2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(北京专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(北京专用)
1．（2024·北京东城·一模）假设你是李华，在学生会负责今年体育节吉祥物 (mascot) 的设计征集活动。你校交换生Peter对该活动很感兴趣，他给你发来邮件，询问吉祥物设计的具体要求及提交 (submit) 的时间和方式。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所知道的相关内容。
提示词语：creative, culture, colourful, draw, email
提示问题：● What are the design requirements for the mascot
● When and how should Peter submit his design
Dear Peter, I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the mascot design for our school’s Sports Festival._______________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ Good luck with your design! Yours, Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in the mascot design for our school’s Sports Festival.
The design is expected to be creative. It should show the sportsmanship and our school culture. Colourful and attractive designs are highly preferred. You can create your design in different ways. Both hand drawing and computer drawing are acceptable.
You need to submit your design by next Friday, June 15th. Just email it to mascotdesign@. Please make sure you include your full name and class in the email.
Good luck with your design!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出有关体育节吉祥物设计事宜；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从创新、文化和颜色等方面详细介绍了吉祥物的设计思路；
第三步，表达希望设计方案能被选上的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①in different ways以不同的方式
②both…and…不但……而且……
③need to do sth.需要做某事
[高分句型]
①The design is expected to be creative. (一般现在时的被动语态)
②Please make sure you include your full name and class in the email. (祈使句)
2．（2024·北京西城·一模）初中三年， 一定有很多课给你留下了深刻的印象。
假设你是李华。你校英文公众号正在开展以“My Most Memorable Class”为主题的征文活动，请用英文写一篇文章投稿，介绍你最难忘的一节课，并谈谈这节课为什么令你难忘。
提示词语： science, music, experiment, sing, interesting
提示问题： ●What was your most memorable class
●Why was the class memorable
My Most Memorable Class
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______________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My Most Memorable Class
We have had thousands of lessons in middle school. Some of them have left a deep impression on me. Among them, the most memorable one is a physics class I had last term.
In the class, our physics teacher Mr. Liu brought some materials and asked us to use them to do an experiment. I was confident that I could do a good job, because I had worked out all of the experiment homework problems. I offered to perform the experiment in front of the whole class. However, I just couldn’t put what I had learnt into practice no matter how hard I tried. As you can imagine, I was so embarrassed!
The physics class was really memorable because I learned an important life lesson from its real knowledge comes from practice. I also learned to be modest and prudent, which will positively influence my future life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己最难忘的课；
第二步，阐述难忘的原因；
第三步，总结说明从难忘的课程中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①left a deep impression留下深刻印象
②perform the experiment做实验
[高分句型]
①However, I just couldn’t put what I had learnt into practice no matter how hard I tried. (what引导宾语从句)
②The physics class was really memorable because I learned an important life lesson from its real knowledge comes from practice. (because引导原因状语从句)
3．（2024·北京通州·一模）某英文网站青少年板块正在开展以“学会和父母相处”为主题的征文活动。假设你是李华。请用英文写一篇短文投稿，分享你和父母之间发生的一个冲突，你是如何恰当地处理的，以及你从中得到的启示。
提示词语：disagreement, spend, cell phone, shout, communicate
提示问题：·What was the problem between your parents and you
·How did you deal with it
·What have you learned from it
Problems are often around us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】One possible version:
Problems are often around us. I love my parents and they love me as well, but we also have disagreements and sometimes we make each other unhappy.
One day, I spent too much time on my cell phone because of talking about the school project with my classmates. My mum was angry and shouted at me because she thought I wasted my time. I knew she worried about me so I didn’t close my door this time. I explained the reason and told her that I understood her worries. She said sorry to me because of her misunderstanding.
From this experience, I have learned the importance of communicating and understanding. I realize that listening to others and expressing clearly can prevent misunderstandings. In addition, taking responsibility for my actions and showing trustworthiness can help me build a better relationship with my parents.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
② 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己与父母之间发生的一个冲突及自己的处理方式；
第三步，阐述自己从这次冲突中懂得的道理。
[亮点词汇]
① talking about...with...与……谈论……
② worried about 担心
③ said sorry to 向……道歉
④ taking responsibility for 对……负责
⑤ build a better relationship with建立更好的关系
[高分句型]
①My mum was angry and shouted at me because she thought I wasted my time.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I realize that listening to others and expressing clearly can prevent misunderstandings.（that引导宾语从句，动词ing作主语）
4．（2024·北京大兴·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom向你发来电子邮件，想了解你在生活中有哪些处理废旧物品的做法。请你给他回复一封英文电子邮件，介绍你的相应做法及理由。
提示词语：waste, decorate (装饰), protect, environment
提示问题：How do you deal with the waste
What is your reason
Dear Tom, I’m glad to introduce my ways... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________ If you have any other good ideas, write to me soon. Yours, Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to introduce my ways to deal with the waste. I often cut a waste bottle in half, and then I can get a special container which I can put my pens and other things in. Besides, I also try to make them into art pieces to decorate my room. In these ways, I not only improve my DIY skills but also help protect the environment. The most important is that I turn these waste things into useful things and give them new lives.
