2023-2024学年六年级英语下学期期末复习之单元满分范文（牛津上海版） （含解析）

单元满分范文20篇
一、书面表达
1．Write at least 50 words on the topic “How to control fire”（以“怎样控制好火”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Suggested points:
1. What do people use fire to do
2. Is fire dangerous Why
3. What should we do when a fire happens
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【答案】例文
How to control fire
Fire is very important in our daily life. At home, people use fire to cook food. In factories, workers use fire to melt metals to make things. However, fire can be very dangerous. It can burn down buildings even the whole forests. So when a fire happens, we must protect ourselves. We should not use lifts. We should call the firefighters to put out fires. We must be careful with fire in our daily life.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“如何控制火”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。先介绍火在日常生活中的重要性；接着介绍它的危害；最后介绍如何控制火的方法。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
2．一年四季，景色不同，特点各异。在每个季节里，我们心中都有一份对自然的赞美与感悟。大自然如此美丽，哪个季节抓住了你的心呢？请你以“My Favorite Season- ”为题，写一英语短文。词数90左右。
要求:
(1) 选择其中一个季节描写，并把题目补充完整；
(2) 说明你喜欢该季节的理由(如：气候、景色、活动、感受……)，并加以适当拓展；
(3) 意思清楚，行文连贯，书写规范；
(4) 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。
My Favorite Season-
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Season-Spring
I like spring best. I think spring is a beautiful and wonderful season.
In China, it returns in March. The weather gets warm. Everything comes back to life. Trees turn green. Many flowers start to come out. It is a good season to do some outdoor activities. We can fly kites in the park, we can climb hills with our friends, and we can also go out for a picnic. The children like to ride bikes in the beautiful garden. They think it’s very interesting. Sometimes it rains suddenly, so you need to take an umbrella when you go out.
This is my favorite season. What about you
【详解】1、题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，写作时应先介绍自己最喜欢的季节，然后介绍喜欢的季节的理由，可适当发挥。
2、写作指导：本文应该以第一人称以及三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时为主；介绍喜欢的季节以及喜欢该季节的理由时，应详细具体，语句通顺，逻辑性强，保证条理清晰。
3．Write at least 50 words about the topic “When there is a typhoon…”, using the following questions for reference.(请根据提示问题，以“当有台风时……”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格)
Suggested questions:
(1) What may happen when there is a typhoon
(2) What can you see
(3) What should we do
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【答案】例文
A typhoon is a kind of dangerous wind. When there is a typhoon, heavy objects may fall on cars in the street. It may blow away the flower pots outside people’s flats. Big waves in the sea may sink ships and boats. So we must be careful with typhoon. We should close the windows when a typhoon comes. We’d better stay at home. Drivers should park their cars in the car parks. Ships and boats should come back in the shelters immediately.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：本文根据提示的问题介绍有台风时会发生什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍台风是什么；
第二步，详细介绍有台风时会发生什么以及能看到什么；
第三步，介绍发生台风时我们应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②be careful with小心
[高分句型]
When there is a typhoon, heavy objects may fall on cars in the street. (when引导的时间状语从句)
4．Write at least 50 words about the topic “Fun in different seasons”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“不同季节的乐趣”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1）What do you often do in spring/summer/autumn/winter
（2）How do you feel
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【答案】 Fun in different seasons
There are four seasons in a year. We can have a lot of fun in different seasons.
Spring is a windy season, and I like to fly a kite and go out for a walk in the park. I like to watch the beautiful flowers. I feel warm and happy in spring.
Summer is a beautiful season. I like to wear colorful dresses or skirts. I like to swim and eat ice cream. I am happy and excited in summer.
In autumn, the weather is very cool. I love to go outside for hiking. I can enjoy the beauty of nature. I can eat different kinds of fruits. I feel very great in autumn.
It often snows in winter. I feel cold, but I am happy. I can make snowmen. It is also the best time to go skating. The happiest thing for me is that I have a winter holiday every year. I can get lots of lucky money, eat delicious food and visit friends.
