2024年中考英语模拟真题分类训练之书面表达（含解析）

书面表达20篇
1．（2024·江苏盐城·二模）成长过程中有个懂你的人非常重要，如你的朋友、老师、父母等。校报英语专栏正在举行主题为 “_________ knows me best” 的征文活动，请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示内容：
1. Who knows you best 2. Why do you think he/she knows you best 3. ...
注意事项：答案见微信 公众号：热爱生活
（1）请补全标题；
（2）文中不能出现除公众人物外的真实姓名、校名等信息；
（3）词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
（4）语言通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥。
_________ knows me best
During the process of growing, it is very important to have someone who knows us. Among all the people around me, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
2．（2024·江苏南通·二模）你们班想在毕业之前分小组为学校做一些有意义的事，如种植纪念树、捐书给图书馆、 拍摄宣传学校的视频等。假如你是李华，你们组打算邀请交换生Peter一起参加这次活动。 请你根据提示，用英文写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动安排及你们组的打算。
提示词语：memorial 纪念的
提示问题：
● What activities does your class plan to do Why
● When and where will your class organize them
● Which activity will your group choose Why
注意：
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
3．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假如你叫李华，将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛，演讲的题目是“Learning to get along with our parents”。请你用英语写一篇演讲稿，内容要点如下：
Phenomenon (现象) 1. feel it hard to get along with our parents 2. …
Reasons /Causes 1. care too much about our marks 2. …
Suggestions 1. communicate with them 2. … 3. …
要求：
1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯：
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3)词数：100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数)；
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is“Learning to get along with our parents”.
These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
4．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）时间在不经意中从指尖划过，转眼我们即将从母校毕业，愉快的暑假也即将来临了，同学们可曾思考如何度过一个多彩的暑假呢？根据以下思维导图的提示，以”My summer holiday plan”为主题的写一篇暑假计划的英语短文。
参考词汇：social practice activities社会实践活动
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头己给出, 不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
My summer holiday plan
Summer holiday is coming._____________________________________________________________________________________
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5．（2024·江苏徐州·二模）《环球时报》目前正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动，这个活动特别面向全球的青少年，鼓励他们通过文字来介绍自己深爱的祖国。请你写一篇短文投稿，从下列提示中选择两到三点适当展开，介绍你深爱的祖国。
注意：
1. 词数90左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, it has a beautiful name--China. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）“天高海阔万里长，华夏少年意气扬。发愤图强做栋梁，不负年少。”《少年中国说》歌颂了少年的朝气蓬勃和发奋图强的精神风骨。《疯狂英语》杂志社正在开展以“I Have a Dream”为题的英语征文活动。请你结合以下问题，写一篇英语征文。
1. What is your dream
2. Why do you have such a dream (at least two reasons)
3. How can you achieve your dream (at least in two ways)
注意：
（1）短文应包括表格中的全部信息并适当发挥，要求条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
（2）文中不得出现真实校名、姓名；
（3）词数90左右，征文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
I Have a Dream
Everyone has a dream. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7．（2024·江苏连云港·二模）生活技能对于个人的成长和成功起着重要的作用。掌握常用生活技能，可以把生活过成自己喜欢的样子。21st Century英文报社现征集题为 “Life skills” 的英语演讲稿，假如你是林涛，请根据下面的思维导图，用英语写一篇演讲稿，描述你应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容包含思维导图所含提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn And how to improve them ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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8．（2024·江苏常州·一模）常州历史文化底蕴深厚、经济实力雄厚、自然风光秀丽、人文景观丰富。某报社正在征集主题为“你眼中的常州”的文章，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的看法。
You shoud share your ideas about the topic:
1. What was Changzhou like 10 years ago
2. What is Changzhou like now
3. What do you think of the changes
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 要点齐全，语句通顺，表达清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years.
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9．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）
亲爱的十年后的自己： 你好！当你打开这封信的时候，我们已经相隔了整整十年的时光。 现在的我，正坐在考场里，提笔给未来的你写这封信，心中充满了感慨。 …… 内容要求：在这封信中，你可以谈谈自己现在的生活状态、学习情况，分享你的梦想和追求，也可以向未来的自己提出期望和建议。请充分发挥你的想象力，用英文书写这封跨越时空的信件。 注意： 1. 词数：100左右； 2. 内容完整（照抄试卷内容不得分）； 3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear future me,
How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed.
