2024年中考英语二轮题型专题：书面表达 (辽宁专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(辽宁专用)
1．（2024·辽宁锦州·二模）随着科技的迅速发展，我们逐渐走向了一个数字化和智能化的时代，例如智能手机、聊天机器人 (chatting robots)、扫地机器人、智能灯具、智能音箱等智能产品给我们的生活带来了便利与乐趣。请你以“Smart Products in Our Life”为题写一篇文章, 介绍一下智能产品 (smartproducts) 对我们生活的帮助和影响。
要点如下：
(1) smart products 给人们生活带来的好处和帮助。
(2) 人类对 smart products 过度依赖带来的影响。
(3) 你对智能产品使用的感受和观点。
注意：
(1) 词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(3)文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Smart Products in Our Life
As we all know, smart products change our life greatly.
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【答案】例文：
Smart Products in Our Life
As we all know, smart products change our life greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see all kinds of smart products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient. And chatting robots can chat with people while cleaning robots can help with housework. What’s more, some smart lights and smart sound boxes can work by themselves if people give orders to them. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society.
However, with smart technology being widely used, many workers will lose their jobs. Also, some students depend on smart products too much that hey will lose their abilities to do things by themselves.
All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, smart products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use them correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：以一般现在时为主，一般将来时为辅；
③提示：本文要求以“Smart Products in Our Life”为题写一篇文章，介绍一下智能产品对我们生活的帮助和影响，写作中一定要包含提示的三个要点，为使文章通顺、连贯，可适当增加细节，但文中不可出现真实姓名以及学校名称。
[写作步骤]
①引入话题。文章开头引入了智能产品这一主题，并指出它们对我们的生活产生了重大影响。
②主题阐述和反面论述。文章详细阐述了智能产品给我们的生活带来的便利和进步，同时也提出了智能产品广泛使用可能带来的一些问题。
③总结观点。文章总结了智能产品既有优点也有缺点，并提出了自己的观点，认为如果我们正确使用智能产品，它们将给我们的生活带来更多的便利。
[亮点词汇]
①as we all know我们都知道
②with the development of science and technology随着科技的发展
③depend on依赖
[高分句型]
①I believe that if we use them correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.(条件状语从句)
②Some students depend on smart products too much that they will lose their abilities to do things by themselves.(结果状语从句)
2．（2024·辽宁葫芦岛·一模）某校英语社团正在招募纳新。假定你是英语社团成员李辉，请你用英语录制
一段短视频。视频的文字稿内容包括：
(1)发出入社邀请；
(2)介绍英语社团的主要活动：
(3)分享自己入社后的收获。
注意：
(1)词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯(不得照抄试卷内容)；
(3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui, a member of the English Club of our school. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【答案】One Possible Version:
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hui, a member of the English Club of our school. I’m here to invite you to join us. This will be a good chance for all English lovers and I promise you will fall in love with our club.
There are kinds of interesting and meaningful activities in our club. We can read English books together, watch English movies, sing English songs, take part in English speech competition. All of them can help to become more interested in learning English and make our school life more enjoyable.
From the club activity, I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends.
We are looking forward to having you in the club!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“要点”中的内容，可适当添加细节，但要突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出发言主题，为英语社团招募纳新；
第二步，介绍英语社团的主要活动及分享自己入社后的收获；
第三步，总结与呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with 爱上
②take part in 参加
③become interested in 对……感兴趣
④improve spoken English 提升英语口语
⑤kinds of 各种各样的
⑥make friends 交朋友
⑦look forward to doing sth. 期望做某事
[高分句型]
①There are kinds of interesting and meaningful activities in our club. (There be句型)
②From the club activity, I have not only improved my spoken English, but also made a lot of friends. (...not only...but also...句型)
3．（2024·辽宁·模拟预测）你是李华，你在澳大利亚的笔友Brown看到了《沈阳文旅》公众号上发布的宣传视频，对沈阳非常感兴趣，希望你能给他推荐来沈阳旅游的攻略。请写一封回信，介绍沈阳的特点并邀请他到沈阳旅行。
要点：
1.自然景观和人文景观：登山 ，怪坡， 故宫……
2.特色美食：老边饺子……
3.科技体验：辽宁省科学技术馆……
4.个人感受……
注意：
1.词数80—100 （开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2.要点齐全，可适当发挥，条理清楚，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范；
3.文章不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇： Qipan Mountain (棋盘山)； Strange Slope (怪坡)； Shenyang Imperial Palace (沈阳故宫) ； Science
and Technology Museum (科学技术馆)
Dear Brown,
It’s great to know that you are interested in travelling in Shenyang. I’m writing to tell you something about Shenyang. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I truly hope my letter will help you know more about Shenyang and welcome to Shenyang.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Brown,
It’s great to know that you are interested in travelling in Shenyang. I’m writing to tell you something about Shenyang.