If you have any other good ideas, write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍是如何处理废品的；
第三步，书写结语，表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①cut sth. in half把某物切成两半
②not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①I often cut a waste bottle in half, and then I can get a special container which I can put my pens and other things in. （定语从句）
②The most important is that I turn these waste things into useful things and give them new lives.（表语从句）
5．（2024·北京海淀·一模）学而致知，行而致远。
假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“学以致用”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次你运用所学解决实际问题的经历，并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语： skill, make use of, connect, improve, meaningful
提示问题： ● What experience can you share about putting what you've learned into practice
● What have you learned from it
It’s important to put what we’ve learned into practice. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文：
It’s important to put what we’ve learned into practice.
Last summer holiday, I learned some first aid knowledge such as CPR and Heimlich Maneuver. One day, my litter sister was choked by a candy and couldn’t breathe. Seeing this, I thought of what I learnt last summer holiday shortly. Then, I stood behind my sister and applied pressure to her abdomen. Fortunately, the candy in her throat was spit out. At last, I called 120 for further check.
From this experience, I have learned the importance of the combination of theory and practice, which not only enables us to have a better understanding of what we have learned, but also makes contributions to our society.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示问题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己学以致用的一次经历；
第三步，阐述自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②apply sth to sth将……运用……
③think of想起
[高分句型]
I have learned the importance of the combination of theory and practice, which not only enables us to have a better understanding of what we have learned, but also makes contributions to our society.(定语从句)
6．（2024·北京海淀·一模）假设你是李华。你的好朋友Peter正在参与筹备他们学校的“校园劳动日”活动，他写信向你征求创意。请你用英语给他写一封回信，提供一些活动创意并说明理由。
提示词语：clean up, repair, garden, fun, responsibility
提示问题： ● What activities would you like to suggest
● Why do you suggest so
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day.
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I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
I’m excited to hear that you’re organizing activities for School Service Day. And I’d like to share some ideas with you.
First, I think it’s a good idea to organize clean-up activities. For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful. What’s more, you can ask students to repair the broken desks and chairs. It will be great fun. Moreover, you can arrange for students to water the garden. They will feel a strong sense of responsibility to beautify the school.
I do hope that my suggestions will be helpful.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：一般现在时、一般将来时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我想和你分享一些想法”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“清洁活动、修理活动、给花园浇水活动等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望建议能有所帮助”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① share...with...和……分享……
② What’s more 另外
③ arrange for students to...安排学生……
④ water the garden 给花园浇水
⑤ feel a strong sense of responsibility 有强烈的责任感
⑥ beautify the school 美化学校
[高分句型]
① First, I think it’s a good idea to organize clean-up activities.（that引导宾语从句，that省略；it固定句式）
② For example, students can clean the classroom and playground, which can make the school much cleaner and more beautiful.（which引导非限制性定语从句）
③ They will feel a strong sense of responsibility to beautify the school.（动词不定式作定语）
7．（23-24九年级上·北京·期末）假如你是李华，你和你的英国笔友Peter 都热心参与志愿服务，他给你发来邮件询问你参与志愿服务的情况。请你用英语回复一封邮件，介绍你所参加过的一次志愿者活动，并谈谈你的感受。
不少于50 词。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：Children’s Home, tell stories, teach, tired, happy
提示问题：
● Where did you do the volunteer work
● What did you do there
● How did you feel
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about the volunteer work I did. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about the volunteer work I did. Last summer, I got an opportunity to volunteer at a
Children’s Home in the community. My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old. They were very friendly. They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them. I did lots of things with them. I told stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at. It was a wonderful day. I was happy to be able to do something for little kids.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”。
③提示：文章为第一人称，向别人介绍自己的志愿服务经历和感受。问题回答完整，提示词运用在文章中去，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出地点在哪里做的志愿服务；
第二步，具体介绍自己做了哪些事情；
第三步，谈谈自己对于这次志愿服务活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① take care of照顾
② was good at擅长
③ was happy to高兴做某事
④ be able to能、会
⑤ opportunity机会
[高分句型]
① They showed me big smiles when they saw a bag of gifts I brought for them.（时间状语从句）
② I read stories, sang songs, and taught them something I was good at.（限制性定语从句）
③ My main duty was to take care of children aged five to seven years old.（动词不定式作表语）
8．（23-24九年级上·北京·期末）好的习惯有着无穷的力量，它如同种子在日复一日的坚持中生根发芽，茁壮成长。
学校英文网站开展“好习惯伴我成长”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你的一个好习惯是什么，你是如何保持的以及它带给你的收获。
不少于50 词；文中已给出内容不计入总词数；所给提示词语仅供选用；请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
提示词语：reading, keep doing, free time, improve, knowledge
提示问题：
● What is your good habit
● How do you keep your good habit
● What can you get from your good habit
Good habits can change our whole life.