In a word, I have fun in all the seasons.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗漏“要点提示”中不同季节的乐趣以及自己的感受的介绍。适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山直接说明不同的季节有不同的乐趣。
第二步，具体阐述四个季节的乐趣，以及自己的感受。
第三步，书写结束语。与开头呼应，表达“在所有的的季节都有乐趣”的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① have a lot of fun有许多乐趣
② eat different kinds of fruits吃不同种类的水果
③ have a winter holiday有一个寒假
④ have fun玩的开心
[高分句型]
① I like to swim and eat ice cream（like to+动词原形表达自己的爱好）
② It is also the best time to go skating.（It is the best time to do sth.这是做某事的最佳时间）
③ The happiest thing for me is that I have a winter holiday every year.（用表语从句表达最开心的事）
5．Write at least 50 words about the topic “Saving water”, using the following questions for reference（请根据提示问题，以“节约用水”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1） What can we use water to do
（2） How can we save water
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【答案】例文：
Saving water
As we all know, water plays an important part in our life. We drink it every day and use it to cook and wash things. We can’t live without water. But how can we save water First, we should use less water when we don’t need too much water. Second, try to reuse water. When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor. At last, we can take a shorter shower. If we can do these things, we can save much water.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中所给的两个问题，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。突出节约用水的重要性。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。围绕所给的两个问题“水能用来干什么”以及“应该如何节约用水”，重点描写水的用处以及我们应该怎么做。
第三步，书写结语。再次表明“我们要节约用水”。
[亮点词汇]
①As we all know 正如我们所知道的
②plays an important part in our life 在我们的生活中起重要作用
③live without water 离开水生存
[高分句型]
①When we finish washing the clothes, we can use the water to clean the floor.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②If we can do these things, we can save much water.（if引导的条件状语从句）
6．Write a passage of at least fifty words on the topic “Without water, what will happen ”（以“没有水会发生什么？”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
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【答案】例文
Without water, what will happen
As we all know, water is very important. If there is no water, we will have no water to cook food. Without water, the firemen will have no water to put out fire. Most of the water comes from the ocean and the rivers. But the water is becoming dirty because people are polluting it. People have to stop polluting water, or we will die soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：考生应围绕“没有水会发生什么”进行写作，注意逻辑通顺，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，强调水的重要性；
第二步，举例没有水会发生什么；
第三步，呼吁保护水资源。
[亮点词汇]
①put out fire灭火
②come from来自
③stop doing sth.停止做某事
[高分句型]
①If there is no water, we will have no water to cook food.（if引导的条件状语从句；there be句型）
②But the water is becoming dirty because people are polluting it.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．Write at least 50 words on the topic “The importance of forests”, using the following questions below as reference.（请根据提示问题以“森林的重要性”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1） What are forests
（2） Why are forests important
（3） What do we use forests for
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【答案】例文
The importance of forests
A forest is a large area of trees. Forests are very important because they provide shelter and food for birds, animals and insects. People in some countries cook food with wood. People also use wood to make houses, furniture and paper.
Forests are important to all animals. People must stop cutting down forests.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文。
②时态：本文要用一般现在时。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，写出森林是什么。
②第二步，介绍一些森林的重要性以及我们能用森林来干什么。
③第三步，总结全文，说明我们应该如何对待森林。
[亮点词汇]
①a large area of 一大片……的区域
②provide … for… 为……提供……
③cut down 砍倒
[高级句型]
①Forests are very important because they provide shelter and food for birds, animals and insects. (because引导原因状语从句)
②People also use wood to make houses, furniture and paper. (to do不定式作宾补)
8．Write at least 50 words about the topic “Fire-safety rules in pubic” using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“公共消防安全规则”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1）What do you think of the fire
（2）What are the fire-safety rules
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【答案】例文：
Fire-safety rules in pubic
Fire is very dangerous. Let’s talk about Fire-safety rules in pubic. Fire can start in the countryside, at school or in our home. We must be careful.