First of all, there are landscapes in Shenyang, including the natural landscape, the cultural landscape. On the one hand, you can climb Qipan Mountain and walk on the Strange Slope. On the other hand, you can visit Shenyang Imperial Palace so that you can experience the ancient culture. What’s more, it is possible for you to taste all kinds of delicious food, especially Laobian Dumplings. In addition, it is very meaningful to visit Science and Technology Museum, which can offer you an excellent technological experience.
In a word, I think that you will not only visit many attractions here and taste local delicious food, but also you will learn from Chinese culture and experience a technological take-off. Looking forward to your coming.
I truly hope my letter will help you know more about Shenyang and welcome to Shenyang.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态是“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，写作意图开头已给出，写作时可直接介绍沈阳的特点。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要围绕“景观”、“特色美食”以及“科技体验”展开，适当补充，丰富细节。
第三步，书写结语，表达个人感受，并对Brown发出到沈阳旅游的邀请。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②there be有
③On the one hand一方面
④On the other hand另一方面
⑤so that以便
⑥What’s more更多的是
⑦In addition除此之外
⑧not only...but also…不仅……而且……
⑨learn from学习到
[高分句型]
①First of all, there are landscapes in Shenyang, including the natural landscape, the cultural landscape. (there be句型)
②On the other hand, you can visit Shenyang Imperial Palace so that you can experience the ancient culture.(so that引导的目的状语从句)
③In addition, it is very meaningful to visit Science and Technology Museum, which can offer you an excellent technological experience.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
④In a word, I think that you will not only visit many attractions here and taste local delicious food, but also you will learn from Chinese culture and experience a technological take-off. (that引导的宾语从句)
4．（2024·辽宁抚顺·三模）在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择。请谈谈你做过的一次选择。内容包括：
1. 你做出的选择是什么；
2. 你为什么会做出这样的选择；
3. 这次选择带给你的感受。
要求: 1. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等；
2. 词数 80—100。
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【答案】
例文：
A choice I made
Life is about choices. I still clearly remember one choice I made.
When I was in Grade 8, there was an English competition. If I chose to take part in it, I would need to read a lot of materials to prepare for it, and it would take me a lot of time. However, deep in my heart, I wanted to challenge myself. After thinking twice, I decided to have a try. I read a lot of books and searched much information. Although I met many difficult words, I never gave up. Finally, I did very well.
From the experience, I realize that I should be responsible for my choice. More importantly, I understand that success always depends on hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为 “一般过去时”与 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，引出下文作出的选择；
第二步，具体阐述作出的选择是什么以及为何会作出这样的选择；
第三步，叙述这件事带给自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for 为……做准备
②give up 放弃
③be responsible for 对……负责
[高分句型]
①Although I met many difficult words, I never gave up.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②From the experience, I realize that I should be responsible for my choice.（that引导的宾语从句）
5．（2024·辽宁营口·二模）丰富多彩的初中生活已经接近尾声。在这三年里，你一定有很多学习习惯。请你以“好习惯，促成长”为话题，介绍一种好的学习习惯。内容包括：
(1) What’s your good learning habit
(2) How do you develop this habit
(3) What benefits have you got from this habit
注意：
(1) 词数80~100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)文章中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇: improve my skills; grow up; be interested in; not only... but also...
A Good Learning Habit
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life. Let me tell you something about my learning habit.
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【答案】例文
A Good Learning Habit
Good habits benefit a person’s whole life. Let me tell you something about my learning habit.