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【答案】范文
Good habits can change our whole life. One of my good habits is taking notes in class.
In class, I take down what my teachers write on the blackboard and other important points about my lessons. I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. Before I do my homework and take exams, I review my notes carefully.
The habit of taking notes helps me become a successful student. It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades.
A good habit really helps me in my study and daily life. I’ll keep it lifelong.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，介绍的好习惯是什么；
第二步，介绍你是如何保持你的好习惯的；
第三步，介绍你从这个好习惯中得到了什么；
第四步，书写总结。
［亮点词汇］
① take down 记录，记下
② get good grades 取得好成绩
［高分句型］
① I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. (so that引导目的状语从句)
② It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades. (not only…but also…引导并列句)
9．（23-24九年级上·北京顺义·期末）假如你是李华，你校英语社团的公众号计划做以“My Favorite Book”为主题的系列推送。请你用英语给社团公众号留言，推荐你最喜欢的一本书，谈谈你喜欢的理由及收获。
提示词语：writer，interesting，encourage
提示问题： ·What is your favorite book
·Why do you like it
·What benefits have you got from it
Reading can make our life colorful.
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【答案】例文
Reading can make our life colorful. I like reading novels best because I can learn interesting stories of different people. My favorite book is Jane Eyre written by Charlotte Bronte.
First, I am moved by Jane’s experience and traits. Jane is small in body but strong in heart. As a poor orphan, she suffered a lot of difficulties but she never gave up. As a woman, she pursued justice, freedom and respect in her life. What’s more, the language is rich and beautiful, which is helpful for English learners.
I benefit a lot from reading it. It not only broadens my vision but also helps me build my characters. So I will keep reading as a lasting habit.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“推荐最喜欢的一本书，谈谈喜欢的理由及收获。”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明阅读的重要性，以及自己最喜欢的书。
第二步，介绍喜欢这本书的原因。
第三步，分享这本书带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①gave up放弃
②benefit from从……中收益
[高分句型]
①I like reading novels best because I can learn interesting stories of different people.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②What’s more, the language is rich and beautiful, which is helpful for English learners.（定语从句）
10．（23-24九年级上·北京顺义·期末）某英文网站正在开展以“榜样”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈谁是你心中的榜样，你的理由，以及他/她对你的影响。
提示词语: helpful, care, work hard, overcome (克服)
提示问题: Who is your role model
Why is he/she your role model
What influence has he/she had on you
Everyone may have his own role model.
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【答案】例文
Everyone may have his own role model. The person I admire most is my father.
In my eyes, my father is hard-working and responsible for everything he does. As a doctor, he spends most of his time and energy on his work. He is willing to help and care all the patients. What’s more, he gives me support to help me through hard times. For example, when I failed an exam last year, he helped me find the solutions and encouraged me to overcome the difficulties.
With his guidance and influence, I study hard at school and try to help my classmates with their homework. I hope I can do as well as him in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，介绍自己心中的榜样；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，描述自己的理由以及榜样对自己的影响；
第三步，表达个人观点，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be willing to do sth.愿意做某事
②what’s more此外
③for example例如
[高分句型]
①For example, when I failed an exam last year, he helped me find the solutions and encouraged me to overcome the difficulties.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I hope I can do as well as him in the future.（省略that的宾语从句）
11．（23-24九年级上·北京门头沟·期末）2023年7月末，我们的家乡门头沟区出现了灾害性特大暴雨天气，受损严重。家乡人民众志成城，积极抗洪救灾。
假如你是李华，你的笔友Peter非常关心你和你的家乡，想了解一下这次灾情的情况。请你用英文回复邮件，简述家乡受灾的基本情况，谈谈令你印象深刻的人或事以及感受。
提示词语：flood (洪灾), damage, seriously, neighbour, inspiring
提示问题：● What was your hometown like during the flood
● Who or what impressed you
● How did you feel
Dear Peter，
Thank you very much for your concerns. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours ,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Thank you very much for your concerns.