When we’re in the countryside, we can’t smoke. No camp-fires, no barbecues. And you must put your rubbish into the bin.
When we’re at home, we mustn’t smoke. Don’t play near the fire. Don’t cook without an adult!
At school when you hear the fire bell, you mustn’t run out of the classroom! Don’t pack your schoolbag! Don’t shout! Don’t run in the playground! Don’t push your classmates!
Let’s be careful with fire and keep away from the fire danger!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文，写公共消防的一些规则；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括可能发生火灾的地方以及我们应该如何做等。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出要小心预防火灾；
第二步，具体介绍在不同的地方应该如何预防火灾的一些具体的做法；
第三步，最后是总结要小心火灾，远离火灾危险。
[亮点词汇]
① put...into...把……放入……里
② be careful with小心
③ keep away from远离
[高分句型]
① When we’re in the countryside, we can’t smoke.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② Don’t cook without an adult!（祈使句的否定式）
9．Suppose you are going to have a trip to a place again. Write at least 50 words on the topic “The second trip to...”（以“再一次去……旅游”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格）。
Suggested points:
I. Where are you going to travel again
2. Why are you going to this place again
3. What are you going to do in this place
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【答案】参考例文
The second trip to Guilin
I am going to visit Guilin again. It’s my second trip to this place. My aunt and uncle have lived there for several years. They will meet me at the airport. I have bought a lot of local food of Shanghai for them. Guilin is a wonderful place. I have been there with my father and my mother when I was only 7 years old. That was a nice trip. I have visited some beautiful mountains and the clear rivers. And I have made a lot of foreign friends during
that trip.
Now I am 16 years old, and I will visit it by myself again. I am very exciting. I hope that I can also have a very nice trip!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你再一次去哪里旅游；
第二步，介绍其中的理由；
第三步，介绍你要在这里做什么。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②make friends交朋友
③have a very nice trip旅途愉快
[高分句型]
①I have been there with my father and my mother when I was only 7 years old.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope that I can also have a very nice trip!（that引导的宾语从句）
10．Write at least 60 words about the topic “My Favourite Festival”. （就“我最喜爱的节日”为题写一篇作文，词数不少于60个）
My Favourite Festival
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【答案】例文：
My Favourite Festival
If you ask me which festival I like best, of course, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best. That’s because during this festival, I can eat different kinds of rice dumplings. I especially like the rice dumplings with meat. What’s more, I can watch dragon boat races. When you watch the races, you always feel very excited. More importantly, my cousins and my other relatives can come to my home to have a nice meal. This festival can bring a lot of happiness to me. So that’s my favourite festival.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
提示：围绕所给话题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍我最喜爱的节日”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“最喜欢的节日、喜欢的原因”等几个方面重点介绍我最喜爱的节日的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“端午节可以带来很多欢乐”的感叹。
[亮点词汇]
like best最喜欢
different kinds of各种各样的
What’s more除此之外
[高分句型]
①If you ask me which festival I like best, of course, I like the Dragon Boat Festival best.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②That’s because during this festival, I can eat different kinds of rice dumplings.（because引导的表语从句）
11．Write at least 5 sentences on the topic “my favourite activity”（根据文字提示，以“我最喜欢的活动”为题写话，至少5句）
Suggested Outline:
1.What is your favourite activity after school
2.How often do you do it
3.Why do you like it best
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【答案】例文
Playing football after school is my favourite activity.
I play football with my friends twice a week.
Playing football is good for my health.
And I can also make new friends through it.