One of my good habits is taking notes in class. I take down what my teachers write on the blackboard and other important points about my lessons. I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. After class I read the notes and try to remember the information as much as possible. Before I do my homework and take exams, I review my notes carefully.
The habit of taking notes helps me become a successful student. It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合题目给出的三个问题展开描述，可适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍自己良好的学习习惯是什么；
第二步，具体阐述内容，介绍自己是如何养成这个好习惯的；
第三步，书写结语，总结自己从这个好习惯中获得的益处。
[亮点词汇]
① take down 记录，记下
② as...as possible 尽可能
③ help sb. do sth. 帮助某人做某事
[高分句型]
① I keep my notes well-organized and tidy so that I can find information easily later. (so that引导目的状语从句)
② It not only improves my learning abilities, but also helps me get good grades. (not only...but also...连接并列句)
6．（2024·辽宁沈阳·二模）假定你是李辉，即将在以“如何培养团队精神”为主题的英语论坛中发言，请根据下面提示写一篇演讲稿。
内容包括：
（1）重要性；
（2）具体做法；
（3）表达希望。
注意：
（1）词数为80—100；开头和结尾己给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称等。
Dear friends,
I feel so honored to make a speech about how to develop team spirit.
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Thanks for listening.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
I feel so honored to make a speech about how to develop team spirit. Nowadays, team spirit is highly valued, because strong team spirit can improve productivity and creativity. I’d like to make some suggestions on how to cultivate team spirit.
First, team members should have a common goal they need to achieve. Second, everyone should actively participate in the project and do their part. Third, it is important for team members to communicate and share their experiences. By working together, team members will eventually be able to achieve their goals.
As the saying goes, “Teamwork makes dreams come true.” Let’s learn to cooperate with others. With good team spirit, we can get the expected results.
Thanks for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意要点齐全，无单词拼写及语法错误，可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍团队精神的重要性；
第二步，介绍如何培养团队精神；
第三步，书写结语，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①participate in参加
②productivity and creativity生产力和创造力
③eventually最终
[高分句型]
①Nowadays, team spirit is highly valued, because strong team spirit can improve productivity and creativity. (because引导原因状语从句)
②First, team members should have a common goal they need to achieve. (定语从句)
7．（2024·辽宁本溪·二模）假定你是李辉，最近学校要开展废旧物品手工制作大赛。你校的一名外籍同学James 想参加这次比赛，但是苦于没有好的创意，所以向你寻求帮助。请你给他发一份邮件，在材料选择、物品制作和环保意义等方面给他一些建议。
注意：
(1)词数80~100；
(2)文中不能出现真实的姓名及学校名称。
Dear James,
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Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear James,
I’m happy that you ask me for help. I think you can make a dress with some old things. For example, you can collect some old newspapers and cut them into different shapes. You can also ask my grandma for help. She is good at making things. First, design a beautiful dress. Then, use glue to make the newspaper dress. Then add some colorful plastic bags to make the dress more beautiful. Old things can come back to life if we have a creative mind. From this activity, we can form the habit of protecting the environment and make good use of the old things. It’s meaningful. I hope you can win a good prize!
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，在材料选择方面给出建议；
第二步，在物品制作方面给出建议；
第三步，介绍对环保的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. for help向某人寻求帮助
②cut into切入
③be good at doing sth.擅长做某事
④come back重新出现
⑤make good use of 利用
[高分句型]
①I think you can make a dress with some old things.（省略that的宾语从句）
②Old things can come back to life if we have a creative mind.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③From this activity, we can form the habit of protecting the environment and make good use of the old things.（and并列连词）
8．（23-24九年级下·辽宁铁岭·期中）假如你是李华，马上面临初中毕业，迎接你的将是充满挑战却又让你满怀期待的高中生活，请根据以下图表信息规划一下你的高中学习和生活。
Sports My Life in Senior High School Study plan
Hobby Others
要求：1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：词数80-100词，开头已给出，但不计入总词数。
My Life in Senior High School
My name is Li Hua. In three months, I’ll finish my junior school and start a new life in senior high school. ___________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My Life in Senior High School
My name is Li Hua. In three months, I’ll finish my junior school and start a new life in senior high school.