Disastrous heavy rains occurred in our hometown Mentougou District, causing serious damage in 2023
July. Many low-lying communities flooded again. It was full of muddy water.
The PLA men arrived immediately to rescue the villagers of the flooded areas. And they did their best to fight against the flood. They supplied the villagers with fresh vegetables and food. Some medical teams were organized to help us so that we could have healthy diet.
After a long time, everything went on very well. And that was a sign of victory. I was deeply moved by these people.
Yours ,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文为一封电子邮件；
②时态：本文时态一般过去时为主；
③提示：本文要点以问题形式给出，注意要点衔接自然。
[写作步骤]
第一步，感谢好友的关心；
第二步，描写洪水中家乡的样子，谁或什么事情给你留下了深刻的印象；
第三步，结束语，感觉如何。
[亮点词汇]
①was full of充满；
②immediately立即地
③fight against与……战斗
[高分句型]
Some medical teams were organized to help us so that we could have healthy diet.（目的状语从句）
12．（23-24九年级上·北京门头沟·期末）现实中，总会有这样一个人。他（她）有一种独特的人格魅力。这种魅力是令人钦佩的性格、品质、行为……。他（她）散发出的令人钦佩的气质一直吸引着你，伴随你的成长。
某英文网站正在开展以“令我钦佩的人”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一下谁是你敬佩的人，你为什么钦佩他（她），以及你从他（她）身上学到了什么。
提示词语：help, enjoy, friendly, work hard, take action
提示问题：
● Who is the person you admire
● Why do you admire him or her
● What have you learnt from him or her
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【答案】
例文：
I admire my mother very much. She is helpful and careful.
Every day she gets up very early and goes to bed late. She is not only busy with her work but also takes good care of our family. What’s more, she is very helpful to others. When people around her are in trouble, she’s always ready to help them to solve the problems. All the people like her.
I’m lucky to have such a good mother. I love her and I have learned a lot from her. I have known the importance of responsibility and helping others. I will work hard and try my best to help others.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中询问的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我最敬佩的人”来引出下文中对三个问题的回答；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“我最敬佩的人是谁、原因和值得学习的地方”三方面入手，重点介绍我的母亲；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对母亲的爱。
[亮点词汇]
①gets up 起床
②not only...but also... 不但……而且……
③be busy with sth 忙于某事
④take care of 照顾
⑤what’s more 此外
⑥in trouble 有困难
⑦try one’s best to do sth 某人尽全力做某事
[高分句型]
①When people around her are in trouble, she’s always ready to help them to solve the problems.（when引导的时间状语从句）
13．（23-24九年级上·北京石景山·期末）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom与你交流如何安排课余生活，请你用英语回复一封邮件。
提示词语：enjoy, sports, relax
提示问题：
How do you spend your spare time？
Explain your reasons.
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time.
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tom,
I’m writing to tell you something about my spare time.
I usually enjoy playing sports during my spare time. Playing sports with my friends allows us to bond and build stronger relationships. I spend some of my free time reading English books and magazines, too. I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge. It is also a tool that can
help me communicate with foreigners.
I’m looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时、现在进行时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意标点符号及大小写等问题，避免语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明写信的目的；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍自己课余生活的安排以及这么安排的原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望收到来信。
[亮点词汇]
①spare time 业余时间
②allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
③widen my field of vision 扩大我的眼界
④communicate with ... 与……沟通
[高分句型]
①I like English because it can widen my field of vision and provide me with a lot of knowledge.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②It is also a tool that can help me communicate with foreigners.（that引导的定语从句）
14．（23-24九年级上·北京石景山·期末）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德。劳动可以强健体魄，培养品格。
假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍一次你的劳动经历 （labour experience），并谈谈你的收获。
提示词语：plant, soil, water
提示问题：
Describe one of your labour experiences.
What have you learned from that experience
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【答案】例文
Labour is the most glorious. I’d like to share my labour experience with you.