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Love,
Present me
10．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
My Favourite City
My favourite city is ___________________________________________________________
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I hope you can visit it some day.
11．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）中考将至，不同的同学在面对中考时有不同的情绪表现，因此你校将举行一次以“调节情绪，迎战中考”为主题的班会课，来探讨如何调节自己的情绪，请你为这次的班会课准备一份演讲稿，内容包括：
1. 简述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现；
2. 提出调节情绪的方法（至少三点）；
3. 鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
注意事项：
1. 词数：100左右（首尾不计入总字数）。
2. 围绕主题，表达内容积极向上（照抄阅读语篇不得分）。
3. 作文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
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Thank you for your listening.
12．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）毕业在即，阳光中学某班英语老师请同学们在成长档案中加入主题为“My Dream Job”的一页，希望大家记录憧憬，分享自己对理想职业的理解和行动计划。假设你是该班的一名学生，请结合自身特点撰写一篇英语短文。下表是你从教材中找到的相关信息，仅供参考。
Name Job Personality Action Saying
Liu Tao Chief engineer careful;serious and organized pay attention to every detail; work to high standards A miss is as good as a mile.
Dr Ma doctor kind and patient do more volunteer work to help more people …
Wu Bing teacher kind and helpful
注意事项：
1.短文内容须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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13．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）在初中三年的学习生活中，你迎难而上，勇于担当，逐渐成长为“眼中有光，心中有爱”的新时代中国青少年。作为初三年级的学生代表，请你根据以下中文提示写一篇发言稿，与同学们分享你身上的优秀品质和心路历程。
优秀品质 乐于助人， 积极参加志愿者服务（举一例说明）
心路历程 勤学好问，克服困难（举一例说明）
展望未来 1. 自拟一点对自我的要求；2. 做一位健康阳光、感恩的少年。
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3）词数：90词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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14．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假如你叫李华，作为九年级毕业生学业很忙，你发现有时在某门学科上花的功夫与考试成绩不成正比，所以你想给你的某学科老师写一封信表达你的想法。
要点：
（1）你对该学科学习的认识（重要性以及作用……）；
（2）你目前在该学科上的现状以及主要问题；
（3）你希望老师在哪些方面给予你帮助。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名字；
（2）词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you.
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Yours,
Li Hua
15．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）又到一年毕业季，又逢青春告别时。假设你是九年级一班的李华，你所在的班级计划举办一场告别初中的晚会（a farewell party）。请你撰写一份发言稿，谈谈三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 内容须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，条理清楚、语句连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名等信息。
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement.
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Yours,
Li Hua
16．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）享受阅读，享受生活。为了迎接世界读书日，学校英语俱乐部上个星期组织了“Enjoy reading, enjoy life”为主题的校园读书节系列活动。请你根据以下提示，为校英文报写一篇活动报道。
注意:
(1)词数90左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数；(2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．（2024·江苏常州·一模）中考临近，很多同学为了能取得好成绩，经常熬夜复习，这对身体健康产生了较大的影响。请你就“Staying up late”这一话题发表你的看法，内容需包括：
（1）除了影响健康，熬夜会对学习带来怎样的影响？
（2）你认为应如何取得好成绩？
注意：1．文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
2．词数100左右。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot.
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18．（2024·江苏南通·一模）近来，安全问题备受关注。专家指出，提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此，自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿，选择或自拟两个方面，谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。
要求：
词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
参考词汇：school-bullying校园欺凌
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
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Thanks for your listening!
19．（2024·江苏宿迁·一模）“立德树人、五育并举”的教育理念在我县落地生花，中学生学习及生活上有了很 大的变化。学校正在组织一个题为“How to Be a Good Youth”的演讲活动，请你根据下面提示，联系实际，写一篇英语演讲稿，谈谈如何做一名新时代好少年。
注意：
(1)短文要求条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
(2)词数90左右，征文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实校名、姓名。
How to Be a Good Youth
Good morning, everybody!
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That’s all. Thank you.