First of all, I must study hard. Because only by going to a good university can I have better job opportunities in the future. At the same time, I also want to exercise hard. I like playing basketball very much. As long as I have time, I will spend time drawing every day. I will also use the weekend to do volunteer activities outside to help those in need.
I’m really looking forward to my life in senior high school! I hope I can stick to my plan and realize my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体介绍自己的计划；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all 首先
②At the same time 同时
③look forward to 期待
④stick to 坚持
[高分句型]
①Because only by going to a good university can I have better job opportunities in the future.（倒装句）
②As long as I have time, I will spend time drawing every day.（条件状语从句）
③I hope I can stick to my plan and realize my dream.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2024·辽宁丹东·一模）假如你是李辉，你的笔友Peter给你发了电子邮件诉说他的烦恼，请根据邮件内容进行回复。
注意：
（1）词数为80~100词；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
（4）邮件的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Li Hui, How’s it going I’m having trouble with my mom. You know, I love playing soccer. But yesterday I argued with my mom because she didn’t allow me to play soccer after school every day. She thought I should spend more time on study to get better grades. I’m feeling sad now. What should I do Peter
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your mom.
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Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble with your mom. My mom doesn’t allow me to play basketball
every day too. But I solve this problem and let me show you some advice. Our parents are worried about our study because the homework now is more and harder than before. You can play soccer after you finish your daily homework. And I think you can play soccer on weekends rather than on weekdays. Finally, you must be patient to communicate with your parents so that you can solve this problem perfectly.
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：考生应根据来信的信息点作回信，注意大小写和标点符号，适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表达自己也有一样的遭遇并介绍自己的建议；
第二步，具体阐述自己的建议来帮助Peter解决问题；
第三步，书写结语。要耐心和父母交流才能解决问题。
[亮点词汇]
①be worried about 对……感到担心
②be patient to 耐心去做某事
[高分句型]
Our parents are worried about our study because the homework now is more and harder than before. (because引导的原因状语从句)
10．（2024·辽宁锦州·二模）随着时代的变化，大部分青少年的娱乐方式也在发生了变化，你们学校就此话题进行了征稿。请你参考下列内容进行投稿，谈谈发生的变化以及你的观点和倡议。
过去 户外，与别人一起玩 (爬山……)
现在 室内，自己玩 (打游戏、玩手机……)
你的观点和倡议：……
注意：
(1)词数80-100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
(3)文中不可出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Nowadays, teenagers have different ways for fun from the past.
In the past, teenagers used to choose games that they could play outdoors together with their friends or family. They would climb mountains or play balls with classmates on weekends. These activities were good for their health and could make them happy when they played in the nature. However, teenagers these days like to stay alone at home most of the time. They play computer games or chat with friends on the phone. Although there are so many kinds of computer games, they still feel lonely. What’s more, these activities are bad for their eyes and health.
I hope we teenagers can put down our phones and go outdoors to spend more time with others. It is really important and meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：主要采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，需要补充；注意条理清晰，表达正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍青少年过去的娱乐方式；
第二步，介绍青少年现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，发出倡议。
[亮点词汇]
①used to过去常常
②go outdoors去户外
③stay alone独自待着
④so many kinds of如此多种的
[高分句型]
①Although there are so many kinds of computer games, they still feel lonely.（让步状语从句）
②I hope we teenagers can put down our phones and go outdoors to spend more time with others.（宾语从句）
11．（2024·辽宁锦州·二模）假设你是李华，你的笔友 Mike 对中国传统节日春节很感兴趣。请你根据以下提示写一封回信，向他介绍春节的习俗。
提示：
1.春节的时间(通常在一月或二月)
2.节日期间人们的庆祝活动
3.春节的意义(家人的团圆……)
参考词汇： set off the firecracker放鞭炮 family reunions 家人团聚
注意：词数80~100，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯；
文章中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about the Spring Festival.
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Best wishes!
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about the Spring Festival.
It usually falls in January or February. Days before the festival, people clean their houses. They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck. They decorate their houses with paper cuts. On the eve of the festival, family members get together and have big meals. Then they watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV. At midnight, they set off the firecracker to welcome the New Year. During the festival, kids get lucky money from old people. People
visit their relatives and friends. They wish each a happy year and good luck.