So I like it best.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为一般现在时；
③提示：本文人称是第一人称。围绕所给的大纲，写的句子不少于5句。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述自己最爱的课外活动；
第二步，多久做一次这种活动；
第三步，为什么最喜欢它。
[亮点词汇]
is good for 对……有益
through通过
[高分句型]
Playing football is good for my health.（动名词作主语）
12．Write at least 50 words on the topic “A special kind of hobby”（以“一项特殊的爱好”为题写 一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不占格）
Suggested points:
1. Do you know any special hobby in the world
2. What is special about it Can you give us some details about it
3. What do you think of that special hobby
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【答案】例文
A special kind of hobby
Collecting DVDs is my special kind of hobby. Nowadays, we have so many good movies. Sometimes we like the movie so much that we want to see it again, but it would be too expensive. Sometimes a good movie will not be on in China because of the local laws. However, DVDs give us the chance to watch those films comfortably at home. Some DVDs even has subtitles in English, which is a good tool for English learners. So I think my hobby is both exciting and helpful, and of course, it’s not expensive.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意结合给出的问题介绍一项特殊的爱好。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这项特殊的爱好是什么；
第二步，具体介绍这项爱好的特别之处及自己的感受等。
[亮点词汇]
①because of 因为
②of course 当然
[高分句型]
①Sometimes we like the movie so much that we want to see it again, but it would be too expensive.（so ... that引导结果状语从句；but连接表转折关系的并列句）
②Some DVDs even has subtitles in English, which is a good tool for English learners.（which引导非限定性定语从句）
13．Write a passage of at least fifty words on the topic “When I grow up, …” . (请以“当我长大了……”为题，写一篇不少于50词的短文。）
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【答案】例文
When I grow up, I would like to be a policeman
I would like to be a policeman when I grow up, because I think that being a policeman is a good job.
In 15 years’ time, I will be taller and stronger and I will protect many people. Now I am good at English and Chinese. I can help both Chinese and foreigners. But I am poor at sports. Policemen must be very strong. So I have to do more exercise to stay healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：一般将来时和一般现在时；
③ 提示：围绕所给题目进行写作，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍当你长大了想做什么；
第二步，具体阐述为什么想从事这一职业；
第三步，叙述为了能够实现自己的理想，你现在要怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
would like to do sth.想做某事
in 15 years’ time 15年后
be good at 擅长做某事
be poor at不擅长……
[高分句型]
I would like to be a policeman when I grow up, because I think that being a policeman is a good job.（原因状语从句）
In 15 years’ time, I will be taller and stronger and I will protect many people.（and连接的并列句和比较级）
So I have to do more exercise to stay healthy.（动词不定式作目的状语）
14．Write at least 50 words about the topic “My favourite season”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“我最喜爱的季节”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1） What is my favourite season
（2） Why it is my favourite season （至少给出两条理由）
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【答案】例文：
My favourite season
My favourite season is spring. Spring is a lovely season. When spring comes, it is warm and windy, the flowers and grass come out, the trees turn green. Children go out of the house in their beautiful clothes. There are many butterflies and bees over the flowers. The butterflies are dancing and the bees are singing. Everything seems beautiful. How beautiful spring is! I usually make the whole year’s work plan, fly kites, take a trip in spring. As the saying goes, Spring is the best time to do the year’s work.I hope I can gain much in the first season of the year!
Spring is a poem. Spring is a song. I love spring.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文，写季节的文章；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括喜欢的季节是什么以及喜欢这个季节的原因等
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍喜欢的季节是什么；
第二步，具体介绍这个季节的一些变化以及在这个季节自己要做的一些事情；
第三步，最后总结自己喜欢这个季节。
[亮点词汇]
① go out of从……出来
② work plan工作计划
[高分句型]
① I hope I can gain much in the first season of the year!（省略that的宾语从句）
② How beautiful spring is!（how引导的感叹句）
15．段落或短文
Write a passage about the topic “A strong windy day” (以“一个强风天”为题写一篇不少于50个字的短文)
Use the following points as reference. (以下内容仅供参考)
1. What can you see when there is a strong wind
2. What should you do ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
A Strong Windy Day
Today it was a strong windy day. The wind was so strong that it blew the sand away, which made the air so dirty. And people could hardly see anything. Some people wore the masks. Because of the strong wind, people walked slowly. And someone almost fell down when they walked.
On a windy day we should wear the masks to stop the wind from blowing into the mouth. If we have nothing serious to do, we had better not go out and try to be at home when it blows. It will keep you from getting hurt. It is better to wear a mask, in case of the flying sand if you have to go out.