Last year on Arbor Day, our school organized a tree planting activity. That was my first time to plant trees, and I was very excited. My teacher gave me a young tree. First, I chose a right place where the tree could get much sunlight. Second, I dug a deep hole. Third, I put the tree in the hole and filled the hole with some soil. Finally, I watered the tree. Although I was very tired, I was happy. After the tree planting activity, I often went to water the small tree I planted. Now it is taller than my father. I feel a great sense of achievement.
The labour experience will be an unforgettable activity in my school life. No pains, no gains. Labour makes me happy!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主，“一般现在时”为辅；
③提示：根据提示词和提示问题进行写作，分享你的一次劳动经历及你从中学到了什么。注意正确使用时态，避免语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，分享自己的劳动经历；
第二步，具体阐述自己的劳动过程；
第三步，分享劳动后的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①Arbor Day植树节
②fill...with...用……填满……
[高分句型]
①Now it is taller than my father.（形容词比较级）
②Although I was very tired, I was happy.（Although引导让步状语从句）
15．（23-24九年级上·北京西城·期末）旅行中拍摄的一张照片、常常翻阅的一本书、比赛中赢得的一个奖品，都可能对我们具有特殊意义。
假设你是李华。某英文网站正在开展以“The Most Meaningful Object to Me”为主题的征文活动，请你写一篇短文进行投稿，描写一件对你最有意义的物品 (object)，讲述它的来历，并谈谈它对你的意义或影响。
提示词语：prize, encourage, importance, valuable
提示问题：
●What is the most meaningful object to you
●What is the story behind it
●Why is it meaningful to you
The Most Meaningful Object to Me
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【答案】One possible version:
The Most Meaningful Object to Me
The most meaningful object to me is a gold medal that I won last year.
I used to be very weak and I wanted to make a change when I entered middle school. Luckily, my classmate Tony agreed to help me. He invited me to run with him after school every day. Whenever I wanted to give up, he would encourage me to keep going. Besides company and encouragement, Tony also taught me how to improve my speed and avoid getting hurt. Last year, I took part in the one-kilometer run at the school sports meeting and
won the gold medal! How excited I was!
The gold medal really means a lot to me. It not only symbolizes honor and pride, but also proves that persistence is so valuable. More importantly, the medal represents the precious friendship between Tony and I.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给要点描写一件对你最有意义的物品，注意不要遗漏“提示问题”介绍它的来历及意义或影响。适当增添细节，突出写作重点，使得行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题。指出对我最有意义的物品是去年赢得的金牌；
第二步，具体介绍金牌的来历。在Tony的帮助和鼓励下我参加了学校运动会的一千米长跑，最后赢得了金牌；
第三步，书写结语。介绍金牌对我的意义。它不仅是荣誉和自豪的象征，也证明了坚持是如此的宝贵。更代表了Tony和我之间的友谊。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去是
②make a change做改变
③give up放弃
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①How excited I was!（感叹句“how+形容词/副词+主语+谓语！”）
②It not only symbolizes honor and pride, but also proves that persistence is so valuable.（“not only…but also…”不仅……而且……）
16．（23-24九年级上·北京西城·期末）假设你是李华。你校英语广播站正在招收新成员，包含以下职位：主持人（radio host）、记者和音乐总监。请你用英文写一封自荐信，说明你申请（apply）什么职位（position），你的优势以及为什么申请。
提示词语： reporter, music director, out-going, experience, improve
提示问题：
●What position do you want to apply for
●What advantages do you have
●Why do you want to work at the school radio station
Dear Sir/Madam, I’m very interested in working at the school radio station. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am interested in working at the school radio station. I’d like to apply to be the radio station host. I am confident that I’m qualified for the position. First, I’m an outgoing and friendly person, which can attract more listeners. What’s more, I can speak English fluently and have a beautiful voice. In addition, I have been a host for several shows at our school before.
I want to work at the school radio station because I’d like to record more of the meaningful school life and share it with all my schoolmates. Meanwhile, I hope to improve my skills in hosting and gain more experiences.
I hope you can offer me the opportunity, and I am looking forward to your reply.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为申请信；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，点明自己想申请的职位并介绍自己的优势；
第二步，谈谈自己为什么想在英语广播站工作；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be qualified for 可胜任……
②in addition 此外
③share sth. with sb. 与某人分享……
[高分句型]
①First, I’m an outgoing and friendly person, which can attract more listeners.（which引导的定语从句）
②I want to work at the school radio station because I’d like to record more of the meaningful school life and share it with all my schoolmates.（because引导的原因状语从句）