unclear expressions. Give suggestions if you can.
◆ Underline the expressions you like.
Comments:__________________________________________
连接词
一个独立的句子反映一层相对独立的意思,由这些独立的句子组成的语篇虽然也能表达一定的含义。学会使用连接词是增加句子连贯的最主要的一个手段。
Warm up
★ 表示附加信息的连接词
这类连接词有:and, also, again, too, as well as, in addition(另外,此外), besides, moreover (而且,此外), not only ... but also ..., furthermore (而且,此外), then等。
★ 表示转折和让步意义的连接词
这类连接词有:but, or, yet, on the contrary (相反), otherwise, however, even so, instead, while, although等。
★ 表示因果和目的的连接词
常用的表示因果和目的的连接词有:for, because, consequently (所以,因此), therefore, for this purpose, as a result等。
★ 表示例证和进一步解释的连接词
常见的连接词有:for example, as an example, in fact, for instance, such as, in other words, that is, namely, in general, especially, in particular等。
★ 表示时间和顺序的连接词
常见的连接词有:at the present time, sooner or later, at the same time, to begin with, since, later, when, after, then, before, meanwhile, during, eventually等。
★ 表示空间的连接词
常见的连接词有:here, there, where, beyond (在……较远的一边), inside, nearby, opposite to, to the left / right, in the middle, next to等。
★ 表示概括总结的连接词
常见的连接词有:in short, in conclusion, to sum up, in brief, on the whole等。
As the old saying says, “If one can attain new understanding by reviewing old knowledge, he can qualify as a teacher.”