Best wishes!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍春节的活动；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from收到……来信
②bad luck坏运气
③get together聚在一起
[高分句型]
①They think cleaning sweeps any bad luck.（宾语从句，动名词作主语）
12．（2024·辽宁阜新·一模）假设你是李华，你的朋友Rain来信告诉你，肥胖问题一直困扰着他，向你寻求建议，请你根据以下提示给Rain回信。
（1）change living habits
（2）do more exercise
（3）stay confident in yourself
注意：
1.短文需包含所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不能出现人名、校名等真实信息；
3.词数80-100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数.
Dear Rain,
I read your letter and I understand your trouble. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Wish you all the best.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Rain,
I read your letter and I understand your trouble. You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your over-weight. Here is my advice for you.
Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you. The most important thing is to stay confident in yourself, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble. Secondly, try to change living habits — keep away from high-fat food and eat more fruit and vegetables instead. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight. Thirdly, I strongly advise you to exercise more often. You’d better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you’ll be. I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
Wish you all the best.
Sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，表示对他的遭遇的理解和同情，接着引出下文的建议；
第二步，具体从“改变习惯，做运动，保持自信”三方面阐述给Rain同学的三个建议；
第三步，表达希望（已给出）。
[亮点词汇]
①laugh at嘲笑
②care about在意
③keep away from远离
④advise sb to do sth建议某人做某事
[高分句型]
①You must feel bad when being laughed at by your classmates because of your over-weight.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Firstly, there is no need to care about what others think of you.（what引导的宾语从句）
③The most important thing is to stay confident in yourself, as it will help you have courage to face and overcome your trouble.（as引导的原因状语从句）
13．（2024·辽宁·模拟预测）在和谐社会里，人与人之间的互助已成为我们生活的重要组成部分。请你以“Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful”为题写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）简单描述一下帮助他人的好处（至少两点）；
（2）介绍一次你帮助他人或者他人帮助你的经历；
（3）呼吁大家主动帮助他人，让我们的世界充满爱。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80个左右。标题已给出，不计入总词数。
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
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【答案】例文
Helping Each Other Makes the World Wonderful
In our life, we often help others, and also get help from others. When we help our classmates, we will develop our friendship. When we help some old people, we will feel happy. I think giving is better than receiving. And I think helping others is helping ourselves.
I still remember my teacher asked me to help Mike with his math months ago. At first, I felt a little nervous because I was not so good at math. So, before helping him, I went over the textbook over and over again and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before were worked out by myself. With my help, Mike made great progress in math, too. Then, I realize that helping others also does good to ourselves. Helping each other makes the world wonderful.
In a word, I hope everyone can take an active part in helping others. Let’s make our world filled with love together.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍一次你帮助他人的经历，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，简单描述一下帮助他人的好处；
第二步，介绍一次你帮助他人的经历；
第三步，呼吁大家主动帮助他人，让我们的世界充满爱。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb. to do sth.让某人做某事
②go over复习
③over and over again一次又一次
④work out解决
⑤take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
①When we help our classmates, we will develop our friendship. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②At first, I felt a little nervous because I was not so good at math. (because引导的原因状语从句)
③To my surprise, some difficult problems that I couldn’t understand before were worked out by myself. (that引导的定语从句)
④In a word, I hope everyone can take an active part in helping others. (宾语从句)
14．（2024·辽宁·一模）假如你是李辉，下周五来自英国的交换生即将到你校参观交流，作为学生代表，请你给交换生代表Mark 写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 告知活动主要内容；
3. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 字数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 邮件中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
参考词汇 交换生 exchange student 学生代表 student representative
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mark,
I’m the student representative, Li Hui. Welcome to our school. I’m glad to tell you something about the
schedule for next Friday.
In the morning, you will tour around our beautiful campus. After that, we will have math and Chinese classes together. At noon, you will enjoy some food at our canteen. The seafood and other traditional food in our school are really tasty! In the afternoon, you will visit our school clubs and take part in a lot of interesting activities. Don’t forget to take photos! In the evening, you will be invited to watch a great show given by our school band. I am sure it will impress you a lot!
We’re getting a little hot here. You should bring some summer clothes. You should also take some cold medicine.