20．（2024·江苏·二模）尝试是一种积极的生活态度，它让我们在面对困难时不退缩，不逃避，而是积极地去寻找解决问题的方法。只有敢于尝试，我们才能突破自我，实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验描述一次挑战自我的经历。内容包括：
1. 你曾经尝试过做什么？
2. 你是如何突破自我的？
3. 这次尝试给你的启示是什么？
注意：
1. 词数：100左右(已给出的短文开头，不计入总词数)；
2. 内容完整 (照抄阅读语篇不得分)；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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参考答案：
1．例文：
My father knows me best
During the process of growing, it is very important to have someone who knows us. Among all the people around me, I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.
On special days, like my birthdays, my father is always ready to give me a big surprise. He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t like. Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father may read my mind immediately. He always tries to show me the ways to do things right and encourages me to face it bravely.
My father has helped me get through several hard times. I am sure he will lead me to a more colorful and wonderful future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据提示内容介绍对自己影响最大的人，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍对自己影响最大的人是谁；
第二步，介绍这个人为你做了什么事情；
第三步，介绍自己对这个人的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① is ready to 准备好……
② give me a big surprise 给我一个大惊喜
③ get through 渡过
[高分句型]
① Among all the people around me, I think no one else but my father is the special person who knows me best.（宾语从句；who引导定语从句）
② He knows exactly what I like and what I don’t like.（what引导宾语从句）
③ Also, whenever I meet with any difficulty in my study or feel depressed, my father may read my mind immediately.（whenever引导让步状语从句）
2．例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Our class wants to do something meaningful for our school before we graduate. We have decided to plant a memorial tree, donate books to the library, and make a video to promote our school. These activities are not only a way to give back to our school but also to create lasting memories for our class. We have scheduled these activities next week at our school.
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. So our group decide to plant a tree for our school. We will meet at the school gate at 7 o’clock next Saturday. Then we will go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant a tree and water it.
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要邀请Peter参加活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍班级活动内容、时间、地点及原因，小组活动内容及原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望Peter可以参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②promote推广
③give back回报
④create lasting memories创造持久的回忆
[高分句型]
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. (宾语从句)
3．例文
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is “Learning to get along with our parents”. These days, most of us feel it hard to get along with our parents. We easily get angry for no reason and even don’t talk to them for days.
Here are some of the reasons. First, our parents care too much about our marks and it makes us stressed. Second, we are unwilling to communicate with them.
It’s time for us to change. First, we can communicate with them, by sharing our joys and worries with them. Then, we can help do some housework to show our love for them. Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried aboutus.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：要点已经部分给出，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍演讲的主题——学会和父母相处；
第二步，介绍父母和子女现状，介绍原因；
第三步，给出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①stressed感到有压力
②achieve a balance获得一个平衡
[高分句型]
Finally, we should achieve a balance between our schoolwork and hobbies so that they won’t feel worried aboutus.（结果状语从句）
4．One possible version:
My summer holiday plan
Summer holiday is coming. We should do what is interesting and meaningful to have a
colourful life. First, we should read a lot every day. Because reading books can help us learn a lot of knowledge. Reading can make a man progress. Second, we should learn some new skills. We can help our parents do housework, such as washing , cleaning and cooking. Because doing these things can help us not depend on our parents, but on ourselves. Third, we should take part in different social practice activities. We can be volunteers for our neighborhood. Finally, I want to make a new friend. Because I like making friends.
I think if we carry out this plan. we will have a colourful and meaningful summer holiday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明目的，想要一个多彩的假期；
第二步，具体阐述计划，包括读书、学技巧、参加社会活动，交朋友，并介绍原因；
第三步，总结，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
②take part in参加
③depend on依靠
[高分句型]
①Reading can make a man progress. (动名词作主语句型)
②I think if we carry out this plan. (宾语从句)
5．例文：
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, it has a beautiful name--China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing historical sites like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, and Terracotta Warriors. They all show the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people.
China’s landscape is fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find it attractive and don’t want to leave.
The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and
powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己的国家，注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我来自一个伟大的国家，它有一个美丽的名字——中国。”来引出下文对中国的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的历史和文化、风景名胜、中国人”三方面入手，重点介绍中国；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的爱，努力学习为祖国做贡献。
[亮点词汇]
①historical sites历史遗迹
②be proud of为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①China’s landscape is fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. (from…to…)
6．例文:
I Have a Dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a famous pianist. I love piano and the magic sounds it makes. I have been in love with piano since my childhood. Each time my fingers touch the keys, my heart is shaking with excitement. Now playing the piano has become my habit. It can make me relaxed and forget all the worries.