【详解】1. 题干解读：该题目属于记述文，也是话题作文，话题是“A strong windy day”。本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时。本文应分为二段，第一段写大风时看到的景象，第二段写我们应采取的措施。认真审题，根据提示要点列出提纲，短文必须包含提示内容，要适当发挥。
2. 例文点评：例文采用二段式，第1段表达了今天刮风时看到的景象，第2段表达了刮风时采取的措施。本文时态使用正确，运用了合适的连接词或过渡词，表达条理清楚连贯，富有逻辑性。
3. 高分亮点：
短语和连词的使用：so…that…，because of，if，fall down，when，stop…from，had better，keep from，in case of等。
句型：（1）The wind was so strong that it blew the sand away, which made the air so dirty.（2）Because of the strong wind, people walked slowly. （3）And someone almost fell down when they walked.（4）On a windy day we should wear the masks to stop the wind from blowing into the mouth. （5）If we have nothing serious to do, we had better not go out and try to be at home when it blows.（6）It is better to wear a mask, in case of the flying sand if you have to go out.等。
【点睛】写作六步骤：1.审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3.扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。如And someone almost fell down when they walked. 增加了时间状语从句。4.连句成文，合理使用连词。5.改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誊写作文：注意书写工整美观整洁。
16．Write at least 50 words about the topic “A windy day”, using the following questions for reference.（请根据提示问题，以“有风的一天”为题写一篇短文，不少于50个词，标点符号不占格）
Suggested questions:
（1） What can we see in different kinds of windy day
（2） What should we do when a typhoon is coming
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【答案】例文：
A windy day
There are three types of winds: light breezes, strong winds and typhoons. We can see children flying kites in the park when there is a gentle breeze. We can see the clouds moving quickly when there is a strong wind. We can see people holding their raincoats tightly when there is a typhoon.
A typhoon is a dangerous wind. So we have to be careful with typhoons. When a typhoon is coming, we should close the windows. We had better stay at home. Drivers should leave their cars at car parks. Ships and boats should return to the shelter immediately.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍三种不同的风以及在不同的风天我们能看到什么；
第二步，介绍当台风来临时我们应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①in the park在公园
②have to不得不
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④see sb. doing sth.看见某人在做某事
[高分句型]
①There are three types of winds: light breezes, strong winds and typhoons.有三种类型的风：微风，强风和台风。(使用There be句型表示“有”。)
②We can see children flying kites in the park when there is a gentle breeze. 当有微风的时候，我们可以看到孩子们在公园里放风筝。(使用when引导时间状语从句。)
17．Write a passage of at least 40 words on the topic “What shall we do when there is a typhoon ” (以“台风来时我们该怎么做？”为题写一篇不少于40个词的短文)
Use the following points as a reference (以下内容仅供参考)
1. What can we see when there is a typhoon
2. What may happen when there is a typhoon
3. What shall we do when there is a typhoon
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【答案】例文
What shall we do when there is a typhoon
A typhoon is a kind of very strong wind. When there is a typhoon, we can see the clouds moving quickly in the sky. People hold their raincoats tightly when they are walking in the streets. The strong wind may break the windows and it may also blow away the flower pots outside our flat, so we should close the windows and move the flower pots into the flat. We should stay at home and listen to the news about the typhoon.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据提示内容写一篇关于“台风来时我们该怎么做？”的短文，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍台风来临时，我们会看见什么；
第二步，介绍台风来临时，会发生什么；
第三步，介绍台风来临时，我们应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①a kind of一种
②blow away吹走
③stay at home待在家
[高分句型]
①People hold their raincoats tightly when they are walking in the streets.（when引导时间状语从句）
②The strong wind may break the windows and it may also blow away the flower pots outside our flat, so we should close the windows and move the flower pots into the flat.（so连接并列句）
18．Write a passage of at least sixty words on the topic “Windy weather”
(请以“Windy weather”为题写不少于50个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)
Reference questions:
How many kinds of wind do you know What are they
Which one do you like
What can you see on windy days
What may happen on windy days
What should/can we do when it is windy
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【答案】例文
A windy day
There are three types of winds: light breezes, strong winds and typhoons. I like light breezes best. We can see children flying kites in the park when there is a gentle breeze. We can see the clouds moving quickly when there
is a strong wind. We can see people holding their raincoats tightly when there is a typhoon.