I’m looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章应该包括三个方面的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第二人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍自己，表示欢迎，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍活动内容；
第三步，向对方提出建议；
第四步，表达期待。
［亮点词汇］
① tour around 四处旅游
② take part in 参加
［高分句型］
① In the evening, you will be invited to watch a great show given by our school band. (一般将来时的被动语态)
② I am sure it will impress you a lot! (宾语从句)
15．（2024·辽宁铁岭·一模）人生不同阶段会有不同的事情值得你骄傲，这也是一个人成长的过程，请以“One thing that made me feel proud”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1.令你感到骄傲的事情是什么；
2.你是怎样做的；
3.它给你带来了怎样的影响。
要求：
1.词数：80—100词。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名。
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【答案】例文
One thing that made me feel proud
Different things are always happening during our development. Something unforgettable does make me proud of myself----I saved my grandfather in time without depending on my parents.
One night after dinner, only Grandpa and I were at home, because my parents had gone on business. I was about to do my homework when I heard a great noise. So I rushed out of my bedroom to see what happened. I saw Grandpa lying on the floor and his face looked pale. At once, I went out to ask my neighbor for help. He was really helpful. He told me to calm down and called the hospital. After that he helped Grandpa sit by the sofa and drink some water. About 20 minutes later, the ambulance came and Grandpa was saved.
After the experience, I learned that whatever happens, we should keep calm first. Only in this way can we think of ways to solve the problems.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的；
第二步，具体介绍让我骄傲的事件；
第三步，通过这件事我的感想及收获。
[亮点词汇]
① development 发展
② unforgettable 难忘的
③ be about to do sth. 即将做某事
④ calm down 冷静下来
[高分句型]
One night after dinner, only Grandpa and I were at home, because my parents had gone on business.（because引导的原因状语从句。）
Only in this way can we think of ways to solve the problems.（only接状语置于句首时，句子部分倒装）
16．（2024·辽宁朝阳·一模）假设你是学生李辉，你校英文网站拟报道过去二十年你市交通工具的变化以及给人们生活带来的影响。请你以“Changes in the means of transportation”为题写一篇短文向学校英文网站投稿。要点如下：
（1）过去二十年你市交通工具的变化；
（2）你的感想和对未来交通工具发展的展望。
参考词汇：witness 见证；solar power 太阳能
注意：
（1）词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Changes in the means of transportation
The past twenty years have witnessed great changes in the means of transportation in our city. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Changes in the means of transportation
The past twenty years have witnessed great changes in the means of transportation in our city. There are not only more buses and private cars but also planes and high-speed trains. All these surprising changes bring us much convenience and comfortable, shortening the time of long-distance travel.
In the future, there will be driverless flying bikes and cars, which can not only run on land but also fly in the air at a high speed. What’s more, they will run on solar power instead of petrol. Above all, controlled by computers, they will be easy to operate for people of all ages.
With the rapid development in the means of transportation, our world is getting smaller and smaller.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点中的内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，介绍过去二十年家乡交通工具的变化；
第二步，阐述对未来交通工具发展的展望；
第三步，书写感想。
[亮点词汇]
①not only…but also不仅……而且
②What’s more此外
③instead of代替
④Above all最重要的是
[高分句型]
In the future, there will be driverless flying bikes and cars, which can not only run on land but also fly in the air at a high speed. (there be句型；which引导的非限制性定语从句)
17．（2024·辽宁大连·一模）假定你是李辉，你被邀请参加英语社团组织的读书报告会。请选择一本名著小说写一篇英文读书报告。
要点如下：
(1)总体介绍；
(2)主要情节；
(3)你的评价。
注意:
(1)词数80-100，开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
(2)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
(3)报告中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
This is a reading report on ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
This is a reading report on the story—the Old Man and the Sea by Hemingway.
This novel won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 1954. The leading character is an unlucky fisherman called Santiago who failed to catch a fish for 84 days. Therefore, he went to an unknown and mysterious deep sea to prove his ability. After three days’ struggle and fighting, he managed to bring a big marlin. Unluckily, the fish was eaten up by sharks on his way back home.