Although I’ve learned the piano for almost ten years, I know there is still a long way to go. First, I should spend enough time every day to practise. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” Besides, going to the piano concerts is also important because it is of great help to me.
I really hope that I will become a famous pianist one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中询问的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的梦想及原因；
②第二步，具体阐述如何实现梦想；
③第三步，表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①be in love with 爱上
②Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
③be of great help 很有帮助
[高分句型]
①Although I’ve learned the piano for almost ten years, I know there is still a long way to go.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②Besides, going to the piano concerts is also important because it is of great help to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）
7．例文
Learning life skills is necessary for our growth and success. What kind of life skills should we learn And how to improve them
First, we should try our best to keep healthy. It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. And be happy every day. Second, working with others is important. Sometimes, we need to work as a team. When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. Third, solve problems in different ways. We are able to find out the problem, find solutions alone or with others and then solve it. Besides, learn to manage time. We can make a list of things to do every morning. Get up early and never be late for school. Finally, learn some basic skills, such as cooking. We can ask our family for help or search the Internet. Then practice making some dishes.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出学习生活技能的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从几个方面讲述 应该具备的生活技能以及如何提高这些技能；
第三步，书写结语。总结提高生活技能的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①try one’s best to do sth.尽力做某事
②communicate with sb.与某人交流
③ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
[高分句型]
①It’s a good idea to keep a balanced diet and do daily exercise. (it作形式主语)
②When we communicate with others, we try to understand them. (when引导时间状语从句)
③Get up early and never be late for school. (祈使句）
④All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier, and healthier life. (if引导条件状语从句)
8．Possible version:
Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years.
Ten years ago, Changzhou was a quiet and small city with fewer shops and cars. When going outside, people didn’t have many choices but to take a bus and it took them much time. There were only a few parks and people needed to pay for visiting them. Life was a little boring and hard.
Nowadays, Changzhou has become a modern place. More wide roads and undergrounds make it convenient/easy for us to go everywhere. Besides, so many different open parks have been built and we can enjoy different views freely. More importantly, people here have become richer, and we are devoting ourselves to making the city more beautiful and the life better.
What great changes! As we know, changes mean not only power but also chances. I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描写十年前的样子用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍常州十年前的样子；
第二步，介绍常州现在的样子；
第三步，谈谈你对变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to doing致力于做某事
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③take place发生
[高分句型]
①What great changes! (感叹句)
②I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou. (宾语从句)
9．例文
Dear future me,
How are you! I am sitting in an exam classroom, pen in hand, writing a letter to you. By the time you open this letter, ten years will have passed.
As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become.
Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. I dream of exploring new places, where each step takes me closer to understanding the world. I want to be someone who makes the world a better place. I know the years ahead will be filled with ups and downs, but each experience is a valuable lesson, isn’t it
Dear future me, wherever you are and whatever you’re doing, I hope you’ve learned to love yourself. Remember, I am always here with you.
Love,
Present me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：根据内容要求进行写作，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，注意无单词及语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达此刻正在给十年后的自己写信；
第二步，介绍自己现在的状况，并分享自己的梦想和追求；
第三步，对未来的自己提出期望及建议。
[亮点词汇]
①dream of doing sth梦想做某事
②be filled with充满
③ups and downs起伏
[高分句型]
①As I write to you from the past, I can’t quite imagine what kind of person you’ve become. (what引导宾语从句)
②Right now, I’m a teenager who loves trying new things. (who引导定语从句)
10．例文
My Favourite City
My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities.
Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of……的首都
②such as例如
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句）
11．例文
Hello, everyone. I am glad to make a speech here today. The High School Entrance Exam (中考) is coming and different students behave differently.
Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well. What should we do in order to prepare well for the exam
First, it is important for us to be in a good mood. Second, we should have proper aims. Third, we should have enough sleep instead of staying up late. Fourth, we’d better have more communication with our parents, teachers and classmates. Last but not least, we should face the High School Entrance Exam positively and optimistically.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：考生注意根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步，描述面对中考，同学们不同的情绪及表现，比如有些同学感到自信和兴奋，而有些同学感到紧张、压力过大，这导致他们吃不好也睡不好；
第二步，具体提出调节情绪的方法，例如保持心情愉悦、制定合适的目标、保证充足的睡眠、多和父母、老师、同学们沟通交流等；
第三步，书写结束语，鼓励同学们积极乐观面对中考。
[亮点词汇]
①try their best to 尽他们最大的努力
②stressed out 极度焦虑的
③in order to 为了
④be in a good mood 心情愉悦
⑤instead of 代替，而不是
⑥stay up late 熬夜
⑦Last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
⑧positively and optimistically 积极乐观地
[高分句型]
①Some students feel confident and excited, and they try their best to study hard. （and连接的并列句）
②While others feel so nervous and stressed out that they can’t eat or sleep well.（so...that...引导的结果状语从句）
12．例文：
My Dream Job
Students always have dreams for the future. What’s your dream job when you grow up For me, I hope to be a doctor.
First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. They often do more volunteer work to help more people in their spare time. When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. Second, the doctors work in the front line to fight against the serious illness. They move me a lot. Third, the doctors use their knowledge to help people have better lives. I dream of becoming one of them.
I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. I also plan to read more books about medicine. Then I will know better about the job. I’m sure I
will be a good doctor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：考生应紧扣“My Dream Job”主题，根据提示进行写作，介绍自己理想的职业、理由以及行动计划，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。阐述想要从事的职业；
第二步，具体阐述你想从事这个职业的理由和行动计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①both…and…两者都
②take an interest in对……感兴趣
③fight against反抗
④plan to计划
[高分句型]
①First, both my father and mother are doctors who are very kind and patient. (who引导的定语从句)
②When I was young, I began to take an interest in medicine. (when引导的时间状语从句)
③I’m going to study hard to go to a good university, so that I can learn more about medicine. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
13．参考范文：
During the past three years, I have developed a number of good personal qualities.
Firstly, I am always ready to help others and do voluntary work actively. I usually spend my weekends helping old people clean their flats at our community center. I feel happy if they are happy. Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help. Last term, I had problems in understanding Physics, I asked Mr. Zhao for advice. I would not improve so much without his help.
In the future, I will keep studying to go towards a wider world. As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth. I will also
learn to be more thankful to people around me and try to help more people.
I hope we can grow together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中作为新时代青少年的感受，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的优秀品质和经历；
第二步，简要介绍心路历程及体会；
第三步，表达未来期望。
[亮点词汇]
①spend... doing sth.花费……做某事
②a wider world更广阔的世界
③grow together一起成长
[高分句型]
①Secondly, when facing the problems that I can’t solve, I will turn to my classmates or teachers for help.（that引导定语从句）
②As a teenager in the new times, I will exercise more to keep healthy since health is the most important wealth.（since引导原因状语从句）
14．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
As a Grade 9 student, I am so busy with my schoolwork that I would like to share my worries with you.
The importance of English cannot be overstated. As a global language, it bridges cultural gaps and facilitates communication. In today’s interconnected world, English is the key to accessing international opportunities, expanding knowledge, and building professional careers. So we should learn it well.
But currently my English grades are not very good, especially in terms of vocabulary. I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. Also, my spoken English is not very
good. I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to help me learn English well. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：材料所给内容不得遗漏，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；写作过程注意书信格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题说明写作意图；
第二步，介绍自己对英语学科的认识；
第三步，详细阐述自己学习中遇到的问题以及需要得到的帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①the importance of……的重要性
②in terms of在……方面
③look forward to盼望
[高分句型]
①I have memorized them many times, but I just can’t remember them. （转折并列句）
②I hope you can give me some suggestions from these two aspects to help me learn English well. （宾语从句）
15．例文：
Dear teachers and classmates,
As we are going to say goodbye to junior high school days, I am filled with joy and excitement.
I still remember the first day of Grade 7 like it was yesterday. I used to be afraid of speaking in public. I thought I would never learn English well. But now, I realize that I was just being silly. Since then, I have tried to speak English in public many times and learned a lot. My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together. Now I am more and more confident. Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and
healthier to have new experiences in senior high school. I’ve made up my mind to improve the ability of study, and develop interest in voluntary activities. At last, I would like to show my best wishes to those standing by me all the way, teachers, parents and friends included.