On a windy day we should wear the masks to stop the wind from blowing into the mouth. If we have nothing serious to do, we had better not go out and try to be at home when it blows. It will keep you from getting hurt. It is better to wear a mask, in case of the flying sand if you have to go out.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应注意提示的问题就是写作的基本方向，不要遗漏要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍三种不同的风以及在不同的风天我们能看到什么；
第二步，介绍当风来临时我们应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①in the park在公园
②stop…from阻止……
③had better do sth.最好做某事
④in case of假如
[高分句型]
①There are three types of winds: light breezes, strong winds and typhoons.（There be句型）
②We can see children flying kites in the park when there is a gentle breeze.（使用when引导时间状语从句）
19．为了开展学习和体验相结合的校外活动，你的学校即将进行为期三天的研学旅行(study trip)。请你根据写作要求，用英语为校报写一篇短文，介绍这次研学旅行计划并谈谈你对研学旅行的看法及建议。
Time Activities Meanings
The first day Visit the history museum Learn about the history
The second day Learn to make kites …
The third day … …
写作要求：
1. 根据表格介绍三天的活动和意义，并简单谈谈你的看法；
2. 你对研学旅行的有什么更好的建议；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
4. 词数 100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数) 。
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students.
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【答案】例文
The study trip is a kind of school education which is held outside and popular with students. Our school will hold a three-day study trip next month. Let me tell you something about it.
On the first day, we will visit the history museums as well as places of interest, and we can learn about Chinese history and culture more deeply. On the second day, we will learn to make kites in person and make things by hand to experience life. On the third day, we will visit famous schools to increase cultural exchange and enhance learning objectives.
In my opinion, the study trip is very helpful for us. I hope our school can offer more study trips. We can have more chances to experience these kinds of activities and learn more knowledge that can’t be learned in class. Certainly, we must keep safe during these trips.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括表格中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍即将来到的研学旅行；
第二步，具体介绍三天的活动和意义，可以适当增加细节；
第三步，表达自己的观点，谈谈对研学旅行的看法。
［亮点词汇］
① as well as 也
② by hand 用手
［高分句型］
① On the third day, we will visit famous schools to increase cultural exchange and enhance learning objectives. (动词不定式作目的状语)
② We can have more chances to experience these kinds of activities and learn more knowledge that can’t be learned in class. (定语从句)
20．Write at least 50 words on the topic “What will I be like in 15 years’ time ”（以“15 年后的我会是什么样 ”为题写一篇不少于50词的短文，标点符号不包括）：
Suggested points：
1. What will you be like in 15 years’ time
2. What will you be doing at that time Why
3. What do you have to do to be like that
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【答案】参考例文
What will I be like in 15 years’ time
I will be much taller and much better looking in 15 years’ time. I will be 27 years old by then, and I will be an English teacher at that time. I want to teach English in the future because I believe English is not just a school
subject, it’s a language that brings different culture to the English learners. Through learning English, one will learn more than the language itself. But of course, I am still young now and I really have to study English hard to be good at it.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文
时态：时态为“一般将来时和一般现在时”；
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述15年后你的外貌变化；
第二步，介绍15年后你从从事的职业，以及做这项工作的原因。
第三步，叙述为了实现你的目标，你现在怎样做。
[亮点词汇]
①in 15 years’ time 15年后
②at that time 在那时
③Through learning English 通过学习英语
④study English hard 努力学习英语
[高分句型]
①I will be 27 years old by then, and I will be an English teacher at that time.（and连接的并列句）
②I want to teach English in the future because I believe English is not just a school subject, it’s a language that brings different culture to the English learners.（原因状语从句和定语从句）