I was deeply moved by the old man’s courage. We should learn from him and never give up easily no matter how difficult the situation is.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，总体介绍选择的名著以及主要情节；
第三步，介绍自己的评价。
[亮点词汇]
①novel(长篇)小说
②character人物
③fail to do sth.未能做某事
④mysterious神秘的
⑤eat up吃光
⑥give up放弃
[高分句型]
We should learn from him and never give up easily no matter how difficult the situation is.(no matter how引导让步状语从句)
18．（2024·辽宁·一模）善良、勇敢、勤奋、记忆力超群……你想成为一个什么样的人？假如你是李辉，请写一篇演讲稿，参加学校的英语演讲比赛。
内容要点如下：
1. 你想成为什么样的人；
2. 需要做出哪些努力：
3. 对自己的期许。
注意：
1. 词数 80—100，开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about what kind of person I want to be. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone!
My name is Li Hui. Today, I’d like to talk about what kind of person I want to be. When I grow up, I want to be a brave person, because I want to solve difficulties by myself.
Being brave means facing challenges even when I’m scared. First, I try new things and don’t give up when things are hard. This can help me grow and succeed. Second, I keep climbing mountains to make myself stronger and stronger. This can help me have not only a great body ut also a strong will. Third, I read books about heroes, so I can have models to learn.
I believe that by being this way, I can make a positive difference in the world and live a happy life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出话题，说明你想成为一个什么样的人；
第二步，结合具体做法，说明需要做出什么样的努力才能成为那样的人；
第三步，表达对自己的期许并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①keep doing sth坚持做某事
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①When I grow up, I want to be a brave person, because I want to solve difficulties by myself.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②Being brave means facing challenges even when I’m scared.（动名词作主语和宾语，when引导的时间状语从句）
19．（2024·辽宁沈阳·二模）你校英文报组织同学们分享学校刚刚举办的文化节活动，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80 个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Our Cultural Festival on Campus
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【答案】例文
Our Cultural Festival on Campus
Last week witnessed an extraordinary cultural festival organized by our school, which was aimed at showcasing different traditions, customs, and artistic expressions of students. It was a huge success.
The festival kicked off with a grand opening ceremony. Various activities were designed, like a singing contest, dance performances, art exhibitions, allowing students to appreciate the charm of culture. Not only did these activities entertain us and enrich campus life, but encouraged students to respect different cultures, thus fostering students’ awareness of cultural inclusivity.
Overall, it is a meaningful and rewarding experience that engraves lasting memories on students’ minds.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍文化节的具体内容；
第二步，介绍自己的体验和感受。
亮点词汇]
①aimed at旨在
②allow sb to do允许某人做
[高分句型]
①Not only did these activities entertain us and enrich campus life, but encouraged students to respect different cultures（倒装句）
②it is a meaningful and rewarding experience that engraves lasting memories on students’ minds.（定语从句）
20．（2024·辽宁葫芦岛·一模）好的朋友是终身的财富，陪伴我们一起经历成长。你的好朋友做过什么难忘的事情让你深受感动？请根据以下提示信息，以“He/She made me moved”为题完成一篇作文。
要点：●Who is your friend
●What did your friend do
●How did you feel about sth
提示词：thanks to；be deeply moved (被深深地感动)；still fresh in my mind (记忆犹新)
要求：
1. 条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等信息；
3. 词数：80—100。
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【答案】例文
She made me moved
Lucy is my friend. She is a 15-year -old girl. She is tall and has long hair. She is good at playing the piano. We often help each other. We often study and play together. One thing happened last year is still fresh in my mind.
Lucy is a warm-hearted girl who is always ready to help others. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was hurt so much that I had to stay in hospital for about one month. I was worried about my study. When she knew that, she smiled and said she could help me. From that day on, she taught me every day. I was deeply moved. Thanks to her help, I didn’t fall behind the other students.
Friends are important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，介绍自己的一位好朋友；
第二步，举例详细讲述朋友做过的让自己感动的难忘的事情；
第三步，总结自己的感受以及感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①help each other互相帮助
②fall down摔倒
③be worried about担心
[高分句型]
①Lucy is a warm-hearted girl who is always ready to help others.（定语从句）
②My left leg was hurt so much that I had to stay in hospital for about one month.（结果状语从句）
③When she knew that, she smiled and said she could help me.（时间状语从句）
④No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.（让步状语从句）