Thank you all!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，包括三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，即将告别初中生活；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。三年来你的成长，你对未来的期待，以及你对同学或老师们的祝愿；
第三步，表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① used to be 曾经是
② the important of ……的重要性
③ make up one’s mind 下定决心　
[高分句型]
① My classmates also helped me a lot, so I learned the important of working together.（使用so连接两个句子，表示因果关系）
② Even though I am sad that junior high will be over, I become happier and healthier to have new experiences in senior high school.（使用even though引导的让步状语从句）
16．例文
Enjoy reading, enjoy life!
To welcome the World Book Day, our school English club organized a reading festival last week.
During the festival, we enjoyed colourful activities. Sharing a good book was one of them.
We shared our favourite books with other students. We also held a writing competition called“My favourite book”. Moreover, we acted out what we read. We put on the plays in the school hall. We all welcomed these exciting activities.
The reading festival creates a good reading environment. It also provides us with chances to learn more about the world and ourselves. The festival is over, but our reading never ends.
(92 words)
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏，写作过程中可以适当增加细节描述，并且要突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述活动内容；
第三步，说明活动的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①share…with和……分享
②moreover此外
③put on上演
[高分句型]
①Sharing a good book was one of them. (动名词作主语）
②Moreover, we acted out what we read. (what引导的宾语从句)
17．例文
With the Entrance Examination for the High School coming closer, many students stay up late every day in order to get a good result, which has influenced their health a lot. Besides, it accounts for the fact that we cannot concentrate in class, thus decreasing efficiency. Furthermore, people who suffer from lack of sleep get angry and impatient easily.
So serious is the problem that we have to find effective solutions to it. In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.
Finally, I wish the students get good grades in the high school entrance examination.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：针对“熬夜”这一话题发表看法，注意紧扣主题，连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性。要涵盖材料中提到的所有要点，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述情况；
第二步，介绍熬夜会对学习带来的影响以及关于如何取得好成绩；
第三步，表达自己的祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①lack of sleep缺少睡眠
②as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
In my opinion, it is important for us to improve our learning methods and learn more efficiently, which will save us from staying up too late.(it句型以及非限制性定语从句)
18．例文
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently, more and more people pay attention to safety problems. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
We can avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to do in different situations. Fire is one of the most terrible accidents around us. If our building is on fire, the most important is to calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as possible.
School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us. If we meet with school-bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we should have some self-protection skills to live a safe and happy life.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自我保护”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自我保护的重要性；
第二步，根据题干中的表格，具体介绍两种情况并给出建议；
第三步，收尾，并再次点评自我保护的重要性，与前文呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①calm down冷静
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us.（定语从句）
②What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.（it is adj for sb to do句型）
19．例文
How to Be a Good Youth
Good morning, everybody! Today I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a good youth.
First, we should study hard and be creative. Second, we should take more physical exercise to keep our body and mind healthy. Third, we should be good at discovering the beauty in life and learn to love nature. We must take good care of our home. Fourth, we should also take an active part in all kinds of labor in and out of school. Finally, we should love our country as well as our family. We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.
As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students and good youths.
That’s all. Thank you.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据思维导图中的内容介绍应该如何成为新时代好少年，可适当添加细节，但要突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出演讲的主题；
第二步，从“学习、锻炼、爱好和劳动等”方面详细阐述如何做一名新时代好少年；
第三步，总结概括。
[亮点词汇]
①study hard努力学习
②keep healthy保持健康
③be good at擅长
④take an active part in积极参与
⑤all kinds of 各种各样的
⑥keep our promise遵守承诺
⑦be thankful to感恩
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to share my ideas about how to be a good youth.(“疑问词+不定式”作宾语)
②We must keep our promise and be thankful to people who helped us.(定语从句)
③As long as we work hard, we will be excellent middle school students and good youths.(条件状语从句)
20．例文
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try.
Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my speech, and practiced delivering it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“尝试是一种积极的人生态度。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——尝试的事、如何突破以及启示等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“尝试新事物可以帮助我们发现和发展我们隐藏的才能，同时也让我们变得更加自信。”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①have a try试一试
②prepare for为……做准备
③more confident更自信
[高分句型]
①I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. (because引导的原因状语从句）
②From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. (现在完成时的用法)